Xelasto wrote:

Hello from my modding queue

Tuxxy's Easy

00:06:567 (4) - Try and place this on the middle horizontal line.
00:09:567 (2,1) - Try and blanket 1 with 2 better. Use 1's approach circle as a guide to make 2 blanket better.
00:21:942 (3) - Place this more in the middle of 2 and 1, then, using distance snap, drag 1 a bit farther away to fix spacing.
00:21:942 (3,2) - Make these 2 overlap
00:31:317 (1,2,3) - Fix these up like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2460319
00:41:817 (3) - Replace the clap on the end of the slider with a finish
00:43:317 (1,2,3) - Make 1 blanket 2 like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2460337
00:53:442 (2,3) - Use distance snap and make sure these 2 don't overlap
01:04:317 (1,2) - ^
01:14:067 (3,4) - Try and make 4 blanket 3 better.
01:16:317 (1,2,3) - Make more symmetrical https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2460367
00:23:817 - Kiai should end here, not where it is right now. I didn't even notice kiai was on until I looked at the timeline.
00:58:223 - Kiai is not snapped here
01:09:848 - Same thing here ^
00:00:188 - Why a random timing point here 0-0???

Overall this is a good map, but do a few things:
1: Go through AI mod
2: Go through it and use distance snap.
3: Since you are going for a very symmetrical map, and barely any curved sliders, make sure to stick with it. (Make sure everything is perfectly symmetrical.

Normal

00:04:317 (2) - NC (New combo) here rather than on the other note
00:04:317 (2) - Blanket 1 better (use 1's approach circle).
00:08:817 (4) - Drag the top point 1 grid down to blanket 2 better.
00:10:317 (2) - Make the end of this slider point straight up, it looks odd.
00:12:005 (2) - Try and improve the shape to flow with 00:13:317 (1) - better
00:13:317 (1,3) - I know this is difficult but try and make 3's first bump blanket 1 better
00:07:317 (2) - NC here instead of 1
00:10:317 (2) - ^
00:11:817 (1,2) - No NC
00:18:192 (4,1) - Perfectly overlap these two.
00:55:317 (1,2,3) - This is a big no - no This is much too confusing for new players.
01:05:067 (3,1) - Blanket these better.
01:05:067 (3,2) - Overlap these 2 perfectly
01:15:192 (2,3) - ^

Overall this one seemed much smoother to play, BUTT it has some mistakes. The main things you should do are:
1: Go through it once again with distance snap (yes it's important)
2: Make sure the claps are consistent. Claps should ALWAYS be consistent as it doesn't sound good. For this song it should be very white tick... I think.
3:Make sure everything that is supposed to overlap overlaps PERFECTLY. If it doesn't then it doesn't look good. You might have to turn off distance snap for this.
4: Go through AImod

Hard

00:01:317 (1) - No NC
00:08:067 (3,4) - Stack these perfectly
00:45:567 (3,1) - Try and change this up so these 2 stack
01:28:317 (1) - I prefer a spinner but whatever

This difficulty blew me away. ALMOST perfect. but your biggest problem is that the combos are too short for hard mode. There are many combos that are only 3 notes. When people play hard mode they expect a hard map, remember that.

Hyper

00:01:317 (1) - No NC its fine
00:11:817 (2,3) - This looks awkward its fine
00:11:442 (1) - No NC k
00:47:067 (1,2,3,4,1) - Try and re-make this part. Feels awkward. Mabye reverse 3 and 4 it's fine
00:47:817 (1) - No NC it's fine
01:00:004 (2,1) - Stack perfectly k slightly changed
01:19:692 (2) - Try and curve 2 so 4 blankets it ^

This is the same situation with hard. Great flow and everything, except that there is a ton of unnecessary combos. Some are still 3 notes. [/color]

This is a pretty great mapset, however watch out for short combos in the hard levels and Distance errors, imperfect blankets, imperfect overlaps, and hitsound inconsistencies in the easier modes.

byfar wrote:

ts8zs wrote:

[UWOTTTTTTTTT]
needs sampleset I'm actually not quite sure what you meant here add some clap and whistle and finish.
thanks for mod! ~

ts8zs wrote:

add some clap and whistle and finish.

• New combos:
  00:07:317 (6) -
  00:16:317 (5) -
  00:28:129 (5) -
  00:34:317 (5) -
  00:40:317 (5) -
  00:49:317 (6) -
  00:55:317 (6) -
  01:01:317 (5) -
  01:07:317 (5) -
  01:13:317 (5) -
  01:19:317 (5) -
  01:25:129 (5) -
  I think with these new combo the more the map will flow/aesthetics much better

LixRei wrote:

M4M from modding queue (3 days late, but my modding is slow, pls forgive).
I use bold font only when I spot some conflict with RC. Underlines are in case something is questionable.

[Overview]

1. Your diffs should all end on the same place. Most diffs end on 01:29:629 - ; but Tsumi's Extra ends on 01:23:629 - , Yuzuriha's Hard ends on 01:29:817 - and Normal on 01:23:817 - . You should discuss with every GD mapper to end diffs on same spot, since I think last part is worth mapping (and you don't seem to have a special reason to not map everything). fixed my own. GD'ers can choose to do whatever they want.

[Easy]

1. My main concern with this diff is the fact you use some 1/2 rhythm. Such rhythm shouldn't be used on Easy if it can be avoided since it's too fast and ankward for beginners. i'm keeping some of it. tbh my normal doesnt even use 1/2 as much as my easy. i'm considering turning this into a normal instead
2. 00:11:817 (3,4) - This is an example of the thing above, and can be easily avoided if you follow vocal instead. Vocal follows white ticks, so it's easier to play than the drums. This is a good rhythm IMO, but you can place other things you wish (another slider instead of reverse, circles, etc.). ^ mapping instrumentals
3. 00:19:317 (1) - This thing is just a little outside of screen and lefts an ankward 3/2 rhythm to follow, since players have to click 00:20:442 (2) - next, and that's hard to play since polarity changed (from 1/1 mapping to 3/2 mapping, making readability of notes ankward). You should move this slider and [/color]extend it so that it ends in 00:20:067 - to make an easier gameplay (it still follows vocals at some point, so I think it's okay). ^
4. 00:24:567 (7,8,1) - You should also just follow vocals here. I suggest this since players right now have to click (1) too fast, and that's a bit hard for them, since they aren't used to fast rhythms. Just extend 00:24:567 (7) - until it ends on 00:24:942 - Also, (7) and (1) are sightly touching the HP bar, so you should move them down.
5. 00:26:067 (2,3) - You're better turning those sliders into a simple 3/2 slider with a reverse. It's easier to play, and since it has the reverse on the red tick, it doesn't throw players off. img doesnt work and i'm mapping the instrumentals
6. 00:27:567 (3,4) - ^^ i'm mapping the instrumentals
7. 00:29:067 (6,7) - This part is a bit bothersome, since only 1/2 notes here. In this place I suggest turning (6) in a 3/2 slider and placing a circle on 00:30:004 - . Since the slider forces a change in polarity, players will have to recover a bit, but I think doing this is easier than letting it as it is.
8. 00:30:379 (8,9) - Erase circle (8) and move slider to 00:30:379 - to make this part easier. This leaves a gap of 3/2 between slider end and 00:31:317 (1) - , but it should be alright, since (1) is a long slider...no
9. 00:31:192 - Is this green timing section necessary? I can't see any utility for it.changed
10. 00:31:293 - Eh... this timing section shouldn't actually be snapped to 00:31:317 - ? There isn't any reason for you to snap it at 1/16. changed
11. 00:31:317 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - What's with this incredibly long combo? You should place a NC on 00:37:317 (9) - (I suggest this one, based on what I guess it's your NC pattern). changed
12. 00:50:442 (7,8) - Those two overlap a little bit. You can simply move (8) to the right to solve it. (I'm kinda nitpicky with overlaps ) it's fine really
13. 00:56:817 (8,9) - I think you should turn those two into sliders, to avoid 3/2 clicks.
14. 01:00:942 (4) - This one is almost touching the HP bar, so you should be careful with it. yea
15. 01:10:317 (1,2,3) - I'm not really fond of this overlap, but it flows quite nicely. *_* yea keeping though
16. 01:14:067 (6,7,8) - ^^ yea keeping though
17. 01:16:317 (1,2) - I suggest erasing (2) and adding a reverse to (1) to avoid that hard to read 3/2 click.^
18. 01:21:567 (9) - Eh... here I guess you can just erase the reverse and extend the slider for it to be 1/1, to avoid that complicated 1/2 rhythm. ^
19. As for everything after Kiai, I think you can just take what I suggested in 00:26:067 (2,3) - , 00:27:567 (3,4) - and 00:29:067 (6,7) - to change that 1/2 rhythm. But be careful when making changes, since right now 01:27:379 (9) - is touching the HP bar.
20. Overall, it's a good diff and sounds good, but a good sound in easy should also be an easy sound to produce IMO.ty

OK. this is a GREAT mod. I will definitely use this if I ever decide to change my easy to a normal & create a new easy. I just don't feel like changing up 1/2 since that's the entire theme of my easy diff

[Normal]

1. Eh... I can see several of your timing sections on this diff are just snapped to 1/6 and I can't see the reason for it, so I'll mention them below.
2. 00:01:317 (1,2,3) - The blanket of those sliders with (2) seems to be sightly off. Check it out. k
3. 00:02:817 (3,2) - I think the end of those two should be perfectly stacked, but right now it isn't. Stack them properly and remember to check the blanket of 00:03:942 (1,2) - afterwards. If you can't stack them as they are right now, you can erase 00:03:942 (1) - for a moment, then Ctrl + G 00:04:317 (2) - and stack. After that, add (1) again and Ctrl + G (2) to have it as it is right now. k
4. 00:04:317 (2,2) - Those should also be perfectly stacked. k
5. 00:08:817 (4,1) - This blanket is sightly off. k
6. 00:11:504 - Is there any reason for this timing section to be snapped at 1/6? Shouldn't it be actually snapped to 00:11:442 - or 00:11:817 - ? oops
7. 00:13:317 (1,2) - ^^ oops
8. 00:17:067 (3,4,5) - Stacks of the ends of 00:17:067 (3,5) - are imperfect and blanket of 00:18:192 (4,5) - is sightly off. Also, the shape of 00:18:567 (5) - is kinda weird since you use more anchors to create slider than what you should. Just with three anchors is enough to create a slider like that. oops
9. 00:19:692 (2,3,4,5) - I think this pattern is kinda hard to read for a Normal. Can you think about it? Also, the blanket of 00:19:692 (2,4,5) - is sightly off.
10. 00:23:817 (4) - You should be careful with the end of this thing, since it's practically touching the HP bar. it's fine.. i think
11. 00:26:067 (3,4) - Spacing issue detected. On Easy and Normal, your spacing needs to be consistent (it seems you've mapped with 0.9x DS, but those break that scale). Correct it using the distance snap. it's not really that huge. plus i only use 1x on emphasis
12. 00:26:629 (4,1) - I think the blanket of those two (if you intended to blanket) is sightly off. You should check it. oops
13. 00:28:692 (3,4) - ^^ oops
14. 00:30:379 (3,4) - ^^ oops
15. 00:31:192 - Same as 00:11:504 - I think this one should either be snapped to 00:31:129 - (the slider tick) or 00:31:317 - oops
16. 00:31:692 (1,2) - This blanket also seems to be off (yeah, I love blankets xP ) oops
17. 00:33:192 (4,1) - ^^ oops
18. 00:36:567 (2,3) - ^^ oops
19. 00:43:192 - Another timing section snapped at 1/6 without any apparent reason. I think it should be on 00:42:942 - or 00:43:317 - oops
20. 00:44:442 (5,2,3) - #naziblanketmod. oops
21. 00:48:567 (3,1) - ^^ oops
22. 00:56:442 (3,4) - Spacing issue... ^
23. 00:57:942 - I think this timing section isn't necessary, since it isn't doing anything right now, and Kiai starts shortly after. Delete it? yea
24. 00:58:317 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing change and imperfect blankets here. yea
25. 00:59:442 (3,1) - Imperfect stack here. yea
26. 01:01:692 (3,4,5) - (3) and (5) aren't perfectly stacked, and blanket of (4) and (5) is imperfect. yea
27. 01:03:192 ~ 01:08:817 - During this whole area, you changed DS value, when it should be constant among the whole map.
28. 01:03:192 (1,2) - Imperfect blanket. yea
29. 01:05:067 (3,1,2) - ^^yea
30. 01:09:942 (3,2) - Those should be perfectly stacked, and that corrects a blanket in the meanwhile.yea
31. 01:10:192 - Another section snapped to 1/6. I think this one should be on 01:10:317 -yea
32. 01:12:567 (1,3) - Overlapping like this isn't exactly good-looking.
33. 01:13:692 (3,1) - Stack those two (1 is making a perfect blanket, so you should place 3 right above 1).
34. 01:17:067 (3,5,7) - Stack perfectly (3) and the end of (5) properly and (7) under the start of (5).
35. 01:22:504 (1) - This thing should actually end at 01:23:629 - , since the strong sound is there. However, do you really think you should end the diff here, when you can continue mapping a good rhythm after this?
36. Too much nazi mod for this diff. Stacks are to avoid what's called overlapping. Aesthetics are kinda lacking in this diff IMHO, but it can be heavely improved after this. i think u spent too much time on this lol. thanks for it though

