神速[ S a k u r a ] wrote:
太帥啦
神速[ S a k u r a ] wrote:
太帥啦
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337119,1935.48387096774,4,2,1,50,1,0
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liangv587 wrote:
F6红线删了,粘贴神秘代码1404,697.674418604651,4,2,1,30,1,0
333497,740.740740740741,4,2,1,50,1,0
334237,800,4,2,1,50,1,0
335037,1071.42857142857,4,2,1,50,1,0
335572,937.5,4,2,1,50,1,0
336040,2158.27338129496,4,2,1,50,1,0
337119,1935.48387096774,4,2,1,50,1,0
338086,2068.96551724138,4,2,1,50,1,0
00:53:555 (4,5) - 不适合跳 好了好了我知道了
01:07:334 (5,6) - 不适合跳 这不会是真的吧
01:13:438 (9) - 圈加滑条,这个圈就变弱了,但是这里是强拍,所以换个1/2折返 这不会是真的吧(这里怎么是强拍,根本没声音
01:30:357 (6) - 圈,01:30:531滑条才对 好了好了我知道了
01:38:380 (5) - 形状不合群 这不会是真的吧
02:50:590 (4) - ctrl+g 好了好了我知道了
03:54:427 (4) - 异类,http://puu.sh/gRtQF.jpg 好了好了我知道了
04:17:799 (6) - 这里是1/12,而且clap很难听,whistle好些 好了好了我知道了(改成1/6了但是clap保持
no reply = fix ,但是你以后图片能不能放box里啊...SoGa wrote:
[General]
- Tag 可以 加上 : seven oops
- 单色BG还用这么多combo colours,你干脆用黑色算了,i don't love the BG sry
[Orange]
- 00:32:101 (1) - Prefer Finish instead of a whistle .
- 00:32:101 (1,2) - ^ 这地方很舒缓,而且我不喜欢finish
- 00:34:892 (1,2,3,4) - 其实这个可以复制粘贴,不过随便了 这地方无所谓啊...
- 00:38:555 (3) - im not a 强迫症 but pls stack it
- 00:48:845 (1) - 试试换个方向,现在的感觉有点奇怪。
- 01:07:334 (5,6) - 近一点试试(可能是我弱 有一点道理但是为了那条直线先不改了
- 01:11:694 (3,4) - 接的时候感觉怪怪的,也不怎么好打 嗯想了想确实不太合适,但是暂时没想到怎么改比较好 先不改
- 01:19:543 (1,2,3) - 间距一样感觉怪怪的,修下
- 01:24:078 (6) - 把这个这样摆试试?(虽然知道是后面的5连可真有必要吗)按自己的方式改了这块地方
- 01:28:787 Add a note
- 01:53:729 (3,4,5) - 感觉不怎么好看 怎么不好看 你是不是男人
- 02:09:776 (1,2,3,4) - 2-3 间距不舒服
- 02:37:683 (1,3) - Blanket 我眼神不好你不要骗我
- 02:39:427 (5) - 这个不好读,还不如stack在这个的尾巴上 02:37:683 (1) - 确实坑了但是你的方法不好,按自己想法改了
- 03:16:578 (6) - 移这个更远点 ,可以试试这个?乱弄的,就是差不多这个方向 有点道理但是这样改了后面很难搞,先不动了
- 04:48:845 (6) - 忘记NC了?
