1. EZ - 4Key (1.18 stars, 331 notes)
2. HD+ - 4Key (3.18 stars, 1120 notes)
3. Lenfried's HD - 4Key (2.82 stars, 824 notes)
4. MX - 4Key (3.84 stars, 1411 notes)
5. NM - 4Key (1.89 stars, 641 notes)

SPAS-ID wrote:

SV ( MX Diff )

SV

10721,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,50,0,0
10900,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,50,0,0
10986,-200,4,2,1,50,0,0
11072,-100,4,2,1,10,0,0
22106,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
22193,-100,4,2,1,5,0,0
32796,-25,4,2,1,75,0,0
32969,-100,4,2,1,75,0,0
33006,-200,4,2,1,75,0,0
33141,-100,4,2,1,10,0,0
66244,-200,4,2,1,5,0,0
76934,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,50,0,0
77007,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
77096,-200,4,2,1,50,0,0
77193,-400,4,2,1,50,0,0
77279,-100,4,2,1,5,0,0
88055,-200,4,2,1,50,0,0
88262,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
88313,-100,4,2,1,15,0,1
110382,-100,4,2,1,5,0,0

Copy The Number And Replace All The SV With That ( Changes : x4 = x.1.5 thats just makin ur map harder to get ranked, not attached SV )

SPAS-ID wrote:

MOD

NM

NM
OD = 9 ( theres only 16 LN )
1. Change Diff Name Into EZ
2. Make It Harder ( Max 2 Stars )

HD

HD
77144,-400,4,2,1,30,0,0 Change The Speed To x0.4 ( 0.25 Is to SLOW )

:D

SPAS-ID wrote:

Mod D:

EZ
1.LN from 00:05:551 to 00:06:930 on the left side
2.Delete this note 00:10:720 (10720|0) - ( 3 notes are to hard for "EZ" D: ) - ( 3 notes are to hard for "EZ" D: )

NM
1.00:06:240 (6240|1,6413|0) - 2hard4nm
2.Add 3 note from 01:07:236 to - 01:07:581 ( white-red-white ) and 01:07:926 to 01:07:926 ( white-red-white ) on 1 same line ( or make it like stair )[/center]

Overall :
EZ : 8.5/10 its good but to many single note D:
NM : 7.5/10 to many repeated notes D: love the ending tho

ShikiNoHollow wrote:

hurm , malaysian beatmapper , =,= ..... >w<b good luck

Remillion Cross wrote:

hi, come here for check as i said, but sorry i'm so late gulp

Just a check, and if you don't satisfied then don't kudos me

MX

1. Since this diff had so many LNs, then using OD 9 will be very difficult. At least, change to 8.
2. Change the HP to 8. This is hard diff, right ?
   
3. In some reason, i found that 00:06:240 (6240|0,6757|3,6930|1) - is fit with the song, but it's not in 00:09:170 (9170|3,9342|2) - . You need to move the slider's end at 00:09:687 -
   
   In the case in all diffs (if it's recommended) :
4. 00:56:381 - add one notes here, for following the piano
5. 00:57:760 - in here too
6. 00:59:138 - same here too
7. 01:00:517 - same here too
8. 01:01:206 - same here too
9. I tired for wrote the same things so you should do same in 01:01:895 - 01:02:584 - 01:03:273 - 01:04:652 -
   
10. 01:08:615 - yes yes i know what are you do in this part. you try to follow the little background vocal only with sliders. It's not problem with me, but hey, you shouldn't ignore these 2 piano sound. add a note at 01:08:443 - and 01:08:787 - it looks better.
11. 01:22:485 (82485|2) - highly recommended if you decrease the slider's length. ( end of slider should be in 01:23:088 - )
12. 01:23:778 (83778|3) - yes, same at here too. end of the slider should be in 01:24:467 -
    
13. 01:43:420 (103420|1) - same mistake, the end of slider should be in 01:44:799 -
    
    overall, this diff looks like you only put some random notes in the stream part, you can consider it later.

HD

1. 00:15:373 (15373|3) - putting circle before the long note wouldn't be recommended. Try to move the circle to 2nd
2. 00:22:093 - yes, it's finish or cymbal sound/part. YOu need to add one circle for this one.
3. 00:33:120 - same here too. put in 3rd column
4. 00:57:501 (57501|0) - putting notes for nothing is bad. you should move it too 00:57:415 - since it's had a sound

NM

1. This is NM and use 7,5 as OD isn't good. change to maximal 7
   
2. 00:55:003 (55003|2) - delete
3. 01:22:572 (82572|0) - unnecessary pattern, delete
4. 01:23:950 (83950|1) - move to 01:23:605 - at 3rd column, it looks better and fit with your pattern
5. 01:25:328 (85328|1) - same here, put in 01:24:984 - at 3rd column

EZ

1. HP and OD change to 7 pls, it's too hard
2. okay no problemo here

good luck~!