[Hyper]

1. 00:12:754 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - WTF? This pattern is so hard to read since slider is perfectly covered by the stream. It's also unrankeable since slider is fully covered, and that's restricted by RC. Move the slider path somewhere else. At least, make the borders of the slider visible. yeah considering
2. 00:23:067 (2,3) - Omg, this jump. Just because it's a Hyper doesn't make it a full Insane. You should reduce the distance of the jump, or invert the order of 00:22:692 (1,2) - not really a jump, it's a 1/4 repeating slider jump that requires alternating
3. 00:48:192 - I usually don't mod hitsounds, but the sudden change in the sounds here is kinda unfitting. You should keep using the "Custom 3" sample, since drums still continue on melody. k
4. 00:57:567 - You could continue the stream here, since guitar sound's still there, and continue stream until Kiai starts (with sliders like 00:57:942 (3) - of course).yea
5. 01:09:192 (8,9) - Again, I think this jump is overkill. ^
6. 01:19:317 (1,2,3,4) - ^^ ^
7. Also, all around this diff, there are notes that you can stack. I don't know why you don't do it (or maybe, you're just making manual stacks), but you should stack those notes if possible. Examples are 00:04:317 (3,6) - , 00:07:879 (5,1) - , 00:17:442 (5,2) - and many others. You should check this diff and see what you can do with that. k

Since I'm no expert in modding harder diffs (and my map only has four diffs), I'll leave the mod until here.
Good luck!ty

LixRei wrote:

M4M from modding queue (3 days late, but my modding is slow, pls forgive).
I use bold font only when I spot some conflict with RC. Underlines are in case something is questionable.

[Yuzuriha's Hard]

1. 00:00:563 (1,2,1) - I think those jumps are kinda overkill for a Hard (since 1/4 too fast, and players could slider-break). You should map them with constant DS, since right now they are too hard IMO. OK~
2. 00:02:817 (3,4) - You should create a perfect blanket here.
3. 00:07:692 (2,3) - ^^ OK~
4. 00:23:067 (3,1) - Eh... I'm kinda against overlapping sliders like this, but it's your style (and flow is still good), so do what you wish (mentioning it since anyone else could mention it).
5. 00:25:129 ~ 00:30:754 - You should actually map this part for consistency between diffs, since this is the only diff with a spinner and a break while the other diffs have it mapped. fm ... If you said to other people, I will change
   
6. 01:01:129 (5,1) - Blanket those perfectly. OK~
7. Wow, this diff is so goood. I liked it (except for the overlaps, but besides that it's very funny).
   
   thanks ~
   

Good luck!

1. Remove Tuxxy from tags? He hasn't got a gd for this map anymore, so you can safely remove him.

1. This diff could use some more hitsounds, they seem very scarce in comparison to most other diffs in the mapset.
2. 00:19:317 (1) - On my resolution, the edge of this slider is off the screen! This is unrankable:
   
   

   Ranking Criteria wrote:

   Hitobjects must never be off-screen. All mapsets are played from a fixed-screen viewpoint, so any hitobjects that are even partially off-screen can make it very difficult to read the pattern they are following. Test play your map to confirm this.

   I highly recommend fixing this.
   
   
3. 00:24:567 (7,1) - I know you've already moved these down when applying the previous mod, but I think they should be lower; (1) is literally touching the hp bar, which can still cause reading issues.
4. 00:28:129 (5) - This slider goes offscreen as well.
5. 00:29:629 (7,8,9) - Flow in this pattern could be improved, since (7) seems to curve away from (8), meaning that the player is going to have to make a sharp turn to hit it once they complete the slider.
6. 00:50:442 (7,8) - Not too fond of this overlap, it looks very untidy compared to the rest of the map. The pattern would look a whole lot better without this overlap. Just move (8) a bit and it should be fine.
7. 01:11:817 (3,4) - The blanket over (4) could be improved, just adjust the shape of (3) a bit until (4) and the slider border going round it are perfectly parallel.

1. 00:27:567 (6,7) - Why is (7) only spaced 0.60x away from (6)? This can confuse players, since it looks like a 1/2, so I suggest moving (7) to a more appropriate place using the distance snap.
2. 00:33:192 (4,5,6) - You should turn this into an equilateral triangle because it will look a lot nicer that way. Right now though, the triangle is slightly off, which looks untidy and scruffy.
3. 00:35:067 (2) - Add a clap on this sliderend, otherwise it will go against your hitsound pattern, and the note will sound odd and out of place compared to the rest of the map.
4. 00:45:567 (3,1,2,3) - Flow could be improved here, you might want to ctrl+g (1,2) and move the second (3) to the appropriate place on the distance snap . You can also improve the shape by doing this, improving aesthetics as well.
5. 01:06:942 (2) - Add a clap here, otherwise it will be inconsistent; causing it to sound odd with the rest of the map.
6. 01:24:192 (6) - Add a new combo here, combos are meant to break up patterns, making it easier to read, but when things get inconsistent like this, it gets confusing. A 10 combo is also too high, and could leave players without much HP since an NC'd note is usually worth more HP.
7. 01:28:363 (1) - The end of this spinner is way too loud, doesn't make sense considering the volume of the music is extremely quiet. Like you did in some of the other diffs, you should add a green line before the spinner at 5%, because it would sound a lot nicer that way.

1. 00:25:129 - 00:30:754 - To keep consistency with other difficulties, you should map this part. It is perfectly mappable, and every other difficulty does it.
2. 00:46:317 (1,2) - The flow to (2) could be a bit better, because the player has to make a sharp 90° turn after completing the slider, which doesn't play well imo. Either move (2) or curve (1) a bit more.
3. 01:28:317 (1) - It would sound a lot nicer if you shorten this slider to the red tick at 01:29:629 - , because that's where the music actually ends. Having it on the powerful downbeat because it is stronger won't make sense, because if there isn't any music, there isn't any beat either. Shortening it to the red tick will also keep it consistent with the other difficulties. Don't forget to move the green point to the appropriate place as well after doing this.

1. 00:15:567 (6) - Add an NC here, otherwise it will go against your NC pattern and be inconsistent, causing confusion between players, since NCs are to break down patterns.
2. 00:41:817 (1,3) - This blanket could be fixed; right now it is a little off, making it look untidy. In order to make a good blanket, make sure that the approach circle and the edge of the slidertrail are parallel.
3. 00:50:067 (5,7) - Why is there a clap at (5)? This is incredibly inconsistent with your hitsound pattern, and I suggest adding a clap at (7) instead. Otherwise the entire pattern will sound out of place with the rest of your map.
   01:02:817 (1) - The edge of this slider goes offscreen! This is unrankable, so I highly suggest fixing this.
4. 01:08:817 (7) - Like I said for 00:15:567 (6) -, you should add an NC here, otherwise your NC pattern will be inconsistent.
5. 01:12:004 (1,2) - Why is there a clap at (1) instead of (2). This goes against your hitsound pattern, making the pattern sound very odd and inconsistent compared to the rest of the map.

1. 00:14:067 (3,4) - It would look nicer if you moved (4) so that is is blanketed under (3). Right now though, it doesn't look very nice. Don't forget to fix the triangle pattern after moving (4).
2. 00:44:442 (6,2) - Add a clap on (6) and the start of (2). This is to keep your hitsounds consistent. If they're inconsistent like they are now, then the pattern will sound out of place compared to the rest of the map.
3. 00:50:817 (9) - Add a whistle here, because it is inconsistent like the above suggestion ^; not adding a whistle will make the note sound out of place.
4. 01:19:410 (5) - Add an NC here, otherwise it will go against your NC pattern and be inconsistent, causing confusion between players, since NCs are to break down patterns.

1. Why doesn't this difficulty have any video? It is inconsistent with all the other difficulties, and there's no reason why you would want to exclude video for this difficulty only.
2. 00:05:817 (1,2) - Not fond of this overlap; it looks bad, nothing in the music calls for it, and there are other alternatives than to hide a not beneath a slidertrail.
3. 00:49:317 (1,2) - I'm not too fond of this pattern either, it looks quite bad considering that both ends of slider (2) are overlapped.
4. 01:04:317 (1,2,3,4,5) - This pentagon/star pattern can really be improved, right now it looks rather squashed and uneven, which looks very untidy.
5. 01:05:442 (6,1) - Add an NC at (6) instead, because right now the player has no indication that (6) is 1/1 away, so the player will likely hit it half beat early. An NC however, will help break up the pattern and the player will know when to hit it.
6. 01:07:317 (3,4,5) - It would sound nicer and more consistent if you add an NC at the start of (5) instead of the end of (4). Otherwise the pattern will sound inconsistent and out of place.
7. 01:12:567 (1) - The whistles kind of stop after this point in the music. Nothing justifies the sudden lack of whistles, so I recommend that you go over and add some.

1. Are you sure about that difficulty name? Although this is the hardest diff, it doesn't have anything to do with the song itself, and is therefore unrankable
2. 00:09:567 (4) - The edge of this slider goes offscreen, which is also unrankable.
3. 00:34:317 (1) - Add a whistle to the start of this slider? Otherwise it be inconsistent, causing this note to sound odd compared to the rest of the map.
4. 00:39:379 (3,1) - Why is there a whistle on (3) as opposed to (1). Like your above suggestion, this is inconsistent with the whistle pattern you've had going, and not having a whistle in the right place will make it sound odd.
5. 01:05:442 (5,1,2,1,2,3,4) - I highly recommend fixing this pattern, the sudden spaced 1/4 ruins it. This is the first time you've used a pattern like this in the diff, so it is inconsistent and players won't see it coming. Some will probably even think it's 1/2 due to the spacing of it, and nothing in the music calls for a sudden, massively spaced triple. Either get rid of it, or make it a normal stacked triple, because right now it kinda ruins an otherwise good pattern.

