M2U - The Queen [CatchTheBeat] · forum

Kurokami

osu! Alumni

Joined February 2010

Kurokami 2015-04-26T01:06:40+00:00

ZiRoX wrote:
Overdose pending + Quick check on other diffs

[Platter]
00:33:672 (4,5) - 1/4 Hyperdash Alert, go check with either Deif or CLSW if this one is acceptable
02:10:392 (1,2) - Get your approval on this from either Deif or CLSW

Why? They have nothing to do with the ranking process anymore. Its up to us, BNs to decide whether that pattern is acceptable or not. Stop bothering Deif or CLSW because of every little thing. If you think its not acceptable, point it out with a valid reason (and with a possible solution), the mapper will decide it by him/herself. Do not rely on QATs, their work is to check maps after the qualification.

Razor Sharp

1,151 posts

Joined October 2013

Razor Sharp 2015-04-27T20:40:24+00:00

ZiRoX wrote:
Overdose pending + Quick check on other diffs
[Overdose]
00:09:432 (1,2,3,4) - I feel these should have the hyperdashes instead of 00:09:912 (1,2,3,4) - , even your hitsounds hint it - Fixed!
00:11:352 (1) - ^Same with 00:11:832 (1,2,3,4) - - Fixed!
00:13:272 (1) - Same~ - Fixed!
00:21:672 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This is calling for hyperdash every 1/2 ;_; Also, the hyperdash to the first slider doesn't fit really well, it's better to make the first hyperdash to a white tick - I made the stream with hypers. But wont change the slider, as i preffer it this way.
00:48:072 (7) - Plays a bit unintuitive considering your previous, stack it on (4) - Fixed!
00:58:392 (1,2,3,4) - This part is calling for a left-right pattern, but since you can't do that without messing upcoming notes, I suggest you to Ctrl+H 00:58:632 (2,3) - - Fixed!
01:57:672 (2,3) - Delete one of these two and place the other on the blue tick, it will follow music better. It's also calling for a jumpier pattern - Wont change, as i focused vocals at this point, wich is mapped at the red/white ticks. Not blue.
I don't agree with some of the jumps that come after 1/4 hyperdash, for example 01:24:432 (7,1) - , 02:18:192 (6,1) - and 02:26:952 (5,6) -. I think reducing them will make them less annoying to play. - Fixed all but the last one, as i want this to be a bit hard to catch.

Thanks for the mod!

Razor's Overdose

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: M2U - The Queen(O2Jam OST).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 100152
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 16
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:The Queen
TitleUnicode:The Queen
Artist:M2U
ArtistUnicode:M2U
Creator:WildOne94
Version:Razor's Overdose
Source:O2JAM U
Tags:RHYTHM ATTACK GATHERING 2013 Limited Album Withered_Lotus Razor_Sharp
BeatmapID:662037
BeatmapSetID:255039

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
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ZiRoX

Elite Mapper

1,046 posts

Joined November 2009

ZiRoX 2015-04-27T23:57:31+00:00

Kurokami wrote:
ZiRoX wrote:
Overdose pending + Quick check on other diffs

[Platter]
00:33:672 (4,5) - 1/4 Hyperdash Alert, go check with either Deif or CLSW if this one is acceptable
02:10:392 (1,2) - Get your approval on this from either Deif or CLSW
Why? They have nothing to do with the ranking process anymore. Its up to us, BNs to decide whether that pattern is acceptable or not. Stop bothering Deif or CLSW because of every little thing. If you think its not acceptable, point it out with a valid reason (and with a possible solution), the mapper will decide it by him/herself. Do not rely on QATs, their work is to check maps after the qualification.

What the fuck with your reaction... just what the fuck. The ranking process is a whole thing up to the BNs AND the QATs, it's just different stages. And actually, you might let that pass, but ultimately it's up to the QATs to see if it's acceptable or not.

I think there's nothing wrong with asking them, it's not like they have a sh*tload of maps to check and I think they would be really open to help. Also, as it is "such a little thing" and not a full mod, it won't take them too much time to check such a small thing.

Kurokami

osu! Alumni

4,024 posts

Joined February 2010

Kurokami 2015-04-28T00:53:28+00:00

ZiRoX wrote:
What the fuck with your reaction... just what the fuck. The ranking process is a whole thing up to the BNs AND the QATs, it's just different stages. And actually, you might let that pass, but ultimately it's up to the QATs to see if it's acceptable or not.

I think there's nothing wrong with asking them, it's not like they have a sh*tload of maps to check and I think they would be really open to help. Also, as it is "such a little thing" and not a full mod, it won't take them too much time to check such a small thing.

Discussed further in-game. I can say we reached an agreement so no need more comment about this matter. If anyone else has something to say to either me or ZiRoX, do it in pm please. Thank you.

Now go on with the purpose of the thread~

WildOne94

581 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

WildOne94 2015-04-28T00:59:47+00:00

ZiRoX wrote:
Overdose pending + Quick check on other diffs

[Cup]
00:15:672 (1) - You may move this to x:384 so it's closer to the center of the screen and thus is easier to catch after the spinner in case the player moves to the left side - Fixed
00:31:032 (1) - I think you can move this a bit left to increase distance and emphasize vocal a bit more. If you think the next distance becomes too large, you can move its tail a bit to the right. - Just a very tiny bit

[Salad]
00:09:912 (8) - I think this one should mimic 00:07:032 (4) - for consistency and because it follows music better, so make it a repeat 1/2 slider~ - Nice idea
00:11:832 (6) - ^ - ^
00:15:552 (2) - I think taking out the repeat and making it end on the red tick (since there's a stronger sound there as compared to 00:16:032 - ) follows the music better - it kind of feels a bit more empty without it. Kept as it is
00:16:632 (5) - Try a 3/4 repeat slider, I think it follows music better - alright but had to add note at 00:17:112 (6) - for drum
00:22:392 (6) - I think it's better if you replace this with 3 circles, one on the red tick so it follows 1/4s more closely. - Alrighty
01:01:752 (5) - Maybe you can end this on the red tick? There's a strong sound there - Fixed
I see it has a quite large ammount of 1/4 patterns, maybe you can reduce a few on parts that are not needed that much (outside Kiai Times), like 00:40:992 (2) - , 00:43:872 (4) - , 01:04:152 (3) - , 01:45:432 (2) - , - changed some

[Platter]
00:18:192 (3) - Removing this note will let you increase distance between 00:17:832 (2,4) - , which may play better for a Platter - Fixed
00:33:672 (4,5) - 1/4 Hyperdash Alert, go check with either Deif or CLSW if this one is acceptable - As Kuro said i will wait for further notification from BN's for this
00:41:352 (6) - Making this a circle will allow you to add a jump (because the 1/4 spacing limits you) - Making it into a circle removes the pattern noise then on the blue tick. So i will keep
00:44:352 (4) - I think this one really limits you, since this place is really good for a jump. Remove the 1/4 and add a nice jump or even a hyperdash - Fixed a bit differently but included the little jump
01:29:232 (2) - Again, removing this will allow you to add a larger jump, which will also fit with your hitsounds - Fixed
01:57:432 (1) - You can make this a 1/2 slider and add a 1/2 slider between blue ticks, it follows music better - Changed into a reverse instead
02:10:392 (1,2) - Get your approval on this from either Deif or CLSW - Same as before

[Rain]
00:06:792 (2) - This hyperdashes play weird, I think it's better to move this to the right - I don't know where you mean to place to make it better O-o so will leave
02:24:552 (2,3,4,5,6) - I have two issues with this pattern: (1) hyperdashes to a blue tick aren't too intuitive to play, and (2) 02:24:432 (2,3) - is hard because it's a large distance after an hyperdash. My suggestion is to move 02:24:552 (2,3,4,5,6) - 1/4 right in the timeline and to put 02:24:552 (2) - a little closer to 3
- Fixed. Yeah i didn't notice that

Thanks again ZiRoX

WildOne94

581 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

WildOne94 2015-04-28T01:01:36+00:00

Oh my guys

Please don't fight ;w;
I will just leave them comments until they get brought up again >W<

EDIT: Nvm i actually read what you said now ;w;

Kurokami

osu! Alumni

4,024 posts

Joined February 2010

Kurokami 2015-04-28T09:57:50+00:00

o/

Before I rebubble this let's try to make those 1/4s a little more smooth.

[Platter]

00:33:912 (5) - Try something like this instead: http://puu.sh/htJEf/1fb1be2b90.png
01:01:272 (3,1) - Can you add a little bit bigger dash here to introduce the kiai? Not HDash, just Dash. The rhythm is not strong enough for a Hdash.
02:10:392 (1,2,3,4) - As I inspected this a little bit, the rhythm is odd. Try this instead: http://puu.sh/htJJn/c77f165d5a.png Also, I think this 1/4 HDash is actually a bit useless. Try to make it just a dash.
02:17:592 (7) - NC here to avoid stacking.
02:23:112 (3,4) - The small distance here is really weird because of the strong drum. I suggest you to make the distance bigger.
02:25:872 (2,3) - You can use a HDash at this point.
02:26:832 (1,2) - Ctrl+G please.
[]

The rhythm seems odd at some place, let me think out some solution, but poke me after you updated it. :3

WildOne94

581 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

WildOne94 2015-04-28T12:41:46+00:00

Kurokami wrote:
o/

Before I rebubble this let's try to make those 1/4s a little more smooth.

[Platter]

00:33:912 (5) - Try something like this instead: http://puu.sh/htJEf/1fb1be2b90.png
01:01:272 (3,1) - Can you add a little bit bigger dash here to introduce the kiai? Not HDash, just Dash. The rhythm is not strong enough for a Hdash. -
02:10:392 (1,2,3,4) - As I inspected this a little bit, the rhythm is odd. Try this instead: http://puu.sh/htJJn/c77f165d5a.png Also, I think this 1/4 HDash is actually a bit useless. Try to make it just a dash.
02:17:592 (7) - NC here to avoid stacking.
02:23:112 (3,4) - The small distance here is really weird because of the strong drum. I suggest you to make the distance bigger.
02:25:872 (2,3) - You can use a HDash at this point.
02:26:832 (1,2) - Ctrl+G please.
[]

The rhythm seems odd at some place, let me think out some solution, but poke me after you updated it. :3

Thanks

Applied all ^_^

Kurokami

osu! Alumni

4,024 posts

Joined February 2010

Kurokami 2015-04-29T09:22:12+00:00

Additional modding.

