1. Easy (1.24 stars, 91 notes)
2. Hard (2.65 stars, 197 notes)
3. Insane (3.43 stars, 266 notes)
4. Normal (1.67 stars, 133 notes)

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1. 00:12:943 - 아무리 이지라지만 여기가 비어있는건 허전하다는 느낌이 드네요, 보컬도 있으니 서클로 채워보시는게 어떤가요?
2. 00:48:099 (2) - 아슬아슬한데 1번 슬라와 좌우 대칭되게 배치해보시는게?
3. 00:54:662 (1,4) - 1번 슬라 헤드에 4번 겹쳐보시는게 어떤가요? 혹시 하신다면 01:00:287 (3) - 이것도
4. 01:07:318 (2,1) - 제안입니다만 300 점수가 있는 스킨으로 보면 이렇게 이상하게 겹치는 일이 생겨서... 완전히 스택시키거나 패턴을 바꿔보시는걸 추천합니다
5. 01:21:849 (2,1) - 이것도 스택 제대로 해주시는게 좋아요

1. 01:15:990 (4,5) - 이 박자가 맞다고 생각합니다 http://puu.sh/hC8N9/502701e880.jpg
2. 01:17:162 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 굳이 다운비트에 맞추려 하지 마시고 보컬에 따라 박는것도 괜찮다고 생각해요 저는
3. 01:28:412 (1,4) - 스택 잘 맞춰보시길

1. 01:08:138 (2) - 여기는 연타가 아니라 그냥 이거 지우고 단타로 두는게 더 노래에 어울리네요
2. 01:31:341 - 여기도 연타 넣어서 앞이랑 동일하게 음처리 맞춰주는게 좋다고 봐요
3. 01:35:091 - ^

1. 00:04:037 (8) - 노래와 안맞는다고 생각해요, 그냥 서클로 두시고 차라리 뉴콤보를 넣어두시는게 좋을듯
2. 01:20:443 (6,7,8,9,1,2,3) - 웬만해서는 배치 터치 안하는데 이건 너무 겹쳐뒀다고 생각해요, 다른 배치를 해보시는게...
3. 01:39:193 (1) - 뉴콤보 없어도 구분 가능하다고 생각해요~

UnLock- wrote:

Hello~ Come from your request!


[Easy]

1. 00:12:943 - 아무리 이지라지만 여기가 비어있는건 허전하다는 느낌이 드네요, 보컬도 있으니 서클로 채워보시는게 어떤가요?
   수정완료~
2. 00:48:099 (2) - 아슬아슬한데 1번 슬라와 좌우 대칭되게 배치해보시는게?
   기니아q님이 문제없다고 하십니다만 이건 나중에 뱃구하고 고치라들어오면 고치겠습니다.
3. 00:54:662 (1,4) - 1번 슬라 헤드에 4번 겹쳐보시는게 어떤가요? 혹시 하신다면 01:00:287 (3) - 이것도
   이미 이렇게 3각 패턴 00:54:662 (1,2,3) - 00:57:943 (5,1,2) - 상하 대칭패턴 건들기가 까다로운 ㄷㄷ;
4. 01:07:318 (2,1) - 제안입니다만 300 점수가 있는 스킨으로 보면 이렇게 이상하게 겹치는 일이 생겨서... 완전히 스택시키거나 패턴을 바꿔보시는걸 추천합니다
   이것도 보류!
   01:23:724 (3,1,2) -이렇게 이미 대칭입니다
5. 01:21:849 (2,1) - 이것도 스택 제대로 해주시는게 좋아요

[Normal]

1. 01:15:990 (4,5) - 이 박자가 맞다고 생각합니다 http://puu.sh/hC8N9/502701e880.jpg
   박자는 놔두고 슬라모양만 조금 바꿧습니다.
2. 01:17:162 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 굳이 다운비트에 맞추려 하지 마시고 보컬에 따라 박는것도 괜찮다고 생각해요 저는
   01:02:162 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 여기도... 왠만하면 키아이는 드럼박자 따라가고 남는걸로 보컬 따라갔습니다.
3. 01:28:412 (1,4) - 스택 잘 맞춰보시길
   스택보단 좀더 옆으로 이동했습니다.

[Hard]

1. 01:08:138 (2) - 여기는 연타가 아니라 그냥 이거 지우고 단타로 두는게 더 노래에 어울리네요
   '수~우미'보컬 부분이 있으니 이대로 가겠습니다.
2. 01:31:341 - 여기도 연타 넣어서 앞이랑 동일하게 음처리 맞춰주는게 좋다고 봐요
   아무 음도 없고 개인적으로01:30:287 (3,4,5) - '라라라라'를 더 강조하곳 싶습니다.
3. 01:35:091 - ^
   위와같음

[Insane]

1. 00:04:037 (8) - 노래와 안맞는다고 생각해요, 그냥 서클로 두시고 차라리 뉴콤보를 넣어두시는게 좋을듯
   이부분도 모딩좀더 들어오면 고치겠습니다. 원래 서클로 뒀었는데 어색해서 저렇게 둿습니다.
2. 01:20:443 (6,7,8,9,1,2,3) - 웬만해서는 배치 터치 안하는데 이건 너무 겹쳐뒀다고 생각해요, 다른 배치를 해보시는게...
   01:20:208 (5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4) - 처음 5와 끝 4에서 하나의 동선을 이루고 있기때문에 모딩좀더 들어오면 수정하겠습니다.
3. 01:39:193 (1) - 뉴콤보 없어도 구분 가능하다고 생각해요~

'라라라라' 강조 하고 싶으므로 그냥 두겠습니다.

잘만드셨네요, GL

Taeyang wrote:

감사합니다 많이 지적해주셨는데 별로 고치는게 없었.. ㅠㅠ
제맵은 스택이용한 배치보다 대칭과 담요이용한 배치가 많아서 갹...

jinhang_ang wrote:

Okay hi <3 M4M as agreed.

Easy

00:52:787 (3) - I'm not very sure about this slider's sharp curve. Maybe you should curve it at the slider tick?
Fixed
01:35:912 (1,2,3,4) - These four look a little strange. How about slowly curving them instead? Something like the picture below (I'm sure you can improve it)
i will consider 01:34:037 (3,1) - its already symmetry pattern

Normal

Something is missing 00:16:927 or 00:17:005 and it feels blank. If you don't want to add something to it then NC on 00:17:162 (4)
NC it's not matter
00:28:412 (4) - To make it a blanket maybe it should be more curved.
Fixed
00:39:662 (1,2) - They should share the same y-coordinate/height? this kinda breaks your symmetry style.
is not matter
00:53:724 (4) - I suggest flipping horizontally.
is not matter

Hard

00:34:974 (3) - Move it higher to make it blanket of 00:34:740 (2) - sharp blankets look great too :3
i dont want blanket

Insane

01:12:240 (3) - Maybe ending it on 01:12:708 and add a circle on 01:12:943? You can take care of vocal and background at the same time.
is not matter i want take vocal rhythm
Remove NC on 01:28:412 (1) and add NC on next note.
is not matter

I think that's all. This is a really great map

SPOILER

and yes from it i can say that you are very experienced

. I can't find much errors and mostly these are suggestions good luck ranking it!

