shadow_neko wrote:

hi here from your m4m queue :>
NORMAL:
00:47:108 (1) - i would suggest removing this and putting a slider from 00:46:874 to 00:47:108 and reversing the slider instead This is so strange to see a slider starting on a 1/2 tick, also i wan to kee a 2/1 distance with the spinner in order to avoid unrankable issue.
01:07:499 (1) and 01:07:733 (2) - not timed to anything. i would suggest you out a tap at 01:07:968 so that these 3 taps will be mapped to the 'i wanna' Nope i want to respect the scc i mostly did on my map, and it's not 'i wanna' but 'owara' xD
01:09:608 (2) - suggest removing eh? There's a clap here and the 1/1 distance is important too Oo
01:14:530 (2) and 01:14:765 (3) - suggest removing coz overmapping Nope it isn't
01:15:233 (1) - do change this to like maybe reverse slider then slider slider tap(?) idk but do change it coz not mapped to anything It is but i changed to a circle then 1/1 slider, it'll focus on vocals then vocals plus battery, i won't extend further the slider since there's a spinner after.
01:20:390 (1) - extend spinner to end at 01:23:202 Ok ok
01:26:718 - add a tap here so it is mapped to the 'kokoro', nope, I want to respect breaks, and the fact i used scc x2 (meaning slider circle circle) on this section.
01:35:155 - add tap here as well Too much circles in a row. :<
HARD:
01:02:577 (5) - i suggest removing this? Why removing on the white tick Mapping on the white tick? it is where the note have to be first, not overmapping. OoOo
01:03:515 (8) - remove this too i would suggest ^
01:06:327 (3) - hm remove this ^
01:07:265 (6) - and remove this too ^
01:22:265 (1) - this should end at 01:23:202 instead Fixed
01:25:077 (5) - remove this ^
01:26:015 (8) - remove this as well ^
p.s basically all the removes are because its quite overmapping? but the timing is not wrong they are just suggestions actually. up to you to follow No really changes else the spinner, but i've modified the NC since there's some disorder with insane and normal.
INSANE:
01:02:577 (5) - i would recommend changing this to start at 01:02:460 and end at 01:02:577 follows the 'growing up' better / an alternative would be to just put a tap at 01:02:460 The second advise is better and more flexible, and it's not 'growing' but 'blowing' xD
01:03:280 (8) - shorten the slider to end at 01:03:397 Well i prefer not follow the vocals and finish on a white tick.
01:06:093 (3) - shorten the slider to end at 01:06:210 ^
01:07:031 (6) - shorten the slider to end at 01:07:147 ^
01:22:265 (1) - spinner should end at 01:23:202 ofc

OK thats all well actually most of the things are just suggestions to prevent overmapping really so up t you to follow or not because well most ranked maps are slightly overmapped anyway hope i was of help and the spinner you should slow down song speed to listen carefully it is one whole beat long :> ok good luck with your map ^^

Aldwych wrote:

Hi neko! o/

shadow_neko wrote:

hi here from your m4m queue :>
NORMAL:
00:47:108 (1) - i would suggest removing this and putting a slider from 00:46:874 to 00:47:108 and reversing the slider instead This is so strange to see a slider starting on a 1/2 tick, also i wan to kee a 2/1 distance with the spinner in order to avoid unrankable issue.
01:07:499 (1) and 01:07:733 (2) - not timed to anything. i would suggest you out a tap at 01:07:968 so that these 3 taps will be mapped to the 'i wanna' Nope i want to respect the scc i mostly did on my map, and it's not 'i wanna' but 'owara' xD
01:09:608 (2) - suggest removing eh? There's a clap here and the 1/1 distance is important too Oo
01:14:530 (2) and 01:14:765 (3) - suggest removing coz overmapping Nope it isn't
01:15:233 (1) - do change this to like maybe reverse slider then slider slider tap(?) idk but do change it coz not mapped to anything It is but i changed to a circle then 1/1 slider, it'll focus on vocals then vocals plus battery, i won't extend further the slider since there's a spinner after.
01:20:390 (1) - extend spinner to end at 01:23:202 Ok ok
01:26:718 - add a tap here so it is mapped to the 'kokoro', nope, I want to respect breaks, and the fact i used scc x2 (meaning slider circle circle) on this section.
01:35:155 - add tap here as well Too much circles in a row. :<
HARD:
01:02:577 (5) - i suggest removing this? Why removing on the white tick Mapping on the white tick? it is where the note have to be first, not overmapping. OoOo
01:03:515 (8) - remove this too i would suggest ^
01:06:327 (3) - hm remove this ^
01:07:265 (6) - and remove this too ^
01:22:265 (1) - this should end at 01:23:202 instead Fixed
01:25:077 (5) - remove this ^
01:26:015 (8) - remove this as well ^
p.s basically all the removes are because its quite overmapping? but the timing is not wrong they are just suggestions actually. up to you to follow No really changes else the spinner, but i've modified the NC since there's some disorder with insane and normal.
INSANE:
01:02:577 (5) - i would recommend changing this to start at 01:02:460 and end at 01:02:577 follows the 'growing up' better / an alternative would be to just put a tap at 01:02:460 The second advise is better and more flexible, and it's not 'growing' but 'blowing' xD
01:03:280 (8) - shorten the slider to end at 01:03:397 Well i prefer not follow the vocals and finish on a white tick.
01:06:093 (3) - shorten the slider to end at 01:06:210 ^
01:07:031 (6) - shorten the slider to end at 01:07:147 ^
01:22:265 (1) - spinner should end at 01:23:202 ofc

OK thats all well actually most of the things are just suggestions to prevent overmapping really so up t you to follow or not because well most ranked maps are slightly overmapped anyway hope i was of help and the spinner you should slow down song speed to listen carefully it is one whole beat long :> ok good luck with your map ^^

Be carefull about overmapping -> Notes when it's unecessary. But also consider when mapping that you don't follow evrytime the vocals but also the battery, of any instrumental like the bass the guitar, the piano etc..

