1. Easy (1,08 stars, 128 notes)
2. Endless Sky (3,46 stars, 401 notes)
3. EruJazz's Normal (1,56 stars, 219 notes)
4. pkhg's Hard (2,18 stars, 351 notes)

MitiS wrote:

Hitsound modded :3

http://puu.sh/fFTYv/e45e846d7a.zip

Hope you like it

1. i believe you map around vocals, so.. 00:04:290 (4) - it lands on nothing cuz vocals are on 1/8, thus, you may want to remove this note
2. 00:06:532 (6) - 1/4 reverse instead(?
3. 00:39:635 (7) - ^ here too i think 02:46:532 (2) -
4. 00:40:152 (8,1) - breaking your constant ds looks quite random here, rather put them closer
5. 00:41:704 (1,2,3) - ^ altho this one is minor xd. probably here as well 00:44:463 (4,1) - 01:34:118 (4,5) - 02:41:532 (7,1) -
6. 00:45:842 (5) - maybe you want to use 1/2 rhythm here, so it covers the piano as well as it's kinda constant with similar parts like 00:40:325 (1,2,3) - 00:12:394 (5,6,7) - etc. Similar happens here 02:58:256 (4) - they are ending a section,so sounds cool to do that i think
7. 01:17:566 (1) - what about moving it around x114y45 (just a bit more up) so it looks cleaner, also flow is very sharp there you add some kind of curve to the slider or rotate it. Like thisor smthng
8. 01:22:739 (2) - you should remove this note cuz you didn't map 01:19:980 - nor 01:21:359 - (or map those, which makes more sense)
9. 01:31:359 (1,3) - this is very ugly imo :c try this(? or something else dunno
10. 01:33:428 (1) - 02:56:187 (1) - these 1/8 don't really fit to the map itself, as it's based on 1/4 vocals.. uhm
11. 01:36:015 (2) - stack on top of 01:35:325 (8) - better?
12. 01:36:877 (1,5) - stack is off here x.x
13. 01:51:359 (1,2) - minor but.. could you move 2 a bit more away, so it's between 01:51:359 (1,3) - more evenly
14. 02:15:152 - add note for vocals?/w\ cuz it's track you map the most
15. 02:21:015 (2) - what about blanket it with 02:19:635 (5) - curve? like this , Similar here 02:26:532 (1,3) -
16. 02:23:773 (1,2,3,4) - personally i think this'd be better if you just stack them instead of overlap them. otherwise it may be read as 1/8 gap cuz how your map is done overall ><
17. 02:37:566 - there's a sound from here that annoys me a lot, are you sure that it's from the original song? Sounds more like a fail while ripping the song
18. 03:04:118 - you really need to reconsider adding a note here, cuz how the piano plays. here as well 03:09:635 - (it's basically the same sound as 03:08:256 (2) - so, it makes more sense to add a note there imo)
19. 03:07:221 (3,4) - this should be 1/2 from (3). cuz the sound you're mapping here is just at 03:07:221 - and 03:07:566 - , but not at 03:07:394 -
20. 03:17:566 (1,2,3,4,1) - spacing is really random here. You may want to give them a proper spacing to make it more consistent with the map

1. check aimod
2. 00:58:256 (1,2) - maybe change the rhythm to fit vocals better? using repeat
3. 01:40:670 (4) - change it to just a circle to fit better the piano)?
4. 01:41:359 (6,7,1) - distance seems a bit too much for what the music offers here and how you mapped this section.. mostly 6 and 7 ya
5. 02:34:808 (5) - nc?

1. 01:03:773 (1,1) - these long sliders apper quite random imo. Maybe use 1/1 reverse? so it fits a bit more with the map itself
2. 01:22:739 (4) - i'd remove this note cuz there isn't music for this but vocals. which kinda conflicts with blank spaces like 01:19:980 -
3. 01:24:463 (3,4) - ctrl g this rhythm? sounds more natural i think>w<
4. 03:07:566 (5) - 03:18:601 (5) - remove these notes, so they're constant with previous combos? (there arent really needed anyways for piano purpuses)

1. 02:29:290 (4) - pls change it xD (it doesn't really fit to the music, and it's pretty ugly i'd say ;w;)

