Are you making another diff for this? I think it needs an extra nice map
2015-03-29 01:14 alacat: hello :>
2015-03-29 01:15 Kawaiwkyik: hello :D
2015-03-29 01:15 alacat: How are you ? :)
2015-03-29 01:16 Kawaiwkyik: i'm fine now :|
2015-03-29 01:16 alacat: Nice :3
2015-03-29 01:16 alacat: Are you free now ? wanna ask test play for my new map :D
2015-03-29 01:17 Kawaiwkyik: sure :3
2015-03-29 01:17 alacat: ahh Thanks <3 It's low BPM ^^
2015-03-29 01:17 alacat: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/668879 TeddyLoid - ME!ME!ME! feat. daoko_pt. 1]
2015-03-29 01:18 alacat: Insane pls! <3
2015-03-29 01:20 Kawaiwkyik: wow nice
2015-03-29 01:20 alacat: 1/3 T_T
2015-03-29 01:20 alacat: :O really ? :D
2015-03-29 01:21 Kawaiwkyik: yea~~~
2015-03-29 01:21 alacat: Thank you for playing ! :D/
2015-03-29 01:21 Kawaiwkyik: but some 1/3 to 1/2 are kinda bad imo :|
2015-03-29 01:21 alacat: ><
2015-03-29 01:22 Kawaiwkyik: like 01:19:440 (4,1,2) - and 01:27:520 (2,1,2) -
2015-03-29 01:22 alacat: I should fix that part :>
2015-03-29 01:22 Kawaiwkyik: yea~~
2015-03-29 01:24 alacat: These notes changed to sliders :D
2015-03-29 01:24 Kawaiwkyik: ><
2015-03-29 01:25 alacat: update o3o
2015-03-29 01:25 alacat: fixed your points :D
2015-03-29 01:27 Kawaiwkyik: really nice song and map ><
2015-03-29 01:27 Kawaiwkyik: also bg
2015-03-29 01:29 alacat: :O
2015-03-29 01:29 alacat: pro :3
2015-03-29 01:29 alacat: looks like kan nagi lol
2015-03-29 01:29 alacat: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/25344 Haruka Tomatsu - Motto hade ni ne!(TV Size)]
2015-03-29 01:29 Kawaiwkyik: oh
2015-03-29 01:29 Kawaiwkyik: it's remind me for this too xd
2015-03-29 01:30 alacat: xD
2015-03-29 01:30 alacat: then, i like that song too ^
2015-03-29 01:31 alacat: also thanks again ! :D
2015-03-29 01:31 Kawaiwkyik: yea :D
Thanks!Milan- wrote:
hhhhi hello~
[Insane][Hard]
- 00:10:120 (7) - drum sampleset too?
- 00:18:160 (1) - finish like you did 00:14:320 (1) - sounds ok i think
- 00:21:280 (3) - drum clap instead of finish sounds cool cuz the du-dun, ok
- 00:21:760 (1,2) - this as a 1/8 repeat fits better imo like this or something http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2958987 . And also, you could switch NC there uhm not fit to here
- 00:36:640 - this should be mapped out >< fits vocals and instruments, also go against your constancy.
- 00:52:000 - shouldnt this green line be C:2?
fixed other points :>[Normal]
- 00:21:280 (4,1,2,3) - you may want to give these more space, cuz how auto stacks works lol. Same here 00:46:960 (1,2) - fixed
- 00:36:520 - add note? Just to cover that (very notiable) instrument >< added a note
bbbbbye
- 01:25:840 (1) - cancel nc ok
- It's kinda weird that you try to cover the 1/3 sound on the kiai using 1/2. i guess it's ok(? took vocal sounds on 1/2 rhythm :3
ありがとうございます~無記入の部分は修正しましたP o M u T a wrote:
hi~. m4m your queue.
