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Hanatan - Jishou Mushoku [Osu|CatchTheBeat]

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Moo-Chan
412 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
Moo-Chan
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Wednesday, April 29, 2015 at 4:24:55 PM

Artist: Hanatan
Title: Jishou Mushoku
Tags: nekobolo hatsune miku utaite vocaloid achromatic nicovideo self inflicted yurica ユリカ pishifat rakuen smug- vhy cut
BPM: 120
Filesize: 7957kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.49 stars, 88 notes)
  2. Insane (4.44 stars, 240 notes)
  3. pishi's Normal (2.1 stars, 160 notes)
  4. Rakuen's Hard (3.33 stars, 200 notes)
  5. Vhy's Rain (3.74 stars, 250 notes)
Download: Hanatan - Jishou Mushoku
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Just by this kind of me being alive,
Why's it that you smile so?
With you smiling like that,
It'd be nice if there were no more
Reasons for me to say goodbye even if,
I were sad or wanted to vanish.

Difficulty Set

: Easy by me
: pishi's Normal by pishifat
: Rakuen's Hard by Rakuen
: Insane by me
: Vhy's Rain by Vhy
Thanks everyone who's modded and contributed !
Last edited by Moo-Chan , edited 60 times in total.
Want 2 Buy Avon
264 posts
Joined February 2014
Want 2 Buy Avon
Hi hi, mod time~

[Insane]
  1. 00:10:140 (3) - Move this to x:383 y:253 for perfect stack
  2. 00:10:807 (1,2) - This blanket could be a bit better
  3. 00:24:640 (1) - Move to x:213 y:152
  4. 00:27:473 (3,5) - Fix blanket
  5. I'd ctrl+G 00:27:473 (3,4) - and ctrl+G 00:27:807 (5) - cause it feels like it flows better to me
  6. 00:54:307 (1,1,1) - why the NC's just kidding don't hit me xD
  7. 00:58:807 (1,2) - I don't think these flow very well :x
  8. 00:58:807 (1) - I'd also make some kind of shaped slider or something but that's a personal preference kind of thing
  9. 01:00:307 (6,1) - This blanket could be better
  10. 01:01:807 (5) - Ctrl+G this maybe
  11. 01:04:306 (5) - Move this to x:148 y:287 to stack perfectly
  12. 01:07:640 (4) - I know I said this was ok before but maybe make the edge show a little bit from under the slider
  13. 01:07:807 (5,6) - Fix the blanket
  14. 01:15:640 (4) - Move to x:219 y:232
  15. 01:19:307 (3) - I'd Ctrl+G this
  16. 01:21:807 (4,5) - Fix this blanket
  17. 01:26:807 - why turn off kiai ;w;
Not much I could find, good luck~ :3 *coughs* make it OD9 *coughs*
Moo-Chan
412 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
Moo-Chan

Xellie wrote:

Hi hi, mod time~

xellie
[Insane]
  1. 00:10:140 (3) - Move this to x:383 y:253 for perfect stack ok
  2. 00:10:807 (1,2) - This blanket could be a bit better yea but thats like, off by nothing so its fine
  3. 00:24:640 (1) - Move to x:213 y:152 k
  4. 00:27:473 (3,5) - Fix blanket again, only off by a little
  5. I'd ctrl+G 00:27:473 (3,4) - and ctrl+G 00:27:807 (5) - cause it feels like it flows better to me gonna keep the same. the way you say to fix it breaks flow imo
  6. 00:54:307 (1,1,1) - why the NC's just kidding don't hit me xD
  7. 00:58:807 (1,2) - I don't think these flow very well :x curved the straight slider but didnt change anything else
  8. 00:58:807 (1) - I'd also make some kind of shaped slider or something but that's a personal preference kind of thing eh
  9. 01:00:307 (6,1) - This blanket could be better stop being so nazi. its off by a tail end
  10. 01:01:807 (5) - Ctrl+G this maybe feel like it'd break flow
  11. 01:04:306 (5) - Move this to x:148 y:287 to stack perfectly ok
  12. 01:07:640 (4) - I know I said this was ok before but maybe make the edge show a little bit from under the slider i think its fine
  13. 01:07:807 (5,6) - Fix the blanket done
  14. 01:15:640 (4) - Move to x:219 y:232 ok
  15. 01:19:307 (3) - I'd Ctrl+G this if i did it'd mess up the pattern im going for
  16. 01:21:807 (4,5) - Fix this blanket think i did? idk
  17. 01:26:807 - why turn off kiai ;w; so theres an effect on the slow slider
Not much I could find, good luck~ :3 *coughs* make it OD9 *coughs* no
thank yew
Rakuen
1,654 posts
Joined March 2013
Rakuen
Hi!

Done my gd!

Here are the hitsounds I used: http://puu.sh/dM37v/fbe59c057d.zip (please put them p.p)

Here's my diff: http://puu.sh/dM39A/129e7f5c30.osu
Moo-Chan
412 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
Moo-Chan

Rakuen wrote:

Hi!

Done my gd!