Milan- wrote:

holi

lf=looking for?
ok

[sky]

1. i believe you map around vocals, so.. 00:04:290 (4) - it lands on nothing cuz vocals are on 1/8, thus, you may want to remove this note Done
2. 00:06:532 (6) - 1/4 reverse instead(? Nope, I'm undermapping this part on on purpose
3. 00:39:635 (7) - ^ here too i think 02:46:532 (2) - Don't like how it plays with Reverse
4. 00:40:152 (8,1) - breaking your constant ds looks quite random here, rather put them closer Done
5. 00:41:704 (1,2,3) - ^ altho this one is minor xd. probably here as well 00:44:463 (4,1) - 01:34:118 (4,5) - 02:41:532 (7,1) -
6. 00:45:842 (5) - maybe you want to use 1/2 rhythm here, so it covers the piano as well as it's kinda constant with similar parts like 00:40:325 (1,2,3) - 00:12:394 (5,6,7) - etc. Similar happens here 02:58:256 (4) - they are ending a section,so sounds cool to do that i think While it makes sense, those 2 other examples dont have the same "calm" feeling like the original suggestion you're making, using a slider feels better because the long duration of the voice, mapping it to 1/2 would make it too "intense" just to follow the piano while the voice is calm, something I don't like.
   
7. 01:17:566 (1) - what about moving it around x114y45 (just a bit more up) so it looks cleaner, also flow is very sharp there you add some kind of curve to the slider or rotate it. Like thisor smthng Done first suggestion, not second.
8. 01:22:739 (2) - you should remove this note cuz you didn't map 01:19:980 - nor 01:21:359 - (or map those, which makes more sense) I'm shifting to the voice using the increase intensity of the same (same reson with the jump) which makes sense to use the note to do so,while the other examples the voice was "constant" and normal.
9. 01:31:359 (1,3) - this is very ugly imo :c try this(? or something else dunno Done
10. 01:33:428 (1) - 02:56:187 (1) - these 1/8 don't really fit to the map itself, as it's based on 1/4 vocals.. uhm Changed
11. 01:36:015 (2) - stack on top of 01:35:325 (8) - better? Done
12. 01:36:877 (1,5) - stack is off here x.x Done
13. 01:51:359 (1,2) - minor but.. could you move 2 a bit more away, so it's between 01:51:359 (1,3) - more evenly Done
14. 02:15:152 - add note for vocals?/w\ cuz it's track you map the most Done
15. 02:21:015 (2) - what about blanket it with 02:19:635 (5) - curve? like this , Similar here 02:26:532 (1,3) - Done first
16. 02:23:773 (1,2,3,4) - personally i think this'd be better if you just stack them instead of overlap them. otherwise it may be read as 1/8 gap cuz how your map is done overall >< Done
17. 02:37:566 - there's a sound from here that annoys me a lot, are you sure that it's from the original song? Sounds more like a fail while ripping the song I have no idea what you're talking about
18. 03:04:118 - you really need to reconsider adding a note here, cuz how the piano plays. here as well 03:09:635 - (it's basically the same sound as 03:08:256 (2) - so, it makes more sense to add a note there imo) It's clear what I'm mapping here and why I didn't put a note there.
19. 03:07:221 (3,4) - this should be 1/2 from (3). cuz the sound you're mapping here is just at 03:07:221 - and 03:07:566 - , but not at 03:07:394 - I like the current one
20. 03:17:566 (1,2,3,4,1) - spacing is really random here. You may want to give them a proper spacing to make it more consistent with the map

Same as before

[easy]

1. 02:29:290 (4) - pls change it xD (it doesn't really fit to the music, and it's pretty ugly i'd say ;w;) o.o

bye

Milan- wrote:

holi o/

[eru]

1. 01:03:773 (1,1) - these long sliders apper quite random imo. Maybe use 1/1 reverse? so it fits a bit more with the map itself but red nodes are following the song, i want to keep this, sorry.
2. 01:22:739 (4) - i'd remove this note cuz there isn't music for this but vocals. which kinda conflicts with blank spaces like 01:19:980 - mmm.. a space without note feels wrong for me. not changed.
3. 01:24:463 (3,4) - ctrl g this rhythm? sounds more natural i think>w< yep, thanks ^^
4. 03:07:566 (5) - 03:18:601 (5) - remove these notes, so they're constant with previous combos? (there arent really needed anyways for piano purpuses) but, im following the cimbal sound. Not changed.

