yanaginagi - Haru Modoki · forum

xChippy

Joined August 2011

Topic Starter

xChippy 2015-04-04T17:33:48+00:00

nadapan wrote:
From Chaoslitz modding team

[Easy ]
00:01:949 (2) - curve this a bit more ok
00:26:776 - add a break here Guess so
00:41:259 (2) - blanket done
[Normal]
00:26:776 - same as Easy, add a break ok
00:57:638 (2,3) - I don't find this overlap so beautiful and it's also hard to follow. I kinda like it tho :<, Imo it isnt a problem
01:07:466 (4) - Blanket huuh seems fine o3o

This was all I could mod. This is a well made beatmap, good luck with ranking it.

Thanks for modding!

Nuolong

1,032 posts

Joined August 2014

Nuolong 2015-04-04T19:16:23+00:00

Hardest

00:15:570 (3,1,2) - particularly don't like 00:15:914 (1,2) stacked afterwards
00:52:638 (4,1) - Wicked jump, I suggest making it closer. I couldn't read it as a jump (with the music, I don't get a hint of a jump)
NO! I HATE IT WHEN SOMETHINGS SO PRO THAT I CAN'T EVEN MOD IT ;_; POO U! (no offense)

Insayne

00:03:328 (5,1) - Space her is too lacking in an insane difficulty
.

Ez

00:52:638 (3) - Sound hollow in HS

If this wasn't helpful, no kds.
I can't mod good maps ._.
Good luck!

xChippy

1,941 posts

Joined August 2011

Topic Starter

xChippy 2015-04-04T21:08:00+00:00

NolanM wrote:
Hardest
00:15:570 (3,1,2) - particularly don't like 00:15:914 (1,2) stacked afterwards It's fine imo
00:52:638 (4,1) - Wicked jump, I suggest making it closer. I couldn't read it as a jump (with the music, I don't get a hint of a jump) fixed a bit
NO! I HATE IT WHEN SOMETHINGS SO PRO THAT I CAN'T EVEN MOD IT ;_; POO U! (no offense)

Insayne
00:03:328 (5,1) - Space her is too lacking in an insane difficulty hmm it's normal o-o
.

Ez
00:52:638 (3) - Sound hollow in HS Every point of the slider has a hitsound tho :O

If this wasn't helpful, no kds.
I can't mod good maps ._.
Good luck!

Thanks for modding!

DahplA

1,099 posts

Joined March 2014

DahplA 2015-04-05T04:02:19+00:00

Hi, DahplA here posting from Jloughman14's and DahplA's Modding team. This is a response in regards to this request. Please be sure to vote here on how helpful our mod was.

Haru

00:54:018 (6) - Not stacked properly
00:59:878 Kiai not snapped
Maybe add a spinner at the end? (For all diffs)

Insane

Maybe OD 8 a bit hard for 4.2 stars. I'd use 7.5-7.8
00:20:570 (4) - NC on these parts? (same as Haru diff)
00:42:121 (2) - If you're trying to make this go through the circle, then it's a tad bit too much to the left
00:50:225 (1) - Not stacked properly
01:11:259 (2) - Stack?
01:24:018 (4) - Fix stack

omg godly mapping
btw mutual friends? please?

xChippy

1,941 posts

Joined August 2011

Topic Starter

xChippy 2015-04-05T06:18:56+00:00

DahplA wrote:
Hi, DahplA here posting from Jloughman14's and DahplA's Modding team. This is a response in regards to this request. Please be sure to vote here on how helpful our mod was.

Haru
00:54:018 (6) - Not stacked properly
00:59:878 Kiai not snapped fixed both
Maybe add a spinner at the end? (For all diffs) I'll consider, I kinda like it without o3o
Insane
Maybe OD 8 a bit hard for 4.2 stars. I'd use 7.5-7.8
00:20:570 (4) - NC on these parts? (same as Haru diff)
00:42:121 (2) - If you're trying to make this go through the circle, then it's a tad bit too much to the left
00:50:225 (1) - Not stacked properly
01:11:259 (2) - Stack?
01:24:018 (4) - Fix stack Fixed all~

omg godly mapping
btw mutual friends? please?

Thanks for modding DahplA!