[Platter]

00:17:592 (1,2) - Swap these on the timeline.
00:22:032 (2) - Remove this. I know what you followed with it, but that sound starts a bit earlier and the "hold" sound later, it better to follow that with a stream (which follows the screech as well).
00:23:832 (2) - End 1/4 earlier? Sounds a bit weird. If you really want that blue tick, just add a circle there.
00:25:032 - Add two circle here to follow the drum in the background.
00:27:192 (1) - Same as 00:23:832 (2).
00:28:152 (4) - Now this can be a slider which ends at 00:28:512 (blue tick).
00:31:032 (1,2) - Just make it a slider to follow the vocal.
00:39:192 (5) - Remove the repeat and add a circle there with a possible jump (or HDash if you want).
01:21:912 (10,1) - (10) and the head of (1) can be merged into a slider imo.
01:22:872 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Weird rhythm a bit, it would be better to follow the vocals a bit more. http://puu.sh/huTGH/4a7a143a1c.png (New combo is at the place of (3).
01:45:432 (8) - Maybe you could move this 1/4 later to the blue tick, the drum is strong but you followed different sounds at this section.

[Rain]

00:01:272 (4,5,6) - The rhythm seems odd, you can try to swap these. Sliders first and the circle after. Not exactly better but meh.
00:05:472 (7,8,1) - Same as before.
00:19:032 (6,1) - I'm not sure what you wanted to follow here but end the first slider on red tick and start (1) on white. That will follow the rhythm better.
00:22:992 (7,1) - Oh, now I see what you tried to do before, but still, if you slow that down you can hear the difference. This sounds fine but that one isn't.

02:02:712 (1,2) - wut Better to add a repeat to that slider instead.

[Overdose]

02:27:672 (1) - End this 1/2 later. As I remember I already pointed this out. q.q

[]
Not much I can do on Cup/Salad for better rhythm. No matter what I try they will sounds bad because of the low note density. Anyway, I took a quick look at the rhythm as I decided to not let them slip through and give opportunity for DQ. And because of the spinnerend on Overdose, I made the right decision. Poke me after the update and I will give your bubble back. :3/

Razor Sharp

1,151 posts

Joined October 2013

Razor Sharp 2015-04-29T14:08:26+00:00

Kurokami wrote:
Additional modding.

[Overdose]

02:27:672 (1) - End this 1/2 later. As I remember I already pointed this out. q.q - Fixed!

[]
Not much I can do on Cup/Salad for better rhythm. No matter what I try they will sounds bad because of the low note density. Anyway, I took a quick look at the rhythm as I decided to not let them slip through and give opportunity for DQ. And because of the spinnerend on Overdose, I made the right decision. Poke me after the update and I will give your bubble back. :3/

Thanks for the mod!

Razor's Overdose

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WildOne94

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WildOne94 2015-04-29T14:57:43+00:00

Kurokami wrote:
Additional modding.

[Platter]

00:17:592 (1,2) - Swap these on the timeline.
00:22:032 (2) - Remove this. I know what you followed with it, but that sound starts a bit earlier and the "hold" sound later, it better to follow that with a stream (which follows the screech as well).
00:23:832 (2) - End 1/4 earlier? Sounds a bit weird. If you really want that blue tick, just add a circle there.
00:25:032 - Add two circle here to follow the drum in the background. - makes things a bit complicated ;w; but it sounds fine like it is to me
00:27:192 (1) - Same as 00:23:832 (2).
00:28:152 (4) - Now this can be a slider which ends at 00:28:512 (blue tick). - Hmm not sure about this either ;w; It ruins the pattern i wanted with the spread out circles. and it might be a bit complicated too to place
00:31:032 (1,2) - Just make it a slider to follow the vocal. - As ZiRoX says i have to many 1/4's and i don't want to add any more ;w;. It should be fine like it is though right o: ?
00:39:192 (5) - Remove the repeat and add a circle there with a possible jump (or HDash if you want).
01:21:912 (10,1) - (10) and the head of (1) can be merged into a slider imo.
01:22:872 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Weird rhythm a bit, it would be better to follow the vocals a bit more. http://puu.sh/huTGH/4a7a143a1c.png (New combo is at the place of (3). - Just hope the placement is okay
01:45:432 (8) - Maybe you could move this 1/4 later to the blue tick, the drum is strong but you followed different sounds at this section. - But there is no sound there O-o ?

[Rain]

00:01:272 (4,5,6) - The rhythm seems odd, you can try to swap these. Sliders first and the circle after. Not exactly better but meh. - placed circle between the sliders instead
00:05:472 (7,8,1) - Same as before. - i kept ;w;
00:19:032 (6,1) - I'm not sure what you wanted to follow here but end the first slider on red tick and start (1) on white. That will follow the rhythm better. - Kept too >w<
00:22:992 (7,1) - Oh, now I see what you tried to do before, but still, if you slow that down you can hear the difference. This sounds fine but that one isn't. - Confused but i think you meant the last suggestion ;w; ? if so it sounded fine in 25% playback rate o:. it followed the moosic >w<
02:02:712 (1,2) - wut Better to add a repeat to that slider instead.

[]
Not much I can do on Cup/Salad for better rhythm. No matter what I try they will sounds bad because of the low note density. Anyway, I took a quick look at the rhythm as I decided to not let them slip through and give opportunity for DQ. And because of the spinnerend on Overdose, I made the right decision. Poke me after the update and I will give your bubble back. :3/

Thanks for check again >W<.
(No answer means fixed btw X3)

Kurokami

osu! Alumni

4,024 posts

Joined February 2010

Kurokami 2015-04-29T22:27:02+00:00

WildOne94 wrote:
Kurokami wrote:
Additional modding.

[Platter]

00:28:152 (4) - Now this can be a slider which ends at 00:28:512 (blue tick). - Hmm not sure about this either ;w; It ruins the pattern i wanted with the spread out circles. and it might be a bit complicated too to place Circle is another option.
00:31:032 (1,2) - Just make it a slider to follow the vocal. - As ZiRoX says i have to many 1/4's and i don't want to add any more ;w;. It should be fine like it is though right o: ? This Platter is still too easy.
01:45:432 (8) - Maybe you could move this 1/4 later to the blue tick, the drum is strong but you followed different sounds at this section. - But there is no sound there O-o ? There is a sound but meh.

[Rain]

00:19:032 (6,1) - I'm not sure what you wanted to follow here but end the first slider on red tick and start (1) on white. That will follow the rhythm better. - Kept too >w<
00:22:992 (7,1) - Oh, now I see what you tried to do before, but still, if you slow that down you can hear the difference. This sounds fine but that one isn't. - Confused but i think you meant the last suggestion ;w; ? if so it sounded fine in 25% playback rate o:. it followed the moosic >w< I mean, the blue ticks sounds fine here since they actually have feedback, but at 00:19:032 (6,1) the sounds are only at white and red ticks and so the rhythm is really bad there.

[]
Thanks for check again >W<.
(No answer means fixed btw X3)

Anyway, here is your bubble but consider these once more at the next mod/update. And if possible do not poke me to re-bub it in the next 24 hours.

/joke

mingmichael

1,720 posts

Joined May 2012

mingmichael 2015-05-02T04:02:53+00:00

Red ~> unrakable issue, must be changed
Blue ~> highly suggested, consider to use it
Black ~> suggestion, just free to choose it

====================

[

Cup]

Notes

• delete these inheriting points since we dont use those >> 01:32:472 - ; 01:33:432 - ; 01:33:552 - ; 01:34:392 - ; 01:34:512 -

• you can try to make a flow pattern at 02:10:392 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - by ctrl+H this 02:11:832 (3,4,5) - . the movements which are given will be left~middle~right~middle~right if you try to ctrl+H 02:11:832 (3,4,5) - and these movements will be much better tho

• move 02:26:352 (3) - to 02:26:472 - to follow the sounds which the song gives. i have tried to hear it with 25% playbackrate and that's right to put it at 02:26:472 - . actually there is a sound at 02:26:352 - but it isn't as strong as 02:26:472 - , so it would be much better to follow the strong one instead the low sound at 02:26:352 -

• if you have moved 02:26:352 (3) - to 02:26:472 - , now you can try to move (3) to x:344, to reduce the 1/4 movement between (3) and (4)

====================

[

Salad]

Notes

• you can try to move 00:15:192 (1) - to a bit right (x:237 would be nice) to reduce the distance between 00:15:192 (1,2) - after the spinner comes before 00:15:192 (1) - , so this lower distance between 00:15:192 (1,2) - will make players easier to focus the notes after the spinner

• there are many inconsistent NCs. here, i try to point them out :

SPOILER

• 00:33:432 - should be a NC because you used all NC every 4/1 or every first beats and the first beat comes out at 00:32:952 - , so 00:33:432 - should be already a NC

• remove the NC 00:34:632 (1) - and put a NC at 00:34:872 - . reason is same like above ^

• 00:42:552 (7) - NC here and remove NC at 00:43:032 - . reason is same like above ^

• 00:44:952 (7) - NC here and remove NC at 00:45:432 -

• 00:46:392 - should be already a NC

• 00:50:232 - ^ and remove NC at 00:51:192 -

• 00:52:152 - NC here

• 00:54:072 (5) - ^ and remove NC at 00:54:552 -

• NC too at 00:56:232 -

• remove NC at 00:57:432 - and add a NC at 00:57:912 -

• a NC at 00:59:832 - and remove NC at 01:00:312 -

• 01:01:752 - should be already a NC

• remove NC at 01:03:192 - and add a NC at 01:03:912 -

• a NC again 01:05:592 - and remove NC at 01:06:312 -

• we can use a NC earlier at 01:07:272 - and remove a NC at 01:08:232 -

• 01:09:432 - NC

• a NC again 01:13:272 - and remove 01:13:752 -

• we can use a NC earlier at 01:14:952 -

• remove NC 01:16:632 - and add NC at 01:17:592 -

• remove NC again 01:26:712 - and add NC at 01:27:432 -

• a NC 01:28:632 - and remove 01:29:112 - and 01:30:072 -

• a NC 01:30:792 -

• a NC 01:42:312 - and remove 01:42:912 (1) -

• a NC 01:43:992 - and remove 01:45:192 (1) -

• a NC 01:45:912 -

• a NC 01:49:752 - and remove 01:50:712 -

• 01:51:672 - NC and remove 01:52:632 - and NC again 01:53:592 - and remove 01:54:312 -