[General][Normal]
- 128kpbsから192kpbsに曲のmp3を変換しておきましたので、差し支えが無ければどうぞ! http://puu.sh/gYQwI/1de1ce4240.zip
よりよい物を今後探してみます- これを見る限りスタジオカラーだけはぶられてる気もするので、スタジオカラーをTagsに追加してもいいかなと思いました。 http://puu.sh/gYQoo/2c0d80fbb6.png http://animatorexpo.com/mememe/
- 'ME!ME!ME! feat. daoko_pt.1'が題名として正しいのかなと思いました。変更点はピリオドと1の空間を消しました。ソースは頼りないのですが、もし公式で見つけていらっしゃいましたら問題ありません。 https://itunes.apple.com/jp/album/ri-benanime-ta-jian-ben-shi/id950516608
- soft-hitclap.wavの音量が少し小さいかなっていう気がしました。曲自体のmp3の音量やwhistleに負けて、clapの味が出ていないように感じたので、少しだけですが音量を上げてみました。良かったら入れ替えてみてください。 http://puu.sh/gYRvZ/b6ee5d9dc2.zip
[Hard]
- 00:20:080 (1) - 確かに音は変わっていますが、NCの規則を見る限りここだけ短いので特にこだわりが無ければremove NCはどうでしょうか。
- 00:52:240 (5) - vocalの音も取り、最後のsymbalも取る音取りを取るこちらの方が、音取りとしておすすめかもです。https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2963810
[Insane]
- 00:20:080 (1,2,3,4) - ここの音取りに関してですが、00:20:800 - ここに空いてるのは個人的に少し違和感を持った為、音取りの提案を画像として出します。 http://puu.sh/gYS4h/cfcf8156d0.jpg. 私の音取りの場合は強いベースサウンドの音を取ってしまう形になりますが.. それかkeepして、00:20:800 - ここにノートを追加する方がplayは自然になるのかなというのが見解です。
- 00:38:560 (4,1) - 恐らくバグでしょうけど、気にならない1girdのスタックのズレが生じているので、最後の最後に直してみると良いと思います!
- 00:40:720 (5,1) - 個人的にですが、同じスライダーを使った方が見た目も良いかなと思いました。(5)の方を(1)と同じように曲げてあげることで、(4)の微かなblanketにも繋がるかと思います。
- 01:30:640 (1) - 凄い細かい話になりますが、(x:199 y;90)に移動することで、(2)のslider endと(3)と(1)の完璧なx:1.10の△が出来ます。もしよろしければ試してみてください。
nice mapです!頑張ってください~
- 01:29:680 (3) - 1/4のリズムから1/3に移行していて、初見でやると、ちょっと躓きました。自分だけかもしれないんですけど、NC入れるとリズム変化を補えるのではないかと思いました。1/3の音にNew comboを入れるかどうか検討中なので保留にしておきます
Thanks!Rtyzen wrote:
Hey there M4M here~ (I'll try my best to give suggestions, if my mod is not satisfactory feel free to not mod my map)[Normal]Other points are fixed
- 00:21:040 (3) - Make this 1/1 into a 1/2 slider and a circle, and delete 00:21:760 (4) -
- 00:28:480 (5) - Change to a circle and a 1/1?
- 00:36:160 (5) - ^
- 00:41:200 - to 00:43:120 - Rhythm suggestion: http://puu.sh/gYUDh/3c554e2c25.jpg
- 00:45:760 - to 00:47:440 - Rhythm suggestion: http://puu.sh/gYR0S/9b4ae4a5e3.jpg
- 00:58:480 - to 00:59:920 - http://puu.sh/gYUJE/7c87c41bfb.jpg ? It's unrankable. I made enough recovery time after a spinner.
- 01:12:880 (2) - Maybe try making this blanket 01:11:920 (1) - ? IMO it would look better and play the same I don't think so.
[Hard]
- 00:10:000 (4,5) - Move this further away from 00:09:520 (3) - as this 00:09:520 (3,4) - gap looks like 1/4 instead of 1/2 It's fine to me.
- 00:26:560 (3,4,5) - I think this will look better like http://puu.sh/gYRsr/de81570b19.jpg or even just http://puu.sh/gYRtc/3c535a6762.jpg currently it plays slightly awkwardly prefer to use a jump on this part.
- 00:30:640 (3,4,5,6) - http://puu.sh/gYRDC/ca5ac0e89c.jpg same as before plays awkwardly Same.
- 01:18:160 (2) - This blanket 01:18:640 (3) - maybe? Nope.
- 01:26:320 (3) - Ctrl-G move it up abit? break my jump pattern.
[Insane]
- 00:06:640 (1) - curve the long part abit so the short part can point at the next circle? No change.
- 00:12:520 (2,3) - too close easy to click early ok, fixed a bit spacings
- 00:22:480 (4,5) - abit too close considering it's a slider ^
- 00:47:920 (6,7) - ^ ^
- 01:09:040 (4,5) - ^ ^
Good luck!
Thank you ~ ! no comment = I kept my patternsOwntrolf wrote:
Im guessing the mp3 will get updated to a 192kbps since Pomu gave you one
Add source?
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00:46:960 (3) - Maybe move this a little bit higher
Hard
I like this much better than the insane
00:24:640 (3,4,5) - Maybe make the slider go first then the circles so we can click the claps?
