00:03:244 - Change 14,3,2,4 to 24,1,3,4 to avoid post-jack at the beginning of the beatmap.
00:18:625 (18625|0,18625|2) - Possibly remove one of these, judging by previous patterns.
00:54:107 - Add five notes, 4,1,4,1,4 till 00:54:412. Remove 1 at 00:54:412.
01:03:853 - Add 3 here, strong sound.
01:06:290 - Add 2 here.
01:26:391 - Change to 12. (Alternating hands with double notes for vocal is fun, in my opinion)
01:26:544 - Change to 34. (^^^^)
01:26:696 - Change to 12. (^^^^)
01:27:000 - Change to 12. (^^^^)
01:27:153 - Change to 34. (^^^^)
01:27:457 - Change to 34. (^^^^)
01:27:610 - Change to 12. (^^^^)
01:27:914 - Change to 12. (^^^^)
01:59:285 - Possibly double up to 12.
01:59:589 - Possibly double up to 23.
01:59:894 - Possibly double up to 34.
02:18:472 - Add 1. (Because there is a beat here.)
02:20:148 - Add 3. (^^^^)
02:30:351 (150351|2,150427|1) - Remove both. (02:31:264 is as strong as 02:30:351, so make them both double notes.)
02:30:427 - Add 3. (^^^^)
02:31:264 - Add 1. (^^^^)
02:51:061 (171061|3) - Make if half as long. (Combined with 3 steps below to account for the variation in tune).
02:51:366 (171366|2) - Move 3 to 4.
02:51:214 - Add long note 3 till 02:51:366.
03:10:249 - Possibly add 24 due to the beat. (And possibly adjust the slider velocity for here)
03:39:868 (219868|1,219945|2,220021|1,220097|2) - Ctrl+H. (03:39:868 (219868|1) is too close to the bottom slider).
03:40:401 - Maybe change it to this:
. (double, single, single, single, repeat. Near end of song, so suggest notes as hard as this)
03:56:772 (236772|2,236848|3) - Change 3,4 to 4,3.