Karia wrote:

저같은 모딩 못하는사람을 부르셔도..ㅁㅇㄹㄴ

• General

1. Letterbox 체크해주세요
   수정완료!
2. 아마 아시겠지만 무음 slideside와 무음 slidertick을 동시에 사용하는건 언랭커블입니다. 하나 지워주세요
   수정완료!
3. CS가 3 - 3.5 - 3.7 - 4.5로 하드는 보통하드보다 낮음에도 불구하고 인센은 단일인센치고 너무 높은데 특별한 이유 없으시면 조정해주시는게 나을꺼같아요
   수정완료!
4. 처음파트 뉴콤 제안입니다만 음악이 00:02:630 - 여기에서 멈추기때문에 뉴콤은 이 뒤에 넣는게 더 좋겠네요..
   전체적인맵셋을 전부 다운비트로 맞춰놨고 오히려 더어색해보여서 이점은 보류하겠습니다.

• Easy

1. 00:12:943 - 뒤의 리듬에 비해 너무 부실한감이 있는 부분입니다. 노트 하나 넣어주시는게 더 낫겠네요
   수정완료!
2. 00:24:662 (3) - 꼬리부분 힛사 노래랑 완전 반대느낌인데 고치는게 나을꺼같네요
   
3. 00:41:537 (3,4) - DS 수정해주세요
   수정완료!
4. 00:47:162 (1) - 머리쪽은 피니시도 어울리겠네요
   수정완료!
5. 00:52:787 (3) - 리듬상으론 1/1 슬라 1/1노트가 나은데 한번 고려해주시길..여긴 딱히 고치기도 까다롭지않고..
   보컬상으론 이게 더 맞다고생각해서 이대로 두고 모딩더들어오면 고치겠습니다.
6. 01:38:724 (4) - 1/2틱까지 늘이는게 더 음악이랑 잘 맞는거같네요
   보류

• Normal

1. 음, 그냥 개인적인 의견으론 부분부분 리듬을 억지로 이었다는 느낌이 강하네요... 노말이니 중간중간 적당하게 끊어주시는게 나을듯한데..
2. 00:18:099 (5) - 1/1틱에서 끊어주세요
   피아노소리좀 강조하기 위해저렇게뒀습니다. 모딩 더 들어온다면 수정하겠습니다.
3. 00:22:787 (1,2,3) - 그냥 보컬따라가는게 더 깔끔하겠네요..
   
   SPOILER

   
   앞의 피아노리듬에서 이미 저렇게 사용했기때문에 어색하다고생각합니다.
   00:17:162 (4,5,1) - 이곳 피아노리듬도 저런식으로 했고 보컬은 서클로 잡아뒀으니 이렇게 두겠습니다.
4. 00:25:599 (5) - 드럼피니시때문에 음악에 비해 리듬이 끊어지는 느낌이 드는데 1/1틱에서 끊거나 드럼피니시를 지우는게 더 잘 어울리겠네요
   수정완료!
5. 00:30:287 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 노말치고 너무 줄줄이 이었다는 느낌이 강하네요.. (4)를 지워서 끊어주는게 더 나을꺼같아요
   원래 4를 넣으라고 모딩왔어서 끅... 지금보니 너무줄줄이군요 수정완료!
6. 00:34:974 (3) - 1/1틱에서 끊어주세요
   수정완료!
7. 00:49:740 (4) - 이거 여기보단 00:48:802 - 여기 찍는게 더 어울리겠네요. 찍는거 힘드시다면 지우는것만이라도 생각해주시길
   수정완료!
8. 00:52:787 (3) - 1/2 리버스보단 1/1에 1/2노트하나 찍어서 보컬 따라가는게 부드럽겠네요
   모양도있고 이게더 낫다고 생각하기때문에 이대로 두겠습니다.
9. 00:54:662 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - , 01:09:662 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 8비트를 통째로 전부 이으시는건 좀..다시 생각해주세요 ㅁㅇㄴㄹ
   키아이 타임이니 조금 어려워져도 상관없다고 생각...ㅁㄴㅇㄹ
10. 01:08:724 (5,6) - 스트림구간인데 노트로 처리하는것보단 슬라로 합쳐주는게 좋겠네요
    01:05:912 (1,5) - 이곳 리듬적으로 대칭 맞춰둔거에 지금 상태도 나쁘지 않다고 생각하기에 그냥 두겠습니다.
11. 01:25:599 (2) - 노말이라 차이는 미미하겠지만 담요 포기하고 그냥 슬라 왼쪽으로 향하게 찍는게 더 부드럽겠네요
    수정완료!
12. 01:34:037 (3,4,5,6) - 비트가 많은곳이긴 하지만 1/2를 이렇게 많이 넣을곳은 아니라고 생각해요. (4) 지워서 적당히 끊어주세요
    브픔이 낮은곡인만큼 리듬자체는 조금 어려워도 괜찮다고 생각합니다.

1. Alright not much to say, except that the hitsounds seemed barely audible, you should maybe raise their volume a little (5~10%)

1. Same here, raise your volume a little (5~10%)

1. Same, raise your volume a little (5~10%)

1. Here too, raise your volume a little (5~10%)
2. 00:03:685 (5) - and 00:04:037 (8) - Seems overmapped. I think this part is just like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:11:537 - to 00:26:537 - I don't think there are any blue ticks that should be mapped in this part, all of them seem overmapped

Alheak wrote:

Hi, M4M (I hope this is the right one lol)

[Easy]

1. Alright not much to say, except that the hitsounds seemed barely audible, you should maybe raise their volume a little (5~10%)

[Normal]

1. Same here, raise your volume a little (5~10%)

[Hard]

1. Same, raise your volume a little (5~10%)

[Insane]

1. Here too, raise your volume a little (5~10%)
2. 00:03:685 (5) - and 00:04:037 (8) - Seems overmapped. I think this part is just like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:11:537 - to 00:26:537 - I don't think there are any blue ticks that should be mapped in this part, all of them seem overmapped

Here you go, other than that, it's a really good and clean mapset, good luck with ranking!

FlobuFlobs wrote:

Stuff
Unrankable Stuff

[General]

1. Metadata Confirmation: Yun*chi - Wonderful Wonder World* by Meyrink (Apr 1, 2015 ) // Amazon

[Insane]

1. 00:04:037 (8) - somewhat unecceserry repeat slider because nothing is following
   here is whitenoise sound
2. 00:12:943 - How about having a 3/4 slider here instead? it would follow the vocals better
   it's not matter
3. 00:44:115 - The slider is a bit too early for the vocal here also theres no important instrument here, so i would suggest a circle here and a 1/2 slider 00:44:349 - here
   it's not matter
4. 00:37:787 (1,2,3) - It feels strange you didnt added a jump for 00:37:787 (1) - like you did before on these loud big white tick beats
   it's not matter iit's not jump parttern i used onlt 1.4DS
5. 01:07:083 (5) - Even if its the *peak of the song* this jumps feels way to high compared to all the other jumps, please decrease the spaing
   it's not matter it's Insane Kiai time and this song have low BPM
6. 00:33:099 (6) - Missing NC? You've NC'd everytime before when this sound came
   it's not matter

[Hard]