Anyway, due to some changes and for the effort, take your cookie
I'm gonna look further on your map

Neil Watts wrote:

hi sandwych :>

[General]
- Lien de la vidéo sans l'audio Arigato
http://puu.sh/h1yJn/1b0bea1a82.avi
A compresser cependant, certains mappeurs de TV Size (ou autres maps avec des vidéos) devraient savoir comment s'y prendre (Lach selon la description de cette map par exemple) Yep je vais voir ce que je peux faire
- 00:46:874 - Augmente le son des hitsounds ? à 30% alors, ca fait trop sinon.
- 01:18:515 - et 01:20:390 - ça m'étonnerait fort que ces fontaines de rythme soient rankables :^)
Et je trouve que ça fit mal à la musique, qui n'atteint pas non plus des seuils extrêmes qui mérites d'être marqués avec un ninja kiai.

Je me doutais bien qu'on allait me faire pointer ces kiai, pour l'instant je les gardes car j'y tiens, et avec la vidéo ca correspond bien imo. Keep notice.

[Normal]
- 00:28:358 (1) - Retire la reverse arrow et déplace le (2) en conséquence ? Le probmème est que c'est le seul 1/2 de la section, c'est peu bizzare non?
- 01:37:733 (1) - mute la fin ? Yep, j'ai meme réduit le volume général du spinner.

Also added finisher on the last note, dunno why it didn't got.

[Hard]
- 01:15:702 (6,7,8) - ce (8), si tu pouvais le ctrl+g et arranger les éléments autour ça serait pas mal, ton pattern est un peu contre nature imo . Hmm disons que je ne veux pas modifier le pattern suivant, j'y tiens, ctrl-g le 8 serait tros confus, la seule chose qui rendrait le tout plus logique est de ctrl-g le (7), le flow reste correct et on est pas surpris par le ctrl-g du 8 vu qu'il y a un peu d'overlapp.
- 01:20:390 (1,2,3,4) - wow, hard ces jumps, il faudrait peut-être les resserrer un peu. C'est ce que je me disais, fixed. Par contre ne te fie pas trop au DS, c'est juste que le stream finit sur la partie exterieur, sans ca le DS est d'1,80.

Also fixed some NC issues.

[Insane]
- 01:03:749 (10) - NC Je l'ai pas fait en hard et normale, donc je vous pas pourquoi.
- 01:07:499 (7) - NC ^ Je fais 1 NC tout les 8/1
- 01:11:015 (9) - NC ^
- 01:12:421 (4,5,6,7,8) - un poil overmappé ici, on n'a pas le même rythme que 01:10:311 (4,5,6,7,8) - si tu mappes bien les vocals Pas tant que ca, c'est vrai que au vu des hitsound je l'ai simplifié à la batterie, mais si on y va pas par pas on a :

- 7 & 8 Batterie
- 9 Vocals
- 10 & 11 Batterie
- 12 Vocals
- 13 & 14 Batterie

Bon entre temps y'a aussi un peu de vocals, mais ca serait pour moi trop confus de faire plusieurs rythmes, le mieux est de simplifier, plus c'est simple moins ca risque de whiner pour je ne sais quoi et du DQ par la meme occasion.

- 01:14:999 (5) - NC ^
^A répéter sur le kiai ^
(j'aime pas suggérer des NC d'habitude, ça fait nazi, mais évite d'excéder 10 combos, sauf en cas de streams) Bon je t'avoue que mon replay est aussi nazi, mais j'aime pas faire une surabondance de NC aussi, je reste d'accord que ca va loin, keep notice.
- 01:37:265 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - c'est bien tout ça, mais ça serait bien de conserver les mêmes distances, en particulier ici 01:37:733 (7,8) -

J'ai fix pour le 6->7 mais le reste est correct, le tout est a 1.0, entre le 7 & 8, c'est du 1/2, pour les deux sliders, imo osef, ca empêche pas la playabilité, ca va pas faire combo break le mec et ca m'évite un overlapp idiot.

Désolé pour le mod pauvre, mais je ne vois pas vraiment d'autres problèmes sur la map. Np tkt pas ^^
C'est jouable et relativement fluide, le soundmapping est assez riche en hitsounds, bref, c'est bien mappé

Bon courage pour le rank!

1. that retro BG
   you should either stick with 1366 x 768 or 1024 x 768, those are the proper osu! dimensions. (i would find a new bg in general tbh)
2. honestly u need a better mp3
3. your HS volumes make no sense to me lol, you're always fluctuating from 30-50% with no reason at all
   00:48:866 - why is it 50 here? 00:48:983 - why back to 30??
   
   also it makes no sense that this section 00:46:874 - should be so much quieter than 00:31:640 -
   and the kiai is way too quiet, i would even use 60%

1. i would honestly try to NC more often. maybe every 1 measure
2. 00:46:874 (1,2) - i would try to center this more since it's only 1/2 a beat after the spinner
3. 00:54:140 - drum finish here?
4. 00:50:741 (2,8) - i can't comprehend what you're trying to follow with these overmaps here but maybe itll be better with a higher quality mp3
5. 01:22:265 (1) - honestly the spinner is rather short

1. 00:28:593 (3,5) - maybe throw in a few NCs to make it easier to read
2. 00:44:765 (1,1) - hard diff needs 1 beat of spinner recovery.
3. 01:00:702 (5,6,7,8,9) - i would use 1/4 repeats here instead, to make the spread better. you already have plenty of triplets in this diff
4. same nc as insane
5. 01:08:202 (11,12) - too much for a hard diff, pls space normally
   01:20:390 (1,2,3,4) - ^
6. 01:12:186 (11,12) - can u just use repeats :X
7. 01:22:265 (1) - same concern as insane
8. 01:38:319 (7) - end unsnapped
   01:37:968 (6) - ^
   be sure to re copy paste, although idk why u would copy paste for a tv size ..;

1. why the heck r u NCing more often on a normal diff compared to hard and insane lol?!

