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TaNaBaTa - Unknown Girl -acoustic ver-

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Kujo
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on den 29 maj 2010 at 04:33:33

Artist: TaNaBaTa
Title: Unknown Girl -acoustic ver-
Source: Touhou
Tags: flandre u.n. owen was her? 6 scarlet
BPM: 147
Filesize: 4158kb
Play Time: 03:39
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4,99 stars, 543 notes)
  2. Teras (4,85 stars, 491 notes)
Download: TaNaBaTa - Unknown Girl -acoustic ver-
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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First map.

Finished. Requesting Mods. Accepting Guest Diffs if anyone wants to make one :3

05/17 Fixed Lissette's mod.
Teras
Tjena.

[Hard]

00:11:184(6)-(1) This jump is way too big. Fix this please.
00:18:327(7)-(8) Spacing.
00:20:061 [Suggestion] (2) On the small field. You could make the slider one tick longer and move it to a white tick? This sounds way better to me than it does now. So that the slider will start at 00:20:163 instead. Here is also a spacing error. (1) to the right of it is way too close.
00:21:184(5)-(6) Spacing.
00:29:142(10)-(1) Small jump here, but you may keep it if you want to.
00:32:204(9)-(1) Spacing.

Star.
Teras
Så.

Teras
Teras
Teras
Xgor
Hahaha, Ska bli intresant att se den när den blir färdig!

Måste säja att jag gillar [Teras], Dock saknar den hitsounds <.<

Jaja, PMa mig när detta är färdigt så moddar jag den!
Teras

Xgor wrote:

Hahaha, Ska bli intresant att se den när den blir färdig!

Måste säja att jag gillar [Teras], Dock saknar den hitsounds <.<

Jaja, PMa mig när detta är färdigt så moddar jag den!
Heh, jag är värelös på hitsounds. Så jag har en tendens till att sätta väldigt få i alla maps/diffs jag gör. :-/

EDIT: Men sen får man väl säga att Darkoff har gjort ett ganska bra jobb med sin map med tanke på att det är första gången han mappar vad jag har sett :P
Topic Starter
Kujo

Teras wrote:

Xgor wrote:

Hahaha, Ska bli intresant att se den när den blir färdig!

Måste säja att jag gillar [Teras], Dock saknar den hitsounds <.<

Jaja, PMa mig när detta är färdigt så moddar jag den!
Heh, jag är värelös på hitsounds. Så jag har en tendens till att sätta väldigt få i alla maps/diffs jag gör. :-/

EDIT: Men sen får man väl säga att Darkoff har gjort ett ganska bra jobb med sin map med tanke på att det är första gången han mappar vad jag har sett :P
Jajamensan, detta är min första map jag någonsin har gjort :p
heintsi
Stjärnad!

Pretty good map for first map.(Much better than all maps of mine)
It had little bit of everything, jumps, some streams, spacing changes.
Confusing at times but it will be fixed as ppl starts modding it.
ShanaTan
Spelade igenom den och hitta lite få saker som nog är värda att fixa.

Generellt så känns det lite snålt med hitsounds ^^.

~Teras~
01:00:161 (11) - Skulle förmodligen fixa spacingen här, finns säkert någon som kommer whina även om det spelas helt okej.

~Hard~
00:24:245 (6,7) - Plötsligt hopp kräver ny kombo.
03:32:423 (3) - Igen snabbt hopp utan någon ny kombo.

+ En stjärna, gl hf.
Teras

Nekoo[] wrote:

Spelade igenom den och hitta lite få saker som nog är värda att fixa.

Generellt så känns det lite snålt med hitsounds ^^.

~Teras~
01:00:161 (11) - Skulle förmodligen fixa spacingen här, finns säkert någon som kommer whina även om det spelas helt okej.

~Hard~
00:24:245 (6,7) - Plötsligt hopp kräver ny kombo.
03:32:423 (3) - Igen snabbt hopp utan någon ny kombo.