• we can put a NC earlier again at 01:55:392 - and remove NC at 01:55:992 -

• a NC 02:05:112 - and remove

• add NC 02:06:552 -

• NC again 02:10:752 - and remove it 02:12:072 -

• 02:13:032 - a NC

• remove NC 02:15:672 -

• a NC 02:20:472 - and remove 02:21:672 -

• NC 02:22:392 -

• remove NC 02:22:392 (1) - and add NC at 02:26:472 -

• delete these inheriting points since we dont use those >> 01:32:472 - ; 01:33:432 - ; 01:33:552 - ; 01:34:392 - ; 01:34:512 -

• replace this note 01:56:472 - with a 3/4 slider and the slider will end at 01:56:832 - (and also delete 01:56:712 -). that slider will follow the 3/4 vocals perfectly

====================

[

Platter]

Notes

• try to increase the distance at 00:01:752 (5,1,2) - . you can try to move 00:01:992 (1) - to x:56 or x:64

• same again like above 00:03:192 (6,7,8) - . you can try to move 00:03:432 (7) - more left (x:136 would be nice)

• move 00:06:792 (1,2,3) - to x:88, to increase the distance between 00:06:552 (8,1,2,3,4) - . dont need to worry, it doesnt increase the difficulty of this platter too much :3

• you can try to put 00:15:192 (1) - at the left side and you can try to give a HDash between 00:15:192 (1,2) - too! here, you can try to move (1) to x:72

• you can try to move 00:19:512 (6) - to a bit right (x:360 would be nice), to give more movements between 00:19:032 (5,6,1) -

• and again, try to move 00:20:472 (3) - to a bit right too

• move 00:26:712 (6) - to a bit left (x:80 would be nice)

• you can increase the distances at 00:33:912 (5) - during the reverse slider by moving the reverse to a bit left, like this

• this movement is pretty huge between 00:51:672 (3,4) - . i recommend you to use a HDash between them, so that huge gap is fine. you can try to move 00:52:152 (4,5,6) - x:336

• you can try to move 00:59:352 (5,6,7) - to more left, e.g x:200

• we can increase the distances again between 01:06:552 (2,3,4) - . you can try to move 01:07:272 (3) - to x:352

• i have an idea to improve the pattern and the movements at 01:18:552 (7,1,2,3,4) - . here, you can look below for the ideas :
☞ first, try to replace 01:19:032 (1) - with a slider. the head is at the left side and the tail is at the right side, like this and put it at x:96. you will see that it has a HDash between 01:18:552 (7,1) - . IMO this HDash would be nice to use since you just use less HDashes in this platter
☞ delete a note at 01:19:272 - and move 01:19:512 (2) - to x:360, so the movements between 01:19:032 (1,2,3) - will increase

• and again, we can increase the movements between 01:25:032 (2,3,4) - . you can try to move 01:25:272 (3) - to x:424

• delete these inheriting points since we dont use those >> 01:32:472 - ; 01:33:432 - ; 01:33:552 - ; 01:34:392 - ; 01:34:512 -

• and again at 02:03:672 (2,3,4) - . you can move 02:03:912 (3) - to x:88

• 02:07:272 (1,2,3,4) - same again. you can try to move 02:07:752 (3) - to a bit left

• 02:13:272 (6,1,2) - ^. try to move 02:13:512 (1) - to more left (x:32 would be nice)

• you can try to move 02:16:632 (5) - to more left too

• you can try to give more movements again between 02:20:712 (5,6,7,8) - . you can try to move 02:21:192 (7) - to x:432

• and again, try to give more movements again between 02:22:392 (5,1,2) - . you can try to move 02:22:632 (1) - to x:128

====================

[

Rain]

Notes

• NC here 00:32:952 (6) - and remove NC 00:33:312 -

• NC 00:34:872 - and remove NC 00:35:832 -

• NC 00:36:792 - and remove NC 00:37:752 -

• NC 00:38:712 - and remove NC 00:39:432 -

• there are similar problems for the next parts. you can try to fix those by yourself. all the notes and patterns are fine anyway, just NC issues only

• delete these inheriting points since we dont use those >> 01:32:472 - ; 01:33:432 - ; 01:33:552 - ; 01:34:392 - ; 01:34:512 -

====================

[

Overdose]

Notes

• remove this clap 00:43:872 - and add clap at 00:43:992 - . it's clear that a snare sound comes out at 00:43:992 -

• notes and patterns are nice, there isn't any issues that are found

====================

that's all from me~
there are many NC issues at Salad and Rain diff and i have mentioned those in my mods above. Platter seems like a harder Salad too. there are some movements look like a Salad diff, which just give less movements (and less dashes in some patterns), but dont need worry because i have tried to improve those in my mods
call me back after this

Razor Sharp

1,151 posts

Joined October 2013

Razor Sharp 2015-05-02T16:04:11+00:00

mingmichael wrote:
Red ~> unrakable issue, must be changed
Blue ~> highly suggested, consider to use it
Black ~> suggestion, just free to choose it

====================

[ Overdose]

Notes
• remove this clap 00:43:872 - and add clap at 00:43:992 - . it's clear that a snare sound comes out at 00:43:992 - - Fixed!

• notes and patterns are nice, there isn't any issues that are found

====================

that's all from me~
there are many NC issues at Salad and Rain diff and i have mentioned those in my mods above. Platter seems like a harder Salad too. there are some movements look like a Salad diff, which just give less movements (and less dashes in some patterns), but dont need worry because i have tried to improve those in my mods
call me back after this

Thanks for the mod!

Razor's Overdose

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392,184,102552,2,0,P|424:128|400:72,1,110,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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WildOne94

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Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

WildOne94 2015-05-02T16:34:30+00:00

mingmichael wrote:
Red ~> unrakable issue, must be changed
Blue ~> highly suggested, consider to use it
Black ~> suggestion, just free to choose it

- Big mod ahhh! thanks so much for your time :3
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Notes
• delete these inheriting points since we dont use those >> 01:32:472 - ; 01:33:432 - ; 01:33:552 - ; 01:34:392 - ; 01:34:512 - - Fixed

• you can try to make a flow pattern at 02:10:392 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - by ctrl+H this 02:11:832 (3,4,5) - . the movements which are given will be left~middle~right~middle~right if you try to ctrl+H 02:11:832 (3,4,5) - and these movements will be much better tho - I hope I did it correct. I ctrl + h the 3 notes you said but got a little confused so I tinkered around a bit (if not can I have the place coordinates please >w<)

• move 02:26:352 (3) - to 02:26:472 - to follow the sounds which the song gives. i have tried to hear it with 25% playbackrate and that's right to put it at 02:26:472 - . actually there is a sound at 02:26:352 - but it isn't as strong as 02:26:472 - , so it would be much better to follow the strong one instead the low sound at 02:26:352 - Fixed

• if you have moved 02:26:352 (3) - to 02:26:472 - , now you can try to move (3) to x:344, to reduce the 1/4 movement between (3) and (4) - Fixed but won't (4) be unrankable since it's too close on the timeline ?

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Notes
• you can try to move 00:15:192 (1) - to a bit right (x:237 would be nice) to reduce the distance between 00:15:192 (1,2) - after the spinner comes before 00:15:192 (1) - , so this lower distance between 00:15:192 (1,2) - will make players easier to focus the notes after the spinner - Good point Fixed

• there are many inconsistent NCs. here, i try to point them out : - Eep ;w;
SPOILER
• 00:33:432 - should be a NC because you used all NC every 4/1 or every first beats and the first beat comes out at 00:32:952 - , so 00:33:432 - should be already a NC - Fixed

• remove the NC 00:34:632 (1) - and put a NC at 00:34:872 - . reason is same like above ^ - ^

• 00:42:552 (7) - NC here and remove NC at 00:43:032 - . reason is same like above ^ - ^

• 00:44:952 (7) - NC here and remove NC at 00:45:432 - ^

• 00:46:392 - should be already a NC - ^

• 00:50:232 - ^ and remove NC at 00:51:192 - ^

• 00:52:152 - NC here - ^

• 00:54:072 (5) - ^ and remove NC at 00:54:552 - ^

• NC too at 00:56:232 - ^

• remove NC at 00:57:432 - and add a NC at 00:57:912 - ^

• a NC at 00:59:832 - and remove NC at 01:00:312 - ^

• 01:01:752 - should be already a NC - how did I not see this ;w;

• remove NC at 01:03:192 - and add a NC at 01:03:912 - ^

• a NC again 01:05:592 - and remove NC at 01:06:312 - ^

• we can use a NC earlier at 01:07:272 - and remove a NC at 01:08:232 - ^

• 01:09:432 - NC - ^

• a NC again 01:13:272 - and remove 01:13:752 - ^

• we can use a NC earlier at 01:14:952 - ^

• remove NC 01:16:632 - and add NC at 01:17:592 - ^

• remove NC again 01:26:712 - and add NC at 01:27:432 - You mean add then remove

• a NC 01:28:632 - and remove 01:29:112 - and 01:30:072 - ^

• a NC 01:30:792 - ^

• a NC 01:42:312 - and remove 01:42:912 (1) - ^

• a NC 01:43:992 - and remove 01:45:192 (1) - ^

• a NC 01:45:912 - hmm would this be okay because it has a 9 combo before O.o? I put it in anyways

• a NC 01:49:752 - and remove 01:50:712 - Fixed

• 01:51:672 - NC and remove 01:52:632 - and NC again 01:53:592 - and remove 01:54:312 - ^

