General
preview point is a bit more faster and feels "i need to wait, is this gud song?", im suggest move it a bit backward at 00:46:846Normal
- 00:11:436 (3) - why no 1/2 slider to consistent with the ritme as previous ?
- 00:15:616 (4) - remove this sounds nice for me
- 00:24:469 (2,3) - not stacked propely and looks a bit weird, if can't stacked properly cuz distance problem, try to repair blanket at 00:23:731 (1) - , maybe something like this can help you to stack them properly + (improve the blanket) http://puu.sh/fw91B/40e579561e.jpg
- 00:26:928 (2) - i dont hear anything in the red tick even i play it in 50% playback, change it into circle in the white tick or repeat the previous slider than make an 1/2 slider
- 00:30:125 (5,1) - try to add spinner, and i think this part is a good place to add a spinner, remove and change into spinner *timeline
- 00:33:321 (1) - since the tail's feels follow nothing, how about make it like previous part *timeline
- 00:39:469 (1) - stack properly ?
- 00:40:452 (2) - curve to other side for better flow
- 00:41:436 (1,2) - feels empty and a bit awkward at 00:41:682, change (1) into 1/1 and remove reverse at (2) then move into 00:42:174 -,*timeline
- 00:45:125 - add note ? isn't part like 00:15:616 - , so you can add a note here i guess, the sound more loud than previous
- 01:14:879 (1,2) - the follow is a bit awkward, make it more natural please :3
- 00:10:698 - why not adding note? feels awkward w/o note here
- 00:38:977 (5,6) - i just thinking this is should be 1/2 slider instead
- 00:47:092 (3,1) - i dont know what to say but i want to move it a bit down like http://puu.sh/fwhvD/71237b99d7.jpg
- 01:06:272 (4) - i'd like (4) stack with tail's of (2)
- 01:14:879 (1) - i'd like ctrl+g this, its make it more fun to play, jump in new combo
- 01:16:600 (4,1) - i dont think its good doubling the distance, 1.5x or 1.7x is enough i guess
ok thats it
nice map and song~
hope this helped and Good luck!!~
EDIT: idk what should i do with my kds