Here are the hitsounds I used: http://puu.sh/dM37v/fbe59c057d.zip (please put them p.p)

Here's my diff: http://puu.sh/dM39A/129e7f5c30.osu
updated [:
Natsu
8,074 posts
Joined September 2012
Natsu
I'll be here soon, sorry for being late :(
Vhy
678 posts
Joined November 2012
Vhy
as request via in-game

uhhh.. what a big changes. i dunno what happen here but as if i remembered well, this rain when before i update was something like "playable" stuff. and now to be honest it's like a mess everywhere like they're unorganized well. here let me explain for you.

in CtB diff, first all you need is you should know about the basic mapping. it's about spacing, and is all matter here. you need to find out how many x point is needed to spawn a HDash in such bpm and timeline. if you understand all about these stuff then it's your choice where to put a HDash, jump, normal spacing, and anti jump by listening the song.

second. if you intend to make a "rain" diff here, please avoid to make a pattern something like you did at 00:08:807 (1,2,3,4,5). a two HDashes in every circle by every tick on timeline is always enjoyable but they can be turned into a deadly pattern if followed by a chain jump in the next notes since you are using a zigzag pattern there. also another pattern like 00:14:807 (1,2,3,4,5,6) should have their distance to reduced a lot. a chain jump which starts a huge spacing on the first then increase a little by little periodically until a HDash spawn in the last pattern plus with that all zigzag pattern yeah, it's not even fun to play but stressing. i can't suggest more because mostly your pattern in this map has similar from these what i mention above. but please look at your overall pattern again and pay more attention to it. i'd really like to see more pattern like you did at 00:32:473 (6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) more, a simply regular flow with normal spacing is always good tho. no need to force your self to make a pattern that change the direction on every note. well the point is, your rain here is more like an overdose one not an ideal rain. by distinguish some pattern that has similar from these would reduce the difficulty a lot and will result a proper rain

if you agree'd with above then i'll wait for the result. and if you feels your map is going better, im willing to full mod this.

about the platter GD, i can't just do it now because i need to see your result on your rain first. im just afraid of huge different on spread that's all

looking forward this. good luck ;)


and hi baka natsu :p
guineaQ
1,588 posts
Joined December 2013
guineaQ
Exactly 2.30 stars
osu file format v14

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 56307
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 8807,24640,40807
DistanceSpacing: 1.8
BeatDivisor: 3
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Jishou Mushoku
TitleUnicode:自傷無色
Artist:Hanatan
ArtistUnicode:花たん
Creator:Moo-Chan
Version:guineaQ's Advanced
Source:
Tags:rakuen guineaq smug- cut
BeatmapID:649436
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:3.7
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.7
SliderTickRate:1

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btw I just copied hitsounds from Rakuen so if it's bad it's Rakuen's fault /me runs
Vhy
678 posts
Joined November 2012
Vhy
all hail greenlines x.x
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Fizz
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Fizz
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osu file format v14

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TitleUnicode:自傷無色
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Tags:rakuen guineaq smug- cut
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Moo-Chan
412 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
Moo-Chan
updated
Fizz
275 posts
Joined September 2013
Fizz
modding at the request of Mooie

[Easy]
Slider Tick rate 3 seems a bit much, but it doesn't really matter either way

00:12:807 (5) - NC should go here
00:24:807 (1) - Maybe consider repositioning so it doesn't overlap 4, or you could blanket it
Solid diff

[guineaQ's Advanced]
Please quieten the ding sounds around 00:24:807 - they're so loud and ear raping

00:45:807 (3) - Maybe blanket 00:44:807 (1) - so you change up the shaping

[Rakuen's Hard]
Again please quieten the dinging

00:28:807 (2) - NC goes here
00:32:807 (2) - ^
00:58:807 (2) - ^
01:08:807 (2) - ^
01:10:807 (2) - ^

[Insane]
00:12:307 (4) - Consider changing this so the player can click the downbeat instead
00:20:307 (5) - ^
00:23:807 (7) - Maybe add NC here
00:24:807 (2) - NC goes here
00:34:807 (1) - is the whistle sliderslide on purpose here?
00:41:807 (4,5) - These can be blanketed better
00:48:807 (1) - It would probably be easier to double blanket these if you used a red point in the middle
00:53:307 (1) - I think the new combo chains should only start at 00:54:807 (1) -
01:16:307 (6) - I don't know if these whistles fit

[Smug's Insane]
wow why'd you let such a noob mapper in this great mapset, just remap the whole thing y-yes sir

Could only find nitpicky things. Good luck finding more mods~ starred
Mortem
690 posts
Joined July 2013
Mortem
hi.

General:
Fix tags in Rakuen's Difficulty.

Easy:
There are some spacing issues. I mean, in Easy / Normal difficulties should be a constant DS. But it isn't here. Beautiful example here: 00:26:807 (3,1) -
00:23:807 (4,1) - Fix the overlap here. Just make a other angle of the slider. Also if you apply this, rotate also 00:25:807 (2) - to preserve the flow.
00:42:807 (1) - Remove NC.
00:45:807 (3) - Start NC.
00:46:807 (1) - Remove NC.
00:54:807 (1,1) - Remove NC. and I don't think that's good idea to make a stack there.
01:26:807 (1,1) - Remove NC.