1. 00:13:412 (4,5) - How about making a pattern like this? it does look better for me, just a suggestion
   http://puu.sh/hK7by/8bbd042253.jpg
   Fixed
2. 00:15:990 (2) - Red Corner slider doesnt really work well with the smooth voice, how about making a waveslider instead
   This silde followed vocal it's fine
3. 00:16:927 - Somehow im missing a clickable object here for the vocal
   rhytum followed piano sound
4. 00:57:826 - delete this circle here, 00:57:943 - add circle here and 1/2 slider here 00:58:177 -
   These vocals are getting extremly loud, so they are important to be clickable for the player
   it's fine
5. 01:01:458 (3) - Doesnt fit at all, add 2 Circles instead on the red and white tick
   it's not matter
6. 01:01:927 - THis one doesnt fit too, you can clearly hear the loud piano on the big white tick 01:02:162 - which must be clickabke.
   Just like you did here 01:04:037 -
   it's not matter and not fun
7. 01:18:568 (4,1) - swap nc, does look better
   i cant it 01:16:693 (2,1) - see here
8. 01:33:802 (3) - It could confuse player to have a clickable object here after you let the previous beats out (01:29:115 - , 01:30:052 - ), just delete it
   01:29:349 (2,3) - here is jump patten so i did'n added note circle

[Normal]

1. 00:43:412 - You've mapped them clickable the whole map, so also do it here.
   it's not matter
   The rest looks fine for me lol

[Easy]

1. 00:48:099 (2) - Overlapp with HP Bar
   Fixed
   
   Also seems to be fine

Peachtrees wrote:

M4M o/~

Easy

00:13:412 (3,1) - hmm I don't really have a proper way of wording this, but these two don't really feel like they're connected in any way. 3 is kind of directing the player downwards while 1 is actually starting above 1, and the transition doesn't really look as visually pleasing without having them correspond in any way (that might just be me though)
Fixed
00:45:287 (3) - this shape doesn't really do a good job of catching the vocals to me :c the red anchor feels like it's to early in the slider
here in vocal it's fine
00:48:099 (2,1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3127205 see if something like this works for you? (I didn't really like the second red anchor, it looked kind of sloppy owo)
00:47:162 (1,2) - one pattern it's fine
01:07:318 (2,1) - mhmm not sure if this overlap will end up being a problem
Fixed
01:34:037 (3,1) - these look a tad bit close, see if you can get a liiitle more space between them?
it's fine
Normal

00:17:162 (4,5) - not sure if following background music instead of vocals is a good idea here, vocals feel stronger and more dominant to me. Though I guess this might be my personal preference
it's fine
00:28:412 (4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3127228 why not place it like this?
Fixed
00:34:037 (1,2,3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3127232 could have this stacked like this for extra neatness c:
Fixed
00:46:224 (4) - dangerously close to the hp bar, be careful when moving this c:
Fixed
00:45:990 (4) - really feel like these vocals on the redtick should be playable ><
Fixed
00:57:943 (7) - ^the same with this downbeat. vocals feel really strong, so having a slider start on this would feel right to me 01:00:287 (3) - you did it with this one too
it's fine i used same rhythm 01:12:943 (7,1,2,3,4,5) -
01:06:146 (2,3,4) - these honestly feel a bit unpredictable to me >< probably easy to hit since they're just repeats, I can't say that I really expected these though
Fixed
01:24:193 (4) - again, dangerously close to the hp bar
Fixed
Hard

00:03:568 (2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3127260 this feels a lot nicer :c
Fixed
00:14:583 (5) - what is this slider following?
Fixed
00:21:849 (7) - again, this downbeat really feels like it deserves to be playable >< there are a bunch of these so I'll just point this one out as an example c: Feel free to leave them as they are though, to each their own I guess
Fixed
00:23:958 (3,4) - is mapping 1/4 here really neccessary? feels odd
Fixed
00:46:927 (10,11) - hmm just a small thing, but perhaps try using consistent spacing whenever you use 1/4? some triplets are more spaced out than others, and I feel like the 1/4 that is being used would look a lot neater with more consistency
it's fine
00:57:708 (4,5,6) - I'd rather have 4 and 5 stack on top of 6
Fixed
01:15:052 (1) - I guess this is just me, but I feel like this would've felt neater with 1 starting on top of 3 to continue the triangley movement
it's fine
01:27:240 (4,5,6) - 1/4 really neccessary here?
Fixed
Insane

00:17:162 (1,2,1) - kinda feels like this straight transition doesn't really go along well with the sliders shape, making it a bit uncomfortable
Fixed
00:18:919 (3) - I don't really hear any sound on the blue tick here
Fixed
00:27:474 (2,3,4,5) - these honeslty feel a bit overdone compared to the rest of the map
it's fine
00:37:200 (6) - is this not really necessary? feel like a triplet would be enough. You did the same thing with a previous pattern
Fixed
00:41:537 (1,2,3) - kinda awkward ><
it's fine
01:04:974 (3,4,1) - going in a straight line here feels a bit dull :/ doesn't feel like it does the song any justice when it actually feels very strong and exciting
it's fine
01:17:396 (2,3) - perhaps make this a liiiitle meaner? vocals on 3 feel like they would warrant a jump that puts a little more emphasize on this slider
it's fine
01:32:162 (1) - ctrl+g?
Fixed
Good luck~

Hello- wrote:

저퀄모딩이지만 도움이 되었으면 좋겠습니다. ;ㅅ;

mod

easy
00:02:162 (1) - 노래 이어지니까 NC 풀어주는게 좋을듯. 그리고 제안인데 담요 해주는게 나을듯 싶어요.
맵셋전체적으로 다운비트맞춰서 박아둬서... 우선 저렇게두고 또 모딩오면 고치겠습니다.
01:36:849 (2) - Crtl + H 해보시고 01:34:037 (3) - 여기 슬라끝에 스택
그리고 이 박자로 해보심이? http://puu.sh/hLI1o.png
수정완료!다른패턴 썻습니다.
hard
00:03:568 (2) - 한번 1/2 반복 슬라로 바꿔보실래요?
수정완료!
00:23:490 (2) - 스택 제대로 해서 DS x0으로 만드세요.
다른패턴썻습니다.
00:25:130 (5) - NC
00:32:162 (5) - ^
00:35:912 (5) - ^
00:45:287 (6) - ^
00:49:037 (5) - ^
뉴콤부분 전부 수정완료
00:55:599 (3) - 00:54:662 (1) - 에 스택
일부러 안시킨거라 패스하겠습니다.
01:15:990 (1) - off NC
수정완료
01:18:568 (4,1) - swap NC
수정완료
01:22:318 (5) - 이 박자가 좀 더 나을듯 http://puu.sh/hLKxa.png
보컬을 자연스럽게 슬라로 잡아둔거라 이건 모딩또오면 고치겠습니다.
01:37:787 (3) - NC
수정완료

