1. Beginner - 4Key (1,39 stars, 388 notes)
2. Hyper - 4Key (2,82 stars, 1011 notes)
3. Muu's Another - 4Key (3,78 stars, 1598 notes)
4. Standard - 4Key (1,92 stars, 696 notes)

2nd Ranked Map
by Rumia-
by ExUsagi

Beginner : by me
Standard : by me
Hyper : by me
Another : by Muu-chan

osu! Standard mode by HabiHolic

Adinata28 wrote:

engga dilanjutin lagi ? :v

-[ AmiShici ]- wrote:

Hiii Ve ^^

Just Simple Mod

4k = |1|2|3|4|

Beginner

Udah bagus menurutku

Standard

00:00:405 (405|2) - LN berhenti disini 00:01:499 -
00:01:655 - Add note

Hyper

00:54:546 (54546|1) - delete. ghost note
01:52:046 (112046|1) - delete. ghost note
02:02:593 (122593|1,122593|2) - move ke 3 dan 4
02:25:405 (145405|1) - move to 3?

Well, overall mapnya udah bagus.
Good Luck >w<)b

Frim4503 wrote:

tanggung lagunya
ga full sekalian ?

[ C r a c k ] wrote:

Hi Verniy_Chan
Here as your request in PM

General:

Click Me!

BPM: 192 ✓
Offset: 00:02:578 - (you have put offset at 00:00:093 - x )
I think this is the right offset because here starts the drum.

\o/ Prays LiSa everytime! \o/

Good luck with your map~

ExKagii- wrote:

boleh kah ku bantu mods? =w=

Muu-chan wrote:

Hi verniy chan M4M here via your queue. Hihi
All of them are just a suggestion, you could ignore it if unnecessary for you.
Since my english are bad, i would use Bahasa to make it more simple :3
|1|2|3|4|

BEGINNER

* 00:01:499 (1499|2) - aku saranin pindah ke 2 karena aku denger pitchnya beda dr 00:01:968 (1968|2) - ok
* 00:31:030 - gimana kalau kaya gini verniy chan? ^^ buat nghindari pattern kaya gini 00:30:561 (30561|2,31030|2)- (double with a note on 1 line :3) di beginner diff. Sama yg atasnya juga xD lol SS error, tpi kubuat lebih balance patternya
* 00:41:811 (41811|2) - aku saranin pindah ke 1^^ ok
* 00:42:280 - verniy chan bisa tambah note disini atau pindah 00:42:124 (42124|1) - ke 00:42:280 - :3 2 note itu utk drum sm kick atau 1 note utk drumnya aja. fixed
* 00:44:780 - verniy chan bisa tambah note disini utk drum. Selain itu ngikutin patternnya verniy chan di atas, 3 note~ nice
* 00:55:093 - mnurut aku disini cukup utk 1 note. karena beatnya ngga terlalu keras, sama kaya di 00:56:343 :3 trus ngikut patternya verniy chan juga~ ok and changed pattern
* 01:10:093 - verniy chan bisa double disini utk simbal. ah my bad
* 01:17:593 - aku saranin kaya gini verniy chan~ menurut aku itu lebih fit ke BG musiknya ^^ SS error, change with another pattern
* 01:28:843 - aku juga saranin kaya gini verniy chan, itu ngikut suara drum sm cymbalnya~ ^
* 01:37:593 ~ 01:41:030 - aku saranin doublenya di letakin di kolom yg beda2 verniy chan, soalnya beatnya menurut aku jg ngga sama :3 fixed
* 01:52:593 - same as before, i suggest to single this :3 fixed
* 02:12:280 - aku saranin yg didobel sebelah sini 02:12:593 - verniy chan, utk tambahan simbal. Soalnya menurut aku, 02:12:280 cmn ada drum ^
* 02:14:311 (134311|3) - aku saranin pindah ke 3 :3 ^
* 02:16:343 (136343|3,137280|3) - aku saranin pindah mereka ke 2 dan 3 ^^ ^

