CHiCO with HoneyWorks - Ai no Scenario · forum

HabiHolic

5,373 posts

Joined October 2012

HabiHolic 2015-03-09T01:34:46+00:00

Nice job. Good Luck your 1st Ranked!

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Last edited by HabiHolic 2015-03-09T13:47:44+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Kyouren

5,583 posts

Joined October 2012

Kyouren 2015-03-09T09:55:37+00:00

Gratzz~ :3

Euny

2,274 posts

Joined January 2014

Euny 2015-03-09T14:51:39+00:00

축하드려요~ 후읏..랭크로 가버렷..!

NewRulerNA

1,301 posts

Joined December 2010

NewRulerNA 2015-03-09T19:31:13+00:00

few issues here.

red: unrankable issue.
blue: maybe unrankable issue.

do not forget to put the romanized source to tags. so "Magic Kaito 1412" to tags
soft-sliderslide(s) is not 0byte wav file.

[quote="Ranking Criteria":1337]Every .wav file must be at least 100ms long to prevent issues with soundcards. If you want a silent/blank hitsound, then you must use a 0-byte .wav file.50ms sounds are disallow so must use this instead of them -> 0byte wav file

[Hard]

two inherited timing sections. you must remove one.
[quote="Ranking Criteria":1337]No two uninherited or two inherited timing sections should be placed at the same point. An inherited timing section may be placed on an uninherited timing section (but only to change the slider speed). Having two uninherited or two inherited sections on top of each other will cause problems within the beatmap.

Habi, sholud not bubble/rank before error checking, or you will lose trust. pls be careful next time.

HabiHolic

5,373 posts

Joined October 2012

HabiHolic 2015-03-09T22:31:16+00:00

NewRulerNA wrote:
few issues here.

red: unrankable issue.
blue: maybe unrankable issue.

do not forget to put the romanized source to tags. so "Magic Kaito 1412" to tags
soft-sliderslide(s) is not 0byte wav file.

[quote="Ranking Criteria":1337]Every .wav file must be at least 100ms long to prevent issues with soundcards. If you want a silent/blank hitsound, then you must use a 0-byte .wav file.

50ms sounds are disallow so must use this instead of them -> 0byte wav file[Hard]

two inherited timing sections. you must remove one.
[quote="Ranking Criteria":1337]No two uninherited or two inherited timing sections should be placed at the same point. An inherited timing section may be placed on an uninherited timing section (but only to change the slider speed). Having two uninherited or two inherited sections on top of each other will cause problems within the beatmap.

Habi, sholud not bubble/rank before error checking, or you will lose trust. pls be careful next time.>_> forgot checking.. i send mapper PM

Tenseki

803 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Tenseki 2015-03-10T08:51:54+00:00

NewRulerNA wrote:
few issues here.

red: unrankable issue.
blue: maybe unrankable issue.

do not forget to put the romanized source to tags. so "Magic Kaito 1412" to tags
soft-sliderslide(s) is not 0byte wav file.

[quote="Ranking Criteria":1337]Every .wav file must be at least 100ms long to prevent issues with soundcards. If you want a silent/blank hitsound, then you must use a 0-byte .wav file.

50ms sounds are disallow so must use this instead of them -> 0byte wav file[Hard]

two inherited timing sections. you must remove one.
[quote="Ranking Criteria":1337]No two uninherited or two inherited timing sections should be placed at the same point. An inherited timing section may be placed on an uninherited timing section (but only to change the slider speed). Having two uninherited or two inherited sections on top of each other will cause problems within the beatmap.

All Fixed, thanks you for helping my map to be ranked

Len

2,812 posts

Joined June 2012

Len 2015-03-10T15:51:06+00:00

~~익명의 누군가의 부탁에의해 작성한 모딩입니다.~~ 버블 터진김에 모딩하라해서 모딩합니다

이 모딩이 반드시 이 맵에 도움이된다! 라는게 아니고 좋을수도있고 안좋을수도 있으니 꼭 수정하지 않으셔도됩니다.