bye

Taeyang wrote:

• General

1. all mapset check this
   
2. you will add SB?if not delete OSB file

• Easy

1. 00:09:290 - here vacal sound so strong add something Doesn't fit the idea of the "minimal" start
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:58:256 (1) - anchor move tick Done
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:09:290 (1) - ^ No
4. 01:31:359 (1) - ugly slide? It's not?
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:36:877 (1,2) - blanket try more Done
6. 02:29:290 (4) - ugly silde changed but not that your suggestion
   
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7. 02:47:221 - here it vocal sound Nope
8. 02:51:359 (3) - anchor move tick I like current one
9. 02:57:566 (3,4,1) - more try blanket Changed a bit
10. 03:10:670 (1) - overlap Changed a bit
    
    SPOILER

    
    

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Milan- wrote:

[pkhg]

1. check aimod
2. 00:58:256 (1,2) - maybe change the rhythm to fit vocals better? using repeat it already fits the vocals and its better if the strong beat is clickable
3. 01:40:670 (4) - change it to just a circle to fit better the piano)? i'll keep this until i find a way to keep the pattern ;w;
4. 01:41:359 (6,7,1) - distance seems a bit too much for what the music offers here and how you mapped this section.. mostly 6 and 7 ya ok
5. 02:34:808 (5) - nc? oops :3

bye

Taeyang wrote:

• EruJazz's Normal

1. 00:08:601 (1) - slide done
2. 00:11:359 (1,2,3) - rhythm 00:03:084 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) - you followed vocalsound Not change.
3. 01:03:773 (1) - slide suggest Not change.
4. 01:06:532 (1) - ^ Not change.
5. 01:10:670 (3) - it's not easy mapset add note? Not change. Im following the vocals here, and the red node help.
6. 01:34:118 (1) - Not change.
7. 01:35:497 (2,3) - avoid stack 02:38:601 (2,3) - here is KIAI time so it's ok ..mm... i think keep this is better. Stack feels better imo.
8. 01:39:290 (4) - check DS fix
9. 01:38:256 (3,2) - overlap Not changed. Is fine.
10. 02:27:221 (2) - you can be better Fix
11. 02:45:842 (6) - NC done, thanks
12. 02:52:739 (3,4,5,6) - can be better m... looks equal, not changed xD
13. 03:05:152 (1,5) - try blanket ugg, very thanks!!!
14. 03:27:221 (1) - remove NC? like easy nor stack here 03:25:842 (2,1) - Not, for consistency with all diffs.

Faust wrote:

Thanks !

Could insert the album under tags for good measure while you're at that. Suppose "07th Expansion" could fit in as well.
Other than this, you ought to get rid of the excess OSB file in the folder. Done all


Endless Sky:

Just cosmetic suggestions for you to consider. Note placement fine-tuning and some pattern re-working.
Suggest using slidertick 2 and having a custom tick. I think it'll turn out well enough.

I've done over my personal edit of your difficulty as an easier way for me to make my points across, and owing to the cross-reference function of the Editor it's not too hard at all to apply on a 1 by 1 basis.

http://puu.sh/i6TUy/91055fcbeb.zip

Up till the break in the middle, let me know if you like what you see and if you think they're worth inputting on yours.

This is all I have at this point. Was nice to see the first Higurashi map in a long while.

1. The audiophile me would prefer using a 192kbps/VBR2 mp3
2. Encoded a new mp3 for you from the original source: http://puu.sh/iazZo.mp3 (no offset change offset 3032, -52 from current)
3. metadata confirmation
4. Unused .osb files?

1. 00:14:118 - break start point here
2. 00:41:704 (1) - aesthetics: curve shape can be improved. 3rd point (171,323)
3. 00:58:256 (1) - ^, 3rd point (137, 167)
4. 01:31:359 (1) - http://puu.sh/iaz0t.png
5. rhythm is ok. look for more mods to improve aesthetics, and it should be ready.