- 05:04:194 (3,4,5) - 放同间距吧,感觉声音都一样
- 05:07:683 (5,1) - 其实这种重音 我觉得能分更开。 挺好的,不了
- 05:37:119 为啥不放个note 没跟那个轨
- 05:37:844 可以从这里开始spinner,不过随便了 同上
大概就这这样水一发
tyken2010123 wrote:
剛好有事做後面就水摸一下了Orange
- 01:49:892 - 01:52:683 - 01:55:473 - 02:03:845 - 02:06:636 - 03:16:403 - 03:19:194 - 03:41:520 - 04:48:497 - 這幾個紅線都應該加上音,雖然vocal在藍線,但是藍線不看縮圈實在太難按,而且大部分間距也不對,可以考慮加圓圈或者改成1/4滑條也可以 不想改,这是insane不是hard,这种地方间距大小我觉得没必要这么在意,放一个圈也是这个道理,而且我不太喜欢变相的overmap
01:02:276 (5) - 間距問題,應該放遠一點接近下一個滑條才對 下面滑条是重音,理应放跳
01:07:857 (6) - 這個太突然了,不適合跳 怎么你们都说这个,好吧好吧改了
01:19:543 (1,2,3) - 這間距一看就不對,不聽節奏按不了系列 上面mod里改了
01:54:950 (6,7) - 讀圖困難,最好不要疊 不难吧,这又不是hard
02:20:241 (4) - 間距不對,不看縮圈按不了系列,或者可以考慮前面藍線加圓圈 没感觉有什么不对
02:25:997 - 03:02:624 - 這位置莫名其妙有個音效,是mp3壓壞了還是本來音樂就有的? 应该是本来就有吧,不用在意
03:20:764 - 感覺漏音了 没啊
04:17:799 (6,7,8,1) - 這個1/6最好不要疊,不過你前面的圈大部分都有疊,這個恐怕不會改,只能成坑爹系列了。 全图就这一个连打
整體來說就是間距略坑,排版雖好但是不能忽略玩家錯誤讀圖的機會,其他沒什麼了
no reply = fixz1085684963 wrote:
[Orange]
00:23:729 (1) - 逼死强迫症 故意的,爽不爽
00:39:776 (5) - 提前1/4 两个地方都overmap,这圈用来填节奏的,何必呢
00:58:090 (3) - 这啥,建议左边那个红描点
01:11:520 (2,3) - 删了 这么明显 的音
02:13:787 (4,5) - ctrl+g以及03:29:136 (4,5) - 不了
02:47:799 (7) - 这个的间距和前面的一样吧 重音 不想一样
04:19:543 (2,3,4,5,1) - 爱心plz 配合音乐间距渐变
04:32:101 (1) - 为啥这里sv1.4 卧槽我的错,但是懒得改了 就这样了
04:43:264 (1) - 把右边的描点往左拉比较好,或者直接一个圆弧盖到5头上 挺好的吧,先不改
04:50:241 (8) - 歪了
05:29:659 (5,6,7,8) - 把5扔进2的怀抱也不错 做的时候也想过,但是间距会很大,算了
人哥你真用这bg吗 当然不用...待我去找一发BG
蟹蟹wwMegurine Luka wrote:
Hi, M4M from my Queue~
既然不是新手那我就讲得简单一些了ww不要介意
[General][Orange]
- 默认的combo color真的不好看啊不考虑换一个吗? 。。。换了BG之后忘记了
- 我个人是觉得现在的hitnormal还不如default的hitnormal好听(就是第一套自定义)...不过这个还是随意了就是了。 有点但是一开始是想体现一下舒缓段和kiai的区别才用了不同的hitnormal,现在看来是不太合理,不过下次注意好了,这个先不改了
- 总体new combo下的比较乱,基本属于我看不大懂的节奏...尤其间奏的地方有时候不知道为什么就换combo了好像有些随意。不过对我个人来说,combo这种东西也是轻中之轻,所以也随意了就是了 我是两条大白线一个NC/w\ 没怎么按节奏或者排列下NC
嘛好像也没啥需要特别指出的,总体还是很平和很规矩的铺面,看上去很舒服ww。加油啦。
- 01:01:927 (4) - 虽然我个人很讨厌blanket mod,但是这个确实没有摆好,看上去很别扭。调小grid size重新摆下吧 好
- 02:47:799 (7) - 稍微离6近一点比较好,毕竟这里没有突然spacing change的hint,突然小跳一下不太和谐 行,近了点
- 04:13:613 (3) - 不如跟着节奏换成这样: rip...这是什么高端的科技,表示打不开...