Iceskulls

1,612 posts

Joined February 2012

Iceskulls 2015-04-05T12:44:28+00:00

As requested

[General]

In easy
AIBat v3.1 wrote:
Snapping
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
00:15:580 - snap to 00:15:570

Kiai end is a bit inconsistent on xchippy's diffs here 01:10:742 -
Add audioleadin around 1500-1600 so the player will have more time to prepare
WidescreenStoryboard is checked in haru and umi's hard while the other diffs don't
od gap between normal and hard is a bit big imo maybe also od gap between insane and haru a bit small
suggestion on diffs setting : od6 on hard and od 7 on insane

[easy]

why not 90% volume in kiai time just like other diffs

00:26:776 - add break here ? just like what you did in normal
00:32:121 (1) - bent the tail to left a bit ? so it will flow with 00:32:983 (2) - better
SPOILER
00:58:328 (1) - I think this nc is not really necessary , also if you delete nc here it might make beginner read the pattern here 00:54:363 (1,2,3,1) - easier just like insane
01:09:707 - you can add note here that would make rhythm here sound a bit better
01:12:294 (3,4) - try this rhythm ?
SPOILER
a bit easier for beginners to play since there are sliders which can help beginner navigate to the next note
01:21:949 - why not volume 70% here just like other diffs
01:27:294 - add spinner after this part ? so scoreboard won't be full of same SS HRHDDTFL score lol ( you can apply to other diffs too )

[normal]

00:08:156 (2,3) - this overlap might be a bit tricky for normal imo
00:15:052 (5,1) - ^
00:26:604 (1) - I think this nc is not really necessary,also if you delete nc here it might make the pattern easier to read imo just like insane
01:25:914 (3,1) - a slider would fit this better imo
SPOILER

[umi]

00:03:328 (1) - I think this nc is not really necessary,also if you delete nc here it might make the pattern easier to read imo
00:26:259 (1,2,3) - I think anti-jumps might be a bit tricky for hard , spacing or stacking would work better imo
01:09:880 - adding a note here would make rhythm here 01:09:363 (1,2) - sound better imo
01:19:707 (2) - curve this the another way would make flow here 01:19:190 (1,2) - a bit better imo
SPOILER

[insane]

00:07:294 (1,2,3) - this would play better if you spacing them like this 00:08:156 (4,5,6) -
00:08:845 (1,2,3) - try make spacing consistent a bit so it can improve flow here
00:48:845 (1,2) - try this pattern ? would flow nice imo
SPOILER
00:55:052 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - the stream here play a bit awkward for me , would be a bit nice if you can play with the flow of stream here a bit like make curve or bent around here a bit 00:55:397 (5,6,7,8) -
01:06:259 (4) - ctrl+g this would make flow here a bit better imo
SPOILER
[img]01:05:914%20(3,4,1)%20-[/img]

[haru]

00:19:966 - clap here sound a bit weird
00:25:483 - ^
00:38:845 (4,5,1) - try make spacing a bit consistent so the flow wil be a bit better here
00:40:225 (4,5,6) - you can make this looks like 00:39:880 (1,2,3) - , would make flow a bit better imo
SPOILER

redundant green timing point : 00:21:087 - , 00:23:845 -

great mapset

might need to recheck some hitsound volume consistency in xchippy's diffs

you can get more mods if you want
also you can call be back for recheck when you feel ready

good luck

Umi

2,478 posts

Joined November 2012

Umi 2015-04-05T13:00:33+00:00

CelsiusLK wrote:
As requested

[General]

od gap between normal and hard is a bit big imo maybe also od gap between insane and haru a bit small
suggestion on diffs setting : od6 on hard and od 7 on insane put OD 6 on hard
[umi]
00:03:328 (1) - I think this nc is not really necessary,also if you delete nc here it might make the pattern easier to read imo deleted
00:26:259 (1,2,3) - I think anti-jumps might be a bit tricky for hard , spacing or stacking would work better imo why not
01:09:880 - adding a note here would make rhythm here 01:09:363 (1,2) - sound better imo done
01:19:707 (2) - curve this the another way would make flow here 01:19:190 (1,2) - a bit better imo Ii prefer the current flow
SPOILER

thx for mod :3

~

osu file format v14

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 59794
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
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[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.699999

