loopuleasa wrote:

Mod - [ME!]

What I don't agree with:

1. Disconnected streams 00:59:796 (1,2,3,4) - Personal preference, I like to play them.
2. This M is really cheesy, especially that you won't add an E afterwards. 02:16:390 (1) - It adds some flavour but I would rather have a spiral. Yeah, right. Changed all sliders in that section.
3. This type of slider is too sharp and a nightmare for HR for instance 03:14:304 (1) - I would prefer a triangle one. Mmh, I'd like to have more opinions on that before I change something here.
4. 03:17:733 (1) - 03:31:019 (1,1) - 03:42:590 (1) - Similar to above, and it's really ugly. I love those sliders. ;w;
5. This section can be transformed into a stream burst 03:39:804 (2,1) - I don't exactly understand what you exactly mean here. O: A stream with two notes?
6. The long stream 04:53:532 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - should be more linear instead of having like 5 turns. Bunching them up slightly with the convert to stream option would be better for lowering the difficulty spike in this section. I see your point and I know this option of course, the current state of it however reflects exaclty my personal mapping style how I'd like to have that stream.
7. What I said above can be applied to most stream bursts across the map. Try to strigthen or curve them out better. See the LAOS - United map by Asphyxia and you can see how those streams are really smooth. Your stream bursts seem jagged because they were probably manually placed. Learn to use the convert slider to stream option more.
8. The jump between these two don't make a nice drop-off since the momentum is upwards 03:57:483 (6,1) - I see, but I don't see a solution for that problem so far. D:

What's really good:

1. This monster slider 00:51:156 (1) -
2. The rhythm
3. The hitsounds
4. The symmetry-based mapping
5. The slow section starting here 01:33:724 (1) - flows really nicely. Some jumps could be accentuated, if you pay attention to the melody since it spikes in some points.
6. These are fun to play. 02:00:390 (2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) -
7. 03:14:733 (1,2,3,4,5) - along with their hitsounds makes some nice stream bursts
8. These types of drop-offs should be more frequent imo 00:39:396 (1,2,3,4) -

What's really bad:

1. These circular sliders. They shouldn't be circular, maybe criss-crossed. Alternatively put one or two repeating sliders that beat in place. 01:29:076 (1,2,3,4) - Fixed those. RIP star rating, lol.
2. For sliders of type: 03:21:162 (1,2,3,4) - 03:43:447 (1,2,3,4) - 03:53:733 (3,4,5) - 03:56:947 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 04:00:590 (3,4,5) - 04:03:804 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - You should try to shorten them and bunch them closer together. It's problematic to play those and not that fun at all. As a tip try to use only usethose types of sliders when there are vocals (the ones that say "ah-dadadada") and if there aren't, just put a normal stream in place. I have to really think about it. Mmh, I'd like to have more opinions here, but I have to say that i'm quite confident with the current state.

Good luck with the map, hope to see it ranked! Thank you very much! We discussed quite a bit ingame and also added the "sayonare" at the end. Thanks for that aswell! :3

Darkxell_mc wrote:

Hi, kinda m4m... Anyways thanks for your hepl, here is everything^^
I'm modding CTB! and Standard only sorry ^^"

I miss the video... Too bad it's not really SFW :/

[Standard]

00:19:956 (1) - The notes hides the slider witch makes it hard to read on first try... Or maybe i'm really to tired? But personally I would have released the key half a beat before. I think it should be ok! It's also at the beginning, so people could retry that one easily.
01:14:676 (3) - Wut? Is this... intended? It looks nice, but for some reason I just can't make it ^^' (Am I bad, sempai?) Yeah, of course, I think it's sightreadable.
01:16:596 (3) - Again. I guess the second time you're ready for it?^

01:29:724 - 01:33:724 - Useless timing point? Dunno if this is inherited from other diffs, if it is then It's good ^^ (Copy pasted the CTB mod...) Mmh, I asked a timer for that. :O

That was fast too... I love the diff, very nice slider patterns, Awesome jumps... Thanks

[End]

I hope this will be approved soon, it deserves it! ^^ ( + 1 star )
You guys are awesome map makers ^^'~ <3

Raiden wrote:

Hey! Raiden here from my mod queue.