Doyak:

00:08:519 (1) - 이 슬라하고 00:10:353 (2) - 이슬라가 겹쳐서 좀 보기 안좋은데 00:10:353 (2) - 이거하고 00:11:186 (3) - 이거 위치 각각 다른곳으로 옮기는것도 좋을것같아요 어쩌피 그다음이 브레이크타임이라 배치를 어떻게 마무리지어도 괜찮은 부분이니

Normal:

00:08:519 (1,2,3) - 이거 디스턴스 1.2인데 1.0으로 해주세요.
00:11:186 (1) - 이거하고 00:11:853 (2) - 이거 디스턴스 약간 벌어져있음ㅋㅋ
00:31:853 (3) - 이거하고 00:32:853 (1) - 이것도 마찬가지
여기 일부러 1.1? 00:41:186 (2,3,4,5,6) -
01:01:353 (4) - 이거 매우 위험한데요 ..
다른건 1.0인데 이것만 01:17:519 (4,1) - 0.75?
01:25:519 (3,1) - 이거 차라리 01:25:519 (3) - 를 노트하나로 딱 찍으신다음 뒤에 슬라두개 디스턴스 잡는게 좋을거같아요.
01:26:853 (1) - 이 스핀 01:28:686 - 여기서 끝나는건어떰 다른난이도랑 똑같게

Hard:

00:09:019 (2,3) - 이 배치가 더 좋아보입니다

이부분에서 00:09:353 (3) - 이거하고 00:09:519 (4) - 이거 둘중하나 뉴콤보 넣어주시면 좋을거같네요 01:26:853 (1) - 이거같이
01:00:853 (5) - 이거 좀 떨어뜨리는것도? 184 280쯤?
01:10:186 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - 리딩 매우힘들듯ㅋㅋㅋㅋ

Insane:

00:01:686 (1,2) - 뉴콤 두개 스왑?
00:09:519 (1,2,1) - 이 슬라하고 노트들 이런 배치는어떱니까

img

code

첫번째 슬라 시작부분 0.75가아닌 0.8입니다. 이 슬라 배치 사용하실려면 00:09:519 - 여기있는 초록선 0.8로해주세요.

388,156,9519,6,0,B|444:164|480:124|480:124|428:180|452:256|452:256|392:240|344:248|320:284|316:324|316:324|364:336,1,459.2,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,340,10769,2,0,L|404:336,7,20.5,4|0|0|0|0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,364,11186,5,8,0:0:0:0:

00:41:519 (9) - 이거 그냥 노트2개로 바꿔주시는게 좋을거같아요

Good Luck~

HabiHolic

5,373 posts

Joined October 2012

HabiHolic 2015-03-11T09:57:53+00:00

일단 패스트님이 모딩하신건 고치시는게 좋다고 생각해요

패스트님 모딩 고치시구 불러주세요 T.T

Doyak

osu! Alumni

2,621 posts

Joined November 2012

Doyak 2015-03-11T11:52:41+00:00

맵 주인의 IRC 모딩 수정본

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: PV.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 63436
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 44519,81519,88532
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.3

[Metadata]
Title:Ai no Scenario
TitleUnicode:アイのシナリオ
Artist:CHiCO with HoneyWorks
ArtistUnicode:CHiCO with HoneyWorks
Creator:Tenseki
Version:Doyak's Easy
Source:まじっく快斗1412
Tags:Magic Kaito 1412 tv size opening A-1 Pictures Inc jieusieu Doyak
BeatmapID:635067
BeatmapSetID:275461

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:2.5
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:2.5
SliderMultiplier:0.96
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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0,0,"BG.png",0,0
//Break Periods
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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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256,192,87019,12,0,88686,0:0:0:0:

HabiHolic

5,373 posts

Joined October 2012

HabiHolic 2015-03-11T12:35:58+00:00

갹..

Last edited by HabiHolic 2015-03-11T14:47:53+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

HabiHolic

5,373 posts

Joined October 2012

HabiHolic 2015-03-11T12:38:52+00:00

Rebubbled!

Nest BN : 00:10:769 (2,1) - Insane diff this checking please~

Len

2,812 posts

Joined June 2012

Len 2015-03-11T12:41:52+00:00

리버블이두번?