[ Faded ] wrote:

Hi, from the Faded Modding Queue~

[General]

1. Remove Tuxxy from tags? He hasn't got a gd for this map anymore, so you can safely remove him. yea

[Easy]

1. This diff could use some more hitsounds, they seem very scarce in comparison to most other diffs in the mapset. yea
2. 00:19:317 (1) - On my resolution, the edge of this slider is off the screen! This is unrankable:
   
   

   Ranking Criteria wrote:

   Hitobjects must never be off-screen. All mapsets are played from a fixed-screen viewpoint, so any hitobjects that are even partially off-screen can make it very difficult to read the pattern they are following. Test play your map to confirm this.

   I highly recommend fixing this.
   
   
3. 00:24:567 (7,1) - I know you've already moved these down when applying the previous mod, but I think they should be lower; (1) is literally touching the hp bar, which can still cause reading issues. yea
4. 00:28:129 (5) - This slider goes offscreen as well. yea
5. 00:29:629 (7,8,9) - Flow in this pattern could be improved, since (7) seems to curve away from (8), meaning that the player is going to have to make a sharp turn to hit it once they complete the slider.its fine
6. 00:50:442 (7,8) - Not too fond of this overlap, it looks very untidy compared to the rest of the map. The pattern would look a whole lot better without this overlap. Just move (8) a bit and it should be fine. fine then
7. 01:11:817 (3,4) - The blanket over (4) could be improved, just adjust the shape of (3) a bit until (4) and the slider border going round it are perfectly parallel.

it's ok

[Normal]

1. 00:27:567 (6,7) - Why is (7) only spaced 0.60x away from (6)? This can confuse players, since it looks like a 1/2, so I suggest moving (7) to a more appropriate place using the distance snap.
2. 00:33:192 (4,5,6) - You should turn this into an equilateral triangle because it will look a lot nicer that way. Right now though, the triangle is slightly off, which looks untidy and scruffy.
3. 00:35:067 (2) - Add a clap on this sliderend, otherwise it will go against your hitsound pattern, and the note will sound odd and out of place compared to the rest of the map.
4. 00:45:567 (3,1,2,3) - Flow could be improved here, you might want to ctrl+g (1,2) and move the second (3) to the appropriate place on the distance snap . You can also improve the shape by doing this, improving aesthetics as well.
5. 01:06:942 (2) - Add a clap here, otherwise it will be inconsistent; causing it to sound odd with the rest of the map.
6. 01:24:192 (6) - Add a new combo here, combos are meant to break up patterns, making it easier to read, but when things get inconsistent like this, it gets confusing. A 10 combo is also too high, and could leave players without much HP since an NC'd note is usually worth more HP.
7. 01:28:363 (1) - The end of this spinner is way too loud, doesn't make sense considering the volume of the music is extremely quiet. Like you did in some of the other diffs, you should add a green line before the spinner at 5%, because it would sound a lot nicer that way. all changed

[Hyper]

1. 00:15:567 (6) - Add an NC here, otherwise it will go against your NC pattern and be inconsistent, causing confusion between players, since NCs are to break down patterns. yea
2. 00:41:817 (1,3) - This blanket could be fixed; right now it is a little off, making it look untidy. In order to make a good blanket, make sure that the approach circle and the edge of the slidertrail are parallel.yea
3. 00:50:067 (5,7) - Why is there a clap at (5)? This is incredibly inconsistent with your hitsound pattern, and I suggest adding a clap at (7) instead. Otherwise the entire pattern will sound out of place with the rest of your map. yea
   01:02:817 (1) - The edge of this slider goes offscreen! This is unrankable, so I highly suggest fixing this. yea
4. 01:08:817 (7) - Like I said for 00:15:567 (6) -, you should add an NC here, otherwise your NC pattern will be inconsistent.yea
5. 01:12:004 (1,2) - Why is there a clap at (1) instead of (2). This goes against your hitsound pattern, making the pattern sound very odd and inconsistent compared to the rest of the map.

[Insane]

1. 00:14:067 (3,4) - It would look nicer if you moved (4) so that is is blanketed under (3). Right now though, it doesn't look very nice. Don't forget to fix the triangle pattern after moving (4).intended
2. 00:44:442 (6,2) - Add a clap on (6) and the start of (2). This is to keep your hitsounds consistent. If they're inconsistent like they are now, then the pattern will sound out of place compared to the rest of the map. yea
3. 00:50:817 (9) - Add a whistle here, because it is inconsistent like the above suggestion ^; not adding a whistle will make the note sound out of place. no, it's supposed to be a clap
4. 01:19:410 (5) - Add an NC here, otherwise it will go against your NC pattern and be inconsistent, causing confusion between players, since NCs are to break down patterns. yea

[Extra]
[list]
[*]Are you sure about that difficulty name? Although this is the hardest diff, it doesn't have anything to do with the song itself, and is therefore unrankable yea changed
[*]00:09:567 (4) - The edge of this slider goes offscreen, which is also unrankable. yea
[*]00:34:317 (1) - Add a whistle to the start of this slider? Otherwise it be inconsistent, causing this note to sound odd compared to the rest of the map. yea
[*]00:39:379 (3,1) - Why is there a whistle on (3) as opposed to (1). Like your above suggestion, this is inconsistent with the whistle pattern you've had going, and not having a whistle in the right place will make it sound odd. yea
[*]01:05:442 (5,1,2,1,2,3,4) - I highly recommend fixing this pattern, the sudden spaced 1/4 ruins it. This is the first time you've used a pattern like this in the diff, so it is inconsistent and players won't see it coming. Some will probably even think it's 1/2 due to the spacing of it, and nothing in the music calls for a sudden, massively spaced triple. Either get rid of it, or make it a normal stacked triple, because right now it kinda ruins an otherwise good pattern.[slightly reduced spacing/list]

Overall, it's a pretty solid mapset, although some of the easier diffs could use a bit of work. The harder diffs though, I thought were mapped pretty well. The biggest problem with them is their hitsound inconsistencies, whereas the easier diffs need more work on flow and readability.

I shot a star, good luck! nice. thanks for star and mod!~

[ Faded ] wrote:

Hi, from the Faded Modding Queue~
[Hard]

1. 00:25:129 - 00:30:754 - To keep consistency with other difficulties, you should map this part. It is perfectly mappable, and every other difficulty does it. fix
2. 00:46:317 (1,2) - The flow to (2) could be a bit better, because the player has to make a sharp 90° turn after completing the slider, which doesn't play well imo. Either move (2) or curve (1) a bit more. fix
3. 01:28:317 (1) - It would sound a lot nicer if you shorten this slider to the red tick at 01:29:629 - , because that's where the music actually ends. Having it on the powerful downbeat because it is stronger won't make sense, because if there isn't any music, there isn't any beat either. Shortening it to the red tick will also keep it consistent with the other difficulties. Don't forget to move the green point to the appropriate place as well after doing this.

I shot a star, good luck![/b]

1. Get at least 1500-2000 ms audio leadin on all diffs by opening the .osu files and editing the 0 next to (ctrl-f) audio leadin or something
2. You don't need 七つの大罪 in both source and tags
3. @byfar don't use claps when they clearly aren't in the music, such as the beginning up to 00:11:817. Your constant clap-every-2nd-and-4th-white-tick pattern shouldn't begin until 00:13:317
4. those spinners at the end have no reason to be snapped on anything more specific than 1/4!
5. Having two diffs called "Extra" is a little boring, and imo "Extra" is a retarded name for a difficulty that carries no indication of how hard it is. You should call the highest difficulty Extreme or something.

1. 01:14:067 (6,8) - don't overlap these
2. 01:21:567 (9,1) - ^
3. 01:27:379 (9) - on HP bar

1. 00:23:817 (4) - overlapping HP bar
2. 00:24:942 (1,2) - don't put a circle overlapping the repeat slider like that, it's too easy to confuse for 1/2. it technically adheres to distance snapping but the appearance itself makes it impossible for new players to read
3. 00:29:067 (9) - use a repeat slider here so you don't ignore the sound in the middle
4. 01:08:817 (1,2) - flows weird here, make the slider point toward the circle
5. 01:20:817 (3) - also too close to hp bar

1. 00:04:129 (5) - delete, it's too early to overmap
2. 00:06:754 (2) - ^
3. 00:56:442 (3) - use 1/2 slider, you're ignoring a very significant part of the music at 00:56:629
4. 01:28:317 (1) - why not spinner

1. 00:12:754 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Shouldn't use streams in this diff to keep it simpler, plus it doesn't really fit the music
2. 00:17:442 (6,7,1) - jump is too big
3. 00:27:192 (2,3) - Map 00:27:567 so that a player can press a key there. It's a strong beat that shouldn't have a slider end on it.
4. 00:42:192 (3,4) - ^ with the slider end 00:42:567
5. 00:42:754 (4,1,2) - i like how you omitted the object in the middle like i did though, credit cloudsplash16 for that idea
6. 00:47:067 (1,2,3,4) - not sure what exactly a hyper difficulty entails but this jump seems a little big
7. 00:57:942 (5,1) - likewise but this is definitely too big for a 1/4 jump
8. 01:15:754 (6,1) - increase the spacing here because it looks like 1/4

1. 00:21:942 (1) - don't ignore the vocal in the middle
2. 00:31:504 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Aren't you making this a bit too tough/tricky for a calm part of the song?
3. 00:43:317 - yeah...up until this point you're making the map way harder than it needs to be as an insane. simplify the patterns and rhythms
4. 00:54:192 (5,1,2) - Not a good use of antijumps, just do it normally

1. 00:04:317 (1,2,3,4) - Bad use of 3/4 sliders, they don't fit the song very well
2. 00:05:817 (1) - Try to use red points to make this neater
3. 00:10:317 (1) - The use of this spinner looks lazy, that part is easily mappable.
4. 00:18:567 (1,2,3,4,1) - you better check your snapping here
5. 00:19:879 (4) - really shouldn't ignore the vocal in the middle
6. 00:20:817 (1,2,3,4) - creative but doesn't fit music
7. 00:21:567 (5) - don't repeat, 00:21:942 is a beat that you should map so that the player can press a key to play it
8. 00:34:317 (1) - don't use 3/4 slider here when you're ignoring the sound on the red 1/2 beat tick
9. 00:37:317 (1) - ^ also vocal
10. 00:51:942 (5) - ^
11. 01:22:317 (1) - another lazy spinner you should've mapped out

1. 00:01:317 (3,6) - stack for neatness
2. 00:02:442 (5,1) - ^
3. 00:10:317 (3) - Curve this the other way to play better from both sides
4. 00:14:817 (3) - I know you're trying to emphasize the vocal, but it doesn't warrant a SV increase imo.
5. 00:16:317 (1,1) -00:18:567 (1) - and others - You shouldn't be putting a finish every beat in this section either. For this section, they only fit on some downbeats.
6. 00:19:129 (4) - SV change doesn't belong
7. 00:22:317 (2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Isn't this a little too much?
8. 00:29:629 (1,1,1) - Not sure if these actually are in the music
9. 00:40:879 (1,3) - Should use grid snap so you don't get these miniscule stacking mistakes
10. 00:42:567 - You really should shorten the slider and put a circle here because this is a strong beat that is much more satisfying to click on.
11. 00:43:692 (4,4) - stack
12. 00:44:629 (4,1) - should have a bigger jump here to emphasize the music
13. 00:45:567 (3,4) - Same thing I said about emphasizing stronger parts of the music with their own keypress
14. 00:46:129 (4,3) - the stacking
15. 00:50:629 (6,7) - bigger jump here for the same reason
16. 00:58:317 - this is where you want a finish, if anything
17. 01:04:692 (2,3,4) - Poor spacing here, why is the 1/4 gap way bigger than the 1/2?
18. 01:05:629 (1,2,1) - Isn't this triple a bit too widely spaced?
19. 01:05:067 (4,1,1) - too much NCing here, remove at least 2 of them
20. 01:09:942 (2) - NC this though because of drastic SV change
21. 01:20:067 (1) - Ctrl-G makes the flow less awkward
22. 01:24:004 (2,1) - stack, the slight non stack makes it look like 1/4
23. 01:27:004 (1,1) - remove NC, don't need them
24. 01:28:363 (1) - is this not snapped?

