rew0825 wrote:

Try to mod this 'w'

[notice][ Spec]

1. 00:13:861 (3,4,5,6,7) - how about this ( move (3) to x:272 y:264 , move (4) to x:260 y:216 , move (5) to x:232 y:176 , move (6) to x:184y:160 ) sorry but I don't want to change the streams' outlook here
2. 01:07:708 (3,4) - how about this ( change (3) to slider on x:320 y:140 and move (4) to x:352 y:316 ) fixed
3. 03:49:150 (3,4,5,6) - how about this ( move (3) to x:348 y:144 , move (4) to x:376 y:180 , move (5) to x:388 y:228 and (6) move to x:380 y:280 fixed
4. 03:54:342 (4,5,6) - how about this ( move (4) to x:384 y:224 , move (6) to x:224 y:248 )
5. 05:08:861 (2,3,4,5,6) - how about this ( move (2) to x:363 y:360 , move (3) to x:324 y:272 , move (4) to x:248 y:208 , move (5) to x:156 y:180 and move (6) to x:56 y:184 fixed

Good luck

thanks for the mod!

I'm try to mod song like this... o<-< forgive me if my mod is bad D:
most of all it's suggest ;;

why not eli inside ;;


well , sorry for noob modding D:
hope can help even just a bit >.<

Spec senpai stole mai waifu?!
gambatte ! :3

GAMI wrote:

I'm try to mod song like this... o<-< forgive me if my mod is bad D:
most of all it's suggest ;;

why not eli inside ;;

1. at 00:10:592 (3) - why dont make like this? kinda bored tbh D: uhh, sorry i wanna keep this
2. 00:33:477 (2) - I hear a sound for 1/2 slider not for 1/1 slider D: maybe you can change that D: fixed
3. 00:37:515 (1) - move to 256 moved
4. 01:04:438 (2) - at this red line, I dont hear beat or voice try slider 01:03:861 (1) - make like this fixed
5. 01:12:900 (1) - why dont make red-jump? because kinda purrfect I wanna keep this part without hdash
6. 01:18:861 (8) - why dont make SV multiplier at this note kinda high ? if you want, after make high SV on this note. move at 480 cool
7. 01:56:169 (1) - move at 432 moved
8. 02:12:323 (3,4,5) - make like this if you want D: fixed by my own
9. 02:18:669 (3) - I didnt hear a beat or voice at red line try to change that I agree, fixed
10. 02:25:785 (2) - x:268 , y:112 I'll keep this
11. at 02:30:015 until 02:30:785 (3) - try to make like a note
12. 02:59:054 (1) - this slider kinda good use red jump uu.. I wanna keep this too
13. 03:15:785 (4) - maybe move at 240? since this part is kinda calm, i'd keep this too
14. 03:52:131 (2,3,4,1,2) - at this part, maybe for me , 1/4 slider is not good. somes not following anything but it's up to you maybe you meant 1/2 sliders but anyway, let me think more about this
15. 04:15:208 (3) - move to 184 ? D: uuhh.. no ><
16. 04:40:592 (5) - move to x:64 for red jump if you want D: sorry but no
17. 05:03:092 (3) - put a note in here D: no, it's for having a consistency with (1)
18. 05:11:361 (4) - x:452 moved to a bit right!

1. 00:42:131 (1) - at here it would purrfect if you add red-jump on here following kousaka voice
2. 00:47:708 (3) - ctrl + g
3. 00:48:092 (4) - move to 420 (if you ctrl+g ^)
4. 00:48:285 (1) - move to 132 (if you follow at ^
5. 00:49:631 (5,6) - why dont make like this?
6. 03:56:746 (2) - move at 480 and ctrl+g
7. 04:01:746 (5) - why not change this slider into a note ? honoka voice not fit with that 1/2 slider D:
   
   ^ For Xinely

well , sorry for noob modding D:
hope can help even just a bit >.<

Spec senpai stole mai waifu?!
gambatte ! :3

it was helpful enough, thank you a lot!

