Freda - Maybe (Tronix DJ Remix) (Nightcore Mix) · forum

-Nya-

Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

-Nya- 2015-04-10T17:40:04+00:00

Updated all the diffs.
Fixed everything in Lally's mod except the last two points and also fixed some of goku's hitsounds.

HootOwlStar

762 posts

Joined May 2014

HootOwlStar 2015-04-11T04:37:23+00:00

Hi I'm here for M4M
I maybe will mod Maybe at first but maybe I won't mod Maybe so a lot of maybes for modding Maybe because maybe I will and maybe I won't but lastly maybe I will mod Maybe so I decided to mod Maybe so yeah maybe we can start mod Maybe now :3

General

From 01:09:488 to 01:20:826, how come this is not set as kiai time QAQ
I thought orange and yellow could be used as combo colours idk

Lally's Easy

00:14:927 (2) - Suggestion
00:17:053 (1) - Suggestion. If nt, fix blanket
00:19:887 (1) - Suggestion. View timeline too
00:28:390 (1,2,3,4) - Less curve for the sliders for better flow
From 00:35:476 (1) to 00:43:625 (4) - Move the notes to higher a little bit as 00:41:145 (1) too out of grid
00:41:145 (1,2,3,4) - Seems boxy
00:52:482 (1) - Flow not smooth enough because 00:52:128 (3) seems like bump out. Suggest move point x:36 y:268 to x:8 y:272
00:54:608 (3,1) - Blanket nt perfect so fix
00:59:568 (3,4) - Suggestion so that make beginners ~~survive~~ be able to adapt for notes after
01:02:757 (4) - Suggest make slider curve a little for better flow
From 01:32:163 to 01:39:249 - Should be mapped
01:43:500 (1,1) - Ctrl+J for better flow
02:12:907 (2,3) - Imperfect blanket
02:37:707 (1) - Ctrl+J. I hope you know why I suggest that
02:40:187 (1,2,3) - Imperfect blankets
02:46:210 (2,3) - It would be nice if blanket them perfectly
Mostly suggestions sry for that

Goku's Normal

00:11:384 (1) - Lower slider that slider end will be below 00:12:093 (2) for better flow
00:17:762 (3,4) - Imperfect blanket
00:22:722 (1,2,3) - Imperfect blankets pls fix
00:27:682 (2) - Put red dot in middle of slider (to make it v-shaped)? Just for slider design
00:34:059 - This break should be dragged to 00:35:476
00:46:814 (1,2,1) - Imperfect blankets
00:59:568 (1) - The slider design could be more interesting
01:03:820 (1,2) - Imperfect blanket
01:05:237 (4) - NC as follow the NC pattern you make b4
01:44:563 (1,2) - Imperfect blanket + suggest ctrl+J to make better flow for notes 01:44:917 (2,3,1)
01:45:980 (3,1) - Imperfect blanket
01:50:586 (3) - Move red dot to slider tick
01:52:003 (1,2) - Copy and paste 01:52:003 (1) for slider 01:52:712 (2) and fix imperfect blanket
02:01:569 (2,3,4) - Blanket not perfect yet so fix
02:15:741 (2,3) - ^
02:16:804 (3) - Make white dot become red dot better just for slider design
02:24:598 (3,4) - Suggestion
02:34:518 (1,2) - Blanket not perfect
02:35:581 (2,3) - ^
02:43:021 (5) - NC
02:44:438 (1) - No NC
02:45:856 (3) - NC
02:47:273 (1) - No NC

Maybe

00:11:384 (1,2) - Move them a little bit lower just for better flow
00:15:636 (5,6,1) - Suggestion
01:01:517 (2,3,4) - Unnecessary jump
02:03:164 (4,1,2,3,4,5) - Make it equilateral hexagon seems better
02:12:198 (1) - The NC seems not necessary
02:16:095 (3,1,2,3,4,1) - Seems placed randomly. Place them in regular pentagon seems better
From 02:17:512 to 02:36:998 (2), better NC for every 1 long white tick interval
02:43:376 (1,2,3,4,5) - Fix into regular pentagon
Seems missing note at 02:48:159 and 02:48:513

Sorry for not modding hitsounds because I am really bad in that + mod seems useless
PM me if you hv problems on my mod / confused by my bad English
Hope my mod really helps and good luck for ranking this

-Nya-

2,133 posts

Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

-Nya- 2015-04-11T14:54:29+00:00

HootOwlStar wrote:
Hi I'm here for M4M
I maybe will mod Maybe at first but maybe I won't mod Maybe so a lot of maybes for modding Maybe because maybe I will and maybe I won't but lastly maybe I will mod Maybe so I decided to mod Maybe so yeah maybe we can start mod Maybe now :3

General

From 01:09:488 to 01:20:826, how come this is not set as kiai time QAQ Nah, I don't see that section as kiai time worthy.
I thought orange and yellow could be used as combo colours idk Nah, I like my current colours better.

Maybe

00:11:384 (1,2) - Move them a little bit lower just for better flow No, I don't really think it's necessary.
00:15:636 (5,6,1) - Suggestion Followed your suggestion.
01:01:517 (2,3,4) - Unnecessary jump Hm, I still think it's fine.
02:03:164 (4,1,2,3,4,5) - Make it equilateral hexagon seems better No, I like the flower shape way more.
02:12:198 (1) - The NC seems not necessary Hm, I want 02:11:844 (1) - to be a combo on its own.
02:16:095 (3,1,2,3,4,1) - Seems placed randomly. Place them in regular pentagon seems better They are not placed randomly. They are placed in a flower shape.
From 02:17:512 to 02:36:998 (2), better NC for every 1 long white tick interval Hm, I think my current NC pattern is fine.
02:43:376 (1,2,3,4,5) - Fix into regular pentagon I like the flower shape more
Seems missing note at 02:48:159 and 02:48:513 No, that spaces has to be open.

Sorry for not modding hitsounds because I am really bad in that + mod seems useless
PM me if you hv problems on my mod / confused by my bad English
Hope my mod really helps and good luck for ranking this

Thanks HOS~ I'll get to my mod as soon as possible.

Kyouren

5,584 posts

Joined October 2012

Kyouren 2015-04-11T15:21:13+00:00

HootOwlStar wrote:
Hi I'm here for M4M
I maybe will mod Maybe at first but maybe I won't mod Maybe so a lot of maybes for modding Maybe because maybe I will and maybe I won't but lastly maybe I will mod Maybe so I decided to mod Maybe so yeah maybe we can start mod Maybe now :3

Goku's Normal

00:11:384 (1) - Lower slider that slider end will be below 00:12:093 (2) for better flow. I think that fine because i follow a music and vocal sing!
00:17:762 (3,4) - Imperfect blanket
00:22:722 (1,2,3) - Imperfect blankets pls fix. No! Because that fine!
00:27:682 (2) - Put red dot in middle of slider (to make it v-shaped)? Just for slider design. No!
00:34:059 - This break should be dragged to 00:35:476. Change break to 00:35:476
00:46:814 (1,2,1) - Imperfect blankets. No!
00:59:568 (1) - The slider design could be more interesting. I think i just want use simple slider not hard slider!
01:03:820 (1,2) - Imperfect blanket. No!
01:05:237 (4) - NC as follow the NC pattern you make b4
01:44:563 (1,2) - Imperfect blanket + suggest ctrl+J to make better flow for notes 01:44:917 (2,3,1). Is too hard!
01:45:980 (3,1) - Imperfect blanket
01:50:586 (3) - Move red dot to slider tick. That not have vocal sound, so if i change to red tick, is so ugly :/
01:52:003 (1,2) - Copy and paste 01:52:003 (1) for slider 01:52:712 (2) and fix imperfect blanket
02:01:569 (2,3,4) - Blanket not perfect yet so fix. I think that is fine!
02:15:741 (2,3) - ^. Same!
02:16:804 (3) - Make white dot become red dot better just for slider design. Is white lol!
02:24:598 (3,4) - Suggestion. I think is fine!
02:34:518 (1,2) - Blanket not perfect. I don't remember i blanket that, so no! because that not blanket!
02:35:581 (2,3) - ^. No!
02:43:021 (5) - NC
02:44:438 (1) - No NC
02:45:856 (3) - NC
02:47:273 (1) - No NC

P.S.: Wow, you now is good modded~ :3, maybe i can ask you for mod my map xD

Sorry for not modding hitsounds because I am really bad in that + mod seems useless
PM me if you hv problems on my mod / confused by my bad English
Hope my mod really helps and good luck for ranking this

No Commect = Fixed!
Thanks for mod~ :3, Update!