Kibbleru wrote:

general

1. that retro BG that retro BG too https://osu.ppy.sh/s/169410 , not changing
   you should either stick with 1366 x 768 or 1024 x 768, those are the proper osu! dimensions. Fixed. (i would find a new bg in general tbh) Nope, the bg fit the opening.
2. honestly u need a better mp3 Why? Explain. Imo the quality is good enough.
3. your HS volumes make no sense to me lol, you're always fluctuating from 30-50% with no reason at all
   00:48:866 - why is it 50 here? 00:48:983 - why back to 30?? It is, i advise you to listen to the music without mapping, here there's a noticable sound i want to mention and at 30% my whitsles won't have the same effect, noting more nothing less.
   
   also it makes no sense that this section 00:46:874 - should be so much quieter than 00:31:640 -
   and the kiai is way too quiet, i would even use 60%

insane

1. i would honestly try to NC more often. maybe every 1 measure Well neil said it too, i think i've no choice now.
2. 00:46:874 (1,2) - i would try to center this more since it's only 1/2 a beat after the spinner Fixed Deleted the first circle and updated the timing sections. I want to keep the pattern
3. 00:54:140 - drum finish here? Yea but i prefer on soft, since i found the clap more inportant, making a drum addition will delete the clap sound. Added finish hitsound thoo.
4. 00:50:741 (2,8) - i can't comprehend what you're trying to follow with these overmaps here but maybe itll be better with a higher quality mp3 Said earlier there's a synthe sound here, and i want people to notice it by the whitsle and hitsound volume sound. So no it's not overmapping for me.
5. 01:22:265 (1) - honestly the spinner is rather short Keep noticing it, but it's not a rankable issue tho.

hard

1. 00:28:593 (3,5) - maybe throw in a few NCs to make it easier to read Well i fixed the NC for both diff and get evry quarter now.
2. 00:44:765 (1,1) - hard diff needs 1 beat of spinner recovery. Oups, deleted the circle.
3. 01:00:702 (5,6,7,8,9) - i would use 1/4 repeats here instead, to make the spread better. you already have plenty of triplets in this diff Accepted for the spread since i did stream on insane too.
4. same nc as insane ofc m8
5. 01:08:202 (11,12) - too much for a hard diff, pls space normally Fixed.
   01:20:390 (1,2,3,4) - ^ Ok but I cannot do more now
6. 01:12:186 (11,12) - can u just use repeats :X No, i did the same on Paladin and Uprise, this is my mapping style
7. 01:22:265 (1) - same concern as insane ^
8. 01:38:319 (7) - end unsnapped Ooops
   01:37:968 (6) - ^
   be sure to re copy paste, although idk why u would copy paste for a tv size ..;

normal

1. why the heck r u NCing more often on a normal diff compared to hard and insane lol?! Well fixed now

Pilesos wrote:

Hi Aldwych!

Mod because of being a DC map <3

DISCLAIMER I am a noob when it comes to modding. If you think a suggestion does not fit in your opinion do not change it. :3

Mod:

General suggestions:

- Lots of drumming hitsounds - not sure if I am a fan of those. Well i tried to do something new and interesting, and a fund the drum fits well the music. But i know it's not in our habits too see this kind of hitsound.

- I would pick a mp3 that does not contain the anime. As much as I love conan's voice I do not think it should be in there. Maybe pick this one

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4wsAlls6V_M

Well you're not the only one who said that so i'm keep noticing, on your mp3 yes we don't have the begning vocals and ending, but we don't have the last finish too, also i prefer the actual voice (my personnal opinion), i'm gonna search and "may" change.

Hard:

01:12:187 - This kinda feels like a weird pattern on a hard diff. I would change it. After some test, i don't like a single reverse 1/4 slider, it doesn't correspond with the music, also i did this kind of pattern on my Paladin's & Uprise's Hard. But because your weren't the only one i'll gonna change a 1/4 slider + another reversed one, at least player won't care about the accuracy, but i won't do more here.

01:34:659 - Same as above


Plays really nicely all around though. Thanks :>

Normal:

This normal feels more like a hard diff. It is not a map for newcomers. Maybe with a map like this you want to have an easier normal or maybe map an easy diff. It'a 1.8 stars, it's far far away of the hard maps, i used few 1/2 patterns plus the bpm is low. And i don't like easy diff D:

e.g. this pattern 01:30:270 - That's not that easy pattern to play for a newbie imo ->feels almost like a hard diff with low ar. Keeping it, it's not that hard imo, i used to do this kind of pattern on normal without problems (i'm not talking about playing but mapping ofc).

Insane:

00:50:741 (2,8) - I have to agree with the other modders I cannot figure an extra sound there that would fit with these inner circles. Even if I listen to other mp3s . Ok so, for the number 2 after checking yes i agree and it's deleted for the second one, i won't delete it since there's a sound. But for the logic, i change in a 2 sliders like 00:48:515, i think the triplet hides a bit the sound i want to point. So updated now.

01:19:452 (3) - I would replace the spinner with a kickslider. What is a kickslider? D: If it's a 1/8 slider then no, for the sake of taiko no. D:

01:40:077 (1) - I would put that last circle in the middle. I know that you wanted the circle to be in the middle of that stream but it kinda does not feel right. Ok, it's not like people will notice the middle of this stream but more the screen.

That's it and good luck! Hopefully I can get in some ranked scores soon

• Consider making the circle size large by changing it from 4 to something like 3, maybe? Note that this will cause the difficulty to drop from 1.80 to 1.72. Of course you can always change to something in between 3 and 4 if you feel 3 is too large

• Consider making them slightly louder? Nothing too overpowering of course

• You can try deleting the (6) and make the five a repeat slider; I was messing around with this and I think this flows better (click the box below for an image of what I'm talking about)
  
  SPOILER

  Something like this maybe? Again you don't have to do this, but it might help with the flow of the song. Try it out for yourself if you need to
  
  Before
  
  
  
  After
  
  

• Maybe you can shorten the distance between the notes by a bit?

Doormat wrote:

Hello there, my first stop from my queue victim list requests

General

- Overall, I think the maps are well done.

- Gah I like what you did with the hitsounds! It fits the music really well. Thank yoouuuu i'm glad to see some people like it! \:D/

Normal

- It plays well, but the circle size might be a little bit too small for normal.

• Consider making the circle size large by changing it from 4 to something like 3, maybe? Note that this will cause the difficulty to drop from 1.80 to 1.72. Of course you can always change to something in between 3 and 4 if you feel 3 is too large

Well why not since both hard and insane got 4 CS. I'm reducing to 3.5 because i don't want to get overlapps (well get got but here is not so noticable).

Hard

Overall it feels solid, although there are some points of interest..

- The hitsounds from 00:47:108 to 00:53:905 are rather quiet.