Normal:¨
Check AIMod and fix DS issues.
00:16:807 (1) - Move it little bit down. (One part is off the playing area)
00:21:307 (1,2) - ^
00:30:307 (3) - ^
There are tons of notes that are outside the playing area. I don't want to write them all of them. (Hope you'll find out which notes I meant)
00:24:473 (5,6) - Place them like this.
00:34:640 (4) - Place it correctly in front of the slider. (It is straight slider so why to put the circle like that?)
00:47:640 (2) - ^
01:15:640 (2) - ^
01:21:140 (1,3) - ^

guineaQ's Advanced
00:18:307 (4) - Ahhh..this slider. Make it more curvy please. And make a blanket with 00:17:307 (2) -
Otherwise it's good.

Rakuen's Hard
Imo, some slider deserve a little improvement. Anything else seems fine.

Insane
00:16:307 (6,7,8) - You are breaking a flow here T_T. Move the slider & circle behind the 00:17:140 (2) - and rotate them. Maybe like this?

Smug's Insane
Should be extra imo. xD - Seems fine.

Also I noticed a different hitsound placement in each diff. Imo, it would be great if every difficulty have a same hitsounds.
You need to work on it, it's not that bad but it's not perfect either.
Hope that helps.
Good luck.
guineaQ
1,588 posts
Joined December 2013
guineaQ
@Smug-: killed those ding sounds, yes they hurt my ears too but i kept the slider shape as it is
@Pjecoo: gave more extremity in slider shape, but I'm not blanketing that

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: hana.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 56307
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 8807,24640,40807
DistanceSpacing: 1.8
BeatDivisor: 3
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Jishou Mushoku
TitleUnicode:自傷無色
Artist:Hanatan
ArtistUnicode:花たん
Creator:Moo-Chan
Version:guineaQ's Advanced
Source:
Tags:rakuen guineaq smug- vhy cut
BeatmapID:649436
BeatmapSetID:239627

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:3.7
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.7
SliderTickRate:1

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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
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Moo-Chan
412 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
Moo-Chan
Smugie

Smug- wrote:

modding at the request of Mooie

[Easy]
Slider Tick rate 3 seems a bit much, but it doesn't really matter either way

00:12:807 (5) - NC should go here ok
00:24:807 (1) - Maybe consider repositioning so it doesn't overlap 4, or you could blanket it i think its alright
Solid diff ♥

[Insane]
00:12:307 (4) - Consider changing this so the player can click the downbeat instead eh, i like the way this plays. i know you should usually not have a slider end on a downbeat, but its not a big deal here imo
00:20:307 (5) - ^ ^
00:23:807 (7) - Maybe add NC here sure
00:24:807 (2) - NC goes here ok
00:34:807 (1) - is the whistle sliderslide on purpose here? no, dunno why it was like that
00:41:807 (4,5) - These can be blanketed better ok
00:48:807 (1) - It would probably be easier to double blanket these if you used a red point in the middle maybe, but ima keep it like this
00:53:307 (1) - I think the new combo chains should only start at 00:54:807 (1) - ok
01:16:307 (6) - I don't know if these whistles fit the whole slider was a whistle for some reason. made only the head a whistle

Could only find nitpicky things. Good luck finding more mods~ starred thanks c:

Pjecoo

Pjecoo wrote:

hi. hi

General:
Fix tags in Rakuen's Difficulty. done

Easy:
There are some spacing issues. I mean, in Easy / Normal difficulties should be a constant DS. But it isn't here. Beautiful example here: 00:26:807 (3,1) - uh, i used DS all the way through this diff, if youre talking about it being like 0.01 off, i dont really see a point in fixing it because of how little a difference it is
00:23:807 (4,1) - Fix the overlap here. Just make a other angle of the slider. Also if you apply this, rotate also 00:25:807 (2) - to preserve the flow. its fine how it is imo. ive seen many other easys with small overlaps like this. its not even noticeable when playing that slider. if i get more mods on this particular part, then ill change it
00:42:807 (1) - Remove NC. ok
00:45:807 (3) - Start NC. ^
00:46:807 (1) - Remove NC. ^
00:54:807 (1,1) - Remove NC. and I don't think that's good idea to make a stack there. ill keep both
01:26:807 (1,1) - Remove NC. the nc is fine imo

Normal:¨
Check AIMod and fix DS issues. fixed the AIMod thing, and again, i used DS all throughout this diff (i only increased it in the kiai time and possibly in other spots), and if youre talking about it being a very small DS off, it doesnt matter to me to change it
00:16:807 (1) - Move it little bit down. (One part is off the playing area) ok
00:21:307 (1,2) - ^ ^
00:30:307 (3) - ^ ^
There are tons of notes that are outside the playing area. I don't want to write them all of them. (Hope you'll find out which notes I meant) got them
00:24:473 (5,6) - Place them like this.isnt that how it is. i neatened them kinda
00:34:640 (4) - Place it correctly in front of the slider. (It is straight slider so why to put the circle like that?) fixed
00:47:640 (2) - ^ ^
01:15:640 (2) - ^ ^
01:21:140 (1,3) - ^ ^