+ En stjärna, gl hf.
Det hoppet jag har där märks nog inte av precis som du sa. Så jag låter det vara tills någon säger att jag måste fixa det ^^
Natteke
The BPM on Teras diff is different from [Hard]

Source: Touhou
and add scarlet to tags

And can I make a diff?
Lissette
I feel it better with this timing:
BPM: 147.00
Offset: 997

And like Natteke desu said, both diff. should have same timing

I'll check after you fix :)
Topic Starter
Kujo

Natteke desu wrote:

The BPM on Teras diff is different from [Hard]

Source: Touhou
and add scarlet to tags

And can I make a diff?
Okay i'll fix those.

And sure go ahead and make an diff if you want! :o
Topic Starter
Kujo

Lissette wrote:

I feel it better with this timing:
BPM: 147.00
Offset: 997

And like Natteke desu said, both diff. should have same timing

I'll check after you fix :)
Fixed
Natteke
Where is my kudosu? D:
Teras
Hmm, the timing I have is different? Funny..
Teras

Natteke desu wrote:

Where is my kudosu? D:
Touhou was already in the source. I don't think that is much of a help? Just my opinion <.<

Edit: Nevermind what I said
Natteke
The source is just 'Touhou', not how it was. He's made changes using my suggestions, therefore the post was helpful.

Also, if you wanna see my progress, here is 'demo'. I'll try to finish it off as soon as possible, probably before friday, but not 100% sure.
Don't submit it yet

Download: TaNaBaTa - Unknown Girl -acoustic ver- (Darkoff) [Natteke].osu
Teras

Natteke desu wrote:

The source is just 'Touhou', not how it was. He's made changes using my suggestions, therefore the post was helpful.

Also, if you wanna see my progress, here is 'demo'. I'll try to finish it off as soon as possible, probably before friday, but not 100% sure.
Kudosu is overrated :| Anyways. I just leave this to Darkoff now
Topic Starter
Kujo

Natteke desu wrote:

The source is just 'Touhou', not how it was. He's made changes using my suggestions, therefore the post was helpful.

Also, if you wanna see my progress, here is 'demo'. I'll try to finish it off as soon as possible, probably before friday, but not 100% sure.
Don't submit it yet

Sorry i were checking this really late, so gave you kudosu since it was helpful.

Checked your map, damn it looks awesome so far :P
Lissette
delete .osb file and full submit
you need a easier diff (3 stars max)

Hard
the timing section (green lines) that you are using to change something in audio, like changing normal to soft, or lowing the volume you need to put them before the note, no less than 1/4 before, because if someone hit earlier ruin the effect
00:12:425 (4) - new combo
00:19:364 (9) - wrong spacing
00:20:180 (2,3) - same
00:24:262 (6,7,8,9) - notes in the same combo should be spaced evenly
00:25:487 (8,9) - make this one slider, start point (8) and end point (9 end point)
00:28:140 (8) - wrong spacing
00:31:609 (7) - ^
00:48:344 (4) - new combo
00:50:793 (1,2,3) - (1) remove new combo, (3) add new combo
00:54:874 (9,1) - (9)add new combo, (1) remove new combo
01:01:405 (5,1) - (5)add new combo, (1) remove new combo
01:38:752 - add note
02:29:160 (7,8,9) - separate more from 6
02:32:425 (7) - same
02:34:466 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - how about making the jumps between these combos the same, so will be easier to read ^^
02:51:915 (1) - remove new combo?
03:00:589 (9,1) - (9) add new combo, (1) remove new combo
03:29:160 (3) - space evenly
03:30:180 (5) - new combo, because the spacing changes, and you should space them evenly
03:32:425 (3) - new combo for jump
03:35:282 (3,4,5,6) - space evenly
03:36:915 (2) - separate a lil from 1 end point, to make the same distance between the notes of this combo
03:39:874 (1) - don't start spinner on blue tick unless is necessary

Teras
00:22:832 (1) - start this slider half beat later, and add note at 00:22:832
00:59:772 (9,10) - (9) new combo (10) move down till the distance between the notes of this combo is the same
01:04:667 (5) - new combo
01:06:401 (1) - don't start spinner on blue tick unless is necessary
01:18:339 (1) - move half beat later (fix spacing after making this change)
01:25:074 (10) - new combo