Here my diff:

Goku's Normal

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Nightcore - Freda - Maybe.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 69843
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.3
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 56734
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 3

[Metadata]
Title:Maybe (Nightcore Mix)
TitleUnicode:Maybe (Nightcore Mix)
Artist:Freda
ArtistUnicode:Freda
Creator:-Nya-
Version:Goku's Normal
Source:
Tags:Lally gokugohan12468
BeatmapID:677558
BeatmapSetID:289235

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,35476,39945
2,81026,90963
2,126375,130644
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
11385,354.291652888658,4,2,12,50,1,0
46814,-100,4,1,11,60,0,1
57797,-100,4,1,11,60,0,0
58151,-100,4,1,11,60,0,1
69488,-100,4,1,11,60,0,0
105095,-100,4,2,12,60,0,0
137512,-100,4,1,11,60,0,1
148495,-100,4,1,11,60,0,0
148850,-100,4,1,11,60,0,1
160187,-100,4,1,11,60,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 192,130,255
Combo2 : 102,179,255
Combo3 : 255,191,255
Combo4 : 145,145,200

[HitObjects]
72,100,11384,6,0,P|116:128|176:112,1,100,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,120,12093,2,0,L|364:120,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,148,12625,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,148,12802,2,0,P|408:216|312:288,1,200,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,224,13865,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,284,14219,6,0,P|82:236|94:143,1,200,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,108,15282,2,0,L|252:108,1,50
276,124,15636,2,0,B|348:200|348:200|332:304,1,200,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,288,16699,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,336,17053,6,0,P|132:292|144:240,1,100,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,196,17585,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,196,17762,2,0,L|240:196,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,280,18470,2,0,P|328:200|268:108,1,200,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,88,19533,2,0,L|108:88,1,50
92,120,19887,6,0,L|40:220,1,100
32,256,20419,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,256,20596,2,0,P|116:264|144:248,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,216,21305,6,0,L|332:216,1,100
316,116,22013,2,0,L|216:116,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,104,22722,6,0,P|16:144|8:244,1,200,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,292,23785,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,352,24139,2,0,P|164:248|92:196,1,200,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,104,25202,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,84,25556,6,0,P|208:96|272:76,1,100
304,72,26088,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,56,26265,2,0,L|432:128,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,224,26973,6,0,L|353:290,1,100
264,332,27682,2,0,L|152:332,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,280,28390,6,0,P|60:232|76:168,2,100,4|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,224,29453,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,240,29808,2,0,P|300:196|260:72,1,200,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,44,30871,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,31225,12,4,34059,0:0:0:0:
256,192,41145,12,4,45396,0:0:0:0:
112,108,46814,6,0,L|216:108,1,100,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,152,47522,2,0,P|308:88|288:48,1,100
208,108,48231,6,0,P|196:160|224:216,2,100
112,76,49294,2,0,L|60:60,1,50
40,104,49648,6,0,P|28:148|48:204,1,100
100,280,50357,2,0,L|208:280,1,100
248,276,50888,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,276,51065,2,0,P|264:212|248:160,1,100
200,96,51774,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,40,52128,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,84,52482,6,0,L|436:176,1,100
480,256,53191,2,0,P|428:268|368:248,1,100
336,244,53722,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,212,53899,6,0,L|232:120,1,100
164,64,54608,2,0,L|52:64,1,100
12,152,55317,6,0,P|8:228|128:276,1,200
204,272,56380,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,284,56734,2,0,P|391:248|398:153,1,200
344,68,57797,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,40,58151,6,0,L|136:40,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,88,58860,2,0,P|48:140|60:188,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,212,59391,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,240,59568,6,0,B|169:251|169:251|337:251,1,200
420,192,60631,2,0,P|420:156|408:132,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,104,60985,6,0,B|335:94|335:94|287:110,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,128,61694,2,0,P|139:139|92:127,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,200,62402,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,276,62757,2,0,P|116:316|180:328,2,100,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,196,63820,6,0,L|256:196,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,148,64528,2,0,P|344:196|328:243,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,288,65060,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,332,65237,6,0,L|172:332,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,316,65945,1,0,0:0:0:0:
52,220,66300,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,156,66654,6,0,L|128:40,2,100,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,224,67717,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,220,68071,2,0,P|364:192|288:116,1,200
204,80,69134,1,8,0:0:0:0:
108,108,69488,6,0,P|60:122|12:109,2,100,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,180,70551,2,8,L|116:276,2,100,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,160,71614,2,8,P|324:150|365:176,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,260,72323,6,8,L|476:352,2,100,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,296,73386,2,8,P|316:248|340:196,2,100,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,348,74448,2,8,L|136:348,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,300,75157,6,8,P|32:244|52:200,2,100,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,252,76220,2,8,L|236:252,2,100,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,156,77283,2,8,P|146:120|194:110,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,77991,12,4,80826,0:0:0:0:
108,72,92163,6,0,P|156:92|208:92,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,88,92694,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,84,92872,2,0,L|360:180,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,216,93403,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,264,93580,2,0,L|292:308,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,324,94112,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,340,94289,2,0,P|184:296|152:236,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,152,94997,6,0,B|128:100|128:100|176:56,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,44,95529,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,36,95706,2,0,L|376:36,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,36,96237,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,80,96414,2,0,P|424:128|440:180,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,272,97123,2,0,P|440:312|380:340,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,340,97655,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,328,97832,6,0,L|192:284,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,272,98363,1,0,0:0:0:0:
108,252,98540,2,0,P|116:208|104:136,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,104,99072,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,56,99249,6,0,L|216:20,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,24,99957,2,0,L|391:53,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,100666,12,4,103500,0:0:0:0:
168,112,104563,5,0,0:0:0:0:
84,164,104917,2,0,P|128:200|264:152,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,140,105980,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,240,106335,6,8,P|420:224|444:92,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,44,107398,1,8,0:0:0:0:
360,44,107752,2,8,L|248:44,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,120,108460,2,8,P|180:180|196:220,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,248,108992,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,248,109169,6,8,P|292:212|412:252,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,348,110232,1,8,0:0:0:0:
388,348,110586,2,8,B|216:348|216:348|180:328,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,272,111649,1,8,0:0:0:0:
156,184,112003,6,8,P|178:140|172:91,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,104,112712,2,8,P|49:147|55:196,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,272,113420,2,8,L|232:272,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,184,114129,2,8,L|164:184,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,160,114661,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,160,114838,6,12,P|104:100|128:60,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,40,115546,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,84,115901,1,8,0:0:0:0:
380,16,116255,2,8,P|404:84|316:184,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,248,117318,2,8,L|188:248,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,236,117672,6,8,P|140:200|160:128,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,120,118203,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,120,118381,2,8,L|72:120,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,204,119089,2,8,B|4:288|80:316|80:316|116:288|116:288|148:308,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,256,120152,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,296,120506,6,12,B|325:287|325:287|361:315|361:315|437:287|405:203,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,148,121569,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,168,121923,2,8,P|224:120|360:56,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,148,122986,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,123341,12,4,126175,0:0:0:0:
100,128,131844,6,0,P|148:148|208:128,2,100,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,44,132907,2,0,L|272:44,2,100,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,128,133969,2,0,P|108:180|152:212,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,236,134678,6,4,L|232:344,2,100,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,164,135741,2,0,P|332:120|320:72,2,100,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,108,136804,2,0,P|181:93|134:108,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,184,137512,6,12,P|66:278|152:319,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,272,138575,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,212,138929,2,8,P|352:160|344:112,2,100,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,176,139992,2,8,L|176:161,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,152,140347,6,8,P|82:171|34:162,2,100,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,64,141410,1,8,0:0:0:0:
276,44,141764,2,8,P|324:40|376:68,2,100,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,136,142827,2,0,L|280:160,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,180,143181,6,12,P|344:260|252:316,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,304,144244,1,8,0:0:0:0:
60,276,144598,2,8,P|37:182|101:110,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,84,145661,1,8,0:0:0:0:
300,92,146015,6,8,P|348:140|348:192,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,268,146724,2,8,L|236:268,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,268,147255,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,252,147432,6,8,P|68:204|80:92,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,60,148495,2,8,L|214:60,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,60,148850,6,12,P|270:108|240:146,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,248,149558,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,280,149913,1,8,0:0:0:0:
404,200,150267,2,8,P|408:150|437:111,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,48,150975,2,8,L|304:144,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,176,151507,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,220,151684,6,8,P|204:240|152:216,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,180,152393,2,8,L|24:72,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,40,152924,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,36,153101,2,0,P|136:44|200:32,1,100
288,36,153810,2,0,B|340:24|340:24|396:44,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,124,154518,6,12,P|460:180|444:228,2,100,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,184,155581,2,12,P|333:140|340:91,2,100,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,276,156644,2,8,P|356:284|288:256,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,224,157353,6,8,L|88:224,2,100,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,124,158416,1,8,0:0:0:0:
292,152,158770,2,8,P|212:24|100:100,1,300,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,176,160187,6,12,P|104:284|192:324,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,312,161250,1,8,0:0:0:0:
376,324,161604,2,12,P|458:272|476:177,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,92,162667,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,52,163021,6,8,P|248:80|128:56,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,44,164084,1,8,0:0:0:0:
40,144,164438,2,8,P|104:200|128:320,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,328,165501,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,312,165856,6,8,P|346:215|417:147,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,76,166919,1,8,0:0:0:0:
396,40,167273,2,8,P|312:72|188:48,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,28,168336,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,168690,12,4,171524,0:0:0:0:

riffy

osu! Alumni

8,060 posts

Joined December 2010

riffy 2015-04-13T09:51:28+00:00

Yo, as requested.

