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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年11月16日 at 19:12:20

Artist: SHK
Title: Identity Part III
Source: O2Jam
Tags: Sound​Holic​K trancecore shiki Shin Hyun Keun
BPM: 150
Filesize: 20520kb
Play Time: 02:03
Difficulties Available:
  1. HD - 4Key (2.57 stars, 780 notes)
  2. MX - 4Key (3.64 stars, 1193 notes)
  3. NM - 4Key (1.51 stars, 431 notes)
  4. SHD - 4Key (4.84 stars, 1394 notes)
Download: SHK - Identity Part III
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Identity Part II : click here!
Bubbled by RuberusuScarlet
ReBubbled by Bruce
Qualified by Marirose
DisQualified by Starry-
ReBubbled by Zan -
ReQualified by Kuo Kyoka
Special Thanks
[modders:]
Raediaufar
ToifAmri
FreeezeForward
Rinzler
schwarzvgrune
Kagu-chan
Meiko Senpai and 1 star!
Sirade
hokin1995
Gomuryuu and 1 star!
-Star_Lenz- and 1 star!
_FrEsH_ChICkEn_
LNP-
Kruzon
MeowPaz and 1 star!
GraveChaos and 1 star!
Sleepingmania
Eternalie and 1 star!
Frim4503
Marirose
Biemote and 1 star!
RuberusuScarlet 1st BN check - Bubbled
Bruce 2st BN check - ReBubbled
Marirose 3st BN check - Qualified
Starry- QAT check - DisQualified
Zan - 4st BN check - ReBubbled
Kuo Kyoka 5th BN check - ReQualified

[IRC:]
Spy
[testplayers:]
ff99sui
Simple_Star
[and YOU]
ToifAmri
Hii.. Req From my forum.. :D

SPOILER
EZ Make this 1 star..



00:16:133 (16133|2,16133|1) - make 1 note

00:17:733 (17733|2,17733|1) - make 1 note

00:19:333 (19333|3,19333|1) - make 1 note

00:22:533 (22533|2,22533|1,24133|2,24133|1) - make 1 note

00:25:733 (25733|0,25733|2) - make 1 note

00:27:333 (27333|1,27333|3) - make 1 note

00:28:933 (28933|0,28933|1) - make 1 note

00:30:533 (30533|2,30533|3) - make 1 note

00:32:133 (32133|0,32133|3) - make 1 note

00:33:733 (33733|0,33733|3,34133|2,34133|1,34533|0,34533|3,34933|1,34933|2) - make Line or simple Note

00:51:333 (51333|3,51333|2) - make 1 note

00:52:533 (52533|3,52633|2,52733|1,52833|0) - very extreme for EZ . make it easier again

00:54:533 (54533|0,54533|2) - make 1 note

01:00:933 (60933|1,60933|2) - make 1 note

01:07:333 (67333|2,67333|1) - make it 1 note

01:08:933 (68933|2,68933|3,69333|2,69333|0,69733|0,69733|1,70133|1,70133|3) - make it 1 note

01:13:333 (73333|0,73333|3,73733|1,73733|2) - make it 1 note

01:15:333 (75333|3,75333|2,75733|1,75733|3,76133|1,76133|0,76533|0,76533|2) - make it easier again

01:20:133 (80133|2,80133|3) - make 1 note

01:21:733 (81733|1,81733|2) - make 1 note

01:23:333 (83333|1,83333|2) - make 1 note

01:24:933 (84933|2,84933|1) - make 1 note

01:26:533 (86533|1,86533|2) - make 1 note

01:28:133 (88133|1,88133|2) - make 1 note

01:29:733 (89733|2,89733|1) - make 1 note

01:31:333 (91333|2,91333|1) - make 1 note

01:52:133 (112133|0,112133|1) - make 1 note

01:53:733 (113733|2,113733|0) - make 1 note

01:55:333 (115333|2,115333|0) - make 1 note

01:56:933 (116933|2,116933|0) - make 1 note

02:01:733 (121733|1,123333|0,123333|3) - Delete

NM

more similar to HD . change it to HD and make new NM

00:06:933 (6933|2,7133|0,7333|1,7533|1) - delete.

00:09:733 (9733|2,9733|3,9733|0) - make it 2 note.

HD+

more similar to the MX . change it to MX and make new HD+

finish up here..
Raediaufar
Request from this queue

Column:
l1l2l3l4l

okay let's start

NM
00:06:933 (6933|3,7133|0) – how about making these notes to LN?
00:06:933 (6933|3) – and this note starts here - 00:07:033 –
00:07:133 (7133|0) – and this one starts here - 00:07:233 -
00:07:333 (7333|1) – move to 3 for consistency
00:08:133 (8133|3) – this LN starts here - 00:08:233 –
00:14:533 (14533|1,14533|2) – remove one note
00:34:733 (34733|3) – move to 2
01:31:533 (91533|3) – move to 1
01:46:933 (106933|2) – move this note to 2

I don't see much problem here
HD+
00:06:933 (6933|3,7133|0) – how about making these notes to LN?
00:06:933 (6933|3) – and this note starts here - 00:07:033 –
00:07:133 (7133|0) – and this one starts here - 00:07:233 -
00:07:333 (7333|1) – move to 3 for consistency
00:10:933 (10933|0) - move to 4 for consistency
00:12:533 (12533|3) - move to 1 (same reason as above)
00:13:733 (13733|1) – move to 4
00:15:333 (15333|2) – move to 1
00:20:933 - to - 00:22:083 - I think these 1/8 stairs patten is too hard for HD diffs and even for MX as well. Plus, your drain rate is 8 so I think many “HD players” will failed at this section

00:36:633 (36633|2) – jack, move it to 4 and the next part maybe like this http://puu.sh/hqYeY/826ad4c990.jpg

00:38:233 (38233|2) – this too, jack, move it to 4. And the next LN, should be located in 1 or 2. I leave the rest LN pattern to you but remember to avoid jacks and hand balance (the picture above is a good example on how to make this section without having any jacks and also hand balancing)

00:39:833 (39833|2) - ^

00:41:333 (41333|3,41333|0) – make it 3 and 4
00:41:433 (41433|3) – move to 1
00:41:533 (41533|2) – move to 4
00:42:833 (42833|0) – delete?
00:44:433 (44433|0) - ^
00:46:033 (46033|0) - ^
00:47:633 (47633|1) - ^
00:53:733 (53733|3) – move to 3
00:57:033 (57033|3) - ^
00:57:133 (57133|2) – move to 4
01:00:533 (60533|2,60533|1) – make it 1 and 3
01:01:733 (61733|0,61733|1) - ^
01:03:333 (63333|3,63333|2) – make it 2 and 4
01:03:733 (63733|3,63733|2) - ^
01:33:933 (93933|3) – how about to make this note to LN?
01:35:533 (95533|1) - ^
01:37:133 (97133|0) - ^
01:37:533 (97533|0) – move to 3
01:40:333 (100333|3) - how about to make this note to LN?
01:41:933 (101933|2) - ^
01:43:533 (103533|1) - ^
01:45:033 (105033|3) – delete?
01:47:033 (107033|2) – same jack problem, make - 01:46:933 (106933|2,106933|1) – this 1 and 3 and move - 01:47:033 (107033|2) – to 2
01:48:633 (108633|2) – move this to 4
01:48:733 (108733|3) – move this LN to 1
01:50:233 (110233|2) – move to 4
01:50:333 (110333|3,110533|1) – ctrl + J
01:51:733 (111733|0,111733|3) – make it 1 and 3
01:53:233 (113233|0) – delete?
01:54:833 (114833|0) - ^
01:56:433 (116433|0) - ^

okay, that's all major problems I can find, good luck with your beatmap :)
Topic Starter
paperlens

Raediaufar wrote:

Request from this queue

Column:
l1l2l3l4l

okay let's start

NM
00:06:933 (6933|3,7133|0) – how about making these notes to LN? - Good Idea~~ Done
00:06:933 (6933|3) – and this note starts here - 00:07:033 –
00:07:133 (7133|0) – and this one starts here - 00:07:233 -
00:07:333 (7333|1) – move to 3 for consistency - nope, its same sound as 00:07:533 (7533|1) -
00:08:133 (8133|3) – this LN starts here - 00:08:233 – - no, I have hitsound fits with music here -
00:14:533 (14533|1,14533|2) – remove one note
00:34:733 (34733|3) – move to 2 - Done -
01:31:533 (91533|3) – move to 1 - Done -
01:46:933 (106933|2) – move this note to 2 - It's higher pitch then 01:46:133 (106133|1) - -

I don't see much problem here
HD+
00:06:933 (6933|3,7133|0) – how about making these notes to LN? - Done -
00:06:933 (6933|3) – and this note starts here - 00:07:033 –
00:07:133 (7133|0) – and this one starts here - 00:07:233 -
00:07:333 (7333|1) – move to 3 for consistency- nope, its same sound as 00:07:533 (7533|1) -
00:10:933 (10933|0) - move to 4 for consistency- nope, its same sound as before
00:12:533 (12533|3) - move to 1 (same reason as above)- nope, its same sound as before
00:13:733 (13733|1) – move to 4- nope, its same sound as before
00:15:333 (15333|2) – move to 1- nope, its same sound as before
00:20:933 - to - 00:22:083 - I think these 1/8 stairs patten is too hard for HD diffs and even for MX as well. Plus, your drain rate is 8 so I think many “HD players” will failed at this section - I will consider about it, but actually I think it's not that hard Just let me have more modders' opinion~

00:36:633 (36633|2) – jack, move it to 4 and the next part maybe like this http://puu.sh/hqYeY/826ad4c990.jpg

00:38:233 (38233|2) – this too, jack, move it to 4. And the next LN, should be located in 1 or 2. I leave the rest LN pattern to you but remember to avoid jacks and hand balance (the picture above is a good example on how to make this section without having any jacks and also hand balancing)

00:39:833 (39833|2) - ^

- Actually, I think those jacks is not that hard, and fit the music. I'll consider about it if it really make players fail in this part. Thanks for advice -

00:41:333 (41333|3,41333|0) – make it 3 and 4 - sorry but that would break the hand balance
00:41:433 (41433|3) – move to 1
00:41:533 (41533|2) – move to 4
00:42:833 (42833|0) – delete?
00:44:433 (44433|0) - ^
00:46:033 (46033|0) - ^
00:47:633 (47633|1) - ^
- Thanks~ Good idea -
00:53:733 (53733|3) – move to 3 - I don't wanna cause it's same sound. and also, I'll consider if it's too hard -
00:57:033 (57033|3) - ^
00:57:133 (57133|2) – move to 4
01:00:533 (60533|2,60533|1) – make it 1 and 3
01:01:733 (61733|0,61733|1) - ^
01:03:333 (63333|3,63333|2) – make it 2 and 4
01:03:733 (63733|3,63733|2) - ^
01:33:933 (93933|3) – how about to make this note to LN? - Done -
01:35:533 (95533|1) - ^
01:37:133 (97133|0) - ^
01:37:533 (97533|0) – move to 3 - but that breaks the pitch -
01:40:333 (100333|3) - how about to make this note to LN?
01:41:933 (101933|2) - ^
01:43:533 (103533|1) - ^
01:45:033 (105033|3) – delete? - but there is a sound -
01:47:033 (107033|2) – same jack problem, make - 01:46:933 (106933|2,106933|1) – this 1 and 3 and move - 01:47:033 (107033|2) – to 2
01:48:633 (108633|2) – move this to 4
01:48:733 (108733|3) – move this LN to 1
01:50:233 (110233|2) – move to 4
01:50:333 (110333|3,110533|1) – ctrl + J
01:51:733 (111733|0,111733|3) – make it 1 and 3
01:53:233 (113233|0) – delete?
01:54:833 (114833|0) - ^
01:56:433 (116433|0) - ^

okay, that's all major problems I can find, good luck with your beatmap :)
Thanks for mod~~ There's a lot of good idea in HD+! and I'll continue consider about the jacks, 1/8, etc. thanks for your carefully mod~

ToifAmri wrote:

Hii.. Req From my forum.. :D

SPOILER
EZ Make this 1 star..