• we can put a NC earlier again at 01:55:392 - and remove NC at 01:55:992 - ^

• a NC 02:05:112 - and remove - ^

• add NC 02:06:552 - This was already NC o.o

• NC again 02:10:752 - and remove it 02:12:072 - ^

• 02:13:032 - a NC - ^

• remove NC 02:15:672 - ^

• a NC 02:20:472 - and remove 02:21:672 - ^

• NC 02:22:392 - ^

• remove NC 02:22:392 (1) - and add NC at 02:26:472 - Wut ;w;? you just told me to place it there. will leave

• delete these inheriting points since we dont use those >> 01:32:472 - ; 01:33:432 - ; 01:33:552 - ; 01:34:392 - ; 01:34:512 - - Fixed

• replace this note 01:56:472 - with a 3/4 slider and the slider will end at 01:56:832 - (and also delete 01:56:712 -). that slider will follow the 3/4 vocals perfectly - Fixed

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Notes
• try to increase the distance at 00:01:752 (5,1,2) - . you can try to move 00:01:992 (1) - to x:56 or x:64 - 56

• same again like above 00:03:192 (6,7,8) - . you can try to move 00:03:432 (7) - more left (x:136 would be nice) - Fixed

• move 00:06:792 (1,2,3) - to x:88, to increase the distance between 00:06:552 (8,1,2,3,4) - . dont need to worry, it doesnt increase the difficulty of this platter too much :3 - hehe :3

• you can try to put 00:15:192 (1) - at the left side and you can try to give a HDash between 00:15:192 (1,2) - too! here, you can try to move (1) to x:72 - Yeah I think I had it like this once before but someone asked me to change it >w<

• you can try to move 00:19:512 (6) - to a bit right (x:360 would be nice), to give more movements between 00:19:032 (5,6,1) - nice :3 Fixed

• and again, try to move 00:20:472 (3) - to a bit right too - Hope it looks good :3

• move 00:26:712 (6) - to a bit left (x:80 would be nice) - Fixed

• you can increase the distances at 00:33:912 (5) - during the reverse slider by moving the reverse to a bit left, like this - Hue hue fixed

• this movement is pretty huge between 00:51:672 (3,4) - . i recommend you to use a HDash between them, so that huge gap is fine. you can try to move 00:52:152 (4,5,6) - x:336 - Oh gosh yes! nice fix :3

• you can try to move 00:59:352 (5,6,7) - to more left, e.g x:200 - Fixed

• we can increase the distances again between 01:06:552 (2,3,4) - . you can try to move 01:07:272 (3) - to x:352 - Fixed

• i have an idea to improve the pattern and the movements at 01:18:552 (7,1,2,3,4) - . here, you can look below for the ideas :
☞ first, try to replace 01:19:032 (1) - with a slider. the head is at the left side and the tail is at the right side, like this and put it at x:96. you will see that it has a HDash between 01:18:552 (7,1) - . IMO this HDash would be nice to use since you just use less HDashes in this platter - Fixed
☞ delete a note at 01:19:272 - and move 01:19:512 (2) - to x:360, so the movements between 01:19:032 (1,2,3) - will increase - Nice Fixed :3

• and again, we can increase the movements between 01:25:032 (2,3,4) - . you can try to move 01:25:272 (3) - to x:424 - Fixed

• delete these inheriting points since we dont use those >> 01:32:472 - ; 01:33:432 - ; 01:33:552 - ; 01:34:392 - ; 01:34:512 - - Fixed

• and again at 02:03:672 (2,3,4) - . you can move 02:03:912 (3) - to x:88 - Fixed

• 02:07:272 (1,2,3,4) - same again. you can try to move 02:07:752 (3) - to a bit left - Hope it looks good :3

• 02:13:272 (6,1,2) - ^. try to move 02:13:512 (1) - to more left (x:32 would be nice) - Fixed

• you can try to move 02:16:632 (5) - to more left too - Hope it looks good

• you can try to give more movements again between 02:20:712 (5,6,7,8) - . you can try to move 02:21:192 (7) - to x:432 - Fixed

• and again, try to give more movements again between 02:22:392 (5,1,2) - . you can try to move 02:22:632 (1) - to x:128 - Fixed

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Notes
• NC here 00:32:952 (6) - and remove NC 00:33:312 -

• NC 00:34:872 - and remove NC 00:35:832 -

• NC 00:36:792 - and remove NC 00:37:752 -

• NC 00:38:712 - and remove NC 00:39:432 - Applied all NC's

• there are similar problems for the next parts. you can try to fix those by yourself. all the notes and patterns are fine anyway, just NC issues only - Hmmm I don't know cause my placement for NC's might be different to yours and I don't really know if I would do it right ;w;. But I will try if it is too much for you ;w;

• delete these inheriting points since we dont use those >> 01:32:472 - ; 01:33:432 - ; 01:33:552 - ; 01:34:392 - ; 01:34:512 - - Fixed

====================

that's all from me~
there are many NC issues at Salad and Rain diff and i have mentioned those in my mods above. Platter seems like a harder Salad too. there are some movements look like a Salad diff, which just give less movements (and less dashes in some patterns), but dont need worry because i have tried to improve those in my mods
call me back after this

mingmichael thank you so much

mingmichael

1,720 posts

Joined May 2012

mingmichael 2015-05-12T03:33:22+00:00

just did an IRC with wildone94

we just fixed some patterns and reduced some 1/4 patterns in Salad diff. i have checked all the usage of NCs and all of them are fine IMO. spread diffs for every diffs are nice tho, and now platter is already harder with better movements. so then, let me give another try

rebub ~

it doesnt take a long time to get the rank

goodluck for the next~ and here my star too hehee

IRC mod (12th May 2015)