• Consider making them slightly louder? Nothing too overpowering of course

Imo it's quite ok for me, because as you saw i increase after, so i've too increase both of the section since i the music sounds up too. Also i've to spam the clap of both section, increase the volume would make the annoying, i just want to use them as a complement

- 01:12:186 (5, 6) This feels really iffy. The transition from the 5 to the 6 feels very rushed and doesn't flow well with the rest of the song, in my opinion. same problem at 01:34:686(5, 6)

• You can try deleting the (6) and make the five a repeat slider; I was messing around with this and I think this flows better (click the box below for an image of what I'm talking about)
  
  SPOILER

  Something like this maybe? Again you don't have to do this, but it might help with the flow of the song. Try it out for yourself if you need to
  
  Ok you're not the only one who pointed out this section so i'm aware, but as i said earlier i don't want to make a full single reverse slider, it doesn't fit the music. This pattern give a bit chalenge to the player without thinking of the accurancy.
  
  Before
  
  
  
  After
  
  

Insane

- Similarly to Hard, the hitsounds from 00:47:108 to 00:53:905 are rather quiet. Bla, this kind of point, you can do this on general since it's for both 3 diffs.

- Your streams and bursts during the second part of the chorus (1:24:140 to 1:40:077) have rather large gaps in between the notes. 01:32:694(4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9), for instance.

• Maybe you can shorten the distance between the notes by a bit?

It's because i increased the SV, but i consider this if i'll reduce the DS after. Keep notice.

Well, that's about all I can do for ya. Hopefully it helps you out

NewIpas wrote:

Hello~
From my Queue~
Let's Start :>

General

1. Try to cut the mp3 from 01:39:843 - because the end of this song is useless Meeeehhh it's so swag with the score resume! D:

Normal

1. 00:18:280 (3,3) - It feels awkward since its starts on the low sound and ended by a strong beat .-. Prefer to change the pattern like this :
   
   SPOILER

   Well... nope, i don't want to do 1/2 on the first section and you pattern is not consistent, i mean with what i did, everybody knows what i follow. Your suggestion follow nothing in particular, "first the synthe then let's take the battery in passage wth a slider even if we don't care about the slider rolling sound" that's not how my diff works. :< The argue were more valuable if you did a slider - circle - slider, the battery will be great representative here no, but the fact i don't want 1/2 pattern on the first section were my second argument.

Hard

1. 00:36:561 (3,4) - Emphasis with these two is okay but I prefer to use circle instead a head of slider at strong beat . It will fits more better . You could try to use this pattern : Well the same argue as on normal, also i would like you to notice the back sounds, they're perfect for slider rolling sound, making slider between them aren't really comprehensible. :<
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:12:186 (5,6) - I guess this note placement is a bit bad . Try to move up one of them to somewhere Oups, fixed
3. 01:34:686 (5,6) - Same as above

Insane

1. 00:18:280 (4,1) - Like what I said before, try to emphasis the strong beat with circle instead a head of slider . You can take a look on your map, I think there is some of them that used to be wrong Same argue blablabla, but i've deleted the reverse for a circle.
2. Its all fine, just same issues like I said above

That's all from me :3
Good Luck~

1. maybe you can cut the end of mp3 a bit if you didn't plan to map that part it kinda feel redundant somehow

1. 01:00:468 (3,4) - transition here is kinda awkward imo , would be better if you place note like this
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:02:225 (3) - I think rhythm here would sound better if you delete this beat , the sound in music is not really noticable that much so I guess it's okay to leave this beat empty
   
   mhmh...not really a fan of those high 1/4 spacing in 2nd kiai I don't know tho why I find this things on almost every low bpm songs , I'd prefer to lower 1/4 spacing and focus more on jumps imo

1. 00:42:421 (4,1,2) - why not make spacing here consistent just like 00:41:015 (1,2,3) - this part can make players think you doing 1/1 spacing when they are playing this imo also this beat 00:43:124 - not really worth increase spacing tho
2. 00:48:046 (3,4,1) - why high spacing on calm part here? better lower spacing here like what you did here 00:53:202 (3,4,5) - so player will not feel like wtf
3. 01:12:186 (5,6) - you can try something like this so it a bit looks more clean , overlap is just not really good here
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:34:686 (5,6) - similiar to what I said above

1. 00:48:046 - feel a bit weird that you skip this beat , try this rhythm ?
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:24:843 (2) - move this note slightly up a bit to around x292 y160 so flow here 01:24:140 (1,2,3) - will be better a bit imo

CelsiusLK wrote:

from my q

[general]

1. maybe you can cut the end of mp3 a bit if you didn't plan to map that part it kinda feel redundant somehow Hmmmm... I will talk with some QAT or the unrankability of this, because i like this 10 secs on the score page, plus i've to cut both mp3 and video and i don't know how to do for the video (o'm afraid to increase the video size too haha)
   
   Edit : I've talk to shiro (ex qat), and he says that's it ok (not an unrankable issue) since i'm using 80% of the mp3. I'm gonna go further with others qat too

[insane]

1. 01:00:468 (3,4) - transition here is kinda awkward imo , would be better if you place note like this
   SPOILER

   Hmm.... ok why not but more on the left so in order to align 2 - 3 - 4 circle.
2. 01:02:225 (3) - I think rhythm here would sound better if you delete this beat , the sound in music is not really noticable that much so I guess it's okay to leave this beat empty I agree too because i do ccs pattern after.
   
   mhmh...not really a fan of those high 1/4 spacing in 2nd kiai I don't know tho why I find this things on almost every low bpm songs , I'd prefer to lower 1/4 spacing and focus more on jumps imo Well i don't know your mapping style, maybe you're mapping high bpm or low ones, usually i don't map high bpm and maybe we do short DS strams. Here the spacing is high coz of the SV, but maybe you're right, maybe i should have done this with 0.8 DS, maybe not. But i think it's ok since it's a TV size so people can retry it (not like dragonforce haha).