00:16:133 (16133|2,16133|1) - make 1 note

00:17:733 (17733|2,17733|1) - make 1 note

00:19:333 (19333|3,19333|1) - make 1 note

00:22:533 (22533|2,22533|1,24133|2,24133|1) - make 1 note

00:25:733 (25733|0,25733|2) - make 1 note

00:27:333 (27333|1,27333|3) - make 1 note

00:28:933 (28933|0,28933|1) - make 1 note

00:30:533 (30533|2,30533|3) - make 1 note

00:32:133 (32133|0,32133|3) - make 1 note

00:33:733 (33733|0,33733|3,34133|2,34133|1,34533|0,34533|3,34933|1,34933|2) - make Line or simple Note

00:51:333 (51333|3,51333|2) - make 1 note

00:52:533 (52533|3,52633|2,52733|1,52833|0) - very extreme for EZ . make it easier again

00:54:533 (54533|0,54533|2) - make 1 note

01:00:933 (60933|1,60933|2) - make 1 note

01:07:333 (67333|2,67333|1) - make it 1 note

01:08:933 (68933|2,68933|3,69333|2,69333|0,69733|0,69733|1,70133|1,70133|3) - make it 1 note

01:13:333 (73333|0,73333|3,73733|1,73733|2) - make it 1 note

01:15:333 (75333|3,75333|2,75733|1,75733|3,76133|1,76133|0,76533|0,76533|2) - make it easier again

01:20:133 (80133|2,80133|3) - make 1 note

01:21:733 (81733|1,81733|2) - make 1 note

01:23:333 (83333|1,83333|2) - make 1 note

01:24:933 (84933|2,84933|1) - make 1 note

01:26:533 (86533|1,86533|2) - make 1 note

01:28:133 (88133|1,88133|2) - make 1 note

01:29:733 (89733|2,89733|1) - make 1 note

01:31:333 (91333|2,91333|1) - make 1 note

01:52:133 (112133|0,112133|1) - make 1 note

01:53:733 (113733|2,113733|0) - make 1 note

01:55:333 (115333|2,115333|0) - make 1 note

01:56:933 (116933|2,116933|0) - make 1 note

02:01:733 (121733|1,123333|0,123333|3) - Delete

NM

more similar to HD . change it to HD and make new NM - I'll do it.

00:06:933 (6933|2,7133|0,7333|1,7533|1) - delete. - no, I think it's good -

00:09:733 (9733|2,9733|3,9733|0) - make it 2 note. - sorry but I think the sound is loud enough for 3 notes -

HD+

more similar to the MX . change it to MX and make new HD+ - I'll do it.

finish up here..

thanks for mod~~ and I'll make the EZ diff these days..
updated~~~
Rivals_7
Hey, Vocal Sync was my idea. lol. Plus, there is no vocal on that diff. and you do know what is "vocal" right?
Topic Starter
paperlens

Rivals_7 wrote:

Hey, Vocal Sync was my idea. lol. Plus, there is no vocal on that diff. and you do know what is "vocal" right?
Ouch It hurts -m-.. I didn't know that's your idea and I have bad English. May I change the diff name. sorry.
Frizu
Hi, here's my mod from your queue (M4M)

1|2|3|4

NM
00:53:333 Add a note here, it's not hard enough for a NM diff
01:12:933 (72933|2) - Move to 4
01:13:133 (73133|1) - Move to 3
01:13:333 (73333|0) - Move to 2
01:13:533 Add to 1
^The melody is tuning down, since you have pitch relevancy

HD
01:38:933 (98933|0) - Move to 3
01:39:033 (99033|1) - Move to 4
^Drum rolls here, so it must be thrills pattern

HD+
00:35:333 (35333|3,35333|2) - Switch columns, listen to the pitch
00:36:633 (36633|2) - Delete, the beat is not loud enough making minijacks useless (unless it's a ghost note)
00:38:233 (38233|2) - Delete, ^
00:39:833 (39833|2) - Delete, ^
00:41:433 (41433|3) - Delete, ^
00:41:833 (41833|2,42033|2,42233|2,42433|2,43433|2,43633|2,43833|2,44033|2,45033|2,45233|2,46633|2,46833|2,47033|2,47233|2) - Delete, no beat supported (unless it's a ghost note)
01:47:033 (107033|2) - Delete, beat is not loud enough (unless it's a ghost note)
01:48:633 (108633|2) - Delete, ^
01:50:233 (110233|2) - Delete, ^
01:51:833 (111833|3) - Delete, ^

SHD
00:09:733 (9733|2,9933|1) - Switch columns, listen to the pitch
00:16:933 (16933|3) - Move to 1, columns 1 and 4 are alternating notes
00:18:533 (18533|0) - Move to 4, ^
00:20:133 (20133|3) - Move to 1, ^

Keysound(SHD)
00:09:733 (9733|2,9933|1) - Switch columns, listen to the pitch
00:16:933 (16933|3) - Move to 1, columns 1 and 4 are alternating notes
00:18:533 (18533|0) - Move to 4, ^
00:20:133 (20133|3) - Move to 1, ^
Hope it helps to you, :)
Don't forget to mod my map
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/307602
Topic Starter
paperlens

FreeezeForward wrote:

Hi, here's my mod from your queue (M4M)

1|2|3|4

NM
00:53:333 Add a note here, it's not hard enough for a NM diff - Done
01:12:933 (72933|2) - Move to 4
01:13:133 (73133|1) - Move to 3
01:13:333 (73333|0) - Move to 2
01:13:533 Add to 1
^The melody is tuning down, since you have pitch relevancy
↑Done in another way, thanks for advice~↑

HD
01:38:933 (98933|0) - Move to 3
01:39:033 (99033|1) - Move to 4
^Drum rolls here, so it must be thrills pattern - Maybe not, It may be too hard for 2.33stars, anyway I'll consider about it, thanks~~

HD+
00:35:333 (35333|3,35333|2) - Switch columns, listen to the pitch - Done
00:36:633 (36633|2) - Delete, the beat is not loud enough making minijacks useless (unless it's a ghost note)
00:38:233 (38233|2) - Delete, ^
00:39:833 (39833|2) - Delete, ^
00:41:433 (41433|3) - Delete, ^
00:41:833 (41833|2,42033|2,42233|2,42433|2,43433|2,43633|2,43833|2,44033|2,45033|2,45233|2,46633|2,46833|2,47033|2,47233|2) - Delete, no beat supported (unless it's a ghost note)
01:47:033 (107033|2) - Delete, beat is not loud enough (unless it's a ghost note)
01:48:633 (108633|2) - Delete, ^
01:50:233 (110233|2) - Delete, ^
01:51:833 (111833|3) - Delete, ^
↑About these delete advises, I don't really want to do that, and All these notes are not ghost note, they have music sounds. you can refer to 'Keysound(SHD)'. And whats more, I didn't want HD+ to be so easy, some minijacks and burst parts maybe good I think. But I'll consider it if most modders mentioned that and someone wants to make a MX GD.↑

SHD
00:09:733 (9733|2,9933|1) - Switch columns, listen to the pitch - Done
00:16:933 (16933|3) - Move to 1, columns 1 and 4 are alternating notes
00:18:533 (18533|0) - Move to 4, ^
00:20:133 (20133|3) - Move to 1, ^
↑nope, because 00:16:133 (16133|3,16533|3,16933|3,17333|3) - and 00:17:733 (17733|0,18133|0,18533|0,18933|0) - actually have same sounds↑
Hope it helps to you, :)
Don't forget to mod my map - DONE~~
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/307602
Thanks for mod~~ :)

updated~~~
Rinzler
From Mod Queue
| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |


sorry for the delay

General
you use an .ogg file for hitsound ?, well as far as i know, .ogg file is now unrankable, discuss it with QAT or BN
and what is the different between SHD and Keysound SHD ?

NM
View > Volume > Change the sample volume to 0, so you can hear the music beat clearly

00:32:533 (32533|2) - move to 2

00:32:933 (32933|1) - move to 1

01:00:333 (60333|3) - move to 2, this note have lower pitch than the next note

01:00:533 (60533|2) - move to 4

01:06:733 (66733|3) - move to 2

01:06:933 (66933|2) - move to 4

01:08:933 (68933|3,68933|2,69333|0,69333|2,69733|1,69733|0,70133|3,70133|1) - 1 note is enough, and those notes have same sound with 01:16:933 (76933|1,77333|3,77733|0,78133|2) -

01:15:333 (75333|3,75333|2,75733|3,75733|1,76133|1,76133|0,76533|2,76533|0) - ^

01:13:333 (73333|2) - remove

01:53:733 (113733|0) - remove

01:56:933 (116933|0) - remove

HD
00:34:533 (34533|0,34633|3,34833|1) - if you hear carefully, there is no sound, so remove

from 01:20:133 - to 01:29:533 - , those patterns are kinda repetitive, try to make different pattern

i'm sorry i just only mod 2 diffs
good luck ~
Topic Starter
paperlens

Rinzler wrote:

From Mod Queue
| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |


sorry for the delay

General
you use an .ogg file for hitsound ?, well as far as i know, .ogg file is now unrankable, discuss it with QAT or BN
and what is the different between SHD and Keysound SHD ? - There's no different between SHD and Keysound SHD but Keysound SHD is only for refering. It's All Keysounded. Actually I didn't know ogg is unrankable... Thanks a lot for remind, and I will consider to solve it these days.

NM
View > Volume > Change the sample volume to 0, so you can hear the music beat clearly

00:32:533 (32533|2) - move to 2 - Done

00:32:933 (32933|1) - move to 1 - Done

01:00:333 (60333|3) - move to 2, this note have lower pitch than the next note - no it doesn't, you can refer to the keysound, and since it's from o2jam SHK, I thin it's provable.