09:21 mingmichael: finallyyy :"D
09:22 WildOne94: HEY :D
09:22 WildOne94: we finally meet in pm XD!
09:22 mingmichael: hahah yeah x"D
09:22 WildOne94: how was your holiday again XD?
09:23 mingmichael: you sent the messages while i was sleeping x"D hue
09:23 mingmichael: that was great huehue \w/
09:23 WildOne94: omg sorry ;w;
09:23 WildOne94: :D
09:23 mingmichael: hahah no probxDD
09:24 mingmichael: i try to test play all diffs once again
09:24 WildOne94: So yeah there was a bit of time confusion but we got there in the end :D!
09:24 WildOne94: Alright :)
09:34 WildOne94: Just think i noticed something on my cup
09:34 WildOne94: 01:23:832 (4) - the ending in 25% ends on the blue tick >w<
09:34 WildOne94: 25% playback rate*
09:36 mingmichael: ohyeah you are right
09:36 mingmichael: you can remove that reverse and give a note at 01:24:672 - 
09:36 mingmichael: ah i have an idea there, to make the flow pattern
09:36 WildOne94: Yeah :D
09:37 mingmichael: you can try to ctrl+H 01:23:832 (4) - 
09:37 WildOne94: Ooo :O
09:37 mingmichael: and move it to x:204
09:37 mingmichael: and put a note at 01:24:672 - on x:192 :D
09:38 mingmichael: like this >> http://puu.sh/hK8Ph/fe64d9e1bf.jpg
09:38 WildOne94: hmm (4) will snap to x:192 ;w;
09:39 WildOne94: 204 is with the snap or smaller grid >w<
09:40 mingmichael: oh that's okay hehee. i tried to put at x:204 to give the balance distances between (2) (3) and (4) http://puu.sh/hK8RW/c1a2cdcfd8.jpg xD but it's okay if those distances are different
09:40 WildOne94: hehe XD
09:40 mingmichael: cup platter and rain are fine xD
09:40 WildOne94: i used the ds for all the notes XD. so yeah i will just snap them all :3
09:40 WildOne94: :D
09:41 mingmichael: hahaha okay xD
09:41 mingmichael: i am going to check razor's diff first xD wait~
09:41 WildOne94: Tyt X3
09:42 WildOne94: want me to quickly update the cup so you can see the changes owo?
09:42 WildOne94: Just incase anything looks weird to you at that section owo
09:44 mingmichael: owh okay xD
09:44 WildOne94: x3
09:44 WildOne94: le done :D
09:45 mingmichael: hue so fastt xDDD
09:45 WildOne94: gotta go fast :D
09:45 mingmichael: okay, it's fine :D
09:45 WildOne94: =D
09:45 WildOne94: i quite like how it made this too XD 01:26:952 (5,6) -
09:45 WildOne94: when played
09:46 WildOne94: it's something new cx
09:46 mingmichael: that's an anti-flow pattern xD
09:47 mingmichael: that's nice~ but becareful for using this for cup diff
09:47 WildOne94: oh ish that bad ;w;?
09:47 WildOne94: Oh okay >w<
09:47 mingmichael: nopenope, that's anti-flow pattern is well-used there xD
09:47 WildOne94: :DD
09:47 mingmichael: do you know why it's called by anti-flow pattern? xD if you dont know, i will explain it hahaha
09:48 WildOne94: just to make it more difficult cause it makes you move left and right more XD?
09:48 WildOne94: and it don't glide >w< ?
09:49 mingmichael: yup it is xD
09:49 WildOne94: XD woo!
09:50 mingmichael: wait for the minutes~ xD
09:50 WildOne94: oki \ovo/
09:57 mingmichael: i just wanna give a more explanation about that anti and flow pattern xD ah hope i explain it clearly ><
09:57 mingmichael: [http://puu.sh/hK9Pg/2e5d02b668.jpg anti]
09:57 mingmichael: [http://puu.sh/hK9R8/bc58f72fc9.jpg flow]
09:58 mingmichael: at these notes :D  01:26:232 (4,5,6) - 
09:58 WildOne94: yeah i thought something like that XD
09:58 mingmichael: if we moved 01:26:952 (5) - 's tail to the left side, it would give a flow pattern hahah xD
09:58 mingmichael: but you put that anti-patterns well there~ so that's no problem~
09:58 mingmichael: cup is totally fine \w/
09:59 WildOne94: Huzzah :D!
10:00 mingmichael: i just a bit worry about salad diff because it has many 1/4 patterns D;
10:00 mingmichael: but all of your 1/4 patterns flow good in this salad xD
10:00 WildOne94: eep >.<
10:00 WildOne94: I hope i can get away with it ;w;
10:01 mingmichael: now i try to give some suggestions to remove some of 1/4s which dont follow any particular sounds ><
10:01 WildOne94: Alright :) thanks
10:01 mingmichael: like this one 00:40:632 (1,2,3) - . i think that you tried to follow the instruments (?)
10:01 mingmichael: we can simplify this one with a 1/2 slider and a single note, without a 1/4 note
10:02 mingmichael: 00:43:752 (4,5,6) - same too
10:02 WildOne94: Ooo okay :O
10:02 mingmichael: this same too 00:53:592 (3,4,1) - 
10:02 mingmichael: this too 00:56:232 (1,2,3) - xD
10:03 WildOne94: XD
10:03 mingmichael: ohh try to move this note 01:02:352 - to 01:02:592 - 
10:03 mingmichael: to keep the consistency 1/4 patterns like 01:10:152 (3,4,5) - 
10:04 WildOne94: btw do you mean like this o: ? http://puu.sh/hKahK/86d6036fb1.jpg
10:04 mingmichael: here you can put 01:02:472 - to x:464 ; 01:02:592 - at x:416 and 01:02:712 - x:376
10:05 mingmichael: nope xD nope the slider, but the notes
10:05 mingmichael: here i mean~ >>http://puu.sh/hKakj/e6d74c662e.jpg
10:05 WildOne94: Ooooh XD
10:05 mingmichael: the usage of 1/4 notes xD like 01:10:152 (3,4,5) - which is used before the 1/1 break
10:06 WildOne94: ooh XD
10:06 mingmichael: hehee xD
10:07 mingmichael: you can replace 01:04:152 (2) - with a single note at 01:04:152 - 
10:07 mingmichael: dont forget to add the hitsounds after replace it xD
10:08 WildOne94: Oooh i know what i did wrong earlier! i went baka cause i saw the first thing you said then i somehow switched down to the next sentence and saw the 1/2 comment XD
10:08 WildOne94: if that made sense XD
10:08 mingmichael: hueee xD hahahahahah
10:09 WildOne94: XD
10:09 mingmichael: so have you done to fix it? xD hahah
10:09 WildOne94: yes XD
10:10 mingmichael: wokay xDD
10:10 mingmichael: aaahh
10:10 mingmichael: 01:20:352 - 
10:10 WildOne94: btw about this one O.o if it's a 1/2 it sounds quite dull without the vocals then
10:10 mingmichael: you can try to move it to 01:20:712 - 
10:10 WildOne94: 00:53:592 (3) -
10:11 WildOne94: might remove 00:53:952 (4) -  though
10:11 mingmichael: without the vocals? the vocals come out at 00:53:592 - and 00:53:832 - clearly
10:11 mingmichael: huee
10:11 mingmichael: i have mentioned to remove 00:53:952 (4) -  before
10:11 mingmichael: xDDDDD
10:11 mingmichael: http://puu.sh/hKaGx/7dd2bec135.jpg xD
10:12 WildOne94: it's 4am so i think things are getting to me XD
10:12 mingmichael: ahahhahahah xDD
10:12 mingmichael: hue 4am?!
10:12 mingmichael: you dont sleep hugh? :")
10:13 WildOne94: Well i was going to but i found you then XD
10:13 mingmichael: aaahh sorrryy i disturb your sleeping x'D
10:13 WildOne94: No no it's fine XD
10:14 mingmichael: :"")
10:14 mingmichael: okay then, lets continuee xDD
10:14 mingmichael: 01:27:072 (2) - , you can replace it with a single note at  01:27:192 - 
10:14 WildOne94: Yeah but i will go off at 5 for defo XD
10:14 mingmichael: same here 01:29:352 (3) - 
10:14 mingmichael: defo? xD
10:14 WildOne94: XD
10:15 mingmichael: what time is it at there? xD
10:15 WildOne94: 4:15am x3
10:15 mingmichael: owhooo okay xD i think it just takes around 30minutes to finish this IRC heheheee
10:16 WildOne94: Okay :DD
10:17 mingmichael: it doesnt need a reverse at 01:55:032 (6) - xD
10:17 mingmichael: the instruments come out at 01:55:032 - and 01:55:152 - only xDD
10:18 mingmichael: and missing claps at 01:55:032 - 01:55:152 - 01:55:392 - xD
10:19 WildOne94: XD
10:20 mingmichael: again, replace this slider 02:05:472 (2) - with a single note at 02:05:592 - 
10:20 mingmichael: 02:14:112 (4) - same too xDD
10:24 mingmichael: wokay that's all \w/
10:25 mingmichael: hello? xD
10:26 WildOne94: DONE XD
10:26 WildOne94: Sorry XD just finishing off XD
10:27 mingmichael: aahahha no problem xD
10:27 WildOne94: so does that make all diffs okay to you now owo ?
10:27 mingmichael: all are fine \w/
10:27 mingmichael: spread diffs are nice tho
10:27 WildOne94: Huzzah :D/ updating
10:27 WildOne94: :D
10:27 mingmichael: kay \w/
10:27 WildOne94: Dine :3
10:27 WildOne94: done*
10:29 mingmichael: wokay~!

Kurokami

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Joined February 2010

Kurokami 2015-05-12T07:53:02+00:00

Yo. o/

[Platter]

01:46:152 (1,2) - Reduce the distance here a bit, this spot is easy to miss.
[]

Call me back after you fixed this. :3

WildOne94

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Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

WildOne94 2015-05-12T09:49:52+00:00

Kurokami wrote:
Yo. o/

[Platter]

01:46:152 (1,2) - Reduce the distance here a bit, this spot is easy to miss.
[]

Call me back after you fixed this. :3

Fixed

Kurokami

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Kurokami 2015-05-12T10:06:25+00:00

Will my heart survive~?

Qualified~

WildOne94

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Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

WildOne94 2015-05-12T10:09:13+00:00

Kurokami wrote:
Will my heart survive~?

Qualified~

OH MY GOD THANKS SO MUCH

!

JBHyperion

osu!catch Paragon

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Joined September 2014

JBHyperion 2015-05-12T10:10:53+00:00

Congrats guys! (:

Noffy

Nomination Assessment Team

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Joined April 2012

Noffy 2015-05-12T10:47:11+00:00

Woah waking up to see this is quite amazing! owo/
Congradulations!!

Akasha-

Nomination Assessment Team

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Joined April 2013

Akasha- 2015-05-12T11:33:08+00:00

Grats WildOne94 for first ranked beatmap and Withered Lotus and Razor Sharp for first ranked GD <3

WildOne94

581 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

WildOne94 2015-05-12T11:58:40+00:00

Ty all

Very happy <3

Thanks Lotus and Razor too for the work

And not forgetting all modders and star adders too

!

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CelegaS

484 posts

Joined April 2012

CelegaS 2015-05-12T12:27:15+00:00

dat troll hyper at the end of the overdose seriously

guineaQ

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Joined December 2013

guineaQ 2015-05-12T12:36:31+00:00

OH

Razor Sharp

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Joined October 2013

Razor Sharp 2015-05-12T13:00:58+00:00

CelegaS wrote:
dat troll hyper at the end of the overdose seriously

Its not that hard to hit xD

DeletedUser_500696

DeletedUser_500696 2015-05-12T13:16:07+00:00

Congrats, nice to see some diversity in ctb mappers

[ Mephisto ]

760 posts

Joined July 2013

[ Mephisto ] 2015-05-12T13:43:06+00:00

Congrats

Deif

Elite Mapper / osu!catch Paragon

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Joined April 2010

Deif 2015-05-13T20:53:41+00:00

Hi! The QAT decided to DQ your beatmap over the following reasons:

General quality issues in [Overdose]. It'll need some more mods to make the diff more balanced. Here are some examples:

01:07:992 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - This is plainly repetitive. Almost always the same distancing and jumps for a few seconds. 01:07:992 (3,4,5) - Those are okay due to the lyrics, but more variability with the rest would be welcomed.
01:23:232 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Something more interesting could've been done. Play with the high-pitched notes of the melody.
02:01:632 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - That combination of HDashes is exaggerate, since you go from a serie of slider jumps, and then suddenly a 1/4-1/2 HDash chain. Totally out of place.
02:27:192 (6) - Unacceptable borderline slider placement. Either create an HDash or get that distance reduced. Blame the previous HDash, that makes the catcher less controllable.

Inappropriate usage of anti-flow movements in some of the difficulties, which makes them not as enjoyable as they should be. See below some cases:

00:11:472 (3) - 00:21:432 (1,2,3,4,5) - 00:30:072 (5) - etc... Rain Those inverted sliders are everywhere. A bit of variety wouldn't have hurt.
00:33:552 (3,4) - Rain Another unexpected direction change.
02:24:072 (1) - Rain The direction of that slider is totally unexpected and doesn't connect well to the next sliderjumps.
00:06:552 (8,1,2) - Platter A "C" shaped 5-plet would've been better. An "S" doesn't work too flowed there.
01:27:432 (4,5) - Platter A real pity to place the 5-plet so close to the slider (4), another flow-breaker.
00:16:632 (2,3) - Cup That direction change could've been smoother, not recommended for a Cup. More examples can be found at 00:24:312 (1,2) - 01:19:272 (2) - .

As an additional modding:

Rain has an inconsistent combo color. It has to be 255,0,0 instead of 255,50,45.
00:55:752 (4,5,6,7) - Rain This is plainly painful to catch, since you play with HDashes and borderline dashes.
01:42:552 (2,3,4) - Rain Another uncomfortable pattern to catch. The main problem is the distance (1,2,3), which follows the same direction but it's not constant at all.
01:57:432 (1,2,3,4) - Cup I'd place (3) not so distanced to avoid those abrupt direction changes.
02:09:432 (6,1) - Cup The lenght of those 2 sliders must be increased by 1/2 beat. In their current beat, they don't fit quite well to the melody: http://puu.sh/hMbbY/e5ec762988.jpg

[]
From now on, the BNG will handle the beatmap and its ranking process. Good luck!

