1. 00:10:759 (4,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4)　- 00:09:146 (1,2,3) ここと取ってる音違うのかな？前の方はボーカル取ってるみたいだからそれに合わせたほうがいいと思う。どっち取ってるかわかんなくてあやふやな感じ
   
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2. 01:43:975 (4) - ここなんかあってないような気がする　1/6の間隔でリバースとかのほうが合うのかなよくわかんない！！！１
3. 01:46:878 (5) - これを 01:45:910 (1) の始点に重ねて、それを 01:47:201 (1) でブランケットするのはどう？今のままだとちょっち汚く見えた
4. 01:51:556 (3) - Ctrl+Gした方がいいかも。特に飛ぶとこでもないし流れ通りに進めたほうがプレイしやすそう
5. 02:36:708 (2,3) - 交換したほうがボーカルフォロー出来てる
6. 02:44:289 (2) - ブランケット粗め
7. 02:50:418 (1) - もう少しつながりよくなるように逆向きがおすすめ
   
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8. 03:20:095 (3,5,1) - なんかすごく不格好に見える 　03:21:386 (1) これだけ下から上に伸びるやつじゃない形に変えるとかするといいと思う（代替案がない）
9. 04:03:321 (1) - ブランケット綺麗にできます
10. 04:08:160 (2,3) - 交換したほうがギターフォローできそう
11. 05:01:398 (3,1) - かなり流れ悪く感じる。全然つながってないように見えた
12. 05:07:527 (6) - これとか 05:06:560 (3) これに重ねたほうが見栄え良くないかい？わざわざはずさなくてもいいともう
13. 05:10:108 (2,3) - ここは飛び過ぎじゃないかな？間隔狭くするかもしくは、スライダーを一つ前の青線まで縮めたほうがよさげ

1. 01:10:356 - サークル追加して3連にしませんか？音楽も拾えるし、盛り上がっていくところなのでちょうどいいと思います
2. 01:11:873 (3,4) - ボーカルフォローしてるなら逆にした方がいいと思います。ボーカルの伸びてる音に合わせたほうがリズム取りやすいかと
3. 01:12:518 (2,3) - 上と同じ　
4. 01:16:550 (2) - このスライダーは何もフォロー出来てないように感じました。01:16:873 まで縮めるのがいいかと思います
5. 01:29:615 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 25°くらい動かしてこんなかんじにすると綺麗に見えます
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 02:04:620 (3,4,5) - 上に向けて直線にした方がいいと思います。好みの問題なんだけど、 02:04:943 (6,7,8,9) - この連打が直線なので揃えたほうが綺麗に見えると思います
7. 02:14:620 (1) - 速度変化はここから？スライダーの動きが少し早いように感じました
8. 02:59:450 (1,2) - もう少しうまく音取れそう
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 03:12:354 (1) - 少し流れ悪そうなんでこっち試してみてください
   
   
10. 03:12:999 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - ただ流れてるだけであんまり面白みがないので少し飛ばしてみるとか、三角形、四角形、星形なんかを使ってみるともっと綺麗になるかなとおもいます
11. 03:14:934 (1) -normalのfinishだと 音合ってないしサビ前だから、softの方にした方がいいと思います
12. 04:33:986 (6) - スライダーに変えて、 04:34:148 ここまで伸ばしてみてください。3連だけだと浮いてるように感じました

Chirony wrote:

やっはろー

[-Nanaka-]

1. 00:10:759 (4,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4)　- 00:09:146 (1,2,3) ここと取ってる音違うのかな？前の方はボーカル取ってるみたいだからそれに合わせたほうがいいと思う。どっち取ってるかわかんなくてあやふやな感じ　00:09:146 (1,2,3)こころりえもん的にメロディ取るならこうって言われたんだよね(こごえ)でもあやふや感はわかるからちょっと弄ってみる
   