01:00:533 (60533|2) - move to 4 - ^

01:06:733 (66733|3) - move to 2 - ^

01:06:933 (66933|2) - move to 4 - ^

01:08:933 (68933|3,68933|2,69333|0,69333|2,69733|1,69733|0,70133|3,70133|1) - 1 note is enough, and those notes have same sound with 01:16:933 (76933|1,77333|3,77733|0,78133|2) - - Done, thanks~

01:15:333 (75333|3,75333|2,75733|3,75733|1,76133|1,76133|0,76533|2,76533|0) - ^ - Done

01:13:333 (73333|2) - remove - Done

01:53:733 (113733|0) - remove - Done

01:56:933 (116933|0) - remove - Done

HD
00:34:533 (34533|0,34633|3,34833|1) - if you hear carefully, there is no sound, so remove but there is drum sound..

from 01:20:133 - to 01:29:533 - , those patterns are kinda repetitive, try to make different pattern- Done

i'm sorry i just only mod 2 diffs - doesn't matter~~
good luck ~
thanks for mod :D

updated~~
schwarzvgrune
Hi paperlens ~\(≧▽≦)/~
Mod as requested from Astral Horizon
Feel free to implement or reject if you think this is useless ~~o(>_<)o ~~


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No emoticon in Black = normal suggestions based on rationale of modding given below~
o(≧v≦)o~~ = everything is good~
Σ( ° △ °|||)︴ = error / mistake / extremely recommended to be modified~
(⊙o⊙)? = unclear / questionable parts, thus cannot give a decisive recommendations~
O(∩_∩)O~ = other comments~

General : o(≧v≦)o~~
Mapset : o(≧v≦)o~~
Metadata : o(≧v≦)o~~
Timing : o(≧v≦)o~~
Audio : Σ( ° △ °|||)︴ hitsound for all diffs are too loud, to the point of obstructing the main song. please decrease them to 40% across the whole diffs.
Background : o(≧v≦)o~~
Hitsounding : o(≧v≦)o~~


|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8|9|10|


In general, I will mod based on these considerations ♪(^∇^*)
( X ) I will not take this into consideration when modding
( ) I will take this into consideration when modding
( ? ) I might unconsciously take this into consideration when modding
Pitch Agreement / Relevancy : ( )
Hand Balancing : ( )
(Consistent) Patterning : ( )
Possibility of Long Notes Abuse : ( )
Ghost Note : ( )
Suggestions / Opinion only : ( )


EZ
no grave issues detected~~~~
NM
no grave issues detected~~~~

HD
00:34:533 - add a note to 3, better emphasis. clear louder sound
00:34:933 - ^
00:36:533 (36533|2) - move to 4 PR (pitch relevancy)
00:36:733 (36733|3) - move to 2 PR
00:36:933 (36933|1) - move to 4 PR
00:37:533 (37533|0) - move to 2 PR
00:37:733 (37733|1) - move to 4 PR

00:38:133 (38133|2) - move to 2 PR

00:38:333 - http://puu.sh/hxa3t/cafef29732.png PR

00:39:933 (39933|3,40133|1,40333|0,40533|2,40733|0,40933|3,41133|1,41333|3,41533|2) - readjust this because you're not consistently following the pitch. earlier pattern suggest that you're following the pitch, please follow the pitch consistently while at the same time consider the hand balancing.

00:51:533 (51533|3,51633|2,51733|1) - drag 1x to the left
00:51:933 (51933|0,52033|1,52133|2) - drag 1x to the right, better hand balance

01:45:733 - 01:52:133 - same issues as above, remap taking PR into consideration.

this is all for now i'm so sorry i'm so busy these days ;w;
we can do an IRC mod when you're online.

and also further note.
the hitsound seems to be a converted one which you obtained through using a certain application.
I personally, have never seen a ranked map which hitsound is taken from such apps.
please consult this with other ppl.


Excellent Beatmap!!! Nice Song!!! d(≧v≦)b~~
Good Luck for rank!! O(∩_∩)O
Kagu-chan


1|2|3|4

Please reply soon and point out what rejected and why

Your Hitsounds seems to be wrong!
00:25:333 (25333|3) - for example - it produces doubled drum sound at most HS like this! Please fix this!

NM

00:18:133 (18133|1,18533|1,18933|1) - Should be on 3 for same pitch
01:31:533 (91533|3,91733|2,91933|0,92133|1,92333|3,92533|2,92733|0) - Maybe change a bit - 1/2 tick seems dont fit much here

HD

00:13:333 (13333|1,13733|1,14133|1) - Should be on 4 for same pitch (see NM)
00:36:733 (36733|3) - Change this to SN for better fitting (LN is fitting too, but in pattern and sound difference SN would fit more i think)
00:38:333 (38333|3) - ^
00:39:933 (39933|3) - ^
00:46:533 - until 00:48:133 - here a stair stream would be nice xD
01:32:933 - until KIAI: what have you done with double notes? i dont see any system there - you may make this like before
01:47:133 (107133|3) - See above
01:48:733 (108733|3) - ^
01:50:333 (110333|3) - ^
Topic Starter
paperlens

schwarzvgrune wrote:

Hi paperlens ~\(≧▽≦)/~
Mod as requested from Astral Horizon
Feel free to implement or reject if you think this is useless ~~o(>_<)o ~~


Icon Bibliography
No emoticon in Black = normal suggestions based on rationale of modding given below~
o(≧v≦)o~~ = everything is good~
Σ( ° △ °|||)︴ = error / mistake / extremely recommended to be modified~
(⊙o⊙)? = unclear / questionable parts, thus cannot give a decisive recommendations~
O(∩_∩)O~ = other comments~

General : o(≧v≦)o~~
Mapset : o(≧v≦)o~~
Metadata : o(≧v≦)o~~
Timing : o(≧v≦)o~~
Audio : Σ( ° △ °|||)︴ hitsound for all diffs are too loud, to the point of obstructing the main song. please decrease them to 40% across the whole diffs. 已改
Background : o(≧v≦)o~~
Hitsounding : o(≧v≦)o~~


|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8|9|10|


In general, I will mod based on these considerations ♪(^∇^*)
( X ) I will not take this into consideration when modding
( ) I will take this into consideration when modding
( ? ) I might unconsciously take this into consideration when modding
Pitch Agreement / Relevancy : ( )
Hand Balancing : ( )
(Consistent) Patterning : ( )
Possibility of Long Notes Abuse : ( )
Ghost Note : ( )
Suggestions / Opinion only : ( )


EZ
no grave issues detected~~~~ -w-谢谢检查~~
NM
no grave issues detected~~~~ -w-谢谢检查~~

HD
00:34:533 - add a note to 3, better emphasis. clear louder sound
00:34:933 - ^ 修好了,不过我目测以后又会有modder来和我说这里太难了
00:36:533 (36533|2) - move to 4 PR (pitch relevancy)
00:36:733 (36733|3) - move to 2 PR
00:36:933 (36933|1) - move to 4 PR
00:37:533 (37533|0) - move to 2 PR
00:37:733 (37733|1) - move to 4 PR

00:38:133 (38133|2) - move to 2 PR

00:38:333 - http://puu.sh/hxa3t/cafef29732.png PR

了解你的意思了 不过其实我不是很喜欢,但是有空(或许下次找你IRC的时候-w-)会再考虑一下的

00:39:933 (39933|3,40133|1,40333|0,40533|2,40733|0,40933|3,41133|1,41333|3,41533|2) - readjust this because you're not consistently following the pitch. earlier pattern suggest that you're following the pitch, please follow the pitch consistently while at the same time consider the hand balancing.

00:51:533 (51533|3,51633|2,51733|1) - drag 1x to the left
00:51:933 (51933|0,52033|1,52133|2) - drag 1x to the right, better hand balance OK很好

01:45:733 - 01:52:133 - same issues as above, remap taking PR into consideration. 同上

this is all for now i'm so sorry i'm so busy these days ;w;
we can do an IRC mod when you're online.

and also further note.
the hitsound seems to be a converted one which you obtained through using a certain application. hitsound似乎确实有问题的样子,也有其他modder提出来了,不过其实我不是很懂……再说吧
I personally, have never seen a ranked map which hitsound is taken from such apps.
please consult this with other ppl.


Excellent Beatmap!!! Nice Song!!! d(≧v≦)b~~谢谢~~ 很抱歉我回复的很仓促,闲下来会再回来修一遍的,如果能有空抓住你(误)再和你说-w-
Good Luck for rank!! O(∩_∩)O
Topic Starter
paperlens

Kagu-chan wrote:



1|2|3|4

Please reply soon and point out what rejected and why

Your Hitsounds seems to be wrong!
00:25:333 (25333|3) - for example - it produces doubled drum sound at most HS like this! Please fix this! - Actually, Those two drum sound is different. and provable

NM

00:18:133 (18133|1,18533|1,18933|1) - Should be on 3 for same pitch - no, should be on 2, for same pitch as 00:17:733 (17733|1) - .
01:31:533 (91533|3,91733|2,91933|0,92133|1,92333|3,92533|2,92733|0) - Maybe change a bit - 1/2 tick seems dont fit much here - changed,thanks -

HD

00:13:333 (13333|1,13733|1,14133|1) - Should be on 4 for same pitch (see NM) - no, should be on 2, for same pitch .
00:36:733 (36733|3) - Change this to SN for better fitting (LN is fitting too, but in pattern and sound difference SN would fit more i think)
00:38:333 (38333|3) - ^
00:39:933 (39933|3) - ^ - nope, you can refer to the keysound and harder diffs, it worth LN I think -
00:46:533 - until 00:48:133 - here a stair stream would be nice xD - but it's hard for me to find good stair patterns here... and it can be so hard for this diff -
01:32:933 - until KIAI: what have you done with double notes? i dont see any system there - you may make this like before - You may refer to the keysounds, I want to both express the melody and the drum sounds -
01:47:133 (107133|3) - See above
01:48:733 (108733|3) - ^
01:50:333 (110333|3) - ^ - ^
thanks for mod~~ :D

updated~~
x M e l
Hi~ mod for req via queue

1|2|3|4


[NM]
01:38:933 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3077624 ?

Sorry but I can't find errors in this map ._. so, star... good luck :oops:
Topic Starter
paperlens

Meiko Senpai wrote:

Hi~ mod for req via queue ~~Hi~~

1|2|3|4


[NM]
01:38:933 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3077624 ? - Done, thanks ~~~

Sorry but I can't find errors in this map ._. so, star... good luck :oops:
really appreciate your mod and star, thanks for checking~~

updated~~
Rilene
From my queue
~Express Modding
i have to take this map as a high priority because of your selection, express modding. :3

HD+
00:20:933 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3093061 These streams are more fun compared to left to right 1/8 streams.
01:21:733 - 01:24:933 - 01:28:133 - 01:31:333 - These part seems to be missing one notes to representing one of these sounds, either kick sound, synth sound or cymbal (or finish) sound...

Well, nothing alot to mod since this is already well mapped (not because of express modding limitations :l) (and hitsounded, which ensures player to place all note with least chance of mistakes possible).

Good luck on getting ranked! :D
Topic Starter
paperlens

Sirade wrote:

From my queue
~Express Modding
i have to take this map as a high priority because of your selection, express modding. :3

HD+
00:20:933 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3093061 These streams are more fun compared to left to right 1/8 streams. - That's Really NICE!! thanks a lot~~
01:21:733 - 01:24:933 - 01:28:133 - 01:31:333 - These part seems to be missing one notes to representing one of these sounds, either kick sound, synth sound or cymbal (or finish) sound... fixed it both in HD+ and SHD~~Nice catch, thanks!