Insane
00:16:307 (6,7,8) - You are breaking a flow here T_T. Move the slider & circle behind the 00:17:140 (2) - and rotate them. Maybe like this? idk what youre talking about lol. and the picture isnt clear because there are no numbers on your circles, so i just did something differently

Smug's Insane
Should be extra imo. xD - Seems fine. he said i could change it 8)

Also I noticed a different hitsound placement in each diff. Imo, it would be great if every difficulty have a same hitsounds.
You need to work on it, it's not that bad but it's not perfect either.
Hope that helps.
Good luck. thanksss
Ringating
717 posts
Joined August 2013
Ringating
from my queue:

cropped and resized this to 1366x768:
bg

the compression goal was to just keep it under 1 MB, since the canvas texture makes the image fairly complex
no kds
Moo-Chan
412 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
Moo-Chan

Ringating wrote:

from my queue:

cropped and resized this to 1366x768:
bg

the compression goal was to just keep it under 1 MB, since the canvas texture makes the image fairly complex
no kds
thanks bby ♥
Want 2 Buy Avon
264 posts
Joined February 2014
Want 2 Buy Avon
Maeg smells like shit, and I'm here to mod

[Easy]
  1. 00:21:807 (2,3) - You could blanket these or move them in a way where you wouldn't get mistaken for messing up a blanket
  2. 00:23:807 (4) - Don't hurt me
  3. 00:29:807 (2,3) - Could fix the blanket some
  4. 00:44:307 (5) - I'd move this up some cause I think it'd flow a little better, maybe to x:344 y:208 or something, and resnap the notes afterwards
  5. 01:17:307 (1,2) - These don't flow very well imo, the 1 feels like it flows above the 2 into nothing
[Guineaq's advanced]
  1. 00:16:807 (1,2) - why you do dis to me
  2. Such flow much wow
[Rakuen's Hard]
  1. 00:10:807 (1,2) - This blanket can be touched up
  2. 00:20:807 (1,2,3,4,5) - I feel like all these straight lines in a row aren't very fun to play, I don't think the back and forth motion matches the song
  3. 00:34:807 (1) - I'm not so sure about this slider shape, I'd suggest changing it some
  4. 01:11:807 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - I feel like this is a place you could have a couple jumps instead of the bland straight lines again
[Insane]
  1. 00:16:140 (4,5,6) - I think the distance between these should be the same as the other notes in the combo since the music doesn't have anything that sounds like a jump
  2. 00:23:473 (5,6) - I'd ctrl+G these cause I feel like it'd feel more natural to go the same direction both times
  3. 00:39:807 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This feels like random jumps with no set pattern, maybe make them symmetrical or into some kind of shape or something
  4. 01:12:473 (5,6) - Same thing about flowing in the same direction as before
[Smug's Extra]
  1. 00:28:307 (4,5,6) - This could be made into jumps, I think it'd be more interesting than a straight line
  2. 01:00:140 (2) - I'd shorten this to the white tick and make it a repeat slider, it feels way more natural to have a hitsound on the white tick since her voice is pretty loud
  3. 01:16:140 (2) - Same thing
  4. TBH I don't really understand your sv changes in the beginning but I figure you have some idea behind them so I won't say to remove them or something
There ya gooo~
guineaQ
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Joined December 2013
guineaQ
@Xellie: cause I can

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Rakuen
1,654 posts
Joined March 2013
Rakuen

Smug- wrote:

modding at the request of Mooie

[Rakuen's Hard]
Again please quieten the dinging

00:28:807 (2) - NC goes here
00:32:807 (2) - ^
00:58:807 (2) - ^
01:08:807 (2) - ^
01:10:807 (2) - ^

Sorry, no change for the NCs. It goes either on stacks, or vocal combo

Could only find nitpicky things. Good luck finding more mods~ starred
Thanks for the mods!

Pjecoo wrote:

hi.

Rakuen's Hard
Imo, some slider deserve a little improvement. Anything else seems fine. Uhm...okay~

Also I noticed a different hitsound placement in each diff. Imo, it would be great if every difficulty have a same hitsounds.
You need to work on it, it's not that bad but it's not perfect either.
Hope that helps.
Good luck.
Thanks for the mods!

Xellie wrote:

Maeg smells like shit, and I'm here to mod

[Rakuen's Hard]
  1. 00:10:807 (1,2) - This blanket can be touched up Feels fine with same shape (mirror)
  2. 00:20:807 (1,2,3,4,5) - I feel like all these straight lines in a row aren't very fun to play, I don't think the back and forth motion matches the song It's the same rhythm as previous 4 notes, I'd personally prefer a neat map, or arrangements I like
  3. 00:34:807 (1) - I'm not so sure about this slider shape, I'd suggest changing it some Can't really notice shapes when you playing, as long as it's readable
  4. 01:11:807 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - I feel like this is a place you could have a couple jumps instead of the bland straight lines again It's quite fun for DT / HD+HR imo, single tap works nicely too. Jumping would be too over for a Hard diff
There ya gooo~
Thanks for the mods!
Moo-Chan
412 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
Moo-Chan
Dirk

Xellie wrote:

Maeg smells like shit, and I'm here to mod

[Easy]
  1. 00:21:807 (2,3) - You could blanket these or move them in a way where you wouldn't get mistaken for messing up a blanket ok
  2. 00:23:807 (4) - Don't hurt me I FIXED IT GOD SUDHFG
  3. 00:29:807 (2,3) - Could fix the blanket some its fine
  4. 00:44:307 (5) - I'd move this up some cause I think it'd flow a little better, maybe to x:344 y:208 or something, and resnap the notes afterwards i like it like this though
  5. 01:17:307 (1,2) - These don't flow very well imo, the 1 feels like it flows above the 2 into nothing fixed i guess
[Insane]
  1. 00:16:140 (4,5,6) - I think the distance between these should be the same as the other notes in the combo since the music doesn't have anything that sounds like a jump eh, yeah but i like this part so ill keep it
  2. 00:23:473 (5,6) - I'd ctrl+G these cause I feel like it'd feel more natural to go the same direction both times that plays badly
  3. 00:39:807 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This feels like random jumps with no set pattern, maybe make them symmetrical or into some kind of shape or something doesnt have to be a pattern for it to be nice. it plays and flows well enough to keep, and personally, i like the jump i made
  4. 01:12:473 (5,6) - Same thing about flowing in the same direction as before again, breaks flow and plays badly
There ya gooo~ thanksss
guineaQ
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Moo-Chan
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Topic Starter
Moo-Chan

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autofanboy
Elite Mapper / osu!trivium Champion
1,578 posts
Joined January 2011
autofanboy
Mod Requested by Moo-Chan via in-game and PM

[General]
  1. Tags: It seems like some of the tags can be added by referring to the following maps - https://osu.ppy.sh/s/104017 and https://osu.ppy.sh/s/167000. (You might want to add: Hatsune Miku, Utaite, Vocaloid, Achromatic, Nicovideo, Self inflicted etc.)

[ Vhy's Rain]
  1. 00:14:307 - I think it is not necessary to reduce the audio greatly from 70% to 30%, it sounds weird and actually a sound deserves there. I recommend reducing the audio there from 70% to 50% or 60% instead; or just keep it 70%.
  2. 00:22:807 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Seems too repetitive with 1/3 circle streams :c Change 00:23:807 (7,8,9,10,11,12) to another pattern with sliders or reversed sliders.
  3. 00:23:807 (7,8,9,10,11,12) - Don't forget to NC (7) because 12 is a big combo, it needs to be chopped down!
  4. 00:25:307 (2,3) - Feels good with a mild HDash, also to maintain a good flow between (3,4) by keeping the distance smaller
  5. 00:37:140 (2) - It sounds a little bit offbeat, probably because of the rhythm here. Try changing this into a 1/3 reversed slider.
  6. 00:43:640 (4,5) - Since you add quite a lot of HDash when there is a clap, there should be a HDash between (4,5) as well.
  7. 00:44:807 - Sounds pretty weird with a 70% to 30% audio reduction, reduce it to 50%.
  8. 00:46:307 - ^
  9. 00:48:307 (5,1) - I think the distance here can be smaller, it is hard to notice as the note density there is 1/1
  10. 00:53:307 (3,4) - Need a HDash, it feels so plain here without HDash while there are a tons of them before this part
  11. 00:54:307 (6,1) - ^
  12. 01:12:307 (6,7,1) - This is a bit of exhausting after HDashing in (6,7) and you need a big tide of (7) to (1), better change this part - maybe remove HDash in (6,7)

    The patterns in this diff is way too... overused, or in other words, too repetitive. Look at the whole diff, so many straight-standing sliders, which is not that great as a pattern since it is lack of movements. Also, it makes the flow difficult because you stand straightly and then you have to dash which is not that noticeable. I highly recommend to change at least some of them to other patterns instead of standing sliders.


    Not that many to point out because the patterns in this diff is too similar, chiefly straight-standing sliders and straight left/right sliders. I know this is just mapping style difference, but I would like to see more diversity between the patterns, maybe you can put some more curved sliders or reversed sliders, at least.

Good luck for getting this mapset ranked!

-AFB
Moo-Chan
412 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
Moo-Chan

alienflybot wrote:

Mod Requested by Moo-Chan via in-game and PM

[General]
  1. Tags: It seems like some of the tags can be added by referring to the following maps - https://osu.ppy.sh/s/104017 and https://osu.ppy.sh/s/167000. (You might want to add: Hatsune Miku, Utaite, Vocaloid, Achromatic, Nicovideo, Self inflicted etc.) alrighty, thanks !

Good luck for getting this mapset ranked!
♥
-AFB
Vhy
678 posts
Joined November 2012
Vhy

alienflybot wrote:

Mod Requested by Moo-Chan via in-game and PM

[General]
  1. Tags: It seems like some of the tags can be added by referring to the following maps - https://osu.ppy.sh/s/104017 and https://osu.ppy.sh/s/167000. (You might want to add: Hatsune Miku, Utaite, Vocaloid, Achromatic, Nicovideo, Self inflicted etc.)