insane
00:03:568 (4) - NC
수정완료
00:04:037 (8) - 여기 난이도만 피니시가 안들어가 있네요. 추가하세요.
수정완료
00:26:537 (1) - 흐름이 엄청 어색합니다. 00:26:302 (4) - 이 흐름에 맞게 슬라 배치를 바꿔주시거나 해주세요.
슬라를 서클이라 생각하고 치면 괜찮은... 모딩 더오면 고치겠습니다.
00:30:287 (1) - Move 336/128
뒤에랑 스택시킨 삼각형패턴이라.. 이유를 적어주셨으면 ㅠ
00:34:974 (3,4,5) - Ctrl H 하고 00:33:099 (6) - 의 첫번째 머리에 스택. 만약 하신다면 00:35:678 (7) - move 304/288
이대로 가겠습니다.
00:36:966 (4,6) - 소리 안들리니까 지우시는게 좋을듯
수정완료!
00:39:193 (4) - 슬라 끝머리를 00:33:568 (7) - 슬라 첫머리에 스택
00:38:724 (3,4,1) - 하나의 대칭 패턴
00:47:865 (2,3,4) - Move 368/256
수정완료!
00:51:849 (6) - NC
00:53:724 (1) - off NC
여기도 이유 적어주셨으면 첫번째 NC는 앞쪽 다운비트 맞춰서 그대로 두고
off Nc는 볼륨이 달라지는곳이니 그대로 두겠습니다.
00:56:537 (1) - Ctrl+G
수정완료!
00:58:412 (1) - 00:57:240 (3) - 첫머리에 스택 만약 하신다면 00:58:880 (3) - move 240/168
수정완료!
01:04:974 (3) - 복붙ㅌㅌㅌ, Ctrl+G 반복 해제 (이건 반농담이니 무시해주셈 ㅋㅋ) 님 맵에 복붙이 많은것 같아서 한번 제안해봄 ㅇㅅㅇ;;
너무 복붙이 많어서 저렇게..ㅋㅅㅋ 이대로 가겠습니다.
01:17:162 (1) - Move 168/204
1.5로 DS 잡아둔거라 이상태로 가겠습니다.

Come[Back]Home wrote:

Easy

00:49:037 (3) Move sliders tail to 0/56 so it shows to 00:50:443 (4) . Looks better imo
Fixed
00:57:474 (4,5) Shouldnt (5) switcfh places with (4)? Somehow it feels better to play
00:57:474 (4,5,1,2) - one pattern
01:04:505 (3,1) Try it like this

SPOILER

it's fine
Normal

01:02:162 (1,2,3) This plays weird because of (3), try to do a different slider there?
Fixed
Hard

00:03:568 (2) Move sliders tail to 144/88. Looks better imo
Fixed
00:23:490 You should put a circle there and let the sliders start on 00:23:724 here, so they wont start on a downbeat
Fixed
Insane

...


Awesome map and awsome, i really love Yun*chi's voice haha xD
Keep it uo, really nice mapset.

1. Would disable Letterboxes during breaks to enjoy the video more.

1. 00:30:755 - When you're doing sliderticks here already, you should keep this technique consistent throughout the whole map where there's these snares i nthe track and not only at this place. Like at : 00:34:037 (1,2) - and in the kiais.
   (Or could just delete it, because the snares don't happen on the white ticks, but red ones)
2. 01:40:130 - Circle here please, just like you did in the Normal diff.

1. 01:24:193 (4) - Really recommend you switch this off with a slider +circle instead because the cymbal should be clickable.
   Otherwise, this one's pretty fine, gj.

1. Delete NC: 00:17:162 (1) - 00:18:099 (1) - 00:49:037 (1) -
2. NC at wrong positions: 01:16:693 (1,3) -
3. 00:03:568 (2) - Triple + backslider feels better to play than this kickslider.
4. 00:17:982 (2) - Delete. The part is calm and could benefit from not having overmapped triples on hard stage.
5. 00:31:693 (3,4,1) - What happened with the spacing here lol.
6. 00:44:115 (3) - 00:44:583 (4) - These should be regular sliders since the reversearrow (blue tick) don't follow anything properly.
   Put a triple at 00:45:169 - instead.
7. 00:54:193 (1,1) - Why don't you space this out like 00:53:724 (3,1) - , would be much more readable.
8. 01:39:193 (4) - Swap with two 1/4 sliders instead, would follow the melody much better.

• 
  Uh, this was made before oko did his irc mod, so some stuff might be outdated already.

1. What I noticed in the map are a lot of unnecessary overmapped triples that should be fixed for a better gaming experience. No need to overmap to a song like this, it's a sweet calm one and setting triples all over the place takes away much emphasis on certain beats.
   The following are critical since the music can and will really benefit from these NOT being triples:
   00:15:990 (2,3,4) -
   00:17:162 (1,2,1) -
   00:21:615 (2,3,4) -
   00:22:787 (1,2,3) -
   00:25:365 (2,3,1) -
   00:30:990 (4,5,6) -
   00:34:974 (3,4,5) -
   00:47:865 (2,3,4) -
   While these ones are kinda acceptable with the noise in the background (though I still recommend you to reconsider their usage):
   00:14:349 (3,4,5) - 00:16:927 (4,5,1) -
   Consider this being a high priority issue from me, so if you want to push this forward you better fix it unless you have a solid and valid reason for them to stay (no reasons like 'i feel like it' are sufficient).
2. 00:30:755 (3,4) - This causes way too much emphasis on the 4 which isn't even a strong vocal beat, please rework the pattern 00:30:287 (1,2,3,4) - . Here a good example:
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:38:724 (2,3) - Why you miss out the 1/8 beats here? Also put away 00:38:490 (1,2,3) - this triple because it's overmap. Here what goes best with the music:
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:40:130 (2,3,4) - These could really benefit by being sliders to follow the vocals more properly and make the rhythm less choppy like it is at the moment.
5. 00:41:537 (1,2,3) - Technically this triple is not overmapped, but it doesn't fit in since you are focussing on vocal mapping and this doesn't work well with it.
6. 00:42:474 (4,5,6,7) - Listen closer, this pattern doesn't work well with the music since 5 and 6's sliderends don't follow anything properly in the track. Make them regular circles.
7. 00:43:880 (3,4) - Why do you suddenly switch to instrumentals when you followed vocals before, this is inconsistent. The isntruments aren't even dominant in this part.
8. 00:51:849 (6,7) - Listen again, there are triples between these. I recommend you put these out and set circles all the way:
   http://puu.sh/hNHxg/89cc0f9223.jpg
9. 01:05:443 (4,1) - Set up a small jump here would be good for emphasis on the next slider.
10. 01:23:021 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Check the rhythm here again. As the highest diff, you should try to follow most things the music has to offer as best as possible:
    http://puu.sh/hNHPK/135d58c3d0.jpg
11. 01:28:412 (1) - Crop this by 1/4, this doesn't follow vocals properly like it should (or at least how you are using them here to fit better to the vocals).
12. 01:30:287 (1) - Make a 1/2 for better following of the vocal
13. 01:33:099 (3,4) - Big jump for a weak beat is not good, pease reduce the spacing and set a jump for 01:33:802 (4,1) - instead.
14. 01:34:037 - to 01:37:552 - You just followed vocals from 01:25:130 - and here suddenly switched to instrumental beats although both sections sound pretty much alike. This is heavily inconsistent, so please fix the rhythm on the second part up again.
    Keep in mind the similar sections should be mapped similar.
15. The biggest issue in this map is that your rhythms don't follow a consistent way, following vocal or instrumental beats in a somewhat chaotic way.
    Try to get more order into it.