Well, nothing alot to mod since this is already well mapped (not because of express modding limitations :l) (and hitsounded, which ensures player to place all note with least chance of mistakes possible). Thanks :D

Good luck on getting ranked! :D
thanks for modding~~ :D

updated~~
hokin1995
Column: 1|2|3|4
[General]
GOD
[NM]
太神 不會模 :o
[HD]
● 00:08:933 - 加一個在2 怎樣?
Nice
[HD+]
● 00:08:933 - 跟HD一樣
● 00:37:733 (37733|1,37733|2) - 兩個都右向移 感覺舒服一點
● 00:47:333 (47333|3,47333|1,47433|3,47433|1,47533|2,47533|0,47633|1,47733|2,47733|3,47833|3,47833|2,47933|1,47933|0,48033|2) - 為啥到了這裡 固有的模式突然改變了;W; 變成這樣? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3107731 看看你怎樣想
● 01:48:133 (108133|1,108133|2) - 跟00:37:733 (37733|1,37733|2)一樣改法
●01:57:733(117733|1,117733|3,117833|1,117833|3,117933|0,117933|2,118033|1,118133|2,118133|3,118233|3,118233|2,118333|0,118333|1,118433|2) - 這跟前面一樣改法w
[SHD]
●00:35:933 - 00:36:333 - 00:36:733 - 00:37:133 - 類似的地方 是不是應該多放一個note吧
因為00:41:933之後 這個音你卻放了note 例如00:41:933 (41933|1,42333|0,42733|2) 感覺統一點會好一些;w;
●01:20:433 (80433|1) - move to 4
●01:21:333 (81333|2) - move to 1
●01:23:633 (83633|2) - move to 4
●01:23:933 (83933|0,83933|1,83933|3,84233|3,84233|0,84233|2) - CTRL+H
●01:24:533 (84533|1) - move to 1
之後那兩段都差不多改法
●01:48:133 (108133|2,108133|1) - 兩個都右向移 感覺舒服一點

前輩~ 我遲了2星期有多 抱歉啦
然而 圖太神啦 再加上 我不太會摸圖 所以以上未必有幫助哦w :o
先這樣:D 加油
Topic Starter
paperlens

hokin1995 wrote:

Column: 1|2|3|4
[General]
GOD - GOD? god shit~~-w-
[NM]
太神 不會模 :o 谢谢检查~~
[HD]
● 00:08:933 - 加一個在2 怎樣? - 好的
Nice
[HD+]
● 00:08:933 - 跟HD一樣 - 好的
● 00:37:733 (37733|1,37733|2) - 兩個都右向移 感覺舒服一點 - 不过这样就和pitch不符了,所以我只挪了一个键
● 00:47:333 (47333|3,47333|1,47433|3,47433|1,47533|2,47533|0,47633|1,47733|2,47733|3,47833|3,47833|2,47933|1,47933|0,48033|2) - 為啥到了這裡 固有的模式突然改變了;W; 變成這樣? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3107731 看看你怎樣想 - 很好的建议-w- 照你的repattern,但是依旧保留了00:47:633 - 00:48:033 - 的note,因为参照SHD我觉得这里属于burst的地方 所以加了note 不过似乎确实有点突然,如果再有modder提出这个问题我就改掉
● 01:48:133 (108133|1,108133|2) - 跟00:37:733 (37733|1,37733|2)一樣改法 - 同上
●01:57:733(117733|1,117733|3,117833|1,117833|3,117933|0,117933|2,118033|1,118133|2,118133|3,118233|3,118233|2,118333|0,118333|1,118433|2) - 這跟前面一樣改法w - 同上
[SHD]
●00:35:933 - 00:36:333 - 00:36:733 - 00:37:133 - 類似的地方 是不是應該多放一個note吧
因為00:41:933之後 這個音你卻放了note 例如00:41:933 (41933|1,42333|0,42733|2) 感覺統一點會好一些;w; -OK很好的建议,已改完
●01:20:433 (80433|1) - move to 4
●01:21:333 (81333|2) - move to 1
●01:23:633 (83633|2) - move to 4
●01:23:933 (83933|0,83933|1,83933|3,84233|3,84233|0,84233|2) - CTRL+H
●01:24:533 (84533|1) - move to 1 - 我自己照着这样的意思做了一点repattern,其实我最一开始都是这样做的 不过后来忘了为什么改掉了……
之後那兩段都差不多改法
●01:48:133 (108133|2,108133|1) - 兩個都右向移 感覺舒服一點 - 同上,三十几秒的那个也同上

前輩~ 我遲了2星期有多 抱歉啦 - 前辈!我是后生!!我也很懒所以完全没关系-w-
然而 圖太神啦 再加上 我不太會摸圖 所以以上未必有幫助哦w :o - 然而全都是神摸
先這樣:D 加油
谢谢摸图~~超赞的摸! :)

updated~~
Gomuryuu
Hi~

M4M from MODHOUSE

Here's my mod as requested

Column 1|2|3|4

[Notice]

There's a delay on normal-hitnormal2.wav



I didn't check all the hitsound file but because this one is a quite strong synth (the 'pew') sound, it's easily noticeable when there's a delay, like on 00:22:133 you can hear two different sound there from the mp3 and hitsound. replace it with this.

NM
00:21:333 - 00:21:733 - why not add note on these places like you did on the previous pattern, i think hitting single notes when holding LN is common for NM diff
00:52:633 (52633|2,52733|1) - Ctrl+H, i think its more comfortable for NM
nice pattern~ :)
HD
00:07:733 - add LN here, rearrange it like this maybe v it has almost similar sound as 00:06:933

00:22:133 (22133|1) - not suitable for LN, make it normal note
00:52:533 (52533|3,52633|2,52733|1,52833|0) - make it a trill (?)
01:06:433 - add note here
01:06:833 - ^
01:07:233 - ^
01:07:333 - make it double note
HD+
change diff name to MX?
00:07:733 - add LN here, same as my mod on HD
00:42:633 (42633|3,42633|0) - remove one note, the previous double is clearly heavier because of the kick sound, so this have no reason for double minijack, except you use triplets before
00:43:033 (43033|1,43033|2) - ^
00:44:233 (44233|3,44233|0) - ^
00:44:633 (44633|2,44633|1) - ^
00:45:833 (45833|3,45833|0) - ^
00:46:233 (46233|1,46233|2) - ^
00:47:433 (47433|3,47433|1) - ^
00:47:833 (47833|0,47833|2) - ^
01:18:533 - some suggestion, quite strong drum here */me evil laugh



or another variation, my main point is use alternating 1/4 double trill

01:53:033 (113033|0,113033|3) - remove one note, same reason as my mod on 00:42:633
01:53:433 (113433|1,113433|2) - ^
01:54:633 (114633|0,114633|3) - ^
01:55:033 (115033|1,115033|2) - ^
01:56:233 (116233|0,116233|3) - ^
01:56:633 (116633|1,116633|2) - ^
01:57:833 (117833|3,117833|1) - ^
01:58:233 (118233|2,118233|3) - ^

Great map, I love the pattern, Take a star~ :)

i'm sorry i can't mod the whole mapset and sorry for the delay too~

GO RANK!~
Topic Starter
paperlens

Gomuryuu wrote:

Hi~

M4M from MODHOUSE

Here's my mod as requested

Column 1|2|3|4

[Notice]

There's a delay on normal-hitnormal2.wav



I didn't check all the hitsound file but because this one is a quite strong synth (the 'pew') sound, it's easily noticeable when there's a delay, like on 00:22:133 you can hear two different sound there from the mp3 and hitsound. replace it with this.
- Thanks a lot!! I'll recheck all the hitsounds today -

NM
00:21:333 - 00:21:733 - why not add note on these places like you did on the previous pattern, i think hitting single notes when holding LN is common for NM diff - you're right~Done
00:52:633 (52633|2,52733|1) - Ctrl+H, i think its more comfortable for NM - Done
nice pattern~ :) thanks-w-
HD
00:07:733 - add LN here, rearrange it like this maybe v it has almost similar sound as 00:06:933 - nice catch, fixed in every diff

00:22:133 (22133|1) - not suitable for LN, make it normal note - Done
00:52:533 (52533|3,52633|2,52733|1,52833|0) - make it a trill (?) it's trill in HD+ I think it maybe too hard for this diff
01:06:433 - add note here
01:06:833 - ^
01:07:233 - ^
01:07:333 - make it double note - All Done, Really Nice Catch :D
HD+
change diff name to MX? - maybe...I'll consider it~
00:07:733 - add LN here, same as my mod on HD - Done
00:42:633 (42633|3,42633|0) - remove one note, the previous double is clearly heavier because of the kick sound, so this have no reason for double minijack, except you use triplets before - All Done here, thank you very much for this!
00:43:033 (43033|1,43033|2) - ^
00:44:233 (44233|3,44233|0) - ^
00:44:633 (44633|2,44633|1) - ^
00:45:833 (45833|3,45833|0) - ^
00:46:233 (46233|1,46233|2) - ^
00:47:433 (47433|3,47433|1) - ^
00:47:833 (47833|0,47833|2) - ^
01:18:533 - some suggestion, quite strong drum here */me evil laugh



or another variation, my main point is use alternating 1/4 double trill - I take your idea but I mainly wanted to express the melody here, so there should be a difference between when there is melody sound and there is only drum sound, anyway thx~

01:53:033 (113033|0,113033|3) - remove one note, same reason as my mod on 00:42:633 - All Done
01:53:433 (113433|1,113433|2) - ^
01:54:633 (114633|0,114633|3) - ^
01:55:033 (115033|1,115033|2) - ^
01:56:233 (116233|0,116233|3) - ^
01:56:633 (116633|1,116633|2) - ^
01:57:833 (117833|3,117833|1) - ^
01:58:233 (118233|2,118233|3) - ^

Great map, I love the pattern, Take a star~ :) - thx! :D

i'm sorry i can't mod the whole mapset and sorry for the delay too~ - doesn't matter :D good luck with your exam~

GO RANK!~
Thank you for very helpful mod!! :D and thx for your star~~

updated~~
[-Star_Lenz-]
Hi pape >w<
you via queues M4M done~

NM
00:49:733 - add note sound beat high
01:55:333 (115333|0) - move col 3 ?
01:55:533 (115533|3) - ^ col 1?

HD
00:43:733 (43733|2) - move col 4 same 00:42:933 (42933|3,42933|2,43333|3,43333|2) - and 00:44:533 (44533|1,44533|0,44933|0,44933|1) -

Nice all diff pattern ;w;
Good Luck :D nyan~
Topic Starter
paperlens

[-Star_Lenz-] wrote:

Hi pape >w<
you via queues M4M done~

NM
00:49:733 - add note sound beat high - Done
01:55:333 (115333|0) - move col 3 ? - nope , for pitch
01:55:533 (115533|3) - ^ col 1? - nope , for pitch

HD
00:43:733 (43733|2) - move col 4 same 00:42:933 (42933|3,42933|2,43333|3,43333|2) - and 00:44:533 (44533|1,44533|0,44933|0,44933|1) - - thanks for advice, repatterned~

Nice all diff pattern ;w;
Good Luck :D nyan~
thanks a lot for mod and star~~ :D

updated~~
Aruel
Hi M4M arrived!! :D

SHD
00:21:133 (21133|0,21133|3) - remove one
00:34:633 - have a sound maybe add?
00:47:383 (47383|2) - move to 1 for balance
00:47:783 (47783|1) - ^4
01:10:933 - add one for pitch
01:11:733 - ^
01:42:533 (102533|1) - move to 3 and 01:42:733 (102733|2) - move to 2 here's no need jack
02:01:733 - Really bad.. I suggest 02:00:133 (120133|3) - finish it 02:01:733 - and rearrange

HD+
00:57:133 - Doesn't need two notes and not good balance. because there's have jack before imo
01:00:733 - ^
01:03:933 - ^
01:23:133 - remove one for pitch
01:26:333 - ^

HD
00:20:933 (20933|0,20933|3) - remove one not good balance
01:10:533 - add one? have a sound
01:16:933 - ^