Good luck!
Teras

Lissette wrote:

Teras
00:22:832 (1) - start this slider half beat later, and add note at 00:22:832
00:59:772 (9,10) - (9) new combo (10) move down till the distance between the notes of this combo is the same
01:04:667 (5) - new combo
01:06:401 (1) - don't start spinner on blue tick unless is necessary
01:18:339 (1) - move half beat later (fix spacing after making this change)
01:25:074 (10) - new combo

Good luck!
Everything is fixed. ;)

Download: TaNaBaTa - Unknown Girl -acoustic ver- (Darkoff) [Teras].osu
Topic Starter
Kujo

Lissette wrote:

delete .osb file and full submit
you need a easier diff (3 stars max)

Hard
the timing section (green lines) that you are using to change something in audio, like changing normal to soft, or lowing the volume you need to put them before the note, no less than 1/4 before, because if someone hit earlier ruin the effect
00:12:425 (4) - new combo
00:19:364 (9) - wrong spacing
00:20:180 (2,3) - same
00:24:262 (6,7,8,9) - notes in the same combo should be spaced evenly
00:25:487 (8,9) - make this one slider, start point (8) and end point (9 end point)
00:28:140 (8) - wrong spacing
00:31:609 (7) - ^
00:48:344 (4) - new combo
00:50:793 (1,2,3) - (1) remove new combo, (3) add new combo
00:54:874 (9,1) - (9)add new combo, (1) remove new combo
01:01:405 (5,1) - (5)add new combo, (1) remove new combo
01:38:752 - add note
02:29:160 (7,8,9) - separate more from 6
02:32:425 (7) - same
02:34:466 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - how about making the jumps between these combos the same, so will be easier to read ^^
02:51:915 (1) - remove new combo?
03:00:589 (9,1) - (9) add new combo, (1) remove new combo
03:29:160 (3) - space evenly
03:30:180 (5) - new combo, because the spacing changes, and you should space them evenly
03:32:425 (3) - new combo for jump
03:35:282 (3,4,5,6) - space evenly
03:36:915 (2) - separate a lil from 1 end point, to make the same distance between the notes of this combo
03:39:874 (1) - don't start spinner on blue tick unless is necessary

Good luck!
Fixed. Just tell me if i did anything wrong now lol
l3lueskyiiz
Love this song so much :)
Natteke
I'm half way done. It's taking too long cus I have other stuffs to map so...

Download: TaNaBaTa - Unknown Girl -acoustic ver- (Darkoff) [Natteke].osu
Topic Starter
Kujo

Natteke desu wrote:

I'm half way done. It's taking too long cus I have other stuffs to map so...

Looking good Natteke desu
Teara
Took a quick look~

I'll give a full mod tomorrow.

only thing i noticed right away sofar was that Teras diff, has two longish breaks really close to one another.
Teras

Teara wrote:

Took a quick look~

I'll give a full mod tomorrow.

only thing i noticed right away sofar was that Teras diff, has two longish breaks really close to one another.
So does Darkoff's diff.
thethorndog
fj
ElleLTS
Nice job. Had some troubles playing (Because I was using mouse, which I suck at.), but otherwise i'd look forward to this being ranked!
Teras

ElleLTS wrote:

Nice job. Had some troubles playing (Because I was using mouse, which I suck at.), but otherwise i'd look forward to this being ranked!
This have been graveyarded for a long time, don't expect it to be ranked unless Darkoff (Kujo) Decides to revive it :[
ElleLTS

Teras wrote:

ElleLTS wrote:

Nice job. Had some troubles playing (Because I was using mouse, which I suck at.), but otherwise i'd look forward to this being ranked!
This have been graveyarded for a long time, don't expect it to be ranked unless Darkoff (Kujo) Decides to revive it :[
Oopsies ^^" I should look at dates more often. I hope he decides to :l
Topic Starter
Kujo

ElleLTS wrote:

Oopsies ^^" I should look at dates more often. I hope he decides to :l
Well I'm thinking of reviving this again whenever i've created an easy and an medium diff but I'm so god damn lazy it's gonna take a while :///
Teras
I'm still the old CUNTOFF
: D
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