Tenseki

803 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Tenseki 2015-03-11T13:17:48+00:00

Notice
I just do self-bubbled pop cuz i think i have to fix more things
sorry Habiholic

Last edited by Tenseki 2015-03-13T17:56:25+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Akiyama Mizuki

2,710 posts

Joined March 2009

Akiyama Mizuki 2015-03-11T13:36:39+00:00

몇 가지만 잡아봐도 될까요

Doyak's Easy
00:09:853 (1) - 블랭킷 되게 슬라이더 다듬기

SPOILER

260,56,9853,6,0,B|192:135|192:135|136:104|64:132|32:224|100:280|100:280|106:307,1,384,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

00:25:853 (4) - 슬라이더가 안 이쁜데요

SPOILER

236,184,25853,2,0,B|264:144|336:144|364:184|364:184|332:232,1,192,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

Normal
별로 문제될 건 없어 보이지만, 1/2 노트 스택은 제가 이돌라의 서커스에서 상당히 지적받았던 부분인 만큼 수정이 필요하다면 해야할 거라고 생각합니다.

Hard
00:09:519 (1) - 슬라이더 좀 다듬어봤습니다.

SPOILER

336,196,9519,6,0,B|376:256|340:328|340:328|276:280|216:328|216:328|156:376|92:328,1,408.8,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

00:10:769 (2) -

01:17:019 (3) - 슬라이더가 영 별로이니 이전 노트랑 블랭킷 시켜봅시다.

SPOILER

419,248,77019,2,0,B|421:235|421:235|399:193|347:173|296:194,1,146

01:22:186 (2) - 이런 모양은 어떠신가요

SPOILER

98,226,82186,2,0,B|136:192|120:160|104:120|104:120|89:80,1,146,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

01:24:519 (1,2,3) - 이럴 때 훨씬 나아보입니다.

SPOILER

01:26:853 (1) - 뭐 어떻게 해야 할진 모르겠지만 슬라 대충 휘갈긴 거 같습니다. 되도록이면 좀 다듬어 주셨으면..

Insane
00:01:686 (1) - 노트를 x332 y68정도로 옮기면 흐름이 훨씬 나아집니다.
00:05:853 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 전체적으로 이렇게 부탁드립니다. (1)과 (2) 사이 간격이 좀 넓어서 수정이 필요해보입니다. 사진에서 (3)와 (4)의 위치가 바뀐 것도 확인해 주세요.

SPOILER

00:10:769 (2) - 1/8이 이렇게 길게 들어갈만한 리듬 자체가 없습니다. 리듬은

다음 사진과 같습니다. 게다가 00:10:769 (2) - 와 00:11:186 (1) - 의 간격은 고작 1/4 1칸의 리듬 사이에 이렇게 거리가 멀리 떨어져 있습니다. 이 상태에서 어떻게 버블을 받았는지 의심이 갈 정도의 오류군요.
00:15:519 (2,3) - 리듬이 1/2이니 이런 식으로 바꿔보는 건 어떠신가요?

SPOILER

00:31:853 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Sampleset -> Normal. 드럼 소리를 따라갑니다. (1)과 (5)는 Whistle이 있으므로 Additions -> Soft.
00:59:186 (1,2) - 이거 2개 스택 시키는 게 훨씬 자연스러워 보입니다.
01:09:436 (1,2,3) - 그저 제안입니다. 이게 저한텐 자연스러워 보이네요

SPOILER

01:26:853 (1) - 끝부분 좀만 둥글게 해주세요.

jieusieu's Solution

jieusieu is love,
jieusieu is life.

Tenseki

803 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Tenseki 2015-03-11T13:57:28+00:00

bbj0920 wrote:
몇 가지만 잡아봐도 될까요

[Normal]
별로 문제될 건 없어 보이지만, 1/2 노트 스택은 제가 이돌라의 서커스에서 상당히 지적받았던 부분인 만큼 수정이 필요하다면 해야할 거라고 생각합니다.
-스택된 노트들이 없는데요...? 서클이랑 슬라이더 스택된 부분 말하시는거면 그냥 냅둘게요
[Hard]
00:09:519 (1) - 슬라이더 좀 다듬어봤습니다.
SPOILER
336,196,9519,6,0,B|376:256|340:328|340:328|276:280|216:328|216:328|156:376|92:328,1,408.8,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
00:10:769 (2) -
01:17:019 (3) - 슬라이더가 영 별로이니 이전 노트랑 블랭킷 시켜봅시다.
SPOILER
419,248,77019,2,0,B|421:235|421:235|399:193|347:173|296:194,1,146
01:22:186 (2) - 이런 모양은 어떠신가요
SPOILER
98,226,82186,2,0,B|136:192|120:160|104:120|104:120|89:80,1,146,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
01:24:519 (1,2,3) - 이럴 때 훨씬 나아보입니다.
SPOILER
01:26:853 (1) - 뭐 어떻게 해야 할진 모르겠지만 슬라 대충 휘갈긴 거 같습니다. 되도록이면 좀 다듬어 주셨으면..