###M

Razor Sharp

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Joined October 2013

Razor Sharp 2015-05-13T21:15:38+00:00

Deif wrote:
Hi! The QAT decided to DQ your beatmap over the following reasons:

General quality issues in [Overdose]. It'll need some more mods to make the diff more balanced. Here are some examples:
01:07:992 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - This is plainly repetitive. Almost always the same distancing and jumps for a few seconds. 01:07:992 (3,4,5) - Those are okay due to the lyrics, but more variability with the rest would be welcomed. - Changed!
01:23:232 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Something more interesting could've been done. Play with the high-pitched notes of the melody. - Fixed!
02:01:632 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - That combination of HDashes is exaggerate, since you go from a serie of slider jumps, and then suddenly a 1/4-1/2 HDash chain. Totally out of place. - Should be ok now!
02:27:192 (6) - Unacceptable borderline slider placement. Either create an HDash or get that distance reduced. Blame the previous HDash, that makes the catcher less controllable. - Fixed! Changed it to a HDash!

Thanks for the check Deif!

Razor's Overdose

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WildOne94

581 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

WildOne94 2015-05-13T22:19:12+00:00

Deif wrote:
Hi! The QAT decided to DQ your beatmap over the following reasons:
Aww dam :c

Inappropriate usage of anti-flow movements in some of the difficulties, which makes them not as enjoyable as they should be. See below some cases:
00:11:472 (3) - 00:21:432 (1,2,3,4,5) - 00:30:072 (5) - etc... Rain Those inverted sliders are everywhere. A bit of variety wouldn't have hurt. -
00:33:552 (3,4) - Rain Another unexpected direction change.
02:24:072 (1) - Rain The direction of that slider is totally unexpected and doesn't connect well to the next sliderjumps.
00:06:552 (8,1,2) - Platter A "C" shaped 5-plet would've been better. An "S" doesn't work too flowed there.
01:27:432 (4,5) - Platter A real pity to place the 5-plet so close to the slider (4), another flow-breaker.
00:16:632 (2,3) - Cup That direction change could've been smoother, not recommended for a Cup. More examples can be found at 00:24:312 (1,2) - 01:19:272 (2) - .
As an additional modding:
Rain has an inconsistent combo color. It has to be 255,0,0 instead of 255,50,45.
00:55:752 (4,5,6,7) - Rain This is plainly painful to catch, since you play with HDashes and borderline dashes.
01:42:552 (2,3,4) - Rain Another uncomfortable pattern to catch. The main problem is the distance (1,2,3), which follows the same direction but it's not constant at all.
01:57:432 (1,2,3,4) - Cup I'd place (3) not so distanced to avoid those abrupt direction changes.
02:09:432 (6,1) - Cup The lenght of those 2 sliders must be increased by 1/2 beat. In their current beat, they don't fit quite well to the melody: http://puu.sh/hMbbY/e5ec762988.jpg
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From now on, the BNG will handle the beatmap and its ranking process. Good luck!

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Fixed all >w<

Riari

743 posts

Joined April 2013

Riari 2015-05-14T14:24:45+00:00

Beep boop.

IRC me sometime this year, I'll check over stuff I guess.

WildOne94

581 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

WildOne94 2015-05-14T15:01:35+00:00

Riari wrote:
Beep boop.

IRC me sometime this year, I'll check over stuff I guess.

Will consider in the next few days Riari

But i am waiting for some BN's at the minute for mods if you don't mind waiting o: ?
We will see how it goes

JBHyperion

osu!catch Paragon

3,922 posts

Joined September 2014

JBHyperion 2015-05-20T18:05:44+00:00

Recheck by WildOne's request

Cup:
00:08:472 (1) - Maybe increase the spacing slightly for the clap hitsound? This also moves it out from under the head of (2), creating a little bit more movement here which I feel is nice. Try x-96
01:13:272 (3,4) - This might flow a little better if you move (4) to x-80, then Ctrl+H 01:14:952 (5) and move to x-192 - though you may want to keep this as it is since it's in the kiai and there's a 1/1 space
02:14:232 (3) - There's a clap here, so a jump is justified, but this seems a tiny bit too big to me - try x-364

No changes to Salad, fine with changes to Platter

Rain:
01:42:552 (2) - I'd still move this slightly further to the right to equalize the DS more between 01:42:312 (1,2,3) - (2,3) is currently a fair bit bigger than (1,2), and coupled with the direction change to (3,4), it's easy to overshoot and miss the return motion to (4) - try (2) at x-192 as this gives about 2.2x DS on both sides, which feels much more fluid

I'm happy with the changes to the Overdose, but Deif mentioned that some more mods on it wouldn't hurt, so I'd like us to try and rustle up a few people to have a look at it and give their opinions before I rebubble. I'll keep a close eye out, but if either way call me back when you think it's all good to go.

WildOne94

581 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

WildOne94 2015-05-20T19:24:00+00:00

JBHyperion wrote:
Recheck by WildOne's request

Cup:
00:08:472 (1) - Maybe increase the spacing slightly for the clap hitsound? This also moves it out from under the head of (2), creating a little bit more movement here which I feel is nice. Try x-96 - I normally fitted everything with the DS but yeah you have a point with that under (2) thing so yeah fixed
01:13:272 (3,4) - This might flow a little better if you move (4) to x-80, then Ctrl+H 01:14:952 (5) and move to x-192 - though you may want to keep this as it is since it's in the kiai and there's a 1/1 space - I kept as it seems fine atm and would require some changing which i am lazy to do XD. But i tried and i prefer it as it is now
02:14:232 (3) - There's a clap here, so a jump is justified, but this seems a tiny bit too big to me - try x-364 - Oh yeah i didn't even notice that i was not DS either proper. But yeah moved to 364

No changes to Salad, fine with changes to Platter

Rain:
01:42:552 (2) - I'd still move this slightly further to the right to equalize the DS more between 01:42:312 (1,2,3) - (2,3) is currently a fair bit bigger than (1,2), and coupled with the direction change to (3,4), it's easy to overshoot and miss the return motion to (4) - try (2) at x-192 as this gives about 2.2x DS on both sides, which feels much more fluid - Fixed. Good point ovo

I'm happy with the changes to the Overdose, but Deif mentioned that some more mods on it wouldn't hurt, so I'd like us to try and rustle up a few people to have a look at it and give their opinions before I rebubble. I'll keep a close eye out, but if either way call me back when you think it's all good to go.

Thanks Buddy

MBomb

MBomb 2015-05-27T19:36:06+00:00

Got asked for a recheck on the overdose.

Overdose

00:16:152 (3,4,5) - I feel this section flows better and fits the music better if you get rid of the hyper from here to 4. So move this note to x:288, and 4 to x:112, and then 5 to x:144. If you don't do this, at least move 4 away from the wall bit, as a hyper into the wall doesn't fit.
00:18:072 (3) - Rotate this 90 degrees clockwise (ctrl+>) and move it to x:128. Then move 00:18:552 (4) - x:160, and then move 00:18:792 (1) - to x:320. I feel this flows a lot better than the current pattern.
00:20:232 (3) - This feels weird as a hyper, move this to x:192.
00:23:232 (1,2,3,4) - In my opinion the hyper should be to 4 here, and not to 2. So click 00:23:592 (2,3) - and move them to x:96.
00:23:832 (4) - This sounds better as 2 circles to me, as the note on 4 isn't held.
00:25:032 (3) - This doesn't fit a hyper in my opinion. Ctrl+g and move to x:336, flows nicely.
00:25:992 (1) - Only a slight change, but this feels better at x:320 for slightly reduced distance after the hyper.
00:27:672 (2,3) - Forcing the player against the wall after a hyper is a very bad idea, doesn't feel very good. Move 2 to x:208, and 3 to x:480, and 4 to x:288.
00:29:832 (3,1) - Flow on this section feels a bit off currently. Ctrl+g 3 and move to x:176, then ctrl+g 1 and move it to x:208, this creates a nice pattern that flows well. (Just a suggestion, but after this, moving 2 to x:48 also feels nice to reduce this hyper whilst still keeping it as one).
00:31:512 (2) - A hyper of this strength feels weird for such a weak note. Move this to x:384. Maintains it as a hyper whilst not being such a snap.
00:32:352 (2,3) - I feel the hyper should be from 2 to 3 here, not 1 to 2, so move 2 to x:176.
00:32:712 (5) - Such a strong hyper followed my movement in the opposite direction is highly not recommended. Move this to x:192 to maintain the hyper whilst making it weaker.
00:33:792 (3) - This is a very weak sound, I'm not sure why there's a hyper here. It makes a simple and nice flowing pattern if you move this to x:192. This may feel simple for an overdose but this is the calmest section of the song and movement like this feels nice.
00:40:032 (2) - Maybe have this slightly more vertical? Movement like this after a hyper can feel slightly forced if done too strong.
00:41:952 (2) - Move this to x:448, gets rid of the unnecessary hyper to 3 whilst maintaining a slightly weaker hyper from 1.
00:45:912 (2) - This movement too heavy after a hyper D:, move this to x:96, maintains the hyper but makes it a lot weaker.
00:48:312 (1) - x:32, to get it a bit further away from the edge and weaken the hypers.
00:49:752 (1) - Move this to x:464 for a weaker hyper for better flowing movement.
00:54:072 (1) - Move this to x:384, makes the jump from 7 less awkward whilst maintaining the HDash to 2.
00:55:512 (4) - Hyper should be from 4 to 5 in my opinion instead of 3 to 4, the stronger note is 5, so move this to x:160.
00:57:672 (5) - Move to x:384, feels better whilst maintaining the hypers.
01:01:752 (5) - Whilst I understand why you made this hyper, for the start of the kiai, I'd say this feels better just at x:256 without a hyper, as the actual drum beat isn't that strong here.
01:04:632 (3) - This sounds better just having it in the same place as 01:03:672 (1) - , because it is a similar weak sound, however the sound at 4 is stronger and so that note should be kept where it is, and this maintains that hyper.
01:08:472 (4) - Ctrl+G this and move it to x:160. Flows a lot better, and creates a fitting hyper to 5. If you do this, move 01:09:192 (6) - to x:160 to avoid an awkward jump after a hyper.
01:10:152 (2,3) - This part of the timeline sounds weird to me... Shouldn't it be a circle where 2 starts now followed by a 3/4 slider where 2 currently ends? That sounds better to me, listening at 25%. If you do this, make 1 to 2 a normal jump, and then make 2 to 3 a HDash, for the strong vocal.
01:16:632 (3) - This doesn't feel like it should hyper to 4, as 4 is a similar beat to 3, so move this to x:256.
01:17:352 (6,7) - Grab these two and move to x:176, maintains the hypers but makes them weaker.
01:19:512 (3) - 3 and 4 are clearly weaker notes than 1 and 2, move this to x:176 to get rid of the hypers to 3 and 4.
01:19:992 (1) - Move this to x:496. Gets rid of the unnecessary hyper to 2 and flows quite nicely.
01:23:832 (4,5) - Swap the places of these two on the timeline, and then move the new 4 to x:48. This makes an interesting pattern whilst maintaining difficulty, and getting rid of the unnecessary hyper from 3 to 4 and 5 to 6.
01:31:272 (3,4,5) - These hypers feel over the top and unfitting of the song for the most part. I'd recommend switching the position of 3 and 4 to get rid of the unnecessary hyper to 3, but then ctrl+H 5 and move it to x:192 to have a fitting hyper here (And maybe make this slider slightly more horizontal for better flow).
01:36:312 (1) - Maybe move this to x:80? It feels better to play in my opinion and avoids an awkward jump.
01:37:872 (6) - This actually has lower emphasis than most of the notes before this, so it doesn't make sense to have 5 hyper to this. Move this note to x:128 to get rid of the hyper and to have good flow.
01:39:552 (6) - This section has nicer flow if you move this to x:112, so that you have movement in the same direction after the hyper rather than a sudden stop, and it maintains the hyper.
01:40:632 (2) - Move this to x:480 to avoid forcing the catcher against the wall with that hyper, this could very easily throw a player off.
01:41:592 (2) - Move this to x:448 to get rid of the unnecessary hyper to 3, whilst maintaining the hyper from 1, and to get the jump further away from the wall.
01:42:432 (2) - The hyper should be from 2 to 3 here, not 1 to 2, so move this to x:160, as the stronger note is on 3.
01:43:032 (2) - Moving this to x:224 feels better to me, and gets rid of unnecessary hypers on moderately weak notes.
01:43:512 (5) - Ctrl+g this and move it to x:208, adds a nice hyper from 4, and maintains a strong hyper to 1 for that strong note.
01:50:632 (2) - Whilst this is actually quite fitting (And super fun to play), it's too difficult in my opinion. I would recommend moving this to x:192, it feels a lot more comfortable to play whilst still maintaining some difficulty with a stronthis jg snap hyper.
01:53:592 (1) - Again, forcing the catcher against the wall after a hyper is a bad idea. I would drag 01:53:112 (1,2,3,4) - to x:144, and then move 01:53:592 (1) - to x:16 to maintain all hypers whilst stopping the catcher being pushed against the wall.
01:53:952 (2) - I would move this to x:352, maintains the hyper but makes it slightly weaker, and makes the jump to 3 less awkward.
01:55:992 (1) - Move this to x:160 to have it a little less against the wall.
01:56:952 (3) - Move this to x:320, musically this section is basically empty, so a hyper definitely doesn't fit here.
02:02:232 (4) - Move this to x:160, fits the music better to not have hypers here, as the notes get gradually weaker.
02:03:432 (2,3) - Move these to x:288, this jump feels too awkward as it is now.
02:10:512 (8) - Move this to x:192 for a weaker hyper, whilst still maintaining the hyper.
02:27:192 (6) - Jump to here still feels really awkward, move this to x:192, makes it feel a lot better.