[ Vhy's Rain]
  1. 00:14:307 - I think it is not necessary to reduce the audio greatly from 70% to 30%, it sounds weird and actually a sound deserves there. I recommend reducing the audio there from 70% to 50% or 60% instead; or just keep it 70%. it's because the bell hitsound its self were too loud. i've already tried the volume above 30% and the bell still sounds loud to me. 30% is the best i could do for now :3
  2. 00:22:807 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Seems too repetitive with 1/3 circle streams :c Change 00:23:807 (7,8,9,10,11,12) to another pattern with sliders or reversed sliders. mmmh lol they're not a stream. it's just a regular timeline. anyway i put a circle all of them because the music it self. i bet you do realize how i put those circle with the spacing along with the volume that gradually increase on each circle. with a slider im sure you can't do this thing :p
  3. 00:23:807 (7,8,9,10,11,12) - Don't forget to NC (7) because 12 is a big combo, it needs to be chopped down! 12 is the max tbh. but okay
  4. 00:25:307 (2,3) - Feels good with a mild HDash, also to maintain a good flow between (3,4) by keeping the distance smaller mmmh i dont think a Hyper suits here. we're just getting started a new part but yea lowering the spacing of (3,4)
  5. 00:37:140 (2) - It sounds a little bit offbeat, probably because of the rhythm here. Try changing this into a 1/3 reversed slider. i dont see any offbeat here. also changing to a reversed slider will broke the pattern
  6. 00:43:640 (4,5) - Since you add quite a lot of HDash when there is a clap, there should be a HDash between (4,5) as well. ok
  7. 00:44:807 - Sounds pretty weird with a 70% to 30% audio reduction, reduce it to 50%. pretty much same as the first reply
  8. 00:46:307 - ^ ^
  9. 00:48:307 (5,1) - I think the distance here can be smaller, it is hard to notice as the note density there is 1/1 ok. just a bit
  10. 00:53:307 (3,4) - Need a HDash, it feels so plain here without HDash while there are a tons of them before this part yep but it doesn't mean to be like before. for variety matter, i want to keep this. their spacing also doesn't hurt at all :c
  11. 00:54:307 (6,1) - ^ ^
  12. 01:12:307 (6,7,1) - This is a bit of exhausting after HDashing in (6,7) and you need a big tide of (7) to (1), better change this part - maybe remove HDash in (6,7). they're noticable enough. im pretty sure of it. gonna think about this more when the next modder pointing this also

    The patterns in this diff is way too... overused, or in other words, too repetitive. Look at the whole diff, so many straight-standing sliders, which is not that great as a pattern since it is lack of movements. Also, it makes the flow difficult because you stand straightly and then you have to dash which is not that noticeable. I highly recommend to change at least some of them to other patterns instead of standing sliders.


    yep you're right. i made almost of them a straight vertical because i want the player to focus the movement more on the music and its vocal. as you can see most of the vocal are in 3rd and 1st tick which i think people should need to pay the attention more to these, that's why i tried to create this mapping style and wanted to see if it works better or maybe not. we are in a 1/3 map, and i want to make it unusual like the other map that should be. if the player ever play yoiyami hanabi by spectator, i can assuming they won't have trouble when first playing on this map. about the repetitive matter, i guess it can't be helped ><
    really nice to see your thought. i want to see more modders and what they're gonna think about this map style so i can consider more in changing or maybe nerf some pattern in future.

    Not that many to point out because the patterns in this diff is too similar, chiefly straight-standing sliders and straight left/right sliders. I know this is just mapping style difference, but I would like to see more diversity between the patterns, maybe you can put some more curved sliders or reversed sliders, at least.

    alright. will add more on kiai section :p


Good luck for getting this mapset ranked!

-AFB
thanks for the mod >w<

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184,304,22973,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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176,24,24640,1,2,3:0:0:0:
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296,120,74140,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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Yumeno Himiko
Elite Storyboarder
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Joined August 2012
Yumeno Himiko
Hello Vhy~ From my queue~

QvQ I thought it was full ver.

[Vhy's Rain]
The DS is nearly all the same throughout this diff, I mean, the patterns are similar and you don't emphasize the song's strong parts and slow parts. Most jumps are placed due to the Clap hitsound, but they look all the same.

To be specific:
00:08:807 - 00:24:640 : Though the instruments are the same as the kiai part, this part is at the begining of the song and it's weaker than the kiai part. Condiser cut down the DS a bit and reduce some jumps here.

00:24:807 - 00:55:807 : Some jumps are unnecessary here. e.g.: 00:27:807 (4,5) - This jump doesn't fit the song and ruins the flow.

00:13:307 (2,3,4) - Not looking so good, try this pattern, it still keep the jump and the flow will be better.
SPOILER
00:18:307 (6,7) - This jump feels really bad here, as it's in the weak part of the song.
00:39:807 (5) - NC
00:36:807 (1) - Move a bit left to make the jump more clear (x = 24)
01:27:807 (5) - This slider should be convert into 4 circles here w


Anyway, it's a good map owo~ But I think it can be better! The song is really nice for a ctb diff :P
Good luck on ranking lol
pishifat
osu! Paragon
3,802 posts
Joined August 2013
pishifat
tfw you forget to sub to the thread
Ringating
717 posts
Joined August 2013
Ringating
noticed a thing on smug's extra