[Insane]
00:01:686 (1) - 노트를 x332 y68정도로 옮기면 흐름이 훨씬 나아집니다.
00:05:853 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 전체적으로 이렇게 부탁드립니다. (1)과 (2) 사이 간격이 좀 넓어서 수정이 필요해보입니다. 사진에서 (3)와 (4)의 위치가 바뀐 것도 확인해 주세요.
SPOILER
00:10:769 (2) - 1/8이 이렇게 길게 들어갈만한 리듬 자체가 없습니다. 리듬은
다음 사진과 같습니다. 게다가 00:10:769 (2) - 와 00:11:186 (1) - 의 간격은 고작 1/4 1칸의 리듬 사이에 이렇게 거리가 멀리 떨어져 있습니다. 이 상태에서 어떻게 버블을 받았는지 의심이 갈 정도의 오류군요. - 제가 셀프팝을 시킨후 수정한 부분입니다. 버블과는 상관이 없는 부분입니다.
00:15:519 (2,3) - 리듬이 1/2이니 이런 식으로 바꿔보는 건 어떠신가요? -reject
SPOILER
00:31:853 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Sampleset -> Normal. 드럼 소리를 따라갑니다. (1)과 (5)는 Whistle이 있으므로 Additions -> Soft.
00:59:186 (1,2) - 이거 2개 스택 시키는 게 훨씬 자연스러워 보입니다.
01:09:436 (1,2,3) - 그저 제안입니다. 이게 저한텐 자연스러워 보이네요
SPOILER
01:26:853 (1) - 끝부분 좀만 둥글게 해주세요.

All fixed without written 'reject'

HabiHolic

5,373 posts

Joined October 2012

HabiHolic 2015-03-14T10:45:22+00:00

[Insane]

00:10:769 (2,1) - 수정 안하신것같아서 집어봅니다. 그냥 1을 지우고 2번을 1자리까지 늘리는 편이 좋을것같네요
00:15:353 (1,3) - 여긴 뉴콤보 바꿔주세요
00:31:853 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 뒤에 드럼소리 있으니까 힛사 적절하게 넣어주세요

고치시면 불러주시길

Ujimatsu Chiya

2,480 posts

Joined December 2013

Ujimatsu Chiya 2015-03-14T12:27:49+00:00

퀼 애매한거같으면 하비님 버블주시기전에 한번 봐드릴께요.

HabiHolic

5,373 posts

Joined October 2012

HabiHolic 2015-03-14T13:30:05+00:00

Rebubbled!

Rakuen

1,654 posts

Joined March 2013

Rakuen 2015-03-16T00:37:09+00:00

As requested!

Legend

Default = Normal mods
Blue = Strongly recommended
Red = Unrankable issue
Pink = Will be discussed if not changed

General

BG!! @_@ ww

It's cute but maybe not suitable?

Change it ? >_<

Doyak's Easy

00:04:519 (3) - Inconsistent DS (use 1.0)
00:40:853 - 00:41:519 - Slider tick clap?
00:46:853 (2) - Try not to stack on 00:45:186 (4) - , hard to read
00:48:853 (1) - ^ same to 00:46:853 (2) -
01:23:519 - Clap?

Normal

00:10:686 (4) - NC (gap)
00:43:186 - Finish
00:47:519 - Remove clap sounds nicer imo
00:52:686 - Maybe remove clap here too?

Hard

00:07:186 (1,2,3,4,1) - Use same DS :3 (little messy)
00:08:519 - Finish
00:21:853 - Finish
00:43:186 - ^ ?
00:45:853 - ^ ??

Insane

00:01:686 (1) - Remove NC
00:21:853 - Finish
00:29:686 (1) - Swap NC with 00:29:853 (2) -
00:34:853 (5,6) - Too close to others, make it more jumpy? :3
00:43:186 - Finishu!
01:07:186 - ^ (to be same as 01:17:853 - )
01:25:019 (1) - Maybe swap NC 01:25:186 (3) - ? (stream > slider)

Call me back!

HabiHolic

5,373 posts

Joined October 2012

HabiHolic 2015-03-16T01:45:12+00:00

gogogogogo!!!