[hard]

1. 00:42:421 (4,1,2) - why not make spacing here consistent just like 00:41:015 (1,2,3) - this part can make players think you doing 1/1 spacing when they are playing this imo also this beat 00:43:124 - not really worth increase spacing tho Yep you right, fixed, nb : The stacking on reverse is normal and i think it's ok since people have the time to notice it.
2. 00:48:046 (3,4,1) - why high spacing on calm part here? better lower spacing here like what you did here 00:53:202 (3,4,5) - so player will not feel like wtf Ok since there's no noticable sound on the music here to do so, fixed.
3. 01:12:186 (5,6) - you can try something like this so it a bit looks more clean , overlap is just not really good here
   SPOILER

   
   Ok i tried, fixed. I've also move the next one in order to not have a jump
4. 01:34:686 (5,6) - similiar to what I said above ofc

[normal]

1. 00:48:046 - feel a bit weird that you skip this beat , try this rhythm ?
   SPOILER

   
   Yep, fixed too.
2. 01:24:843 (2) - move this note slightly up a bit to around x292 y160 so flow here 01:24:140 (1,2,3) - will be better a bit imo Yep and move the next one to 352;124, the DS were fuk up he we only move this one.

good luck

1. have an audio data in the video. must remove that.
   

   Ranking Criteria wrote:

   The video's audio track must be removed from the video file. The audio track in video is not used in osu!, so removing it reduces that filesize of the beatmap.

1. 00:39:608 (2) - Dunno why there whistler in begin, I see other diff's is Finish + clap, I would like if you make consistency other diff's, this should remove whistle and add finish + clap to consistency other diff's
2. 00:41:015 (1) - remove whistle and add finish for keep consistency other diff's
3. 00:41:483 (2) - add finish in end, same explain before, the rhythm is there not objects
4. 00:49:921 (2) - in begin add whistle
5. 00:58:358 (1) - add whistle
6. 00:52:733 (1) - in end add whistle
7. 01:15:702 (2) - dunno why you didn't add finish in begin and end, the rhythm is there, the beat is high...

1. 00:24:608 (2) - missing add whistle in begin
2. 01:15:702 (3,4,5) - i head, all beats strong is there, you wouldn't add finish in end all sliders ? like insane? that make sense IMO

1. 00:39:608 (1) - in begin, missing add finish
2. 00:42:421 (5) - ^ same
3. 01:36:796 (4) - clap isn't should be in begin ?

-Nanaka- wrote:

1. have an audio data in the video. must remove that.
   

   Ranking Criteria wrote:

   The video's audio track must be removed from the video file. The audio track in video is not used in osu!, so removing it reduces that filesize of the beatmap.

Ehh? I though i've deleted it! T_T, thanks to mention it. I'm gonna fix it.

MetaDate try this
Artist : 倉木麻衣 Accepted, i've see this metadata on some of kuraki mai maps. For the source, i'm sorry i don't have a japanese keyboard T_T, and i'm not sure it as to be in japanse, some people do this, others go for Detective Conan or Meitantei Conan, but because english is the international language i'm gonna keep it like this


add tags : Opening Ok why not.

Pereira006 wrote:

[Normal]

Hitsound:

1. 00:39:608 (2) - Dunno why there whistler in begin, I see other diff's is Finish + clap, I would like if you make consistency other diff's, this should remove whistle and add finish + clap to consistency other diff's
2. 00:41:015 (1) - remove whistle and add finish for keep consistency other diff's Yep for both, i think when i made the normal i followed the vocals for hitsounds and not what i did on the other diffs.
3. 00:41:483 (2) - add finish in end, same explain before, the rhythm is there not objects Yep sorry
4. 00:49:921 (2) - in begin add whistle I've also noticed this one long time ago, but because this was the only whistle of the section (because the others are on 1/4 ticks) i would be weird, but ok.
5. 00:58:358 (1) - add whistle Nope, if you hear it carefully, it's 1/4 earlier, and not on white ticks, sorry. :<
6. 00:52:733 (1) - in end add whistle Added
7. 01:15:702 (2) - dunno why you didn't add finish in begin and end, the rhythm is there, the beat is high... Well... lol.

I would do like see, if you make this hitsound consistency other diff's, I see there lot missing and different, some not sense and some the rhythm is still here Uhhh i don't understand what are you saying! D:

[Hard]

Hitsound:

1. 00:24:608 (2) - missing add whistle in begin Ups
2. 01:15:702 (3,4,5) - i head, all beats strong is there, you wouldn't add finish in end all sliders ? like insane? that make sense IMO Yep you right, sound good with the music, agree.

the kiais, first and second, that finish like 01:02:108 (3,6) - 01:05:858 (3,6) - and many more, why finish in red tick ? I don't feel there no beat strong, I like more Hitsound in Insane. I would like to see this consistency iin insane, in red tick, i don't feel better Mhhhh... i'm sorry i didn't understand fully what you want to say, i might recontact for you.

[Insane]

hitsound:

1. 00:39:608 (1) - in begin, missing add finish Yep fixed.
2. 00:42:421 (5) - ^ same Yep ²
3. 01:36:796 (4) - clap isn't should be in begin ? Hmmm i've made some tests and you know on the end you got a noticable note similar with the next ones, so make a clap here is better i follow the music, ofc i know that normaly it's on white ticks, but i found it weird to put it on the begning, it doesn't fit how the music is. :/ So the whistles are here to compensate the missing of clap here and help the player by following the vocals and not the battery which is lacking here. We can discuss about that again if you want and still disagree (coz i don't want a DQ for that lol) Oh, nvm i'll gona have some problem with other diff if i don't do that, but i might reecontact you for this.