- 05:02:799 (1) - 好像有点太上面了,就我自己这里看是已经碰到HP bar了 fixed
owoAIR wrote:
wwwww
[Orange]~~~~~~~~~~~
- 01:33:497 - 这里音可以比后面kiai重些,后同 妥
- 00:34:543 - 跟人声的话考虑加圈 妥
- 00:39:776 (5) - 01:59:834 (3) - 02:15:183 (8) - 02:21:810 (2,3) - 02:31:927 (5) - 02:52:857 (3) - 02:54:950 (2) - ds,类似的你觉得必要的话自己吧找不再提了orz 妥,其他我看着再改改,因为这不是hard所以没怎么在意DS
- 00:45:357 (6) - 512,287,建议如果没啥特殊需求这样类似的梗尽量间距稳定些 好吧,移上面去了
- 00:47:799 - 这里歌声挺模糊,于是跟琴,然而情况并没有好读多少orz,我强烈建议这么搞 思考,这就三个圈,不好读吗...先保留一下
- 00:49:892 (2) - 尾部clap挪1尾部 这样就打破规律了,不好
- 00:53:729 (5,3) - 5clap挪3
- 01:01:927 (4,1) - 4clap到1尾部,这部分用的有点摸不着规律 规律就是第三根白线,没有物件就最近的红线,这样听起来舒服,一会一个clap不好听
- 01:11:869 (4) - 节奏可以饱满些,歌声长不一定非扯个长条 这个音比较重,用长滑条可以强调一下好了
- 01:12:915 (8,9) - 掉次序 有点道理但是动了感觉太鬼畜
- 01:15:357 - 后面两拍可以试下尽量密集,现在总有些空荡荡的感觉 这里前面比较密集,然而正好这里人声比较缓和,所以均衡一下,不能一直密集下去
- 01:38:206 - 并没有音;w; ,01:37:508 - 这里倒是有 思考,这里没听就想当然放圈了,感觉非常合适,先留着
- 01:39:601 - 同上,没有的话尽量别下,否则会被例如种种花疯狂挑刺 干,不管,反正zzb又不点我图
- 01:41:694 - 这歌kiai部分咋一半跟歌声一半跟伴奏,你觉得真的好嘛orz 有嘛,我跟着感觉摆的节奏(其实是抄的妹姐姐的版本的节奏
- 后面节奏好些,
其实我懒比没啥大毛病不看了
Kagamine Ren wrote:
[*]04:13:613 (3) - 不如跟着节奏换成这样: rip...这是什么高端的科技,表示打不开...
嗨嗨~ 連puu都看不了的人在這裡喲Megurine Luka wrote:
Kagamine Ren wrote:
[*]04:13:613 (3) - 不如跟着节奏换成这样: rip...这是什么高端的科技,表示打不开...
之前puush炸了就用的photobucket,我这里显示似乎正常=。=
嘛用puush重新传了一下
m1223961117 wrote:
我來了我來了~~
[Orange]
01:17:450 (3) - 包好(1) 好
01:44:659 (1) - 這條位置超高的,我不知道你有沒有辦法往下調一下,因為他快貼血條了 (刀劍的血調會撞...) 好
01:52:683 - 鼓聲,還蠻明顯的,有沒有要作出來?? 好的吧..类似节奏也做了调整
03:28:438 (2,3) - 該怎麼說咧...03:28:438 (2) - 有一種二連打的味道在...因為這裡聲音03:28:526 - 比較明顯 (Circle放這裡比較好,真心的) 1/8 嗯,很有道理
04:13:962 (4,5) - 這個04:14:659 (5) - 改成04:13:962 (4) - 的180度翻轉比較好看 好
04:54:427 - 你是不是忘了Finish?? 是
05:05:590 - ^ 这个不是
05:17:799 (4,5,6,7) - 沒有要擺成比較好看的形狀嗎?? 稍微弄的好看了点...