GAMI wrote:

1. 00:42:131 (1) - at here it would purrfect if you add red-jump on here following kousaka voice i wanted to make but current place makes me cant do it
2. 00:47:708 (3) - ctrl + g
3. 00:48:092 (4) - move to 420 (if you ctrl+g ^)
4. 00:48:285 (1) - move to 132 (if you follow at ^ nice idea, all fixed from ctrl+g until this point
5. 00:49:631 (5,6) - why dont make like this? sorry but zig zag jump like that isnt my style. but it's fine enough actually ><
6. 03:56:746 (2) - move at 480 and ctrl+g i want to avoid jump since the music is relax sorry ><
7. 04:01:746 (5) - why not change this slider into a note ? honoka voice not fit with that 1/2 slider D: sure :3

^ For Xinely[/list][/notice]

thanks gami for mod and thanks spec for arranged 8)
http://puu.sh/gfHBH.osu

Hi Spec & Ely @A@
No it's not a random mod

[Storyboard]
trans.png and trans2.png are not used, if the SB is finished now, delete them w
also the pics are not matted perfectly @_@
00:01:746 - 00:14:631 who made this part ? SB may need to be modified here
04:46:938 - 05:15:015 ^
part.png slightly moves up and down throughout the whole song. If you drag on the timeline you will find it.
The kotories and honokas appear in different sizes throughout the song @)_@ keep them in the same size & axis will be better

Suggestions:
What about add the lyrics? OK its fine not to add them ;w;
Consider change the color of part.png throughout the song! Here are some ways to change them:
change the color when mapper changed / change the color when it goes to kiai part.
(I suggest spec take a light green kotori color )

[Metabeta]
Title: 永远フレンズ
Source: 永远フレンズ (From this CD) / ラブライブ! School idol project
Tags: Love live u's 高坂穂乃果 Kousaka Honoka 南ことり Minami Kotori 小泉花陽 Koizumi Hanayou 新田恵海 Nitta Emi 内田彩 Uchida Aya 久保ユリカ Kubo Yurika Xinely

[Timing]
00:02:323 - I don't know if it's written in rc, but 00:01:746 (1,2,3) - these three notes appear earlier than the red line. I suggest this red line moves forward a section (at 00:00:785).
Timing needs to be fixed with all red&green lines offset -10

Extra red lines that are needed:
BPM: 156 Offset: 309829
BPM: 154 Offset: 310790


[Spec]
00:38:477 (1,2) - I don't think keep this silenced slider here with a followed HDash is a good idea. The music still goes here and the volume is not that low, keep the previous pattern will feel better. (00:10:592 (3) - This one is very nice)
00:21:554 (3,4,5) - cut down the DS @_@ I failed to catch 4(red fruit) for times and it causes me can't catch 5
01:10:785 (3) - What about ctrl + G?
01:37:323 (4) - Move it left to make it easier to catch (x = 400)
01:43:477 (4) - ^ This one is also hard to catch


[Ely]
00:50:977 (3) - convert it into a triple here? (01:02:900 (3,4,5,6,7))
00:48:861 (2) - move it left a bit (x = 460)
01:02:611 (2) - x = 72?
04:33:669 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - I think this pattern should be modified. I can't catch this stream and I tried several times
(To spec: If ely change like this 04:34:823 (2,3,4) - ctrl + G will make the flow better)


That's all owo Mostly more like a player's feeling rather than a mod~ Hope it will be helpful

examination wrote:

Hi Spec & Ely @A@

[Ely]
00:50:977 (3) - convert it into a triple here? (01:02:900 (3,4,5,6,7)) overmap :<
00:48:861 (2) - move it left a bit (x = 460) ah itentional, it's too easy to catch either
01:02:611 (2) - x = 72? ok
04:33:669 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - I think this pattern should be modified. I can't catch this stream and I tried several times somehow i still prefer my flow :<

I think the flow will feel better if you place it like this

http://puu.sh/gneyM/bea8b1576c.jpg

(To spec: If ely change like this 04:34:823 (2,3,4) - ctrl + G will make the flow better)


That's all owo Mostly more like a player's feeling rather than a mod~ Hope it will be helpful

thank you \:D/

examination wrote:

Hi Spec & Ely @A@
No it's not a random mod

[Storyboard]
trans.png and trans2.png are not used, if the SB is finished now, delete them w
also the pics are not matted perfectly @_@

click this!

00:01:746 - 00:14:631 who made this part ? SB may need to be modified here
04:46:938 - 05:15:015 ^
part.png slightly moves up and down throughout the whole song. If you drag on the timeline you will find it.
The kotories and honokas appear in different sizes throughout the song @)_@ keep them in the same size & axis will be better

Suggestions:
What about add the lyrics? OK its fine not to add them ;w;
Consider change the color of part.png throughout the song! Here are some ways to change them:
change the color when mapper changed / change the color when it goes to kiai part.
(I suggest spec take a light green kotori color )