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2. 01:43:975 (4) - ここなんかあってないような気がする　1/6の間隔でリバースとかのほうが合うのかなよくわかんない！！！１　たしかに1/6リバースの音取り綺麗だったけど打ちにくそう；
3. 01:46:878 (5) - これを 01:45:910 (1) の始点に重ねて、それを 01:47:201 (1) でブランケットするのはどう？今のままだとちょっち汚く見えた　ここはblanketより軽く飛ばしたい
4. 01:51:556 (3) - Ctrl+Gした方がいいかも。特に飛ぶとこでもないし流れ通りに進めたほうがプレイしやすそう 言いたいことは分かるけど、ここvocalのトーンというか曲調？というか感覚的なあれでこのままがいいからKeepしたい
5. 02:36:708 (2,3) - 交換したほうがボーカルフォロー出来てる　たしかに
6. 02:44:289 (2) - ブランケット粗め k
7. 02:50:418 (1) - もう少しつながりよくなるように逆向きがおすすめ ふええん
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 03:20:095 (3,5,1) - なんかすごく不格好に見える 　03:21:386 (1) これだけ下から上に伸びるやつじゃない形に変えるとかするといいと思う（代替案がない）　めっちゃわかるｗｗｗｗｗｗここ一番時間使ってると思う、もうちょい考える
9. 04:03:321 (1) - ブランケット綺麗にできます　k
10. 04:08:160 (2,3) - 交換したほうがギターフォローできそう たしかに
11. 05:01:398 (3,1) - かなり流れ悪く感じる。全然つながってないように見えた　かなり繋がってると思うんだけど；；個人的にこういう流れめちゃ好き
12. 05:07:527 (6) - これとか 05:06:560 (3) これに重ねたほうが見栄え良くないかい？わざわざはずさなくてもいいともう　ここはど真ん中に置きたい、手前から真ん中におこうとしたけど結構前からになるからあきらめた
13. 05:10:108 (2,3) - ここは飛び過ぎじゃないかな？間隔狭くするかもしくは、スライダーを一つ前の青線まで縮めたほうがよさげ せやな
14. 03:14:934 (1) -normalのfinishだと 音合ってないしサビ前だから、softの方にした方がいいと思います いやここはNormalで！03:12:354 - こことなってる音同じだと思うしSoftのがあってないと思う

これはどっちも共通　 01:13:647 (1) みたいに Drum clap に入れてる音2回おんなじ大きさでなってるからひとつ目だけじゃなくて2つ付けた方がいいと思いました・drum addition だけ入ってたりするのでそろえたほうがいいかな　Drum clapかなり試行錯誤しててどっちも入れちゃうと音が重くなりすぎて合わなくなったから、こうやって入れてる；；drum additionはいろいろ試した後戻すのめんどくてそんままになってる、特に問題ないから場所言われるまで放置！

スペーシング広いから流れ気にしないとまずいことになりそう
good luck!

Chirony wrote:

やっはろー

[Snow Lover]

1. 01:10:356 - サークル追加して3連にしませんか？音楽も拾えるし、盛り上がっていくところなのでちょうどいいと思います
2. 01:11:873 (3,4) - ボーカルフォローしてるなら逆にした方がいいと思います。ボーカルの伸びてる音に合わせたほうがリズム取りやすいかと
3. 01:12:518 (2,3) - 上と同じ　
4. 01:16:550 (2) - このスライダーは何もフォロー出来てないように感じました。01:16:873 まで縮めるのがいいかと思います
5. 01:29:615 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 25°くらい動かしてこんなかんじにすると綺麗に見えます
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 02:04:620 (3,4,5) - 上に向けて直線にした方がいいと思います。好みの問題なんだけど、 02:04:943 (6,7,8,9) - この連打が直線なので揃えたほうが綺麗に見えると思います　変更なしでいきます。
7. 02:14:620 (1) - 速度変化はここから？スライダーの動きが少し早いように感じました
8. 02:59:450 (1,2) - もう少しうまく音取れそう
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 03:12:354 (1) - 少し流れ悪そうなんでこっち試してみてください
   
   
10. 03:12:999 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - ただ流れてるだけであんまり面白みがないので少し飛ばしてみるとか、三角形、四角形、星形なんかを使ってみるともっと綺麗になるかなとおもいます　考えておきます
11. 03:14:934 (1) -normalのfinishだと 音合ってないしサビ前だから、softの方にした方がいいと思います　個人的な理由ですが、Normalの方が良いと思いました。
12. 04:33:986 (6) - スライダーに変えて、 04:34:148 ここまで伸ばしてみてください。3連だけだと浮いてるように感じました

これはどっちも共通　 01:13:647 (1) みたいに Drum clap に入れてる音2回おんなじ大きさでなってるからひとつ目だけじゃなくて2つ付けた方がいいと思いました・drum addition だけ入ってたりするのでそろえたほうがいいかな

スペーシング広いから流れ気にしないとまずいことになりそう
good luck!

iyasine wrote:

go

-Chata- wrote:

From M4M

Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.
Blue : Should be fixed / highly suggested.
Black : Just suggestion.

