Flower wrote:

Should be fine. Rebubbled.

HabiHolic wrote:

Sorry your bubbled pop

title problem. No TV Size title so "Utsukushiki Zankoku na Sekai" batter Fixed

http://vgmdb.net/album/37693

call me back

1. The video on this map has an audio on it, i suggest you to remove it, or ask someone else to do it for you o.o

1. 00:03:140 (1) - Add whistle to this slider's tail, it'll follow the piano sound in the music o.o
2. 00:10:199 (3) - ^
3. 00:21:140 (2) - ^ but on both start and tail this time
4. 00:26:787 (2,3) - This is kinda too hard to be on easy diff imo, so how remove the note and make something like this instead
   
5. 00:36:140 (1,2) - ^
6. 00:49:022 (2) - I highly suggest you unstuck this since it'll be a bit confusing for beginners to hit it ;w;
7. 00:58:199 (1) - ^
8. 01:08:081 (1,2,3) - this is kinda confusing for easy diff, i suggest you to do something easier hear like this
   
9. 01:10:199 (4,1,2) - ^ same
10. 01:12:316 (3,4) - ^
11. 01:16:552 (1,2) - ^
12. 01:19:375 (1,2) -

1. 00:03:140 (5) - like i said about this on Easy diff, add whistle to end of this slider
2. 00:43:905 (3,4) - don't you think this is kinda confusing for normal diff, i highly suggest you change the pattern here.
3. 01:09:493 (4) - I think you missed a finish on this note, i highly suggest you to add it
4. 01:12:845 (6) - I kinda don't hear anything in this note, so i suggest you to just remove it, instead of making this diff harder then it should be ></
5. 01:19:375 (3) - this slider's blinds kinda bad with this 01:17:787 (5) - , how how about rotating it to 50 degree selection center, it'll fix it tho

1. 00:03:140 (1,2,3,4) - the placement of these notes kinda feels random to me, you can easily fix that tho. By just redo the placement of these notes o.o
2. 00:05:964 (1,2,3,4) - ^
3. 00:10:199 (1) - this slider shape kinda looks bad imo, i highly suggest you to reshape it and make look a bit better ></ (and don't forget to add a whistle to slider's tail, like i said on the other two diffs)
4. 00:16:905 (6,1) - how about sticking the (6) above the (1) so it'll play much better, since the placement here looks and plays kinda bad imo
5. 00:28:199 (1,2) - ^
6. 00:46:905 (4,5) - both these slider ends don't really follows anything in the music, how about replacing them with 2 1/2 notes instead o.o
7. 00:49:905 (5,7) - ^ these two notes don't really follow anything in the music, i highly suggest you to remove them
8. 00:51:846 (3,1,2,3,4,5) - I don't really understand what your following here, kinda feels random. where the stream started suddenly here 00:52:552 (1) - , so yeah i suggest you doing something like this instead. It might fix it o.o
   

Sekai-nyan wrote:

popping the bubble due to lack of quality on the mapset~


General:

1. The video on this map has an audio on it, i suggest you to remove it, or ask someone else to do it for you o.o No audio in the video file

Easy:

1. 00:03:140 (1) - Add whistle to this slider's tail, it'll follow the piano sound in the music o.o Fixed
2. 00:10:199 (3) - ^ Fixed
3. 00:21:140 (2) - ^ but on both start and tail this time Fixed
4. 00:26:787 (2,3) - This is kinda too hard to be on easy diff imo, so how remove the note and make something like this instead Fixed
   
5. 00:36:140 (1,2) - ^ Fixed
6. 00:49:022 (2) - I highly suggest you unstuck this since it'll be a bit confusing for beginners to hit it ;w; Fixed
7. 00:58:199 (1) - ^ No change
8. 01:08:081 (1,2,3) - this is kinda confusing for easy diff, i suggest you to do something easier hear like this Fixed
   
9. 01:10:199 (4,1,2) - ^ same Fixed
10. 01:12:316 (3,4) - ^ Fixed
11. 01:16:552 (1,2) - ^ Fixed
12. 01:19:375 (1,2) - Fixed

Normal:

1. 00:03:140 (5) - like i said about this on Easy diff, add whistle to end of this slider Fixed
2. 00:43:905 (3,4) - don't you think this is kinda confusing for normal diff, i highly suggest you change the pattern here. Changed but keep the stack
3. 01:09:493 (4) - I think you missed a finish on this note, i highly suggest you to add it No need to add finish here
4. 01:12:845 (6) - I kinda don't hear anything in this note, so i suggest you to just remove it, instead of making this diff harder then it should be ></ No,I want to keep this
5. 01:19:375 (3) - this slider's blinds kinda bad with this 01:17:787 (5) - , how how about rotating it to 50 degree selection center, it'll fix it tho^

Hard:

1. 00:03:140 (1,2,3,4) - the placement of these notes kinda feels random to me, you can easily fix that tho. By just redo the placement of these notes o.o I want to keep these
2. 00:05:964 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ^
3. 00:10:199 (1) - this slider shape kinda looks bad imo, i highly suggest you to reshape it and make look a bit better ></ (and don't forget to add a whistle to slider's tail, like i said on the other two diffs)^
4. 00:16:905 (6,1) - how about sticking the (6) above the (1) so it'll play much better, since the placement here looks and plays kinda bad imo Fixed
5. 00:28:199 (1,2) - ^ Fixed
6. 00:46:905 (4,5) - both these slider ends don't really follows anything in the music, how about replacing them with 2 1/2 notes instead o.o Fixed
7. 00:49:905 (5,7) - ^ these two notes don't really follow anything in the music, i highly suggest you to remove them Fixed
8. 00:51:846 (3,1,2,3,4,5) - I don't really understand what your following here, kinda feels random. where the stream started suddenly here 00:52:552 (1) - , so yeah i suggest you doing something like this instead. It might fix it o.o Fixed
   

That's all, I suggest you to look for two more mod on hard and easy before asking me for rebubble. Since these two diff needs more work to get this moving on. For now Good Luck~

Moo-Chan wrote:

oh boy.. lets see if i can find anything..

[Easy]

1. 00:00:317 (1,2) - feels like these two dont flow together at all. id do something like this: http://puu.sh/fLLYx/46f1ccc057.jpg It should be OK
2. 00:02:434 (4) - maybe flip this slider? it feels better imo when like this: http://puu.sh/fLM4r/b5d987e668.jpg I want to keep this
3. 00:21:140 (2,3) - curve the 2 more over the tail of 3. it would make it look a lot better Fixed

[Normal]

1. id make the cs 3.5 because easy is at 3, and hard is at 4, so it would be in between Fixed
2. 00:03:140 (5) - nc Fixed
3. 00:03:846 - i would add a break here to the next note, like how you have in easy No need to add a break here
4. 00:08:787 (5) - nc Fixed
5. 00:17:258 (5) - ^ Fixed
6. 00:29:611 (2,3) - the flow from 2 to 3 feels kinda awkward. maybe move 3 to the left a bit? or flip it and rotate it by 21 like so:
   http://puu.sh/fLMMf/a1ff218eef.jpg I want to keep this
7. 01:04:905 (1,2,3) - i honestly feel like this would be too hard for people playing normal to understand Not very hard for players
8. 01:23:611 (4) - nc Fixed

[Hard]

1. 00:03:140 (1,2,3,4) - why not space these out? I don't want to space them out
2. 00:05:964 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ^
3. 00:26:434 (2,3) - id ctrl - g these. it feels really awkward and breaks the flow I think it flows well
4. 01:14:081 (2,5) - blanket is off Fixed

guess thats it. i like the song, its nice (: even though i hate attack on titan..

good luck with your map

-Tochi wrote:

From my modding queue

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  General

1. Fine i guess.

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  Hard

1. 00:02:787 (4,1) - Make a bigger DS here for better reading? Something as big like 00:07:022 (2,3) - Fixed

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  Feedback

  
  Couldn't find any problems in the other diffs. Because my mod is short i'll give a kudosu as my rule says ^^
  Good luck!

Regraz wrote:

Hi. From my queue.

[Easy]
1. 00:02:434 (4) - For better flow: http://puu.sh/g93SA/ae075c4aa6.jpg OK.As you wish
2. 00:03:140 (1) – I guess no need to NC? No change
3. 00:58:199 (1,2) – Don’t stack them. Really hard for newbie player to catch the rhythm well. Fixed
OK.

