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Shimotsuki Haruka - Nijiiro no Kisetsu e

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Fia
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Fia
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017年8月21日 at 13:05:14

Artist: Shimotsuki Haruka
Title: Nijiiro no Kisetsu e
Source: PriministAr
Tags: galgame eroge opening HOOKSOFT OdiakeS Kagamine Ren Karen
BPM: 164
Filesize: 15320kb
Play Time: 01:46
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (3.35 stars, 273 notes)
  2. Insane (4.38 stars, 364 notes)
  3. Karen's Easy (1.5 stars, 115 notes)
  4. Karen's Normal (2.09 stars, 170 notes)
Download: Shimotsuki Haruka - Nijiiro no Kisetsu e
Download: Shimotsuki Haruka - Nijiiro no Kisetsu e (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Early 2015 style ._.
Easy and Normal by Karen
Last edited by Fia , edited 27 times in total.
Fushimi Rio
Fushimi Rio
十分善良 服气 有人能DT这东西么
Edit：我草忽然发现source拼错了 哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈
Zejky
694 posts
Joined February 2011
Zejky
Hello imoutosan
thiss testplay :D

Replay
Karen
2,860 posts
Joined August 2013
Karen
则不呢又是霜月遥
Karen
2,860 posts
Joined August 2013
Karen
http://puu.sh/gKvKh/108914ccb8.rar
做的不好orz :o

edit: normal的metadata不知道怎么回事跟别的不一样了...音效工具的锅..
Kencho
952 posts
Joined August 2013
Kencho
From qq群
有空來摸我的吧 https://osu.ppy.sh/s/290683
[Insane]
  1. 物件的結尾沒有對齊時間軸！ 00:15:475
    01:02:946 (1,2,3,4) - 這個3放到2的尾巴，然後34 blanket
    01:40:172 (5,1) - wa這簡直考驗讀圖
  2. 粉心的圖梗太厲害了，wa這簡直考驗讀圖，梗照用的話也就摸不出什麼了
[Hard]
  1. 物件的結尾沒有對齊時間軸！ 01:04:042
    00:05:873 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 滑條1向上放，和2 blanket，然後五星形的排列不如3,2,5,4,6這樣
    SPOILER
    00:35:690 (2,4) - 這種梗不建議在hard用的，說真開個HD之後是完全看不到4的位置的
    01:06:422 (2,3) - blanket？
  2. 總之還是那個風格嘛，疊的來排版也很整潔，不過hard是不建議疊這麼多了
[Ren's Normal]
  1. 00:20:507 (3,4,5,6) - 很好奇這四個為何不放成正三角形嘛
    00:46:849 (3,4,5,1) - 這個真不太好看，把3的角度弄向左一點，然後把4移左一點然後和5 blanket，記得要選一個和下一個滑條DS剛剛好的位置，算了我放個圖好了
    SPOILER
    大概就這個感覺
    00:50:873 (5,6) - blanket
    00:58:922 (4) - 折返角度對著5
  2. 又有人哥GD
[Ren's Easy]
  1. 01:12:824 (2) - 就這個拉的不太好看，起碼和1 blanket吧
    01:38:068 (1,1,1) - 後面三連轉盤轉到手殘啦，不過也沒太大影響
  2. 雙人哥GD
美麗
Fia
Topic Starter
Fia

ken2010123 wrote:

[Insane]

  • 01:02:946 (1,2,3,4) - 這個3放到2的尾巴，然後34 blanket 没懂 2是circle啊
[Hard]
  1. 00:05:873 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 滑條1向上放，和2 blanket，然後五星形的排列不如3,2,5,4,6這樣 求个code 自己摆有点麻烦
    SPOILER
  2. 總之還是那個風格嘛，疊的來排版也很整潔，不過hard是不建議疊這麼多了
KaedekaShizuru
625 posts
Joined January 2013
KaedekaShizuru
from QQ group

[General]
音效整体还行 建议slider静音 然后这个soft-hitnormal怎么放这歌里感觉怪怪的……

[Insane]
泥煤我居然pass不能 明显的星数虚低 沙皮算法
HP敢不敢低一点
00:15:384 (3) - Aimod报offline
00:54:166 - 这里开始音效有点吵了
00:56:361 (5) - 建议NC
01:02:215 (5) - ↑
01:15:934 (1) - 这个加速感觉很怪 跟前面保持一致更舒服 推荐一个单点完事
01:44:013 (1) - 结尾offline 但是听上去没有问题