Aka

1,777 posts

Joined January 2012

Aka 2015-03-16T13:03:47+00:00

whats wrong with these bgs wtfffffff

Tenseki

803 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Tenseki 2015-03-16T13:14:34+00:00

Rakuen wrote:
As requested!

Legend
Default = Normal mods
Blue = Strongly recommended
Red = Unrankable issue
Pink = Will be discussed if not changed

General
BG!! @_@ ww

It's cute but maybe not suitable?

Change it ? >_< - i think this BG correlates with anime characteristic(about HAT). But if it is unrankable, i will change it
Please reply about this when you recheck.

Normal
00:10:686 (4) - NC (gap) -k
00:43:186 - Finish -k
00:47:519 - Remove clap sounds nicer imo -k
00:52:686 - Maybe remove clap here too? -k

Hard
00:07:186 (1,2,3,4,1) - Use same DS :3 (little messy) -k
00:08:519 - Finish - reject, why you put here a finish? i want to know a reason:)
00:21:853 - Finish -k
00:43:186 - ^ ? -k
00:45:853 - ^ ?? -k

Insane
00:01:686 (1) - Remove NC -k
00:21:853 - Finish -k
00:29:686 (1) - Swap NC with 00:29:853 (2) - -k
00:34:853 (5,6) - Too close to others, make it more jumpy? :3 - reject, i think distance trap maybe necessary
00:43:186 - Finishu! -k
01:07:186 - ^ (to be same as 01:17:853 - ) -delete both of them
01:25:019 (1) - Maybe swap NC 01:25:186 (3) - ? (stream > slider) -k

Call me back!

thx modding i call back ASAP!

Last edited by Tenseki 2015-03-17T09:44:59+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Doyak

osu! Alumni

2,621 posts

Joined November 2012

Doyak 2015-03-16T17:21:47+00:00

Rakuen wrote:
Doyak's Easy
00:04:519 (3) - Inconsistent DS (use 1.0) Fixed.
00:40:853 - 00:41:519 - Slider tick clap? alright.
00:46:853 (2) - Try not to stack on 00:45:186 (4) - , hard to read
00:48:853 (1) - ^ same to 00:46:853 (2) - This part (including the one above this) has a loooooooong story and current shape is suggested by Tenseki. I'll have to talk with him again for that...
01:23:519 - Clap? ok.

수정본

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Artist:CHiCO with HoneyWorks
ArtistUnicode:CHiCO with HoneyWorks
Creator:Tenseki
Version:Doyak's Easy
Source:まじっく快斗1412
Tags:Magic Kaito 1412 tv size opening A-1 Pictures Inc jieusieu Doyak
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368,336,28519,2,0,P|424:324|444:284,1,96,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
378,221,29186,2,0,L|291:182,1,96,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,108,29853,6,0,P|202:155|293:273,1,336,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,232,32519,6,0,P|189:244|235:233,1,96,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
193,146,33186,2,0,P|244:135|290:154,1,96,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,152,33853,2,0,P|406:121|464:92,2,96,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,232,34853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,308,35186,6,0,L|176:336,1,96,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,268,35853,2,0,L|204:241,1,96,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,192,36519,2,0,P|300:132|204:156,1,192,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,304,37853,6,0,P|360:296|392:248,2,96,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,320,38853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
136,264,39186,2,0,P|93:240|79:184,1,96,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,180,39853,2,0,P|213:155|269:171,1,96,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
233,255,40519,6,8,P|356:184|240:64,1,336,2|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,268,43186,6,0,P|384:248|336:244,1,96,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,296,43853,2,0,P|196:288|156:260,1,96,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,212,44519,2,0,L|36:224,2,48,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,156,45186,2,0,P|220:160|268:132,1,96,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,72,45853,6,0,P|440:72|424:136,1,192,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
349,166,46853,2,0,B|276:179|242:109|242:109|188:167,1,192
230,244,47853,2,0,P|305:295|389:257,1,192,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
314,200,48853,6,0,L|330:92,2,96,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
230,244,49853,2,0,P|178:249|123:277,1,96,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
42,275,50519,2,0,P|24:220|24:176,1,96,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,108,51186,6,0,P|156:48|260:52,1,192,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,108,52186,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,192,52519,2,0,P|339:279|158:257,1,288,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,180,53853,6,0,L|44:220,2,96,6|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,244,55186,2,0,L|408:284,2,96,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,52,56519,6,0,P|264:80|236:128,1,96,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,204,57186,1,2,0:0:0:0:
236,292,57519,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,352,57853,2,0,P|362:346|412:312,2,96,12|8|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,260,58853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
308,168,59186,6,0,P|208:88|128:88,1,192,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,240,60519,2,0,P|136:320|216:320,1,192,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,264,61519,1,2,0:0:0:0:
348,208,61853,6,0,P|404:180|420:144,2,96,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,172,62853,2,0,L|204:160,1,48,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,280,64519,6,0,P|88:284|48:320,2,96,4|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,324,65519,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,292,65853,2,0,L|412:244,1,96,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,172,66519,2,0,P|408:156|352:168,1,96,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,200,67186,5,2,0:0:0:0:
200,136,67519,1,8,0:0:0:0:
116,88,67853,2,0,P|72:88|24:124,1,96,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,212,68519,2,0,L|28:312,2,96,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,180,69519,2,0,P|164:172|212:196,1,96,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,260,70186,5,8,0:0:0:0:
368,300,70519,2,0,L|368:352,2,48,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,224,71186,1,2,0:0:0:0:
424,128,71519,2,0,L|424:32,2,96,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,184,72519,6,0,P|268:208|148:64,1,288,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
223,10,73853,2,0,P|263:-2|327:22,2,96,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
267,94,74853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
293,186,75186,6,0,P|280:236|254:282,1,96,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,344,75853,2,0,L|96:360,1,96,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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221,349,80186,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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272,247,81519,1,8,0:0:0:0:
196,188,81853,2,0,P|148:188|108:164,2,96,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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148,140,84186,1,8,0:0:0:0:
188,228,84519,2,0,P|280:331|418:287,1,288,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,212,85853,5,6,0:0:0:0:
352,116,86353,2,0,P|276:92|208:104,1,144,6|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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Tenseki