[Metabeta]
Title: 永远フレンズ
Source: 永远フレンズ (From this CD) / ラブライブ! School idol project
Tags: Love live u's 高坂穂乃果 Kousaka Honoka 南ことり Minami Kotori 小泉花陽 Koizumi Hanayou 新田恵海 Nitta Emi 内田彩 Uchida Aya 久保ユリカ Kubo Yurika Xinely

[Timing]
00:02:323 - I don't know if it's written in rc, but 00:01:746 (1,2,3) - these three notes appear earlier than the red line. I suggest this red line moves forward a section (at 00:00:785).
Timing needs to be fixed with all red&green lines offset -10

Extra red lines that are needed:
BPM: 156 Offset: 309829
BPM: 154 Offset: 310790


[Spec]
00:38:477 (1,2) - I don't think keep this silenced slider here with a followed HDash is a good idea. The music still goes here and the volume is not that low, keep the previous pattern will feel better. (00:10:592 (3) - This one is very nice)
00:21:554 (3,4,5) - cut down the DS @_@ I failed to catch 4(red fruit) for times and it causes me can't catch 5
01:10:785 (3) - What about ctrl + G? I don't think it fits well x_x
01:37:323 (4) - Move it left to make it easier to catch (x = 400)
01:43:477 (4) - ^ This one is also hard to catch


[Ely]
00:50:977 (3) - convert it into a triple here? (01:02:900 (3,4,5,6,7))
00:48:861 (2) - move it left a bit (x = 460)
01:02:611 (2) - x = 72?
04:33:669 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - I think this pattern should be modified. I can't catch this stream and I tried several times

I think the flow will feel better if you place it like this

http://puu.sh/gneyM/bea8b1576c.jpg

(To spec: If ely change like this 04:34:823 (2,3,4) - ctrl + G will make the flow better)


That's all owo Mostly more like a player's feeling rather than a mod~ Hope it will be helpful

I really appreciate you for some metadata tips & timing mods

Thanks a lot, it was really helpful

LoveLive? Printemps? YES!!! <3

RIP Hanayo

[Friends]
00:04:236 (2) - Ctrl + G for better flow.
05:00:775 (1) - I've expected this one appears on the edge of right side...
05:09:621 (6,1) - A killer jump for FC challengers. HDash or RIOT

[For Spectator]
00:21:544 (3,4) - 이거 Ctrl + H 한 뒤 통째로 x : 3으로 옮겨보시는게
01:07:698 (3,4,5) - 조금 이해가 안가는 노트배치인데.. 통쨰로 Ctrl + G 하시는편이 더 나아보여요.
02:11:928 (2) - 갑툭튀 칼점... 하이퍼대시 어디갔죠???
02:36:159 - Unnecessary greenline.
03:45:005 - ^
04:18:371 (3) - 의도하신건가요? 뭔가 좀 이것도 갑작스러운듯. 가능하시다면 좌측 진행방향으로 고쳐주세요.
04:37:890 (1,2,3) - 통째로 Ctrl + G
04:46:544 (7) - Unnecessary greenline.

[For Xinely]
00:46:159 (3,4) - Could you make more jumps to emphasis vocal?
01:29:140 (6) - Unnecessary greenline.
03:56:159 (1) - Ew, this one is kinda 'flow-breaker',
[Hitsounds]
00:06:736 (1) - Add whistle on tail?
01:27:313 (2) - Missing clap sound here.
02:01:928 (4) - Add whistle on tail?
02:03:082 (3) - Add whistle on first repeat?
04:10:005 (1) - Remove clap on head, it doesn't lookin good.

I'll check more details for hitsounds soon.
/me runs away

CLSW wrote:

LoveLive? Printemps? YES!!! <3

RIP Hanayo

[Friends]
00:04:236 (2) - Ctrl + G for better flow. it ruins the flow
05:00:775 (1) - I've expected this one appears on the edge of right side... ohh, ok fixed
05:09:621 (6,1) - A killer jump for FC challengers. HDash or RIOT fixed

[For Spectator]
00:21:544 (3,4) - 이거 Ctrl + H 한 뒤 통째로 x : 3으로 옮겨보시는게 지금이 낫네요
01:07:698 (3,4,5) - 조금 이해가 안가는 노트배치인데.. 통쨰로 Ctrl + G 하시는편이 더 나아보여요. 수정, 패턴을 조금 바꿨습니다.
02:11:928 (2) - 갑툭튀 칼점... 하이퍼대시 어디갔죠??? 집나간 하이퍼대시 데려왔습니다..
02:36:159 - Unnecessary greenline. k
03:45:005 - ^^
04:18:371 (3) - 의도하신건가요? 뭔가 좀 이것도 갑작스러운듯. 가능하시다면 좌측 진행방향으로 고쳐주세요. 이건 괜찮은거 같아서 유지하겠습니다.
04:37:890 (1,2,3) - 통째로 Ctrl + G fixed
04:46:544 (7) - Unnecessary greenline.^

[For Xinely]
00:46:159 (3,4) - Could you make more jumps to emphasis vocal?
01:29:140 (6) - Unnecessary greenline.
03:56:159 (1) - Ew, this one is kinda 'flow-breaker',

try with this and replace on x : 220.