SPAS-ID wrote:

More Mod

Most Of Them Are Good So I Cant Mod Really Much

EZ

1. Change This Note 01:50:313 (110313|2,110313|3) - Into LN

NM

1.OD 7.5 press shift to make .x

HD

1. 00:37:255 (37255|2,37255|1,37428|0,37428|3,37428|1,37600|1,37600|3,37772|0,37945|0,38117|3,38289|1,38289|3) - Please Change The Note I Think Its To Hard For HD It Should Be HD+
2. OD 8
3. Most Of The Note Are Fine

MX

1. Too Many LN

Karinkishi wrote:

Nice beatmap but MX level is to hard...
I hope you can make the other MX level..TQ human...!
By the way,I still like your beatmap...

Satoshi Kazuki wrote:

Karinkishi wrote:

Nice beatmap but MX level is to hard...
I hope you can make the other MX level..TQ human...!
By the way,I still like your beatmap...

dahek karinkishi :v it's MX level after all "MX" :v :v no kudos for you :c XD

schwarzvgrune wrote:

Hi ~\(≧▽≦)/~
Mod as requested from Grune's modding queue
Mod as requested from Ａｓｔｒａｌ Ｈｏｒｉｚｏｎ
Feel free to implement or reject if you think this is useless ~~o(>_<)o ~~

Icon Bibliography

No emoticon in Black = normal suggestions based on rationale of modding given below~
o(≧v≦)o~~ = everything is good~
Σ( ° △ °|||)︴ = error / mistake / extremely recommended to be modified~
(⊙o⊙)？ = unclear / questionable parts, thus cannot give a decisive recommendations~
O(∩_∩)O~ = other comments~

General : o(≧v≦)o~~
Mapset : o(≧v≦)o~~
Metadata : Σ( ° △ °|||)︴incomplete / incorrect. please consult metadata checker
Timing : o(≧v≦)o~~
Audio : o(≧v≦)o~~
Background : o(≧v≦)o~~
Hitsounding : Σ( ° △ °|||)︴would be nice to add hitsound

|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8|9|10|

In general, I will mod based on these considerations ♪(^∇^*)
( X ) I will not take this into consideration when modding
( √ ) I will take this into consideration when modding
( ? ) I might unconsciously take this into consideration when modding
Pitch Agreement / Relevancy : ( √ )
Hand Balancing : ( √ )
(Consistent) Patterning : ( √ )
Possibility of Long Notes Abuse : ( √ )
Ghost Note : ( √ )
Suggestions / Opinion only : ( √ )

HD

n


00:04:173 (4173|2,5034|0) - drag 1x to right

00:05:551 - until 00:11:065 - revamp all of your LN, you're following just about any sound that you can catch and sustain. inconsistent. decide which sound you're going to follow and map it for the whole phase.

00:11:410 (11410|2) - 4


00:12:099 (12099|1) - 4

i'll just point out some, you have a lot of jacked notes that have no strong justification to be used please revamp all of your pattern where jack notes exist

01:29:981 (89981|2,90153|2,90498|3,90670|3) -
01:31:187 (91187|2,91359|2,91531|2) -

01:32:393 (92393|2,92393|1,92565|0,92565|2,92565|3) - same beat make it consistent
use 2 notes for each or 3. why 2 then 3? t 01:32:738 (92738|0,92738|2,92738|1) - here 3 understandable because of the beat difference.

please recheck all of your diffs for the same reason.

emphasis, consistency, esp. on jacked notes pattern on lower diffs.

Excellent Beatmap!!! Nice Song!!! d(≧v≦)b~~
Good Luck for rank!! O(∩_∩)O

some stuffs which you need to probably get more familiar with
Osu!mania Ranking Criteria
How to Get Your Map Ranked

extra stuffs to make your beatmap more sophisticated
WARNING: CREDIT GOES TO RESPECTIVE USERS, I DID NOT CLAIM ANY RIGHTS TO THEIR WORKS!
hitsound tutorial + download pack
LordRaika's Hitsound Guide

wants to improve your background / audio / video? visit the link below v
Ringating's BG, Audio and Video Improvement Queue

wants to improve / add video for your beatmap? visit the link below v
Shad0w1and's HD Video Encoding Queue

schwarzvgrune wrote:

https://osu.ppy.sh/s/153316

i would assume you stole the data from this map, no?