[Metadata]
Title:Harumodoki
TitleUnicode:春擬き
Artist:yanaginagi
ArtistUnicode:やなぎなぎ
Creator:xChippy
Version:Umi's Hard
Source:やはり俺の青春ラブコメはまちがっている。続
Tags:Yahari Ore no Seishun Love Comedy wa Machigatteiru Zoku My Teen Romantic SNAFU 2 oregairu Umi
BeatmapID:674181
BeatmapSetID:299804

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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
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xChippy

1,941 posts

Joined August 2011

Topic Starter

xChippy 2015-04-05T13:23:45+00:00

CelsiusLK

CelsiusLK wrote:
As requested

[General]
In easy
AIBat v3.1 wrote:
Snapping
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
00:15:580 - snap to 00:15:570
Kiai end is a bit inconsistent on xchippy's diffs here 01:10:742 -
Add audioleadin around 1500-1600 so the player will have more time to prepare
WidescreenStoryboard is checked in haru and umi's hard while the other diffs don't
od gap between normal and hard is a bit big imo maybe also od gap between insane and haru a bit small
suggestion on diffs setting : od6 on hard and od 7 on insane
all fixed except I went od 7,2 on insane cuz decimal cool
[easy]
why not 90% volume in kiai time just like other diffs
00:26:776 - add break here ? just like what you did in normal
00:32:121 (1) - bent the tail to left a bit ? so it will flow with 00:32:983 (2) - better
SPOILER
00:58:328 (1) - I think this nc is not really necessary , also if you delete nc here it might make beginner read the pattern here 00:54:363 (1,2,3,1) - easier just like insane
01:09:707 - you can add note here that would make rhythm here sound a bit better
01:12:294 (3,4) - try this rhythm ?
SPOILER
a bit easier for beginners to play since there are sliders which can help beginner navigate to the next note Kinda want some variation here :<
01:21:949 - why not volume 70% here just like other diffs
01:27:294 - add spinner after this part ? so scoreboard won't be full of same SS HRHDDTFL score lol ( you can apply to other diffs too )
[normal]
00:08:156 (2,3) - this overlap might be a bit tricky for normal imo
00:15:052 (5,1) - ^
00:26:604 (1) - I think this nc is not really necessary,also if you delete nc here it might make the pattern easier to read imo just like insane
01:25:914 (3,1) - a slider would fit this better imo
SPOILER
I want to emphasize the end with 3 notes tho like this :<, with a sliding end it is unsatisfying imo o3o
[insane]
00:07:294 (1,2,3) - this would play better if you spacing them like this 00:08:156 (4,5,6) -
00:08:845 (1,2,3) - try make spacing consistent a bit so it can improve flow here
00:48:845 (1,2) - try this pattern ? would flow nice imo
SPOILER
Prefer mine srry :<
00:55:052 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - the stream here play a bit awkward for me , would be a bit nice if you can play with the flow of stream here a bit like make curve or bent around here a bit 00:55:397 (5,6,7,8) -
01:06:259 (4) - ctrl+g this would make flow here a bit better imo
SPOILER
[img]01:05:914%20(3,4,1)%20-[/img]
I know what you mean, but its not really what I aim for here :<
[haru]
00:19:966 - clap here sound a bit weird
00:25:483 - ^
00:38:845 (4,5,1) - try make spacing a bit consistent so the flow wil be a bit better here
00:40:225 (4,5,6) - you can make this looks like 00:39:880 (1,2,3) - , would make flow a bit better imo
SPOILER

redundant green timing point : 00:21:087 - , 00:23:845 -
fixed all~
great mapset
might need to recheck some hitsound volume consistency in xchippy's diffs

you can get more mods if you want
also you can call be back for recheck when you feel ready

good luck

Thanks a lot for modding!

No Comment = fixed
all updated~

Iceskulls

1,612 posts

Joined February 2012

Iceskulls 2015-04-08T13:57:44+00:00

well , I might recheck this tomorrow

maybe lol

btw do you have metadata confirmation ?
I'm not pretty sure about the romanised title
is it need space " " between haru and modoki or not ?
I have seen some websites use haru modoki as a romanised title so idk lol

well nvm lol

Iceskulls

1,612 posts

Joined February 2012

Iceskulls 2015-04-09T15:02:07+00:00

recheck

[General]

they are some notes that feel a bit off in higher diff

00:40:340 - , 00:40:455 - I think these are suppose to snap to 1/4 and 1/2 anyway here the rhythm that cover the notes where it should be
SPOILER

[easy]