STANDARD

* 00:07:593 - verniy chan bisa kasih note di 4 karena ada simbal. sama kaya 00:02:593 - added
* 00:22:593 - verniy chan bisa kasih note utk tambahan simbal ^
* 00:29:780 - ^ keep, well that cymbal sound, but low sound
* 00:32:593 - ^ sama kaya 00:42:593 - ok
* 00:39:155 - ^ keep
* 00:55:014 - ^ utk drum, coba di playback 50% :3 i know, but it will be hard for this diff if make over stair
* 00:57:593 - ^ utk simbal ok
* 01:00:093 - ^ ^
* 01:11:655 - ^ keep, still low
* 01:12:124 - ^ utk drum sama kaya 01:10:249 - ^
* 01:17:436 - ^ utk drum sama kaya 01:17:124 - aku saranin kaya gini ^
* 01:17:593 (77593|2,77593|1) - aku saranin ini dibuat sama kaya 01:18:530 (78530|0,78530|2,78686|1) - karena aku denger suara gitar + drumnya sama. fixed
* 01:21:186 - aku saranin ditamabh note utk drum, selain itu ngikutin patternya verniy chan no, muzukasi for this diff
* 01:21:655 - ^
* 01:23:686 - ^
* 01:24:155 - ^
dst yang kaya gini :3 no, :v
* 01:28:999 - verniy chan bisa kasih note utk simbal disini keep
* 01:39:155 (99155|3) - menurut aku note ini dihapus aja verniy chan, lebih enjoyable :3 ok
* 01:41:186 - verniy chan bisa kasih note disini hmm, ok deh
* 01:42:046 (102046|2) - ini dipindah ke 01:42:202 - terus 01:42:514 - dikasih note :3 playback desu^^ keep
* 01:52:514 - note for drum desu :3 ^
* 01:55:093 - ^ for cymbal ok
* 02:02:280 - ^ for drum keep, still low
* 02:12:436 - ^ ^
* 02:25:093 - ^ for cymbal added
* 02:26:343 - i suggest to single this :3 nice

in progress last difficulty *boom a star* ^^

Verniy_Chan wrote:

orz forget to fix offset timing :v
ok, update with changed offset and resnap all timing (Kiai, Preview, Volume, SV)

MEGAtive wrote:

[Muu's EXTRA]

Mods

00:39:452 - Jack? Kykny gk pas deh sm suaranya. COba gini. http://puu.sh/gWBAj/b0a6ec5c61.png sure ><b applied hihi
00:41:327 (41327|0,41327|3,41327|1,41483|2,41483|0,41483|3) - D sebelumny kykny Kick cuman 2 not deh. Coba d pikir lg. owh iya .w. delete yg dibawah nya jd 2 note
01:15:858 - Gk denger ad 1/8. ada ko xD

MEGAtive wrote:

Verneeeh~ o/ Muueeegooa~ :v
Mod dri queue. Lagunya keren. Lebih Energetic dri Penerbangan Terang :v Dan penuh tempat buat perangkap SV lololol pff..

[General]
Mapset: Love It
Graphic: 1366x768 Good
Hitsound: Kykny udh gk ad masalah
Timing: Kykny sempet ad masalah offset tuh tempo hari.... But noprob.
Metadate: Kykny sih udh bagus....

