这个……不是有没有音的问题quantum-rose wrote:
来晚了抱歉;w;
00:13:494 (5) - remove 有音啊
5连3连3连是打着很不舒服而且容易爆100的……既然这图是送分向建议还是不要这样
你要知道柚子鬼畜quantum-rose wrote:
这个……不是有没有音的问题quantum-rose wrote:
来晚了抱歉;w;
00:13:494 (5) - remove 有音啊
5连3连3连是打着很不舒服而且容易爆100的……既然这图是送分向建议还是不要这样
Tank the mod and very usefulsmallboat wrote:
Hi,Kawaiwkyik,In-game PM req.
- Red words: Should be fix it.
- Blue words : I recommended suggestion.
- Black words : In my personal opinion.
[General]
1.sliderslide要不要加一下? 在滑動時感覺有點吵,例如像這個吧00:00:844 (2)就有蠻大聲了。
[Easy] OD 0會被吐吧? 要不要+2~3比較正常點..HP+1
00:16:516 (2,1,2) - 試試在這些開頭都加whistle。
00:23:680 (3) - ^
00:27:262 (3) - ^
01:24:576 (2) - 開頭+finish,因為這邊音樂是往上的。
[Normal]
00:03:979 (1) - 這個圓弧蠻奇怪的,似乎跟2完全搭不上,把這個取消中間的點用直線如何? 看得比較舒服。
00:10:247 (5) - 移到(384|248)不就blanket了? Pattern也比較好看。
00:18:755 (1) - 開頭whistle?
00:22:785 (2) - ^
00:25:023 (3) - ^
00:31:292 (4) - ^
00:51:441 (2,1) - ^
00:55:023 (3) - ^
01:21:441 (2) - 這2感覺太突出了,這不是一個弧線,建議1往下移一些。
01:24:576 (1) - 開頭whistle?
01:27:262 (3) - 應該是能+finish在這滑條頭上,個人意見。
[Hard]
00:10:695 (6) - 這個可以放遠點,看要不要用Blanket 00:11:143 (1) 或用滑條頭疊在00:11:143 (1) 上。
00:13:158 (2,3) - 放這樣感覺容易miss,個人意見。
00:16:292 (1) - 這段不加任何音效感覺有點空洞,開頭加個whistle吧?
00:18:083 (5) - ^
00:19:874 (4) - ^
00:21:441 (7) - ^
00:23:456 (5) - ^
00:19:874 (4,6) - 可以對稱,個人意見。
00:46:292 (7) - 我覺得這邊是放個1/1滑條,而不是一個note。(另外說一下5點到6的感覺怪怪,但加這個滑條就不會了。)
00:47:635 (2) - 有一個音在這裡要不要加note?
00:51:441 (4) - 可以跳,我會選擇放在(264|116),之前的放在這裡,感覺有點窄也不太好看。
01:01:292 (5) - 也是可以跳,移到跟6對稱,會是個不錯的flow和形狀。
01:16:964 (3) - (508|360)試試。
01:24:128 (3,4) - 增點美觀,我覺得這兩個疊在滑條尾上應該沒關係,test下也蠻flow。
[wkyik]
00:01:516 (6) - 前面123看得出來是三角形的形狀,為何這個456不也弄一個三角形?
00:01:740 (7) - 這個可以跳,推薦疊00:02:635 (2) 滑條頭,之前點的那個位置好像太擠的感覺。
00:05:994 (2) - 移到(220|192)可以呈個pattern。
00:10:695 (8) - 滑條尾疊3試試,記得轉個角度做blanket。
00:18:307 (1) - (104|196),Blanket(6)。
00:23:232 (3) - 推薦(4|304)。疊到5上也很flow 或用4做blanket也行。
00:27:934 (3) - 疊起來?
00:29:501 (2) - ^
00:30:173 (4) - ^
00:36:217 (1) - 6到1感覺有點扭,(276|276)試試。
00:37:785 (5) - 長音,(408|160),也成一個pattern。
00:38:680 (3) - 疊起來
00:41:591 (5,7) - 試試這兩個ctrl+g。
00:46:740 (8) - 感覺放到(388|56)還比較順。
01:00:620 (4) - 跟前面做blanket。
01:02:635 (7) - 疊起來
[Other]
1.If you have any mod above problems, you can PM or in-game to me.
