Kawaiwkyik wrote:

[General]

1. snap好preview time

[Chloe]

1. 00:58:435 (3,1) - 尾有點高 會難讀出00:58:763 (1) -
2. 01:05:976 (3) - 頭的clap有點怪 建議remove
3. 01:08:271 (2) - ^
4. 01:20:894 (1,2,1,2) - 換成兩個三角的跳? 这个不了 别的都改了
   
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[Cilvery's Insane]

1. 00:01:386 (1) - should be snap on 00:01:358 - ?(1/12) 这里应该是对的 没改
2. 00:15:648 - add a note on x392 y104, why ignore drum 她这里自创跟钢琴吧 看whistle的下法
3. 00:52:697 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - stack together? so weird nowfixed

[Flourite's Hard]

1. 00:20:566 (1) - 這裡用一個spinner帶過比slider更帶感, 或者也可以拆開這個滑條. 感觉会被fd打
   
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   而排版大致推薦這樣
   
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2. 00:23:189 - finish好
3. 00:24:501 (2) - 尾whistle不好听 下同
4. 00:27:123 (2) - ^
5. 00:32:205 (5) - finish好
6. 00:35:976 - 加個note?看了下节奏总体是跟VOCAL 算了

[ZZH's Normal]

1. 00:02:697 (3,4) - 有點太遠 可能會被dqx'd

應該沒問題了
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OniJAM wrote:

title有空格的吧……Aoi Eir - INNOCENCE (TV Size Ver.)

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appleeaterx wrote:

@OniJAM 没有空格.. 看看这里吧

ArtistUnicode:藍井エイル

Kagamine Ren wrote:

大家都别用简体了哈哈哈

yf_bmp wrote:

And change Normal diff'sname to ZZH's Normal
Add ZZHBOY to tags.

kkk wrote:

I hope someone will unrank this shit.

1. Incorrect artist name, read this post for more details
2. In the Kirito vs Asuna diff, 01:22:205 (3) - 's repeat and slider end are very quiet and almost inaudible
3. 01:24:009 (1) - In the Kirito vs Asuna diff, this touches out of screen, please move it more onto the playing field
4. Kirito vs Asuna diff could stand to be improved, the following lists some criticisms that should be taken seriously

1. 00:02:042 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,1,1,2,1,2,1,2) - This section of the map is pretty confusing rhythm wise, as the mapper jumps between using vocal stress to having actual beats to nothing at all back up the objects. 00:05:484 (1) - Doesn't land on anything
2. 00:12:697 (1) - Slowdown comes pretty much out of the blue surprisingly, the momentum moving upwards from 00:12:205 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - can cause for some awkward play
3. 00:13:681 (2) - Virtually identical slider to 00:12:697 (1) - but with a higher velocity. They are stacked completely over eachother which can be pretty confusing
4. 00:16:632 (1,2,1,2) - Cool looking pattern, but the decreased spacing on 00:16:960 (1,2) - can kill the momentum
5. 00:29:746 (3) - Could definitely afford to have a more impactful hitsound
6. 00:38:271 (1,2,3) - Pattern moves a bit too quickly at first and then kills that momentum with that 00:38:517 (2) - stack right here, unstacking it a bit more will work tons better
7. 00:42:697 (2,1) - This pause in the play can be disorientating, there is a rhythm to be mapped on 00:42:861 - you can follow
8. 00:52:861 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - These triplets are difficult to maneuver with the pace moving upward and downward. A stacked pattern can work better, but the sharp movements make the play awkward
9. 00:53:353 (3,4,1,2) - Massive jump between 00:54:009 (1,2) - when 00:53:353 (3,4) - is virtually the same rhythm but smaller spacing. It is recommended you try to be consistent here or at least lower the spacing on 00:54:009 (1,2) - . There is little to no momentum for a player to jump to 00:54:173 (2) - in this calmer section
10. 01:02:205 (5,1) - 1 is shoved too far into the corner, and with the 1/4 distance the player will have little momentum to carry on into this 01:02:533 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - high spaced circle pattern that follows
11. 01:08:271 (2,3,4) - This little reverse stack is kind of bizarre to see when playing, definitely would recommend something different here
12. 01:15:812 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Pattern is a bit too cramped imo, could stand to be expanded
13. -01:25:730 (2,3) - Same weird reverse stack thing