803 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Tenseki 2015-03-17T09:18:55+00:00

All done. Recheck please with my rejected things

Rakuen

1,654 posts

Joined March 2013

Rakuen 2015-03-17T13:52:52+00:00

Recheck!

no kd

Legend

Default = Normal mods
Blue = Strongly recommended
Red = Unrankable issue
Pink = Will be discussed if not changed

General

The BG is rankable

But it would effect the players when they picking maps to download, it looks strange for me .-.

The song is so nice tho ;3

Maybe try one of these?:

Image

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Just some hitsounds suggestions, change only if you like it

Doyak's Easy

00:43:186 - Finish?
00:47:853 - Whistle > clap?
00:49:186 - ^ same, they sound more like clap QAQ

Normal

00:48:519 - Clap > whistle

Hard

00:10:769 (2,3) - Make this like 01:28:603 (2) - ?
00:45:853 - Clap > whistle?
00:47:519 - Remove clap, and add whistle at 00:47:686 - ?
00:47:853 - Swap hitsound with 00:48:103 -
00:48:519 - Clap > whistle?

Insane

00:45:853 - Clap > whsitle (like Hard)
00:47:353 (2) - Add clap

Others are ready to go :3

Call me back!

Tenseki

803 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Tenseki 2015-03-17T15:16:42+00:00

Rakuen wrote:
Recheck!

no kd

Legend
Default = Normal mods
Blue = Strongly recommended
Red = Unrankable issue
Pink = Will be discussed if not changed

General
The BG is rankable

But it would effect the players when they picking maps to download, it looks strange for me .-.

The song is so nice tho ;3

Maybe try one of these?: -Sorry i use BG using now

Image

_

Just some hitsounds suggestions, change only if you like it

Doyak's Easy
00:43:186 - Finish?
00:47:853 - Whistle > clap?
00:49:186 - ^ same, they sound more like clap QAQ

Normal
00:48:519 - Clap > whistle

Hard
00:10:769 (2,3) - Make this like 01:28:603 (2) - ?
00:45:853 - Clap > whistle?
00:47:519 - Remove clap, and add whistle at 00:47:686 - ?
00:47:853 - Swap hitsound with 00:48:103 -
00:48:519 - Clap > whistle?

Insane
00:45:853 - Clap > whsitle (like Hard)
00:47:353 (2) - Add clap

Others are ready to go :3

Call me back!

All fixed without BG and two suggestions.