yo
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00:22:844 (2,3) - placing it like this is kinda awk to play imo
00:30:512 (3) - 00:35:906 (3) - listen to this on 25%, it sounds early to me o3o?
01:16:524 (5,6) - little thing but how about moving it further a bit so its not so cramped together? its almost touching
01:23:265 (1) - doesn't sound like 1/4 to me, but its not 1/3 or 1/6 either so im concerned about this owo
02:25:625 (1,2,3,4,5) - 02:28:321 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - the rhythm should be switched i think, the repeating 1/2 sound is strongest at the start and fades out gradually
02:48:378 (1) - why nc?
03:27:142 (1) - all these short comboss
03:59:501 (1,2,3) - these overlaps could look a lot better if u overlapped more or dont do it at all !
04:42:816 (2) - same as before
modding extras is hard ..esp when its cs5 ;_;
good luck