[HYPER]

Mods

00:11:483 - Ad Drum. Gk d tambah? added
01:05:077 ke 01:08:202 - Mungkin satu not bsa d rubah jdi LN 4/4 keep, krena ada SV jadi sulit ntar mainnya
01:42:498 - Kedengeran ad drum. Gk d tambah? added
01:52:498 - ^ ^
01:57:420 - ^ ^
02:02:577 ke 02:05:702 - Mungkin satu not bsa d jadiin LN 4/4 ngikutin Gitarnya.... keep, krena ada SV jadi sulit ntar mainnya
02:07:577 ke 02:10:702 - ^ ^
02:07:420 - Ad Drum. Coba d tambah not added

[STANDARD]

Mods

00:54:998 - Msih ad drum. Gk d tambah? fixed
01:42:030 (102030|2) - Gk ad drum. Pindah k 01:42:286 aj fixed
01:42:498 - Ad drum. ^
01:52:498 - ^ ^

Ambil Starku~ huehue~ ~(>.<~)

schwarzvgrune wrote:

EXTRA

00:12:108 (12108|1,12108|2) - 1 note is enough, no strong beat. actually it same with 00:11:483 (11483|1,11483|2) - they had same instrument but only hit with a lower power.
00:01:952 (1952|3,2264|2) - - pitch ascends, not descends, adjust accordingly oh sure^^
00:30:077 (30077|2,30077|0,30077|3,30233|1,30233|2,30389|0,30389|1,30545|3,30545|2,30545|0,30702|1,30702|2,30858|0,30858|1,31014|3,31014|0,31014|2) -
heavy on the left, repattern a bit you're right re-patterned~

00:33:202 (33202|1,34139|1,35702|2,36639|2) - consistently 2/4. slight difference in pitch its easy to confuse, try 25% changed too :3
00:38:202 (38202|1,39139|1) - ^
01:18:514 (78514|3) - wrong LN, no guitar melody here oh right, my bad
01:18:045 (78045|2) - should be 3 x 2/4 LN, the 2nd and 3rd are of the same pitch, but pressed twice, so you can either use 2 x 2/4 or use 1 x 4/4 rip my english ;w; sorry i can't understand this well but i made them like this (split those LNs) if possible, might you could show me the picture to explain your mod :3
01:19:139 (79139|2,79452|1) - like this, same pitch, but pressed twice, and you decided to use 2 different LN to express them accurately. rip my english * i don't understand it well. sorry :< *
01:20:077 (80077|0,80545|3,81014|2) - also like this *
01:23:514 (83514|2) - should also be 6/4 x 2, not 12/4 x 1, pitch here is the same, but pressed 4x *
01:22:577 (82577|3,83045|0) - this is the 1st two
01:26:014 (86014|2) - ^
01:27:577 - LN until 01:28:827 - there is no change. consistently sustained. same here, rip my english

02:25:389 (145389|3,145389|2,145702|2,145702|1) - use 3 notes, you've been using them 02:24:139 (144139|1,144139|3,144139|0,144452|3,144452|2,144452|0,144764|3,144764|0,144764|1) - i would keep them :3 since that 3 noters are for additional soft cymbal sound

recheck your LNs, there are some mistakes still. might you could show me where are they :3

schwarzvgrune wrote:

Hi verny~タン ~\(≧▽≦)/~ hi grune-san
M4M o(≧v≦)o~~好棒
Feel free to implement or reject if you think this is useless ~~o(>_<)o ~~

Icon Bibliography

No emoticon in [b]Black = normal suggestions based on rationale of modding given below~
o(≧v≦)o~~ = everything is good~
Σ( ° △ °|||)︴ = error / mistake / extremely recommended to be modified~
(⊙o⊙)？ = unclear / questionable parts, thus cannot give a decisive recommendations~
O(∩_∩)O~ = other comments~

General : o(≧v≦)o~~
Mapset : o(≧v≦)o~~
Metadata : o(≧v≦)o~~
Timing : o(≧v≦)o~~
Audio : o(≧v≦)o~~
Background : o(≧v≦)o~~
Hitsounding : (⊙o⊙)？ no hitsound? sorry still WIP

[centre]

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In general, I will mod based on these considerations ♪(^∇^*)
( X ) I will not take this into consideration when modding
( √ ) I will take this into consideration when modding
( ? ) I might unconsciously take this into consideration when modding
Pitch Agreement / Relevancy : ( √ )
Hand Balancing : ( √ )
(Consistent) Patterning : ( √ )
Possibility of Long Notes Abuse : ( √ )
Ghost Note : ( √ )
Suggestions / Opinion only : ( √ )


mod is not complete yet, i'll continue in a bit
EDIT: mod done, there is one section that is unclear thus i cannot mod