LGV894 wrote:

I fell in love with the EZPZ diffs. There's really not much to say about this mapset. It's nearly perfect, maybe because guineaQ modded it? But if I did a nazi mod, there might be a hundred lines in my mods.

Hard

Open

- 00:31:693 (3,4,1) - Use same DS for all notes.Fixed
- 01:27:357 - Add note?
it's fine01:30:287 (5,6,7) - 01:34:037 (4,5,6) - all same rhythm

Insane

Open

- 00:57:943 (4) - Ctrl+G?
flow it's fine
- 01:19:037 (1) - Move it to the right.
it's fine
- 01:27:708 (4,6) - Ctrl+G? Then adjust triangle? Maybe?
it's make hardly

Ovoui wrote:

hi ! nazi mod orz ;w;

[Easy]

00:54:662 (1,2,3) - this pattern isn't instinctive because 00:55:599 (2) - and 00:56:537 (3) - aren't in the way of the previous slider, you make something like this

SPOILER

i think it's fine and your suggest make ugly sapce

01:04:505 (3,1) - blanket 1 with 3 like this. It's prettier imo and make a better flow
can't , it's 01:01:224 (4,1,2,3,1) - one symmetry pattern i

[Normal]

Be careful, the rythmn is a bit strange, i mean sometimes you map the vocal and sometimes you map the instrumental. For example, 00:15:287 (1,2,3) - here it's mapped on vocal and just after, 00:17:162 (4,5) - are mapped on instrumental, it could be a bit confused for new beginners.
Thanks advice


01:37:787 (3) - this slider breaks the flow, imo it's more intuitive to click on the slider end instead of the slider head. i suggest you this pattern
Fixed

SPOILER

[Hard]

00:03:568 (2) - i feel it's overmapped because i don't hear anything here 00:03:685 - you should make something like this

Fixed
00:19:974 (3) - you can improve the flow by making some curve like this

SPOILER

it's fine to me
00:32:044 (4) - spacing error, move this circle to x=372 y=48
Fixed
00:44:115 (3) - i think this reverse slider is overmapped because there is no sound at 00:44:232 - so you should change the rythmn into something like that Here, an idea of pattern
Fixed
00:45:169 - add a circle here to have consistency with the previous 1/4 reverse slider
Fixed
01:08:490 (4) - a suggestion : ctrl g this slider, rotate a bit (with ctrl shift r) in anti-clockwise direction, then fix the spacing.
Fixed

here the result

01:38:138 - 01:38:607 - 01:39:076 - you can add circles here but it's not necesseray since this is a hard. You can also add a repetition on 01:37:787 (1,2,3) -
Fixed just here 01:39:193 (4,5) -


[Insane]

00:03:568 (2,3,4,5,6) - for the same reason in the hard, i advice you to remove 00:03:685 (3) -
it's fine because insane mapset and i think rhythm not bad
00:17:162 (1,2,3) - the flow is a bit weird tho. You can do something like this too improve the flow
your suggest thanks 00:18:099 (1,2) - but here flow make badly so i will consider[/color]




good luck for rank !

Pho wrote:

Bold: Fix quickly/unrankable issues
Purple: Questionable
Red: Highly recommend

[General]

1. Would disable Letterboxes during breaks to enjoy the video more.
   Fixed

[Easy]

1. 00:30:755 - When you're doing sliderticks here already, you should keep this technique consistent throughout the whole map where there's these snares i nthe track and not only at this place. Like at : 00:34:037 (1,2) - and in the kiais.
   Fixed i just removed
   (Or could just delete it, because the snares don't happen on the white ticks, but red ones)
2. 01:40:130 - Circle here please, just like you did in the Normal diff.
   Fixed

[Normal]

1. 01:24:193 (4) - Really recommend you switch this off with a slider +circle instead because the cymbal should be clickable.
   Otherwise, this one's pretty fine, gj.
   Fixed

[Hard]

1. Delete NC: 00:17:162 (1) - 00:18:099 (1) - 00:49:037 (1) -
   Fixed
2. NC at wrong positions: 01:16:693 (1,3) -
   i think it's fine i followed vocal and pattern 01:16:693 (1,1) -
3. 00:03:568 (2) - Triple + backslider feels better to play than this kickslider.
   Fixed
4. 00:17:982 (2) - Delete. The part is calm and could benefit from not having overmapped triples on hard stage.
   Fixed
5. 00:31:693 (3,4,1) - What happened with the spacing here lol.
   Fixed
6. 00:44:115 (3) - 00:44:583 (4) - These should be regular sliders since the reversearrow (blue tick) don't follow anything properly.
   Put a triple at 00:45:169 - instead.
   Fixed
7. 00:54:193 (1,1) - Why don't you space this out like 00:53:724 (3,1) - , would be much more readable.
   Fixed
8. 01:39:193 (4) - Swap with two 1/4 sliders instead, would follow the melody much better.

Fixed

----------------------------------------------------

[Insane]

• 
  Uh, this was made before oko did his irc mod, so some stuff might be outdated already.

1. What I noticed in the map are a lot of unnecessary overmapped triples that should be fixed for a better gaming experience. No need to overmap to a song like this, it's a sweet calm one and setting triples all over the place takes away much emphasis on certain beats.
   The following are critical since the music can and will really benefit from these NOT being triples:
   00:15:990 (2,3,4) -
   00:17:162 (1,2,1) -
   00:21:615 (2,3,4) -
   00:22:787 (1,2,3) -
   00:25:365 (2,3,1) -
   00:30:990 (4,5,6) -
   00:34:974 (3,4,5) -
   00:47:865 (2,3,4) -
   While these ones are kinda acceptable with the noise in the background (though I still recommend you to reconsider their usage):
   00:14:349 (3,4,5) - 00:16:927 (4,5,1) -
   Consider this being a high priority issue from me, so if you want to push this forward you better fix it unless you have a solid and valid reason for them to stay (no reasons like 'i feel like it' are sufficient).
2. 00:30:755 (3,4) - This causes way too much emphasis on the 4 which isn't even a strong vocal beat, please rework the pattern 00:30:287 (1,2,3,4) - . Here a good example:
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:38:724 (2,3) - Why you miss out the 1/8 beats here? Also put away 00:38:490 (1,2,3) - this triple because it's overmap. Here what goes best with the music:
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:40:130 (2,3,4) - These could really benefit by being sliders to follow the vocals more properly and make the rhythm less choppy like it is at the moment.
5. 00:41:537 (1,2,3) - Technically this triple is not overmapped, but it doesn't fit in since you are focussing on vocal mapping and this doesn't work well with it.
6. 00:42:474 (4,5,6,7) - Listen closer, this pattern doesn't work well with the music since 5 and 6's sliderends don't follow anything properly in the track. Make them regular circles.
7. 00:43:880 (3,4) - Why do you suddenly switch to instrumentals when you followed vocals before, this is inconsistent. The isntruments aren't even dominant in this part.
8. 00:51:849 (6,7) - Listen again, there are triples between these. I recommend you put these out and set circles all the way:
   http://puu.sh/hNHxg/89cc0f9223.jpg
9. 01:05:443 (4,1) - Set up a small jump here would be good for emphasis on the next slider.
10. 01:23:021 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Check the rhythm here again. As the highest diff, you should try to follow most things the music has to offer as best as possible:
    http://puu.sh/hNHPK/135d58c3d0.jpg
11. 01:28:412 (1) - Crop this by 1/4, this doesn't follow vocals properly like it should (or at least how you are using them here to fit better to the vocals).
12. 01:30:287 (1) - Make a 1/2 for better following of the vocal
13. 01:33:099 (3,4) - Big jump for a weak beat is not good, pease reduce the spacing and set a jump for 01:33:802 (4,1) - instead.
14. 01:34:037 - to 01:37:552 - You just followed vocals from 01:25:130 - and here suddenly switched to instrumental beats although both sections sound pretty much alike. This is heavily inconsistent, so please fix the rhythm on the second part up again.
    Keep in mind the similar sections should be mapped similar.
15. The biggest issue in this map is that your rhythms don't follow a consistent way, following vocal or instrumental beats in a somewhat chaotic way.
    Try to get more order into it.