05:27:043 (5) - 刪掉這個Circle更帶感→我刪掉一次後重看的感覺 好的
05:30:706 - Finish 好
我也抓不太到什麼違和的地方,這張星星可以給你
很久沒打舒服的慢歌了,祝你早日Rank
謝謝你的M4M,你真的插隊了
changed so much, thanks!CelsiusLK wrote:
As requested
[General][orange]
- There is slightest delay in soft-hitclap3 which can be optimized , use this soft-hitclap3 owo ok
nice map
- 00:45:706 (7) - x272 y288 ? this might make the flow here 00:45:357 (6,7,1) - a bit better changed
- 00:47:276 (3,4) - slider fit here better imo ok
- 00:54:427 (1,2,3,4) - try making spacing consistent so the flow will be better changed the flow here
- 01:01:055 (2,3) - place like this? so the flow here would here 01:00:008 (1,2,3,4) - would be better imo ok
- 01:27:915 (1) - x448 y320 so the spacing here will be consistent a bit 01:27:217 (4,5,1) - ok
- 01:48:845 (3) - curve this the another way so it would make flow here 01:48:845 (3,4) - better imo oh good idea
- 01:54:252 (4,5) - x400 y176 so the overlap here 01:53:729 (3,4,5) - will looks a bit better ok
- 02:20:241 (4,5,6) - try making spacing consistent so the flow will be better omg,changed so so so much
- 02:35:415 (2,3) - jumps here feel pretty sudden so decrease spacing here a bit ? ok
- 03:17:276 (2,3) - move these to around x272 y224 so the flow here 03:16:752 (1,2,3) - would be a bit better ok
- 03:39:078 (1,2,3) - try making spacing consistent so the flow will be better ok
- 03:54:427 (4) - ctrl+g this and it would make flow here 03:53:729 (3,4,5) - better ok
- 03:55:822 (1) - delete nc ? not really need here imo ok
- 04:03:322 (7,1) - this is really confusing to play (anti-jumps with nc (?) ) so stack them would make these play better ok
- 04:16:403 (3,4,5) - try making spacing consistent so the flow will be better ok
- 04:19:543 (2,3,4) - , 04:20:241 (4,5,1) - ^ here the spacing follows the music so i want to keep this
- 04:48:497 - add a note here ? that make rhythm sound better ok
- 05:11:171 (1) -delete nc ? not really need here imo ok
- 05:28:613 (2,5) - nazi - stack perfectly ok
- 05:34:237 (2,3,4) - nc all notes here for change in timing ok
you can get more mods if you want
also you can call me back when you feel ready
good luck
ty!~Kamio Misuzu wrote:
[General]
整体感觉有那么点过于拘泥vocal。导致的结果就是节奏分布不均匀。就比如刚刚还是1/4塞得满满的节奏,突然转成1/2了。可以看一下1分15秒/3分15秒 等地方,应该会有所感觉。 这个我说不太清楚,跟着感觉来的(抄来的,有时候人声会拖长音所以我就拉长滑条,感觉还好吧,妈蛋好多人喷,以后我做音游曲好了(
排列美观度不是很理想,不过还是可以接受。主要夹角尽量偏向锐角要相对好看点。flow的改变不要太频繁,过渡尽量平滑。这些其实都是后话了,以后做图可以多注意下。 不太清楚什么是好什么是不好
