Hey ~ Unfortunately I should pop the bubble because in my opinion this map needs more work before pushing it forward especially on higher diffs : your Hard and the lower diffs I changed my mind about higher diffs (both Insane) . There's some rhythms which it doesn't fit so well the song and the objects are too louder ;_; especially in kiais
I'll drop a mod later
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- 00:08:587(3)- I hear the instruments resets so would be better if you add here NC
- 00:08:959(4)- I suggest to replace this note with a 1/1 slider to follow the beat from 00:09:332()- which you ignore it
- 00:10:077(2)- Same as above.Add NC because the instruments resets.Also would be better if you replace this note and the next note with just a 1/1 slider to be more easier for newbie players
- 00:29:456(1)- I think there doesn't work a spinner so maybe delete it and use instead 1/1 with repeat -> 3/1 slider because the singer still sing
- 00:35:419(1)- I prefer to move this slider to 280|101 to the cursor arrive perfectly on that slider
- 00:41:754(2)- I suggest to replace this note with a 1/1 slider to not ignore the beat 00:42:127()-
- 00:42:872(4)- Remove the whistle from sliderbody and I guess you should remove the whistle and finish from slider's tail because it doesn't sound so good in my opinion you can add clap on tail instead and don't forget to add here NC since there's new vocals
- 00:43:804(5)- I recommend to remove the whistle and finish from slider's tail because it sounds too weird to me and there's no cymbal sound
- 00:44:736(1)- Would be better if you will replace the whistle and the finish with just clap to emphasize more better ''yeeeey'' lyric
- 01:13:431(1)- There's no reason to keep the NC switched on because there's no new vocals so remove that NC /w\. You can add NC instead on next note I mean on 01:14:549()- where's new vocals
- 01:17:282(1)- Why you not move the middle gap to 182|235 ? Seems this slider is a curved slider and moving the middle gap to 182|235 you will improve the flow a bit
- 01:38:028(2)- I prefer to move this slider to 482|207 to improve the flow more better
- 01:51:816(3)- Please remove the whistle from sliderbody it doesn't really fit good ;w;
- 02:01:879(1)- Why you not add a clap at this spinner to emphasize the ''yeeey'' lyric ? :3
- 02:21:257(1)- I suggest to replace the whistle with clap to emphasize the cymbal sound from 02:22:562()-
- Where's the custom hitsounds in this diff ? ;w;
- 00:07:826(1,2)- I prefer to replace those notes with a 1/1 slider to be more easier for newbie players
- 00:09:689(1)- I recommend to remove the NC from this slider because here the instruments not resets here.The instruments resets on next note so add the Nc on next note
- 00:17:515(1)- Noticeable spacing issue D: The note should be placed on 358|312 to avoid this ds issue
- 00:20:310(1,2)- Another noticeable spacing issue ;w; Those objects are really close from 00:19:938(5)-.The note should be placed on 184|174 and the slider to 188|178 to avoid this ds issue
Note:There's so many spacing errors which should be fixed ;w;
- 00:40:903(1,2,3)-Seems this flow looks weird to meWould be better if you will rearrange the objects like here https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3049980
- 00:50:139(1)- This spinner could be moved to 00:50:326()- to catch perfectly the ''yoohoo'' lyric and also on 00:50:139()- you can add a note to not left that part empty
- 00:55:543(3,4,5,6)- Honestly I prefer to replace those 4 notes with 2 1/2 sliders to emphasize the vocals and the drums a bit better
- 01:46:972(6)- Here the vocals resets so I suggest to add a NC here it will fit perfectly ;D
- 02:00:202(1)- As I said on 00:50:139(1)-. If you want,move the spinner to 02:00:388()- and then on 02:00:202()-to not left that part empty
- 02:22:748()- I recommend to add a note to emphasize the cymbal sound from the end of the song
I really like this diff o3o
- I suggest to set the CS to 3.5 will fit it much better
- 00:07:841(3,1)- Why you used different spacing here ? D: At (1)- there's really no cymbal or a emphasis of the guitar and there's not a reason to increase the spacing here between those 2 notes while there's no emphasis or cymbal sound so I recommend to use 1.2 DS spacing here like 00:07:469(2,3)-because too there's no cymbal or emphasis of the guitar between (2)- and (3)- . Also I suggest to remove the NC from 00:08:214(1)- because there's same guitar sound and the NC would fit perfectly on 00:08:587(2)- where clearly is the resets of the guitar
- 00:10:264(2)- Here I really hear the little break of the guitar but unfortunately this note doesn't fit it better and it make that break of the guitar too noisy so I prefer to remove the note to emphasize the little break of the guitar much better without noise xD
- 00:24:611(1)- There's the same vocal and guitar on this note and the NC from that slider really doesn't fit it really good so I suggest to remove the NC from this slider and the NC can be placed on 00:24:984(2)- where the resets of the vocal and of the guitar are really audible.Also,beginning from 00:24:611(1)- , the patttern really looks weird to me D: and it can destroy the playability of it ;_; I suggest to rearrange the sliders like here http://puu.sh/hCqA5/bcea20a0eb.jpg to improve the playability during gameplay and also the flow and the curdor movement
- 00:34:860(1,2)- I really suggest to swap the NC because on (1) there's same vocal and guitar sounds and really doesn't fit it really good but (2)- fit really well the NC because there's the resets of the vocal and guitar sound
- 00:38:028(1,2)- Same as 00:34:860(1,2)-
- 00:39:146(6)- I feel here seems a weird flow because (6)- is placed almost on the middle of the previous slider which makes the cursor to be desoriented and the flow will be broken.I recommend to place this note to 435|311 to repair the broken flow and the cursor will be more oriented than before but be careful with DS
- 00:41:382(4)- I hear the resets of the vocal and guitar really well so a NC here would really fit (:
- 00:43:059(2,3)- I think you should move the doublets to 216|79 because they're touching the 00:42:500(8)-'s sliderbody and to me looks really untidy also this is readable during gameplay so moving them,you'll prevent the touch of the (8)-'s sliderbody
- 00:51:257(2,3)- The different spacing between those notes really don't fit because there's no cymbal or emphasis here so I suggest to use 2.0 DS between (2)- and (3)- as you did with (1)- and (2)-
- 01:03:742(5)- To fit much better the guitar, I suggest to snap it to 1/2 because sounds really good for me (:
I changed my mind about this diff looks really good :3
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