Nice quality!
I can't catch many. Sorry
I hope It will be help :D
Good Luck!
Topic Starter
paperlens

_FrEsH_ChICkEn_ wrote:

Hi M4M arrived!! :D

SHD
00:21:133 (21133|0,21133|3) - remove one- Done
00:34:633 - have a sound maybe add?- Done
00:47:383 (47383|2) - move to 1 for balance- Done
00:47:783 (47783|1) - ^4- Done
01:10:933 - add one for pitch - no
01:11:733 - ^ - no
01:42:533 (102533|1) - move to 3 and 01:42:733 (102733|2) - move to 2 here's no need jack- Done
02:01:733 - Really bad.. I suggest 02:00:133 (120133|3) - finish it 02:01:733 - and rearrange- Done

HD+
00:57:133 - Doesn't need two notes and not good balance. because there's have jack before imo
01:00:733 - ^
01:03:933 - ^ - thanks I got it, but I think it worth two notes here.. I may remap this part for better hand balance if I have some idea
01:23:133 - remove one for pitch- Done
01:26:333 - ^- Done

HD
00:20:933 (20933|0,20933|3) - remove one not good balance - Done
01:10:533 - add one? have a sound - All those notes here follows the melody not the drum sound
01:16:933 - ^ - All those notes here follows the melody not the drum sound

Nice quality!
I can't catch many. Sorry
I hope It will be help :D
Good Luck!
thanks!~~~for helpful mod :D
Bruce
HD+其实改成MX比较好
Topic Starter
paperlens

Simple_Star wrote:

HD+其实改成MX比较好
小星姐早 :D
(其实我主要是强迫症 在SHD前面不是HD就很难受)
好的已改w
Ginshu
Hi~

Mod here desu

My Column:
1|2|3|4



NM
• 00:52:033 (52033|2) - move to 2
• 00:52:133 (52133|3) - move to 3

• 00:58:933 (58933|3) - move to 00:59:133 -
• 01:05:333 (65333|3) - move to 01:05:533 -

HD
• 01:31:733 (91733|2) - missing hitsound ?
• 01:37:933 (97933|0) - ^

SHD
• 00:59:133 (59133|0) - move to 2
• 00:59:233 (59233|0) - move to 2
• 01:05:033 (65033|3) - move to 2

awesome map !!
good luck :)
Topic Starter
paperlens

LNP- wrote:

Hi~

Mod here desu

My Column:
1|2|3|4



NM
• 00:52:033 (52033|2) - move to 2 - Done, nice~
• 00:52:133 (52133|3) - move to 3 - Done, nice~

• 00:58:933 (58933|3) - move to 00:59:133 - I mainly follow the melody here.
• 01:05:333 (65333|3) - move to 01:05:533 -- I mainly follow the melody here.

HD
• 01:31:733 (91733|2) - missing hitsound ? - fixed, thanks a lot for pointing out!~
• 01:37:933 (97933|0) - ^ - deleted this note

SHD
• 00:59:133 (59133|0) - move to 2
• 00:59:233 (59233|0) - move to 2
• 01:05:033 (65033|3) - move to 2 - I think those jacks following pitch is good for SHD

awesome map !!
good luck :)
thanks ~~! :D

updated~~
Kruzon


Hi, I'll be modding your shd and my my 4k column format is as following: 1 l 2 l 3 l 4

Shd

00:58:033 (58033|0) - move to 4
00:58:233 (58233|3) - move to 1

00:58:333 (58333|1,58333|0) - shift them 2 times to the right
00:58:433 (58433|2) - move to 1

00:54:533 (54533|3,54933|3) - using long notes here means you'll have to resume the ln stream throughout the section, because these LN seem prematurely cut off imo, might as well use single note instead OR you can make these 00:55:333 (55333|0,55733|0) - into LN for pattern consistency

Optional:

you might want to differentiate 00:55:333 (55333|2,55333|0) - and 00:55:733 (55733|2,55733|0) - due to different drum sound, try to use pattern 1 l 3 and 1 l 4 on them, though it will break your pattern at this point- below are my small suggestions:
00:55:733 (55733|2) - move to 4
00:56:333 (56333|2) - move to 2
00:56:433 (56433|1) - move to 3
00:56:533 (56533|2) - move to 4 pattern flow 00:55:933 (55933|2,55933|3,56133|2,56133|1,56333|0,56333|1) -
00:57:033 (57033|3) - move to 2
this is what im trying to make, refer 00:55:533 (55533|3,55533|2,55633|1,55733|3,55733|0) - and 00:56:333 (56333|0,56333|1,56433|2,56533|3,56533|0) -
------------------

00:56:633 (56633|1) - move to 3
00:56:733 (56733|2) - move to 2
00:56:833 (56833|1) - move to 3
00:56:933 (56933|2) - move to 4
00:57:533 (57533|3) - move to 1, refer 00:56:933 (56933|0,56933|3,57133|0,57133|2,57333|0,57333|3,57533|0,57533|2) - and compare with sound

00:58:933 (58933|0,58933|2,58933|1) - dis is awkward and stress to press due to jackhammer up ahead, i suggest 00:58:933 (58933|1) - move to 4 for hand balance
*if you follow my suggestion above, then you may press ctrl + H on 00:58:933 (58933|2,58933|3,58933|0,59033|0,59133|3,59133|0,59233|0,59333|2,59333|3,59433|1,59533|0,59633|3,59833|0) - for pr
then, move 00:59:933 (59933|3) - to 1

01:00:933 (60933|3,61333|3) - same problem as the first one i said, you make this consistent as the first one but it's incomplete. if you want these long notes pattern, then you need to make 01:01:933 (61933|3,62233|3) - long notes as well

01:05:533 (65533|3) - meaningless ln, delete

01:14:433 (74433|1) - perhaps move to 4, and
01:14:533 (74533|3) - move to 2, better flow, and refer 01:13:933 (73933|3,74033|2,74333|2,74433|3) - and listen to the sound, its in sync

01:15:733 (75733|2,75733|3,75733|1,75833|1,75933|0,76033|3,76133|0,76133|2) - hmm.. starting at this timing 01:15:733 (75733|1) - , I suggest: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3134709 this is a lot better and consistent with upcoming pattern you plotted 01:16:533 (76533|2,76533|1,76533|0) -

- mod ends -


good luck with your map :)
Topic Starter
paperlens

Kruzon wrote:



Hi, I'll be modding your shd and my my 4k column format is as following: 1 l 2 l 3 l 4

Shd

00:58:033 (58033|0) - move to 4
00:58:233 (58233|3) - move to 1

00:58:333 (58333|1,58333|0) - shift them 2 times to the right
00:58:433 (58433|2) - move to 1

00:54:533 (54533|3,54933|3) - using long notes here means you'll have to resume the ln stream throughout the section, because these LN seem prematurely cut off imo, might as well use single note instead OR you can make these 00:55:333 (55333|0,55733|0) - into LN for pattern consistency - Now changed into single note, but that's not actually what I want, I'll make LN better if I have good idea after remapped

Optional:

you might want to differentiate 00:55:333 (55333|2,55333|0) - and 00:55:733 (55733|2,55733|0) - due to different drum sound, try to use pattern 1 l 3 and 1 l 4 on them, though it will break your pattern at this point- below are my small suggestions:
00:55:733 (55733|2) - move to 4
00:56:333 (56333|2) - move to 2
00:56:433 (56433|1) - move to 3
00:56:533 (56533|2) - move to 4 pattern flow 00:55:933 (55933|2,55933|3,56133|2,56133|1,56333|0,56333|1) -
00:57:033 (57033|3) - move to 2
this is what im trying to make, refer 00:55:533 (55533|3,55533|2,55633|1,55733|3,55733|0) - and 00:56:333 (56333|0,56333|1,56433|2,56533|3,56533|0) -
------------------

00:56:633 (56633|1) - move to 3
00:56:733 (56733|2) - move to 2
00:56:833 (56833|1) - move to 3
00:56:933 (56933|2) - move to 4
00:57:533 (57533|3) - move to 1, refer 00:56:933 (56933|0,56933|3,57133|0,57133|2,57333|0,57333|3,57533|0,57533|2) - and compare with sound - EXCELLENT

00:58:933 (58933|0,58933|2,58933|1) - dis is awkward and stress to press due to jackhammer up ahead, i suggest 00:58:933 - (58933|1) - move to 4 for hand balance
*if you follow my suggestion above, then you may press ctrl + H on 00:58:933 (58933|2,58933|3,58933|0,59033|0,59133|3,59133|0,59233|0,59333|2,59333|3,59433|1,59533|0,59633|3,59833|0) - for pr
then, move 00:59:933 (59933|3) - to 1

01:00:933 (60933|3,61333|3) - same problem as the first one i said, you make this consistent as the first one but it's incomplete. if you want these long notes pattern, then you need to make 01:01:933 (61933|3,62233|3) - long notes as well

01:05:533 (65533|3) - meaningless ln, delete - done

01:14:433 (74433|1) - perhaps move to 4, and
01:14:533 (74533|3) - move to 2, better flow, and refer 01:13:933 (73933|3,74033|2,74333|2,74433|3) - and listen to the sound, its in sync - that's good, done

01:15:733 (75733|2,75733|3,75733|1,75833|1,75933|0,76033|3,76133|0,76133|2) - hmm.. starting at this timing 01:15:733 (75733|1) - , I suggest: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3134709 this is a lot better and consistent with upcoming pattern you plotted 01:16:533 (76533|2,76533|1,76533|0) - - done

- mod ends -


good luck with your map :)
It's really hard for me to reply every of your mods here, but I should say that it is REALLY helpful
I applied most of your mods here, and now I'm workingdone(kind of remapping) on those part of SHD according to your suggestion.
THANKS A LOT :)



updated~~~
MeowPaz
good luck. :D
~shoot

发现小号!!!report!report!
seaseads
.
Topic Starter
paperlens
↑the post above needs deny kudosu if anyone mentioned this, sorry for inconvenience, :o

MeowPaz wrote:

good luck. :D
~shoot

发现小号!!!report!report!
啊呀呀呀呀呀呀!喵帕斯前辈你出现幻觉了吧!!那个我不认识哇!!
那个应该是来摸图的吧!对就是来摸图的!! 我让他摸了!!

前辈不摸摸我的图嘛-w-
MeowPaz

paperlens wrote:

啊呀呀呀呀呀呀!喵帕斯前辈你出现幻觉了吧!!那个我不认识哇!!
那个应该是来摸图的吧!对就是来摸图的!!