BASIC

00:00:389 (389|0) - snap 00:01:483 - ? just for the sake of difficulty yup
00:11:639 (11639|3,11952|2) - same pitch, pressed twice, you use 2 different LN to express, on higher diffs you did not do this... so the LN seems to be very random for me at least. (i.e. being consistent would be good. if same pitch pressed multiple times is expressed as 1 LN then do so across the whole diffs? vice versa. it could be both ways.) i know what do you mind, for easy diff it's no problem if not following pitch, because amature/newbie play it and i always play this diff lol, i've to keep it
01:30:545 (90545|1,91014|2,91639|1) - ctrl H same reason as STD. fixed

02:07:577 (127577|1,128202|2,128827|3,129452|0,130077|1,130702|2) - you expressed this part only alternately on higher diffs, while as here, you expressed them consistently... i don't see any reason as to why would you alternately map them on higher diffs, i personally prefer consistent representation on a phase (except if the phase has changed) same reason like first mod, well i know it's incosistency part, but if mapper always make pattern like this again again and again, it's so boring~ like BN say to me, ok keep it

STD

its good already, the pattern could be better though... try to alternate between 12 and 34 (2 hands press alternately rather than stacked somewhere)
01:07:577 (67577|2,67577|3,68202|1,68202|0) -
01:05:702 (65702|0,65702|1,66327|2,66327|3) -

for example 01:00:077 (60077|3,60389|2,60702|0,61014|1,62577|3,62889|2,63202|0,63514|1) -
00:03:202 - up to you really... for example http://puu.sh/gXDaq/c89fec4d99.jpg keep, i will think again

01:10:077 (70077|0,70077|2,70233|1,70545|2,70702|1,70702|3,71170|2,71327|1,71639|0,71952|2,71952|1,72577|3,72577|1,72733|2,73045|1,73202|0,73202|2,73670|1,73827|2) - something like this is more balanced on both hands..

01:17:577 (77577|2,78045|3,78670|0) - this seems random to me, how about using short note instead?
01:17:577 - 2 x 2/4 ((dont use LN)
01:18:045 (78045|3) - 3x 2/4 dont use LN fixed
01:18:670 (78670|0) - this is correct

etc at the end you copy the pattern as well, a suggestions would be to overall make it balanced on both hands (2 hands pressed 2 notes if there are 2 notes)

HYPER

00:01:639 (1639|2,1952|1) - 2/4 length. fixed
00:21:327 (21327|2,21483|2,21639|2,21795|2) - so fast>_< how about to 2 ok
balanced press
00:19:452 - use 2 note? you express this beat with 2 note. repattern accordingly if you agree no, it already sync with LN
00:24:452 (24452|1,24452|0,24764|1,24764|0) - repattern to enable 2 hands to press this note, you do that here 00:26:952 (26952|3,26952|0,27264|0,27264|3) - 00:29:452 (29452|0,29452|2,29764|2,29764|0) - fixed
00:39:608 (39608|0) - 3 better balance ^
00:56:327 (56327|3) - this should be snapped, its different with 00:55:077 (55077|0,57577|1) -
that is the same with this 00:58:827 (58827|2) - keep
01:05:077 (65077|3,65077|1,66327|3,66327|2) - use LN as well? for consistency hmm, SV here.. so hard to play if change into LN again, you can try it
01:07:577 (67577|1,67577|3) - ^ ^
02:02:577 (122577|2,122577|3,123202|2,123202|1,123827|2,123827|3,124452|1,124452|2,125077|3,125077|2) - ^ ^
02:07:577 - ^ ^