[General]

ちょっと個人的な意見なんだけどCombo colorが合ってない気がする　設定忘れてたｗｗｗそしてどうでもいいけどBookmarksがUnsnapされてるのが気になる　まだtiming完璧じゃないから今設定してもずれるｗ難易度的にAR9.1～9.2が合いそう。DTができる譜面でもないし　BPM的に許されなそう；；

　
[Re:Call

01:33:025 (1) - 音量を30％まで上げてNormal Addition whistle追加　サビ前は響かせたい01:44:459 (6) - Ctrl + Gしたほうが良さそう　たしかに02:00:104 (1) - ここだけClapの音がないのが気にかかる　忘れだったｗありがとう03:18:805 (1) - 逆向きリピートスライダーはいい感じしない　ｍｍｍKeepしたい感あるけど考えてみる03:27:837 (1) - 連打のSpacingを守ろう　Fix04:24:612 (1) - これ 04:24:638 - ここに移そう　すぺしゃるさんくす！ 04:31:055 - Time line is unsnapped　出来てると思うんだけど通り過ぎたら合ってるから問題ないと思う04:45:265 - Time line is unsnapped　^04:46:394 (3) - このスライダーの終点を04:46:565 - ここにしよう 物理的に無理 05:10:108 (2,3) - 3/4スライダーとは思えないと思うな。距離と向きを考えて。　ちのりーにも言われててまだその差分更新してなかった

ぐっどらっく(´・ω・｀)

M o k o r i wrote:

hi(∩・▽・∩)

General

1. app狙いだしせっかくならコンボカラー設定したいかも・・・？動画が長くていろんな色でてくるからなんともいえないとこだけど、自分なら夕焼けのシーンとか後半の黒の背景に合う色をつけるとか基準に選ぶと思います　独自の基準があるのでそれつけときま！

　

Recall

1. 00:10:921 (1,2) - 00:11:243 - に音が鳴ってるので、この２つ入れ替えたほうがマッチすると思います　Fix
2. 00:18:985 (3) - ギター音が３連のトレモロで聞こえるので完全に音を拾う形にするなら1/12のリバースでも合いそうですけど、落ち着いた部分なのできにいらなければそのままで！　ここでそれしちゃうとビビりそうだからKeep www
3. 01:49:298 (4) - 「そ」「れ」の部分、出来たらスライダーより単発のほうがやってみて楽しかったです okまかせて
4. 03:16:870 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ここの連打の音1/6だと思います　嫌です！ｗ
5. 04:07:837 (1,2) - 音取りですが、こうしてギター音の雰囲気に合わせて２のスライダーを速度変化つけるか、スライダーの形を04:03:321 (1) - みたいに変えてみませんか？　Finishに合わせて真っ直ぐがいい！曲げると弱いというか勢いなくなっちゃう；；；；；；；
   
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6. 04:11:708 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - 見た目ちょっと汚いので整えたほうがいいと思います；；　あとNCも１２３４，１２３４，１２３４，１２ですらいだー３に続くとかにしたほうがきれいなのでそれに沿った連打の曲げ方してみてください　まっじで？個人的に好きな感じなんだけどいろいろ試してみる....
7. 04:49:951 (1,1,1) - 最低限04:50:113 (1,1) - はもっとスペーシングあけてもいいかなと思います、大サビにも入りますし今のDSだとごっちゃになってる感あるので 　ここは自分でもやりづらかったから変える！！
8. 05:05:269 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 1/6?　^
9. 05:14:301 - これもSBに合わせて すらいだーの動き時計回りにしたほうがおしゃれな気がしました！ 神、最初針真ん中に来るように試してたけどできなかったから、それ採用！