The set looks fine, but the Insane needs more polishment still. Call me up again when you got a few (2-3) more mods on it that are not only nazi mods.
Good luck! /o/

insane i almost fixed really thanks!

_Unreality_ wrote:

Hello from mod req !!!

[Easy]

00:22:787 (1) - 00:24:662 (3) - http://i.imgur.com/CBlX2nm.png Less points in the slider
here it blanket
00:47:162 - http://i.imgur.com/PQTXXMR.png I think this is more successful as on the first white tick drops a heavy blow and to deliver a better circle. And then comes the voice on it sliders
that's make clickable so i dont want
00:50:912 - http://i.imgur.com/9a6sD3k.png I think this is more successful as on the first white tick drops a heavy blow and to deliver a better circle. And then comes the voice on it sliders
^
00:55:130 (4) - http://i.imgur.com/9WnpNfl.png Then leave the slider after slider cycle
01:02:630 (1) - Less points in the slider http://i.imgur.com/n3AIFlc.png
blanket
01:04:505 (3) - ^ copy
^
01:40:599 (1) - http://i.imgur.com/gavZrA2.png And move the spinner on the white line
this is not unrankable
[Normal]

01:13:880 (1,2) - combo 2 move the back. So it sounds better http://i.imgur.com/xDDxvFx.png
here it one pattern
and i used 00:57:943 (7,1,2) - same rhythm
01:40:130 (1,1) - http://i.imgur.com/gavZrA2.png
^

[Hard]

01:00:287 (1) - may be slider ? http://i.imgur.com/dk0HBSh.png
that make clickable
01:40:130 (1,1) - http://i.imgur.com/gavZrA2.png
^
[Insane]

00:11:537 (1) - Less points in the slider http://i.imgur.com/AvxGA9O.png or http://i.imgur.com/lcotymv.png
fixed
00:38:724 (3) - http://i.imgur.com/AYuSckB.png Do stream here ?
rhythm able
And further , I propose to make this way. Total Edit 2 object and the style will not change http://i.imgur.com/UrBuZGo.jpg
01:09:193 (1,1) - ?? http://i.imgur.com/jD8JGHi.png OR http://i.imgur.com/l7zJ7Y7.png Because it is difficult to read . So how to create visibility for the player that the sliders are struck against each other
i alredy tried it but BN recommend me like that


Good work !

1. 00:45:287 (3,1,2,3) - It would be great if you could move these away from the edge of the map. the first (3) is starting to get a bit close to the screen, and the (2) sort of feels a bit too high. You don't have to do this, but It'd greatly improve the maps aesthetics if you keep closer to the middle of the map.
2. 00:52:787 (3) - Just a personal preference. I suggest removing the curve from the end of this slider, or curving it the other way. http://puu.sh/hSlVR.jpg | http://puu.sh/hSlWF.jpg
3. 01:05:912 (1) - you should try to blanket this around the 01:04:505 (3) - | Middle node about x448 y165 | Tail node about x465 y211 | http://puu.sh/hSl4R.jpg | Apply it to 01:01:224 (4) - as well, if you want to keep symmetry.
4. 01:25:599 (2,3) - this movement isn't the greatest. The Tail end of the slider could also be moved in slightly. Perhaps lose the symmetry from 01:25:130 (1,2) - to make more room.
5. 01:40:365 (1) - This should end 1/2 earlier like all your other diffs.

1. 00:22:787 (1) - I highly suggest ending this 1/2 earlier, and then adding a circle. This allows the user to switch to the vocals efficiently
2. 00:24:427 (3,4) - With 00:24:662 - being kind of powerful, and the way you use sliders to capture the piano sounds. I highly suggest changing (3) to a circle, and then put a 1/1 slider where its tail used to be. http://puu.sh/hSn4M.jpg
3. 00:32:865 (5,2) - I'll be honest. this attempt at stacking doesn't really work out well. It gets a bit close to the 00:33:099 (6) - and looks cluttered. Just wanted to mention this, I'm sure you shouldn't have any problems re-working this if you choose to.
4. 00:45:287 (3) - Instead of following the tick points, notice how the song uses 3/4 vocals/sounds here. Try to make one bounce on the blue tick at 00:45:638 - instead. http://puu.sh/hSnvc.jpg
5. 01:09:662 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - Just in general. I think it would be great if you could have one or two curved sliders in this section.
6. 01:14:818 (2) - How about just using a circle here? the slider sort of feels like it'd cause confusion since you don't follow the vocals that much.
7. 01:29:349 (2) - try making this a flipped copy of 01:28:412 (1) - or something. Right now the slider tail kind of goes too far into the top of the map. This will sort of ping-pong you into the next note.
8. 01:34:037 (3) - I think a 1/1 slider would be optimal, but it won't be the end of the world if you keep it as is. The 01:34:740 (4) - isn't really that important either.

1. 00:03:568 (2,3) - Try lowering the volume a little bit for these. Especially the drum sounds as the music itself is pretty quiet.
2. 00:14:115 (5) - This shouldn't really be mapped to. There isn't any vocals or instruments backing it up. Instead you should use the first three vocals starting at 00:13:412 - to 00:13:880 - as key points to map circles/sliders to. For Example. Something like this is much more in sync with the song: http://puu.sh/hSoiC.jpg
3. 00:15:990 (2,3,4,5) - These are a bit sharp, and the overall design of them feels like they could be improved on. Actually with the previous sliders being all nicely curved, it could work to your advantage here as well. Maybe something like this: http://puu.sh/hSoGr.jpg
4. 00:18:802 (7) - This could be removed. It doesn't really serve much purpose.
5. 00:23:490 (2,3) - Try rotating the (2) clockwise 10-20° so it can give a little bit more room for (3) to play around. It feels a bit cramped up when beside the 00:22:787 (1) -
6. 00:32:044 (4) - not so sure why you decided to use this here. I mean, you don't even use it in your insane. Consider removing it?
7. 00:47:044 - this seems like a great spot to add a note for a triplet. I highly suggest it as the music supports it for sure.
8. 00:47:865 (2,3) - Move these two down a bit. The (2) is pretty close to the previous (1)
9. 00:49:037 (5) - Missing NC
10. 01:21:615 (2,3,4) - I think it would be great if you could curve these a bit. Circular motions for parts like these feel great.
11. 01:26:302 (3) - When you skip 01:25:833 - it causes a bit of an imbalance since it feels like the vocals are now the main priority, but you resume mapping the drums. I suggest adding a circle back at 01:25:833 - then, or remove the (3) in question. Or simply turn (3) into a 1/2 slider.
    01:27:240 (5) - Just because it would feel awesome. consider moving 01:27:240 (5) - 1/4 forward to 01:27:357 - Just a personal taste though. I'm pretty sure you'd rather keep to the drums, and not the vocals.