Fort wrote:

i cri for ur BFxtra, you so mean ;_;

xxdeathx wrote:

m4m from my queue

General]

1. Get at least 1500-2000 ms audio leadin on all diffs yo how do i do this
2. You don't need 七つの大罪 in both source and tags sigh im soo lazy though
3. @byfar don't use claps when they clearly aren't in the music, such as the beginning up to 00:11:817. Your constant clap-every-2nd-and-4th-white-tick pattern shouldn't begin until 00:13:317 eh i was just following xinely's hitsound mod post. she told me to put on every 2nd and 4th white tickguess ill get rid of it pre-13:317 then

[Easy]

[Normal]

[Hyper]

1. 00:12:754 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Shouldn't use streams in this diff to keep it simpler, plus it doesn't really fit the music nope i think it's perfectly fine. it's a hyper diff and plus the stream isnt even really that spaced out
2. 00:17:442 (6,7,1) - jump is too big k reorganized
3. 00:27:192 (2,3) - Map 00:27:567 so that a player can press a key there. It's a strong beat that shouldn't have a slider end on it. yep k

[Insane]

1. 00:21:942 (1) - don't ignore the vocal in the middleyea
2. 00:31:504 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Aren't you making this a bit too tough/tricky for a calm part of the song? i think it's ok really.i was just gradually cooling down from 1.5x SV from my previous accelerator slider lol. the 1/4's are pretty readable imo (it's reasonably placed) so yea. and i dont really want to change this part either
3. 00:43:317 - yeah...up until this point you're making the map way harder than it needs to be as an insane. simplify the patterns and rhythms bleh idk ill think about it
4. 00:54:192 (5,1,2) - Not a good use of antijumps, just do it normally k then

[BFxtra]

1. 00:01:317 (3,6) - stack for neatness ok
2. 00:02:442 (5,1) - ^ this fade away is intended though
3. 00:10:317 (3) - Curve this the other way to play better from both sides intended
4. 00:14:817 (3) - I know you're trying to emphasize the vocal, but it doesn't warrant a SV increase imo. meh ill think about it
5. 00:16:317 (1,1) -00:18:567 (1) - and others - You shouldn't be putting a finish every beat in this section either. For this section, they only fit on some downbeats. k then
6. 00:19:129 (4) - SV change doesn't belong yeah oops lol.
7. 00:22:317 (2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Isn't this a little too much? nah its fine
8. 00:29:629 (1,1,1) - Not sure if these actually are in the music it isnt. however it's the feeling that the electric guitar gives so i'm just gonna put it there
9. 00:40:879 (1,3) - Should use grid snap so you don't get these miniscule stacking mistakeslol
10. 00:42:567 - You really should shorten the slider and put a circle here because this is a strong beat that is much more satisfying to click on. yeah sure
11. 00:43:692 (4,4) - stack bleh this was intended but w/e
12. 00:44:629 (4,1) - should have a bigger jump here to emphasize the music k
13. 00:45:567 (3,4) - Same thing I said about emphasizing stronger parts of the music with their own keypress yeah but i think this fits here. since i'm stacking the next 1/1 note anyways
14. 00:46:129 (4,3) - the stacking fine then
15. 00:50:629 (6,7) - bigger jump here for the same reason the larger spacing fits the previous note imo. this part doesnt need a big jump because vocal tension doesnt go higher.
16. 00:58:317 - this is where you want a finish, if anything yea
17. 01:04:692 (2,3,4) - Poor spacing here, why is the 1/4 gap way bigger than the 1/2? accelerating 1/4 slider
18. 01:05:629 (1,2,1) - Isn't this triple a bit too widely spaced? nah it fits current spacing imo
19. 01:05:067 (4,1,1) - too much NCing here, remove at least 2 of them got rid of one
20. 01:09:942 (2) - NC this though because of drastic SV change yea
21. 01:20:067 (1) - Ctrl-G makes the flow less awkward nehh. this slider is part of the pattern that goes inward
22. 01:24:004 (2,1) - stack, the slight non stack makes it look like 1/4 kk
23. 01:27:004 (1,1) - remove NC, don't need them kk
24. 01:28:363 (1) - is this not snapped? 1/8

I might have used some mapping terms you're not familiar with yet, if you got questions just message/hl me in #modhelp and I'll try to answer them.

xxdeathx wrote:

m4m from my queue

[Hard]

1. 00:04:129 (5) - delete, it's too early to overmap
2. 00:06:754 (2) - ^
3. 00:56:442 (3) - use 1/2 slider, you're ignoring a very significant part of the music at 00:56:629
4. 01:28:317 (1) - why not spinner
   
   all fix
   
   thanks~
   

xxdeathx wrote:

m4m from my queue

[Tsumi's Extra]

1. 00:04:317 (1,2,3,4) - Bad use of 3/4 sliders, they don't fit the song very well mad hitsounds quiet instead
2. 00:05:817 (1) - Try to use red points to make this neater I'm not exactly sure what you meant, but I moved it around a bit because it was misaligned.
3. 00:10:317 (1) - The use of this spinner looks lazy, that part is easily mappable. mapped. arigatou for motivation
4. 00:18:567 (1,2,3,4,1) - you better check your snapping here for some reason, whenever I do GD's, inheriting points start to disappear on their end.... I'm not sure why. :<
5. 00:19:879 (4) - really shouldn't ignore the vocal in the middle no longer ignored
6. 00:20:817 (1,2,3,4) - creative but doesn't fit music feels fun to me, so i kept this.
7. 00:21:567 (5) - don't repeat, 00:21:942 is a beat that you should map so that the player can press a key to play it deshou?? fixed
8. 00:34:317 (1) - don't use 3/4 slider here when you're ignoring the sound on the red 1/2 beat tick this one i kept because i'm slowly making the transition away from the vocals to the drums here
9. 00:37:317 (1) - ^ also vocal agreeable since it matches the drums
10. 00:51:942 (5) - ^ ^
11. 01:22:317 (1) - another lazy spinner you should've mapped out mapped

theramdans wrote:

Hi Byfar, mod as requested , not modding the extra and above diffs though sorry for my limitations :<
Let's go

Easy

Checked the AIMod, it tells error regarding stack leniency and conflicted tags with the Normal diff, please check it yourself
00:07:317 (6) - NC, hear the vocal
00:12:379 (4) - ctl+j so that the in-curve is facing downwards, better flow, resnap with the following note
00:17:442 (6) - minor, 1 grid more to the left and 1 grid up (tiny grid setting), proper stack with the previous (4)
00:20:817 (2,3) - either make the (2) curve (in-curve facing left) or move (3) more to the lower-right, it is just too close with the slider border now
00:25:317 (1) - ctrl+j, so the sharp turn facing downwards, better flow
00:28:129 (1) - NC, there is a pause in the guitar line
00:38:442 (2,3) - bad flow, turn (3) 90 degrees clockwise
00:49:317 (6) - NC, obviously
00:52:317 (1,2,3) - (1)'s head and (3)'s tail are too close now, move (3) more to the upper right, beginners might find it confusing
00:55:317 (6) - curve a bit (in-curve facing right)
00:56:442 (7,8,9) - NC at (7), plus I dont like this linear flow, make it triangle or something different
00:58:317 (1) - ctrl+h, better flow, and maybe place a little more to the right
01:01:317 (5) - missing whistle on the head?
01:09:567 (8) - curve a bit, (in-curve facing the towards the next (1), even more you can blanket it :p)
01:11:067 (2,3) - OTL bad flow,bad overlap and (3) is weird in shape
01:14:067 (6,7,8) - (6) and (8) bad flow and bad overlap OTL
01:17:442 (2) - place this a little bit lower
01:19:317 (5) - NC, the vocal changes
01:21:567 (9) - NC, and rotate it like this
01:22:317 (1,2,3) - arrange them like this , better flow
01:25:129 (5,6) - here
01:26:629 (1,2,3) - these red tick circles are really confusing for beginners, simplify them with 1 repeat slider maybe
01:28:410 - dat spinner length

Normal

00:02:442 (2) - this clap is unfitting imo
00:03:942 (1) - ^
00:05:442 (1) - remove NC, plus minor, 1 grid up (tiny grid setting)
00:06:942 (1.2) - NC on (2) instead
00:06:942 (1) - this clap is unfitting imo
00:08:442 (3) - ^
00:10:317 (2) - what a weird slider :p
00:11:817 (1,2) - better pattern here
00:18:567 (5) - minor, 1 grid more to the left and 1 grid lower (tiny grid setting)
00:20:067 (3) - shape could be smoothen more for better blanket
00:22:317 (2) - NC here instead\
00:24:942 (1) - better skip this note, and continue mapping from 00:25:317 - , it causes overlaps and confusion tbh
00:30:379 (3,4) - noticably blanket error
00:35:067 (3) - place a bit more to the left, better flow
00:36:192 (1) - remove NC, then
00:37:129 (4) - NC here instead
00:43:317 (2) - NC here instead
00:44:817 (1) - remove NC, the vocal is still ongoing
00:47:817 (1) - ^
00:49:317 (2) - NC here instead, and remove that clap, I prefer finish on that
00:55:317 (1,2,3) - these stacks are really confusing OTL
01:00:567 (1) - noticable but still minor, move 3 grid more to the left and 4 grid lower (tiny grid setting)
01:03:192 (1) - remove NC, the vocal is still ongoing
01:05:817 (1) - remove NC, then
01:07:317 (3) - NC here instead, watch the vocal
01:08:817 (1) - remove NC, and try this , much better flow
01:11:442 (3,4,1) - (3) and (1) are overlapping each other
01:14:817 (1) - remove NC, the vocal is still ongoing
01:16:317 (2) - NC here instead
01:17:067 (3,4,5,6,7) - these stacks are confusing and might lead to mis-reading and headache to the player OTL
01:21:567 (1) - this is optional, you can remove NC here
01:22:317 (3) - but absolutely NC here
01:22:317 (1,2,3) - (1) and (3) are overlapping each other, use the flow similar to 01:08:817 (1) (if you did fix it before)
01:28:410 - dat spinner length

Hard GD

00:02:442 (2,3,4) - (2) and (4) , though slight but noticably are overlapping each other
00:05:817 (1) - remove NC, the vocal is still ongoing
00:08:629 (4) - minor, 1 grid more to the left (tiny grid setting)
00:13:317 (1) - minor, 1 grid more to the left and 1 grid up (tiny grid setting)
00:20:629 (5) - minor, 1 grid up (tiny grid setting)
00:23:817 (1) - move it a bit to the right/bottom right to avoid overlap that much
00:30:379 (1) - remove NC
00:41:067 (3) - minor, 1 grid more to the right (tiny grid setting)
00:46:317 (1) - better stack it with the previous (3) than overlapping it
01:01:692 (2) - overlap with previous (5), move it up/upper right a bit
01:18:192 (2) - maybe ctrl+g
01:19:317 (5) - optional, maybe NC here instead rather than on the next (1)
01:28:317 - dat spinner length

I like this diff the most so far ^^ Good Job!

