Hi from my queue!
[General]
Please remove this 00:00:133 - green line from both difficulties since it's unrankable: http://puu.sh/fZhs2/ee265128ad.png
[Normal]
Well I don't really have a problem with this difficulty, but that star shape at the end could be nicer. Maybe a few things...
00:29:395 (1) - looks like an unnecessary new combo, I would remove it
00:56:198 (3) - personally it is annoying that you don't map to vocals here, since it's a hard diff, I would rather play more, than just playing a long slider, but as I said it's really a personal opinion
00:58:165 (3) - same here ^
Also please wait until I ask someone about the artist.
FORGOT TO MENTION:
00:46:608 - it would be nice if you could resnap the preview point on both difficulties >.< sorry that I forgot to mention it earlier - http://puu.sh/fZsI8/2e933b6c82.jpg
[General]
Please remove this 00:00:133 - green line from both difficulties since it's unrankable: http://puu.sh/fZhs2/ee265128ad.png
An inherited timing section may be placed on an uninherited timing section (but only to change the slider speed).You didn't use any SV changes so the green line has to be removed.
[Normal]
- 00:19:305 (3,1) - please don't do such a confusing stack, please unstack them, example: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2767191
- 00:30:125 (1,1) - there has to be more space between the spinner and the object afterwards on Normal, so try this? - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2767133
- 00:35:043 (5,1) - I would also unstack these, because afterwards there is 1/2 which is also stacked, so it would be easier to tell which one is 1/2 and which one isn't if this wasn't stacked
- 00:42:911 (3,1) - the sliderend is too close to (3) imo which could also be confusing, just an example: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2767283
- 00:51:026 (4) - there is a bit too much 1/2 here in my opinion, so if you at least removed (4) it would be better (just remake the pattern a little bit) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2767337
- 01:02:338 (2) - same here, I would remove (2) and instead, I would only add a hit circle here 01:02:338 - to make it a bit easier
- 01:16:846 (1) - try to move the sliderend further from the sliderbeginning
Well I don't really have a problem with this difficulty, but that star shape at the end could be nicer. Maybe a few things...
00:29:395 (1) - looks like an unnecessary new combo, I would remove it
00:56:198 (3) - personally it is annoying that you don't map to vocals here, since it's a hard diff, I would rather play more, than just playing a long slider, but as I said it's really a personal opinion
00:58:165 (3) - same here ^
FORGOT TO MENTION:
00:46:608 - it would be nice if you could resnap the preview point on both difficulties >.< sorry that I forgot to mention it earlier - http://puu.sh/fZsI8/2e933b6c82.jpg