00:44:707 (2) - nearly overlap hp bar for me , move down a bit just to be safe

[normal]

00:27:121 - delete break here , I don't see you use a break here on other diffs
01:15:052 (4,5) - this looks better imo ( need to re-adjust spacing too )
SPOILER

[umi]

00:36:259 (5,2) - fix stack ( probably editor bug but better fix it since it a bit noticable imo )
00:52:466 (2,1) - intentionally? if not stack perfectly
00:59:449 - I think this should be snapped to 1/3 beat (there is no beat in 1/4 imo) but rip reverse slider so I suggest to ignore the 1/3 beat and use 1/2 slider instead
01:09:190 (3,1) - ^
01:18:845 (5,1) - same as 00:36:259 (5,2) -
01:27:207 - how about adding spinner here ? the end somehow fit for spinner imo

[insane]

00:57:121 (1,2) - flow here a bit pretty sharp compare with 00:55:742 (1,2,3,4) - , try move (2) to around x344 y72

[haru]

00:14:535 (2,3) - dis spacing >.<

some wrong snapped notes (recheck might need) , blame drummer pls

also are you sure about hitsound volume it a bit inconsistent between diffs ( not sure if you care about this ? ) , I would suggest to copy all timing point in haru diffs and paste them on other xchippy's diffs and organize them a bit

lemme know afterward

xChippy

1,941 posts

Joined August 2011

Topic Starter

xChippy 2015-04-09T15:44:36+00:00

CelsiusLK wrote:
recheck

[General]
they are some notes that feel a bit off in higher diff
00:40:340 - , 00:40:455 - I think these are suppose to snap to 1/4 and 1/2 anyway here the rhythm that cover the notes where it should be
SPOILER
[easy]
00:44:707 (2) - nearly overlap hp bar for me , move down a bit just to be safe
[normal]
00:27:121 - delete break here , I don't see you use a break here on other diffs
01:15:052 (4,5) - this looks better imo ( need to re-adjust spacing too )
SPOILER
[insane]
00:57:121 (1,2) - flow here a bit pretty sharp compare with 00:55:742 (1,2,3,4) - , try move (2) to around x344 y72 you got the wrong x/y xD, but I fixed it somehow
[haru]
00:14:535 (2,3) - dis spacing >.<
Fixed all suggestions~
some wrong snapped notes (recheck might need) , blame drummer pls Gonna check this out

also are you sure about hitsound volume it a bit inconsistent between diffs ( not sure if you care about this ? ) , I would suggest to copy all timing point in haru diffs and paste them on other xchippy's diffs and organize them a bit Seems consistent for me though, Haru and Insane are the same, as for Easy and Normal I intentionally did it different.

lemme know afterward

Ty Celsius~

Umi

2,478 posts

Joined November 2012

Umi 2015-04-09T16:00:17+00:00

CelsiusLK wrote:
recheck

[umi]
00:36:259 (5,2) - fix stack ( probably editor bug but better fix it since it a bit noticable imo ) i tried more or less, but it can't be perfectly stac anymore ~
00:52:466 (2,1) - intentionally? if not stack perfectly ^
00:59:449 - I think this should be snapped to 1/3 beat (there is no beat in 1/4 imo) but rip reverse slider so I suggest to ignore the 1/3 beat and use 1/2 slider instead to me there is a beat 1/4 so no change
01:09:190 (3,1) - ^ ^
01:18:845 (5,1) - same as 00:36:259 (5,2) - ^
01:27:207 - how about adding spinner here ? the end somehow fit for spinner imo i did something else instead

thx for mod

~~

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xChippy

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xChippy 2015-04-09T16:21:59+00:00

All updated, as for that drum snapping, changed it to this:

It is much more comfortable and (4) Head and repeat has drums whilst it ends on the vocal so it should be fine. Asked some opinions and they were fine with it being like this

Iceskulls

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Iceskulls 2015-04-10T14:08:38+00:00

orz sorry again but it looks like the three notes at the end before the spinner in easy , normal , insane and haru is kinda feel off eventhough you follow vocal or not orz, you can fix that easily by using spinner just like umi's hard so should be not hard to fix

Edited : wait!!!
can you uhh get some opinions about the triplet here

time stamps from haru diff
00:19:190 (3,4,5) -
00:24:707 (4,5,6) -

don't pretty sure here I hear the drum on 1/3 but maybe we can override those by triplet or w/e

call be back after that

xChippy

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xChippy 2015-04-10T16:59:21+00:00