Hyper

I dont know what Hyper diffs are supposed to look like
00:04:317 (3) - NC here instead, rather than on the previous (1)
00:07:317 (3) - ^
00:08:817 (3) - ^
00:10:317 (3) - ^
00:11:817 (5,6) unstack
00:16:317 (3) - NC here instead, rather than on the previous (1)
00:17:067 (5) - minor, 3 more grid to the left (tiny grid setting)
00:21:942 (5) - make this 3 1/2 circles? That "YUMEWO" is audibly strong imo
00:30:004 (1,1) - remove NC
00:33:379 (3) - minor, 1 grid more to the left and 2 grid up (tiny grid setting)
00:37:317 (5) - NC here instead on the next (1)
00:38:442 (4) - minor, 1 grid more to the left (tiny grid setting)
00:38:817 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - more curvy pattern, and dont copy paste please ._>
00:40:692 (1) - remove NC
00:43:317 (2) - NC here instead rather on the previous (1)
00:47:067 (1) - remove NC, then
00:47:817 (5) - NC here
00:48:567 (7) - try adding drum-clap sound on the head/on both head and tail on this slider, sounds better
00:49:317 (3) - NC here instead, rather than on the previous (1)
00:53:067 (3) - minor, 3 grid up (tiny grid setting)
01:00:567 (1) - remove NC, the vocal is still ongoing
01:04:317 (1,2,1) - make something like 01:05:817 (1,2,3,4,5) - , maybe a pentagon jumps/star jumps ? :p
01:07:317 (3) - NC here instead rather on the previous (1)
01:12:567 (1) - remove NC, the vocal is still ongoing
01:13:692 (1) - remove NC
01:14:817 (2) - NC here instead rather on the previous (1)
01:16:317 (2) - ^
01:17:817 (3) - ^ , also at 01:16:129 (1) - minor, 3 grid down (tiny grid setting) and at 01:17:442 (1) - minor, 2 grid more to the left, and 1 grid down (also tiny grid setting)
01:22:129 (8) - dude, there's nothing here OTL
01:22:973 (1) - remove NC
01:24:192 (1) - ^
01:25:692 (2) - minor, 1 grid up (tiny grid setting)
01:26:629 (4) - NC here
01:28:410 - dat spinner length

Insane

00:02:067 (2) - ugly overlap
00:30:754 (1,2) - these feels weird, either it has too low volume, or just not following the vocal, or does it follow anything in the BGM? ask yourself
00:36:754 (1,2,3,4) - overmapping I guess, better if this were smth like 3 circles triangle jumps, decent spaced one
00:40:879 (2) - and 00:39:942 (1) - what's with 1/4 slider? It doesnt fit, a circle fits better
00:49:692 (1) - ugly extended slider, just map 1/2
This diff feel kinda overmapped and forced, reminds me of someone I know

The rest of the mod will basicly like what I pointed in the Hard GD and Hyper, look for improperly stacked notes, missing/unfitting hitsounds, blankets, especiallly NC. Follow the vocal lines or the Big White Tick as a guide, figure them out and try fixing them yourself
Sorry If the mod is too bad/low quality/a bit harsh/or just me being forcing my own thoughts
Modding length : 135 minutes

Good luck OTL

\BONUS/

DAT BXTRA, please not that naming OTL

1. YOUR TAGS DON'T WORK WITH THE NORMAL DIFF OR SOMETHING

1. 00:02:067 (2) - THIS IS A REALLY OBVIOUS OVERLAP PLEASE FIX PLEASE
2. 00:29:629 (1,1,1) - WHAT THE HELL IS THIS MAKE THEM EQUAL DISTANCES THIS MAKES LITERALLY NO SENSE
3. 00:35:067 (3,4) - BLANKET THIS POOP
4. 00:40:879 (2,1) - THIS OVERLAP IS REAL DUMB
5. 01:12:379 (8) - WHY ARE YOU STOPPING HERE
6. 01:30:004 (1) - THIS IS SO UNRANKABLE ITS NOT EVEN FUNNY

1. First point = head of slider
2. If reason for change isn't specified it's for a blanket ok ok.
3. Pm me when I'm awake too ti re d to do this right but these blankets need savign

1. I think this slider is better to be like http://www.puu.sh/g51kJ/6b350b4101.jpg . slider (4) flows to (3) and (5)'s head. http://puu.sh/g51yW/f923382d97.png
2. 00:28:129 (5) - isn't this slider is over mapping zone ? The red tick is too low
3. 00:55:317 (6,7) - this part will confuse newbie players. I know it because I've modded like that before :p . just make 00:55:317 (6) - repeated slider
4. 00:55:317 (6) - NC ?
5. 01:13:317 (5,6,8) - I don't think it's a good overlap at all. and 01:14:067 (6,7,8) - aren't perfectly triangle
6. 01:16:317 (1,2) - like 00:55:317 (6,7) - .
7. 01:22:317 (1,2) - I don't think it's a good pattern in Easy diff.and you ignore 01:22:692 - where have a big effect in the song. consider to change the pattern to http://puu.sh/g51TU/90509c451c.jpg
8. 01:28:410 (1) - I think this spinner should be started at 01:28:504 - .maybe it's not a big problem in STD. But When we play in mania It'll confuse the new player because that's 1/4, but it's up to you want to change or not

1. 00:20:442 (4,5) - a bad blanket. You can see it with 00:20:442 (4) - 's approach circle at 00:20:348 -
2. 00:42:567 (5,6,1) - I think this pattern is good enough just by following the instrument and not including the vocal. http://puu.sh/g56yl/bc2dd9aad9.jpg
3. 00:55:317 (1,2,3) - why don't we make it like http://puu.sh/g56Gq/9eca8b3156.jpg to make it a better flow
4. 01:11:442 (3) - stack the head properly
5. 01:18:942 (7) - stack it properly
6. 01:28:410 (1) - just like Easy diff. And why did you make it end at 01:29:254 since the Easy diff end the spinner at 01:29:442 - ?

1. 00:23:817 (1) - umm... can you make it more visible... not hided ?
2. 01:28:317 (1) - make it consistent with easy diff. This spinner should be ended at 01:29:442

1. 00:18:754 (4,1) - suddenly separated T.T. first time I see it was separated with 1/2. suggest to make it closer to make it clear.
2. 00:27:192 (2,3) - too close and look so bad if you ask me. suggest to change 00:27:192 (2) - to a 1/2 slider blanketing 00:27:567 (3) -
3. 01:16:223 - I don't think ignoring this is a good idea.

1. 00:06:192 (2) - Hmmm... I think a silence in a click isn't a good idea. just don't make it silence.
2. 00:30:754 (1) - just use a circle here. There's nothing in the music at 00:30:848 -
3. 00:39:942 (1,2) - ^^
4. 00:57:942 (5) - why use slider and not continue the 1/4 ? It's really confusing.
5. 01:03:942 (1) - ctrl+g ? since this slider is 2x repeated slider, then the end of slider should be on the tail. ctrl+g to make it continue flow with 01:04:317 (2) -
6. 01:04:879 (4) - stack it properly
7. 01:26:254 (5) - stack it properly. even if it is intentional, it's too close.
8. 01:28:410 (1) - same problem with other diffs

1. 01:06:192 (5) - ctrl+g ? I think the flow will better like that and it'll more comfortable to play
2. 01:06:942 (1) - stack with 01:06:567 (6) - to make it more clearly that it have a different snap with before
3. 01:28:410 (1) - like other diffs

1. 00:47:442 (3) - I think this part no need to SV up. for 00:47:817 (1) - part It's OK because I see at this part have big effect of the song. But not at 00:47:442 (3) - because this part haven't any special in the song
2. 01:10:317 (1) - make the tail can be blanketed perfectly with 01:09:942 (1) - . Move 01:10:317 (1) - last dot to x:161 y:286
3. 01:28:410 (1) - like other diffs. I think Easy diff have a right timing to end the spinner

Fantastica wrote:

Hi hi :3~~~~~ from my queue...



[Easy]

1. I think this slider is better to be like http://www.puu.sh/g51kJ/6b350b4101.jpg . slider (4) flows to (3) and (5)'s head. http://puu.sh/g51yW/f923382d97.png
2. 00:28:129 (5) - isn't this slider is over mapping zone ? The red tick is too low ? no its not
3. 00:55:317 (6,7) - this part will confuse newbie players. I know it because I've modded like that before :p . just make 00:55:317 (6) - repeated slider hmm ok then
4. 00:55:317 (6) - NC ? k
5. 01:13:317 (5,6,8) - I don't think it's a good overlap at all. and 01:14:067 (6,7,8) - aren't perfectly triangle triangle fix, keeping overlap
6. 01:16:317 (1,2) - like 00:55:317 (6,7) - .
7. 01:22:317 (1,2) - I don't think it's a good pattern in Easy diff.and you ignore 01:22:692 - where have a big effect in the song. consider to change the pattern to http://puu.sh/g51TU/90509c451c.jpg
8. 01:28:410 (1) - I think this spinner should be started at 01:28:504 - .maybe it's not a big problem in STD. But When we play in mania It'll confuse the new player because that's 1/4, but it's up to you want to change or not

[Normal]

1. 00:20:442 (4,5) - a bad blanket. You can see it with 00:20:442 (4) - 's approach circle at 00:20:348 -
2. 00:42:567 (5,6,1) - I think this pattern is good enough just by following the instrument and not including the vocal. http://puu.sh/g56yl/bc2dd9aad9.jpg
3. 00:55:317 (1,2,3) - why don't we make it like http://puu.sh/g56Gq/9eca8b3156.jpg to make it a better flow
4. 01:11:442 (3) - stack the head properly
5. 01:18:942 (7) - stack it properly
6. 01:28:410 (1) - just like Easy diff. And why did you make it end at 01:29:254 since the Easy diff end the spinner at 01:29:442 - ?