[Hitsounds]
00:06:736 (1) - Add whistle on tail? added
01:27:313 (2) - Missing clap sound here. QATs' ears work pretty nice, fixed
02:01:928 (4) - Add whistle on tail? nice, added
02:03:082 (3) - Add whistle on first repeat? it sounds a bit weird, so I'll keep this one
04:10:005 (1) - Remove clap on head, it doesn't lookin good. removed

I'll check more details for hitsounds soon.
/me runs away

thanks!

CLSW wrote:

LoveLive? Printemps? YES!!! <3

[For Xinely]
00:46:159 (3,4) - Could you make more jumps to emphasis vocal? i dont plan a jump for vocal unless high tone :<
01:29:140 (6) - Unnecessary greenline. ok
03:56:159 (1) - Ew, this one is kinda 'flow-breaker',ok

try with this and replace on x : 220.

thanks baka ~

Hey some suggestions


Well this what i Could Mod, And sorry if it doesn't help

OSUjanaiKATSURAda wrote:

Hey some suggestions

Mod

00:12:698 (4) - x256 to give a suitable spacing between this and next note ↓ fixed
00:12:890 (5) - Remove this circle and make it the start of the 1/2 slider, then 00:13:082 (1) - < as this is for follow the drum sound, I don't wanna fix this, sorry
00:13:467 (2) - Move it here 00:13:275 - and make it Horizontally reversed slider like this ↓ once i think it fits better with vocals and music beats now sorry



01:16:351 (2) - what about to make this part spaced a bit that seems fun to move catcher right/left at that sounds I wanna keep the circular shaped notes here, sorry

02:02:697 (2) - remove this and replace it with a slider from here 02:02:505 - same as the pattern before i think it fits better I can't hear any sound at 03:39:717 - , sorry but I keep this

Mod for Xinely
02:47:025 (2) - i think its better to remove this circle and make (1,2) more spaced
03:39:621 (4) - Replace this with a reverse 1/4 slider because the sound changed there and i think it correlate more to a reverse slider and remove the slider after 03:39:813 (5) -
00:55:775 (4) - replace it with a circle and to follow next sound i think its better to start this slider 00:56:159 (1) - earlier from red tick till 00:56:544 -

Well this what i Could Mod, And sorry if it doesn't help

thanks for mod! It was helpful

fixed the first line, second line is spec's part lol, and the last line i'd like to keep first ww

thank you \:D/
http://puu.sh/gFr8C.osu

;w; sorry for my fault
title should be 永遠フレンズ not 永远フレンズ
also remove this from your tags 233

as spec request about a decade ago ~
oh hey look at those greenlines x.x

[Spec]
00:20:390 (4) - move this a bit right to make the less movement so the upcoming Hyper would become smoother
00:28:851 (2) - x:268 or around? just matching most of your pattern before like 00:24:428 (4,5,1)
01:18:082 (2) - expecting this a Hyper. it looks more suitable as it would be a nice pair with the upcoming stream
01:34:044 (6) - no Hyper here?
01:38:467 (3,4,5) - better to make it a 1/2 slider with reverse as it easier to read
01:40:582 (1) - how about ctrl +g this and place it to x:68? this will result a directional change on the prev Hyper which i think is nice to apply
02:18:851 (3) - this could be a nice Hyper. how about x:120?
02:37:313 (8,9) - maybe change it to a slider with a higher SV like you did on 01:18:851 (8)?
03:02:313 (6) - just my personal opinion. maybe it is just me or don't you think a side to side Hyper make it look cooler?
03:31:351 (5,6,1,2) - try this pattern? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2909611
03:36:736 (3,4,5) - almost the same case as Xinely. make this triplet more horizontal pls
04:38:467 (5,6) - omg lol you did map exactly just like xinely. it's probably the same as 03:21:544 (5,6) on xinely's


[Xinely]
00:43:851 (1,2,3) - naaah this could be spaced more to show the current timeline better. idk why you put the spacing here lower than 00:43:467 (4,1). i'd say move (2) to x:268 would be nice one
00:47:698 (3,4) - imo putting the same spacing as the object before would make the Hyper smoother
00:53:851 (3,4) - nazi but dont you think they're better as a 1/2 slider with reverse since they're in a same x spot?
02:09:236 (2,3,4,5) - misplaced Hyper or intentionally? those double Hypers looks like forced and really uncomfortable imo. how about swap the position of (4) and (5)? :p
02:38:659 (4) - quite dislike the Hyper here. i prefer on 02:38:467 (3) instead
02:49:429 (5,6) - a 1.60x spacing just like you made on first kiai?
03:18:659 (5,6,7) - eew make this triplet more horizontal pls. it truly break the flow at this part x.x
03:20:005 (4,5) - reduce the spacing here. i feel a little jump doesn't fit at this part
03:20:967 (2,3,4) - move all of them together to the left until (2) on x:302 to balance the spacing between before and the next object
03:21:544 (5,6) - mmmmh im not really sure about this. there's nothing in the music to enhance your current timeline. i prefer a 1/2 timeline here instead of skipping 03:21:736
03:23:851 (1) - rotate it to a more horizontal pls. at least make it similar like 03:24:236 (3)
03:24:140 (2,3) - in case you apply the suggestion above, you could make this a bit more spacing

[is this my part?]
00:06:159 (3) - idk how to word it, but the timeline on 00:06:351 is really deserve an object
04:51:928 (2) - move this a bit to left. the spacing tho the next note is a bit too much

/me poofs away

Vhy wrote:

as spec request about a decade ago ~

[Xinely]
00:43:851 (1,2,3) - naaah this could be spaced more to show the current timeline better. idk why you put the spacing here lower than 00:43:467 (4,1). i'd say move (2) to x:268 would be nice one ok
00:47:698 (3,4) - imo putting the same spacing as the object before would make the Hyper smoother ok
00:53:851 (3,4) - nazi but dont you think they're better as a 1/2 slider with reverse since they're in a same x spot?
02:09:236 (2,3,4,5) - misplaced Hyper or intentionally? those double Hypers looks like forced and really uncomfortable imo. how about swap the position of (4) and (5)? :p intentionally because the claps music, let me keep ;3;
02:38:659 (4) - quite dislike the Hyper here. i prefer on 02:38:467 (3) instead fixed in another way
02:49:429 (5,6) - a 1.60x spacing just like you made on first kiai?
03:18:659 (5,6,7) - eew make this triplet more horizontal pls. it truly break the flow at this part x.x
03:20:005 (4,5) - reduce the spacing here. i feel a little jump doesn't fit at this part
03:20:967 (2,3,4) - move all of them together to the left until (2) on x:302 to balance the spacing between before and the next object
03:21:544 (5,6) - mmmmh im not really sure about this. there's nothing in the music to enhance your current timeline. i prefer a 1/2 timeline here instead of skipping 03:21:736 nope there is a weak music on blue tick 03:21:640 -, i want to keep this as finding variation rhythm ><
03:23:851 (1) - rotate it to a more horizontal pls. at least make it similar like 03:24:236 (3)
03:24:140 (2,3) - in case you apply the suggestion above, you could make this a bit more spacing

no reply means fixed as well
thanks vhy o/

http://puu.sh/gHSi7.osu

Vhy wrote:

as spec request about a decade ago ~
oh hey look at those greenlines x.x

[Spec]
00:20:390 (4) - move this a bit right to make the less movement so the upcoming Hyper would become smoother fixed
00:28:851 (2) - x:268 or around? just matching most of your pattern before like 00:24:428 (4,5,1) sorry I wanna keep the distance here
01:18:082 (2) - expecting this a Hyper. it looks more suitable as it would be a nice pair with the upcoming stream added
01:34:044 (6) - no Hyper here? now there it is
01:38:467 (3,4,5) - better to make it a 1/2 slider with reverse as it easier to read sorry but I'd like to keep this. I feel like reading them isn't that much hard as well
01:40:582 (1) - how about ctrl +g this and place it to x:68? this will result a directional change on the prev Hyper which i think is nice to apply It's a nice idea, but I would like to keep the flow here. sorry
02:18:851 (3) - this could be a nice Hyper. how about x:120? sure, fixed
02:37:313 (8,9) - maybe change it to a slider with a higher SV like you did on 01:18:851 (8)? sure why not
03:02:313 (6) - just my personal opinion. maybe it is just me or don't you think a side to side Hyper make it look cooler? thus I moved it to a bit right, thanks!
03:31:351 (5,6,1,2) - try this pattern? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2909611 I'm sorry but i don't want a jump between 6 and 1 x_x
03:36:736 (3,4,5) - almost the same case as Xinely. make this triplet more horizontal pls Fixed
04:38:467 (5,6) - omg lol you did map exactly just like xinely. it's probably the same as 03:21:544 (5,6) on xinely's as xinely said, it fits well with the music. So i'd keep mine here, sorry