前辈不摸摸我的图嘛-w-
摸不动。。。 :o
Topic Starter
paperlens

MeowPaz wrote:

摸不动。。。 :o
只是射星的话应该也可以给kudosu的吧
MeowPaz

paperlens wrote:

只是射星的话应该也可以给kudosu的吧
不不不。。你最好联系BN过来deny你给我的kudosu,只有对你的图有帮助的你才能给kudosu,不能随便给 :?
Topic Starter
paperlens

MeowPaz wrote:

paperlens wrote:

只是射星的话应该也可以给kudosu的吧
不不不。。你最好联系BN过来deny你给我的kudosu,只有对你的图有帮助的你才能给kudosu,不能随便给 :?
唔……怪我了 :o

:cry: 感觉我今天搞砸了好多事
Bruce

paperlens wrote:

MeowPaz wrote:

只是射星的话应该也可以给kudosu的吧
不不不。。你最好联系BN过来deny你给我的kudosu,只有对你的图有帮助的你才能给kudosu,不能随便给 :?
唔……怪我了 :o

:cry: 感觉我今天搞砸了好多事[/quote]

不要在意 睡一觉明天又是好汉调整一下心态就没事啦
Topic Starter
paperlens

Simple_Star wrote:

不要在意 睡一觉明天又是好汉调整一下心态就没事啦
233不过说起来我就是今天早上刚睡醒干了一堆乱七八糟的事(现实中还有这里)

这里的以上事情:
早上起来先是不知道为什么换了小号登陆,也没有打图也没有干什么……(想了想好像是突然想起自己还有个小号-w-)
然后看到喵帕斯前辈的回复 就开心的回复啦
然后不知哪根弦没搭对就想 让小号随便po几个mod就好啦
然后又不知道在想什么,顺手give kudos了
然后整个人都乱了
这里向所有带来麻烦的前辈们道歉 :o
看到这里的朋友们请就当看戏吧-w-

关于小号那只是个我喜欢的ID- -没有刷过rank(不小心打过两张rank图) 被ban了我也没什么办法啦 该

我好气我自己啊为什么这么蠢!! 给自己射10颗星解气!!!!
Verniy_Chan

Hi Lens-san >.<)/
NM as requested from ❅ Верный Mania Queue ❅

4K = |1|2|3|4|


(Focus : Note Presence , Hand/Row Balance, Variation/Consistency Pattern)

[NM]
01:01:333 (61333|2) move to 4 hand balance
01:03:133 (63133|0) move to 4, variation pattern
01:06:733 (66733|3,66933|2) move to left 1x, it will be nice
01:20:133 (80133|2) move to 1, hand balance
01:20:433 (80433|0,80733|1,81033|2) move to right 1x
01:21:333 (81333|3) move to 2 or 1 if you want to jack it :3
01:35:133 (95133|0,95533|0,95933|0) move to 2, look boring if same row like 01:36:333 (96333|0)
01:39:333 add note fot high pitch sound?

[HD]
00:09:733 (9733|2,9933|1) ctrl + G
00:22:533 add note again, high pitch
00:28:933 add note, cimbal sound? (well, up to you if too hard)
01:13:733 cimbal? i think you not focus cimbal
01:31:733 (91733|2,91833|3) move to left 1x
01:32:033 (92033|2,92133|1) move to right 1x
01:32:333 (92333|0,92533|1) ctrl + G, then 01:32:633 (92633|0) move to 3
02:00:133 (120133|2,121733|1,123333|3,123333|0) it will be nice if this pattern look diffirent from NOV diff

Good Pattern desu~
Good Luck
Topic Starter
paperlens

Verniy_Chan wrote:


Hi Lens-san >.<)/
NM as requested from ❅ Верный Mania Queue ❅

4K = |1|2|3|4|


(Focus : Note Presence , Hand/Row Balance, Variation/Consistency Pattern)

[NM]
01:01:333 (61333|2) move to 4 hand balance - I moved the previous note for hand balance, for more following the pitch here,
01:03:133 (63133|0) move to 4, variation pattern - nope, I mostly want to follow the pitch here~
01:06:733 (66733|3,66933|2) move to left 1x, it will be nice- nope, I mostly want to follow the pitch here~

01:20:133 (80133|2) move to 1, hand balance
01:20:433 (80433|0,80733|1,81033|2) move to right 1x
01:21:333 (81333|3) move to 2 or 1 if you want to jack it :3 - repatterned here~~

01:35:133 (95133|0,95533|0,95933|0) move to 2, look boring if same row like 01:36:333 (96333|0) - Done
01:39:333 add note fot high pitch sound? - but that will make this part so hard

[HD]
00:09:733 (9733|2,9933|1) ctrl + G - Done~
00:22:533 add note again, high pitch - Done~
00:28:933 add note, cimbal sound? (well, up to you if too hard) - yes it is too hard here XD
01:13:733 cimbal? i think you not focus cimbal - yes, you can see I only follow the melody here.
01:31:733 (91733|2,91833|3) move to left 1x
01:32:033 (92033|2,92133|1) move to right 1x
01:32:333 (92333|0,92533|1) ctrl + G, then 01:32:633 (92633|0) move to 3 - All Done~~
02:00:133 (120133|2,121733|1,123333|3,123333|0) it will be nice if this pattern look diffirent from NOV diff - Done~

Good Pattern desu~
Good Luck
thank you for mod ~~ :D

updated~
Gravey-
[Normal MOD]
Hi MOD here as requested in my Queue!~


|1|2|3|4|
[NM]
OD 8

00:11:133 (11133|1) - Move to |4| for pattern consistency

00:35:933 (35933|0,36133|2) - Move to the right by 1 column. To give more hand comfortableness and more pattern excitement.

00:47:333 (47333|3) - Move to |3| for pattern consistency and based on the song's rhythm/pitch (Similar rhythm)

01:57:733 (117733|3) - Move to |3| ^

[HD]

Wiiiiiiip!
Sleepingmania
貴安,新手來了,多指教
一點都不詳細的MOD
[NM]
01:52:133 (112133|1,112133|0) 單鍵連打的部分突然跑出雙鍵感覺有點突兀
[MX]
01:32:533 - 01:32:933 這段要不直接改成連打?
[SHD]
01:32:533 - 01:32:933 同上
這圖我基本上找不到錯誤啊,抱歉
Topic Starter
paperlens

Sleepingmania wrote:

貴安,新手來了,多指教 - 贵安-w-
一點都不詳細的MOD
[NM]
01:52:133 (112133|1,112133|0) 單鍵連打的部分突然跑出雙鍵感覺有點突兀 - 不过这个双键确实音很重啊……而且或许一直单键连打的话也有一点无聊,不过这里我会再去问别人的w
[MX]
01:32:533 - 01:32:933 這段要不直接改成連打? - 没有改成连打,这里可以参照一下hitsound,不过改了一下这附近的小错误,谢谢提醒~~
[SHD]
01:32:533 - 01:32:933 同上 - 同上
這圖我基本上找不到錯誤啊,抱歉
谢谢摸图~~ :D
updated~~
Topic Starter
paperlens

[GraveChaos] wrote:

[Normal MOD]
Hi MOD here as requested in my Queue!~


|1|2|3|4|
[NM]
OD 8 - maybe you have further OD&HP modding in HD?

00:11:133 (11133|1) - Move to |4| for pattern consistency - Done another way~

00:35:933 (35933|0,36133|2) - Move to the right by 1 column. To give more hand comfortableness and more pattern excitement. - no because I mainly follow the pitch here

00:47:333 (47333|3) - Move to |3| for pattern consistency and based on the song's rhythm/pitch (Similar rhythm) - no

01:57:733 (117733|3) - Move to |3| ^
thanks for mod and star :D
Fubukicat


Hi there nyan~ mod request from
hope it will help :3
I'm really sorry for the delay, alot of things happened , mood goes down , people busy and alot of thingy ,
I'm not that good at 4K so i'll try ^^' , and give a Star , hope it's enough for you to forgive me XD gomen gomen ^^' < lol
munya!
Collumn 4K = 1/2/3/4
[NM]
00:48:133 (48133|1) - add note to 2 ( cymbal sound)
00:59:133 (59133|0) - (optional) add note to 1
01:05:533 (65533|0) - ^ add note
01:13:133 (73133|1) - I have the feel that this would be better in 3 in term of number of press and confort (optional so)
01:20:133 (80133|3) - from here pretty good stuff :D nice
[HD]
01:38:133 (98133|0) - (optional) you could add one note here
01:38:533 (98533|2) - ^ same
diff is op owo
[MX]
01:32:033 (92033|3) - (optional) move to 3 (pitch)
01:38:133 (98133|3) - same as HD you cold add a note here
^ 01:38:533 (98533|2) - same
[SHD]
O P !

Good Luck and have a Nice day sorry again for delay
also, this map is ET owo
Topic Starter
paperlens

Eternalie wrote:



Hi there nyan~ mod request from Hi~~
hope it will help :3
I'm really sorry for the delay, alot of things happened , mood goes down , people busy and alot of thingy , no matter -w-
I'm not that good at 4K so i'll try ^^' , and give a Star , hope it's enough for you to forgive me XD gomen gomen ^^' < lol
munya!
Collumn 4K = 1/2/3/4
[NM]
00:48:133 (48133|1) - add note to 2 ( cymbal sound) - Done
00:59:133 (59133|0) - (optional) add note to 1 - nice idea, I'll try it -w-
01:05:533 (65533|0) - ^ add note - ^
01:13:133 (73133|1) - I have the feel that this would be better in 3 in term of number of press and confort (optional so) - repatterned in another way, thanks~
01:20:133 (80133|3) - from here pretty good stuff :D nice - thanks~~~
[HD]
01:38:133 (98133|0) - (optional) you could add one note here - I wanted to give player some time to relax here~, but I accepeted it in MX
01:38:533 (98533|2) - ^ same
diff is op owo
[MX]
01:32:033 (92033|3) - (optional) move to 3 (pitch) - no cause I think it's more similar to the previous pitch, and same as SHD
01:38:133 (98133|3) - same as HD you cold add a note here Done
^ 01:38:533 (98533|2) - same
[SHD]
O P ! thanks~

Good Luck and have a Nice day sorry again for delay
also, this map is ET owo
thanks for your helpful mod and your star :D thanks a lot~!
updated~
RuberusuScarlet
ruberusu's BN check


metadate check no kudos

source : http://o2jam.wikia.com/wiki/Identity_part_III

Artist : SHK :arrow: SHK.o2SE +
Title : ok
source : ok
tag : delete "o2jam"
hitsound : !
bg : ok
mp3 : ok


[hitsound]

5ms delay …
normal-hitnormal9, 11, 14, 15, 94, 96, 104, 105, 113, 114, 122, 123, 130, 131, 133, 134, 140, 141, 143, 144, 150, 151, 153, 154, 160,
161, 163, 164, 240, 242, 246, 249, 250, 253, 257, 259, 261, 262, 263, 264, 265, 267, 269, 270, 273, 274, 275, 276, 277, 278, 279, 281,
282, 284, 285, 287, 289, 290, 291, 292, 294, 295, 297, 299, 301,302, 309, 310, 311,313, 322, 323, 328, 329, 330, 331,332, 333, 335,
336, 337, 338, 339, 340, 346, 348, 350, 351, 352, 353, 362, 363, 365, 368, 369, 370, 371, 372, 373, 375, 377, 378, 379, 380, 386, 387,
388, 389, 391, 392, 393, 394, 395, 396, 397, 398, 399, 400, 401, 403, 404, 405, 406, 407, 408, 409, 410, 411, 412, 413, 414, 415, 416,
417, 418, 419, 420, 421, 422, 423, 425, 426, 428, 430, 431, 432, 436, 437, 438, 439, 440, 441, 443, 444, 445, 446, 447, 448, 450, 451,
452, 453, 454, 455, 456, 457, 462, 463, 464, 465, 466, 467, 469, 470, 471, 472, 473, 474, 476, 477, 478, 479, 480, 481, 483, 484, 485,
486, 488, 489, 490, 494, 495, 496, 499, 500, 502, 503, 507, 508, 509, 511, 515, 516, 517, 518, 522, 523, 524, 525, 526, 527, 531, 533,
534, 535, 537, 538, 544, 545, 547, 548, 551, 552, 553, 554, 555, 557, 558, 561, 562, 564, 565, 567, 568, 574, 577, 580, 583, 586, 589,
592, 595, 609, 610, 613

fixed hitsound :arrow: Here!

