doublepost
[Oni]
I'm not used to seeing your name not on the picture :^)
[Oni]
I'm not used to seeing your name not on the picture :^)
- 00:56:505 (1) - Remove this? Just seems a little forced since everything is very faint and you have the "dead" voice sample on the 1/1 later on that is very noticeable.
- 02:02:240 (7,8,9) - Remove these, it adds a lot to the fade-out here and I think it's pretty nice.
- 02:48:917 (1,1,2,1,2,3,1) - Instead of using this, why not try something else that fits a bit more. From 02:48:740 - 02:49:270 - leaving the 1/4 after empty and adding a finisher on 02:49:446 (1).
- 03:59:417 (1) - This was a bit awkward and out of nowhere, move this to 03:59:505 and change 03:58:887 (2) - to a d. This would keep a little consistency and variety as well as a bit better playability.
- 04:05:064 (1) - Move this to 04:05:152 just like the one above.