Hey, congratulations. The map is really fun but here's my mod incase the map gets disqualified!
[Insane]
00:03:930 (1,2,3,4,5) - The incosistency here is a bit weird for me, the first triplet is spaced and then you stack 4 on 5, either reducing the spacing on 1,2,3 or not stacking 4 and 5 should make it a bit better.
00:10:121 (7,2,3) - Not stacked properly.
00:12:184 (6) - There are no strong drums on this slider, although he fits the vocals and continues the beat pattern, the hitsounds are too high! I suggest 50% on slider start and 60% on slider end.
00:17:105 (5,1) - Not stacked properly.
00:20:914 (2,4) - ^
00:21:391 (4,6) - Blanket can be improved.
00:25:994 (2,4) - Not stacked properly.
00:27:422 (1) - This slider is really awkward, vocals start in it and the continuation of the pattern does follow the vocals. Also, the stanza starts in the middle of the slider, so make it pressable, it will feel much more fun to play. But if you still want to follow the previous vocals, at least remove the NC.
00:30:121 (7) -
NC here is necessary! 1.1 to 0.7 is quite drastic and because there's no NC it looks like a regular 1/2 slider.00:35:121 (4) - There's no note here, it feels overmapped. If you wanted to follow the holden vocals, make a 1/4 slider. It doesn't require unnecessary clicks and goes a bit better with the vocals.
00:42:026 (6,7,8) - They don't form a precise straight line, if you meant them to.
01:09:962 (6) - The overlap with 4 is ugly and the blanket with 7 can be improved.
01:17:105 (5,1) - Not stacked properly.
01:19:327 (2,4) - ^
01:23:772 (5,1) - ^
Fun map eitherway!