soft-hitnormal这个音效我很喜欢,不过感觉用的有点多,换我的话应该会当成个whistle和默认whistle混合用的Orz(现在肯定改不了了,麻烦的要死,我就是吐个槽
这个音效也算一时兴起加上去,效果确实让我挺失望,不过只能以后再说了
[Orange]
00:36:985 - 出于手感考虑,建议加个note,可以压在后面那个note上。虽然没有vocal,但是1/1的间隔时间远比5/4好把握,不必太在意vocal。 1/1的间距和5/4感觉区别并不大,当后面的note出来时候前面的已经消失了,等于是重新开始的感觉,而且这种凭空的overmap好难受,像在打空气
00:39:078 (4) - 00:36:287 (4) - 这俩不是一个模子刻的吗。 啊,没必要这么在意这个吧
01:23:903 (5,8) - 差一个像素cao. 怎么就眼贱看见这个,再挑nazi我去戳瞎QAQ好
00:45:183 (5) - 按照你下的这个节奏,00:45:095 - 这里其实还是有个1/8音的、、 这,滑条尾下1/8 真的很不喜欢
00:49:892 (2) - 还是和后面的间隔时间,建议延长至00:50:938 - 同上,我自己test感觉差别不是很大
00:55:473 (4,5) - 前面00:51:985 - 这部分空的节奏很多,这里突然塞满不合适,何况这里没有音。删掉4, slider5改一个单点 前面人声比较满所以塞满,这里不是塞满吧,没放1/4,滑条尾巴的作用也没那么大
01:13:264 (8,9) - 先slider再note 好
01:30:183 (6) - 删掉。尤其是这种hitnormal音,不适合塞满。 好
01:38:206 (4) - 这个note应该补到01:37:508 - 处,具体参照你后面01:42:915 (2,3,4,5) - 的节奏划分 好
01:49:543 (4,5,1) - 和01:52:334 (6,7,8,1) - 节奏非常相似。建议要么01:49:892 - 补note,要么删了01:52:683 (7) - 好的,删了后面那个
02:06:636 - ^ 思考
01:54:950 (6) - 删掉。节奏太塞满了。 好
02:31:403 (4,5,1) - 和02:25:822 (4,5,1) - 不是一毛一样的节奏吗=。=。。。要么都加上蓝线部分节奏,要么都去掉 前面加了个
02:55:648 - 加东西。。。话说02:54:427 (1,2,3,4) - 03:02:799 (1,2,3,4) - 这俩不是一毛一样的嘛,vocal位置稍有不同,但是建议节奏是一样的。该有的有该没的没,对应改一下。 思考,就是因为vocal位置不一样节奏才不一样,vocal有音的地方我不太想漏
03:16:055 (5,6) - 03:21:636 (4,5) - 为啥第二个就变折返了。。 后面略微有个三连音,你为毛那么纠结前后一样叻
03:17:973 (4) - 03:23:555 (4) - 这两个不建议留着。就像我在General里说的,前面整体1/2的间距,这部分突然塞满了1/4的节奏,还是同一类型的音。有点违和。 可以有
04:17:799 (6,7,8,1) - 变了节拍,加个NC。考虑要不要改成折返的,毕竟1/6容易出100,出于美观考虑也可以选择不改。 NC加了 折返就算了
05:06:287 (3,4,5) - 不建议强行反flow,参考↓ (其实也不是太好。) 我感觉这flow挺不错的...
05:10:473 (6,7) - 合并,这样↓ keyi
美丽。。这歌真是好听。
谢谢![Twinkle] wrote:
歌超好听的
[Orange]
00:23:729 (1,1) - 最开始这里感觉有点空,也许可以把一个note换滑条? 这是刚开始的地方,就跟点钢琴,后面过渡到人声什么的
00:36:287 (4) - 换成滑条会好一些? 好的
01:08:380 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - combo太长了 01:10:124 (8) - 01:11:869 (4) - 好
01:12:915 (7) - 换成两个note 不用了吧
01:20:938 (5) - NC 好
01:24:601 (8) - NC 好
01:25:124 (1) - 取消NC 好
01:30:531 (1) - 尾巴上finish不太合适 好
01:56:520 (3) - ctrl+g 先不改
02:15:008 (7,8,1) - 8移动一下,弄成等边三角形 好
02:46:055 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - combo太长,02:48:497 (8) - NC 后面跟着改一下 好
04:41:520 (3,4) - blanket一下 好
05:17:799 (4,5,6) - 摆成中心对称 好
感谢[Teichan] wrote:
速水
人哥越来越像神麻婆了
[Orange]美丽~
- 00:45:095 - 漏音,加note 滑条尾1/8太难玩
- 01:01:927 (4,5) - 5放远一些,这样的间距可能会诱导player在01:02:101 - 就去击打 好
- 01:07:334 (5,6) - 同理,虽然这里是ds,但是反flow会让player下意识以为隔得比较远从而读错,这里建议顺flow半叠在5后 好
- 01:45:357 (3) - 这个滑条 好
这样是不是好多了- 02:15:008 (7,8,1) - 正三角吧 02:48:497 (8,9,1) - 同 好
- 02:43:264 (1,2) - 长滑条跟vocal? 好