[General]

Techno and remix might be added to the tags These are related to the song keywords.
There're some files, which are missing in your skin.
1. cursormiddle.png
2. reversearrow.png
3. sliderpoint30.png and sliderpoint10.png
4. sliderscorepoint.png
5. scorebar-marker.png
There're a few unused hitsound files. Please, delete the ones you're not going to use. Here's the list, in case you need it
I don't see any reasn to keep your current combo colours as they don't match with the BG and seem quite unfitting. So, I've go you another set of colours.
Colours
```
[Colours]
Combo1 : 163,181,125
Combo2 : 220,220,114
Combo3 : 132,198,242
Combo4 : 174,219,177
```

[Lally's Easy]

To make the E-N gap slightly more balanced we can work on rhythm here and simply (which will make it easier and even more intuitively playable) the diff. How?
1. 00:13:865 (1) - instead of following every singl word we hear, let's just focus on the stronger stuff? The downbeat at 00:14:219 - sounds really strong, so, let's make it clickable. Something similar will happen to 00:15:636 - and as the result we'll get more 1/2 gaps and a rhythm like this. Sounds better, if you ask me.
2. 00:27:682 - similar with the suggestion above - we can just have a single circle here, instead of the slider. 2/1 rhythm is easier to play and lands on stronger beats.
  Note: some similar stuff can be done in non-liai parts, so, there will be some 2/1 patterns, which will help players to relax.
00:24:139 (3) - isn't that a little too long? Why don't we focus on mapping on the vocals and map them as they go, there're no any long hold-vocals.
00:55:317 (1,3) - minor - it was the only overlap in the whole diff. Literally. Are you sure about it, I'd say it looks random.
01:12:677 (1,1) - minor - newbies won't be expecting (1) to appear under the previous slider. let's try to keep your flow dynamic and more predictable for newbies. Ctrl+h never hurts
Note: if you do the thing above, you'll also have to use Ctrl+h on 01:16:574 (3) -
01:46:689 (2,3,4) - for a better rhythm I'd select and Ctrl+G them. this way, we'll have "heaaart" emphasized with a lovely slider. Don't forget to fix spacing/placement afterwards. It might be a little hard to do it, but I think it's worth it
Note: 01:51:649 (1,2) - similar thing happens here, this time if you Ctrl+g these two you'll have "skies" stressed in a nice way. // 01:55:901 (3,4) - and more.
02:13:261 - both vocals and music are ignored, not to mentuion, this is a downbeat, which is suppposed to be the strongesst beat. Why do you ignore it? Let's have this one stressed.

I would suggest to look a little more into the rhythm of the diff. It's not bad, and I liked some parts very much, but I believe you can make it even better in terms of playability for beginners.

[Goku's Normal]

Try CS 3,5 for the sake of better-balanced diff spread. It will also look better, so it's a win both for the spread and for your diff.
To make the gap more balanced try to add more 1/2 beats. At least during kiais, where it will match nicely with the music.
Note: at this state, your Normal isn't much harder than Easy and Hard feels extremly difficult. Adding more 1/2s will make the gap better and players will have a well balanced combination of [1/1 easy]-[somewhat in-between Normal]-[hard]
Note2: replacing 1/2 sliders like 01:00:631 (2) - with circles would improve the situation, too.
00:41:145 - this spinner seems to be too long. Try to map something like the first half of it, even Easy diff has a shorter spinner than yours.
01:48:992 (5,1) - 01:50:232 (2,3) - probably you shouldn't have 1/2 and 1/1 stacks so soon after each other. Players might misread 01:50:232 (2,3) - as 1/2 stack.
02:40:187 - the thythm you use here is too similar with the Easy diff, I'd recommend to pay more attention to ignored beats like 02:40:541 - 02:41:958 - since we can have them mapped to make rhythm more interesting for an average player.

Looks quite alright, it's just the gap between diffs which should be considered, if you ask me.

[Maybe]
I'd look for a creative name for the diff, Shine or something related to the lyrics would be more interesting than just copying the title, in my opinion.

00:12:802 (5) - this shape is exactly what I love so much about mapping, it fits perfectly, looks so simple, and yet, interesting. ♥
00:18:116 (3) - minor - I'd go for something more similar with the slider above, so the red anchor will represent a change in music and blanket the previous circle nicely. example
00:40:082 (2,3) - this is th only jump before the actual kiai, so it feels kind of random here. Either add more jumps to keep consistency, or fix this one.
00:43:802 (1) - probably there should be some 1/4 snapped stuff. Like an 1/4 slider with repeat or so, the beat at 00:43:891 - feels quite strong + it' is important to emphasize how the music gets faster.
00:57:797 (5,1) - minor - spacing inconsistency is really noticeable and it doesn't feel like jump. Please, try to fix this.
01:09:843 (1,2) - can't say that I agree with the jump as it feels too exaggerated/forced. 1/1 sliders tell players to slow down a little and rest, and then, you sudden;y place a jump between them. I'd go for something like this as it seem to match better with the song.
01:20:117 (5,1) - minor - I believe you wanted a blanket here and then placed (1) in a wrong place. Move the whole triangle a little, so that (5) blankets (1).
02:29:204 - 02:29:913 - 02:30:621 - since the sounds here are pretty strong, I wouldn't ignore them. THis is the hardest diff, so, it sounds like a reasonable idea to me.

Not bad, I like your style it's simple and feels quite nice with the song.

I suggest to get a few more mods as I feel like the map isn't quite ready yet. You've got some nice ideas and diffs are quite alright, but the balanace and general settings might need more attention. Oh, and get someone to check/confirm metadata. I'm think it might be Toby & Freda Maybe (Shine Forever)

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Best of luck!

Last edited by riffy 2015-04-14T03:34:55+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

-Nya-

2,133 posts

Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

-Nya- 2015-04-13T19:07:26+00:00

@ Bakari: Fixed all the suggestions that you gave me in "General".

Kyouren

5,584 posts

Joined October 2012

Kyouren 2015-04-16T17:00:23+00:00

-Bakari- wrote:
Yo, as requested.

[Goku's Normal]
Try CS 3,5 for the sake of better-balanced diff spread. It will also look better, so it's a win both for the spread and for your diff. I think is unrankable!
To make the gap more balanced try to add more 1/2 beats. At least during kiais, where it will match nicely with the music.
Note: at this state, your Normal isn't much harder than Easy and Hard feels extremly difficult. Adding more 1/2s will make the gap better and players will have a well balanced combination of [1/1 easy]-[somewhat in-between Normal]-[hard]
Note2: replacing 1/2 sliders like 01:00:631 (2) - with circles would improve the situation, too.
00:41:145 - this spinner seems to be too long. Try to map something like the first half of it, even Easy diff has a shorter spinner than yours.
01:48:992 (5,1) - 01:50:232 (2,3) - probably you shouldn't have 1/2 and 1/1 stacks so soon after each other. Players might misread 01:50:232 (2,3) - as 1/2 stack. I think i just following a music and vocal music!
02:40:187 - the thythm you use here is too similar with the Easy diff, I'd recommend to pay more attention to ignored beats like 02:40:541 - 02:41:958 - since we can have them mapped to make rhythm more interesting for an average player.

Looks quite alright, it's just the gap between diffs which should be considered, if you ask me.
I suggest to get a few more mods as I feel like the map isn't quite ready yet. You've got some nice ideas and diffs are quite alright, but the balanace and general settings might need more attention. Oh, and get someone to check/confirm metadata. I'm think it might be Toby & Freda Maybe (Shine Forever)

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Best of luck!

Fixed all~ :3, thanks for mod!
Update!

Goku's Normal

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Nightcore - Freda - Maybe.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 69843
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.3
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 56734
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.300001

[Metadata]
Title:Maybe (Nightcore Mix)
TitleUnicode:Maybe (Nightcore Mix)
Artist:Freda
ArtistUnicode:Freda
Creator:-Nya-
Version:Goku's Normal
Source:
Tags:Lally gokugohan12468 techno remix
BeatmapID:677558
BeatmapSetID:289235

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,35476,41145
2,81026,90963
2,126375,130644
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
11385,354.291652888658,4,2,12,50,1,0
46814,-100,4,1,11,60,0,1
57797,-100,4,1,11,60,0,0
58151,-100,4,1,11,60,0,1
69488,-100,4,1,11,60,0,0
105095,-100,4,2,12,60,0,0
137512,-100,4,1,11,60,0,1
148495,-100,4,1,11,60,0,0
148850,-100,4,1,11,60,0,1
160187,-100,4,1,11,60,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 163,181,125
Combo2 : 220,220,114
Combo3 : 132,198,242
Combo4 : 174,219,177

