16:35 Exahilosys: Alright, the timming seems fine.
16:36 [-AKiTOSHi-]: my mapping sucks
16:36 Exahilosys: btw, I am doing the insane
16:36 Exahilosys: XD donn't say that!
16:36 Exahilosys: If you are not satisfied with it, I will work with you so we make it as good as possible
16:37 [-AKiTOSHi-]: I tried my best, and now I'm waiting for suggestions to fix my mistakes
16:38 Exahilosys: Ok, first here 00:08:288 - I suggest you move the 1 a bit up, so it has the same distance between the 6 and 2
16:39 [-AKiTOSHi-]: like Distance = x1.5?
16:40 Exahilosys: hm, here is what you can do to know if you have it at the right spot, make a new combo starting from the 6 and turn off the new combo from the 2
16:41 Exahilosys: if between the 2 and 1 now are as many arrows as they are between the 2 and 3 then you are good :3
16:41 Exahilosys: like so
http://i.imgur.com/IXTAiuJ.jpg16:42 [-AKiTOSHi-]: oh that
16:42 Exahilosys:
16:42 Exahilosys: But do that just to see the distance, and then take it on its original state
16:43 [-AKiTOSHi-]: yep
16:44 Exahilosys: I also suggest you do the stream here 00:09:121 - like so
http://imgur.com/NJB1PZZ16:46 Exahilosys: and why not do it here 00:02:788 - too? Like this
http://imgur.com/UMzpqz016:46 Exahilosys: for example, you did well here 00:07:788 -
16:46 [-AKiTOSHi-]: 00:18:455 - Ignore this shitty claps, I just removed
16:47 Exahilosys: XD ok
16:47 [-AKiTOSHi-]: well I've done in 00:09:121 (4,5,6) - Thanks
16:48 Exahilosys: also, this is just a suggestion to make the map more interesting, why not do that part 00:10:788 - like this?
http://i.imgur.com/tv2aaYv.jpg16:50 [-AKiTOSHi-]: makes sense
16:50 Exahilosys:
16:51 Exahilosys: And here 00:18:121 - why not do it like this
http://i.imgur.com/xPFx1K9.jpg follows with this
http://i.imgur.com/0DWnrT5.jpg16:52 Exahilosys: And if you have not already done it, remove the clap from here 00:19:621 -
16:53 Exahilosys: This could be done smoother 00:21:121 -
16:53 Exahilosys: It has a weird, edgy shape
16:54 Exahilosys: Maybe do it like that
http://i.imgur.com/6lAMaOo.jpg ?
16:54 Exahilosys: I love that part 00:24:788 - <3
16:54 [-AKiTOSHi-]: I'll make it more round instead
16:55 Exahilosys: Rounder = smoother = perfect
16:55 Exahilosys: Do not change that 00:33:121 - just saying
16:56 Exahilosys: This jump here could be smaller 00:34:288 - since there is no emphasis to indicate here with a big jump
16:57 [-AKiTOSHi-]: done =w=)/
16:58 Exahilosys: Another nice touch would be to do the slider here like that
http://i.imgur.com/DTbV4EC.jpg16:58 Exahilosys: and make that 2 00:38:121 - have the same distance with the 1 and 3 (use the trick I taught you)
16:58 Exahilosys: Loving that part 00:38:455-
16:59 Exahilosys: 00:38:455 - *
17:00 Exahilosys: Also, you could move that 11 00:58:788 - where that 2 00:59:455 - is
17:00 Exahilosys: so it does not make a straight, plain line
17:00 Exahilosys: same distance trick done here 00:59:621 - pwease
17:00 Exahilosys: on the 3
17:02 [-AKiTOSHi-]: hmm
17:02 Exahilosys: And here 01:02:788 - a shape like that
http://i.imgur.com/2onN4jt.jpg would be nice
17:03 Exahilosys: Also, make sure the reverse slider ends here 01:06:705 -
17:03 Exahilosys: And same edgy-shaped problem is here 01:11:955 -
17:04 Exahilosys: Move that 5 01:21:288 - half a fingertip up
17:05 Exahilosys: And why not do something like that
http://i.imgur.com/hJ6SuA1.jpg here 01:22:121
17:06 Exahilosys: Give me some feedback please >.<
17:07 [-AKiTOSHi-]: about this 00:59:621 -
17:07 Exahilosys: what about it
17:07 Exahilosys: ?
17:07 [-AKiTOSHi-]: random distance won't accept in insane?