The gameplays look good, my main problem is hitsound I would like to see more opinion, The insane hitsound is more better than Hard and normal. Normal hitsound, is huge different with hard and insane, some missing and different. Hard, dunno why all finish is 1/2 (red tick) in kiais, should 1/1 like insane. Should be try more consistency because the rhythm is there not because objects
also The video have song, remove Yep it has been said above, i'm gonna fix it, thanks to mention it too.
Ask me if you don't understand my english or reason
Good luck

1. Anime アニメ isn't needed in tags

1. 00:49:452 (3,4,1) - the spacing is really big here when the music is relatively silent
2. 01:11:483 (2,3,4,5,6) - 01:33:983 (2,3,4,5,6) - this pattern is quite difficult for a hard
3. 01:16:405 (5) - ctrl-G on this would play better I think
4. 01:17:577 (3,4,1) - It's best to use consistent distance spacing here

1. 00:18:046 (4,5) - this transition is awkward because of the changes in momentum
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:18:280 (5,1) - full screen jump is too big to fit music
3. 00:24:608 (1,2,3,1) - 00:39:608 (1,2,3,1) - 3/4 sliders don't work here since there is stuff to follow on the 1/2 ticks
4. 01:01:171 (8) - I think turning this into a slider would fit the music better
5. 01:37:733 (3) - You may want to position this relative to the previous object the same way (2) is relative to (1)

xxdeathx wrote:

sorry been busy
[General]

1. Anime アニメ isn't needed in tags ok

[Normal]
Consider changing new comboing to fit the patterns rather than the measures. It'd look nicer if 01:06:796 (4,1,2) - had the same color, and 01:08:202 (3,1,2) - 01:25:546 (4,1,2) - etc Well i don't like changing my combos, i'd rather keep on measure to get consistency along the diff. But to make it better i changed the pattern and associated rythm.

[Hard]

1. 00:49:452 (3,4,1) - the spacing is really big here when the music is relatively silent Down to 1.20, i wont making more.
2. 01:11:483 (2,3,4,5,6) - 01:33:983 (2,3,4,5,6) - this pattern is quite difficult for a hard It's fine imo, i already did it on hard diff.
3. 01:16:405 (5) - ctrl-G on this would play better I think Nope since the next object is 1/4 after, so that 1/4 would be misinterpreted.
4. 01:17:577 (3,4,1) - It's best to use consistent distance spacing here Paladin pattern.

[Insane]

1. 00:18:046 (4,5) - this transition is awkward because of the changes in momentum You're destrotying the pattern with this. So i prefer stacking the circles instead.
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:18:280 (5,1) - full screen jump is too big to fit music Well ok i changed the previous pattern but not like you did.
3. 00:24:608 (1,2,3,1) - 00:39:608 (1,2,3,1) - 3/4 sliders don't work here since there is stuff to follow on the 1/2 ticks It's fine for me, since i don't want to follow this "stuff" here.
4. 01:01:171 (8) - I think turning this into a slider would fit the music better No because i've nothing to end with. Making a 1/2 slider will be useless
5. 01:37:733 (3) - You may want to position this relative to the previous object the same way (2) is relative to (1) Ang making a jump between a technical pattern and a stream? Not sure if it worth.

Those spaced streams are kinda crazy. NHI spreads only work if the H and I aren't too hard. If you try to, for lack of a better word, spread your 3 difficulty area too thin, there will exist gaps between everything. Between h ard and insane, there are the spaced streams everywhere in kiai. Between normal and hard, the normal is too easy before kiai, mapped with 1/1, while hard is mapped mostly 1/2 and 1/4. Then in kiai, the two circles in a row following sliders are too hard for the lowest difficulty in the mapset. Well many peoples talks about it and i think it's wise to reduce it, i'm gonna change it, for the NH spread i'm keeping the way normal is since it's my mapping style.

Leorda wrote:

Bonjour Halo

[General]
* The difficulty gap between Normal and Hard was too far, because Hard was way too difficult... how about adding Easy diff or make another one to make it balanced? I'll see, because i really hate easy diff.
* Resubmit your map again, because when I download your map, it's including your video without no-video link in your beatmap information Ok 'ill try

[Normal]
00:41:483 (2) - Add finish at repeating slider and remove the end one Ok
00:56:249 (1) - Remove clap here... sudden 1/2 clap wasn't good This is how the music is cannot remove and it doesn't start here but earlier
01:10:077 (3) - Add finish at end slider 'k
01:11:483 (1) - ^ I prefer keeping the vocals as main.
01:16:640 (1,1,1) - 3 spinners in the row isn't good idea for normal diff... please change the pattern... Maybe give some solutions, right now i don't want to get 3 long sliders, it doesn't fit the music, and a break is worse.

[Hard]
00:26:015 (1) - Add whistle at end Ok but no alone, because the vocals are high after so added at 00:27:421 too
00:35:390 (1) - Add finish at start slider No real reason since the main sound here is vocal, not beats.
00:39:140 (1) - ^ Nope, same reason as above and the next finisher will be annoying.
01:22:265 (1) - Short spinners are for insane diff.. so this spinner for this diff isn't good enough. Replace it with slider A slider will braek the flow and don't fit the music, also i don't want 1/8 on hard (for the sake of taiko), i rather keep a break. To compensate, i slow down the HP and OD by 0.5.

[Insane]
01:23:671 (1) - Change another combo color because it'll blend the default spinner if players use default skin To red so

Good luck then

Peachtrees wrote:

From Couldspash's Q >w</~

Normal

00:27:421 (2) - having this on a tail feels a little bit awkward imo.. I guess having this as a repeat makes it easy to hit, but I feel like making this a 1/2 and then putting a circle on the downbeat would feel a lot less awkward The idea is interesting but this is a bit technical for the easiest diff. I already did this kind of thing on my map Uprise, and JonathanLFG disaprove this pattern on Normal, but on Hard it's quite ok.

00:32:108 (1,2,1) - very minor: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3207527 to have a mure distinct curve feels a little nicer to play Fixed for the position, the cured not, i think too much is not enjoyable to play too.

00:41:483 (2,1) - going to actually nazi out on this blanket because I feel like fixing this really does improve the map visually :c oh and it's easy do fix with no re-arranging so ya Fixed a bit, after this will be pointless.

00:47:108 (1,2) - how about switching these two? feels a lot more natural Nice

00:50:858 (1,2,3) - idk how to word this properly, but the way this is arranged just looks...awkward to me Hmm.. maybe. But i don't fine ways too xD

01:02:343 (2,3) - I think having 3 to the right instead of to the left would feel a lot more natural to play since I'd continue to round-ish movement from the previous slider Fixed but not on the say way we did previously, i would have further problems

01:11:483 (1) - I personally dislike these kinda curves because they look REALLY jagged to me..not smooth at all >< That's your point of view m8! :3

01:26:952 (3,1) - just throwin it out there: one really subtly curved slider into one really curved slider looks a little odd to me, though that might just be me Maybe lol, but because it's not on the same combo, the patterns are not relied.