and use normal-hitnormal.wav please

Ranking Criteria wrote:

Audio
Hitsounds from notes and sliders must be audible. These provide feedback for the player, and having them silent in a rhythm game doesn't make much sense. If you don't like the default sounds, then find replacements rather than silencing notes. You can use hitsounds from the Custom Hitsound Library or easily find others online. Lowering the volume of a few notes to provide a dampened effect is usually fine, but complete silence is always unacceptable. The end of a spinner (or even the entire spinner) the sliding sound of a slider, and the end of a slider can be silent, but only do it if it makes sense. Finally, you cannot silence both slider ticks and slider slides together.
Topic Starter
paperlens

RuberusuScarlet wrote:

ruberusu's BN check


metadate check no kudos

source : http://o2jam.wikia.com/wiki/Identity_part_III

Artist : SHK :arrow: SHK.o2SE + - Done, but I wondered about this: here and here
Title : ok
source : ok
tag : delete "o2jam" - Done
hitsound : !
bg : ok
mp3 : ok


[hitsound]

5ms delay …
normal-hitnormal9, 11, 14, 15, 94, 96, 104, 105, 113, 114, 122, 123, 130, 131, 133, 134, 140, 141, 143, 144, 150, 151, 153, 154, 160,
161, 163, 164, 240, 242, 246, 249, 250, 253, 257, 259, 261, 262, 263, 264, 265, 267, 269, 270, 273, 274, 275, 276, 277, 278, 279, 281,
282, 284, 285, 287, 289, 290, 291, 292, 294, 295, 297, 299, 301,302, 309, 310, 311,313, 322, 323, 328, 329, 330, 331,332, 333, 335,
336, 337, 338, 339, 340, 346, 348, 350, 351, 352, 353, 362, 363, 365, 368, 369, 370, 371, 372, 373, 375, 377, 378, 379, 380, 386, 387,
388, 389, 391, 392, 393, 394, 395, 396, 397, 398, 399, 400, 401, 403, 404, 405, 406, 407, 408, 409, 410, 411, 412, 413, 414, 415, 416,
417, 418, 419, 420, 421, 422, 423, 425, 426, 428, 430, 431, 432, 436, 437, 438, 439, 440, 441, 443, 444, 445, 446, 447, 448, 450, 451,
452, 453, 454, 455, 456, 457, 462, 463, 464, 465, 466, 467, 469, 470, 471, 472, 473, 474, 476, 477, 478, 479, 480, 481, 483, 484, 485,
486, 488, 489, 490, 494, 495, 496, 499, 500, 502, 503, 507, 508, 509, 511, 515, 516, 517, 518, 522, 523, 524, 525, 526, 527, 531, 533,
534, 535, 537, 538, 544, 545, 547, 548, 551, 552, 553, 554, 555, 557, 558, 561, 562, 564, 565, 567, 568, 574, 577, 580, 583, 586, 589,
592, 595, 609, 610, 613

fixed hitsound :arrow: Here!

and use normal-hitnormal.wav please

All fixed and thank you so much for this ! Sorry I just didn't know what to do with the hitsounds...

Ranking Criteria wrote:

Audio
Hitsounds from notes and sliders must be audible. These provide feedback for the player, and having them silent in a rhythm game doesn't make much sense. If you don't like the default sounds, then find replacements rather than silencing notes. You can use hitsounds from the Custom Hitsound Library or easily find others online. Lowering the volume of a few notes to provide a dampened effect is usually fine, but complete silence is always unacceptable. The end of a spinner (or even the entire spinner) the sliding sound of a slider, and the end of a slider can be silent, but only do it if it makes sense. Finally, you cannot silence both slider ticks and slider slides together.
updated~~
RuberusuScarlet

paperlens wrote:

Artist : SHK :arrow: SHK.o2SE + - Done, but I wondered about this: here and here
sorry, it's my mistake
Artist : SHK
tag add : Shin Hyun Keun
Topic Starter
paperlens

RuberusuScarlet wrote:

sorry, it's my mistake
Artist : SHK
tag add : Shin Hyun Keun
Done, and updated~~
Frim4503

col:1,2,3,4,5,6,7

General
fix hs volume.
is you ask why ? it's cuz for what i know 1 note= 1 hs. for example in NM dif : 00:22:933 (22933|0) - this note is using 40% vol. and 00:22:533 (22533|2,22533|1) - this 2 notes is using 40% (each note) too. it's mean the first single note is 40% then the second 2 notes is 40% + 40%=80%.
for what i know it's supposed this 00:22:533 (22533|1,22533|2) - should use 20% each note. so, 2 notes have same vol. (20% +20% = 40%) or you can make like this 00:16:533 (16533|2,16533|3,16933|2,16933|3) - in dif HD (1 note using hs and another note is not using)

NM
i will just make some suggestion
00:35:333 - http://puu.sh/i1Y1y/56a4fbebbe.png i think t's more fi the song that way
00:36:933 - http://puu.sh/i1Y8g/79d5635f6c.png
00:38:533 - http://puu.sh/i1YaH/9915b71867.png
00:38:533 - http://puu.sh/i1Yc2/1176fc67e6.png
^ just suggestion you can take it or maybe you have other ideas :)

01:02:733 (62733|0) - move to 2. for hand balance
01:14:933 (74933|0) - ^ 2 same reason. follow prev. pattern 01:14:133 (74133|0,74533|3) -
01:38:733 (98733|0) - ^ 2
HD
00:34:133 - http://puu.sh/i1YIH/fca726f37f.png
01:06:133 - http://puu.sh/i1YNC/586bd8f293.png
01:12:933 - http://puu.sh/i1YRm/5eacad34dd.png
01:38:933 - http://puu.sh/i1YUR/637d0e48c3.png
01:44:933 (104933|3) - move to 3. foloowing the next pattern 01:45:433 (105433|1,105533|2,105633|3) -

MX
00:15:933 - http://puu.sh/i1Z60/d42945efca.png
00:17:433 - http://puu.sh/i1Z8c/9579e5e2ae.png (sorry i forgot what pattern that i changes :o )
00:19:333 - 00:20:533 - ^same pattern
^ i feel boring to see that kind of pattern

01:38:733 (98733|0,98733|1) - swap col. avoiding using same col 01:39:533 (99533|1) -

SHD
nothing i can say here. it's already become hard :)
Topic Starter
paperlens

Frim4503 wrote:


col:1,2,3,4,5,6,7

General
fix hs volume.
is you ask why ? it's cuz for what i know 1 note= 1 hs. for example in NM dif : 00:22:933 (22933|0) - this note is using 40% vol. and 00:22:533 (22533|2,22533|1) - this 2 notes is using 40% (each note) too. it's mean the first single note is 40% then the second 2 notes is 40% + 40%=80%.
for what i know it's supposed this 00:22:533 (22533|1,22533|2) - should use 20% each note. so, 2 notes have same vol. (20% +20% = 40%) or you can make like this 00:16:533 (16533|2,16533|3,16933|2,16933|3) - in dif HD (1 note using hs and another note is not using)
Actually I think it's good since these have different hitsounds. Maybe there's no need to reduce the drum sound when a symbol rings together. Anyway I will ask others about this, thanks for mentioning this :)

NM
i will just make some suggestion
00:35:333 - http://puu.sh/i1Y1y/56a4fbebbe.png i think t's more fi the song that way
00:36:933 - http://puu.sh/i1Y8g/79d5635f6c.png
00:38:533 - http://puu.sh/i1YaH/9915b71867.png
00:38:533 - http://puu.sh/i1Yc2/1176fc67e6.png
^ just suggestion you can take it or maybe you have other ideas :)
good ideas but I wanted to follow the pitch here, and I don't want jacks here in NM diff

01:02:733 (62733|0) - move to 2. for hand balance - nope because 01:02:733 (62733|0,63133|0) - these two have same sound.
01:14:933 (74933|0) - ^ 2 same reason. follow prev. pattern 01:14:133 (74133|0,74533|3) - - no, I have my own idea of drum sounds here and it does not feel good when it moved to 2. whats more, I put it on 1 just to follow prev. pattern.
01:38:733 (98733|0) - ^ 2 - nope because 01:38:733 (98733|0,99133|0) - these two have same sound.
HD
00:34:133 - http://puu.sh/i1YIH/fca726f37f.png
01:06:133 - http://puu.sh/i1YNC/586bd8f293.png
01:12:933 - http://puu.sh/i1YRm/5eacad34dd.png
01:38:933 - http://puu.sh/i1YUR/637d0e48c3.png
01:44:933 (104933|3) - move to 3. foloowing the next pattern 01:45:433 (105433|1,105533|2,105633|3) -
All brilliant ideas here! All accepted, some repatterned myself, thanks

MX
00:15:933 - http://puu.sh/i1Z60/d42945efca.png
00:17:433 - http://puu.sh/i1Z8c/9579e5e2ae.png (sorry i forgot what pattern that i changes :o )
00:19:333 - 00:20:533 - ^same pattern
^ i feel boring to see that kind of pattern
- your pattern is good, but I wanted to follow this sound: 00:16:133 (16133|3,16133|2,16533|2,16533|3,16933|3,16933|2,17333|3,17333|2) - 00:17:733 (17733|2,17733|0,18133|2,18133|0,18533|0,18533|2,18933|2,18933|0) - 00:19:333 (19333|0,19333|1,19733|1,19733|0,20133|1,20133|0,20533|1,20533|0) - so sorry to reject this


01:38:733 (98733|0,98733|1) - swap col. avoiding using same col 01:39:533 (99533|1) - - Done

SHD
nothing i can say here. it's already become hard :)
thanks for mod, very helpful~ :D

updated~~
RuberusuScarlet
ruberusu's BN check


|1|2|3|4|


  • [SHD]
    00:21:133 - add 1 and normal-hitnormal14

    00:58:933 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3213784
    01:04:733 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3213786

    01:07:233 (67233|1,67233|3) -
    :arrow:

    01:21:433 - (SV)move to 01:21:466 - (1/3)
    01:24:633 - (SV)^01:24:666 -
    01:27:833 - (SV)^01:27:866 -
    01:31:033 - (SV)^01:31:066 -

    [MX]
    00:33:833 (33833|2) - move to 00:33:933 - line4
    00:33:833 - add 3 and hitnormal14

    00:42:633 (42633|0,43033|2) - delete
    00:44:233 (44233|0,44633|2) - ^
    00:45:833 (45833|0,46233|2) - ^
    00:47:433 (47433|1,47833|2) - ^
    00:44:233 (44233|3,44633|1) - move to 42 :arrow: 13

    01:07:233 (67233|1) - delete

    01:21:433 - (SV)move to 01:21:466 - (1/3)
    01:24:633 - (SV)^01:24:666 -
    01:27:833 - (SV)^01:27:866 -
    01:31:033 - (SV)^01:31:066 -

    01:46:933 (106933|2,106933|1,107033|2) - ctrl+h

    01:53:033 (113033|0,113433|2) - delete
    01:54:633 (114633|0,115033|2) - ^
    01:56:233 (116233|0,116633|2) - ^
    01:57:833 (117833|1,118233|2) - ^
    01:54:633 (114633|3,115033|1) - move to 42 :arrow: 13