[HitObjects]
72,100,11384,6,0,P|116:128|176:112,1,100,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,120,12093,2,0,L|364:120,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,148,12625,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,148,12802,2,0,P|408:216|312:288,1,200,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,224,13865,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,284,14219,6,0,P|82:236|94:143,1,200,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,108,15282,2,0,L|252:108,1,50
276,124,15636,2,0,B|348:200|348:200|332:304,1,200,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,288,16699,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,336,17053,6,0,P|132:292|144:240,1,100,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,196,17585,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,196,17762,2,0,L|240:196,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,280,18470,2,0,P|328:200|268:108,1,200,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,88,19533,2,0,L|108:88,1,50
92,120,19887,6,0,L|40:220,1,100
32,256,20419,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,256,20596,2,0,P|116:264|144:248,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,216,21305,6,0,L|332:216,1,100
316,116,22013,2,0,L|216:116,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,104,22722,6,0,P|16:144|8:244,1,200,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,292,23785,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,352,24139,2,0,P|164:248|92:196,1,200,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,104,25202,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,84,25556,6,0,P|208:96|272:76,1,100
304,72,26088,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,56,26265,2,0,L|432:128,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,224,26973,6,0,L|353:290,1,100
264,332,27682,2,0,L|152:332,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,280,28390,6,0,P|60:232|76:168,2,100,4|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,224,29453,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,240,29808,2,0,P|300:196|260:72,1,200,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,44,30871,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,31225,12,4,34059,0:0:0:0:
256,192,43979,12,0,45396,0:0:0:0:
112,108,46814,6,0,L|216:108,1,100,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,152,47522,2,0,P|308:88|288:48,1,100
208,108,48231,6,0,P|196:160|224:216,2,100
112,76,49294,2,0,L|60:60,1,50
40,104,49648,6,0,P|28:148|48:204,1,100
100,280,50357,2,0,L|208:280,1,100
248,276,50888,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,276,51065,2,0,P|264:212|248:160,1,100
200,96,51774,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,40,52128,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,84,52482,6,0,L|436:176,1,100
480,256,53191,2,0,P|428:268|368:248,1,100
336,244,53722,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,212,53899,6,0,L|232:120,1,100
164,64,54608,2,0,L|52:64,1,100
12,152,55317,6,0,P|8:228|128:276,1,200
204,272,56380,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,284,56734,2,0,P|391:248|398:153,1,200
344,68,57797,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,40,58151,6,0,L|136:40,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,88,58860,2,0,P|48:140|60:188,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,212,59391,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,240,59568,6,0,B|169:251|169:251|337:251,1,200
420,192,60631,2,0,P|420:156|408:132,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,104,60985,6,0,B|335:94|335:94|287:110,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,128,61694,2,0,P|139:139|92:127,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,200,62402,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,276,62757,2,0,P|116:316|180:328,2,100,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,196,63820,6,0,L|256:196,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,148,64528,2,0,P|344:196|328:243,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,288,65060,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,332,65237,6,0,L|172:332,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,316,65945,1,0,0:0:0:0:
52,220,66300,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,156,66654,6,0,L|128:40,2,100,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,224,67717,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,220,68071,2,0,P|364:192|288:116,1,200
204,80,69134,1,8,0:0:0:0:
108,108,69488,6,0,P|60:122|12:109,2,100,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,180,70551,2,8,L|116:276,2,100,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,160,71614,2,8,P|324:150|365:176,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,260,72323,6,8,L|476:352,2,100,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,296,73386,2,8,P|316:248|340:196,2,100,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,348,74448,2,8,L|136:348,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,300,75157,6,8,P|32:244|52:200,2,100,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,252,76220,2,8,L|236:252,2,100,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,156,77283,2,8,P|146:120|194:110,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,77991,12,4,80826,0:0:0:0:
108,72,92163,6,0,P|156:92|208:92,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,88,92694,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,84,92872,2,0,L|360:180,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,216,93403,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,264,93580,2,0,L|292:308,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,324,94112,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,340,94289,2,0,P|184:296|152:236,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,152,94997,6,0,B|128:100|128:100|176:56,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,44,95529,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,36,95706,2,0,L|376:36,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,36,96237,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,80,96414,2,0,P|424:128|440:180,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,272,97123,2,0,P|440:312|380:340,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,340,97655,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,328,97832,6,0,L|192:284,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,272,98363,1,0,0:0:0:0:
108,252,98540,2,0,P|116:208|104:136,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,104,99072,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,56,99249,6,0,L|216:20,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,24,99957,2,0,L|391:53,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,100666,12,4,103500,0:0:0:0:
168,112,104563,5,0,0:0:0:0:
84,164,104917,2,0,P|128:200|264:152,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,140,105980,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,240,106335,6,8,P|420:224|444:92,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,44,107398,1,8,0:0:0:0:
360,44,107752,2,8,L|248:44,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,120,108460,2,8,P|180:180|196:220,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,248,108992,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,248,109169,6,8,P|292:212|412:252,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,348,110232,1,8,0:0:0:0:
388,348,110586,2,8,B|216:348|216:348|180:328,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,272,111649,1,8,0:0:0:0:
156,184,112003,6,8,P|178:140|172:91,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,104,112712,2,8,P|49:147|55:196,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,272,113420,2,8,L|232:272,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,184,114129,2,8,L|164:184,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,160,114661,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,160,114838,6,12,P|104:100|128:60,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,40,115546,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,84,115901,1,8,0:0:0:0:
380,16,116255,2,8,P|404:84|316:184,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,248,117318,2,8,L|188:248,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,236,117672,6,8,P|140:200|160:128,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,120,118203,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,120,118381,2,8,L|72:120,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,204,119089,2,8,B|4:288|80:316|80:316|116:288|116:288|148:308,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,256,120152,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,296,120506,6,12,B|325:287|325:287|361:315|361:315|437:287|405:203,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,148,121569,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,168,121923,2,8,P|224:120|360:56,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,148,122986,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,123341,12,4,126175,0:0:0:0:
100,128,131844,6,0,P|148:148|208:128,2,100,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,44,132907,2,0,L|272:44,2,100,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,128,133969,2,0,P|108:180|152:212,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,236,134678,6,4,L|232:344,2,100,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,164,135741,2,0,P|332:120|320:72,2,100,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,108,136804,2,0,P|181:93|134:108,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,184,137512,6,12,P|66:278|152:319,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,272,138575,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,212,138929,2,8,P|352:160|344:112,2,100,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,176,139992,2,8,L|176:161,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,152,140347,6,8,P|82:171|34:162,2,100,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,64,141410,1,8,0:0:0:0:
276,44,141764,2,8,P|324:40|376:68,2,100,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,136,142827,2,0,L|280:160,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,180,143181,6,12,P|344:260|252:316,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,304,144244,1,8,0:0:0:0:
60,276,144598,2,8,P|37:182|101:110,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,84,145661,1,8,0:0:0:0:
300,92,146015,6,8,P|348:140|348:192,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,268,146724,2,8,L|236:268,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,268,147255,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,252,147432,6,8,P|68:204|80:92,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,60,148495,2,8,L|214:60,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,60,148850,6,12,P|270:108|240:146,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,248,149558,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,280,149913,1,8,0:0:0:0:
404,200,150267,2,8,P|408:150|437:111,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,48,150975,2,8,L|304:144,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,176,151507,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,220,151684,6,8,P|204:240|152:216,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,180,152393,2,8,L|24:72,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,40,152924,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,36,153101,2,0,P|136:44|200:32,1,100
288,36,153810,2,0,B|340:24|340:24|396:44,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,124,154518,6,12,P|460:180|444:228,2,100,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,184,155581,2,12,P|333:140|340:91,2,100,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,276,156644,2,8,P|356:284|288:256,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,224,157353,6,8,L|88:224,2,100,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,124,158416,1,8,0:0:0:0:
292,152,158770,2,8,P|212:24|100:100,1,300,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,156,160187,5,0,0:0:0:0:
96,240,160541,2,0,P|120:276|192:292,1,100
272,300,161250,1,8,0:0:0:0:
372,296,161604,2,0,P|418:281|447:241,1,100
440,140,162313,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,40,162667,1,8,0:0:0:0:
348,104,163021,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,64,163376,2,0,L|152:64,1,100
56,64,164084,1,8,0:0:0:0:
40,164,164438,2,8,P|104:220|128:340,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,336,165501,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,332,165856,6,8,P|346:235|417:167,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,88,166919,1,8,0:0:0:0:
392,40,167273,2,8,P|308:72|184:48,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,28,168336,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,168690,12,4,171524,0:0:0:0:

Last edited by Kyouren 2015-04-18T15:26:21+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

-Nya-

2,133 posts

Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

-Nya- 2015-04-18T14:50:59+00:00

-Bakari- wrote:
[Maybe]
I'd look for a creative name for the diff, Shine or something related to the lyrics would be more interesting than just copying the title, in my opinion. Ok, changed the diff name to "Shine"
00:12:802 (5) - this shape is exactly what I love so much about mapping, it fits perfectly, looks so simple, and yet, interesting. ♥ Thanks~
00:18:116 (3) - minor - I'd go for something more similar with the slider above, so the red anchor will represent a change in music and blanket the previous circle nicely. example Followed your suggestion.
00:40:082 (2,3) - this is th only jump before the actual kiai, so it feels kind of random here. Either add more jumps to keep consistency, or fix this one. Hm, it's not really such a big jump and I really like that pattern and it's almost like a build-up before the kiai starts. No fix.
00:43:802 (1) - probably there should be some 1/4 snapped stuff. Like an 1/4 slider with repeat or so, the beat at 00:43:891 - feels quite strong + it' is important to emphasize how the music gets faster. Hm, I like my pattern more. No change.
00:57:797 (5,1) - minor - spacing inconsistency is really noticeable and it doesn't feel like jump. Please, try to fix this. It's not inconsistent. I had similar jumps as well in the previous part of the diff.
01:09:843 (1,2) - can't say that I agree with the jump as it feels too exaggerated/forced. 1/1 sliders tell players to slow down a little and rest, and then, you sudden;y place a jump between them. I'd go for something like this as it seem to match better with the song. Followed your suggestion but I didn't change the shape of the sliders.
01:20:117 (5,1) - minor - I believe you wanted a blanket here and then placed (1) in a wrong place. Move the whole triangle a little, so that (5) blankets (1). Ok, fixed.
02:29:204 - 02:29:913 - 02:30:621 - since the sounds here are pretty strong, I wouldn't ignore them. THis is the hardest diff, so, it sounds like a reasonable idea to me. I like my current patterns a lot and they fit in nicely with the music. I don't want to change them.

Not bad, I like your style it's simple and feels quite nice with the song. Thanks!
I suggest to get a few more mods as I feel like the map isn't quite ready yet. You've got some nice ideas and diffs are quite alright, but the balanace and general settings might need more attention. Oh, and get someone to check/confirm metadata. I'm think it might be Toby & Freda Maybe (Shine Forever)

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Best of luck!

Thanks for the mod, Bakari~!

Suimya

6,376 posts

Joined February 2011

Suimya 2015-04-18T17:28:50+00:00

Hey Nya :3

Lally's Easy:
@Lally: you should really map some of that long break at 01:21:180 - 01:37:832 - , since it's too long right now and it's more than 15 seconds, so i highly suggest you to do something in this break ;w;

00:18:470 (2) - how about fixing this blanket with this slider 00:17:053 (1) - , since right now it's looking kinda bad and you really need to fix it up a bit =3=/
00:21:659 (2) - how about adding a whistle here, to follow the piano sound in the music o3o/ it'll fit good imo
00:35:476 - maybe you should rise the volume here a bit, since i can barely hear the whistles on this part ></
00:41:145 (1,2,3,4) - maybe add some claps here, to 00:41:145 (1,3) - repeats, 00:42:208 (2,4) - to these notes o3o
01:01:694 (2) - maybe make this slider curved so it'll follow the next slider nicely, since right now there some many liner sliders on this part, and it's kinda boring imo ;w;
01:03:820 (1) - ^
01:46:335 (1,3) - switch the nc, to fit with your nc patterns o3o
01:49:169 (1) - maybe you should add a finish to this slider's start to fit with music o3o/
02:17:512 - why you didn't add any claps on this part? i think it'll fit like for (e.g: 02:18:575 (2) - start and end, 02:19:638 (3) - repeat and 02:20:701 (1) - note) i really suggest you doing that =3=
02:29:913 (2) - how about giving this slider a bit of curve shape, since it looks kinda weird imo..with this slider 02:28:850 (1) - so yeah =3=/
02:38:770 (2) - finish on slider's head? it'll fit imo o.o

Goku's Normal:

00:17:762 (3,4) - fix the blanket between these two slider's, it looks bad right now ></ so yeah...
00:19:887 (1) - finish on the head, to follow the music =3=
00:21:305 (1) - whistle on the head, with same reason above o3o
00:24:139 (3) - move the last slider's point one grid up, to blanket with this note 00:24:139 (3) - better o3o
00:25:556 (1) - finish on the head, to follow the music =3=
00:26:973 (1) - whistle would fit great, on slider's start ofc o3o
00:29:808 (3) - ^
00:46:814 (1,1) - stack them perfectly please ;w;
00:46:814 - like i said about this on Lally's diff, you should use some claps on this part ></ it really feels kinda empty right now orz
00:52:482 (1) - finish on the start
01:08:071 (3) - ^
01:44:563 (1,2) - fix the blanket here please ><
02:23:181 (1) - finish on this slider's start
02:38:770 (3) - ^
02:40:187 (1) - ^
02:45:856 (1) - ^

Shine:

00:17:053 (1) - how about adding a finish to this slider's start, it'll follow great with music imo :3
00:19:887 (1) - ^
00:23:785 (3) - ^ on slider's repeat, i kinda hear a finish there so yeah ></ you shouldn't ignore it like that
00:25:556 (1) - ^ on the head
00:36:185 - how about rising the volume here a bit, since i can barely hear the whistles here :<
00:43:802 (1) - how about adding a finish to slider's start? it'll fit with music imo o.o
00:45:042 (6,1) - switch the finish here, from (1) to (6)'s slider's tail, it'll follow better with the music imo
02:03:341 (1) - I think you missed a finish here, so how about adding it? o.o
02:13:261 (3) - ^ on the start

That's all, i can find. So call me back once you fix everything here :3

Kyouren

5,584 posts

Joined October 2012

Kyouren 2015-04-18T17:45:05+00:00

Fixed all~ :3, Thanks for mod!
@-Nya-: Thanks~ :3

-Nya-

2,133 posts

Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

-Nya- 2015-04-18T19:34:31+00:00

Fixed A LOT of things in all the diffs.
Updated~

Suimya

6,376 posts

Joined February 2011

Suimya 2015-04-18T21:28:09+00:00

Just one last thing, before i bubble this o.o/

In "Shine" diff, can you make HP+OD to 6, and AR to7.5. These settings would be much better imo ></

DakeDekaane

osu! Alumni

3,500 posts

Joined February 2012

DakeDekaane 2015-04-19T06:22:56+00:00

Hold on, I want to give a small mod before you guys do your stuff.

[General]
00:35:476 - end - A slight increase in the volume wouldn't hurt at all.
Storyboard looks a bit weird as it's based on claps hitsounding, but as you don't have constant claps, the effect is a bit random, just to let you know so you consider it.

[

Easy]
01:08:071 (2) - Loops like this makes me cry

(the interior isn't visible), try a wave slider? http://puu.sh/hj2y2.png. Code for reference:

380,208,68071,2,0,B|352:244|292:244|256:208|256:208|220:168|160:168|132:208,1,280

01:44:563 (1) - Please avoid using short sliders like this ;w;
02:28:141 (4) - ^ ;w;
Nice sliders.

[

Normal]
00:12:802 (4,5,1) - Just a comment, these kind of patterns looks more appealing when they aligned with the vertical axis, have it in mind for your future maps.
01:11:614 (3) - This is a really minor change, but it would make this slider to look better, try to make the curve of this slider to follow better the flow you've been doing: http://puu.sh/hj1LR.png
02:38:770 (3,1,2) - The curve here could be a bit smoother, try something like this (don't worry, you can move all the objects after 02:40:541 (2) - when you have to move this slider, at the same time): http://puu.sh/hj21Z.png (AR0 was used in this screen, for reference).
Excellent use of spinners.

[

Hard]
00:14:219 (1,2,3) - Just a comment, feel free to change at your own accord, these kind of patterns looks more appealing when they aligned with the vertical axis.
00:19:887 (1) - As well as these sliders.
00:29:808 (5) - Don't you think this blanketing 00:29:099 (3) - would look better?
00:43:802 (1) - This part is a bit weird, 00:43:979 - is where the music becomes more intense, so it'd be more fitting to have a hit object here, to start this along with the music pattern.
01:01:517 (2,3,4,5,1) - Spacing should be consistent here, no reason to have a random spacing increment where music barely changes.
01:09:843 (1,2,3) - As 00:14:219 (1,2,3) -
01:32:163 (1,2) - ^
01:34:997 (1,2) - Similar but with the horizontal axis.
01:38:540 (4) - No 3/4 slider + circle like 01:37:832 (1,2) - ?
02:14:678 (1,2,3) - As 00:14:219 (1,2,3) -
Aesthetically could be better, but rhythm is very good, making it nice to play.

Good luck -Nya-.

Kyouren

5,584 posts

Joined October 2012

Kyouren 2015-04-19T06:40:24+00:00

DakeDekaane wrote:
Hold on, I want to give a small mod before you guys do your stuff.

[ Normal]
00:12:802 (4,5,1) - Just a comment, these kind of patterns looks more appealing when they aligned with the vertical axis, have it in mind for your future maps. No!
01:11:614 (3) - This is a really minor change, but it would make this slider to look better, try to make the curve of this slider to follow better the flow you've been doing: http://puu.sh/hj1LR.png. Change a slider!
02:38:770 (3,1,2) - The curve here could be a bit smoother, try something like this (don't worry, you can move all the objects after 02:40:541 (2) - when you have to move this slider, at the same time): http://puu.sh/hj21Z.png (AR0 was used in this screen, for reference). I think that be fine!
Excellent use of spinners.

Good luck -Nya-.

@-Nya-: why you change cs 3 to 3.5? I change to 3 not 3.5
Fixed~ :3, Thanks for mod!
Update!

Goku's Normal

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Nightcore - Freda - Maybe.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 69843
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.3
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 56734
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.300001

[Metadata]
Title:Maybe (Shine Forever) (Nightcore Mix)
TitleUnicode:Maybe (Shine Forever) (Nightcore Mix)
Artist:Toby & Freda
ArtistUnicode:Toby & Freda
Creator:-Nya-
Version:Goku's Normal
Source:
Tags:Lally gokugohan12468 techno tronix DJ
BeatmapID:677558
BeatmapSetID:289235

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,35476,39945
2,81026,90963
2,126375,130644
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
11385,354.291652888658,4,2,12,50,1,0
46814,-100,4,1,11,60,0,1
57797,-100,4,1,11,60,0,0
58151,-100,4,1,11,60,0,1
69488,-100,4,1,11,60,0,0
105095,-100,4,2,12,60,0,0
137512,-100,4,1,11,60,0,1
148495,-100,4,1,11,60,0,0
148850,-100,4,1,11,60,0,1
160187,-100,4,1,11,60,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 163,181,125
Combo2 : 220,220,114
Combo3 : 132,198,242
Combo4 : 174,219,177

[HitObjects]
72,100,11384,6,0,P|116:128|176:112,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,120,12093,2,0,L|364:120,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,148,12625,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,148,12802,2,0,P|408:216|312:288,1,200,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,224,13865,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,284,14219,6,0,P|82:236|94:143,1,200,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,108,15282,2,0,L|252:108,1,50,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,124,15636,2,0,B|348:200|348:200|332:304,1,200,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,288,16699,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,336,17053,6,0,P|132:292|144:240,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,196,17585,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,196,17762,2,0,L|240:196,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,280,18470,2,0,P|328:200|268:108,1,200,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,88,19533,2,0,L|108:88,1,50,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,120,19887,6,0,L|40:220,1,100,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,256,20419,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,256,20596,2,0,P|116:264|144:248,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,216,21305,6,0,L|332:216,1,100,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,116,22013,2,0,L|216:116,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,104,22722,6,0,P|16:144|8:244,1,200,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,292,23785,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,352,24139,2,0,P|164:248|92:192,1,200,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,100,25202,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,84,25556,6,0,P|208:96|272:76,1,100,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,72,26088,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,56,26265,2,0,L|432:128,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,224,26973,6,0,L|353:290,1,100,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,332,27682,2,0,L|152:332,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,320,28213,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,284,28390,6,0,P|64:236|80:172,2,100,4|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,228,29453,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,240,29808,2,0,P|304:196|264:72,1,200,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,44,30871,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,31225,12,0,34059,1:0:0:0:
152,72,41145,6,0,P|200:60|264:64,1,100,4|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
296,76,41676,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,108,41854,2,0,L|288:208,1,100,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
208,252,42562,6,0,P|248:292|296:300,1,100,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
340,296,43094,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,288,43271,2,0,L|440:188,1,100,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,43979,12,4,45396,0:0:0:0:
109,108,46814,6,0,L|213:108,1,100,4|8,2:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,152,47522,2,0,P|304:88|284:48,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,108,48231,6,0,P|196:160|224:216,2,100,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,64,49294,1,8,0:0:0:0:
72,76,49471,1,0,0:0:0:0:
36,108,49648,6,0,P|24:152|44:208,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,280,50357,2,0,L|212:280,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,276,50888,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,276,51065,2,0,P|264:212|248:160,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,96,51774,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,40,52128,1,8,0:0:0:0:
376,84,52482,6,0,L|436:176,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,256,53191,2,0,P|428:268|368:248,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,244,53722,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,212,53899,6,0,L|232:120,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,64,54608,2,0,L|52:64,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
12,152,55317,6,0,P|8:228|128:276,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,272,56380,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,284,56734,2,0,P|391:248|398:153,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,68,57797,1,8,0:0:0:0:
296,52,57974,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,40,58151,6,0,L|136:40,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,88,58860,2,0,P|48:140|60:188,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,212,59391,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,240,59568,6,0,B|169:251|169:251|337:251,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,200,60631,1,8,0:0:0:0:
408,152,60808,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,108,60985,6,0,B|335:98|335:98|287:114,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,128,61694,2,0,P|139:139|92:127,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,200,62402,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,276,62757,2,0,P|116:316|180:328,2,100,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,196,63820,6,0,L|256:196,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,148,64528,2,0,P|344:196|328:243,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,288,65060,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,332,65237,6,0,L|172:332,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,316,65945,1,0,0:0:0:0:
52,220,66300,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,156,66654,6,0,L|128:40,2,100,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,224,67717,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,220,68071,2,0,P|364:192|288:116,1,200,4|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,80,69134,1,0,0:0:0:0:
108,108,69488,6,0,P|60:122|12:109,2,100,4|8|0,1:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,180,70551,2,8,L|116:276,2,100,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,156,71614,2,0,P|324:148|380:180,1,100
416,256,72323,6,8,L|476:348,2,100,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,296,73386,2,8,P|316:248|340:196,2,100,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,348,74448,2,8,L|136:348,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,300,75157,6,8,P|32:244|52:200,2,100,4|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,252,76220,2,8,L|236:252,2,100,8|4|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,156,77283,2,8,P|146:120|194:110,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,77991,12,4,80826,0:0:0:0:
108,72,92163,6,0,P|156:92|208:92,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,88,92694,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,84,92872,2,0,L|360:180,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,216,93403,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,264,93580,2,0,L|292:308,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,324,94112,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,340,94289,2,0,P|184:296|152:236,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,152,94997,6,0,B|128:100|128:100|176:56,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,44,95529,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,36,95706,2,0,L|376:36,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,36,96237,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,80,96414,2,0,P|424:128|440:180,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,272,97123,2,0,P|440:312|380:340,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,340,97655,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,328,97832,6,0,L|192:284,1,100,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,272,98363,1,0,0:0:0:0:
108,252,98540,2,0,P|116:208|104:136,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,104,99072,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,56,99249,6,0,L|216:20,1,100,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,24,99957,2,0,L|391:53,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,100666,12,4,103500,1:0:0:0:
156,84,104563,5,0,0:0:0:0:
124,124,104740,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,168,104917,2,0,P|140:204|276:156,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,140,105980,1,0,1:0:0:0:
368,240,106335,6,8,P|444:184|432:80,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,40,107398,1,0,1:0:0:0:
348,40,107752,2,8,L|236:40,1,100,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
188,120,108460,2,8,P|176:180|192:220,1,100,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
232,248,108992,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,248,109169,6,8,P|292:212|412:252,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,348,110232,1,8,0:0:0:0:
388,348,110586,2,8,B|216:348|216:348|180:328,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,272,111649,1,8,0:0:0:0:
156,184,112003,6,8,P|178:140|172:91,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,124,112712,2,8,P|53:167|59:216,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,272,113420,2,8,L|260:272,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,184,114129,2,8,L|164:184,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,160,114661,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,160,114838,6,12,P|104:100|128:60,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,40,115546,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,84,115901,1,8,0:0:0:0:
380,16,116255,2,8,P|404:84|316:184,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,248,117318,2,8,L|188:248,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,236,117672,6,8,P|140:200|160:128,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,120,118203,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,120,118381,2,8,L|72:120,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,204,119089,2,8,B|4:288|80:316|80:316|116:288|116:288|148:308,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,256,120152,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,296,120506,6,12,B|325:287|325:287|361:315|361:315|437:287|405:203,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,148,121569,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,168,121923,2,8,P|224:120|360:56,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,148,122986,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,123341,12,4,126175,1:0:0:0:
100,128,131844,6,0,P|148:148|208:128,2,100,4|0|0,2:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,44,132907,2,0,L|272:44,2,100,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,128,133969,2,0,P|108:180|152:212,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,236,134678,6,4,L|232:344,2,100,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,164,135741,2,0,P|332:120|320:72,2,100,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,108,136804,2,0,P|181:93|134:108,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,140,137335,1,0,0:0:0:0:
68,184,137512,6,12,P|66:278|152:319,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,272,138575,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,212,138929,2,8,P|352:160|344:112,2,100,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,160,139992,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,152,140170,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,148,140347,6,8,P|90:167|42:158,2,100,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,56,141410,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,44,141764,2,8,P|328:40|380:68,2,100,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,136,142827,2,0,L|284:160,1,50
328,184,143181,6,12,P|348:264|256:320,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,304,144244,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,276,144598,2,8,P|41:182|105:110,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,84,145661,1,8,0:0:0:0:
300,92,146015,6,8,P|348:140|348:192,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,268,146724,2,8,L|236:268,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,268,147255,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,252,147432,6,8,P|68:204|80:92,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,60,148495,2,8,L|214:60,1,50,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,60,148850,6,12,P|270:108|240:146,1,100,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,248,149558,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,280,149913,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,200,150267,2,8,P|408:150|437:111,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,48,150975,2,8,L|304:144,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,176,151507,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,220,151684,6,8,P|204:240|152:216,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,180,152393,2,8,L|24:72,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,40,152924,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,36,153101,2,0,P|136:44|200:32,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,36,153810,2,0,B|340:24|340:24|396:44,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,124,154518,6,12,P|460:180|444:228,2,100,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,184,155581,2,12,P|333:140|340:91,2,100,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,276,156644,2,8,P|356:284|288:256,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,244,157176,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,224,157353,6,8,L|88:224,2,100,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,124,158416,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,152,158770,2,8,P|212:24|100:100,1,300,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,156,160187,5,4,0:0:0:0:
96,240,160541,2,0,P|120:276|192:292,1,100
272,300,161250,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,296,161604,2,0,P|418:281|447:241,1,100,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,140,162313,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,40,162667,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,104,163021,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,64,163376,2,0,L|152:64,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,64,164084,1,0,0:0:0:0:
40,164,164438,2,8,P|104:220|128:340,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,336,165501,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,332,165856,6,8,P|346:235|417:167,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,88,166919,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,40,167273,2,8,P|308:72|184:48,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,28,168336,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,168690,12,4,171524,1:0:0:0:

-Nya-

2,133 posts

Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

-Nya- 2015-04-19T08:14:49+00:00

@goku: There's nothing wrong with changing the CS to 3.5. Imo, it will also work better.

-Nya-

2,133 posts

Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

-Nya- 2015-04-19T08:42:11+00:00

Updated all diffs again~

Suimya

6,376 posts

Joined February 2011

Suimya 2015-04-19T08:48:49+00:00

Okay =w=/

Bubbled~

-Nya-

2,133 posts

Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

-Nya- 2015-04-19T08:51:37+00:00

Sekai-nyan wrote:
Okay =w=/

Bubbled~

Thanks, sekai~!

Kyouren

5,584 posts

Joined October 2012

Kyouren 2015-04-19T09:16:19+00:00

Nice job, nya =~=)b
Thanks, sekai-nyan \:D/

Gratzz, Nya~ :3 (Finally!)

meii18

3,577 posts

Joined October 2013

meii18 2015-04-19T10:23:14+00:00

~~placeholderu o3o~~

Hi -Nya- , Gokuhan and Lally \o3o/

[Easy by cutie Lally o3o]

00:13:865()- There's still vocal so maybe add a note to follow that vocal
00:36:893(2)- This 1/1 slider with repeat sounds too weird to me and it don't follow the instruments pretty good.I suggest to use 1/1 slider -> 1/1 slider rhythm to follow the instruments much better than before
00:38:311(4)- Maybe add NC here ? I hear clearly the instruments resets here
01:07:717()- Here the instruments are still louder so why you not add a note here to follow those louder instruments ? :3
01:39:249()- There's still instruments and here's not wind so here you can use 3/1 slider -> note aswell and you can move the spinner to 01:40:666()- where the wind starts
01:55:901(2,3)- Just nazi :3 Uncurve (3)- a bit to make a better blanket with previous note

[Normal by friendly Gokuhan :3]

00:11:384(1)- Add finish because there's cymbal sound and for consistency with other diffs
00:12:802(4)- ^
00:14:219(1)- ^
00:15:636(3)- ^
00:51:774(5)- Add NC because I see you add in this chorus NC on every upbeat
00:56:734(3)- Same as above
01:02:402(3)- Add NC here aswell because you add NC on every upbeat in this chorus
01:08:071(3)- Same as above
01:39:957(2)- Just move this slider with just 1 pixel to down to make it equal with previous slider
01:44:917(3)- Add NC because there's no reason to keep the NC desactivated D:
01:46:335(1)- Remove NC because there's no new vocals and for consistency.Instead add the NC on 01:47:752(3)- where's new vocals

[Shine like Nya desssuu (ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*:･ﾟ✧]

00:43:979(2,3)- I prefer to replace those 2 circles with a 1/2 slider to make this part a bit easier and do not destroy the spread i guess
01:03:465(5)- Move this slider with just 3 pixels to up to make it equal with previous slider and maybe for a perfect acute angle pattern
02:03:341(1,2)- Would be better if you will replace those 2 notes with a 1/2 slider to not make this diff really harder i guess

That's all from me

Call me back ~

Kyouren

5,584 posts

Joined October 2012

Kyouren 2015-04-19T14:58:48+00:00

Fixed all~ :3, Thanks for mod!
Update!
@-Nya-: Thanks for fixed finsih hitsound, Nya~ :3

Goku's Normal

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Nightcore - Freda - Maybe.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 69843
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.3
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 56734
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.300001

[Metadata]
Title:Maybe (Shine Forever) (Nightcore Mix)
TitleUnicode:Maybe (Shine Forever) (Nightcore Mix)
Artist:Toby & Freda
ArtistUnicode:Toby & Freda
Creator:-Nya-
Version:Goku's Normal
Source:
Tags:Lally gokugohan12468 techno tronix DJ
BeatmapID:677558
BeatmapSetID:289235

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,35476,39945
2,81026,90963
2,126375,130644
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
11385,354.291652888658,4,2,12,50,1,0
41145,-100,4,2,12,60,0,0
46814,-100,4,1,11,60,0,1
57797,-100,4,1,11,60,0,0
58151,-100,4,1,11,60,0,1
69488,-100,4,1,11,60,0,0
105095,-100,4,2,12,60,0,0
137512,-100,4,1,11,60,0,1
148495,-100,4,1,11,60,0,0
148850,-100,4,1,11,60,0,1
160187,-100,4,1,11,60,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 163,181,125
Combo2 : 220,220,114
Combo3 : 132,198,242
Combo4 : 174,219,177

[HitObjects]
72,100,11384,6,0,P|116:128|176:112,1,100
260,120,12093,2,0,L|364:120,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,148,12625,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,148,12802,2,0,P|408:216|312:288,1,200,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,224,13865,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,284,14219,6,0,P|82:236|94:143,1,200,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,108,15282,2,0,L|252:108,1,50,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,124,15636,2,0,B|348:200|348:200|332:304,1,200,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,288,16699,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,336,17053,6,0,P|132:292|144:240,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,196,17585,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,196,17762,2,0,L|240:196,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,280,18470,2,0,P|328:200|268:108,1,200,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,88,19533,2,0,L|108:88,1,50,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,120,19887,6,0,L|40:220,1,100,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,256,20419,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,256,20596,2,0,P|116:264|144:248,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,216,21305,6,0,L|332:216,1,100,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,116,22013,2,0,L|216:116,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,104,22722,6,0,P|16:144|8:244,1,200,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,292,23785,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,352,24139,2,0,P|164:248|92:192,1,200,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,100,25202,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,84,25556,6,0,P|208:96|272:76,1,100,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,72,26088,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,56,26265,2,0,L|432:128,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,224,26973,6,0,L|353:290,1,100,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,332,27682,2,0,L|152:332,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,320,28213,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,284,28390,6,0,P|64:236|80:172,2,100,4|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,228,29453,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,240,29808,2,0,P|304:196|264:72,1,200,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,44,30871,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,31225,12,0,34059,1:0:0:0:
152,72,41145,6,0,P|200:60|264:64,1,100,4|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
296,76,41676,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,108,41854,2,0,L|288:208,1,100,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
208,252,42562,6,0,P|248:292|296:300,1,100,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
340,296,43094,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,288,43271,2,0,L|440:188,1,100,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,43979,12,4,45396,0:0:0:0:
109,108,46814,6,0,L|213:108,1,100,4|8,2:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,152,47522,2,0,P|304:88|284:48,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,108,48231,6,0,P|196:160|224:216,2,100,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,64,49294,1,8,0:0:0:0:
72,76,49471,1,0,0:0:0:0:
36,108,49648,6,0,P|24:152|44:208,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,280,50357,2,0,L|212:280,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,276,50888,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,276,51065,2,0,P|264:212|248:160,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,96,51774,5,0,0:0:0:0:
284,40,52128,1,8,0:0:0:0:
376,84,52482,6,0,L|436:176,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,256,53191,2,0,P|428:268|368:248,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,244,53722,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,212,53899,6,0,L|232:120,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,64,54608,2,0,L|52:64,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
12,152,55317,6,0,P|8:228|128:276,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,272,56380,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,284,56734,6,0,P|391:248|398:153,1,200
344,68,57797,1,8,0:0:0:0:
296,52,57974,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,40,58151,6,0,L|136:40,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,88,58860,2,0,P|48:140|60:188,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,212,59391,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,240,59568,6,0,B|169:251|169:251|337:251,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,200,60631,1,8,0:0:0:0:
408,152,60808,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,108,60985,6,0,B|335:98|335:98|287:114,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,128,61694,2,0,P|139:139|92:127,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,200,62402,5,0,0:0:0:0:
84,276,62757,2,0,P|116:316|180:328,2,100,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,196,63820,6,0,L|256:196,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,148,64528,2,0,P|344:196|328:243,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,288,65060,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,332,65237,6,0,L|172:332,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,316,65945,1,0,0:0:0:0:
52,220,66300,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,156,66654,6,0,L|128:40,2,100,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,224,67717,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,220,68071,6,0,P|364:192|288:116,1,200,4|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,80,69134,1,0,0:0:0:0:
108,108,69488,6,0,P|60:122|12:109,2,100,4|8|0,1:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,180,70551,2,8,L|116:276,2,100,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,160,71614,2,8,P|324:150|365:176,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,260,72323,6,8,L|476:352,2,100,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,296,73386,2,8,P|316:248|340:196,2,100,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,348,74448,2,8,L|136:348,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,300,75157,6,8,P|32:244|52:200,2,100,4|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,252,76220,2,8,L|236:252,2,100,8|4|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,156,77283,2,8,P|146:120|194:110,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,77991,12,4,80826,0:0:0:0:
108,72,92163,6,0,P|156:92|208:92,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,88,92694,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,84,92872,2,0,L|360:180,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,216,93403,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,264,93580,2,0,L|292:308,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,324,94112,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,340,94289,2,0,P|184:296|152:236,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,152,94997,6,0,B|128:100|128:100|176:56,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,44,95529,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,36,95706,2,0,L|376:36,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,36,96237,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,80,96414,2,0,P|424:128|440:180,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,272,97123,2,0,P|440:312|380:340,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,340,97655,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,328,97832,6,0,L|192:284,1,100,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,272,98363,1,0,0:0:0:0:
108,252,98540,2,0,P|116:208|104:136,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,104,99072,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,56,99249,6,0,L|216:20,1,100,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,24,99957,2,0,L|387:53,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,100666,12,4,103500,1:0:0:0:
156,84,104563,5,0,0:0:0:0:
124,124,104740,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,168,104917,6,0,P|140:204|276:156,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,140,105980,1,0,1:0:0:0:
368,240,106335,2,8,P|444:184|432:80,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,40,107398,1,0,1:0:0:0:
348,40,107752,6,8,L|236:40,1,100,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
188,120,108460,2,8,P|176:180|192:220,1,100,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
232,248,108992,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,248,109169,6,8,P|292:212|412:252,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,348,110232,1,8,0:0:0:0:
388,348,110586,2,8,B|216:348|216:348|180:328,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,272,111649,1,8,0:0:0:0:
156,184,112003,6,8,P|178:140|172:91,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,124,112712,2,8,P|53:167|59:216,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,272,113420,2,8,L|260:272,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,184,114129,2,8,L|164:184,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,160,114661,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,160,114838,6,12,P|104:100|128:60,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,40,115546,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,84,115901,1,8,0:0:0:0:
380,16,116255,2,8,P|404:84|316:184,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,248,117318,2,8,L|188:248,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,236,117672,6,8,P|140:200|160:128,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,120,118203,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,120,118381,2,8,L|72:120,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,204,119089,2,8,B|4:288|80:316|80:316|116:288|116:288|148:308,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,256,120152,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,296,120506,6,12,B|325:287|325:287|361:315|361:315|437:287|405:203,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,148,121569,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,168,121923,2,8,P|224:120|360:56,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,148,122986,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,123341,12,4,126175,1:0:0:0:
100,128,131844,6,0,P|148:148|208:128,2,100,4|0|0,2:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,44,132907,2,0,L|272:44,2,100,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,128,133969,2,0,P|108:180|152:212,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,236,134678,6,4,L|232:344,2,100,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,164,135741,2,0,P|332:120|320:72,2,100,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,108,136804,2,0,P|181:93|134:108,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,140,137335,1,0,0:0:0:0:
68,184,137512,6,12,P|66:278|152:319,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,272,138575,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,212,138929,2,8,P|352:160|344:112,2,100,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,160,139992,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,152,140170,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,148,140347,6,8,P|90:167|42:158,2,100,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,56,141410,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,44,141764,2,8,P|328:40|380:68,2,100,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,136,142827,2,0,L|284:160,1,50
328,184,143181,6,12,P|348:264|256:320,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,304,144244,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,276,144598,2,8,P|41:182|105:110,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,84,145661,1,8,0:0:0:0:
300,92,146015,6,8,P|348:140|348:192,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,268,146724,2,8,L|236:268,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,268,147255,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,252,147432,6,8,P|68:204|80:92,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,60,148495,2,8,L|214:60,1,50,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,60,148850,6,12,P|270:108|240:146,1,100,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,248,149558,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,280,149913,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,200,150267,2,8,P|408:150|437:111,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,48,150975,2,8,L|304:144,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,176,151507,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,220,151684,6,8,P|204:240|152:216,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,180,152393,2,8,L|24:72,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,40,152924,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,36,153101,2,0,P|136:44|200:32,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,36,153810,2,0,B|340:24|340:24|396:44,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,124,154518,6,12,P|460:180|444:228,2,100,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,184,155581,2,12,P|333:140|340:91,2,100,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,276,156644,2,8,P|356:284|288:256,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,244,157176,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,224,157353,6,8,L|88:224,2,100,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,124,158416,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,152,158770,2,8,P|212:24|100:100,1,300,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,156,160187,5,4,0:0:0:0:
96,240,160541,2,0,P|120:276|192:292,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,300,161250,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,296,161604,2,0,P|418:281|447:241,1,100,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,140,162313,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,40,162667,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,104,163021,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,64,163376,2,0,L|152:64,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,64,164084,1,0,0:0:0:0:
40,164,164438,2,8,P|104:220|128:340,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,336,165501,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,332,165856,6,8,P|346:235|417:167,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,88,166919,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,40,167273,2,8,P|308:72|184:48,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,28,168336,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,168690,12,4,171524,1:0:0:0:

-Nya-

2,133 posts

Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

-Nya- 2015-04-19T15:10:48+00:00

Updated~

meii18

3,577 posts

Joined October 2013

meii18 2015-04-19T16:23:22+00:00

Looks fine now :3

Enjoy my heart -Nya-

Kyouren

5,584 posts

Joined October 2012

Kyouren 2015-04-19T16:35:50+00:00

ByBy_ChAn wrote:
Looks fine now :3

Enjoy my heart -Nya-

Thanks~ ByBy_ChAn, Sekai-nyan, and -Nya-~ :3
Finally \:D/
Gratzz~ :3 -Nya-

-Nya-

2,133 posts

Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

-Nya- 2015-04-19T17:24:22+00:00

Yay~! Thanks, everyone!

Kyubey

osu! Alumni

3,097 posts

Joined December 2012

Kyubey 2015-04-19T19:41:53+00:00

Hmm, since XinCrin made the storyboard and hitsounds in Shine difficulty, doesn't that mean they should be included in the tags? I recommend to contact some QAT to add him at least to the online tags, I guess they deserve that as contributor.

XinCrin

2,846 posts

Joined January 2012

XinCrin 2015-04-20T02:37:14+00:00

Grats Nya. Gonna revive my version soon

Gero

4,438 posts

Joined March 2012

Gero 2015-04-20T02:39:45+00:00

XinCrin wrote:
Grats Nya. Gonna revive my version soon

Remember our collab baka xD btw congrats -Nya-, I'm glad to see more nightcore in osu!

Kamio Misuzu

580 posts

Joined November 2012

Kamio Misuzu 2015-04-20T04:17:54+00:00

lol osu need more nightcore mix！

Euny

2,274 posts

Joined January 2014

Euny 2015-04-20T19:00:37+00:00

Kyubey wrote:
Hmm, since XinCrin made the storyboard and hitsounds in Shine difficulty, doesn't that mean they should be included in the tags? I recommend to contact some QAT to add him at least to the online tags, I guess they deserve that as contributor.

dont dq.

SPOILER

anyways gratz for qulified nya♥

i love this map and song.

-Nya-

2,133 posts

Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

-Nya- 2015-04-20T19:07:46+00:00

Euny wrote:
Kyubey wrote:
Hmm, since XinCrin made the storyboard and hitsounds in Shine difficulty, doesn't that mean they should be included in the tags? I recommend to contact some QAT to add him at least to the online tags, I guess they deserve that as contributor.

dont dq.

SPOILER

anyways gratz for qulified nya♥

i love this map and song.

Thanks Euny~
And the map won't get dq because of that cuz "XinCrin" had been added to the online tags by a QAT already.

Euny

2,274 posts

Joined January 2014

Euny 2015-04-21T09:10:40+00:00

-Nya- wrote:
Thanks Euny~
And the map won't get dq because of that cuz "XinCrin" had been added to the online tags by a QAT already.

YAY \o/ thanks for keep my full combo♥

Myxo

osu! Alumni

3,103 posts

Joined December 2012

Myxo 2015-04-22T14:02:18+00:00

After internal discussion, we need to disqualify this map for the following reasons:

Since you have skinned the hitcircles, it is required to define a custom Slider Border Color in the .osu-files to ensure compatibility with all custom skins.

Please add XinCrin to the tags, as he/she is the creator of your storyboard. The tag was already manually added to the Online Tags, but since it is disqualified now you can fix it to work ingame too.

We would highly recommend you to get rid of the 1/2-repeated sliders in Lally's Easy, for example 01:44:563 (1) - They are huge difficulty spikes compared to the rest of the otherwise very simple Easy (in terms of readability) and don't work well with the very low SV.

Additionally, we felt that the Storyboard could use more improvements. It feels unfinished currently, due to some energetic sections in the song that lack action in the storyboard, for example the section starting at 00:46:814 -. We hope that you can add some more content to the (otherwise very nice) storyboard there, to make those sections more exiting.

Good luck!

-Nya-

2,133 posts

Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

-Nya- 2015-04-22T14:47:52+00:00

So it's actually just the skin-thing that was unrankable. Cuz the SB is XinCrin's and it's his own creation, so I don't think that's a problem.
I'll check Lally's diff again and add XinCrin to tags.

Suimya

6,376 posts

Joined February 2011

Suimya 2015-04-22T15:28:14+00:00

We've change the 1/2 slider's in Lally's diff and everything looks good now =w=

Rebubbled~

BeatofIke

4,166 posts

Joined September 2011

BeatofIke 2015-04-22T15:29:55+00:00

Good luck for re-qualify.

Little

2,509 posts