[Vhy]
00:06:159 (3) - idk how to word it, but the timeline on 00:06:351 is really deserve an object added
04:51:928 (2) - move this a bit to left. the spacing tho the next note is a bit too much ok, fixed

/me poofs away

/me catches vhy

thanks for the helpful mod!

examination wrote:

;w; sorry for my fault
title should be 永遠フレンズ not 永远フレンズ
also remove this from your tags 233

thanks!
applied as well :3

I will take a look at this tomorrow. I testplayed it today and only found a few problem so I think after my mod I will gonna bubble this as well. :3

Now all greenlines were fine, you don't have to care about them

itsudemoooo
soba ni iru kotoooo

finally this map noticed \w/

sasuga. as expected from QAT. i might do the second bubble after kuro :p

o/

[Friends]

00:15:967 (6,1) - This distance is a little bit high after that HDash. Since it fits it would be nice to make it as a HDash.
00:26:736 (9,1) - I know what you followed with these but why no HDash at 00:26:448 (7,8)?
01:02:313 (1,2) - Catching this jump is really hard after 01:01:928 (5,1) this HDash. I suggest you to lower this distance a little bit. Around 2.40x should be enough.
01:13:467 (2,3) - This jump somehow feels different from 01:12:698 (4,1). I can't really describe why. lol
01:31:351 (7,1) - Make this HDash a little bit smaller if possible.
02:52:121 (3,4) - I don't really like this HDash. It would be better later at 02:52:313 (4,5) instead.
03:08:275 (1,2,3,4,5) - This part sounds a little bit weird. Not just because you ignored the main beat but because (1) follows the vocal then you switched to music.
05:03:275 (3) - Tilt a little bit left instead? It would be a nice pattern with the right sided slider.

[Storyboard]

03:05:390 til 03:29:910 - Xinely's name is slightly upper than it should be.
03:54:621 til 04:09:909 - ^

Ah, I stop with this. Please go through on it and fix it. I'm not sure which should be the correct placement but most of them is misplaced.
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Everything else except the storyboard is just suggestion. Call me when the storyboard is fixed and I bubble this. Its a really enjoyable collab. :3

Kurokami wrote:

o/

[Friends]

01:02:313 (1,2) - Catching this jump is really hard after 01:01:928 (5,1) this HDash. I suggest you to lower this distance a little bit. Around 2.40x should be enough. fixed
01:31:351 (7,1) - Make this HDash a little bit smaller if possible. spec, i'll follow what do you think with this since both objects are our parts LOL
02:52:121 (3,4) - I don't really like this HDash. It would be better later at 02:52:313 (4,5) instead.
03:08:275 (1,2,3,4,5) - This part sounds a little bit weird. Not just because you ignored the main beat but because (1) follows the vocal then you switched to music. changed as well

thanks kuro o/
http://puu.sh/gJlTO.osu

Kurokami wrote:

o/

[Friends]

00:15:967 (6,1) - This distance is a little bit high after that HDash. Since it fits it would be nice to make it as a HDash. instead of making it hdash, i just reduced the distance for a bit
00:26:736 (9,1) - I know what you followed with these but why no HDash at 00:26:448 (7,8)? I'm sorry but i wanna keep it without hdash
01:02:313 (1,2) - Catching this jump is really hard after 01:01:928 (5,1) this HDash. I suggest you to lower this distance a little bit. Around 2.40x should be enough.
01:13:467 (2,3) - This jump somehow feels different from 01:12:698 (4,1). I can't really describe why. lol Ahhh... anyway I made it better to play with lol
01:31:351 (7,1) - Make this HDash a little bit smaller if possible. Sure, fixed
02:52:121 (3,4) - I don't really like this HDash. It would be better later at 02:52:313 (4,5) instead. alright
03:08:275 (1,2,3,4,5) - This part sounds a little bit weird. Not just because you ignored the main beat but because (1) follows the vocal then you switched to music.
05:03:275 (3) - Tilt a little bit left instead? It would be a nice pattern with the right sided slider. fixed

[Storyboard]

03:05:390 til 03:29:910 - Xinely's name is slightly upper than it should be.
03:54:621 til 04:09:909 - ^

Ah, I stop with this. Please go through on it and fix it. I'm not sure which should be the correct placement but most of them is misplaced. fixed all SB issues, thanks!
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Everything else except the storyboard is just suggestion. Call me when the storyboard is fixed and I bubble this. Its a really enjoyable collab. :3

thanks for the mod!

It seems like the storyboard issue cleared. Here ya go~

Bubble #1

Kurokami wrote:

It seems like the storyboard issue cleared. Here ya go~

Bubble #1

Thanks a lot kuro!

long time no see this bubble c:

that moment when you cant find anymore to mod lol. and yeah spec also should learn how not to add "sorry" on every mod he's denying :p

#2

Vhy wrote:

that moment when you cant find anymore to mod lol. and yeah spec also should learn how not to add "sorry" on every mod he's denying :p

#2

thank you Vhy <3

Vhy wrote:

and yeah spec also should learn how not to add "sorry" on every mod he's denying :p

Lol so true
Waiting for the flame /w/

You asked me ages ago to take a look >_< Little readjustments are needed before this goes on:

[General]

1. Timing: Some notes are off, specially at the end of the song:
   
   1. 00:00:787 - BPM 156 (1st offset is slightly early, and so almost the whole song. Added +12 to the original offset)
   2. 05:08:287 - BPM 156 (The metronome reset occurs already here)
   3. 05:09:825 - BPM 154
   4. 05:11:383 - BPM 152 (The last spinner ends quite early atm, it should do it at about 05:15:034 - )

[SB]
Why Comic Sans? AAAAAAAAAAA

1. From the beginning - until 00:14:621 - Who mapped this? It's not storyboarded =(
2. 04:46:928 - until the end - Same here...

[Spec]

1. 00:13:851 (3,4,5,6,7) - I don't know how difficult you wanted to do it, but it'd look also good to twist that 5-plet a bit and add a HDash between (6,7) as an introduction of the main melody.
2. 01:12:313 (3) - A simple 3/4 slider sounds empty here. Make it 1/2 long and add another circle at 01:12:601 - , so it fits better with the lyrics
3. 02:30:775 (3) - Same as the previous example. Make it 1/2 long and add circle at 02:31:063 - .
4. 04:18:371 (3) - Not recommendable to make the HDash to the blue tick in a triplet. Make it just a simple circle at 04:18:467 - ?

[Xinely]

1. 00:50:967 (3) - Since you're introducing that crack hitsound, what about doing Ctrl-G to this slider to also break a bit the continuous flow? The resulting dashes could be a bit extreme, so you might make the slider not so horizontal.
2. 00:58:659 (4,5,1) - The lyrics suggest to make the jump between (4,5) and not (5,1). Can it be fixed somehow?
3. 01:02:601 (2) - Not a must, but a few grids to the right would make this jump less painful to read after the HDash.
4. 03:27:986 (2) - Place it near the end of (1) instead of the beginning of (3). It's more intuitive that way.

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Check the mod and then call me back for a rebubble!

fixed all .3./
thanks deipu o3o

http://puu.sh/gKFKS.osu

Deif wrote:

You asked me ages ago to take a look >_< Little readjustments are needed before this goes on:

[General]

1. Timing: Some notes are off, specially at the end of the song: All fixed, thanks a lot!
   
   1. 00:00:787 - BPM 156 (1st offset is slightly early, and so almost the whole song. Added +12 to the original offset)
   2. 05:08:287 - BPM 156 (The metronome reset occurs already here)
   3. 05:09:825 - BPM 154
   4. 05:11:383 - BPM 152 (The last spinner ends quite early atm, it should do it at about 05:15:034 - )

[SB]
Why Comic Sans? AAAAAAAAAAA

1. From the beginning - until 00:14:621 - Who mapped this? It's not storyboarded =(
2. 04:46:928 - until the end - Same here...

yeah.. I know that it's quite confusing(the parts without any SB are all mapped by me). But as i love the effect at 00:14:633 - so much, I would like to keep them without adding name tags there. Also 04:46:940 - i wanna keep this effect as well
[Spec]

1. 00:13:851 (3,4,5,6,7) - I don't know how difficult you wanted to do it, but it'd look also good to twist that 5-plet a bit and add a HDash between (6,7) as an introduction of the main melody. As there's already a hdash between 7 and 1, I wanna keep mine here to not make it harder
2. 01:12:313 (3) - A simple 3/4 slider sounds empty here. Make it 1/2 long and add another circle at 01:12:601 - , so it fits better with the lyrics Unfortunately I really wanna keep this as it feels really fun to play with for me.
3. 02:30:775 (3) - Same as the previous example. Make it 1/2 long and add circle at 02:31:063 - . Same here :<
4. 04:18:371 (3) - Not recommendable to make the HDash to the blue tick in a triplet. Make it just a simple circle at 04:18:467 - ? Sure, fixed

[Xinely]

1. 00:50:967 (3) - Since you're introducing that crack hitsound, what about doing Ctrl-G to this slider to also break a bit the continuous flow? The resulting dashes could be a bit extreme, so you might make the slider not so horizontal.
2. 00:58:659 (4,5,1) - The lyrics suggest to make the jump between (4,5) and not (5,1). Can it be fixed somehow?
3. 01:02:601 (2) - Not a must, but a few grids to the right would make this jump less painful to read after the HDash.
4. 03:27:986 (2) - Place it near the end of (1) instead of the beginning of (3). It's more intuitive that way.

[]
Check the mod and then call me back for a rebubble!

thanks for the mod!

now the timing feels better :3

EDIT : updated, sorry I forgot it

move to pending ?

Here's your #1 back!

（･∀･)つ

aaaahhh am i too late? ;w;
xinely and spec ever requested me to mod this one one month ago, so then let me check it out

Red ~> unrakable issue, must be changed
Blue ~> highly suggested, consider to use it
Black ~> suggestion, just free to choose it


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[ Friends]



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can't find more in this clean map :") probably this is my worse mod ever hue
call me back after this hihii

spec check the mod for my part too

spec could you fix it for me? just apply ming to move (2) to x:336
thanks /

mingmichael wrote:

aaaahhh am i too late? ;w;
xinely and spec ever requested me to mod this one one month ago, so then let me check it out

Red ~> unrakable issue, must be changed
Blue ~> highly suggested, consider to use it
Black ~> suggestion, just free to choose it


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[ Friends]

Notes

[Spec]
• expect a HDash in the first part at 00:02:133 (3,1) - . this HDash will emphasize the first sounds with the strong sounds (because the instrument gives it) perfectly added

• 01:03:479 (7,1) - same like above too. a usage of HDash here will be nice because that HDash will connect between two parts (the stronger one and the calmer one) I might keep mine as it's pretty hard to add hdash here due to the low distances between objects

• 02:21:940 (7,1) - ^ same as above

• why don't use the flow pattern at 03:43:863 (1,2) - like you did to your previous notes? you can try to ctrl+g 03:44:248 (2) - and move it to x:160. (1) will be at the right side. it goes to the left side to catch the (2) which is at the left side, and it goes to the right side again to catch the tail of (2) and (3). so, all the movements will be left~right~right at 03:43:863 (1,2,3) - . IMO this one is better than the anti-flow that you used when (2) was at the right side and the movements will be left~left~right. here i mean : It would be great, thanks fixed

SPOILER

your patterns

SPOILER

after you use my mod


[Xinely]

• itu movementnya bisa diimprove dikit aja di 02:00:594 (1,2,3) - (biar bisa kasih movement lebih luas lagi di 02:00:594 (1,2) - ). pindahin aja (2) ke x:336

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can't find more in this clean map :") probably this is my worse mod ever hue
call me back after this hihii

thanks!
also since bg has been changed, please re-dl the mapset

hihii okay, here i go~

~ #2

mingmichael wrote:

hihii okay, here i go~

~ #2

thanks! <3

Ok, here ya go~

Qualified~

Edit: Fixed the icon.

@Kurokami why you not applied a flame icon ? And it's approved not qualified this is a marathon map

Meh, I know. It was just a reflex. Icon not really matters anyway imo.

@ByBy_ChAn: Welcome to 2015 and Modding V2! Flame or Heart, it's still Qualified!

Will recheck the map soon. Congrats :3

ㅊㅊㅊㅊㅊㅊㅊㅊㅊㅊㅊㅊ

@Deif I know but it's a marathon map so would be better if have a flame icon to not confuse with a E/N/H/I map

Congrats Spec (｡´∀｀)ﾉ

congrats spec!!

Deif wrote:

@ByBy_ChAn: Welcome to 2015 and Modding V2! Flame or Heart, it's still Qualified!

Lol

Deif wrote:

Will recheck the map soon. Congrats :3

And deipu will unrank his own bubble /3\ *runs

Grats spec <33333333333

Nice <3

갓준님 축하축하 !

nice job ! Spec and moenely !