[Hyper]

1. 00:18:754 (4,1) - suddenly separated T.T. first time I see it was separated with 1/2. suggest to make it closer to make it clear. no otherwise it becomes dirty >.>
2. 00:27:192 (2,3) - too close and look so bad if you ask me. suggest to change 00:27:192 (2) - to a 1/2 slider blanketing 00:27:567 (3) - sorta change
3. 01:16:223 - I don't think ignoring this is a good idea. nah its fine im doing it to map the vocals

[Insane]

1. 00:06:192 (2) - Hmmm... I think a silence in a click isn't a good idea. just don't make it silence.
2. 00:30:754 (1) - just use a circle here. There's nothing in the music at 00:30:848 - k
3. 00:39:942 (1,2) - ^^ nah
4. 00:57:942 (5) - why use slider and not continue the 1/4 ? It's really confusing. guitar
5. 01:03:942 (1) - ctrl+g ? since this slider is 2x repeated slider, then the end of slider should be on the tail. ctrl+g to make it continue flow with 01:04:317 (2) - nah i like the upward flow
6. 01:04:879 (4) - stack it properly
7. 01:26:254 (5) - stack it properly. even if it is intentional, it's too close.
8. 01:28:410 (1) - same problem with other diffs

[hardest]

1. 00:47:442 (3) - I think this part no need to SV up. for 00:47:817 (1) - part It's OK because I see at this part have big effect of the song. But not at 00:47:442 (3) - because this part haven't any special in the song change slightly
2. 01:10:317 (1) - make the tail can be blanketed perfectly with 01:09:942 (1) - . Move 01:10:317 (1) - last dot to x:161 y:286 ok
3. 01:28:410 (1) - like other diffs. I think Easy diff have a right timing to end the spinner fix

Okay that's all I can find :3 :3
Good Luck ~~~~ ~(^o^~)

dorothy3242 wrote:

idk I'm half asleep while modding this and it may not be a good idea but yolo

This map doesn't have enough vocaloid
Here's a Len to fix that:

1. First point = head of slider
2. If reason for change isn't specified it's for a blanket ok ok.
3. Pm me when I'm awake too ti re d to do this right but these blankets need savign

[General]

your BG is an AD FOR HAIRPRODUCT

Look man all I can mod decently is blankets so you'll get that kk first point = head of the slider
Why not capitalize the h in hardest it looks so sad and small compared to all the other diffs with their capital letters

[Easy]
00:04:317 (4) - 2nd point to x:423 y:292 and 3rd point x:474 y:228 for nicer blanketin of 3
00:40:317 (5) - 1st point to x:218 y:287 instand blanket of 6 profit k
00:55:317 (6) - This felt like it ended too early so maybe extend it to that next white tick
01:11:067 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Byfar these overlaps look terrible seriously whta is this
01:25:129 (6) - You call this a blanket I say move the second point to x:161 y:42 and the end point to x:219 y:58

[Normal]
The claps before 00:11:817 (1) - aren't really going with anything and sound kinda sorta weird
00:01:317 (1) - 1.) third point to x:195 y:125 and the second point to x:102 y:144 2.)???? 3.) profit
00:13:317 (1) - 2nd point to x:138 y:169 and third point to x:55 y:111
00:30:754 (4) - movin the middle point to x:332 y:15 and the end point to x:272 y:58 will get you a long way
Insert placeholder for more blanket rage

01:22:317 (3,5) - Plz don't overlap like that it looks sorta bad

theramdans wrote:

Hi Byfar, mod as requested , not modding the extra and above diffs though sorry for my limitations :<
Let's go

Easy

Checked the AIMod, it tells error regarding stack leniency and conflicted tags with the Normal diff, please check it yourself
00:07:317 (6) - NC, hear the vocal
00:12:379 (4) - ctl+j so that the in-curve is facing downwards, better flow, resnap with the following note
00:17:442 (6) - minor, 1 grid more to the left and 1 grid up (tiny grid setting), proper stack with the previous (4)
00:20:817 (2,3) - either make the (2) curve (in-curve facing left) or move (3) more to the lower-right, it is just too close with the slider border now
00:25:317 (1) - ctrl+j, so the sharp turn facing downwards, better flow
00:28:129 (1) - NC, there is a pause in the guitar line
00:38:442 (2,3) - bad flow, turn (3) 90 degrees clockwise
00:49:317 (6) - NC, obviously
00:52:317 (1,2,3) - (1)'s head and (3)'s tail are too close now, move (3) more to the upper right, beginners might find it confusing
00:55:317 (6) - curve a bit (in-curve facing right)
00:56:442 (7,8,9) - NC at (7), plus I dont like this linear flow, make it triangle or something different
00:58:317 (1) - ctrl+h, better flow, and maybe place a little more to the right
01:01:317 (5) - missing whistle on the head?
01:09:567 (8) - curve a bit, (in-curve facing the towards the next (1), even more you can blanket it :p)
01:11:067 (2,3) - OTL bad flow,bad overlap and (3) is weird in shape
01:14:067 (6,7,8) - (6) and (8) bad flow and bad overlap OTL
01:17:442 (2) - place this a little bit lower
01:19:317 (5) - NC, the vocal changes
01:21:567 (9) - NC, and rotate it like this
01:22:317 (1,2,3) - arrange them like this , better flow
01:25:129 (5,6) - here
01:26:629 (1,2,3) - these red tick circles are really confusing for beginners, simplify them with 1 repeat slider maybe
01:28:410 - dat spinner length

Normal

00:02:442 (2) - this clap is unfitting imo
00:03:942 (1) - ^
00:05:442 (1) - remove NC, plus minor, 1 grid up (tiny grid setting)
00:06:942 (1.2) - NC on (2) instead
00:06:942 (1) - this clap is unfitting imo
00:08:442 (3) - ^
00:10:317 (2) - what a weird slider :p
00:11:817 (1,2) - better pattern here
00:18:567 (5) - minor, 1 grid more to the left and 1 grid lower (tiny grid setting)
00:20:067 (3) - shape could be smoothen more for better blanket
00:22:317 (2) - NC here instead\
00:24:942 (1) - better skip this note, and continue mapping from 00:25:317 - , it causes overlaps and confusion tbh
00:30:379 (3,4) - noticably blanket error
00:35:067 (3) - place a bit more to the left, better flow
00:36:192 (1) - remove NC, then
00:37:129 (4) - NC here instead
00:43:317 (2) - NC here instead
00:44:817 (1) - remove NC, the vocal is still ongoing
00:47:817 (1) - ^
00:49:317 (2) - NC here instead, and remove that clap, I prefer finish on that
00:55:317 (1,2,3) - these stacks are really confusing OTL
01:00:567 (1) - noticable but still minor, move 3 grid more to the left and 4 grid lower (tiny grid setting)
01:03:192 (1) - remove NC, the vocal is still ongoing
01:05:817 (1) - remove NC, then
01:07:317 (3) - NC here instead, watch the vocal
01:08:817 (1) - remove NC, and try this , much better flow
01:11:442 (3,4,1) - (3) and (1) are overlapping each other
01:14:817 (1) - remove NC, the vocal is still ongoing
01:16:317 (2) - NC here instead
01:17:067 (3,4,5,6,7) - these stacks are confusing and might lead to mis-reading and headache to the player OTL
01:21:567 (1) - this is optional, you can remove NC here
01:22:317 (3) - but absolutely NC here
01:22:317 (1,2,3) - (1) and (3) are overlapping each other, use the flow similar to 01:08:817 (1) (if you did fix it before)
01:28:410 - dat spinner length

Hard GD

00:02:442 (2,3,4) - (2) and (4) , though slight but noticably are overlapping each other
00:05:817 (1) - remove NC, the vocal is still ongoing
00:08:629 (4) - minor, 1 grid more to the left (tiny grid setting)
00:13:317 (1) - minor, 1 grid more to the left and 1 grid up (tiny grid setting)
00:20:629 (5) - minor, 1 grid up (tiny grid setting)
00:23:817 (1) - move it a bit to the right/bottom right to avoid overlap that much
00:30:379 (1) - remove NC
00:41:067 (3) - minor, 1 grid more to the right (tiny grid setting)
00:46:317 (1) - better stack it with the previous (3) than overlapping it
01:01:692 (2) - overlap with previous (5), move it up/upper right a bit
01:18:192 (2) - maybe ctrl+g
01:19:317 (5) - optional, maybe NC here instead rather than on the next (1)
01:28:317 - dat spinner length

I like this diff the most so far ^^ Good Job!

Hyper

I dont know what Hyper diffs are supposed to look like
00:04:317 (3) - NC here instead, rather than on the previous (1)
00:07:317 (3) - ^
00:08:817 (3) - ^
00:10:317 (3) - ^
00:11:817 (5,6) unstack
00:16:317 (3) - NC here instead, rather than on the previous (1)
00:17:067 (5) - minor, 3 more grid to the left (tiny grid setting)
00:21:942 (5) - make this 3 1/2 circles? That "YUMEWO" is audibly strong imo
00:30:004 (1,1) - remove NC
00:33:379 (3) - minor, 1 grid more to the left and 2 grid up (tiny grid setting)
00:37:317 (5) - NC here instead on the next (1)
00:38:442 (4) - minor, 1 grid more to the left (tiny grid setting)
00:38:817 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - more curvy pattern, and dont copy paste please ._>
00:40:692 (1) - remove NC
00:43:317 (2) - NC here instead rather on the previous (1)
00:47:067 (1) - remove NC, then
00:47:817 (5) - NC here
00:48:567 (7) - try adding drum-clap sound on the head/on both head and tail on this slider, sounds better
00:49:317 (3) - NC here instead, rather than on the previous (1)
00:53:067 (3) - minor, 3 grid up (tiny grid setting)
01:00:567 (1) - remove NC, the vocal is still ongoing
01:04:317 (1,2,1) - make something like 01:05:817 (1,2,3,4,5) - , maybe a pentagon jumps/star jumps ? :p
01:07:317 (3) - NC here instead rather on the previous (1)
01:12:567 (1) - remove NC, the vocal is still ongoing
01:13:692 (1) - remove NC
01:14:817 (2) - NC here instead rather on the previous (1)
01:16:317 (2) - ^
01:17:817 (3) - ^ , also at 01:16:129 (1) - minor, 3 grid down (tiny grid setting) and at 01:17:442 (1) - minor, 2 grid more to the left, and 1 grid down (also tiny grid setting)
01:22:129 (8) - dude, there's nothing here OTL
01:22:973 (1) - remove NC
01:24:192 (1) - ^
01:25:692 (2) - minor, 1 grid up (tiny grid setting)
01:26:629 (4) - NC here
01:28:410 - dat spinner length

Insane

00:02:067 (2) - ugly overlap
00:30:754 (1,2) - these feels weird, either it has too low volume, or just not following the vocal, or does it follow anything in the BGM? ask yourself
00:36:754 (1,2,3,4) - overmapping I guess, better if this were smth like 3 circles triangle jumps, decent spaced one
00:40:879 (2) - and 00:39:942 (1) - what's with 1/4 slider? It doesnt fit, a circle fits better
00:49:692 (1) - ugly extended slider, just map 1/2
This diff feel kinda overmapped and forced, reminds me of someone I know

The rest of the mod will basicly like what I pointed in the Hard GD and Hyper, look for improperly stacked notes, missing/unfitting hitsounds, blankets, especiallly NC. Follow the vocal lines or the Big White Tick as a guide, figure them out and try fixing them yourself
Sorry If the mod is too bad/low quality/a bit harsh/or just me being forcing my own thoughts
Modding length : 135 minutes

Good luck OTL

\BONUS/

DAT BXTRA, please not that naming OTL

mostly changed

1. 00:11:817 (3) - The 1/2 sliders in this map are a bit confusing to catch. I know that you want to keep them, but I'm suggesting to keep it simple, since making it into a Normal isn't a viable solution and what we really need is a smooth progression of difficulties, given that you want a proper spread. Personally, I would just change these 1/2 sliders into a circle, on the white tick in which where your slider head originally would be. The following are timestamps for all of the 1/2 sliders that should be changed:
   
   1. 00:26:067 (2) -
   2. 00:27:567 (4) -
   3. 00:29:067 (6) -
   4. 01:23:067 (2) -
   5. 01:24:567 (4) -
   6. 01:26:067 (6) -
2. 01:09:567 (8,1) - Would look pretty nice if these become a blanket.
3. 01:18:567 (2,3) - Looks a little confusing to play for new players due to the stacked ends. I wouldn't suggest trying something like this on a lower difficulty since new players won't be able to interpret this fast enough compared to experienced players.
4. 01:21:567 (7) - I would suggest against the overlap here, mainly because it will confuse new players (again), because the overlap will make it feel like you'd have to rush to 01:22:317 (1) in order to hit it right, which is not the intended effect we're trying to achieve. In addition, there was no indication of a 1/2 repeat in the earlier stages of the map, nor were their any significant overlaps to allow the player to prepare for it.
5. 01:28:504 (1) - I would strongly suggest you don't use this short of a spinner for an Easy. New players are not as quick on reflexes so it would cause a lot of frustration if they break at the end of the map.