    [HD]
    00:36:633 - add 2 and hitnormal94
    00:38:233 - ^2 and hitnormal104
    00:39:833 - ^2 and hitnormal113
    00:41:433 - ^1 and hitnormal122
    00:42:633 - ^note and hitnormal130
    00:43:033 - ^note and hitnormal133
    00:44:233 - ^note and hitnormal140
    00:44:633 - ^note and hitnormal143
    00:45:833 - ^note and hitnormal150
    00:46:233 - ^note and hitnormal153
    00:47:433 - ^note and hitnormal160
    00:47:833 - ^note and hitnormal163
    01:47:033 - ^2 and hitnormal499
    01:48:633 - ^2 and hitnormal518
    01:50:233 - ^2 and hitnormal517
    01:51:833 - ^1 and hitnormal526
    01:53:033 - ^note and hitnormal534
    01:53:433 - ^note and hitnormal537
    01:54:633 - ^note and hitnormal544
    01:55:033 - ^note and hitnormal547
    01:56:233 - ^note and hitnormal554
    01:56:633 - ^note and hitnormal557
    01:57:833 - ^note and hitnormal564
    01:58:233 - ^note and hitnormal567


    [NM]
    00:51:333 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3213880
    01:31:333 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3213890

    01:39:133 (99133|0) - add hitnormal583
Topic Starter
paperlens

RuberusuScarlet wrote:

ruberusu's BN check


|1|2|3|4|


  • [SHD]
    00:21:133 - add 1 and normal-hitnormal14

    00:58:933 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3213784
    01:04:733 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3213786

    01:07:233 (67233|1,67233|3) -
    :arrow:

    01:21:433 - (SV)move to 01:21:466 - (1/3)
    01:24:633 - (SV)^01:24:666 -
    01:27:833 - (SV)^01:27:866 -
    01:31:033 - (SV)^01:31:066 -

    [MX]
    00:33:833 (33833|2) - move to 00:33:933 - line4
    00:33:833 - add 3 and hitnormal14

    00:42:633 (42633|0,43033|2) - delete
    00:44:233 (44233|0,44633|2) - ^
    00:45:833 (45833|0,46233|2) - ^
    00:47:433 (47433|1,47833|2) - ^
    00:44:233 (44233|3,44633|1) - move to 42 :arrow: 13

    01:07:233 (67233|1) - delete

    01:21:433 - (SV)move to 01:21:466 - (1/3)
    01:24:633 - (SV)^01:24:666 -
    01:27:833 - (SV)^01:27:866 -
    01:31:033 - (SV)^01:31:066 -

    01:46:933 (106933|2,106933|1,107033|2) - ctrl+h

    01:53:033 (113033|0,113433|2) - delete
    01:54:633 (114633|0,115033|2) - ^
    01:56:233 (116233|0,116633|2) - ^
    01:57:833 (117833|1,118233|2) - ^
    01:54:633 (114633|3,115033|1) - move to 42 :arrow: 13

    [HD]
    00:36:633 - add 2 and hitnormal94
    00:38:233 - ^2 and hitnormal104
    00:39:833 - ^2 and hitnormal113
    00:41:433 - ^1 and hitnormal122
    00:42:633 - ^note and hitnormal130
    00:43:033 - ^note and hitnormal133
    00:44:233 - ^note and hitnormal140
    00:44:633 - ^note and hitnormal143
    00:45:833 - ^note and hitnormal150
    00:46:233 - ^note and hitnormal153
    00:47:433 - ^note and hitnormal160
    00:47:833 - ^note and hitnormal163
    01:47:033 - ^2 and hitnormal499
    01:48:633 - ^2 and hitnormal518 - added hitnormal508
    01:50:233 - ^2 and hitnormal517
    01:51:833 - ^1 and hitnormal526
    01:53:033 - ^note and hitnormal534
    01:53:433 - ^note and hitnormal537
    01:54:633 - ^note and hitnormal544
    01:55:033 - ^note and hitnormal547
    01:56:233 - ^note and hitnormal554
    01:56:633 - ^note and hitnormal557
    01:57:833 - ^note and hitnormal564
    01:58:233 - ^note and hitnormal567


    [NM]
    00:51:333 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3213880
    01:31:333 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3213890

    01:39:133 (99133|0) - add hitnormal583

thank you reberusu!!~~ :)
All accepted and UPDATED.
RuberusuScarlet
ruberusu's BN check


last check no kudos

[NM]
02:01:733 (121733|1) - delete hitsound

01:32:133 (92133|1,92833|2) - delete
  • i think 01:32:033 (92033|3,92133|1) - and 01:32:833 (92833|2,92933|1) - pattern is difficult for beginners
Topic Starter
paperlens

RuberusuScarlet wrote:

ruberusu's BN check


last check no kudos

[NM]
02:01:733 (121733|1) - delete hitsound

01:32:133 (92133|1,92833|2) - delete
  • i think 01:32:033 (92033|3,92133|1) - and 01:32:833 (92833|2,92933|1) - pattern is difficult for beginners
thanks rube -w- :D
All Done and UPDATED.
RuberusuScarlet
ok, looks fine ~



Edit : I had forgotten to check HD and OD

NM : HD7 OD7

Please update the HD and OD at the time of the next BN check
Topic Starter
paperlens

RuberusuScarlet wrote:

ok, looks fine ~



Edit : I had forgotten to check HD and OD

NM : HD7 OD7

Please update the HD and OD at the time of the next BN check

thanks rube!~~ :D :D

I'll update it at the time of the next BN check~

Edit: self-reminder:
1. HP/OD
2. MX - 01:47:033 (107033|1) -
deathcrazy45
Waiting For the SHD Diff.Oh Ples :D
Topic Starter
paperlens

deathcrazy45 wrote:

Waiting For the SHD Diff.Oh Ples :D
happy to hear that :D
but i'm a bit busy these days... for exam :o
I'll continue this after my exam
Mwallx
一不小心就要rank系列.....
Topic Starter
paperlens

Mwalls Ho wrote:

一不小心就要rank系列.....
……也不能说是一不小心吧 不过能找到BN还是全凭运气
hokin1995
恭喜泡圖 :)
Topic Starter
paperlens

hokin1995 wrote:

恭喜泡圖 :)
谢谢-w-(好晚不睡)
DanSparce
can i mark this for mod?
Topic Starter
paperlens

DanSparce wrote:

can i mark this for mod?
but it's already bubbled.... maybe I can fix it together on the next BN check
anyway mod is welcomed :D I'm just not sure I'll be able to fix it
DanSparce

paperlens wrote:

DanSparce wrote:

can i mark this for mod?
but it's already bubbled.... maybe I can fix it together on the next BN check
anyway mod is welcomed :D I'm just not sure I'll be able to fix it
i see... nvm
i'm looking forward for this to be ranked
Topic Starter
paperlens

DanSparce wrote:

i see... nvm
i'm looking forward for this to be ranked
thank you for support ;) still waiting for the next BN
RuberusuScarlet

paperlens wrote:

DanSparce wrote:

can i mark this for mod?
but it's already bubbled.... maybe I can fix it together on the next BN check
anyway mod is welcomed :D I'm just not sure I'll be able to fix it

osu!wiki How to Get Your Map Ranked wrote:

Step 3: Bubbles
  • Just because your map is bubbled doesn't mean your work is over! Don't ignore any mods by normal users on your bubbled map — although only a BN or QAT can rank your map, anyone can still help improve it, and a better, more thoroughly modded map means an easier job for the BNG who eventually looks at it. Once you have applied a mod on your bubble the BN who originally gave the bubble will almost always be happy to come back and reinstate it. Keep in mind that you'll also have an easier time getting your bubble noticed by BNG members if it is high priority and on the first page of pending - giving your map some kudos stars to push it up in the list should make the wait a little shorter.
If you have updated the map, please call me
Topic Starter
paperlens

osu!wiki How to Get Your Map Ranked wrote:

Step 3: Bubbles
  • Just because your map is bubbled doesn't mean your work is over! Don't ignore any mods by normal users on your bubbled map — although only a BN or QAT can rank your map, anyone can still help improve it, and a better, more thoroughly modded map means an easier job for the BNG who eventually looks at it. Once you have applied a mod on your bubble the BN who originally gave the bubble will almost always be happy to come back and reinstate it. Keep in mind that you'll also have an easier time getting your bubble noticed by BNG members if it is high priority and on the first page of pending - giving your map some kudos stars to push it up in the list should make the wait a little shorter.
If you have updated the map, please call me[/quote]

thanks for reminding :D I wasn't pretty sure about that.
now maybe I know what to do
Sandalphon
这泡的…E icon 跳 H icon肯定不行的
改一下吧
Topic Starter
paperlens

SanadaYukimura wrote:

这泡的…E icon 跳 H icon肯定不行的
改一下吧
那是bug……本来是N icon不是E icon的 你看星数……我今天改一下顺便revive好了
Topic Starter
paperlens
due to some little IRC mods and major issues to fix I gonna self-pop this...
Here's the list of All things I change on this update:
[NM]
major issue: the previous star rating of this diff is '1.5', and the icon changed from 'N' to 'E' automatically several days ago..(I don't know why), so I increase the diff to '1.51' and make the map more playable.
1. added these notes : 01:58:533 (118533|1,120133|0) - , same as 00:48:133 (48133|1,49733|2) - I previous have.
2. the previous pattern here follows the melody but seems not good, I decided to follow the drum sound here.
3. HP7, OD7

[HD]
1. 00:35:333 (35333|0) - moved to column 4 00:35:333 (35333|3) - for better hand balance
2. changed 00:48:133 (48133|0) - hitsound from 'normal-hitnormal8' to 'normal-hitnormal15', same as other diffs.
3. added: 00:49:733 (49733|3) -
4. 01:45:733 (105733|1,106533|1) - moved to column 3, added 01:45:733 (105733|1) - , same as previous pattern
5. 02:00:133 (120133|1) - added this, same as other diffs.
6. HP7.5, OD7.5

[MX]
1. added 01:07:233 (67233|1) -
2. 01:47:033 (107033|1) - moved to column 3

[SHD]
1. 00:59:033 (59033|2) - 01:04:833 (64833|2) - moved to column 3, for better hand balance and pitch relevancy, actually this is also LNP- 's idea, I didn't accept it but now I think it may be good.
2. 01:07:233 (67233|3) - added
3. 02:01:733 (121733|1) - added hitsound 'normal-hitnormal15'
4. 02:01:733 - from here on the 1/8: added hitsound 'normal-hitnormal15' 15% volume.
5. HP8.5, OD8

hope this will make the mapset better..

sorry for inconvenience to Rube :o
Topic Starter
paperlens
IRC with Spy. 感谢Spy哥-w-学到很多
[MX]Done and Updated.
00:41:733 - ~ 00:48:133 - remapped. deleted jacks
00:54:533 - ~ 01:05:733 - remapped. deleted jacks (and LN)
01:52:133 - ~ 01:58:533 - remapped. deleted jacks.
I think it's better for the 3.58-stars MX. (Hope so.)

[SHD]Done and Updated.
00:16:133 - ~ 00:22:133 - rearranged.
01:07:333 - ~ 01:20:133 - deleted some useless notes to make it more comfortable to play.
hope it better-w-

Sorry again to rube for bothering :o
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