2.Hope to you ranked.
3.Hope my mod is useful to you.
thanks for mod :3 >w<Hollow Wings wrote:
from qGeneral
- 为什么不加tag? 沒感覺tag能加啥
- 滑条身的音感觉可以静音,在低难度里显得有点吵了
Insane
- 01:01:964 (6) - 丧心病狂的出界unrankble 我又出界了
- 这图还需要摸?射2星
Hard
- 00:16:292 (1) - 去掉nc?因为后面3段vocal你都是一个颜色带过去,所以 去掉NC
- 00:44:277 (3,4,5) - 建议你仔细调整一下这里的blanket和stack,没完全叠好就会显得很难看 Fixed
- 01:24:128 (3,1) - 3的尾巴离1远一点 遠離了
- good
Normal
- fine
虽然q里说过了但我还是想再说一次:我摸图摸到现在你的gd摸过不少,柑橘做的都很有想法质量又高,非常喜欢OVOEasy
- 00:18:307 (1) - 出界unrankble 我經常做出界耶~
神麻婆球个mu mutualed
good luck
0風好厲害0.0Zero__wind wrote:
Hi, mod from popner's modding team
Unrankable issues
Highly recommend to fix
Common sugestions
General
kiai结束的时间真是奇怪……为什么不在最后一个音01:27:934 - 这里结束呢
加点tags 像ending啊之类的 再从别人已经rank了的OP里抄点儿啥
Insane
00:05:546 (1,3) - 不要挨在一起好看些,调整一下1的角度就好了
00:13:158 (2,3,4,5,6) - 这里的节奏其实是不准确的,其实这里出现了1/6 如下图,考虑到难度问题可以把那两组1/6的二连用滑条带过
00:14:501 (6,1) - 距离太近了,不能很好地强调出1头上的重音,建议把1挪到(416,140)这一带
00:18:307 (1,3) - 为啥不叠好呢 你把五角星一起挪一下嘛
00:19:874 (1,3) - 你从00:14:725 (1,2,3,4) - 这里开始就全normal了所以这里尾巴被静音听起来非常奇怪 最好就正常音量
00:23:456 (4) - ^
00:28:382 (4) - 把这个换成和这个滑条的方向一样的三连打比较有趣 也更合曲
00:29:053 (1) - 这里开始又变回soft了我很苦恼=。=最好加个低音鼓的音效或者就继续用normal
00:31:740 (3,4,5,6) - 感觉叠着没啥意思 试试这个
00:50:098 (5) - 按你前面的加音效方式 这里应该是漏了个finish
00:51:889 (1,3) - 感觉交换NC更能保持NC的稳定性
00:56:591 (7) - 把它叠到00:57:262 (9) - 的尾巴上如何
01:10:247 (1,2) - 这里其实有两组三连打的节奏 没有表现出有点可惜 虽然现在这样没什么问题吧
01:22:113 (4) - 感觉尾巴上好像需要一个finish 仔细听音乐的话
Hard
这个diff怎么一开始有好多normal whistle 好吵 就像Insane里面一样处理就好了
00:05:770 (1,2) - 逆时针转一下角度让00:04:986 (4,1) - 不要碰到吧
这diff真是你做的?0.0 好多normal whistle 感觉音效完全不是一个人加的 建议diff间还是保持一致比较好
00:35:098 (8) - 头上加whiste比较好吧
00:45:620 (5) - 感觉这滑条放在hard里很危险 基本上是看不到的=。= 建议叠在4的头上 然后后面的旋转一下调整间距如下图
00:50:546 (1) - 头上finish美丽
01:00:173 (3,4) - blanket? 而且最好离远点 都到kiai了还这么小间距真是难受,01:01:964 (6,7) - 这种就还比较合适
kiai总体上间距太小了 本来也是滑条比较多 间距大一点没事的 现在这样完全和前面体现不出区别
Normal
星有点高 考虑HP-1 OD-1 因为你Hard也比较简单,Normal不需要弄这么高
00:18:755 (1) - 还是开始的音效吧 whistle实在听起来有点突兀 各个diff间统一一下
00:39:128 (6) - 这个碰血条=。= 你把00:38:456 (5,6,1) - 一起挪到(228,132) 然后微调一下00:40:695 (2) - 就可以了
01:27:710 (4) - 尾巴上clap换成whistle
没啥问题 就是牵绊段的音效要弄好
Easy
AR3比较好 2太慢了
00:03:979 (4) - NC,这一组combo太长了
00:43:382 (1) - finish美丽
00:55:023 (1) - 我感觉不要finish更合曲 keep 跟你意見相反
01:10:247 (3) - 重要的finish美丽 还有就是这里应该NC一个 不然太长了
01:27:710 (3) - 尾巴上clap去掉吧 你H和I里都没有的,而且最后这里确实也没鼓
没了
LB is good
Good luck~
Sorry for lateIamKwaN wrote:
搞完個玩家訪談,終於有時間
[General]
Tags: little busters refrain - 呢3個應該唔洗重複,source有曬
[Easy]
00:18:307 (1) - 我個人覺得可以扭得靚d lol ;盡量
00:52:337 (3) - 中間同後面條白線放定點,可以突出鼓點 ^
01:24:576 (2) - Prev: 1.07x spacing fixed
[Normal]
AR-1
我覺得前奏既難度高過kiai time比較少見,建議前面少d呢類slider: 00:29:949 (2,3,4,5,1).
00:43:382 (1) - spacing Prev: 0.84x Fixed
01:09:128 (2,1) - 開HD會比較難打,建議01:10:695 (1)擺系01:09:799 (3)左下 個人認為none睇到就夠 理鬼佢咩mod
暫時easy同normal先 我越來越懶;w;
0w0Guy wrote:
o.o
thanks for mod >w<Guy wrote:
o.o
Edit:
Hi!
Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.
Blue : Should be fixed / highly suggested.
Black : Just suggestion.
[General]
- "little busters" and "refrain" tags are already use into the sourse. so add "リトルバスターズ!" to tags instead of them.
- Please add Audio Lead-in about 1000~1500. Fixed both
[Insane]
- 00:07:337 (9) - Add whistle? That's pretty fit the song imo. ok
- 00:55:023 (4) - This flow is a little bad. Try to changed the slider shape to direct upwards. ok, also changed so placement after this slider
[Hard]
- 00:27:486 (1) - Spinner start is 00:27:262 - better to me. Also spinner end is 00:28:605 - here. because Current is a bit short recovery time after the spinner for Hard difficulty. ok
[Normal]
- 00:32:635 (1) - This part seems you add the whistle each 2/1 rhythm. so remove whistle from slider head. and Add whistle to slider end. ok
- 00:34:874 (4) - Add whistle to slider head. ^
- 00:36:217 (1) - Add whistle to slider end. ^
- 00:38:456 (5) - Add whistle to slider head. ^
[Easy]Call me back~
- fine.
xxdeathx wrote:
Random bubble check!
[General][Easy]
- Are you sure you want BG's with different aspect ratios? One is 16:9 and the other is 4:3 I think it's not problem here~~~
[Normal]
- 00:46:068 (3) - Curve the other way, it will flow better from both directions. ok
[Hard]
- 01:16:964 (5,1,2) - kind of a spacing error fixed
fixed
- 00:23:456 (5) - Curve the other way, it will flow better from both directions. fixed
- 00:27:262 (1) - Spinner doesn't really fit tbh since there is nothing different about the music. Also you don't have spinner here in other diffs. removed and add some note
- 00:44:277 (3,4,5) - I highly recommend increasing spacing so blanket doesn't overlap, since overlap blanket doesn't look good.
changed pattern- The gap between 01:19:650 (8,1) - is 1/2, but between 01:19:874 (1,2) - is 1/1, however they are the same spacing. It's better to try to follow DS here.
Almost there!