1. 00:03:568 (2,3,4,5,6) - Same as Hard, consider lowering the volume of these drum sounds.
2. 00:12:943 (4) - whistle on head? It feels empty when vocals are playing here.
3. 00:17:865 (3) - I would personally reduce this by 1/4 so you at least capture the important chime noise at 00:18:099 -
4. 00:23:958 (4) - Personally I'd rather see this attached to the end of (3), but at least move it a little bit closer to the tail. This will slowly start to create some build up for 00:25:599 (1) - anyways. It's better to start the 1/4 jumps there, instead of back in this section.
5. 00:32:396 (2,3) - try swapping the position of these. Otherwise they feel so cramped together.
6. 00:41:537 (1,2,3) - This plays a bit strange for me. I would personally shorten the slider by 1/4 and add a note on 00:42:005 - so you capture the dominant vocal with a click, and keep the rhythm steady. You pretty much are vocal heavy for this diff anyways.
7. 01:05:443 (4) - Try to balance the SV a little more on this. It's quite a downgrade of momentum.
8. 01:09:193 (1) - I really dislike the slowdown here. It happens during the vocals as they keep playing 01:09:427 - I personally think keeping this part at 1.20x is the best option, and consider reducing the (1) by 1/4 and adding a circle at 01:09:544 - as well.
9. 01:24:544 (5,1) - This is a pretty unfair 1/4 jump. It should be coming off the slider end, not the end of a circle. Anyways, I personally think this would play better with the (5) completely removed. It gives that 1/2 beat to get back on track much like 01:23:372 (4,1) - does.

Lanturn wrote:

m4m. Note that the examples provided are just to visually show my ideas. Feel free to use them, but I suggest that you do them how you want

[Easy]
Simple and clean. Not much to say here.

1. 00:45:287 (3,1,2,3) - It would be great if you could move these away from the edge of the map. the first (3) is starting to get a bit close to the screen, and the (2) sort of feels a bit too high. You don't have to do this, but It'd greatly improve the maps aesthetics if you keep closer to the middle of the map.
   thanks suggest but i already tried it so i dont want that
2. 00:52:787 (3) - Just a personal preference. I suggest removing the curve from the end of this slider, or curving it the other way. http://puu.sh/hSlVR.jpg | http://puu.sh/hSlWF.jpg
   Fixed
3. 01:05:912 (1) - you should try to blanket this around the 01:04:505 (3) - | Middle node about x448 y165 | Tail node about x465 y211 | http://puu.sh/hSl4R.jpg | Apply it to 01:01:224 (4) - as well, if you want to keep symmetry.
   Fixed
4. 01:25:599 (2,3) - this movement isn't the greatest. The Tail end of the slider could also be moved in slightly. Perhaps lose the symmetry from 01:25:130 (1,2) - to make more room.
   it's fine to me i will consider
5. 01:40:365 (1) - This should end 1/2 earlier like all your other diffs.
   Fixed

[Normal]

1. 00:22:787 (1) - I highly suggest ending this 1/2 earlier, and then adding a circle. This allows the user to switch to the vocals efficiently
   Fixed
2. 00:24:427 (3,4) - With 00:24:662 - being kind of powerful, and the way you use sliders to capture the piano sounds. I highly suggest changing (3) to a circle, and then put a 1/1 slider where its tail used to be. http://puu.sh/hSn4M.jpg
   Fixed
3. 00:32:865 (5,2) - I'll be honest. this attempt at stacking doesn't really work out well. It gets a bit close to the 00:33:099 (6) - and looks cluttered. Just wanted to mention this, I'm sure you shouldn't have any problems re-working this if you choose to.
   i think it's fine
4. 00:45:287 (3) - Instead of following the tick points, notice how the song uses 3/4 vocals/sounds here. Try to make one bounce on the blue tick at 00:45:638 - instead. http://puu.sh/hSnvc.jpg
5. 01:09:662 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - Just in general. I think it would be great if you could have one or two curved sliders in this section.
   here is Kiai time so i want impact
6. 01:14:818 (2) - How about just using a circle here? the slider sort of feels like it'd cause confusion since you don't follow the vocals that much.
   it's same 00:59:818 (2) -
7. 01:29:349 (2) - try making this a flipped copy of 01:28:412 (1) - or something. Right now the slider tail kind of goes too far into the top of the map. This will sort of ping-pong you into the next note.
   Fixed
8. 01:34:037 (3) - I think a 1/1 slider would be optimal, but it won't be the end of the world if you keep it as is. The 01:34:740 (4) - isn't really that important either.
   Fixed

[Hard]

1. 00:03:568 (2,3) - Try lowering the volume a little bit for these. Especially the drum sounds as the music itself is pretty quiet.
   it's already 30%
2. 00:14:115 (5) - This shouldn't really be mapped to. There isn't any vocals or instruments backing it up. Instead you should use the first three vocals starting at 00:13:412 - to 00:13:880 - as key points to map circles/sliders to. For Example. Something like this is much more in sync with the song: http://puu.sh/hSoiC.jpg
   Fixed
3. 00:15:990 (2,3,4,5) - These are a bit sharp, and the overall design of them feels like they could be improved on. Actually with the previous sliders being all nicely curved, it could work to your advantage here as well. Maybe something like this: http://puu.sh/hSoGr.jpg
   Fixed
4. 00:18:802 (7) - This could be removed. It doesn't really serve much purpose.
   Fixed
5. 00:23:490 (2,3) - Try rotating the (2) clockwise 10-20° so it can give a little bit more room for (3) to play around. It feels a bit cramped up when beside the 00:22:787 (1) -
   Fixed
6. 00:32:044 (4) - not so sure why you decided to use this here. I mean, you don't even use it in your insane. Consider removing it?
   Fixed
7. 00:47:044 - this seems like a great spot to add a note for a triplet. I highly suggest it as the music supports it for sure.
   Fixed
8. 00:47:865 (2,3) - Move these two down a bit. The (2) is pretty close to the previous (1)
   Fixed
9. 00:49:037 (5) - Missing NC
   Fixed
10. 01:21:615 (2,3,4) - I think it would be great if you could curve these a bit. Circular motions for parts like these feel great.
    Fixed
11. 01:26:302 (3) - When you skip 01:25:833 - it causes a bit of an imbalance since it feels like the vocals are now the main priority, but you resume mapping the drums. I suggest adding a circle back at 01:25:833 - then, or remove the (3) in question. Or simply turn (3) into a 1/2 slider.
    01:27:240 (5) - Just because it would feel awesome. consider moving 01:27:240 (5) - 1/4 forward to 01:27:357 - Just a personal taste though. I'm pretty sure you'd rather keep to the drums, and not the vocals.