1. 00:33:428 (1,2) - aesthetics: this is definitely not spaced correctly.
2. 00:43:084 (3) - aesthetics: keep consistent spacing
3. 00:58:256 (1) - rhythm: i suggest adding a repeat for that piano. you will have to rearrange the next objects though.
4. 01:00:670 - rhythm: consider mapping this circle for the vocals.
5. 01:09:290 (1,2,3,4) - aesthetics: watch your spacing
6. 01:24:808 (4) - rhythm/gameplay: i think this can be better as a 1/2 slider + repeat.
7. 01:28:601 (1) - you can safely extend this spinner to 01:30:670.
8. 01:35:152 - strong part of the song, why not map this circle
9. 01:35:497 (2,3) - gameplay: i wouldn't suggest stacking because players might push the next object too early (even though it hits 300, it doesn't really feel like a nice 300)
10. 01:50:670 (1,2) - aesthetics: imperfect blanket. 2nd point (88,46), 3rd point (38,65). then move 01:52:394 (2) - to (88,122).
11. 02:15:152 (1,2) - aesthetics: spacing should be 1.5x.
12. so there's quite some spacing inconsistencies, i suggest going through the map and touching each note with grid snap off.
13. 02:38:601 (2,3) - gameplay: avoid stacking, same reasons as before.
14. 02:49:636 (2,3) - ^
15. rhythm's seems alright, just basically fix up the looks and it's good to go.

1. 03:12:394 (4,5) - aesthetics: fix this blanket :C
2. wow nice. good consistency. can't find anything else obviously wrong in here

1. No major problems with the rhythm. Mostly focusing on the aesthetics in this one, since a beautiful song needs a matching look :p
2. 00:12:394 (5) - i prefer positioning this somewhere else to fit the vocal pitch better. example: http://puu.sh/iavos.png
3. 00:36:187 (1,2) - spacing/aesthetics: should be 1.7x here?
4. 00:38:773 (4,5) - ^
5. 00:39:635 (7,8) - ^
6. 00:41:704 (1,2) - ^, but maybe not since you are blanketing
7. there's quite a number of the spacing inconsistencies (intentional or not, they don't really look neat :C), so i suggest just going through and touching each note with grid snap off.
8. 00:42:739 (3,5) - aesthetics: imperfect blanket. 2nd point (236,121), 3rd point (282,112)
9. 00:45:152 (1,2,3,4) - gameplay: try rearranging so that it's not linear, it can be better.
10. 00:45:497 (3,5) - aesthetics: you also want to avoid this bad overlap with the slider end
11. 00:55:325 (4,5) - aesthetics: imperfect blanket. 2nd point (142,152), 3rd point (106,125)
12. 00:58:083 - rhythm: consider mapping this vocal, and stack it. would feel nicer since you are primarily mapping vocals anyway.
13. 01:02:049 (4,5) - aesthetics: i would prefer just a bit more spacing apart from the slider end
14. 01:14:808 (1) - aesthetics: the curve can be improved. 3rd point (314,136)
15. 01:31:015 - hitsounding: consider adding a point here with 20% volume. hitsound currently feels too loud to me.
16. 01:36:877 (1) - similar to 01:14:808 (1). i'm not a fan of the current shape lol.
17. 01:43:773 (5) - ^ (this one definitely needs some adjusting though)
18. 01:47:911 (1) - ^
19. 01:50:497 (2,3) - aesthetics: hmm, i don't know if you meant to stack these perfectly
20. 01:52:049 (3) - similar to 01:14:808 (1).
21. consider moving the second break starting thingy to 01:53:428
22. 02:26:532 (1) - similar to 01:14:808 (1).
23. 02:32:049 (1) - ^
24. 02:33:428 (2) - ^
25. 02:41:704 (1,2,3) - gameplay/aesthetics: rearrange for an equilateral triangle?
26. 02:46:359 (1) - gameplay/aesthetics: maybe try perfectly centering this between the two sliders.
27. 02:54:118 (1) - similar to 01:14:808 (1).
28. 03:14:118 (3,5) - aesthetics: imperfect blanket. 2nd point (204,276), 3rd point (261,296)
29. see if you can get more mods to improve aesthetics and flow (current flow is actually pretty nice in most parts), and it should be set.