- 03:28:438 (2,3,4) - 这个三连,要么就用多一点,要么就别用了吧 这里好像挺合适的,先留着 提到再改
- 05:10:473 (6,7) - 这里的vocal好奇怪,把7移到蓝线上感觉也不对,不如去掉7,给6加折返 前面mod改成了长滑条
- 05:33:497 (1,1,1,1) - 变bpm建议滑条,rip acc rip
thank you bubble popper!^^xxdeathx wrote:
Hi Ren, random bubble check!Everything is suggestion except snapping, call me back when you have applied mod
- 00:58:613 (4) - ctrl-G plays a little better ok
- 01:53:031 (1,2) - 01:53:729 (3,4,5) - blanket to be neater 01:53:729 (3,4,5) - this is already blanket,if i curve the slider,the overlap will look a bit wired imo,the other one fixed
- 02:43:438 - I think it would sound better and be more fun to map this sound since it's a drum hmm..maybe you are right..but following the vocal here is also fine imo,maybe...i'm not sure but i want to keep this
- 03:50:241 (1) - curve the other way and blanket 03:50:763 (2) - so it plays better ok
- 03:58:612 - I highly suggest removing this kiai since it isn't part of the chorus and is rather the bridge ok
- 04:04:194 (4) - ctrl-G this would be better to remove the awkward transition between 04:04:020 (3,4) - and make the transition 04:04:194 (4,5) - more satisfying to play
- 04:05:590 (1) - ^ ok good idea
- 04:17:799 (1,2,3) - idk why you have 1/6 here, listen at 25% and it's clearly 1/8 or 1/4. also remove claps since they aren't in the music ok,fixed to 1/8
- 05:13:961 - also suggest removing kiai here because it's more part of the ending than the chorus (vocals ended) ok
no reply = fixXinely wrote:
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Orange
- 00:41:520 (4) - the inconsistency spacing feels not really well to play especially from this circle to next slider, well i know about emphasize piano but i'd say 480,264 so the spacing to next slider wont be too close
- 00:42:566 (6) - whistle on head to emphasize the piano?
- 00:45:183 (5) - well since your previous flow on 00:43:962 (2,3,4) - a little bit curvy, it's weird to have straight diagonal flow on this circle, i'd say smoother curve flow example http://puu.sh/gZRvQ.jpg
- 00:49:892 (2) - ctrl+g plays better for the flow here o-o
- 01:01:055 (3,4,5) - this is a little bit out from your style but imo it would give more natural flow for 01:01:403 (4,5,1) - , i mean just make 3,4,5 become like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2967038 hmm i moved circle(3) as your mod but i kept the slider because it's a little hard to play if ctrl+g
- 01:02:276 (1,2) - nazi, swap the NC for following NC per stanza?