\01:10:077 (70077|3,70702|2,71014|1,71795|0,72108|1,72577|3,73202|2,73514|1,74295|3,74608|2,75077|0,75702|1,76014|2,76795|1,77108|2) - (⊙o⊙)？ very random to me, i cannot tell which one you're following, the background guitar melody, or the low-pitched guitar bass accompaniments? they're mixed somehow, and a lot of snapping mistake. please repattern, or tell me which one you're following and i'll point out some of the mistake ah my bad, i will make this with another pattern

01:17:577 (77577|1) - 2/4 x 2 LN, same pitch, pressed 2x. but i can understand why you use this. fixed
01:18:045 (78045|3) - this however, is incorrect, the pitch is not the same. 2/4 x 3, only the 2nd and 3rd are of the same pitch and pressed 2x, the 1st pitch is different ^

01:57:889 (117889|2,118514|1,119139|2,119764|0,120389|3,121014|1,121639|2) - use 2 notes? more emphasis, stronger beat

Excellent Beatmap!!! Nice Song!!! d(≧v≦)b~~
Good Luck for rank!! O(∩_∩)O

xLoupGarou wrote:

「Wafu ~ Queue」

Nyahaha, Well I really can't say anything so let me just start modding ;P [|0|1|2|3|]

Garou Mod

BEGINNER

00:00:389 (389|0) - First of all is the LN it would be nice if you end it here instead 00:00:389 (389|0) - because of the *clank* sound that continues it still keep

00:02:577 (2577|0) - Don't forget to delete this no, this high sound

00:01:483 (1483|1) - Move to 3 fixed

00:01:952 (1952|2) - Move to 1 ^

00:02:264 (2264|3) - Move to 2 ^

00:02:577 (2577|2) - Move to 3 ^

00:09:139 (9139|0) - Move to 1 ^

00:11:014 (11014|0) - Move to 2 so it would be easier for the player to anticipate the next note ^

00:11:952 (11952|2) - Move the LN to 0 ^

00:12:577 (12577|0) - Move the LN to 2 ^

00:14:452 (14452|3) - Move the LN to 0 ^

00:17:577 (17577|3,17577|0) - Ctrl + H ^

00:20:077 (20077|3,21327|0) - Ctrl + H ^

00:31:014 (31014|3) - Move to 2 ^

00:31:795 (31795|2,31795|0,32264|1,32264|3) - Ctrl + H ^

00:38:827 (38827|0) - Move to 2 ^

00:39:452 (39452|3,39452|0,39764|1,39764|2,40077|2,40077|3,40545|2,40545|1,41014|1,41014|0) - How about doing it like this > http://puu.sh/gYA9C/c3fd3b2891.png nice

00:47:577 (47577|1) - Move to 3 no, consistency part

00:49:139 (49139|2) - Move to 3 ^

00:51:639 (51639|1) - Move to 2 ^

01:24:764 (84764|1,84764|3) - Remove 1 note the sound is not like this 01:24:452 (84452|1,84452|3) - or you can follow this > http://puu.sh/gYAAS/b4328fb4a1.png ok

01:38:045 (98045|1,98045|2,98514|1,98514|3,98983|2,98983|0) - How about like this? wut?

STANDARD

In the first chorus the notes are in mayhem, 00:46:327 - instead of putting 2 notes in here why not put it in a sound/beat that is this > 00:46:014 - try to hear the difference but just this part try to listen the chorus again. 00:46:327 stream sound here, you can check in diff Hyper and 00:46:014 no hear sound like that

Also What I see is that your having a hard time making patterns, some parts are somehow breaking, some are in not in a proper hand balance although there are bad parts in mapping your LN placement a timing is great it just matches the song. hmm..


