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-Maruk-
どもども

[ReCall]

  • BPM 93しかないのでAR8か8.5でいいと思います


    00:29:792 (3) - ここからのbreak time長すぎじゃないかなと思います。00:29:872 (1)から00:33:663 までスピナー置きませんか?        
    00:58:663 (2) - 前後の流れからこれは打ちにくいと思います。
            これはどうですか?
    01:15:260 (5) - ジャンプの方がいいと思います
    01:51:556 (3) - ちょっと気になりました。(1)コピペの方が綺麗?
    02:38:805 (1) - もうちょっと離してもいいと思います。スペースきついですがこの方が好きです
    02:54:934 (4,5) - 02:54:612 (2,3) ここstackならここもstackした方がいいと思います
    03:01:386 (1) - 分かりにくいのでもっと離すかNCした方がいいと思います。
    03:45:257 (3) - 前の流れからここでstackさせるべきではないと思います。03:45:418 (4,5,6) -と同じ間隔空けたほうが打ちやすいと思われ
    03:56:063 (5) - 03:56:225 (1)にstackしませんか?
    04:57:205 (2) - 04:57:366 (3,4) -ここと同じ感じに置くのはどうですか?
      
nice mapでした。いつもmodありがとうございます。

rankedがんばー :)
Topic Starter
-Nanaka-

-Maruk- wrote:

どもども

[ReCall]

  • BPM 93しかないのでAR8か8.5でいいと思います 見た目はそうですが1/4で音取ってるので実質186です ;)


    00:29:792 (3) - ここからのbreak time長すぎじゃないかなと思います。00:29:872 (1)から00:33:663 までスピナー置きませんか? 序盤で長いスピナーは疲れるのと動画見てほしいのでKeep       
    00:58:663 (2) - 前後の流れからこれは打ちにくいと思います。 おk
            これはどうですか?
    01:15:260 (5) - ジャンプの方がいいと思います 私はそうは思いません、ここで止めることでメリハリつくと思います
    01:51:556 (3) - ちょっと気になりました。(1)コピペの方が綺麗? 角度だけ揃えました
    02:38:805 (1) - もうちょっと離してもいいと思います。スペースきついですがこの方が好きです 飛ばすとこでもないのでKeep
    02:54:934 (4,5) - 02:54:612 (2,3) ここstackならここもstackした方がいいと思います たしかに
    03:01:386 (1) - 分かりにくいのでもっと離すかNCした方がいいと思います。 スローパートなので今のままでも十分読めると思います
    03:45:257 (3) - 前の流れからここでstackさせるべきではないと思います。03:45:418 (4,5,6) -と同じ間隔空けたほうが打ちやすいと思われ you're right.Fix
    03:56:063 (5) - 03:56:225 (1)にstackしませんか? 次のFinishに合わせてジャンプさせた方が気持ちいいと思います
    04:57:205 (2) - 04:57:366 (3,4) -ここと同じ感じに置くのはどうですか?04:56:721 (5,1) - ここと同じ流れにしています
      
nice mapでした。いつもmodありがとうございます。 ええんやで

rankedがんばー :)
ありがとう :)
Nyukai
  1. Maybe it's only me but couldn't you find a mp3 with better quality? The current one sounds a bit poor at least for me ;w;
  2. 01:50:427 (3,4,1,3) - First stack is fine but I think the second one is abusing a bit :< It could be a bit confusing imo, my suggestion is trying something different with a better flow.
  3. 02:26:556 (5,6) - Why this sudden and random change of spacing? The "jump" doesn't fit at least for me unless you add it here 02:26:717 (6,1) - personally changing spacing is fine but fits better there.
  4. 03:28:483 (3) - Ctrl+G here? I don't think the current pattern flows well lol
  5. 03:37:676 (1) - I don't think this NC is necessary tbh.
  6. 04:49:951 (1,1) - I hope I'm not mistaken but I think this is not well snapped... maybe the timing is wrong or the sliders should be better snapped instead. Try to listen with 25% playback rate, they're a bit out I think o.o
  7. 05:12:043 - This kiai is unnecessary, it doesn't fit with music imo ><
Feel free to call me back once you check everything and we'll see~
Fushimi Rio
顽张って~☆ 0w0
Have no time to work on my map ;w;
Topic Starter
-Nanaka-

Inyuschan wrote:

  1. Maybe it's only me but couldn't you find a mp3 with better quality? The current one sounds a bit poor at least for me ;w;
    Ok.Change MP3
  2. 01:50:427 (3,4,1,3) - First stack is fine but I think the second one is abusing a bit :< It could be a bit confusing imo, my suggestion is trying something different with a better flow. angle of slider is I do not want to change ;;;; Stack Delete
  3. 02:26:556 (5,6) - Why this sudden and random change of spacing? The "jump" doesn't fit at least for me unless you add it here 02:26:717 (6,1) - personally changing spacing is fine but fits better there. Sure
  4. 03:28:483 (3) - Ctrl+G here? I don't think the current pattern flows well lol  Okey,change the flow
  5. 03:37:676 (1) - I don't think this NC is necessary tbh. for consistency 01:54:459 (1) -
  6. 04:49:951 (1,1) - I hope I'm not mistaken but I think this is not well snapped... maybe the timing is wrong or the sliders should be better snapped instead. Try to listen with 25% playback rate, they're a bit out I think o.o I think the timing is not perfect,I am Contact the QAT
  7. 05:12:043 - This kiai is unnecessary, it doesn't fit with music imo >< Fix
Feel free to call me back once you check everything and we'll see~
When I got the perfect timing,I can contact you :oops:
Thank you Inyuschan :)

imoutosan wrote:

顽张って~☆ 0w0
Have no time to work on my map ;w;
谢谢☆ :oops:
BeatofIke
My apologizes for forgeting to check timing.
Will check later ;w;
Topic Starter
-Nanaka-

BeatofIke wrote:

My apologizes for forgeting to check timing.
Will check later ;w;
Thank you ;;;;
BeatofIke
Long timing check (I think I went overboard here XD):

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272141,645.161290322581,4,2,1,40,1,0
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312019,645.161290322581,4,2,2,80,1,0
KaedekaShizuru
応援でーすー(人´ω`*).☆.。.:*・゜
edit: may I use some audio in this map for my recall?https://osu.ppy.sh/s/294900
thank you~ :)
Nyukai
Don't forget to poke me once this is ready.
Topic Starter
-Nanaka-

KaedekaShizuru wrote:

応援でーすー(人´ω`*).☆.。.:*・゜
edit: may I use some audio in this map for my recall?https://osu.ppy.sh/s/294900
thank you~ :)
Not care,gogo :)

Inyuschan wrote:

Don't forget to poke me once this is ready.
Thanks so much :oops:
BeatofIke
Updated Timing. Should be much better now owo!
No kudosu for this one.


[TimingPoints]
10083,645.091925599398,4,2,0,80,1,0
91203,638.297872340426,4,2,0,80,1,0
91364,659.340659340659,4,2,0,80,1,0
92682,631.578947368421,4,2,1,60,1,0
93945,659.340659340659,4,2,1,20,1,0
94604,645.161290322581,4,2,1,20,1,0
94926,594.059405940594,4,2,1,20,1,0
95223,645.161290322581,4,2,1,70,1,0
264255,670.391061452514,4,2,1,70,1,0
265595,625,4,2,1,55,1,0
266845,666.666666666667,4,2,1,40,1,0
268178,625,4,2,1,40,1,0
269428,681.818181818182,4,2,1,20,1,0
270109,540.540540540541,4,2,1,20,1,0
270649,705.882352941176,4,2,1,40,1,0
271178,618.556701030928,4,2,1,40,1,0
271641,750,4,2,1,40,1,0
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274275,705.882352941176,4,2,1,40,1,0
274451,705.882352941176,4,2,1,40,1,0
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275254,638.297872340426,4,2,1,40,1,0
275573,666.666666666667,4,2,1,40,1,0
275906,689.655172413793,4,2,1,40,1,0
276250,652.173913043478,4,2,1,40,1,0
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276558,600,4,2,1,40,1,0
277158,666.666666666667,4,2,1,40,1,0
277491,631.578947368421,4,2,1,40,1,0
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277789,833.333333333333,4,2,1,40,1,0
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278125,710.059171597633,4,2,1,40,1,0
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311344,674.157303370787,4,2,2,80,1,0
312018,645.161290322581,4,2,2,80,1,0
Shiro
Don't bubble this until I take a look at the timing. I can't do that right now because of a bug in the editor, but I hope it will be fixed soon.
Topic Starter
-Nanaka-

Shiro wrote:

Don't bubble this until I take a look at the timing. I can't do that right now because of a bug in the editor, but I hope it will be fixed soon.
Merci infiniment.Shiro :cry: :cry: :cry:

& Thank you. Ikechan!
BeatofIke

Shiro wrote:

Don't bubble this until I take a look at the timing. I can't do that right now because of a bug in the editor, but I hope it will be fixed soon.
Thank Goodness you're here Shiro. I need help ;w;
Shiro
The first offset was wrong, which is why the map felt like it needed complex timing, but with the proper offset it becomes much simpler:


It does need an offset fix at the end.
Note that the vocals are off most of the time. BeatofIke's timing was focused on vocals, which is generally a bad idea and leads to awful timings.
Topic Starter
-Nanaka-

BeatofIke wrote:

Shiro wrote:

Don't bubble this until I take a look at the timing. I can't do that right now because of a bug in the editor, but I hope it will be fixed soon.
Thank Goodness you're here Shiro. I need help ;w;

Shiro wrote:

The first offset was wrong, which is why the map felt like it needed complex timing, but with the proper offset it becomes much simpler:


It does need an offset fix at the end.
Note that the vocals are off most of the time. BeatofIke's timing was focused on vocals, which is generally a bad idea and leads to awful timings.
Thank you so much. :oops: :oops: :oops:

This probably would be 1/6.....
02:10:730 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -  
03:53:955 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
05:06:192 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
But I want to take in 1/8,The thinking on the Playing
I follow the BN of judgment

Edit:add Drum hitnormal
Nyukai
No kudosu.

  1. 01:24:923 (4,1) - Actually you should swap the NCs, that one doesn't fit D:
  2. 01:31:375 - I miss a note here according to the next coming notes.
  3. 01:50:730 (1) - Missing finish here? Somehow I can hear the music a bit louder.
  4. 03:17:826 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - This is too hard imo while you've used the same rhythm and lower spacing, maybe try to modify this a bit?
  5. 03:20:891 (1,3) - Swap the NC because you're breaking the consistency here.
  6. 03:38:633 (1) - This NC is unnecessary because the same reason as before at least for me D:
  7. 04:09:278 (4,5,6) - Reduce the spacing please, this is quite confusing especially because the stacks.
  8. 04:12:235 (3) - I think this is wrong snapped, somehow it doesn't fit exactly with music, however if you move it to 04:12:262 - and reduce it to just an 1/2 slider you'll see it fits better, try it.
  9. 04:12:504 (4) - More or less like here, move it to blue tick.
Please call me again ><
Topic Starter
-Nanaka-

Inyuschan wrote:

No kudosu.

  1. 01:24:923 (4,1) - Actually you should swap the NCs, that one doesn't fit D: Fix
  2. 01:31:375 - I miss a note here according to the next coming notes. No,I The first was placed there is a gap between the piano :(I think when you mess by adding a Note.
  3. 01:50:730 (1) - Missing finish here? Somehow I can hear the music a bit louder. Fix 03:33:955 - add
  4. 03:17:826 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - This is too hard imo while you've used the same rhythm and lower spacing, maybe try to modify this a bit? Okey 8-)
  5. 03:20:891 (1,3) - Swap the NC because you're breaking the consistency here. oh....nicecatch :oops:
  6. 03:38:633 (1) - This NC is unnecessary because the same reason as before at least for me D: Fix lol
  7. 04:09:278 (4,5,6) - Reduce the spacing please, this is quite confusing especially because the stacks. Fix
  8. 04:12:235 (3) - I think this is wrong snapped, somehow it doesn't fit exactly with music, however if you move it to 04:12:262 - and reduce it to just an 1/2 slider you'll see it fits better, try it.
  9. 04:12:504 (4) - More or less like here, move it to blue tick. Fix
Please call me again ><
thx><
Nyukai
Looks fine to me.

Bubble #1~
Topic Starter
-Nanaka-

Inyuschan wrote:

Looks fine to me.

Bubble #1~

ByBy_ChAn wrote:

We fixed just a NC ;w; Looks great the map



#2 ;D
Thxヾ(。>﹏<。)ノ゙
meii18
We fixed just a NC ;w; Looks great the map



#2 ;D
Topic Starter
-Nanaka-
follow advice,by alacat
This point
02:10:730 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
03:53:955 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
05:06:192 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
I want to change to 1/2 slider because it does not want to use the 1/6 :( :( :(
meii18
rebubble #2
Topic Starter
-Nanaka-
I'm very sorry for this.
Thank you very much. :)
alacat
ふぁいとです :D
Topic Starter
-Nanaka-

alacat wrote:

ふぁいとです :D
チェックありがとうございます!
気が楽になりました :)
IRC log
2015-04-18 01:02 -Nanaka-: 02:10:730 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 03:53:955 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 05:06:192 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 
2015-04-18 01:02 -Nanaka-: この3点なんですけど許されますかね....?
2015-04-18 01:07 alacat: ん~!これは1/6の音かなり強いので修正するべきだと思います・・・!
2015-04-18 01:08 -Nanaka-: んんんん~!slider2本でいいですか......!
2015-04-18 01:08 alacat: そこはおまかせしますよ!
2015-04-18 01:09 -Nanaka-: んんとこういうのって連打意外ならなんでもおいていいんですか?
2015-04-18 01:12 alacat: 1/6の音ならいいと思いますよ!
2015-04-18 01:12 alacat: 1/4だと音のないところにobjectを配置するって形になるので・・・!
2015-04-18 01:13 -Nanaka-: これだとVocalだから通る感じなんですか?
2015-04-18 01:13 -Nanaka-: http://puu.sh/hhcU9/d816f6fd3a.jpg
2015-04-18 01:14 -Nanaka-: ランクドの方これで通ってたんで
2015-04-18 01:15 alacat: そうですね!何かしら音があれば主張できるので
2015-04-18 01:17 -Nanaka-: 正直プレイヤー視点から言って1/3.6とか面白くない;;;;
2015-04-18 01:25 alacat: 叩きづらいし1/4がいいですよね・・・w
2015-04-18 01:33 -Nanaka-: 例えばですけど最後のサビだけ1/6にするとかだと統一感云々でやられますか?
2015-04-18 01:35 -Nanaka-: そもそも03:17:826 - ここボーカルとってなかったからおとなしく6使った方がいいかもですね;
2015-04-18 01:39 alacat: それは自由ですよ!違う音を取りたいという方もたくさんいると思うので!
2015-04-18 01:40 -Nanaka-: ほんとですか!sliderでも良さそうならそうしたいです;
2015-04-18 01:40 alacat: そうですね~曲自体難しい音なのでセンスが問われますね!
2015-04-18 01:41 -Nanaka-: 普通にさっきの2本以外思いつかない.....!
2015-04-18 01:41 alacat: さすがにボーカルの音があるのに1/6にし内とだめっていう方はいないと思います!
2015-04-18 01:41 -Nanaka-: ほえええもやもや無くなりました!
2015-04-18 01:41 -Nanaka-: 押し通してたものの不安だったんで
2015-04-18 01:43 -Nanaka-: 1/8でのさっきのsliderって1/4っていうのが正しいんですか?
2015-04-18 01:43 -Nanaka-: 2でいいんですか?
2015-04-18 01:44 alacat: えっとどの部分ですか!
2015-04-18 01:44 -Nanaka-: http://puu.sh/hheCl/4483a90718.jpg
2015-04-18 01:44 -Nanaka-: こういうのです!
2015-04-18 01:44 -Nanaka-: 04:44:579 (4) -
2015-04-18 01:45 -Nanaka-: 適当ですけどこれっていつもどうり1/2でいいんですか?
2015-04-18 01:46 -Nanaka-: えーと呼び方ですね!
2015-04-18 01:46 alacat: あとこれは1/4 sliderかな・・・?赤線から青線なので・・・!一般的な譜面とちょっと異なってるのでややこしいですね!
2015-04-18 01:47 -Nanaka-: 1/4ですね!色々ありがとうございました!
2015-04-18 01:48 alacat: 数え方は*/4で考えて後は約分すればいいと思います!
2015-04-18 01:48 -Nanaka-: はーい!
Konei
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Chirony
やるねぇ
Asahina Momoko
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BeatofIke
おめでとうございます! :)
Sellenite
congrats :)
DarknessAngel
gratz ! :>
KaedekaShizuru
gratz !
俺も頑張るぞ
Fia
Gratz! ~~

/me slaps imoutosan
-Maruk-
おめでっと :)
Pururut
おめでとう!
Starfy
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This Sky wrote:

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Chirony wrote:

やるねぇ
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M o k o r i wrote:

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BeatofIke wrote:

おめでとうございます! :)
Thx Ike!!!
Thank you always for everything for your help :)

Sellenite wrote:

congrats :)
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DarknessAngel wrote:

gratz ! :>
谢谢 Angel :)

KaedekaShizuru wrote:

gratz !
俺も頑張るぞ
頑張ってね! :)

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-Maruk- wrote:

おめでっと :)
ありがとう! :)

Pururut wrote:

おめでとう!
Thx Puruchan :)

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