Hard

00:32:108 (2,3) - blanket between these isnt off or anything, but it looks kinda awkward since like..the distance between both sliders is uneven which makes this look kinda...odd? I don't know, perhaps I'm the only one bothere by this lol Okay okay blanket fixed.

00:40:311 (3,4) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3207610 try this for a nicer flow? Nice

00:43:124 (1,3) - why not stack 3's head on 1 instead of the tail? plays a tad bit nicer I think :c Maybe, but moreover, i think the stack on a reverse is not a good idea for qualif/

00:58:358 (2,4) - stack is off by a little Idc lol

01:02:108 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - I personally feel like these gaps are a little awkward since there's stuff to map and I feel like they're kind of disruptive..your call I guess I'm ok since this is a 1/1 beat gap.

01:11:483 (2,3,4) - why are these jumpy but these 01:10:077 (4,5,6) - aren't? I don't feel like there's a huge difference in how strong the song feels here Keep notice, imo it looks good for me.

01:21:796 (4,1) - isn't it kind of odd to skip these really strong sounds and not have them covered by say another 1/4 repeat? I mean this wasn't a break in the Normal Diff, and so having this Diff less dense here feels a little weird Changed into a spinner i think this will be the best choice.

Insane

00:29:765 (1) - end this 1/2 earlier? feels more natural to me :c And more consistent with hard

00:33:280 (5,1) - aren't these a little close? Mhh.. ok fixed a bit

00:42:890 (7) - NC here? I know that you haven't been putting these on the downbeats, but it actually does feel like the overall tone of the vocals change on this downbeat so it kinda does feel appropriate Looks ugly

01:03:046 (6,7,8) - this feels REALLY REALLY awkward ;-; Fixed (i hope)

01:08:202 (3,4,5) - flow here is a bit meh becuase the movement required to properly catch 5 is a tad bit odd due to how this pattern is arranged It's fine for me imo

01:10:311 (4,5,6,7,8) - stream really neccessary here? I mean, I don't think there's anything special in the song that'd call for a stream Vocals + Beats

01:25:546 (6,7,1) - atlasst line these up properly? this currently looks a bit odd :c Fixed

01:32:694 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - same with this stream, I don't treally think there's anything in the song calling for this :c though that might just be me generally disliking streams heh same

god luck o3o

giantzarz wrote:

From Mod Value Exchange

[Easy]

00:17:577 (2) - Reverse sounds better I don't know what do you mean by reverse, you mean extend the slider by a reverse? If yes, nope, i'm following the Bass sounds. And extend would make 1/2 gap wich is not what i want here

00:21:327 (2) - ^

00:28:358 (1) - No revese sounds better And getting a 2/3 gap? Nope.

00:33:280 (2) - I think is unnecessary because the sound in music is too quiet Really? Nope it is part of the main sounds Oo

00:36:327 (2) - Reverse sounds better blablabla same a first

00:37:733 (1) - 1/4 Reverse like 00:39:608 (2) sounds better than long slider 1/4 reverse? But it's 1/2 Oo, Also no sounds in the middle except vocals are here, a reverse is not necessary.

00:51:561 (2) - I think is unnecessary because the sound in music is too quiet And vocals?

[Hard]

01:02:577 (5) - Unnecessary What? There's battery, the base of a music Oo. Plus a 3/4 spacing will be ugly

01:03:515 (8) - ^

01:06:327 (5) - ^

01:07:265 (8) - ^ for all

01:09:374 (2) - Overlap may cause unreadable It is stacked, not overlapped, the recent updates make the stacked object shifted

01:25:077 (5) - Unnecessary

01:26:015 (8) - ^

01:28:827 (5) - ^

01:29:765 (8) - ^

01:31:874 (2) - Overlap may cause unreadable Same reasons as above

00:48:046 (3,4) - Too big spacing imo Are we in the insane diff? If yes it's ok for me to be done. I don't use play to play osu and i pass its easy

00:57:186 (3,4,5) - ^

01:03:046 (6,7,8) - This doesn't sound good Oké, cool.

01:05:858 (2,3) - ^ Give some examples? By this opinion i don't know what do you think it's the best choice to do

01:06:796 (5,6) - ^ unyu

01:32:343 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Feel like it's sharp angle It's just a blanket of the next slider

Good Luck!

Osuology wrote:

From mod value exchange
[General]
Timing points conflict??? LOL fixed!
file bf is larger than possible Huh? Didn't know what you're talking about

[Hard]
Nothing here.

[Insane]
00:21:561 (5,6,1) - This stack is weird change either the 5's position, or the 6. It's legit since 5 & 6 got the sounds, also the next pattern got 2.40x DS, so i don't want to make tricky moves before.
00:27:890 (1,2,3,4,5) - Have the sliders in the same position maybe? I think it will be more easy than the hard one.
01:10:311 (4,5,6,7,8) - Where does that even come from? VOCALS! dpfiozejfiozehfioghidjdiogxfjklgfiohdfighioghdogjdriogjiodfgdgiodgi
01:12:421 (4,5,6,7,8) - ^ Unyu~!
01:24:140 () - Now the SV is all fast even though before it was fine. Last boss m8! :^)
01:32:694 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Again the overmapped streams. Are you sometimes listen the music at 25%?

Aldwych wrote:

Hi Osulogy! o/

Osuology wrote:

From mod value exchange
[General]
Timing points conflict??? LOL fixed!
file bf is larger than possible Huh? Didn't know what you're talking about I'm talking about the background image being too big,

[Hard]
Nothing here.

[Insane]
00:21:561 (5,6,1) - This stack is weird change either the 5's position, or the 6. It's legit since 5 & 6 got the sounds, also the next pattern got 2.40x DS, so i don't want to make tricky moves before.
00:27:890 (1,2,3,4,5) - Have the sliders in the same position maybe? I think it will be more easy than the hard one.
01:10:311 (4,5,6,7,8) - Where does that even come from? VOCALS! dpfiozejfiozehfioghidjdiogxfjklgfiohdfighioghdogjdriogjiodfgdgiodgi
01:12:421 (4,5,6,7,8) - ^ Unyu~!
01:24:140 () - Now the SV is all fast even though before it was fine. Last boss m8! :^) lol nice
01:32:694 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Again the overmapped streams. Are you sometimes listen the music at 25%?