- 01:17:973 - you may add note to follow the piano here, just a suggestion this piano sounds not obvious so i wanna ignore it>.<
- 01:23:031 (3) - 2 grid down to make 01:22:334 (2,3) - not placed close together, their body look a little bit close in my eyes o-o
- 01:25:822 (3) - 224,176 to it placed balance from previous sliders, i mean http://puu.sh/gZRWe.jpg
- 01:34:543 (3) - drum sampleset on tail to emphasize the drum at least, it feels empty orz
- 01:37:683 (4) - ^ , if you agree so you have to add drum for 01:40:822 - and every 3rd redtick on all kiai times good idea and i changed this in the whole map
- 01:45:706 (4) - whistle on head to emphasize the piano music keep this because it sounds a bit noisy if i do this
- 01:52:682 - add note to follow piano here, it's weird to see 1/4 circle and slider on 01:52:857 (7,1) - even you following the vocal Q_Q , oh consistency with 02:03:845 (5) - please
- 01:57:566 - since you use claps for 1/2, imo it would be nicer to lower the volume become 50% here
- 02:04:892 (2,3,4) - it's weird to see low spacing 1/2 to (2) slider and huge spacing (1/4) to (4) slider so i'd say 02:04:892 (2) - ctrl+g and stack (3) circle to (4)'s head for better flow
- 02:06:635 - same as 01:52:682 -
- 02:08:031 (4) - same as 01:45:706 (4) - , if you dont like whistle for 1/2 gap so you can remove from the tail here keep this, a bit uncomfortable imo
- 02:10:473 (2) - could you move it a little bit example 400,96? it's weird to see low spacing such as 0,9x LOL
- 02:15:880 (2) - the flow a little bit weird here, i'd say try smoother it with move to 152,188 maybe you're right but i really don't wan to break 02:15:880 (2,4,5,6) - this
- 02:23:728 - try use 45% here, the finish hitsound a little bit hard to hear for me, if you fix so you can add greenline 02:24:426 - 30% :3
- 02:33:497 (4) - quite weird when the piano is loud but the spacing is so low here, i'd say move this to 216,332, when you fix it so 02:33:845 (5) - move 68,224 to keep the flow changed in another way
- 02:35:764 (3) - you can add whistle on head to emphasize vocal if you want ~ keep this ,the reason is the same above
- 02:43:264 (1) - hmm imo this rhythm still can improved, you can hear you are skipping drum on 02:43:438 - and it feels weird, i'd say change this slider become 1/4 slider repeat for better rhythm
- 02:56:868 (7) - it has drum music same as previous circle, you can add clap if you want ><
- 03:19:194 - 03:41:519 - add note same as i suggested before
- 03:28:526 (3) - maybe delete this note for safer way, i cant hear music on 1/8 ><
- 03:35:764 (7) - it would be nicer if you use consistent spacing like move to 224,144
- 03:44:485 (7) - the flow feels not really well too here, i'd say move to 240,96 even i know this is not best suggestion i can give
- 03:45:706 (4) - add whistle on head to emphasize the piano keep as above
- 03:51:636 (4) - just my taste since i dont really like see low spacing for 1/2, i'd say move to 480,160 for further distance
- 04:01:055 (1,2) - swap NC for notice 04:01:752 (2,3) - is anti jump? i dont care what way would you take but what i suggest is NC the circle to notice the anti jump lol
- 04:18:148 (1) - finish on tail because the music has cymbal here
- 04:19:542 - i think better to remove kiai time here since it sounds not like epic part actually for me ><
- 04:34:892 (1) - i'd say to use circle only on whitetick here since you look following piano only from 04:32:101 (1,2,3,4,5) -
- 04:52:683 (4) - whistle on head to emphasize the piano /3/ ^
- 04:57:217 (1,2) - i'd say to remove (2) and copy paste from (1), they exactly look not symmetric or not same here lol
- 05:05:590 (1) - maybe add finish on head since i hear a music such as cymbal ><
- 05:06:287 (3,5) - ultra nazi, stack perfectly please, it noticed from testplay too so looks a little bit weird lol
- 05:29:310 (4) - try make this slider a little bit further from (5), 496/256 for it for neater design as well
poke me back ~
ok changed.Kodora wrote:
Aww, moe Ren, you always map songs what I love <33
I have nothing wrong with this map, except that OD could be a little higher (7 would be best option)
Poke me after moenely's #2!
all fix thank you.><Xinely wrote:
recheck
04:01:752 (7,1) - should be swap NC here, the first circle (7) which notices the anti jump ><
04:19:891 - until 04:20:938 - imo not really well for kiai but it's your decision to keep or not, i still can see reason why you add kiai time here XD oh..i didn't notice that all the green lines have kiai time....my mistake T^T
04:58:613 (3) - 240,240 to keep consistent spacing please C: