Let's divide this post in mappers :3
happy30 (part 1)
[General] maybe try to add whistle/finish on some beats witch have only finish (not on all, of course), like on 00:37:007 (1)
niedzwiedz1124 (part 1)
00:57:074 (5,6) - remove clap from 6th and maybe add whistle on 5th and 6th
Dangaard
01:59:052 (4,5) - move them a square up
BREAK
... I guess it's ok x3
buraimaster1234
02:39:018 (7) - whistle here
02:41:074 (8,9) - this jump is quite strange...
02:43:030 (3,4) - ^
02:53:041 (6) - whistle here
02:59:029 (1,2,3,4) - move them 1-2 squares up
Gabi (part 1)
03:16:063 (5,1) - ... another strange jump...
niedzwiedz1124 (part 2)
It's OK ^^
BREAK 2
... ok even this one x3
happy30 (part 2)
No problems here!
Gabi (part 2)
[General] some sections have too many whistles... try to remove some of them... (not all, of course)
lesjuh
05:53:096 (2) - ...new combo?
05:55:041 (spinner) - set hitsounds's volume to 0 for this spinner
As happy30 said, this map is READY for approval! ;3