Hanjamon's Oni

00:23:556 (86) - Change for don? no, is fine for me and if i change this will break my consistency :c

01:06:636 - Add a kat? break >.<

01:20:796 (6) - Change for don? kat fits good with this sound

02:59:304 (13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24) - Alternate between k and d? i like this part with only k ;w;

03:26:519 (173) - Change for don? not a bad idea, but i prefer kkkkd

04:28:192 - Add a kat? little break, also, Dk is unrankable :c

04:28:305 - ^ so make it dkkdkkd

05:16:032 (55) - Change for don? consistency and k fits good >.<

Awesome map overall, I hope it gets ranked soon

1. BG has not the right size ; here for yyou the rght one
   
   SPOILER

   
2. StackLeniency :C increase pls atleast 2.0
   
3. 01:05:316 (4,5) - don't let overlap
4. 01:44:391 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - i would reduce the jumps due slow part
5. 01:49:557 (10,1) - to big jumps here in the slow part
6. 03:14:304 (1) - the repeat is touching the slider start and end such kind of overlaps are unrankable
7. 03:17:733 (1) - ^
8. 03:31:447 (1) - ^
9. 03:42:590 (1) - ^

Lally wrote:

hi o3o

[o3o]

1. BG has not the right size ; here for yyou the rght one Fixed! Gero even gave me a better bg.
   
   SPOILER

   
2. StackLeniency :C increase pls atleast 2.0 Okkkk, fixed.
   
3. 01:05:316 (4,5) - don't let overlap Why? Is there something wrong with it? I don't see a problem here.
4. 01:44:391 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - i would reduce the jumps due slow part I heavily focus on voice mapping in this part and I have to say that I find this part quite "intense". That's why I mapped it like this and I feel like it's fitting. So yeah, no change, sorry. ;w;
5. 01:49:557 (10,1) - to big jumps here in the slow part Pretty much the same as stated above. D:
6. 03:14:304 (1) - the repeat is touching the slider start and end such kind of overlaps are unrankable Fixed this one, hehe.
7. 03:17:733 (1) - ^ These sliders though have a very clear path, so it's not unrankable. I asked around and these ones seem ok. Plus I love them too much. o3o
8. 03:31:447 (1) - ^ ^
9. 03:42:590 (1) - ^ ^ So much red, sorry, orz. ;w;

call me back o3o

arviejhay wrote:

can i create a Storyboard here?

General

1. Difficulty Spread : ☑
2. Unsnapped objects : There's one in overdose, go check it please
3. Audio bitrate over 192 kbps : ☑
4. Metadata Issues : ☑
5. Timeline Issues : I found only one issue, check it below
6. Combo Colors : ☑
7. Unused hitsounds : ☑
8. Hitsounds Issues : ☑
9. Inaudible hitsounds : ☑
10. Application of every mods :

m1ng's Overdose

1. 01:20:436 (2,1) - The distance here could be a bit decreased for the better movement
2. 01:34:029 (2) - Unsnapped note
3. 02:01:724 (1,2) - This could be replaced with 1/4 rhythm imo.. as I can clearly hear the 1/4 sounds from the background
4. 03:02:197 - Unnecessary inherited point
5. 03:59:304 (1,2) - Unexpected timed jump here which is pretty hard to pass.. Could you please reduce the distance between 1 and 2?
6. 04:36:942 (2) - I would place (2) like this to make it have better movement
7. 04:43:987 (1,1) - The distance here could be reduced for a bit to make it easier. Current distance is a bit large imo
8. 05:04:896 (2,1) - It's way too surprising cuz of sudden timed jump. You may add hdash between them as well
9. 05:26:260 (1) - I personally think that the spinner should be finished at 05:29:697 - to be better off with the music (this must be applied to std diff as well)

Hanjamon wrote:

The video is NSFW

Hanjamon wrote:

The video is NSFW

-Kamikaze- wrote:

Could someone upload and put video in description?

-Kamikaze- wrote:

Hanjamon wrote:

The video is NSFW

-Kamikaze- wrote:

Could someone upload and put video in description?

-Kamikaze- wrote:

This is one of the most interesting mania diffs I've played this year. Hella good job Raika!
Could someone upload and put video in description? I'd really appreciate it

ByBy_ChAn wrote:

Hanjamon wrote:

The video is NSFW

What video ? .-.

deatbeat wrote:

if i(or any mod) sees this uploaded with the M/V you'd best be running :p

ShikiNoHollow wrote:

you request me before right?

clm : 1 2 3 4 5 6 7

open this

00:11:196 - add 1 note
errr, for this XD sry... i dont want to add more here ^^

00:39:636 (39636|2) - move to 7
sure~

01:00:636 - add 2 note
yeap, heard more hihat... added

01:08:316 - ^
errr but here, cant really heard it anymore

02:16:390 - add? heavy piano
but i only use single note for single pitch ^^, sry no...

02:32:224 - drum , add note
that is actually echo sound, but sure

02:35:057 (155057|3,156390|4) - what with this creepy note
it gives a heavy feeling... that player should play it really really gently ^^


05:08:987 - to - 05:09:442 - drum - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3034561 < try this
anyway, nerfed this part... ^^ thankssssss

good luck , and sorry im late

Fatfan Kolek wrote:

BNs are hard to find. :3

Fatfan Kolek wrote:

BNs are hard to find. :3

Fatfan Kolek wrote:

BNs are hard to find. :3

ExGon wrote:

good map