正直1/6でも1/8でもプレイには差し支えないかなってのがやってみた感想なのでまともなmodになってないとおもうごめん；；
ボーカルメインの曲むずかしすぎ・・・
とりあえずapp目指してがんばー！！STAR!!　ありがと

-Chata- wrote:

1. 03:06:547 (1,2,3) - もうちょっと距離を置こう。1/4のキックか短いし1/8の短小キックだと勘違いしそうだから。No、距離おいたほうが分かりにくい
2. 03:13:966 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - 違う流れはないかな・・・03:14:450 (4,5) - ここだけでもちょっと違う配置にしてほしい　Fix

M o k o r i wrote:

hi(∩・▽・∩)

• 
  

  Recall

  1. 1. 00:52:372 (1) - 00:52:534 - のピアノ音をとらない音取りにちょっと違和感を感じました。こんな感じに変えてみるのどうでしょう？　Fix
        
        SPOILER

        
        
     2. 00:57:534 (2) - 置くなら00:57:372 - のほうがいいと思います、ギター音も背景にあるので　これはNo、分かりにくかった
     3. 00:58:985 (1) - 始点を00:58:975 - にして1/2スライダーに　Fix
     4. 04:24:612 (1,1,1,1,1) - これに続く形変えなきゃいけなくなっちゃいますけど、せっかく時計の針の動きをモチーフにしてるならSBにあわせて逆周りにしませんか？　神
     5. 04:49:467 (3) - これスタックさせないほうがやりやすいかもです　Fix
     6. 05:31:560 (1,1,1,1) - 上に同じく　ここは別にそんな合わせ必要感じなかったので気持ち程度
  ぐっどらっく(´・ω・｀)

zj0924 wrote:

[Insane]

• 
  I usually suggest flow in my mod,but I can hardly find any big flow problems in your map.Good flow!
  perhaps your frequently using short sliders and regular triangle flow that made it smooth to play.
  However circular flow ,triangle flow(including some star 星型flow) straight line flow are too much in your map(especially first half of the map),I think you can add various flow to make your map more intresting

1. suggest OD7.5 cuz some slow sliders and many jumpy notes　Consider
2. Stack Problems
3. 01:42:685 (3) - 43 243?
4. 03:56:063 (5) - 48 344?
5. 01:51:072 (1) - 104 288?
6. 01:51:556 (3) - tail stack
7. 03:45:257 (3) - 313 199?
8. 04:34:793 (2) - 284 111?
   Fix
   
9. 00:29:792 (3) - break is too long try to add some spinner? Nope,I want to watch the video
   SPOILER

   
10. 01:13:002 (1,2,3,4) - try this?
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    　sorry keep
11. 01:29:131 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1) - the pattern is not suitbale for this.I prefer jumpy flows when hearing piano sound.It is really weird to play in this kind of circular flow.01:29:454 (3,1) - the distance of these two is confusing,too I know you want to double the distance but it's really difficult to recognize in this kind of flow and many people may feel sudden to play this.If you really don't want to change suggest to do this
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12. 02:00:588 (3,4) - flows bad here suggest this cuz 02:00:910 (4,5,6) - that make me feel 02:00:910 (4) - will not appear on 02:00:427 (2) -and you did same here 02:01:878 (3,4,5,6) - Fix
    SPOILER

    
13. 03:16:225 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - good idea to use 1/6 beat but without warning it is really confused to read I suggest to Change later
    
    SPOILER

    
14. 03:36:386 (4) - blanket?　omg...Fix Thank you 　
15. 03:39:289 (6) - really confusing and I don't like straight line after a triangle flow.03:38:805 (3,4,5) cuz distance is too big - try this? ok,Other Placement
    SPOILER

    
16. 04:43:173 (2) - ctrl+g?　No
17. 04:44:776 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - The pattern is really awesome and impressive!good
18. 04:51:237 (4,5) - ctrl+g is better for me Fix
19. 04:55:269 (4,1) - wrong distance.to emphasize the downbeat it should be further suggest 04:54:947 (3,4) - respectively ctrl+g

Generally speaking,Great map and great patience to make this map,GL for ranking

Pjecoo wrote:

hi m4m.