1. 00:05:817 (4) - Not very confident about the slider head being here. I'm worried about the slider end of 00:04:317 (2) not giving enough time for new players to react to 00:05:817 (4). Up to you, I guess.
2. 00:07:317 (2) - Seems like you accidentally set this to a Normal sampleset, so remove it to make it a soft-hitwhistle again.
   
   1. 00:38:442 (3) - accidental Normal sampleset on the slider end o.o
   2. 00:40:317 (1) - On the head lol
3. There's a set of finish spams that I would like to address, which really don't sound that pleasing to the ears, so it would be great if you could remove some of them:
   
   1. 00:17:067 (3) - Remove finish on both head and end
   2. 00:18:567 (5) - Remove finish on tail
   3. 00:20:067 (3) - Remove finish
   4. 00:22:317 (2) - Remove finish on head and tail
   5. 00:23:442 (3) - Remove finish
   6. 00:23:817 (4) - Remove finish on slider end

1. 00:13:129 - The slider end at 5% is too low, and doesn't give enough feedback so I wouldn't use this here.
2. 00:18:754 (4,5) - A little bit confusing to play, so I would suggest using two circles instead to make it into a triple, since the triple you have at 01:22:129 makes it somewhat inconsistent.
3. Seems like this diff also needs to address the finish spam (see Normal diff for more clarity):
   
   1. 00:08:817 (1) - The whistle is enough to cover the required emphasis. No need for a finish.
   2. 00:09:192 (2) - Remove finish
   3. 00:09:567 (4) - Remove finish on the head
   4. 00:12:754 (4) - Remove the finish on the head and add it to 00:12:379 (3) instead

1. 00:00:563 - Please increase the volume here for better feedback when playing. 5% is absolutely inaudible.
2. 00:18:848 (1,2,3,4,5) - The stream doesn't look too polished. Try this:
   
   Code

   48,129,18848,5,8,0:0:0:0:
   51,103,18942,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   66,80,19035,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   88,63,19129,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   114,52,19223,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   141,46,19317,6,0,P|185:57|230:99,1,99.0000030212403,6|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

3. 00:26:442 (5) - Remove the circle here since there isn't anything in the music that constitutes the need for an object. You did this in all your other diffs, so please maintain consistency.
   
   1. 00:27:942 (2) - Same with here.
4. 00:36:567 (1,3) - Swap these on the timeline. I think that flows a lot better with respect to 00:37:129 (4).
5. 01:05:629 (2,3) - Please reconsider your spacing for this, since this is really difficult to read lol. I would strongly advise you to lower the spacing, since you have two extra diffs anyway, there shouldn't be a need force a pattern to be tricky and difficult.

1. Add -Yuzuriha to tags? well since she changes her name and I think it's necesarry
2. Uncheck widescreen support? there's no SB on this mapset

1. 00:11:442 (2,3) - That 1/2 slider on (3) is too sudden imo because the song itself still calm compare on 1/2 slider on this part 00:25:317 - , change into easier one with same rhythm instead? http://puu.sh/g6ZtB/dfd2557edb.jpg
2. 00:13:317 (1) - Make it a bit curve downward maybe? so the flow between 00:13:317 (1,2,3) - would better imo
3. 00:17:442 (6) - Stack perfectly with (4)?
4. 00:24:567 (6) - Change into 1/2 instead to fit more the drum? the star rating won't over 1.45 and add clap on it
5. 00:58:317 (1,2) - Spacing error
6. 01:11:067 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - The flow on them prety weird if I say
7. 01:21:567 (7) - Reduce the reverse, slider should end on red tick imo and add clap to emphize the drum sound
8. 01:22:317 (1) - Use slider 1/1 instead please, that same rhythm as 00:25:317 (1,2) -
9. 01:27:754 (4,1) - I think slider and spinner is too close on timeline and I guess that spinner is prety short for an Easy

1. 00:12:004 (2) - It seems the rhythm is better on 1/1 slider with reverse, because you skip drum sound here 00:12:379 - that quite noticeable
2. 01:13:692 (3,4) - For a better flow, I thing you can ctrl+g them so the triangel here 01:14:067 (4,5,1) - flow more natural upward
3. 01:17:067 (3,4,5,6,7) - Wow that pattern makes me very confused for a Normal, especially that stack on (3) and (7)
4. 01:27:754 (4,1) - Same issue as Easy, that slider and spinner is too close on timeline and I guess that spinner is prety short
   
   I'm concern on the hitsound, well kinda mess up a bit imo

• 英語いいかな～

1. 00:00:188 - Lower the volume? 100% volume too loud imo. I think 60% would be better
2. Based on piano sound, add whistle here 00:00:750 - and here 00:01:031 - would be better
3. You have double inherited point here 00:01:313 - , I think you can delete the green line as the slider speed is not change and adjust the 50% volume to red line instead because the Criteria said:
   
   
   
4. 00:22:317 - 00:52:317 - 01:19:317 - Use S:C1 there? I think the normal clap doesn't fit the music, a clap sound from S:C1 would be better imo
5. 00:57:379 (5) - Change into circle instead and stack on 00:57:567 (1) - for better reading http://puu.sh/g74Hr/052adeb322.jpg ? the curent is hard to follow with the two slider stream here 00:57:567 (1,2) -

Fort wrote:

why u delete your extra? D:

BFxtra is like Fxtra u know

-Nya- wrote:

Heya! M4M from above queue. Can I maybe ask that you give me a rating in my queue after applying the mod, thanks.
So let's get started.

Please note: Everything in bold is highly suggested.
Everything in red is unrankable.

Yuzuhira’s Hard:

1. 00:02:442 (2,3) –Blanket here?
2. 00:04:317 (1,2,3,4) –Make sure the distance between these sliders are the same. fix
   
3. 00:05:817 (1,2) –Space this out more. Why is 00:06:942 (2) –so close to 00:05:817 (1) -? There could be a bit more of a jump there in my opinion. fix
4. 00:24:379 (2) –Space this normally. Don’t place a jump here. Nothing in the music/vocals suggest a jump there. fix
   
5. 00:38:067 (3) –Nazi. Just move this slider a bit more upwards to be more in-line with 00:37:692 (2) – fix
   
6. 00:46:317 (1) –Stack the head of this slider on the head of 00:45:567 (3) – It looks a bit messy as it is now. fix
   
7. 00:47:817 (1,2,3) –Make sure the distance between these circles are the same. I think you used a distance of 1.4X there. chenge 1.3×
   
8. 00:52:879 –Hm, maybe place a note here? I think it will fit nicely. fix

Overall, I’d say the Hard diff is the best of these three. But all three of them can still do with more improving though.
Good Luck~!

Chloe wrote:

hyper

00:26:254 (6) - suggest to increase the spacing here to follow the emphasized from music http://puu.sh/gbO8V/690ad72807.jpg changed slightly
00:47:067 (1,2,3) - can't understand the spacing and the flow here, try to make better sence than more sence plz fixed
btw this diff is not hyper..... it's actually the insane

insane

00:23:254 (7) - add nc here instead of 00:23:442 (1) - , i know you wanna nc the heavier drum but plz consider about readable.ok
01:13:879 (4,5,6) - a triangle with ctrl+s+r technology would be much better here, i'd make a example for you, see it - http://puu.sh/gbOxj/8f775f2dea.jpg
ok
hardest

00:20:817 (3,4,5) - ??? plz.... fix
00:25:973 (8,9) - how about http://puu.sh/gbOME/70b75b4084.jpg ok
i don't think this diff flows good but ok.. it's just following mapper's feeling. trying to fix

others are fine, gl, i'm glad to see more newbies like you, take my star wat star? hehe

1. 00:00:188 - 00:01:313 - these 2 timing points are inefficient, i suggest just using negative offset if u absolutely need. to map that beginning
2. check xdeath's set u need an offset reset somewhere near the end because timing gets off.
3. hardest doesn't sound as impactful as extra or expert

1. why the hell is this ar4 use ar3
2. 00:11:817 (3,4) - try this rhythm
   
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3. 00:24:567 (1) - nc not needed
4. 00:30:754 (5) - just use a single circle at 00:30:754 - u dont need to have that 1/2 gap
5. 00:48:942 - i dont see why u should omit this
6. 00:50:442 (2,3) - nazi blanket
7. 00:53:442 (3,4) - slight ds thing
8. ur nc gets off somewhere mid kiai so here
   01:13:317 -
   01:16:317 -
   01:19:317 -
   should be nc'd the rest in this section only should be deleted.
9. check these urself
   
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1. 00:12:004 (2) - just use a 1/1 reverse.
2. 01:06:192 - should be mapped.
3. 01:24:567 (2,3) - wtf dont
4. this is like an easy except with wtf overlaps like 00:19:692 (2,3,4,5) -
   if u care to fix that issue, use less 2/1 and more 1/2. also maybe 1.1 sv
   u do have a few 1/2 but they aren't spread out well across the map. u have some parts with really high rhythm density then other parts with like none.
5. 01:10:317 (1,3) - slider end stacks are painful to read.

1. 00:00:563 (1,2,1) - pls
2. 00:09:942 - whats with the drum clap
3. 00:23:817 (1,2) - claps don't really follow the music
4. 00:30:754 (1,2,3) - could just replace this with 1/1 slider, circles don't fit since all ur doing is emphasizing the vocals which aren't even strong
5. 01:24:192 (2) - should curve this the other way :X or make it straight
6. 00:52:317 - i don't understand ur usage of default soft clap..
7. 00:57:473 - maybe add something here

1. 00:27:192 (1) - y nc
   00:36:567 (1) - ^
2. 00:49:317 - finish is better
3. 01:08:442 (1) - why nc. also why normal whistle = =

1. 00:11:817 (2) - feels better to stack this on 1
2. 00:12:004 (3) - could nc
3. 00:49:317 (3,1) - can u nerf a bit
4. 00:53:067 (1) - ctrl g?
5. 00:57:192 (1) - i see no reason for this circle to be so far apart
6. 00:58:692 (1) - again with the nc

Kibbleru wrote:

general

1. 00:00:188 - 00:01:313 - these 2 timing points are inefficient, i suggest just using negative offset if u absolutely need. to map that beginning the first red tick is for setting a green tick for the 1/4 stream at the beginning. i wouldnt change that now since i've already mapped everything
2. check xdeath's set u need an offset reset somewhere near the end because timing gets off. k lmao
3. hardest doesn't sound as impactful as extra or expert idk man, i think ill try expert

easy

1. why the hell is this ar4 use ar3
2. 00:11:817 (3,4) - try this rhythm
   
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3. 00:24:567 (1) - nc not needed
4. 00:30:754 (5) - just use a single circle at 00:30:754 - u dont need to have that 1/2 gap
5. 00:48:942 - i dont see why u should omit this
6. 00:50:442 (2,3) - nazi blanket
7. 00:53:442 (3,4) - slight ds thing
8. ur nc gets off somewhere mid kiai so here
   01:13:317 -
   01:16:317 -
   01:19:317 -
   should be nc'd the rest in this section only should be deleted.
9. check these urself
   