01:00:140 (2) - and 01:16:140 (2) - both skip over a very distinct sound on the white tick and that is apparently a very bad thing to do in 1/3
log
17:38 - 『Ringating』: now i dont know mapping
17:38 - 『Ringating』: but something on this seems wrong
17:39 - 『Ringating』: https://osu.ppy.sh/b/651219
17:39 - 『Ringating』: this
17:39 - pishizour.: on that map
17:39 - pishizour.: it's 1/3
17:39 - 『Ringating』: no
17:39 - pishizour.: which is why feels wierd
17:39 - 『Ringating』: specifically
17:39 - 『Ringating』: 01:16:140 (2) -
17:39 - 『Ringating』: on extra
17:39 - 『Ringating』: like
17:39 - pishizour.: investigate
17:39 - 『Ringating』: slider is broke
17:39 - 『Ringating』: should be like half the length that it is
17:39 - 『Ringating』: or have something in it's middle
17:39 - 『Ringating』: cause it misses a whole syllable
17:39 - 『Ringating』: and feels very wrong
17:42 - pishizour.: same thing as 01:00:140 (2) -
17:43 - pishizour.: it's like the wrost thing you can do on 1/3
17:43 - pishizour.: skip over white tick
17:43 - pishizour.: cuz easy to lose sense of rhythm with 1/3
Fizz
275 posts
Joined September 2013
Fizz
as for the above

I'm trying a different rhythm there by following the bass line
The bass does this little fill kinda thingy that leads into its octave change
Besides it's the same rhythm as 01:03:807 (1,2,3) - or 01:19:807 (1) -
Turn down the sample volume and have a listen for yourself

I'd like to keep this rhythm so no change for now
guineaQ
1,588 posts
Joined December 2013
guineaQ
and @Moo-Chan your insane

00:44:307 (5) - remove whistle at slider body -_-
01:10:807 (1) - same here
01:22:307 (5) - ^
Moo-Chan
412 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
Moo-Chan

guineaQ wrote:

and @Moo-Chan your insane

00:44:307 (5) - remove whistle at slider body -_-
01:10:807 (1) - same here
01:22:307 (5) - ^
oh shit, didnt even notice those. thanks guinea bby
Xinely
5,014 posts
Joined April 2012
Xinely
from m4m




  • Rain
  1. 00:10:307 (6) - if you follow drum so you can add whistle S:C30 here but if you want to hitsound violin you can swap the hitsound 00:10:140 (5,6) -
  2. 00:09:307 - personally i feel sometimes i cant hear the whistle hitsound here, how about increase to 80%?
  3. 00:12:140 - 00:12:307 - swap the whistle please, the violin sounds at whitetick
  4. 00:13:807 (3) - 2 grid right to make the spacing 00:13:307 (2,3,4) - more consistent?
  5. 00:18:807 (1) - i feel the flow is too plain if use straight slider only, how about move tail to x:72 and 00:19:307 (2) - x:192?
  6. 00:18:307 (6,7) - same as 00:10:307 (6,7) -
  7. 00:22:140 - 00:22:307 - swap the whistle, it fits better on whitetick because the drum music
  8. 00:23:473 (5,6) - swap the whistle, better to emphasize the first of the snare sound here because it sounds earlier than (6)
  9. 00:23:973 (8,9,10,11,12) - somehow i feel i have to press my dash (terus) for catch them, well actually i prefer to move them all 2 or 3 grid left, they feel better and easier to catch imo
  10. 00:27:807 (4,5) - somehow feel a little bit plain with straight slider here, give a little bit movement? http://puu.sh/gugIJ.jpg
  11. 00:31:807 (4,5) - same as above http://puu.sh/gugQK.jpg
  12. 00:36:807 (1) - forgot whistle?
  13. 00:38:307 (5) - imo the HDash doesnt fit here because the vocal is soft and the music is relax, better remove HDash or at least make the HDash easier here
  14. 00:39:307 (4) - i guess you forgot add whistle here? just like 00:37:807 (4) -
  15. 00:40:807 (1) - im sure you forgot finish to emphasize the cymbal here
  16. 00:47:807 (3) - it's weird to see this slider has straight flow whenever previous sliders are really horizontal (have much movement), i'd say move this tail to x:112
  17. 00:51:807 (4) - somehow i feel the movement a little bit weird to this slider, well i prefer move the tail to x:128 but that's just my taste
  18. 00:52:307 - it has clearly drum music so better whistle S:C30 here, empty qq
  19. 01:00:807 (1) - x:312 to make HDash on this head
  20. 01:02:807 (1) - make HDash on this head so it caught better to emphasize stanza, move 01:02:307 (7) - 's tail x:136 makes better flow either
  21. 01:11:806 (5) - 2 times testplay and 2 times i missed on this part lol, according that maybe you can make the spacing a little bit smaller
  22. 01:24:307 (6,7,1) - the flow works not really well here imo because the straight slider, i'd say move the tail x:152 to make it better
  23. 01:28:640 - kiai starts on 01:28:807 - instead, on 640 it doesnt have any music so looking it starts on that time is weird imo orz

good luck o/
guineaQ
1,588 posts
Joined December 2013
guineaQ
mfw normal has more objects than advanced wwwwwwwwwwwww
Maeglwn
Maeglwn

hi

[General]
  1. turn off widescreen support in all diffs that have it on, there's no storyboard for it to matter (at least from what I can see)
  2. 01:28:640 - I really don't think this kiai is necessary. especially since it's the last note of the song, you really don't need a kiai for it. :P imo you should remove it