And that's me done

Razor Sharp

1,151 posts

Joined October 2013

Razor Sharp 2015-05-29T07:21:45+00:00

- Magic Bomb - wrote:
Got asked for a recheck on the overdose.

Overdose
00:16:152 (3,4,5) - I feel this section flows better and fits the music better if you get rid of the hyper from here to 4. So move this note to x:288, and 4 to x:112, and then 5 to x:144. If you don't do this, at least move 4 away from the wall bit, as a hyper into the wall doesn't fit. - Moved (4) away from the wall.
00:18:072 (3) - Rotate this 90 degrees clockwise (ctrl+>) and move it to x:128. Then move 00:18:552 (4) - x:160, and then move 00:18:792 (1) - to x:320. I feel this flows a lot better than the current pattern. - Fixed!
00:20:232 (3) - This feels weird as a hyper, move this to x:192. - Fixed!
00:23:232 (1,2,3,4) - In my opinion the hyper should be to 4 here, and not to 2. So click 00:23:592 (2,3) - and move them to x:96. - Fixed!
00:23:832 (4) - This sounds better as 2 circles to me, as the note on 4 isn't held. - I personally feel this fits as a slider, so wont change it.
00:25:032 (3) - This doesn't fit a hyper in my opinion. Ctrl+g and move to x:336, flows nicely. - Nah, it is ok as it is.
00:25:992 (1) - Only a slight change, but this feels better at x:320 for slightly reduced distance after the hyper. - Fixed!
00:27:672 (2,3) - Forcing the player against the wall after a hyper is a very bad idea, doesn't feel very good. Move 2 to x:208, and 3 to x:480, and 4 to x:288. - Fixed!
00:29:832 (3,1) - Flow on this section feels a bit off currently. Ctrl+g 3 and move to x:176, then ctrl+g 1 and move it to x:208, this creates a nice pattern that flows well. (Just a suggestion, but after this, moving 2 to x:48 also feels nice to reduce this hyper whilst still keeping it as one). - Fixed!
00:31:512 (2) - A hyper of this strength feels weird for such a weak note. Move this to x:384. Maintains it as a hyper whilst not being such a snap. - Fixed!
00:32:352 (2,3) - I feel the hyper should be from 2 to 3 here, not 1 to 2, so move 2 to x:176. - Fixed!
00:32:712 (5) - Such a strong hyper followed my movement in the opposite direction is highly not recommended. Move this to x:192 to maintain the hyper whilst making it weaker. - Fixed!
00:33:792 (3) - This is a very weak sound, I'm not sure why there's a hyper here. It makes a simple and nice flowing pattern if you move this to x:192. This may feel simple for an overdose but this is the calmest section of the song and movement like this feels nice. - Fixed!
00:40:032 (2) - Maybe have this slightly more vertical? Movement like this after a hyper can feel slightly forced if done too strong. - Fixed!
00:41:952 (2) - Move this to x:448, gets rid of the unnecessary hyper to 3 whilst maintaining a slightly weaker hyper from 1. - Fixed!
00:45:912 (2) - This movement too heavy after a hyper D:, move this to x:96, maintains the hyper but makes it a lot weaker. - Fixed!
00:48:312 (1) - x:32, to get it a bit further away from the edge and weaken the hypers. - Fixed!
00:49:752 (1) - Move this to x:464 for a weaker hyper for better flowing movement. - Fixed!
00:54:072 (1) - Move this to x:384, makes the jump from 7 less awkward whilst maintaining the HDash to 2. - Fixed!
00:55:512 (4) - Hyper should be from 4 to 5 in my opinion instead of 3 to 4, the stronger note is 5, so move this to x:160. - Fixed!
00:57:672 (5) - Move to x:384, feels better whilst maintaining the hypers. - Fixed!
01:01:752 (5) - Whilst I understand why you made this hyper, for the start of the kiai, I'd say this feels better just at x:256 without a hyper, as the actual drum beat isn't that strong here. - No thats true, but i personally feel this is very fitting. So wont change it for now.
01:04:632 (3) - This sounds better just having it in the same place as 01:03:672 (1) - , because it is a similar weak sound, however the sound at 4 is stronger and so that note should be kept where it is, and this maintains that hyper. - Fixed!
01:08:472 (4) - Ctrl+G this and move it to x:160. Flows a lot better, and creates a fitting hyper to 5. If you do this, move 01:09:192 (6) - to x:160 to avoid an awkward jump after a hyper. - Fixed!
01:10:152 (2,3) - This part of the timeline sounds weird to me... Shouldn't it be a circle where 2 starts now followed by a 3/4 slider where 2 currently ends? That sounds better to me, listening at 25%. If you do this, make 1 to 2 a normal jump, and then make 2 to 3 a HDash, for the strong vocal. - Nah, feels more fitting as it is for me actually.
01:16:632 (3) - This doesn't feel like it should hyper to 4, as 4 is a similar beat to 3, so move this to x:256. - Fixed!
01:17:352 (6,7) - Grab these two and move to x:176, maintains the hypers but makes them weaker. - Fixed!
01:19:512 (3) - 3 and 4 are clearly weaker notes than 1 and 2, move this to x:176 to get rid of the hypers to 3 and 4. - Fixed!
01:19:992 (1) - Move this to x:496. Gets rid of the unnecessary hyper to 2 and flows quite nicely. - Fixed!
01:23:832 (4,5) - Swap the places of these two on the timeline, and then move the new 4 to x:48. This makes an interesting pattern whilst maintaining difficulty, and getting rid of the unnecessary hyper from 3 to 4 and 5 to 6. - Fixed!
01:31:272 (3,4,5) - These hypers feel over the top and unfitting of the song for the most part. I'd recommend switching the position of 3 and 4 to get rid of the unnecessary hyper to 3, but then ctrl+H 5 and move it to x:192 to have a fitting hyper here (And maybe make this slider slightly more horizontal for better flow). - I think this part is ok as it is. It i feel like the hypers fits.
01:36:312 (1) - Maybe move this to x:80? It feels better to play in my opinion and avoids an awkward jump. - Fixed!
01:37:872 (6) - This actually has lower emphasis than most of the notes before this, so it doesn't make sense to have 5 hyper to this. Move this note to x:128 to get rid of the hyper and to have good flow. - Fixed!
01:39:552 (6) - This section has nicer flow if you move this to x:112, so that you have movement in the same direction after the hyper rather than a sudden stop, and it maintains the hyper. - Fixed!
01:40:632 (2) - Move this to x:480 to avoid forcing the catcher against the wall with that hyper, this could very easily throw a player off. - Fixed!
01:41:592 (2) - Move this to x:448 to get rid of the unnecessary hyper to 3, whilst maintaining the hyper from 1, and to get the jump further away from the wall. - Fixed!
01:42:432 (2) - The hyper should be from 2 to 3 here, not 1 to 2, so move this to x:160, as the stronger note is on 3. - Fixed!
01:43:032 (2) - Moving this to x:224 feels better to me, and gets rid of unnecessary hypers on moderately weak notes. - I will not change this, as it feels very fitting for me.
01:43:512 (5) - Ctrl+g this and move it to x:208, adds a nice hyper from 4, and maintains a strong hyper to 1 for that strong note. - Fixed!
01:50:632 (2) - Whilst this is actually quite fitting (And super fun to play), it's too difficult in my opinion. I would recommend moving this to x:192, it feels a lot more comfortable to play whilst still maintaining some difficulty with a stronthis jg snap hyper. - I like this as it is, due to it is a little hard (and fun, as i intended it to be).
01:53:592 (1) - Again, forcing the catcher against the wall after a hyper is a bad idea. I would drag 01:53:112 (1,2,3,4) - to x:144, and then move 01:53:592 (1) - to x:16 to maintain all hypers whilst stopping the catcher being pushed against the wall. - Fixed!
01:53:952 (2) - I would move this to x:352, maintains the hyper but makes it slightly weaker, and makes the jump to 3 less awkward. - Fixed!
01:55:992 (1) - Move this to x:160 to have it a little less against the wall. - Fixed!
01:56:952 (3) - Move this to x:320, musically this section is basically empty, so a hyper definitely doesn't fit here. - Fixed!
02:02:232 (4) - Move this to x:160, fits the music better to not have hypers here, as the notes get gradually weaker. - I think this is ok. So will not change.
02:03:432 (2,3) - Move these to x:288, this jump feels too awkward as it is now. - Fixed!
02:10:512 (8) - Move this to x:192 for a weaker hyper, whilst still maintaining the hyper. - Fixed!
02:27:192 (6) - Jump to here still feels really awkward, move this to x:192, makes it feel a lot better. - Fixed!