Yeah, I don't know maybe I just can't hear it

Thanks for the mod due to a fix, cookie given!

Rohit6 wrote:

From mod value exchange queue
[General]
I suggest renaming the Insane diff. as it doesnt fit the mapping style(It feels just like another Hard diff.) Lol nope, ranking criteria

[Insane]
00:18:749 (1,2,3,4,5) - Fix DS Why? Lol nope
00:21:561 (5,6,1) - Move the 6th circle See above why. Lol nope
00:43:358 (1,2,3) - Make a triangular pattern here for aesthetics CHanged because i dislike the way i did, but not maybe yours because i've no example of what you're sayin.
00:50:858 (2,3,4) - You should respect DS m ore imo Why? Lol Nope
01:18:515 (1,2,3) - DS too high than other places And? This isn't an hard diff.
Other things seem fine.
GL in getting this ranked

baraatje123 wrote:

Mod value exchange
God did I wish we (me and cloudsplash) were mutuals

[Normal]
Decrease CS to 3,6 (instead of 3,5), this way the circles wihich are 1/2 away will no longer overlap/touch eachother Ok
00:18:983 (1,2) - These 2 are not the same, if you stack them on (2) with a Ctrl HJ the middle node of (1) is at 382:152, (2)'s is at 381:152 (even though it's 1 pixel of, it feels like more to me Ahlele that feel right in teh kokoro lol
00:22:733 (1,2,3) - Improve the blanket a little, to the end of the slider the approachcircle starts to get closer to the slider Lel this is real nazi. I won't break my mind for 1 pixel
00:24:608 (1) - Try to have the red node exactly on the slidertick, this way it'll feel more emphasized, try 181:345 plz xD
00:25:546 (2,1) - Do the same with ^^ (disable grid snap) yee
00:28:358 (1) - This slider feels off, considering the vocals start in the middle of this slider In a music there's something else BATTERY BETCH! Well this slider is also to make simple this are because 3/2 break are so meh.
00:35:390 (1) - Try to have the red node exactly on the slidertick, this way it'll feel more emphasized, try 210:343 faq! u
00:39:140 (1,2) - Stacks are generally a bad idea to do in normals, (especially when it's the lowest diff in the set) as newbies have a hard time reading it Keeping since the next note is a slider so it's easier to play.
00:41:015 (1,2) - ^^
00:54:608 (2,3) - You know what I'm gonna say right? Please improve the emphasis No
01:08:202 (3) - Red node at 76:143 meh
01:08:202 (3) - Red node at 501:108 Failed on timing but done xD
01:32:577 (2,1) - Improve red nodes nyu

[Hard]
00:19:218 (2,3,4) - blanket can be improved, at 00:19:015 it does blanket (3), but it doesn't blanket (4), try to make it in such way they both get blanketed at the same time, it looks nicerblab Soul destroyed
00:20:390 (1) - Red node on slidertick please nyu*3
00:24:140 (1) - ^^
00:25:546 (4) - ^^
00:25:311 (3,4) - The jump feels a little weird, considering it has 2.1 distance (which is around the double of 1.1), mostly, if you look at 00:21:561 (3,4) - which is the same type of jump, if it would have been 1/2, but it's 1/1 here. Please decrease the distance or make 00:24:608 (2,4) - stack (also solves the problem). Nope it get worse, stack make the end hidden by the slider and it doesnt fit well the stack. Reducing isn't a solution here too.
Oh, you might also want to fix the blanket 00:24:608 (2,3) - LOL
00:40:311 (3,4) - Refer to 00:25:311 (3,4) nya
00:43:358 (2,3) - I think these sliders should start 1/2 later, so the vocals start on the start of the slider, not on a reverse Arrow Fixed but i didn't reduced the spinner, no real reason to do.
00:54:374 (2,3,4) - blanket can be improved, at 00:54:158 it does blanket (3), but it doesn't blanket (4), try to make it in such way they both get blanketed at the same time, it looks nicer zegz
01:12:421 (6) - Slider feels awkward since it doesn't follow vocals, while the rest of this part does follow vocals. Make it 1/4 later, and remove 1 reverse so it follows the vocals better Nope keeping. Battery batch.
01:16:054 (4,5,2) - The overlap doesn't look pretty, move (4) and (5) a little out of the way (or redo (2)) to fix this When playing you won't pay attention.
01:34:686 (5,6) - Slider feels awkward since it doesn't follow vocals, while the rest of this part does follow vocals. Make it 1/4 later, and remove 1 reverse so it follows the vocals better unyu

200;168

[Insane]
00:19:452 (3,5,1) - This blanket needs a lot of improvement, look at 00:19:283 to see it (move objetcs back in time to see them properly) efzefz
00:33:280 (5,3) - Stack them, it'll look better looking at hitbursts Oups
00:43:358 (1) - Doesn't follow vocals, as the vocals start on the end of the slider instead of the start, perhaps make them 2 circles Prefer patten style.
01:01:171 (8) - Why not make this a 3/4 slider (perhaps with silent end) because the iiii~~ is still going on Let's give it a try.
01:20:390 (1,2,3,4) - The sliders look a little ugly cause they are so long, add a few circles (and less sliders), or decrease SV Changed this section
01:37:265 (1,2,3) - This looks ugly, because of the distance between the sliders (1.12 and 0.67) make them both the same, it'll look much better! Fixed

Good luck!!

furywolf wrote:

Hello, from mod value exchange queue.

[Normal]
01:26:483 (1,3) - any reason why the spacing here is different to the rest? Nope
01:40:077 (1) - remove? feels wierd as this is the start of the next section but you didn't map it Wat? No xD

[Hard]
00:27:890 - don't like the partial overlap, try this instead?

SPOILER

Not bad this not ungly but not original for me. :< Keep notice this pattern since i got some argue about my pattern but you didn't mention.
01:15:936 - try this to for more symmetry?

SPOILER

You're breaking the flow i use to create.
01:40:077 (1) - same as normal Unyu

[Insane]
01:00:702 - keep spacing in streams consistent with other streams, it is 1.1 here but 1.0 for 01:10:311, 01:12:421, 01:15:702. Lel k fixed.
01:40:077 (1) - same as normal Unyu

Good luck!