Rtyzen wrote:

Hey there M4M here~ (I'll try my best to give suggestions, if my mod is not satisfactory feel free to not mod my map)

[Normal]

1. 00:21:040 (3) - Make this 1/1 into a 1/2 slider and a circle, and delete 00:21:760 (4) -
2. 00:28:480 (5) - Change to a circle and a 1/1?
3. 00:36:160 (5) - ^
4. 00:41:200 - to 00:43:120 - Rhythm suggestion: http://puu.sh/gYUDh/3c554e2c25.jpg
5. 00:45:760 - to 00:47:440 - Rhythm suggestion: http://puu.sh/gYR0S/9b4ae4a5e3.jpg
6. 00:58:480 - to 00:59:920 - http://puu.sh/gYUJE/7c87c41bfb.jpg ? It's unrankable. I made enough recovery time after a spinner.
7. 01:12:880 (2) - Maybe try making this blanket 01:11:920 (1) - ? IMO it would look better and play the same I don't think so.

Other points are fixed

[Hard]

1. 00:10:000 (4,5) - Move this further away from 00:09:520 (3) - as this 00:09:520 (3,4) - gap looks like 1/4 instead of 1/2 It's fine to me.
2. 00:26:560 (3,4,5) - I think this will look better like http://puu.sh/gYRsr/de81570b19.jpg or even just http://puu.sh/gYRtc/3c535a6762.jpg currently it plays slightly awkwardly prefer to use a jump on this part.
3. 00:30:640 (3,4,5,6) - http://puu.sh/gYRDC/ca5ac0e89c.jpg same as before plays awkwardly Same.
4. 01:18:160 (2) - This blanket 01:18:640 (3) - maybe? Nope.
5. 01:26:320 (3) - Ctrl-G move it up abit? break my jump pattern.

[Insane]

1. 00:06:640 (1) - curve the long part abit so the short part can point at the next circle? No change.
2. 00:12:520 (2,3) - too close easy to click early ok, fixed a bit spacings
3. 00:22:480 (4,5) - abit too close considering it's a slider ^
4. 00:47:920 (6,7) - ^ ^
5. 01:09:040 (4,5) - ^ ^

Good luck!

Owntrolf wrote:

Im guessing the mp3 will get updated to a 192kbps since Pomu gave you one

Add source?

• Normal

  00:46:960 (3) - Maybe move this a little bit higher

• Hard

  I like this much better than the insane
  00:24:640 (3,4,5) - Maybe make the slider go first then the circles so we can click the claps?
  00:36:640 (5) - Sounds like theres 1/4s in the slider
  00:39:280 (1,2) - Maybe maintain same direction like 00:37:360 (1,2) - fixed :3
  00:57:520 (2,3) - Maybe replace with slider to keep using the same pattern of 3/4 repeat + 2 1/2 slider

• Insane

  00:13:120 (4) - I dont hear any sound here unless you're talking about that faint noise then ignore this
  00:44:800 (1,2) - Maybe use the same 2 slider for 1
  01:22:480 - maybe slowdown here? up to 01:23:320 -
  01:30:640 (1,2) - Maybe ctrl+g or increase the spacing between them so it has more impact?

1. 00:13:840 (4) - how about replacing the drum finish here, with the soft clap instead, since it sounds much nicer imo. (and yes if you did for this one, don't forget to change in all diffs too ><)
2. 00:18:160 (1) - how about adding a finish on the head and yes you can keep the whistle, it sounds much nicer with it imo =3=/
3. 00:20:320 (5) - how about adding a SC:1 whistle on this slider's head, it sounds kinda fitting with music imo o.o
4. 00:28:480 (5) - ^
5. 00:29:680 (1) - I think you missed a finish here, since you kinda added it here too 00:22:000 (1) -
6. 00:52:240 (5) - how about switching the whistle on the head to the repeat instead. It sounds much fitting imo
7. 01:08:080 (1) - maybe add a finish on this slider's head, sounds fitting with music o.o
8. 01:30:640 (1) - whistle sounds great on this slider's head, how about adding it? :3

1. 00:18:160 (1) - finish on this note, like i said in normal diff =w=/
2. 00:29:680 (1) - ^
3. 00:48:880 (1) - the shape of this curved slider looks kinda off to me, how about redo it and make it better instead, and i mean this too 00:49:600 (2) - o.o
4. 00:50:800 (1) - finish on this note would sound great imo
5. 00:52:240 (2) - how about adding another whistle here 00:52:480 - , it'll follow great with music imo :3
6. 01:08:080 (1) - finish on this slider head would sound great imo
7. 01:30:640 (1) - like i said in normal, whistle in the head would sound good imo o.o

1. 00:10:000 (6) - how about remove the drum sampleset and add soft whistle instead to this note. it might sounded much nicer with the music here :3
2. 00:29:200 (1) - the combo went too long here, how about adding nc to this note, like you did here 00:13:360 (1) - and 00:20:080 (1) - o.o
3. 00:48:640 (1) - I really don't like how you added a repeat on the down beat here, and it sounded bad imo, how about making something like this instead:
4. 00:50:800 (1) - finish here like i said in hard diff o3o/
5. 00:52:480 (5) - maybe add a whistle to this note, it'll follow the music perfectly imo ></
6. 01:04:240 (1) - maybe add a finish to this note, it'll sound good with music imo o.o
7. 01:08:080 (1) - ^
8. 01:30:640 (1) - like i said about on all diffs, add a whistle to this slider's head o.o

m1223961117 wrote:

From my Queue~and this map is last one...

