Daisuke Achiwa - BASARA · forum

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100pa- 2010-02-12T10:18:31+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010年9月8日 at 19:11:04

Artist: Daisuke Achiwa
Title: BASARA
Source: Ar tonelico II
Tags: Ar Tonelico II 2
BPM: 130
Filesize: 6729kb
Play Time: 03:21
Difficulties Available:

BASARA (5 stars, 870 notes)
Chroche (4.8 stars, 435 notes)
Luca (4.99 stars, 774 notes)

Download: Daisuke Achiwa - BASARA
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アルトネリコ2　世界に響く少女たちの創造詩」 Vocal CD
「焔～ホムラ」～Ar tonelico2 hymmnos concert Side.紅~～

Track 01.BASARA

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AdRon Zh3Ro

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AdRon Zh3Ro 2010-02-13T15:02:45+00:00

Very good beatmap.

Although, spacing of various circles aren't right.

If you want to create faster and slowers sections, create a section and put 0,5x, 1x or 2x BPM adjustment.

Good work

Card N'FoRcE

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Card N'FoRcE 2010-02-16T21:31:47+00:00

adron zhero wrote:
Very good beatmap.

Although, spacing of various circles aren't right.

If you want to create faster and slowers sections, create a section and put 0,5x, 1x or 2x BPM adjustment.

Good work

That's not true.
This spacing is really intuitive and i was really surprised when i tired it. (if he changed something after you said that, please ignore this)

Actually, i don't have anything to complain about.
Maybe you only have to add some breaks, because i think they're missing.
Add breaks at:
00:47:850 ; 00:51:500 ; 01:17:400 ; 01:24:500.

Other than that, i'm honestly impressed: noone would believe that this is a map from a first timer.
Can't wait to see this completed, send me a PM when it's done and i'll gladly check it again.

I'm giving you a kd-star in the meanwhile ^^

EDIT: if you don't understand something, ask someone in #japanese or PM me ^^

LKs

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LKs 2010-02-17T18:00:36+00:00

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Card N'FoRcE

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Card N'FoRcE 2010-02-20T13:51:31+00:00

WHY DID YOU REMOVE OVERALL DIFFICULTY 9???

WHY?

WHY?

It's awesome with overall 9 and it's even more playable. Your beat placement feels really intuitive when played with Overall Difficulty 9.
So, please use it like you did before.

100pa-

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100pa- 2010-02-20T14:59:28+00:00

yeah i thought oa9 is funny 2, but my friends said thats too hard lol. okay i'll change it back now XD
though i wont pass it myself maybe

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Card N'FoRcE

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Card N'FoRcE 2010-02-20T15:15:29+00:00

Well, the whole map is INSANE, so changing Overall to 8 won't help much xD

Anyway, i insisted on Overall 9 because it fits so much in this map. It's just perfect.

Anyway, the last part is really cruel xDD
(This is an opinion

)

Keep the good work up ^^

yaya

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yaya 2010-02-21T12:51:44+00:00

for me . overall 9 i will delete in 10 sec.
overall 8 is better .
for me overall 7 is the best

tsuka

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tsuka 2010-02-21T13:14:22+00:00

potential map ,i like it

anyway

OA9 and OA7 are both fine for me

Dangaard

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Dangaard 2010-02-21T15:03:32+00:00

Really impressive map, can't wait to see more.
And OA9 = win (ﾉﾟωﾟ)ﾉ

Gabi

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Gabi 2010-02-21T15:16:22+00:00

osu_CN_yaya wrote:
for me . overall 9 i will delete in 10 sec.
overall 8 is better .
for me overall 7 is the best

unfair yaya OA9 is good <_<

and yea this map is also fun, loving the hitsounds ^^

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Card N'FoRcE 2010-02-22T20:18:58+00:00

Yeah sure let's make all maps the same.
Let's all use overall 7, use Circe Size 4 and whatever HP drain.
Let's not make something original/different because "meh it's easy/hard/weird to play and wtf"

I'm still for Overall 9, because that's what this map had from the beginning and it was the mapper who chose it.
Also, i still think it fits better than 7/8, that's my opinion.
Final decision to the mapper, but if he decides for overall 9 and i see something like "Use Overall 7/8 or i won't star/bubble/rank/whatever" I'll really get angry because that's useless shit that limits the mapper's freedom.

I dunno if you can go for rank with two difficulties being exactly the same exept for Overall Difficulty.
I don't mind personally, but i dunno about what BATs will say.

Good luck for the next difficulty, can't wait to see it.

lota78

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lota78 2010-02-28T19:38:46+00:00

Nice map, very original :3. But,

01:32:158 (1,2,3) - I didn't like this part :X it's a bit out of sink at my point of view

In spite of it, veeeery well done =D, very original. Take this star

EDIT: Overall 9 is good, i wouldn't change it

lxy

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lxy 2010-03-23T05:07:46+00:00

very good map indeed

Dangaard

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Dangaard 2010-04-02T20:53:56+00:00

You should finish this, and add some easy diff

NatsumeRin

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NatsumeRin 2010-04-17T07:29:32+00:00

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
awesome hitsounds.
you need a 3-star diff to meet the difficulty spread rules... and i won't make a taiko diff since here's already... 3 [I]....

[Luca]
……我感觉整体就堆的太紧了……建议调高distance spacing 把间距拉开。然后可以叫我remod。这个spacing我实在觉得不好看。
HP Drain Rate -1
00:06:774 (4) - new combo
00:14:620 (7) - ^
00:15:889 (1) - start 1/4 later.
00:53:158 (4,5,6,7) - 不建议堆一起。
……我发现到后来我就只顾听歌和hitsounds了……

[Cocona]
Combo Colors中有两个是重复的orz，改掉。
只是一个感觉，你的note太过注重中轴线了。。。
01:21:082 (1) - remove new combo
01:21:774 (1) - ^
01:22:466 (1) - ^
01:23:158 (1) - ^
01:23:735 (1) -
……还有很多new combo让我不能理解。
整体其实没什么问题，但我就是说不出的别扭，简单而言，就是任意选取一段内的note，你就可以看到中间密密麻麻一片，两边基本对称分布着稀疏的几个。

[BASARA]
combo color又变了
这个难度是我三个里面最喜欢的，但是分超过20M了，属于app，顺便就是以你做音效的水平做太鼓绝对富裕了……

100pa-

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100pa- 2010-04-17T11:48:26+00:00

thx for modding

第一张[Luca]估计你看的时候我正在排版还没上传，你来太快了= =||
而且这张明显是3星难度不到的谱，3连小跳什么都没有我实在搞不懂这系统是怎么判星星的，把这张摁在4.5星已经是我竭尽所能了。。

[Cocona]的红蓝蓝，稍微注意下颜色跟音效应该能看出来点蹊跷.....
至于中线么，本来准备全部扔中间的，实在没法排就旁边也扔了几颗这样

因为是凑难度的图所以给自己加了点限制，作起来才不会无聊。图本身没问题就行=w=

[BASARA]
最早完成的一张，也是最没动脑的一张，节奏跟连打都直接跟着bgm走，然后各种大小Copy&paste....
老实说这种不动脑的图作着作着就会自我厌恶orz
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Card N'FoRcE 2010-04-17T20:14:29+00:00

Awww, i liked the old BG more xD

ken710

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ken710 2010-04-27T18:26:00+00:00

nice map~

eloi_old

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eloi_old 2010-05-06T06:46:15+00:00

这个map我是很喜欢的，osu能玩出太鼓的感觉非常棒XD
前边看到有人说中轴线云云……私心以为不是大问题，不开hid的话只靠那些圈圈也能辨出先后

另外，和别人一起玩，我选basara(overall 9 ver.)的时候别人会down不了，不知为何？

Lunah_old

Lunah_old 2010-05-16T02:21:09+00:00

YAY ~ awesome star**

OVERALL 9 IS AWESOME!

Card N'FoRcE

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Card N'FoRcE 2010-05-16T02:56:04+00:00

Ok, modding this one seriously now.

- General:

Remove "BASARA Daisuke Achiwa" from the tags, you don't need those here because they're already in "Artist" and "Title" fields. You should add "Ar Tonelico II 2" to the tags, to fill every mispelling.

- Luca:

.Opinions:
01:37:235 (1,2,3,4,5) - i reeeeeeeeeally like this part, but i think it's a bit hard for the easiest difficulty >.<
From 02:05:000 to 02:14:000 (and the repetition around 03:00:00) - ^
.Suggestions:
00:29:389 (2,3) - misreadable spacing: (3) should be farther
01:22:928 (2,3) - ^
01:41:389 (2,3,4) - misreadable spacing: i think you should make them spaced like 01:16:235 (5,6,7)
.Errors/Mistakes:
00:30:774 (6,7,8) - (8) does not follow the pattern you used for (6) and (7)
00:42:082 (4,5,6) - (6) does not follow the pattern you used for (4) and (5)
01:04:697 (7,8) - huse spacing mistake. Just look at the whole combo
02:02:851 (5,6) - 03:01:928 (5,6) - awwww i understand the pattern you want to use here, but it's so easy to misread it... >.<
02:23:851 (2,3) - spacing >.<
02:28:466 (3,4) - awwwwww another trap pattern that is cool but too hard for the easiest diff >.<

- Cocona:

.Opinions:
Why is the 3rd custom colour (almost) the same as the 2nd?
AHAHHAhahHAhahAh traps everywhere xD
00:40:235 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - i should say this pattern has wrong spacing, but it's actually fine while playing.
.Suggestions:
01:41:274 (1) - remove new combo
.Errors/Mistakes:
there are five unsnapped beats: please Resnap All Notes (Timing menu)

- Basara:

.Opinions:
I LOVE this.

Well, i love this map.
I think you should fix what i wrote in "Luca", because i think there shouldn't be many traps and weird changes of spacing in the easiest difficulty...
Another KD star. Because you deserve them for this original mapset.

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Natteke

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Natteke 2010-05-18T22:17:55+00:00

Do want

[DBF]

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[DBF] 2010-05-21T20:01:22+00:00

Star~

qinche

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qinche 2010-05-22T04:41:03+00:00

awesome map!

i just cant wait for it to be ranked>w<

Dusty

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Dusty 2010-05-22T20:19:39+00:00

source: Ar tonelico II
(not ArtonelicoII)

no kds

Sallad4ever

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Sallad4ever 2010-06-03T23:43:12+00:00

Very interesting
I like Ar Tonelico and when I hear the map, Wow now this is what I call creativity

Are you going for approval? because BASARA diff is really2 an approval material
Good luck this is very cool map, if you need help call me I'm happy to help you