00:27:211 (1) - Make slider more curvy like this 00:27:695 (2) - Fix
01:05:276 (4) - Maybe cover the 01:04:308 (5) - with the end of the slider? ^
01:11:873 (3,1) - Stack? No
01:13:163 (2,3) - ^ ^
01:17:196 (3,6) - ^ ^
01:31:712 (1) - Put it in the centre of playing field. ^
01:38:168 (1,3) - Blanket. not need
02:00:427 (2,4) - This circles are kinda off from playing field, maybe put them little bit down? If you are going to apply this, move also 02:01:072 (5,6) - & oh... Fix02:01:717 (2) -
02:56:063 (3,4) - Blanket 02:56:225 (4,4) - Blanket
05:06:560 (3,6) - Stack with the beginning & end of sliders?
05:12:043 (1) - wow.
05:31:560 (1) - What about 1/4 slider. it fits well imo.
05:33:011 (1,1,1) - What about constant DS? I want to narrow

Hope that helps.
Beautiful style of mapping btw.
good luck.

kakifly wrote:

hi o/ m4m from your queue

General

-Fine

Re:Call

-00:09:146 (1) - missing clap　Nope,I do not fit it ... too strong
-01:10:759 (1) - remove nc here so you can add NC at 01:11:067 (3) - , it will indicate the timing change , then for consistency : 01:11:550 (1) - 01:13:002 (1) - remove nc It should look like this at the end　sure http://puu.sh/gmOZf/bde12155df.jpg
-01:46:717 (4,5) - the flow here kind of switches, like it goes the opposite way which doesnt feel so natural if you arrange it to something like this it would flow better imo ok Fix http://puu.sh/gmOfq/40d9914520.jpg
-01:55:749 (3,4) - this stack here feels random for me, theres nothing duplicate in the music so it doesnt seem right, why not try some jumps like this? nice http://puu.sh/gmOrv/f3d166c049.jpg
-02:52:999 (6) - - add nc for consistency fix
-03:07:192 - unnecessary timing point omg....Thank you
-03:28:483 (3) - ctrl + g? i think it flowers better owo sorry
- 03:36:063 (2,4) - this blanket bothers me ;-; please fix omg...........Fix
-03:57:192 (1) - is this nc really needed? a combo of 1 seems weird :< Okey
-04:10:741 (1,2,3,4) - i feel like these are snapped wrongly, or the music is just really off beat, either way this plays very confusingly and could put off the player, not sure if timing changes are required here or not, but i wouldnt recommend mapping the 1/6's here because they're not onbeat, maybe a long slider would be more safe in the qualifying stage xD sure,Change later
-04:31:700 (1) - missing normal clap? nice
-04:50:914 (2,3,4,5) - flows kind of weirdly imo, i suggest this : http://puu.sh/gmPWS/2d4a91b0c1.jpg imo it flows more naturally in a circular motion this way Fix
-05:12:043 (1) - i dont understand this huge slider.. wouldnt a break / spinner be better? but whatever you want i guess :<
-05:27:043 (4) - missing whistle yey

good luck

Owntrolf wrote:

I don't really like that near black hitcircle color　Sorry.no problem

Sometimes I'm confused if you're following vocals or background such as 00:11:243 (3) - where the vocals start on the red tick
moar
00:15:114 (3) -
00:16:405 (4) -
slider is to follow the piano
I wish the break was mapped
01:14:131 (3) - Maybe change to Sound is not in there

SPOILER

01:15:260 (5) - Maybe 1/4 slider?　Nope.In order to prevent the boredom
01:16:067 (2,3,1,2) - Maybe change to Chirony's Mod

SPOILER

01:28:647 - Missing note?　No,Sound is not in there
01:33:993 (3,4,5,6,1) - Maybe add movement for the small stream instead of stacking? Collapse appearance
01:36:233 (3,4,5) - Maybe just make it into 2 1/4 sliders so its like

SPOILER

01:41:233 (3,4) - Slider first then circle?　hm...Please try to listen to lower rate. also 01:41:394 - To be to click because there is a strong sound
02:05:749 (2,3) - ^ ^

--02:15:910 - 02:35:910 - Might be a better break than the first one I want Sure, but I look at the first video