[Hard]
00:06:605 (3,4) 00:06:971 (5,6) - hard里这样好吗……
00:56:361 (5) - NC
01:02:215 (5) - ↑
01:12:276 (1) - 这个遮挡放hard里有点过分了
01:12:824 (1) - ↑
01:15:934 (1) - 同insane
01:38:617、01:40:080、01:41:544 - 不建议空着
01:44:105 (1) - 同insane

[Normal]
DS稍微小一点点就能回到N标（其实感觉节奏还是略密了一点） 别的没啥可挑的

[Easy]
为何有种SV高了的感觉
00:30:751 (1) - 请允许我在低难度犯一下blanket强迫症 然后把00:32:215 (2) 也同步一下

美丽
Fia
Topic Starter
Fia

KaedekaShizuru wrote:

from QQ group

[General]
音效整体还行 建议slider静音 然后这个soft-hitnormal怎么放这歌里感觉怪怪的…… ？我觉得还好

[Insane]
泥煤我居然pass不能 明显的星数虚低 沙皮算法
HP敢不敢低一点 7.2
00:54:166 - 这里开始音效有点吵了 我还觉得我下得不错……
00:56:361 (5) - 建议NC I就不用了 也就难读那么一点
01:02:215 (5) - ↑
01:15:934 (1) - 这个加速感觉很怪 跟前面保持一致更舒服 推荐一个单点完事
01:44:013 (1) - 结尾offline 但是听上去没有问题 因为它就是在这结束的……

[Hard]
01:15:934 (1) - 同insane 保留意见 看看之后的mod
01:38:617、01:40:080、01:41:544 - 不建议空着 有点偏难 加了怕和normal有gap
01:44:105 (1) - 同insane

美丽
Thanks for mod!
Fushimi Rio
Fushimi Rio
PriministAr要出FD了你知不知道啊
Lavender
886 posts
Joined January 2014
Lavender
From my queue
原来人格做gd都是EN一起啊
[General]
  1. 所有难度countdown, widescreen support, letterbox什么的全关了
[Ren's Easy]
  1. hitnormal的反馈堪忧，比如00:02:580 (2) - 选个好点的hitnormal吧
  2. 00:10:263 (1) - 改成note后接spinner以加强打击感
  3. 00:10:263 (1,1) - 不要怂啊，两个spinner直接隔1/4也没有什么关系的，你可以看看我那个supercell的easy
  4. 00:13:190 (1,1) - 这个的话easy里面似乎是要隔4/1吧
  5. 00:51:971 (1,1) - ^ 所以说低难度要什么spinner，全slider好了
  6. 01:24:898 (3,4) - nazi
  7. 01:38:068 (1,1) - 好懒啊
[Ren's Normal]
  1. 整个diff还是一条长白线一个NC吧
  2. 00:01:483 (2,3) - 要不弄小点要不弄大点，这样好难受啊，感觉改成CS3.5既符合spread也好看多了
  3. 00:10:263 (1,1) - ^同ez
  4. 00:16:117 (1) - 1/2折返不太好吧，感觉还是1/1就好
  5. 00:21:971 (1,2) - 不好看
  6. 00:39:532 (1) - 这里没有3/4音，绝对会被挑
  7. 00:51:971 (1,1) - Normal似乎是要2/1
  8. 01:38:068 (1,1) - 懒ren
[Hard]
  1. 00:19:776 (4,1) - 最好不要stack，拉开点距离，overlap也比stack好 00:27:824 (1,2) - same
  2. 00:24:898 (1,1) - 这个spacing误导很严重啊
  3. 00:25:629 (1) - 00:27:093 (1) - 去NC
[Insane]
  1. 这个压星
  2. A star to this diff. (等等你要先挖出来
Fia
Topic Starter
Fia

[Teichan] wrote:

A star to this diff. (等等你要先挖出来
来
Karen
2,860 posts
Joined August 2013
Karen
什么，居然挖起来了，待我remap一波
Fia
Topic Starter
Fia

Karen wrote:

什么，居然挖起来了，待我remap一波
我居然以为ren真的去remap了
Karen
2,860 posts
Joined August 2013
Karen

Karen wrote:

什么，居然挖起来了，待我remap一波
Karen's Easy
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: priministar.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 500
PreviewTime: 77032
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.5

[Metadata]
Title:Nijiiro no kisetsu e
TitleUnicode:虹色の季節へ
Artist:Shimotsuki Haruka
ArtistUnicode:霜月はるか
Creator:PinkHeart
Version:Karen's Easy
Source:PriministAr
Tags:galgame eroge opening HOOKSOFT OdiakeS Kagamine Ren
BeatmapID:665569
BeatmapSetID:273849