Replaced the notes with a spinner like in Hard diff
For those triplets I simply deleted the notes that were off, asked a bit around and they were fine with it :>

Iceskulls

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Iceskulls 2015-04-11T08:03:45+00:00

Finally

Bubbled

next BN : check some 1/4 snap carefully in case I missed some

in umi's hard : 00:59:449 - this 1/4 snap is fine eventhough the drum land on 1/3 I can still hear the beat at 1/4 clearly a bit after listen to this snap many times

xChippy

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xChippy 2015-04-11T08:23:57+00:00

Thanks a lot Celsius :>

HabiHolic

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HabiHolic 2015-04-12T04:32:26+00:00

small offset late me..

i think offset 560.

call me back

Iceskulls

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Iceskulls 2015-04-12T05:50:22+00:00

ahh 570 sound perfect to me
whatever ;_;

HabiHolic

5,373 posts

Joined October 2012

HabiHolic 2015-04-13T10:25:39+00:00

Sorry for late.. rebubbled!

xChippy

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Joined August 2011

Topic Starter

xChippy 2015-04-13T10:39:57+00:00

Thank you :>

ZZHBOY

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Joined April 2012

ZZHBOY 2015-04-13T12:09:45+00:00

irc

2015-04-13 19:22 xChippy: Hi~ o/, Sorry for bothering you, but do you have time for quick bubble check ><?
2015-04-13 19:23 ZZHBOY: link
2015-04-13 19:23 xChippy: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/672492 yanaginagi - Haru Modoki]
2015-04-13 19:25 ZZHBOY: dling
2015-04-13 19:25 xChippy: okie~
2015-04-13 19:39 ZZHBOY: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/672491 yanaginagi - Haru Modoki [Easy]]
2015-04-13 19:39 xChippy: aight
2015-04-13 19:39 ZZHBOY: 00:57:456 (3,4) - how about this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3008366
2015-04-13 19:41 xChippy: Okay
2015-04-13 19:41 xChippy: I did a bit other pattern tho
2015-04-13 19:41 xChippy: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3008375
2015-04-13 19:42 ZZHBOY: nice
2015-04-13 19:49 ZZHBOY: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/674181 yanaginagi - Haru Modoki [Umi's Hard]]
2015-04-13 19:49 ZZHBOY: 00:26:077 (1,1) - maybe can set nc on them?
2015-04-13 19:50 ZZHBOY: 00:28:749 - also maybe here can add a circle to follow the drum
2015-04-13 19:51 xChippy: NC is fine imo :< all are 1/1 so good to read
2015-04-13 19:51 xChippy: That is not 1/4 xD
2015-04-13 19:51 xChippy: that is 1/6
2015-04-13 19:51 xChippy: so hard to play in hard
2015-04-13 19:51 ZZHBOY: oh, i'm baka
2015-04-13 19:52 ZZHBOY: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/672492 yanaginagi - Haru Modoki [Insane]]
2015-04-13 19:52 ZZHBOY: 00:10:560 (3,4) - move them farther? they are too close imo
2015-04-13 19:53 xChippy: Okie
2015-04-13 19:53 ZZHBOY: 00:22:973 (3,1,2) - try this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3008402
2015-04-13 19:54 ZZHBOY: 00:26:249 (4,5) - bad flow imo, consider to move them to about 310 310?
2015-04-13 19:55 xChippy: Ok to second
2015-04-13 19:55 xChippy: First one imo better to keep simple ouo
2015-04-13 19:55 ZZHBOY: fine
2015-04-13 19:56 ZZHBOY: 01:04:353 (2,3) - also suggest to move them farther like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3008407
2015-04-13 19:57 ZZHBOY: 01:05:904 (3) - reverse selection will make flow better here imo
2015-04-13 19:58 ZZHBOY: 01:18:835 (3) - pay attention to this, move it a little down plz
2015-04-13 19:59 xChippy: Fixed
2015-04-13 19:59 xChippy: but what do you mean with reverse selection?
2015-04-13 19:59 ZZHBOY: ctrl+g
2015-04-13 19:59 ZZHBOY: lol
2015-04-13 19:59 xChippy: ooh ouo
2015-04-13 19:59 xChippy: okie fixed
2015-04-13 20:01 ZZHBOY: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/672564 yanaginagi - Haru Modoki [Haru]]
2015-04-13 20:02 ZZHBOY: 00:25:904 (3) - also move it a little down
2015-04-13 20:03 ZZHBOY: 00:54:525 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - awesome placing xd
2015-04-13 20:03 xChippy: hehe thx xD
2015-04-13 20:04 ZZHBOY: 01:13:491 (2) - move down a little
2015-04-13 20:04 xChippy: fixed
2015-04-13 20:05 ZZHBOY: that's all
2015-04-13 20:05 ZZHBOY: upload plz .-.
2015-04-13 20:05 xChippy: Okie ouo
2015-04-13 20:05 xChippy: Ayeee
2015-04-13 20:08 xChippy: Updated~
2015-04-13 20:11 ZZHBOY: damn
2015-04-13 20:11 ZZHBOY: too many qualified maps today! (8 max)
2015-04-13 20:11 xChippy: looool ;w;
2015-04-13 20:11 xChippy: When it reset?
2015-04-13 20:11 ZZHBOY: 4h later