   SPOILER

   

all fix
normal

1. 00:12:004 (2) - just use a 1/1 reverse.
2. 01:06:192 - should be mapped.
3. 01:24:567 (2,3) - wtf dont
4. this is like an easy except with wtf overlaps like 00:19:692 (2,3,4,5) -
   if u care to fix that issue, use less 2/1 and more 1/2. also maybe 1.1 sv
   u do have a few 1/2 but they aren't spread out well across the map. u have some parts with really high rhythm density then other parts with like none.
5. 01:10:317 (1,3) - slider end stacks are painful to read.

all fix


hyper

1. 00:27:192 (1) - y nc
   00:36:567 (1) - ^
2. 00:49:317 - finish is better
3. 01:08:442 (1) - why nc. also why normal whistle = =

all fix
insane

1. 00:11:817 (2) - feels better to stack this on 1
2. 00:12:004 (3) - could nc
3. 00:49:317 (3,1) - can u nerf a bit
4. 00:53:067 (1) - ctrl g?
5. 00:57:192 (1) - i see no reason for this circle to be so far apart
6. 00:58:692 (1) - again with the nc

Giralda wrote:

Hey! M4M from my queue (:

[Easy]

1. 00:11:817 (3) - The 1/2 sliders in this map are a bit confusing to catch. I know that you want to keep them, but I'm suggesting to keep it simple, since making it into a Normal isn't a viable solution and what we really need is a smooth progression of difficulties, given that you want a proper spread. Personally, I would just change these 1/2 sliders into a circle, on the white tick in which where your slider head originally would be. The following are timestamps for all of the 1/2 sliders that should be changed:
   
   1. 00:26:067 (2) -
   2. 00:27:567 (4) -
   3. 00:29:067 (6) -
   4. 01:23:067 (2) -
   5. 01:24:567 (4) -
   6. 01:26:067 (6) -
2. 01:09:567 (8,1) - Would look pretty nice if these become a blanket.
3. 01:18:567 (2,3) - Looks a little confusing to play for new players due to the stacked ends. I wouldn't suggest trying something like this on a lower difficulty since new players won't be able to interpret this fast enough compared to experienced players.
4. 01:21:567 (7) - I would suggest against the overlap here, mainly because it will confuse new players (again), because the overlap will make it feel like you'd have to rush to 01:22:317 (1) in order to hit it right, which is not the intended effect we're trying to achieve. In addition, there was no indication of a 1/2 repeat in the earlier stages of the map, nor were their any significant overlaps to allow the player to prepare for it.
5. 01:28:504 (1) - I would strongly suggest you don't use this short of a spinner for an Easy. New players are not as quick on reflexes so it would cause a lot of frustration if they break at the end of the map.

[Normal]

1. 00:05:817 (4) - Not very confident about the slider head being here. I'm worried about the slider end of 00:04:317 (2) not giving enough time for new players to react to 00:05:817 (4). Up to you, I guess.
2. 00:07:317 (2) - Seems like you accidentally set this to a Normal sampleset, so remove it to make it a soft-hitwhistle again.
   
   1. 00:38:442 (3) - accidental Normal sampleset on the slider end o.o
   2. 00:40:317 (1) - On the head lol
3. There's a set of finish spams that I would like to address, which really don't sound that pleasing to the ears, so it would be great if you could remove some of them:
   
   1. 00:17:067 (3) - Remove finish on both head and end
   2. 00:18:567 (5) - Remove finish on tail
   3. 00:20:067 (3) - Remove finish
   4. 00:22:317 (2) - Remove finish on head and tail
   5. 00:23:442 (3) - Remove finish
   6. 00:23:817 (4) - Remove finish on slider end

[Yuzuriha's Hard]

• 
  
  
  [Insane]
  

1. 00:00:563 - Please increase the volume here for better feedback when playing. 5% is absolutely inaudible.
2. 00:18:848 (1,2,3,4,5) - The stream doesn't look too polished. Try this:
   
   Code

   48,129,18848,5,8,0:0:0:0:
   51,103,18942,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   66,80,19035,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   88,63,19129,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   114,52,19223,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   141,46,19317,6,0,P|185:57|230:99,1,99.0000030212403,6|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

3. 00:26:442 (5) - Remove the circle here since there isn't anything in the music that constitutes the need for an object. You did this in all your other diffs, so please maintain consistency.
   
   1. 00:27:942 (2) - Same with here.
4. 00:36:567 (1,3) - Swap these on the timeline. I think that flows a lot better with respect to 00:37:129 (4).
5. 01:05:629 (2,3) - Please reconsider your spacing for this, since this is really difficult to read lol. I would strongly advise you to lower the spacing, since you have two extra diffs anyway, there shouldn't be a need force a pattern to be tricky and difficult.

all fix
Good luck on the way.

Kibbleru wrote:

xdeath

xxdeathx wrote:

Kibbleru wrote:

xdeath

Who the hell is this, did you just trim one x from both sides of my name?

baraatje123 wrote:

[Hyper]
00:00:563 (1,2) - Distance might be a little too high for it being "just" a hyper not really
00:11:817 (3) - NC for the "new part" of the song
00:12:754 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Too fast for Hyper maybe? low DS stream
00:14:067 (3,5) - Improve blanket
00:16:692 (2,4,5) - Slight overlap> Quite hard to see though
00:55:317 (3,2) - not a big fan of this overlap
00:57:379 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - Stream is really weird, due to the stack in it i had to find a way to fit the drum/snare 1/4s and the piano 1/4s so i did this
01:19:317 (1,2,3) - Distance might be a little too high for it being "just" a hyper no
01:22:692 (2,1) - Looks like 1/2 to me (distance)

[Insane]
00:01:317 (3) - NC this, because of start of vocals
00:11:817 (1,2,3) - Distance is really confusing here
00:15:848 (4) - Move a little to left bottom (476:236 for example) to imply it's als 1/4 distancedid a unstack
00:18:848 (4,5,6,7,8) - Wut, the distance with these is weird intended as stream jump but i may consider removing
00:41:817 (3,4) - There is no point in having sliders like these if you are gonna silence the slider end, make them circles (this is also unrankable, because it uses soft sampleset, which has a silent sliderslide, thus the end MUST have and audible hitsound (If I understood the new rule correctly - p/3904505) Tbh, I don't know if it's a rule or not, but it's better to do something about it that thread doesnt say anything about that being unrankable

[hardest]
Consider Capitalizing it, so it'll be Hardest, instead of hardest

00:01:317 (3) - NC for start of vocals
00:20:442 (5,6,1) - Consider hightening the DS
00:44:442 (3,1) - Consider stacking these
01:26:596 (1,2,3) - These sliders look kinda ugly having the red node near the end, consider making it straight, having the node earlier, or make it a grey node

Also, please check all diffs to see if there are useless green timing points
(For example hardest 1:04:129 and 1:04:879, they are the exact same)

Good luck!!

1. soft-hitclap, 3, soft-slidertick2 is having large delay. look at the precised part. here is non-delayed file :3 http://puu.sh/gnhgB/143d69203e.wav
   
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2. the gap of spread between Easy and Normal is really heavy. in Normal, like 00:39:004 (4,5,6,7) - and 00:44:254 (3,4,5) - makes the difficulty very high, also 01:13:317 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1) - this circle patterns are too.
3. check-off widescreen support in Hyper, EXPERT. yours video and BG size is already 16:9 ( widescreen ) ratio. it isn't working anymore.
4. Easy and Yuzuriha's Hard having different red timing section.

1. some green timing sections are unsnapped.
   
   SPOILER

   00:22:042 -> 00:22:035
   01:07:314 -> 01:07:317
   01:07:689 -> 01:07:692
   01:08:064 -> 01:08:067
   01:08:439 -> 01:08:442
2. 00:25:317 (1) - HP bar little touched.
3. 00:28:129 (1) - out of screen. you should move this to upside more. you can catch this by playing auto.
4. 00:59:442 (2) - distance is x1.53..?

1. some green timing sections are unsnapped.
   
   SPOILER

   00:43:196 -> 00:43:223
   00:48:939 -> 00:48:942
   01:07:314 -> 01:07:317
   01:07:689 -> 01:07:692
   01:08:064 -> 01:08:067
   01:08:439 -> 01:08:442
2. there is so many mismatched distance. you should make the distance steadily. 00:39:942 (8) - also like this is really hard pattern in Normal.
3. 00:05:442 - clap sound isn't good in this hush part. it would be better to hear if you delete this.
4. 00:38:817 - normal additions and whistle isn't not suitable with song imo.
5. 01:11:442 (3) - move this to like x:274, y:252. in low difficulty, 1/1 stack isn't welcomed from new players.
6. 01:27:754 (4) - also here too.

1. 00:35:629 (5) - more blanket?
2. 00:54:942 - I assure you, you missed clap
3. 01:23:629 (1) - there is good chance of some peoples are misreaded this to 1/2. how about increasing distance more?

1. 01:14:817 - you missed whistle maybe?
2. 01:17:067 - normal additions and whistle isn't not suitable with song imo.

1. some green timing sections are unsnapped.
   
   SPOILER

   00:48:189 -> 00:48:192
   01:07:314 -> 01:07:317
   01:07:689 -> 01:07:692
   01:08:064 -> 01:08:067
   01:08:439 -> 01:08:442
   01:27:754 -> 01:27:721
2. 00:27:567 - I'm pretty sure you missed additions in slider's start.
3. 00:57:942 (5) - it seems not supported by anything sound. I highly recommend that you fill up as 1/4.
4. 01:10:223 (3) - it is overmapped. can't catch anything sound in here.

1. make sure so many unsnapped notes.
   
   SPOILER

   
2. OD+1. OD 7 make players are able to do easily SS. yours are Extra. not Insane lol
3. 00:01:317 - volume of between red and green timing in same section is incorrected.
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:13:598 - its symbol sound is screwed. I recommend deleting finish.
5. 01:09:192 (7) - I highly recommend adding NC here. it is too invisible to play.
6. 01:21:754 (2) - don't you think its distance isn't matched up well about sounds?
7. 01:27:721 (1) - just symbol sound in song's end is really flat. what about this?
   
   SPOILER

   

1. some green timing sections are unsnapped.
   
   SPOILER

   00:20:917 -> 00:20:910
   00:43:196 -> 00:43:223
   00:48:189 -> 00:48:192
   01:07:314 -> 01:07:317
   01:07:689 -> 01:07:692
   01:08:064 -> 01:08:067
   01:08:439 -> 01:08:442
2. 00:15:567 (5) - maybe you missed sampleset of slider body
3. 00:49:692 - volume is incorrected. it is too low compared with before your all about pattern.
4. 00:53:067 (1) - same opinion as 00:15:567 (5)
5. 00:57:567 (1,2,3,4) - I'd rather change circles to 1/4 short sliders. the circle isn't presented well about piano sound imo.
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:12:379 (2) - like this jump is apprehended that regarded as 1/4 rhythm. I recommend increasing distance more high.
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 01:27:721 (1) - just symbol sound in song's end is really flat. what about this?
   
   SPOILER

   

scanter wrote:

yo. as you requested


Yuzuriha's Hard

1. 00:35:629 (5) - more blanket? fix
   
2. 00:54:942 - I assure you, you missed clap fix
3. 01:23:629 (1) - there is good chance of some peoples are misreaded this to 1/2. how about increasing distance more?

well. to play every difficulty seems fine except Easy and Normal. also you need hitsounds work more. Good luck