That all I can say,I don't really have a single ranked map so I won't mind if you decline most of my suggestions GOOD LUCK! thanks your mod is really helpful

- R e b a - wrote:

Hi~ came to mod from queue

Columns: 0 | 1 | 2 | 3

BEGINNER

00:00:389 finish this here 00:01:483 ok
00:29:764 (29764|2) - maybe change it to LN? your choice keep, consistency pattern
00:54:608 (54608|3) - I know you intended on starting this note there for the drum sounds, but i personally think it's better to start it here for playing 00:54:452. You did that in this part 01:41:952 keep, still diffirent stair sound
01:18:670 There is a LN in the guitar sounds in the previous notes, maybe switch keep
01:52:108 change starting point to here 01:51:952 ^
02:02:108 (122108|3) - change to 02:02:264 ^
02:16:327 add a note, the strength of the sound is similar to the previous ones that have two notes. added

STANDARD

00:10:545 I suggest you to place a note here in column 3 since you have also put a note in 00:11:170 that is similar. fixed
00:29:764 LN in column 3 no
01:18:827 add a short note ^
http://puu.sh/gZGdz/b9832e57d6.jpg i know you intended on making it easier than the HYPER difficulty, but i do not think those notes really fit the sound.
how about this?? fixed with another pattern

HYPER

00:13:514 (13514|2) - Delete, the sound is not strong enough for there to be 3 notes cymball here
00:14:452 add a note in 0 there's a stronger beat than putting 1 note already sync with LN
00:14:608 (14608|0) - move to 2 for a better pattern no unbalance
00:19:452 add a note in 0 same reason as above^
00:19:608 (19608|0) - move to 2 same reason as above^ LN here
01:00:389 01:01:014 01:01:639 01:02:264 01:02:889 01:03:514 01:04:139 01:04:764 how about adding a note to all these? i think these ones have a slightly stronger beat. ok
01:17:889 - missing a note put it in column 2 fixed
01:18:358 - same reason ^ place it in column 1 ^
01:18:983 - same reason ^ place it in column 1 ^
01:21:483 - add a note in column 2 you cannot ignore putting 2 notes on beats. ^
01:21:639 (81639|2) - move to column 0 ^
01:23:983 add a note in column 1 ^
01:24:139 (84139|1) - move to column 3 ^
01:26:483 do the same thing as above. ^
01:28:827 there's a beat, add a note ^
02:19:061 (139061|2) - i think this was a mistake, move to 02:19:139 ^

Nice song Excellent beatmap! Hope my mod helped Good luck on getting this to ranked sugoi~ nice mod

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

Yo Verniy_Chan nya~ avalon-kun :v
mod as requested

OK, hitsound is good, no delay =w=)b well, this HS from my previous map :v and still need sample HS
testplay testplay . . . before reject xD dozo~

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nyaoo~

BEGINNER
00:00:389 (389|0) - i think LN end here 00:01:483 -
00:01:483 (1483|3) - make dis into LN ? end here 00:01:795 - ok
00:05:077 (5077|3,5389|1) - move to 2 and 4 ^
00:22:264 (22264|1) - to LN ? i hear long sound here ^
00:32:264 (32264|3,32577|2) - i hear a cymbal . . . well maybe need a cymbal HS too i think fix soon
00:59:764 - add note ? no
01:11:327 (71327|1,71639|0) - shift (geser) 1 column to right, after that . . . 01:11:952 (71952|1,71952|2) - move to 1 and 4 ok
01:14:139 (74139|3) - move to 2 and 01:14:452 (74452|2,74452|1) - shift 1 column to right fixed diffirent pattern
01:17:264 (77264|1) - move to 1 ? . . .more fun to plays no for me lol
01:18:514 (78514|1) - seems weird, delete it . . . and add note on 01:18:983 - for guitar and drum too fixed
01:39:764 (99764|2,100077|2) - move to 4 and 1 . .. try it fixed
01:57:577 (117577|2,117889|1) - ctrl G
ok, good yay