Sorry I'm late

[General]

• 
  

1. Umm...I found this: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=a-0Tw3qMv7M
   And this part:
   
   So...It's not one artist in this song (I don't know how to fix this title problem ) It's not official source.
2. Song's volume is too loud...I can't hear your sound really ?
   

[Insane]

• 
  00:22:480 (4) - too below
  00:25:360 (8) - use S:C2 Clap??
  00:29:200 (8) - ^
  00:33:040 (7) - ^
  00:46:000 (5) - too below
  01:25:840 (2) - very close to scorebar: http://puu.sh/h10XH/66d4de5c84.jpg
  01:26:800 (5) - too below
  01:30:160 (5) - ^, an arrow It's fine for playing.

1. I think I love this map

[Hard]

• 
  00:25:360 - 00:29:200 - 00:33:040 - same as Insane diff
  00:38:320 (3) - why I think move to 384|88 better?? I don't want to make a jump here.

1. Looks fine

[Normal]

• 
  00:07:360 (2) - too below, slider body fixed
  00:25:360 - 00:29:200 - 00:33:040 - You know, S:C2 sound ? it's fine to me.

1. 

Go!!!!Star!!!!
Good luck

Sekai-nyan wrote:

Place holder for my mod <3 =w=/


Normal:

1. 00:13:840 (4) - how about replacing the drum finish here, with the soft clap instead, since it sounds much nicer imo. (and yes if you did for this one, don't forget to change in all diffs too ><) prefer to use drum-finish here >.<
2. 00:18:160 (1) - how about adding a finish on the head and yes you can keep the whistle, it sounds much nicer with it imo =3=/
3. 00:20:320 (5) - how about adding a SC:1 whistle on this slider's head, it sounds kinda fitting with music imo o.o
4. 00:28:480 (5) - ^
5. 00:29:680 (1) - I think you missed a finish here, since you kinda added it here too 00:22:000 (1) -
6. 00:52:240 (5) - how about switching the whistle on the head to the repeat instead. It sounds much fitting imo
7. 01:08:080 (1) - maybe add a finish on this slider's head, sounds fitting with music o.o
8. 01:30:640 (1) - whistle sounds great on this slider's head, how about adding it? :3

Hard:

1. 00:18:160 (1) - finish on this note, like i said in normal diff =w=/
2. 00:29:680 (1) - ^
3. 00:48:880 (1) - the shape of this curved slider looks kinda off to me, how about redo it and make it better instead, and i mean this too 00:49:600 (2) - o.o fixed a bit!
4. 00:50:800 (1) - finish on this note would sound great imo It's a little loud on this part to me!
5. 00:52:240 (2) - how about adding another whistle here 00:52:480 - , it'll follow great with music imo :3
6. 01:08:080 (1) - finish on this slider head would sound great imo
7. 01:30:640 (1) - like i said in normal, whistle in the head would sound good imo o.o

Insane:

1. 00:10:000 (6) - how about remove the drum sampleset and add soft whistle instead to this note. it might sounded much nicer with the music here :3
2. 00:29:200 (1) - the combo went too long here, how about adding nc to this note, like you did here 00:13:360 (1) - and 00:20:080 (1) - o.o
3. 00:48:640 (1) - I really don't like how you added a repeat on the down beat here, and it sounded bad imo, how about making something like this instead:
4. 00:50:800 (1) - finish here like i said in hard diff o3o/ Same as above.
5. 00:52:480 (5) - maybe add a whistle to this note, it'll follow the music perfectly imo ></
6. 01:04:240 (1) - maybe add a finish to this note, it'll sound good with music imo o.o Same as above.
7. 01:08:080 (1) - ^ added a finish!
8. 01:30:640 (1) - like i said about on all diffs, add a whistle to this slider's head o.o

That's all, i found. Really neat map as always alaneko, call me back~ =w=/

1. i think you should add nippon to the tags since the other bubbled/iconed mememe maps have it and aswell cut version or short version

1. 00:28:960 (4,5,6) - i would just use sliders here to makee it easier
2. 00:30:880 (4,5,6) - use a slider same for 00:43:840 (3,4,5) -
3. i would do HP and OD 5.5

1. 00:36:880 (6) - clap
2. 00:43:840 - add circle or do a slider with prev object
3. 00:47:680 - add something
4. 00:53:200 - start the spinner from here
5. OD 3.5 atleast to have a better spread

Andrea wrote:

Glad to see someone finally got this song Qualified xD

Krfawy wrote:

Andrea wrote:

Glad to see someone finally got this song Qualified xD

I lol'd and lolled so much while reading Andrea-chan's post. XD

EDIT: Andrea, pls. Tell me sth IDK.