And that's me done

Thanks for the mod!

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344,320,11232,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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512,136,13632,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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112,104,15192,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,88,15312,2,0,L|280:80,1,110
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384,208,16152,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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128,280,16632,2,0,P|176:248|120:176,1,165,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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200,208,17952,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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160,320,18552,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,304,18792,6,0,L|248:304,1,55
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192,96,20232,1,8,0:0:0:0:
392,120,20472,2,0,P|432:176|424:224,1,110,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,240,20832,5,0,0:0:0:0:
128,240,20952,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,240,21072,1,0,0:0:0:0:
391,248,21192,2,0,P|448:224|472:176,1,110,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,192,21672,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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424,72,22512,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,320,22632,6,0,L|96:304,1,55
352,320,22872,2,0,L|416:304,1,55,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,320,23232,6,0,P|40:256|64:168,1,110,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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360,136,23832,2,0,L|464:192,1,110,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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320,96,25992,6,0,P|240:96|88:128,1,220
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240,176,26712,2,0,L|248:232,1,55,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,176,26952,2,0,L|144:232,1,55
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288,192,28512,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,216,28632,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,216,28752,1,0,0:0:0:0:
40,176,28872,2,0,P|88:128|136:96,1,110,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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432,160,32472,1,8,0:0:0:0:
464,208,32592,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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424,208,33192,6,0,L|480:208,2,55,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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40,104,34632,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,112,34872,6,0,P|128:168|40:216,1,165
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352,240,43272,1,0,0:0:0:0:
40,240,43512,1,2,0:0:0:0:
400,240,43752,2,0,P|456:208|480:192,2,55,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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112,128,45192,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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272,192,50712,5,8,0:0:0:0:
144,192,50952,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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484,295,52872,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,320,52992,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,344,53112,2,0,L|224:344,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,192,53592,2,0,L|152:192,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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32,104,54792,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,216,55032,2,0,L|56:264,1,165,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,304,55512,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,304,55632,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,304,55752,2,0,P|472:248|440:192,1,110,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,256,56232,6,0,L|176:256,1,55
240,216,56472,2,0,L|296:216,1,55,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,216,56712,2,0,L|128:216,1,55
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128,168,57192,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,152,57312,1,0,0:0:0:0:
16,112,57432,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,112,57672,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,104,57912,2,0,P|32:160|72:224,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,128,58392,5,8,0:0:0:0:
464,104,58632,2,0,P|448:176|320:256,1,220
152,120,59352,1,8,0:0:0:0:
472,144,59592,2,0,P|464:208|336:320,1,220
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336,192,60792,2,0,L|424:272,1,110,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,120,61272,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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404,80,61992,6,0,P|396:136|356:200,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,192,62472,2,0,L|72:232,1,55
296,240,62712,2,0,P|352:200|368:160,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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360,168,63432,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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224,208,65592,6,0,L|128:144,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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216,176,66552,2,0,L|96:144,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,72,66912,6,0,L|384:80,1,55,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,72,67272,2,0,P|72:128|64:176,2,110
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104,240,70152,2,0,L|176:240,1,55
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432,296,72312,2,0,P|464:240|440:200,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,296,72792,2,0,P|48:240|72:200,1,110,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,208,73272,6,0,L|384:144,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,112,73632,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,88,73752,2,0,P|80:136|80:200,1,110,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,176,74232,2,0,L|416:144,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,72,74592,6,0,L|128:80,1,55,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,72,74952,2,0,P|440:128|360:200,1,220
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256,176,76632,1,8,0:0:0:0:
144,176,76752,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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176,304,77352,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,312,77472,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,320,77592,6,0,L|512:272,1,110,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,240,78072,2,0,L|48:160,1,165
240,152,78552,2,0,P|288:112|288:64,1,110,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,72,79032,5,4,0:0:0:0:
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384,240,79752,1,0,0:0:0:0:
496,288,79992,6,0,L|425:288,1,55
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264,144,80712,2,0,L|328:144,1,55
112,96,80952,6,0,P|56:128|64:200,1,110
248,264,81432,1,8,0:0:0:0:
32,264,81672,1,8,0:0:0:0:
248,264,81912,2,0,P|328:256|400:208,1,165,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,96,82392,5,8,0:0:0:0:
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144,240,82872,2,0,P|192:280|248:280,1,110
296,296,83232,5,0,0:0:0:0:
408,312,83352,2,0,L|341:293,1,55,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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208,224,84432,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,208,84672,6,0,P|376:144|424:96,1,110
248,72,85032,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,72,85152,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,80,85272,2,0,P|480:128|464:184,1,110,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,184,85752,6,0,P|288:240|352:272,1,110
432,264,86112,2,0,L|384:304,1,55,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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Badis

416 posts

Joined November 2010

Badis 2015-06-08T14:31:50+00:00

Yo !! Gunna mod razor's diff o/
from 00:00:312 - to 00:15:072 - I feel the hitsound density is too low , I hear the hitnormal too much , try to add some whistle to make more variety

00:28:152 (3) - I think this might be a hyperdash or else the movement is too uncorfortable

00:48:632 (2,3) - try to put some hitsound there , we don't feel them when we hit it I evern asked to myself if the timeline was right

01:19:752 (4,1) - I suggest a slider between 4 and 1 to become only one for the flow

01:22:392 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - it lack intensity , it should recover the whole screen in my opinion

01:33:912 (1,2,3,4,5) - the timeline is wrong here

from 01:40:152 - to 01:53:592 - same suggestion as the very begining , the hitsound density feels so low

01:50:472 (1,2,3,1) - the timeline is wrong here too , I feel nothing when I hit them its not a good news at all

01:50:952 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - instead of a line what about something like a J

from 01:59:352 - to 02:08:952 - its a kiai , why not but why from 01:19:992 - to 01:31:992 - its not a kiai , thats exactly the same part

02:18:432 (1,2,3) - thats the main issue of this map , we don't move enough some part are too static it feels like converted map , it should not be especially during a kiai

Tbh I find this map lack some speed , the sliders are too vertical make us move goddamit !! :V

I hope this helped gud luck razor o/

Razor Sharp

1,151 posts

Joined October 2013

Razor Sharp 2015-06-08T15:07:47+00:00

Badis wrote:
Yo !! Gunna mod razor's diff o/
from 00:00:312 - to 00:15:072 - I feel the hitsound density is too low , I hear the hitnormal too much , try to add some whistle to make more variety - Fixed!

00:28:152 (3) - I think this might be a hyperdash or else the movement is too uncorfortable - Fixed!

00:48:632 (2,3) - try to put some hitsound there , we don't feel them when we hit it I evern asked to myself if the timeline was right - Fixed!

01:19:752 (4,1) - I suggest a slider between 4 and 1 to become only one for the flow - I preffer this as it is. And it will completely destroy how i wanted it if i add a slider.

01:22:392 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - it lack intensity , it should recover the whole screen in my opinion - Fixed!

01:33:912 (1,2,3,4,5) - the timeline is wrong here - Fixed!

from 01:40:152 - to 01:53:592 - same suggestion as the very begining , the hitsound density feels so low - But ;_; I want it to be like this ;_;

01:50:472 (1,2,3,1) - the timeline is wrong here too , I feel nothing when I hit them its not a good news at all - Timeline is right here.

01:50:952 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - instead of a line what about something like a J - Fixed in own way.

from 01:59:352 - to 02:08:952 - its a kiai , why not but why from 01:19:992 - to 01:31:992 - its not a kiai , thats exactly the same part - Talk to wildone about this issue please.

02:18:432 (1,2,3) - thats the main issue of this map , we don't move enough some part are too static it feels like converted map , it should not be especially during a kiai - Fixed!

Tbh I find this map lack some speed , the sliders are too vertical make us move goddamit !! :V

I hope this helped gud luck razor o/

Thanks for the mod!

Razor's Overdose

osu file format v14

[General]
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PreviewTime: 100152
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[Metadata]
Title:The Queen
TitleUnicode:The Queen
Artist:M2U
ArtistUnicode:M2U
Creator:WildOne94
Version:Razor's Overdose
Source:O2JAM U
Tags:RHYTHM ATTACK GATHERING 2013 Limited Album Withered_Lotus Razor_Sharp
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296,168,134592,2,0,P|352:184|488:184,1,165
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416,264,136152,1,8,0:0:0:0:
464,232,136272,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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336,104,137112,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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224,216,137592,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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200,232,139992,2,0,L|152:264,1,55,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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