going to qualify it tomorrow

ZZHBOY

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Joined April 2012

ZZHBOY 2015-04-14T02:00:02+00:00

damn, same map qualified several hours ago, maybe we should waiting for one week unless https://osu.ppy.sh/s/298941 get a dq

Aerous

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Joined September 2013

Aerous 2015-04-14T04:24:41+00:00

EARLY GRATZ ;DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD !

Nyanmaru_old_1

Nyanmaru_old_1 2015-04-17T07:24:43+00:00

Congrats xChippy-senpai >.<

Can't wait 1 week

Shiguma

476 posts

Joined May 2014

Shiguma 2015-04-18T17:48:43+00:00

Easy

01:11:594 (2,3,4) - Needs more hits here, the silence is kinda weird.

Normal

00:08:146 (2,3) - This matches the beat but I don't think it flows well.

Hard

This entire difficulty seems off... It's kind of lame for a hard difficulty, seems more like a normal+. Not enough hits and creative motions. Don't know how this could be fixed without redoing a majority of the map.

Insane

00:07:715 (2,3) - I'm not too sure about these doubles, especially since they're in the beginning but then not in later parts, and not in the Haru difficulty?
00:08:404 (5,6) - Ditto.
00:09:439 (4,5) - Ditto.
00:10:473 (2,3) - Ditto.
00:11:163 (5,6) - Ditto.
01:03:663 (4) - Maybe the design of this could be altered?

Haru difficulty is mapped well, no changes I could think of. Also, not sure if the video should be updated to the opening animation from episode 3. If you want I could make a version of that for you. Good job, your map is better than the one currently qualified imo.

xChippy

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Topic Starter

xChippy 2015-04-18T18:20:32+00:00

SenOPpai wrote:
Easy
01:11:594 (2,3,4) - Needs more hits here, the silence is kinda weird. Mentioned before in other mods but I prefer to keep it as-is, imo this fits as well

Normal
00:08:146 (2,3) - This matches the beat but I don't think it flows well. flow seems fine for me tho, previous slider flows in to this one and this one flows into the next one nicely

Hard
This entire difficulty seems off... It's kind of lame for a hard difficulty, seems more like a normal+. Not enough hits and creative motions. Don't know how this could be fixed without redoing a majority of the map. Have to disagree with you on this one, imo the guest mapper did a great job with this. Besides with not enough hits I suppose you mean the density? Taking the Normal and Insane into consideration it fits the spreads perfectly

Insane
00:07:715 (2,3) - I'm not too sure about these doubles, especially since they're in the beginning but then not in later parts, and not in the Haru difficulty?
00:08:404 (5,6) - Ditto.
00:09:439 (4,5) - Ditto.
00:10:473 (2,3) - Ditto.
00:11:163 (5,6) - Ditto. Haru is more designed as a jumpy diff therefore I limited the doubles there, and as for later parts idk where else tho :O
01:03:663 (4) - Maybe the design of this could be altered? Want to keep it like this so it fits with the next slider tho :<

Haru difficulty is mapped well, no changes I could think of. Also, not sure if the video should be updated to the opening animation from episode 3. If you want I could make a version of that for you. Good job, your map is better than the one currently qualified imo.

Thanks anyways~ And it's fine I already am planning to fix an new video soon :3