[Normal]
1. 00:00:317 (1,2,3,4) – Hmm. I suggest repeating 3 times. http://puu.sh/g943F/4fcb2bcddd.jpg And put whistle on each slider head. It is quite hard to repeat >3 times in lower diffs. No change
2. 00:09:493 (2,3,4) – Though the BPM is low, it ought not to appear 3 1/4 single notes in Normal diffs. ^
3. 00:15:140 (2,3) – Blanket. Fixed
4. 00:19:728 (1,2,3) – Same as 2. And you even stacked them, which adds to the difficulty and even confusion. No change
5. 00:25:022 (5) – Still, 4 time repeat is quite hard for newbie players to catch. Considering using 2 sliders instead. ^
6. 00:26:964 (3) – DS issue: http://puu.sh/g94dA/21f128b064.png I don't know how to explain
7. 00:56:787 (1) – It is quite overdosed to use 0.5x SV multiplier here, especially in Normal diff. Even if there’re new combo and slider-tick, it is still hard for newbie players to catch the huge SV change.
As emphasized, normal difficulty is for basic players, so 0.8x SV change is better. Change to 0.75x
8. 01:03:140 (2) – Why the DS suddenly becomes 1.0x here? I don't know how to explain
9. 01:05:964 (5) - ^. In most cases, DS must be stable in one value in Normal diffs. And there also should not be explanations like “Here is 1/4 rhythm so the DS becomes lower.” 强行不让我解释
10. 01:09:493 (4,5,1) – You’ve stacked 1/2s. And here you stacked 1/1s, it is quite confusing. No change
This diff needs more work.

[Hard]
1. 00:51:846 (3) –00:52:552 (1,2,3,4) - This is quite overmapped. Fixed as Sekai-nyan's mod
2. 01:09:493 (1,2) – Continue using the ideas at 01:06:669 (1,2) – No change
OK.

Good luck!

lkx_Shore wrote:

@Sekai-nyan: Don't leave mapper plz.

Short talk with mapper and fix some issue, Rebubbled

irc

14:42 lkx_Shore: 有空吗
14:42 Citrus: 有
14:42 *lkx_Shore is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/247192 Hikasa Yoko - Utsukushiki Zankoku na Sekai [Easy]]
14:43 lkx_Shore: 00:41:258 (2) - 尾巴+w,00:42:669 (1) - 换成Normal-sampleset保留soft-additions?
14:44 lkx_Shore: 我看了下后面的w下的感觉有点乱...换成24w感觉好点
14:47 Citrus: 00:37:022-00:56:787 这一段24w么？
14:47 lkx_Shore: 恩
14:47 lkx_Shore: normal给我感觉也乱...如果你改的话把normal的也改了吧
14:48 Citrus: 好
14:51 Citrus: 00:42:669 (1) - 这里改成normal-sampleset会不会太响了？
14:52 lkx_Shore: 调低点音量吧，不换的话我感觉太轻了
14:52 Citrus: 我试试
14:54 lkx_Shore: 好了说一声
14:56 Citrus: 好了
14:56 *lkx_Shore is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/303160 Hikasa Yoko - Utsukushiki Zankoku na Sekai [Hard]]
14:56 lkx_Shore: 00:44:081 (5,6) - 这个2连节奏和后面的搭起来显得怪异了，改成00:43:375 - 开始下2连节奏会好点，统一整体。然后00:40:728 - 是一段新部分，00:40:552 (6) - 也换成2连节奏,这个整体就完美了。
14:59 Citrus: 我需要理解一下
15:00 lkx_Shore: 00:43:375 (4) - 00:41:258 (4) - 换note+滑条的2连组合，就像00:46:199 (2,3,4) - 一样
15:00 lkx_Shore: 00:44:081 (5,6) - 换回普通的1/2
15:04 Citrus: 前辈还有什么接着说吧，这里改动略大，我需要改一阵子
15:05 lkx_Shore: 01:09:493 (1,2,3,4) - 这部分...要是drum让人点下去会好很多，音效全塞滑条里稍微有点水，后面同样的地方也是。不过这个改起来略麻烦，不改也行。
15:05 lkx_Shore: 就这个了
15:08 Citrus: 木有了么？
15:08 lkx_Shore: 没有了
15:46 Citrus: 都改好了，又要麻烦前辈看一下了，00:42:669 (1) - 我打算保持原样了
15:47 lkx_Shore: ;w;

Sekai-nyan wrote:

I didn't leave this map, i just got afk for weeks...so busy orz

Checked everything and it seems ready to go now... o3o/


Qualified~