17:08 Exahilosys: Its not that it is not acceptable, sure you can do it but keeping the same distance during some parts feels better for the player
17:08 Exahilosys: usualy you make big jumps when there is emphasis on the song
17:08 Exahilosys: and small ones when the pace of the song goes still
17:09 Exahilosys: like when the vocalist is catching a high pits and "screaming" it
17:10 [-AKiTOSHi-]: I just considered as normal jumps for insane
17:10 Exahilosys: They are
17:10 Exahilosys: but one is biger than the other
17:10 Exahilosys: but both are normal
17:10 Exahilosys: ...meh
17:10 [-AKiTOSHi-]: Some other ranked map had harder jumps so
17:11 [-AKiTOSHi-]: but wait
17:11 Exahilosys: other maps, have other songs and other mapping techniques
17:11 [-AKiTOSHi-]: I'll look it carefully
17:12 Exahilosys: Ah, I just remembered
17:12 [-AKiTOSHi-]: well I got it
17:12 Exahilosys:
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/45242 this is a map that I modded
17:12 Exahilosys: take a look at it
17:12 Exahilosys:
17:13 Exahilosys: And you will see that jumps go with maps
17:14 Exahilosys: continueing here... I think that here 01:40:788 - you could do the stream like that
http://i.imgur.com/RTqisWB.jpg17:14 [-AKiTOSHi-]: I just avoided to commit more than 3x distance for this map
17:14 [-AKiTOSHi-]: hmm
17:15 Exahilosys: did you take a look at the map that I sent you?
17:15 Exahilosys: And I made a kinda bigger jump here on my screenshot 01:41:121 - intentionaly, because this spot has emphasis
17:15 Exahilosys: or needs emphasis
17:16 Exahilosys: And do the same distance trick here 01:42:955 - with the 3
17:16 Exahilosys: I suggest you move that 01:44:455 - 6 a bit left-down, just a bit
17:17 [-AKiTOSHi-]: 01:41:121 - this one should be same x axis with 01:41:121 -
17:17 [-AKiTOSHi-]: so I didn't copied all thing
17:17 Exahilosys: You gave 2 same times
17:18 Exahilosys: Please give me the correct 2nd times >.<
17:18 Exahilosys: time*
17:19 Exahilosys: but, I think I understood what you wanted to say, yes the 11 should be on the same x-axis with the 12
17:19 Exahilosys: 01:48:788 - nice one
17:20 Exahilosys: 02:14:454 - Big jump here, but it fits nicely so keep it
17:21 Exahilosys: Do distance trick with the 7 02:14:954 -
17:22 [-AKiTOSHi-]: aye.
17:23 [-AKiTOSHi-]: 02:31:455 - Well I know what you'll gonna say so...
17:23 [-AKiTOSHi-]: gonna soften it
17:23 Exahilosys: the shape or the sound?
17:23 Exahilosys: And why not do a star shape here 02:24:788 - ?
17:24 [-AKiTOSHi-]: shape
17:24 Exahilosys: the shape is fine
17:24 [-AKiTOSHi-]: 02:25:121 (3) - Star begins here
17:24 Exahilosys: just lower the sound at 80%
17:24 Exahilosys: volume *
17:24 Exahilosys: Oh yeah, right I just saw it myself
17:25 Exahilosys: At the end, all you have to move is the 10 , just take it a bit to the right
17:25 Exahilosys: and it will be extra smooth
17:25 [-AKiTOSHi-]: hmm I think it's alright with full vol since it's inside of kiai zone
17:25 Exahilosys: It does not really matter if its in kiai zone >.<
17:26 [-AKiTOSHi-]: [http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3042204 I fked up like this]
17:26 Exahilosys: XD I think It look better before
17:26 [-AKiTOSHi-]: but it's before when the gumi screaming ;w;
17:27 Exahilosys: wut?
17:27 Exahilosys: oh, ok
17:28 Exahilosys: if you like it like this, then keep it
It is still smooth so its not a problem
17:28 Exahilosys: But if change your mind, here is how it was
http://i.imgur.com/feBKAA4.jpg17:29 [-AKiTOSHi-]: ohh i see
17:29 Exahilosys:
17:30 [-AKiTOSHi-]: post your IRC mod for kds
17:30 Exahilosys: I will
17:30 Exahilosys: Is there anything you want to ask me?
17:31 [-AKiTOSHi-]: oh one thing
17:31 Exahilosys: yes?
17:31 [-AKiTOSHi-]: the normal diff's spacing is stay at x1 ?
17:31 Exahilosys: Hm, yeah looks good like it
17:32 [-AKiTOSHi-]: ok thanks =v=)b
17:33 Exahilosys: And as for my opinion, I think your map is way better now that we took care of the spacing >.< and smoothen the streams, it is certainly a good one.
17:33 Exahilosys: :3