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.9
SliderTickRate:1

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Vert
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Vert
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作为一个有信仰只做高难度的麻婆我就只看I了

[Insane]
00:47:580 (1,2,3,4) - 前面滑条本身就堆在一起了，这几个还放在这个小圈子里感觉太局促，建议往远了放点
01:06:422 (2,3) - 我感觉节奏应该是一个滑条+1个圈
01:04:410 (1,2) - ctrl+g
01:18:129 (3) - Ctrl+g
01:22:154 (2,3,4) - 讲道理的话这种直线变间距打起来非常难受
01:34:593 (4,5,6) - ^
01:43:373 (4,1,2) - 太难读了
00:29:471 (3) - 这个建议往左下放，比如放在1和4中间，比如让滑条尾对着00:28:739 (5) -

美丽GL真是太不善良了，一万个遮挡
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Vert wrote:

from pm

作为一个有信仰只做高难度的麻婆我就只看I了

[Insane]
00:47:580 (1,2,3,4) - 前面滑条本身就堆在一起了，这几个还放在这个小圈子里感觉太局促，建议往远了放点 好像有点道理 不过没差多少啊
01:06:422 (2,3) - 我感觉节奏应该是一个滑条+1个圈 跟鼓就这样了
01:04:410 (1,2) - ctrl+g 不好 不要钝角跳
01:18:129 (3) - Ctrl+g 这里不是绕圈啊
01:22:154 (2,3,4) - 讲道理的话这种直线变间距打起来非常难受 note多了是这样 三个拆图拆开就好了
01:34:593 (4,5,6) - ^ ^
01:43:373 (4,1,2) - 太难读了 行
00:29:471 (3) - 这个建议往左下放，比如放在1和4中间，比如让滑条尾对着00:28:739 (5) - 那么放的话4和后面的三连flow就不顺了 不好

美丽GL真是太不善良了，一万个遮挡
Thx.
Pururut
488 posts
Joined March 2012
Pururut
from imoutosan's request

HOOK可是纯爱党的精神支柱 好吧我是___党

是叫我摸低难度啦，但是低难度并没有什么好摸的地方....



  • [list:1337]
    [General]
  1. 检查下AIMOD 似乎有4个警告 没问题么
  2. tag 可以加上人哥现在的id
  3. 滑条似乎要消音?
  4. 记得上次空之花rank的时候 我朋友说 这个麻婆是有多喜欢五角星啊

  • [Insane]
  1. 00:05:690 (4,1) - 这个地方不管是移动还是看起来都特别别扭，建议改改
  2. 00:10:263 (5) - nc
  3. 00:21:239 (1) - ^
  4. 00:13:190 加个note是否更有感觉点?反正你这么善良
  5. 00:28:739 (5,6) - 个人觉得Ctrl+g更顺
  6. 摸了一半感觉offset有问题 软件测了下33 才想起戴耳机
  7. 00:36:252 (3) - whistle?
  8. 01:04:972 (4) - nc 我记得你前面一个同样的地方是nc了的
  9. 01:09:911 (3) - 放 01:08:447 (4) 的头上感觉更好？
  10. 01:11:740 (1) - 一旦有blanket的意思就要做好
  11. 01:13:386 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1) - 好
  12. 01:22:532 (4,1) - 互换nc
  13. 副歌的whistle好像少了点? 别的没问题 你看看 试个图一会回来

  • [Hard]
  1. 还好
  2. 00:02:946 (1) - 这是完全重叠了吗,不行的吧..
  3. 00:10:263 (5) - nc
  4. 00:14:837 (1) - 建议改成两个单点啦,1/2滑条也行?嘛随你
  5. 01:10:904 (3) - dsdsds
  6. 01:21:971 (1,2,3,4) - 考虑删掉3, 01:22:702 (5) 头放4上 调整下滑条
  7. 01:43:556 (2) - 考虑下改成1次折返 01:43:922 (3) - 放 01:43:373 (1) 上去?

  • [Normal]
  1. 基本只用检查下DS啦
  2. 00:57:093 (1,2,3) - 个人认为0.01-0.02误差可以接受
  3. 01:05:873 (1,2) - ^

  • [Easy]
  1. 00:21:239 (4,1) - ^
  2. 00:48:312 (1,2) - ^ 不过应该是blanket没包好的问题
  3. 01:29:288 (1) - Samplest drum Additions soft-whistle
  4. 01:30:751 (3,1) - 平行 要不干脆弧线啦 这种要平不平的不好看
低难度稳 GL 睡觉
Fia
Topic Starter
Fia

Pururut wrote:

HOOK可是纯爱党的精神支柱 好吧我是___党 然而千里线喂了屎



  • [list:1337]
    [General]
  1. 检查下AIMOD 似乎有4个警告 没问题么 忘了统一tag了
  2. 滑条似乎要消音? 其实我木耳听不出来 有点懒
  3. 记得上次空之花rank的时候 我朋友说 这个麻婆是有多喜欢五角星啊 ……

  • [Insane]
  1. 00:05:690 (4,1) - 这个地方不管是移动还是看起来都特别别扭，建议改改 改了改
  2. 00:10:263 (5) - nc 同hard
  3. 00:21:239 (1) - ^ 不需要吧...
  4. 00:13:190 加个note是否更有感觉点?反正你这么善良 可以 我真善良
  5. 00:28:739 (5,6) - 个人觉得Ctrl+g更顺 还是算了 想不太清楚当时想摆啥
  6. 摸了一半感觉offset有问题 软件测了下33 才想起戴耳机 看来我真是木耳...
  7. 00:36:252 (3) - whistle? 感觉有点怪 调整了一下之前的
  8. 01:04:972 (4) - nc 我记得你前面一个同样的地方是nc了的 不知道 那就nc吧
  9. 01:09:911 (3) - 放 01:08:447 (4) 的头上感觉更好？ 行
  10. 01:11:740 (1) - 一旦有blanket的意思就要做好 哎哟 有点难改 我试试
  11. 01:13:386 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1) - 好 :)
  12. 01:22:532 (4,1) - 互换nc 行
  13. 副歌的whistle好像少了点? 别的没问题 你看看 试个图一会回来 完了 确实是木耳

  • [Hard]
  1. 还好
  2. 00:02:946 (1) - 这是完全重叠了吗,不行的吧.. 哎哟 没发现
  3. 00:10:263 (5) - nc 感觉不加也差不多
  4. 00:14:837 (1) - 建议改成两个单点啦,1/2滑条也行?嘛随你 单点
  5. 01:10:904 (3) - dsdsds k
  6. 01:21:971 (1,2,3,4) - 考虑删掉3, 01:22:702 (5) 头放4上 调整下滑条 当时做的时候没完全跟人声 这里就还是跟鼓算了
  7. 01:43:556 (2) - 考虑下改成1次折返 01:43:922 (3) - 放 01:43:373 (1) 上去? 好
低难度稳 GL 睡觉
谢谢mod.
Silky
766 posts
Joined October 2014
Silky
NM :3
don't expect much pls im noob at modding(and english) ;w;


add to tags: Karen
inconsistency in countdown and letterboxinbreaks

Easy
  1. 00:42:462 - unsnapped greenline
  2. 00:06:422 (2) - DS
  3. 01:14:654 (4) - add NC?
  4. 01:15:934 (6,7) - idk that x0.8 DS is okay...
  5. 01:26:361 (5) - add NC
  6. 01:33:312 (2) - add clap
Normal
  1. 00:01:483 (2) - why did u used x1.30 DS...?
  2. 00:08:617 (4,5,6) - umm...that rhythm is a bit weird to me... how about this?
    SPOILER
  3. 00:39:532 (1) - that 3/4 is unnecessary tbh... there have sounds, but this diff is 'Normal'
    that 3/4 is suddenly, beginners will misread it. use 3/2 pls
  4. 00:41:544 (1) - remove NC
  5. 00:57:093 (1) - why did u used x1.0...? you should use 1.4, 00:56:361 (3,1,2) - that spacing gap isnt suitable for Easy/Normal
  6. 01:08:068 - vocal prolong from here.... start slider at here plz
  7. 01:13:373 (2) - how about this?
    SPOILER
Hard
  1. 00:07:885 - add whistle?
  2. 00:13:373 (1,1) - make more spacing(1/1 or so) plz, that's unrankable
    umm... 00:14:837 (1) - delete?
  3. 00:48:678 (2,3,4) - try this... why did you followed non-vocals?
    SPOILER

  4. 00:58:556 (2) - Ctrl+G? current one is a bit hard to tap
  5. 01:04:593 (2) - same as above
  6. 01:28:190 (3,4) - like this for good flow?
    SPOILER
  7. 01:42:459 (1) - maybe this NC pattern is more good appearance
    SPOILER
Insane
  1. 00:10:446 (1,1) - make spacing 1/2 or so... maybe this is unrankable
  2. 00:15:477 - lower volume?
  3. 00:27:641 (5) - ctrl+G pls...
  4. 01:13:739 (3,4,1) - too hard qwq
  5. 01:40:080 (4,5) - same as above qwq
gl!
Fia
Topic Starter
Fia

fuyuyu- wrote:

Fixed most. Thanks for modding!
neonat
Beatmap Nominator
3,528 posts
Joined April 2012
neonat
Insane

I find the Insane very additional in terms of beats that are not in the song

00:26:910 (3,1,2,3,4,5) - I don't hear 1/4 beats in the music here
00:28:465 (3) - I don't hear a sound here
00:29:105 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - the only 1/4 I hear over here is at 00:29:837 - 00:29:928 - 00:30:019
00:58:922 (7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - ^ only 1/4 I hear is the triplet at 00:59:654 - 00:59:745 - 00:59:837
01:13:373 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^ only 1/4 I hear is the triplet at 01:13:739 - 01:13:830 - 01:13:922
01:19:959 (1,2) - swap positions
01:38:617 (2,3,4) - I don't hear a triplet in the song here
01:39:166 (6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - I don't hear 1/4 beats in the music here
01:41:544 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - I don't hear 1/4 beats here in the music except at 01:43:007 - 01:43:099 - 01:43:190


gl
Lasse
Beatmap Nominator
3,596 posts
Joined June 2011
Lasse
graved for long enough
reply to the 1 year old mod above lol

http://www.hook-net.jp/priministar/down.html
seems like your tittle needs "short ver. " added
better get metadata stuff confirmed

can you and karen decide where to end the last spinner cause you both snapped it differentl. also for me it sounds closer to that sound you wanted to follow if it ends on 01:46:872 - ?

00:16:117 - this part could use some soft whistles for guitars, would sound great

insane
00:05:690 (4,1) - think I would make sense to stack this since you have it just like the 1/1 before and you also stacked 00:04:410 (1,2) -. would also make 1 feel more "connected" with the vocal
00:10:446 (1) - why not start this on the blue tick already like the next one
00:17:580 (1,3) - autostacking on this makes 00:16:849 (3,1) - look weird cause it moves the slider http://i.imgur.com/M8IgFSF.jpg
also the jump on 00:18:129 (3,4) - seems very spaced when the music is so consistent, maybe try something like http://i.imgur.com/iqWtJw6.jpg
00:23:434 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - I don't really understand the 3 note grouping here, sounds more like groups of 2 or 4 would fit the guitars and drums better
00:36:422 - you follow vocals all the time before, so I think this should be mapped, only time you skip vocal completely in this part
01:31:117 (2,3,1) - should be adjusted for autostacking


hard
would try ar7.5 on this? seemed really nice to play together with your stacked patterns
00:02:946 (1) - can you rotate this a bit to make the overlapping at the end more similar? would look nice and also be a bit easier to read for this level of difficulty http://i.imgur.com/eZQ2r4q.jpg
00:10:446 (1,1) - yea seems nicer if they started 1/4 earlier
00:24:898 (1,1,3) - looks bad ingame with stacking http://i.imgur.com/cdtJjy5.jpg
00:41:544 (1) - ^ // 01:25:629 (3,1,2) - (this one is a bit harder to notice ingame though)
00:58:556 (2) - jump seems quite big and sudden since this part has no jumps at all, would just ctrlg
01:04:593 (2) - ^
01:15:202 (1,1) - removing nc from both of them would make sense with the song and your pattern and make the next one also stand out more

normal
00:06:422 (4,5) - seems a bit too dense for this part
also suddenly following piano when you follow vocals before will really throw newer players off, so maybe use http://i.imgur.com/9V36BuI.jpg or even http://i.imgur.com/pzRAHOI.jpg
00:08:800 - how about a rhythm like http://i.imgur.com/iBwVqM4.jpg here? think that makes more sense with what you did for the rest of this part
00:24:898 - finish here for both of your diffs
00:27:824 - ^

easy
pls no slidertick hitsounds :c
the way they are used your ticks give more hitsound feedback than head and tail which is really annoying to play, especially since your active rhythm follows guitars in many parts which aren't hitsounded at all
you could just remove them and it would be so much nicer
00:16:117 - part just is so weird feedback wise since the tails usually give much more feedback than heads due to your rhythm and the hitsounding
doing the thing suggested at the start of this mod would fix that
01:26:361 - missing nc
01:33:312 - clap?
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nice
feel free to poke me for bubble/qualify
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