Fixed

[Insane]

1. 00:03:568 (2,3,4,5,6) - Same as Hard, consider lowering the volume of these drum sounds.
   ^
2. 00:12:943 (4) - whistle on head? It feels empty when vocals are playing here.
   Fixed
3. 00:17:865 (3) - I would personally reduce this by 1/4 so you at least capture the important chime noise at 00:18:099 -
   Fixed
4. 00:23:958 (4) - Personally I'd rather see this attached to the end of (3), but at least move it a little bit closer to the tail. This will slowly start to create some build up for 00:25:599 (1) - anyways. It's better to start the 1/4 jumps there, instead of back in this section.
   Fixed
5. 00:32:396 (2,3) - try swapping the position of these. Otherwise they feel so cramped together.
   Fixed
6. 00:41:537 (1,2,3) - This plays a bit strange for me. I would personally shorten the slider by 1/4 and add a note on 00:42:005 - so you capture the dominant vocal with a click, and keep the rhythm steady. You pretty much are vocal heavy for this diff anyways.
   Fixed
7. 01:05:443 (4) - Try to balance the SV a little more on this. It's quite a downgrade of momentum.
   Fixed
8. 01:09:193 (1) - I really dislike the slowdown here. It happens during the vocals as they keep playing 01:09:427 - I personally think keeping this part at 1.20x is the best option, and consider reducing the (1) by 1/4 and adding a circle at 01:09:544 - as well.
   it's fine
9. 01:24:544 (5,1) - This is a pretty unfair 1/4 jump. It should be coming off the slider end, not the end of a circle. Anyways, I personally think this would play better with the (5) completely removed. It gives that 1/2 beat to get back on track much like 01:23:372 (4,1) - does.
   Fixed

Hopefully some of this helps. Good luck o/

1. 00:03:568 (2,3,4,5,6) - This is overmapped honestly . You can't hear beats at 00:03:685 (3,4) - . Also, it's weird that you map that stream, but not notes like 00:01:107 - .00:02:044 -
   
   I think this rhythm would fit better

   
2. 00:29:818 (5,6,1) - Could improve flow here.
3. 00:29:349 (3,4,5,6,1) - Also, emphasis in this jump sequence could be improved. 00:28:880 (2,3) - This is good, since you jump from 2>3 to emphasize 3.
4. 00:29:349 (3,4,5) - Here is not so good though. You have a jump from 3>4 (to emphasize 4?) but 4 is a weaker beat compared to 5. Make the jump from 4>5 instead.
5. 00:38:607 (2) - This note is barely audible... Why map a triplet here but not at 00:39:076 - and 00:39:310 - where the 1/4's are clearly audible.
6. 00:47:044 - There's a clear triplet here .
7. 00:48:919 - Here too,. triplet.
8. 01:21:966 (5) - I don't hear a note here though . Generally speaking, almost all "triplets" will start on a red tick and end on a white tick. You rarely ever see triplets begin on white ticks and end on red ones.

1. 00:39:076 - Triplet makes more sense here. You can still keep the note at 00:39:310 (5) - . But having a triplet begin on red-tick is far more natural than a triplet beginning on a white tick. This part is actually a stream of 5,
2. 01:01:927 (4) - Triplet here instead of 1/4 repeat? That will set this triplet apart from 01:00:990 (2,3) - . And make it feel more important. Also, this way you can map the large white tick 01:02:162 - And have the NC there instead.
3. 01:03:568 (5) - Triplet should be on red tick too. 01:03:802 - Is there it should be. So i think take out the repeat slider and use circles.
4. 01:16:693 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - This part is a bit undermapped.... If you look at the rest of this diff, your combo's are much denser than this usually. Try adding a circle at 01:17:396 - and 01:19:271 - To increase density a bit.
5. 01:22:318 (4) - I would add a repeat here. It fits much better since there is another vocal on the red tick at the end of the slider, and a beat at 01:22:787 - .

1. 00:53:490 - Could add a note here.
2. 01:05:912 (1,2,3,4) - Might want to rethink the rhythm here... Since you switch to red-tick polarity here. You generally want to stay on white-ticks (the main rhythm) especially on lower diffs.
3. 01:29:349 (2,4) - Maybe don't overlap them since it's so little . 00:17:162 (4,5,1) - These kinds of overlaps are nice. Try to have something like this, or no overlap

monstrata wrote:

Returning m4m~

[Insane]

1. 00:03:568 (2,3,4,5,6) - This is overmapped honestly . You can't hear beats at 00:03:685 (3,4) - . Also, it's weird that you map that stream, but not notes like 00:01:107 - .00:02:044 -fixed
   
   I think this rhythm would fit better

   
2. 00:29:818 (5,6,1) - Could improve flow here.
3. 00:29:349 (3,4,5,6,1) - Also, emphasis in this jump sequence could be improved. 00:28:880 (2,3) - This is good, since you jump from 2>3 to emphasize 3.
4. 00:29:349 (3,4,5) - Here is not so good though. You have a jump from 3>4 (to emphasize 4?) but 4 is a weaker beat compared to 5. Make the jump from 4>5 instead.
   ok fixed
5. 00:38:607 (2) - This note is barely audible... Why map a triplet here but not at 00:39:076 - and 00:39:310 - where the 1/4's are clearly audible.
   
6. 00:47:044 - There's a clear triplet here .
   it'fine to me
7. 00:48:919 - Here too,. triplet.
   fixed
8. 01:21:966 (5) - I don't hear a note here though . Generally speaking, almost all "triplets" will start on a red tick and end on a white tick. You rarely ever see triplets begin on white ticks and end on red ones.
   fixed

[Hard]

1. 00:39:076 - Triplet makes more sense here. You can still keep the note at 00:39:310 (5) - . But having a triplet begin on red-tick is far more natural than a triplet beginning on a white tick. This part is actually a stream of 5,
   it's fine here is exist drum sound
2. 01:01:927 (4) - Triplet here instead of 1/4 repeat? That will set this triplet apart from 01:00:990 (2,3) - . And make it feel more important. Also, this way you can map the large white tick 01:02:162 - And have the NC there instead.
   it's fine
3. 01:03:568 (5) - Triplet should be on red tick too. 01:03:802 - Is there it should be. So i think take out the repeat slider and use circles.
   fixed
4. 01:16:693 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - This part is a bit undermapped.... If you look at the rest of this diff, your combo's are much denser than this usually. Try adding a circle at 01:17:396 - and 01:19:271 - To increase density a bit.
   fixed
5. 01:22:318 (4) - I would add a repeat here. It fits much better since there is another vocal on the red tick at the end of the slider, and a beat at 01:22:787 - .

[Normal]

1. 00:53:490 - Could add a note here.
   it's fine that make hardly
2. 01:05:912 (1,2,3,4) - Might want to rethink the rhythm here... Since you switch to red-tick polarity here. You generally want to stay on white-ticks (the main rhythm) especially on lower diffs.
   it's fine
3. 01:29:349 (2,4) - Maybe don't overlap them since it's so little . 00:17:162 (4,5,1) - These kinds of overlaps are nice. Try to have something like this, or no overlap
   fixed

Nothing for Easy, well done!

Okay good luck~