00:36:640 (5) - Sounds like theres 1/4s in the slider
00:39:280 (1,2) - Maybe maintain same direction like 00:37:360 (1,2) - fixed :3
00:57:520 (2,3) - Maybe replace with slider to keep using the same pattern of 3/4 repeat + 2 1/2 slider
Insane
00:13:120 (4) - I dont hear any sound here unless you're talking about that faint noise then ignore this
00:44:800 (1,2) - Maybe use the same 2 slider for 1
01:22:480 - maybe slowdown here? up to 01:23:320 -
01:30:640 (1,2) - Maybe ctrl+g or increase the spacing between them so it has more impact?
Thank youm1223961117 wrote:
From my Queue~and this map is last one...
Sorry I'm late
[General]
- Umm...I found this: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=a-0Tw3qMv7M
And this part:
So...It's not one artist in this song (I don't know how to fix this title problem ) It's not official source.- Song's volume is too loud...I can't hear your sound really ?
[Insane]
00:22:480 (4) - too below
00:25:360 (8) - use S:C2 Clap??
00:29:200 (8) - ^
00:33:040 (7) - ^
00:46:000 (5) - too below
01:25:840 (2) - very close to scorebar: http://puu.sh/h10XH/66d4de5c84.jpg
01:26:800 (5) - too below
01:30:160 (5) - ^, an arrow It's fine for playing.
- I think I love this map
[Hard]
00:25:360 - 00:29:200 - 00:33:040 - same as Insane diff
00:38:320 (3) - why I think move to 384|88 better?? I don't want to make a jump here.
- Looks fine
[Normal]
00:07:360 (2) - too below, slider body fixed
00:25:360 - 00:29:200 - 00:33:040 - You know, S:C2 sound ? it's fine to me.
Go!!!!Star!!!!
Good luck
Thanks Nyan! no comment = fixed your pointsSekai-nyan wrote:
Place holder for my mod <3 =w=/
Normal:
- 00:13:840 (4) - how about replacing the drum finish here, with the soft clap instead, since it sounds much nicer imo. (and yes if you did for this one, don't forget to change in all diffs too ><) prefer to use drum-finish here >.<
- 00:18:160 (1) - how about adding a finish on the head and yes you can keep the whistle, it sounds much nicer with it imo =3=/
- 00:20:320 (5) - how about adding a SC:1 whistle on this slider's head, it sounds kinda fitting with music imo o.o
- 00:28:480 (5) - ^
- 00:29:680 (1) - I think you missed a finish here, since you kinda added it here too 00:22:000 (1) -
- 00:52:240 (5) - how about switching the whistle on the head to the repeat instead. It sounds much fitting imo
- 01:08:080 (1) - maybe add a finish on this slider's head, sounds fitting with music o.o
- 01:30:640 (1) - whistle sounds great on this slider's head, how about adding it? :3
Hard:
- 00:18:160 (1) - finish on this note, like i said in normal diff =w=/
- 00:29:680 (1) - ^
- 00:48:880 (1) - the shape of this curved slider looks kinda off to me, how about redo it and make it better instead, and i mean this too 00:49:600 (2) - o.o fixed a bit!
- 00:50:800 (1) - finish on this note would sound great imo It's a little loud on this part to me!
- 00:52:240 (2) - how about adding another whistle here 00:52:480 - , it'll follow great with music imo :3
- 01:08:080 (1) - finish on this slider head would sound great imo
- 01:30:640 (1) - like i said in normal, whistle in the head would sound good imo o.o
Insane:
- 00:10:000 (6) - how about remove the drum sampleset and add soft whistle instead to this note. it might sounded much nicer with the music here :3
- 00:29:200 (1) - the combo went too long here, how about adding nc to this note, like you did here 00:13:360 (1) - and 00:20:080 (1) - o.o
- 00:48:640 (1) - I really don't like how you added a repeat on the down beat here, and it sounded bad imo, how about making something like this instead:
- 00:50:800 (1) - finish here like i said in hard diff o3o/ Same as above.
- 00:52:480 (5) - maybe add a whistle to this note, it'll follow the music perfectly imo ></
- 01:04:240 (1) - maybe add a finish to this note, it'll sound good with music imo o.o Same as above.
- 01:08:080 (1) - ^ added a finish!
- 01:30:640 (1) - like i said about on all diffs, add a whistle to this slider's head o.o
That's all, i found. Really neat map as always alaneko, call me back~ =w=/
Andrea wrote:
Glad to see someone finally got this song Qualified xD
I cried. ._.Krfawy wrote:
Andrea wrote:
Glad to see someone finally got this song Qualified xD
I lol'd and lolled so much while reading Andrea-chan's post. XD
EDIT: Andrea, pls. Tell me sth IDK.