Nekomata wrote:

[General]

1. metadata confirmation Metada has been confirmed already tho
2. Unused .osb files? Deleted
   
   [Easy]
   
   1. 00:14:118 - break start point here Done
   2. 00:41:704 (1) - aesthetics: curve shape can be improved. 3rd point (171,323) Moved a bit
   3. 00:58:256 (1) - ^, 3rd point (137, 167) Moved a bit
   4. 01:31:359 (1) - http://puu.sh/iaz0t.png Nope, I've been using this shape of slider since my first map, I like them
   5. rhythm is ok. look for more mods to improve aesthetics, and it should be ready.
   
   [Endless Sky]
   
   1. No major problems with the rhythm. Mostly focusing on the aesthetics in this one, since a beautiful song needs a matching look :p
   2. 00:12:394 (5) - i prefer positioning this somewhere else to fit the vocal pitch better. example: http://puu.sh/iavos.png Nope
   3. 00:36:187 (1,2) - spacing/aesthetics: should be 1.7x here? Fixed
   4. 00:38:773 (4,5) - ^ Fixed
   5. 00:39:635 (7,8) - ^ Fixed
   6. 00:41:704 (1,2) - ^, but maybe not since you are blanketing Exactly
   7. there's quite a number of the spacing inconsistencies (intentional or not, they don't really look neat :C), so i suggest just going through and touching each note with grid snap off.
   8. 00:42:739 (3,5) - aesthetics: imperfect blanket. 2nd point (236,121), 3rd point (282,112) Fixed
   9. 00:45:152 (1,2,3,4) - gameplay: try rearranging so that it's not linear, it can be better. I disagree, voice is very linear. constant, the only difference is at the end on the voice.
   10. 00:45:497 (3,5) - aesthetics: you also want to avoid this bad overlap with the slider end
   11. 00:55:325 (4,5) - aesthetics: imperfect blanket. 2nd point (142,152), 3rd point (106,125) Fixed
   12. 00:58:083 - rhythm: consider mapping this vocal, and stack it. would feel nicer since you are primarily mapping vocals anyway. Nope, I'm clearly undermapping this part to make it simple before the chorus
   13. 01:02:049 (4,5) - aesthetics: i would prefer just a bit more spacing apart from the slider end Fixed
   14. 01:14:808 (1) - aesthetics: the curve can be improved. 3rd point (314,136) Fixed
   15. 01:31:015 - hitsounding: consider adding a point here with 20% volume. hitsound currently feels too loud to me. added
   16. 01:36:877 (1) - similar to 01:14:808 (1). i'm not a fan of the current shape lol. I see no problem
   17. 01:43:773 (5) - ^ (this one definitely needs some adjusting though) Changed
   18. 01:47:911 (1) - ^ I don't see it sorry.
   19. 01:50:497 (2,3) - aesthetics: hmm, i don't know if you meant to stack these perfectly Fixed
   20. 01:52:049 (3) - similar to 01:14:808 (1). Fixed
   21. consider moving the second break starting thingy to 01:53:428 it was there tho lol, I wonder what happened.
   22. 02:26:532 (1) - similar to 01:14:808 (1). Changed shape
   23. 02:32:049 (1) - ^ Changed
   24. 02:33:428 (2) - ^ Changed
   25. 02:41:704 (1,2,3) - gameplay/aesthetics: rearrange for an equilateral triangle? lol
   26. 02:46:359 (1) - gameplay/aesthetics: maybe try perfectly centering this between the two sliders. Fixed
   27. 02:54:118 (1) - similar to 01:14:808 (1). Changed
   28. 03:14:118 (3,5) - aesthetics: imperfect blanket. 2nd point (204,276), 3rd point (261,296) Fixed
   29. see if you can get more mods to improve aesthetics and flow (current flow is actually pretty nice in most parts), and it should be set. I'm not fond of Aesthethics changes tho, While I agree some sliders did need the reshape (the ones I changed), if the map plays nice, I don't see the need of things to be moved out of the mapper point of view to fit "aesthetic"

hope this helps.
nice song, and good luck