STANDARD
00:04:764 - add note for drum clap ok
00:09:764 - ^ ^
00:06:952 - and 00:07:264 - add note no
00:11:639 - and 00:12:264 - maybe add a single note too ? ^
00:15:545 (15545|0) - to 3 no, consistency part
00:20:545 (20545|0) - ^ fixed
00:22:264 - to LN (same as my suggestion on BEGINNER DIFF) ^
00:26:327 (26327|0) - to 4 for better balance keep
00:27:577 (27577|3) - to 1 ? ^
00:29:764 - add note ? no, still low
00:32:264 (32264|2,32577|3) - ctrl G . . . beware, swap the hitsound too
00:37:577 (37577|3) - to 1 fixed
00:40:077 (40077|2) - to 4 ^
00:54:608 (54608|2,54686|3,54764|1,54842|0,54920|2,54998|3) - ctrl G . .better flow xD
01:16:639 (76639|0) - to 3 no
01:17:577 - add note on 4 , for impact ^
01:19:139 (79139|3,79452|2,79764|1) - make this note to LN ?. . . maybe better i think no, conflict 01:19:764 (79764|1) stream long
ok, good . . maybe some part is a little difficult for Standard yup, already reduce difficult from previous mod

HYPER
00:01:483 (1483|3) - LN end here 00:02:577 - fixed
00:01:483 - try this, more fit i think http://puu.sh/gZLFJ/4c0881313d.jpg nice, fix with another pattern
00:04:452 (4452|1,4530|0,4608|1,4686|2) - hmm . . . what is meaning for ? . . . i didn't hear any 1/4 sound here guitar stream sound
00:06:952 - same reason ^ ^
00:09:452 (9452|1,9530|0,9608|1,9686|0) - nah this is clear . . . i hear 1/4 sound there. ..good -_-
00:11:170 (11170|2,11248|1) - if you follow the guitar, i think its better to make LN instead . . .cuz 1/4 is really weird xD ok
00:22:264 - to LN ? this time no, limited note place
00:43:905 (43905|0) - snap to 00:43:827 - make 2 notes instead, for drum fixed
01:05:077 (65077|1,65077|3,66327|3,66327|2) - why not LN ? ... or 01:05:702 (65702|1,65702|2,66952|1,66952|2) - change to SN
01:10:077 - lol this part is harder than this 01:42:577 - and yeah, the tempo is different , slow tempo is harder than high tempo ? lmao XD remap orz
01:10:077 - until 01:16:639 - hmm, maybe better to be remapped xD . . . come on . . . xD ^
01:42:889 - , 01:43:514 - , 01:44:139 - , 01:44:764 - suggest to add note . . . for make this more challenging, this is kiai time anyway added
01:58:202 - , 01:58:827 - add note like you do in this 01:57:889 - ^
02:06:248 - add note, i hear 1/4 sound here ^ ^
02:11:248 - same, 1/4 sound here ^
02:21:248 - add note too, 1/4 sound ^
02:22:342 (142342|1) - delete ok
02:22:889 - 02:23:202 - 02:23:514 - add note for evry SN like you did i here 02:24:139 - ^

OK maybe this mapset need more improvement roger >.<)7
good luck Verniy_Chan yup

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

xD . . . i hope my mod still useful . . yup~ useful :3
cuz another mod is come before me =_= >.<)a gomen~

- R e b a - wrote:

Hi~ came to mod from queue

Columns: 0 | 1 | 2 | 3

Muu's EXTRA

00:21:483 (21483|3) - delete same with v
00:21:639 (21639|0) - delete, placing two notes there does not really fit in there. actually they're for kick sound same with 00:18:983 -
01:15:897 ~ 01:16:170 - change them to beat notes, the place where the sound really matches with those notes are only here 01:16:170 ~ 01:16:327 sure thing ^^ because someone said that too, beside that i doubt this myself xD hihi
01:30:077 delete one note. owh sure you're right^^ deleted on 3
01:30:389 delete one note. i would keep this :3
01:33:514 add a note in column 3 i would keep this too, it has same sound with 01:32:889 and ^

Nice song Excellent beatmap! Hope my mod helped Good luck on getting this to ranked