03:24:450 (3,4) - slider first then circle?　Same reason as above
03:44:934 (2,3) - circle then slider?　^
04:35:927 (2) - Maybe change to 2 circles 04:36:089 - I do not think so because the weak sound
04:36:557 (5,6) - Maybe change to this

SPOILER

04:44:776 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - This is really strange
04:47:855 (1,2,3,4,1) - Maybe change to 04:47:855 - 1/2 slider Fix it

SPOILER

04:56:076 (2,3) - Slider first then circle? Same reason as above
04:56:882 (1,3) - I think it would be better if they went downwards more looks fine

Maybe the end should be more of the long slider art

-Nanaka- wrote:

I'm sorry it would be turned down a lot.....
But I have to thank you
Please use at any time since passing the Modding ticket

ohad1881 wrote:

hello
m4m requested in game
general- http://prntscr.com/6jidg0 pls XD ???
00:12:534-dont you prefer to do it symmetrical with 2-like this http://prntscr.com/6ji7ur Fix
00:54:147-remove NC
00:54:953-NC
00:55:921-ctrl g?
00:59:469 4,5 fix blanket
01:03:340 3,4 symmetrical?
01:15:260-x364 y225 stack
01:42:685-x42 stack
01:50:910-y289 stack
02:55:579 2,3,4 blanket?
02:57:676-make it like 4
02:58:966-ctrl g?
03:44:934-x236
04:08:563 5,6 are you sure about this placement?
04:34:309-x+1 y+1 stack
05:10:108-it will be better if you stack it
05:12:043-i prefer putting a spinner here until here 05:16:237 and then a brake until here 05:21:398
GL!

m1223961117 wrote:

From #modreqs

[General]

1. No

[Main]

• 
  00:20:598 (4) - stack at 00:20:437 (3) - ??　Nope,I think the flow is also no problem
  00:20:759 (1) - How about this bending?? Get better flow　^
  01:14:776 (4) - blanket?? Do not need
  01:33:670 (2) - NC??　^
  01:51:556 (3) - same like this?? 01:51:072 (1) - Sorry,No. I think that it is Fit to song
  02:11:878 (2) - this is very well than stacking tail: http://puu.sh/gJLQL/889def2475.jpg ^
  02:13:975 (4) - change 2 circles?? Have a good end Oh you're right. nice.
  02:18:330 (2) - Just my feeling, I think no need this circle, I can't hear anything here, really. omg...Fix
  02:39:289 (3) - Copy 02:38:805 (1) - and then Ctrl+J fix
  02:41:063 (4) - stack on 02:40:095 (1) 's tail?? If you change, 02:40:741 (3) - move to 476|104 Okey
  02:43:966 (1,2) - how about this?? you can try: http://puu.sh/gJMxC/288223e211.jpg gooood
  02:47:031 (3) - bending like this 02:47:676 (5) - ?? k
  02:58:966 (4) - I'm a evil. Ctrl+G?? k
  03:10:418 (3) - Ctrl+G?? Nope
  03:14:692 - add circle?? ^ nothing to follow.Not sound
  03:16:547 (2) - Ctrl+G, I think copy this 03:16:225 (1) - is OK ok
  03:21:386 (1) - Ctrl+G, better flow ummm,No But flow is not good....I wait for the other opinion
  03:47:999 (4) - Change a circle?? slider feel weird　I do not think so
  04:02:354 (2,3) - Ctrl+G??　omg...Very nice flow! Thanks
  04:08:563 (5,6) - stack better?? why put so strange?? hm....move left
  04:18:966 (5,6) - Ctrl+G?? yey
  04:48:822 (1) - Suggestion: try to let 04:48:822 (1) - blanket between 04:48:177 (2,3) - , and 04:48:984 (2) - move to 288|316 hmm..Once Keep

Wow, few problem in this map
Star and good luck for you

Really nice mod Thanks

• 
  BPM 93しかないのでAR8か8.5でいいと思います
  
  
  00:29:792 (3) - ここからのbreak time長すぎじゃないかなと思います。00:29:872 (1)から00:33:663 までスピナー置きませんか？　　　　　　　　
  00:58:663 (2) - 前後の流れからこれは打ちにくいと思います。
  　　　　　　　　これはどうですか？
  
  img

  
  01:15:260 (5) - ジャンプの方がいいと思います
  01:51:556 (3) - ちょっと気になりました。(1)コピペの方が綺麗？
  02:38:805 (1) - もうちょっと離してもいいと思います。スペースきついですがこの方が好きです
  
  img

  
  02:54:934 (4,5) - 02:54:612 (2,3) ここstackならここもstackした方がいいと思います
  03:01:386 (1) - 分かりにくいのでもっと離すかNCした方がいいと思います。
  03:45:257 (3) - 前の流れからここでstackさせるべきではないと思います。03:45:418 (4,5,6) -と同じ間隔空けたほうが打ちやすいと思われ
  03:56:063 (5) - 03:56:225 (1)にstackしませんか？
  04:57:205 (2) - 04:57:366 (3,4) -ここと同じ感じに置くのはどうですか？
  　　

-Maruk- wrote:

どもども

[ReCall]

• 
  BPM 93しかないのでAR8か8.5でいいと思います　見た目はそうですが1/4で音取ってるので実質186です
  
  
  00:29:792 (3) - ここからのbreak time長すぎじゃないかなと思います。00:29:872 (1)から00:33:663 までスピナー置きませんか？　序盤で長いスピナーは疲れるのと動画見てほしいのでKeep　　　　　　　
  00:58:663 (2) - 前後の流れからこれは打ちにくいと思います。　おｋ
  　　　　　　　　これはどうですか？
  
  img

  
  01:15:260 (5) - ジャンプの方がいいと思います　私はそうは思いません、ここで止めることでメリハリつくと思います
  01:51:556 (3) - ちょっと気になりました。(1)コピペの方が綺麗？　角度だけ揃えました
  02:38:805 (1) - もうちょっと離してもいいと思います。スペースきついですがこの方が好きです　飛ばすとこでもないのでKeep
  
  img

  
  02:54:934 (4,5) - 02:54:612 (2,3) ここstackならここもstackした方がいいと思います たしかに
  03:01:386 (1) - 分かりにくいのでもっと離すかNCした方がいいと思います。　スローパートなので今のままでも十分読めると思います
  03:45:257 (3) - 前の流れからここでstackさせるべきではないと思います。03:45:418 (4,5,6) -と同じ間隔空けたほうが打ちやすいと思われ　you're right.Fix
  03:56:063 (5) - 03:56:225 (1)にstackしませんか？ 次のFinishに合わせてジャンプさせた方が気持ちいいと思います
  04:57:205 (2) - 04:57:366 (3,4) -ここと同じ感じに置くのはどうですか？04:56:721 (5,1) - ここと同じ流れにしています
  　　

nice mapでした。いつもmodありがとうございます。　ええんやで

rankedがんばー

1. Maybe it's only me but couldn't you find a mp3 with better quality? The current one sounds a bit poor at least for me ;w;
2. 01:50:427 (3,4,1,3) - First stack is fine but I think the second one is abusing a bit :< It could be a bit confusing imo, my suggestion is trying something different with a better flow.
3. 02:26:556 (5,6) - Why this sudden and random change of spacing? The "jump" doesn't fit at least for me unless you add it here 02:26:717 (6,1) - personally changing spacing is fine but fits better there.
4. 03:28:483 (3) - Ctrl+G here? I don't think the current pattern flows well lol
5. 03:37:676 (1) - I don't think this NC is necessary tbh.
6. 04:49:951 (1,1) - I hope I'm not mistaken but I think this is not well snapped... maybe the timing is wrong or the sliders should be better snapped instead. Try to listen with 25% playback rate, they're a bit out I think o.o
7. 05:12:043 - This kiai is unnecessary, it doesn't fit with music imo ><

Inyuschan wrote:

1. Maybe it's only me but couldn't you find a mp3 with better quality? The current one sounds a bit poor at least for me ;w;
   Ok.Change MP3
2. 01:50:427 (3,4,1,3) - First stack is fine but I think the second one is abusing a bit :< It could be a bit confusing imo, my suggestion is trying something different with a better flow. angle of slider is I do not want to change ;;;; Stack Delete
3. 02:26:556 (5,6) - Why this sudden and random change of spacing? The "jump" doesn't fit at least for me unless you add it here 02:26:717 (6,1) - personally changing spacing is fine but fits better there. Sure
4. 03:28:483 (3) - Ctrl+G here? I don't think the current pattern flows well lol　 Okey,change the flow
5. 03:37:676 (1) - I don't think this NC is necessary tbh. for consistency 01:54:459 (1) -
6. 04:49:951 (1,1) - I hope I'm not mistaken but I think this is not well snapped... maybe the timing is wrong or the sliders should be better snapped instead. Try to listen with 25% playback rate, they're a bit out I think o.o I think the timing is not perfect,I am Contact the QAT
7. 05:12:043 - This kiai is unnecessary, it doesn't fit with music imo ><　Fix

Feel free to call me back once you check everything and we'll see~

When I got the perfect timing,I can contact you

imoutosan wrote:

顽张って～☆ 0w0
Have no time to work on my map ;w;

BeatofIke wrote:

My apologizes for forgeting to check timing.
Will check later ;w;

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KaedekaShizuru wrote:

応援でーすー(人´ω｀*).☆.。.:*・゜
edit: may I use some audio in this map for my recall？https://osu.ppy.sh/s/294900
thank you~

Inyuschan wrote:

Don't forget to poke me once this is ready.

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Shiro wrote:

Don't bubble this until I take a look at the timing. I can't do that right now because of a bug in the editor, but I hope it will be fixed soon.

Shiro wrote:

Don't bubble this until I take a look at the timing. I can't do that right now because of a bug in the editor, but I hope it will be fixed soon.

BeatofIke wrote:

Shiro wrote:

Don't bubble this until I take a look at the timing. I can't do that right now because of a bug in the editor, but I hope it will be fixed soon.

Thank Goodness you're here Shiro. I need help ;w;

Shiro wrote:

The first offset was wrong, which is why the map felt like it needed complex timing, but with the proper offset it becomes much simpler:


It does need an offset fix at the end.
Note that the vocals are off most of the time. BeatofIke's timing was focused on vocals, which is generally a bad idea and leads to awful timings.

1. 01:24:923 (4,1) - Actually you should swap the NCs, that one doesn't fit D:
2. 01:31:375 - I miss a note here according to the next coming notes.
3. 01:50:730 (1) - Missing finish here? Somehow I can hear the music a bit louder.
4. 03:17:826 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - This is too hard imo while you've used the same rhythm and lower spacing, maybe try to modify this a bit?
5. 03:20:891 (1,3) - Swap the NC because you're breaking the consistency here.
6. 03:38:633 (1) - This NC is unnecessary because the same reason as before at least for me D:
7. 04:09:278 (4,5,6) - Reduce the spacing please, this is quite confusing especially because the stacks.
8. 04:12:235 (3) - I think this is wrong snapped, somehow it doesn't fit exactly with music, however if you move it to 04:12:262 - and reduce it to just an 1/2 slider you'll see it fits better, try it.
9. 04:12:504 (4) - More or less like here, move it to blue tick.

Inyuschan wrote:

No kudosu.

1. 01:24:923 (4,1) - Actually you should swap the NCs, that one doesn't fit D: Fix
2. 01:31:375 - I miss a note here according to the next coming notes. No,I The first was placed there is a gap between the piano I think when you mess by adding a Note.
3. 01:50:730 (1) - Missing finish here? Somehow I can hear the music a bit louder. Fix 03:33:955 - add
4. 03:17:826 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - This is too hard imo while you've used the same rhythm and lower spacing, maybe try to modify this a bit? Okey
5. 03:20:891 (1,3) - Swap the NC because you're breaking the consistency here. oh....nicecatch
6. 03:38:633 (1) - This NC is unnecessary because the same reason as before at least for me D: Fix lol
7. 04:09:278 (4,5,6) - Reduce the spacing please, this is quite confusing especially because the stacks. Fix
8. 04:12:235 (3) - I think this is wrong snapped, somehow it doesn't fit exactly with music, however if you move it to 04:12:262 - and reduce it to just an 1/2 slider you'll see it fits better, try it.
9. 04:12:504 (4) - More or less like here, move it to blue tick. Fix

Please call me again ><