[Smug's Extra]
  1. 01:26:807 (1) - unsnapped
  2. 00:09:307 (2,3,1) - would heavily consider making these not overlap and just blanket each other instead.
  3. 00:28:307 (4,5,6) - seems like really really high ds motions for such a small sound. why not make these smaller jumps and then one big jump up to the next slider instead?
  4. 00:39:807 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - same. except maybe mostly with the super increase on the second triangle. goes from 2.3 to 3.7 DS. that's.. uh, a bit much. :(
  5. 00:46:307 (2) - you should put a curve in this slider or something to reference the change in voice at least. you're missing a pretty major beat by using this slider so at least reference it :P
  6. 01:11:807 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - holy crap dude. relax on the DS. lol that's.. a whole lot. this is a REALLY slow song, so.. 4.5 jumps? really? :P it seems just a tad excessive.
  7. 01:16:140 (2) - same as with 46 seconds. reference the change in voice
[Insane]
  1. 00:10:807 (1,2) - blanket pls
  2. 00:16:307 (6,7) - ctrl g for awesome flow
  3. 00:27:807 (5) - hitburst touches the hp bar, unrankable, pull it down a bit :P
  4. 00:35:307 (2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/gATXB/a0ed59cb44.jpg try that instead, much better flow
  5. 00:41:473 (2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/gAU14/b715c5fae6.jpg try this too :P
  6. 00:42:807 (1,2,3) - the little ds increases out of nowhere are killing me :P try and maintain a DS that flows well with the map, every little DS increase kills the flow
  7. 00:47:473 (2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/gAUeV/40c5ee4d5b.jpg spacing fix
  8. 00:50:807 (1,2,3) - again here :P like it's not quite a jump but it's just.. bleh, icky.
  9. 00:53:807 (1,2,1) - :P
  10. 00:55:307 (1,1) - try and blanket these if possible
  11. 01:01:307 (2,3,4) - try to make a triangle here instead, would really help the structure and would look pretty and stuff
  12. 01:13:807 (3,4,5) - ds stuff
  13. 01:17:307 (2,3,4) - try something like this instead: http://puu.sh/gAUzI/26b4a33f7b.jpg
  14. 01:27:307 (2,3,4) - man I complain a lot

    PLEASE CHECK YOUR DSESESERASDSE
[Hard]
  1. wow this map is cool haha
  2. these hitsounds are so awesome why aren't all of the diffs like this
  3. 00:29:307 (3,4) - seems kinda awkward to randomly have a slider underneath the end when you didn't do this with the last time o.O I'd personally pull it out from under the end of it, it doesn't really make a ton of sense with the rest of the map
  4. 00:37:640 (3,4) - stacks like this are REALLY hard to read. do you think you could pull 2 out so its not immediately stacked on top of 3 and 4, or just make it so 2 isn't a part of the stack of 3 and 4? would make this a lot more readable
  5. 00:45:807 (3) - this slider is messing with my head man idk if I like it or not :(
  6. 00:53:807 (3,4) - same thing as before. stuff like tihs really kills flow, I don't like it that much when its not used as a style technique :( it's only really useful for stuff like pauses where a lack of flow would make sense. at least imo. idk. up to you.
  7. 00:55:307 (2,3) - see here it's fine. I really like it here cause of the pause and the hitsound, so beautiful
  8. 00:56:807 (1) - this really kinda deserves an actual finish hitsound instead of the one it has :P maybe just me, but I really want the crash-y sound instead of this, this sound doesn't sound very finishy for this part.
  9. 01:03:807 (3) - really loving the red tick on this and how it incorporates the voice ;D

    you sir, are one hell of a mapper
[Advanced]
  1. 00:11:640 (3) - YO YO YO HOLD UP WHAT THE HELL IS THIS NONONONONONONO make ds the same, this is WAY too hard for an advanced or a normal or whatever the hell this is
  2. 00:15:640 (3) - and here
  3. 00:25:807 (3) - and here
  4. 00:29:307 (2,3) - annnnd here
  5. 01:00:307 (4) - and here
  6. 01:04:306 (4) - and here
  7. 01:11:307 (2,1) - and here, this one is a little bit less serious, but this still is bad enough
  8. the main reason why I'm pointing this out is that even though it's an advanced, an advanced is still basically considered a "beginner-ish" diff and needs to follow the rules of DS to the point no matter what. everything that has super insane jumps from like.. 1.3 to 2 DS is too much for an advanced, even too much for a hard sometimes. you NEED to change these, I just got done having to change .1 ratios off of an advanced map so I could get it qualified, these are definitely not rankable, I'm sorry :P I really like how they look, but its not rankable as an advanced difficulty.

    there really isn't much else wrong with the diff aside from that, so just fix those :P

think I'm gonna stop there, the normal and the easy look pretty good, so you'll be okay

gl
Vhy
678 posts
Joined November 2012
Vhy

examination wrote:

Hello Vhy~ From my queue~

QvQ I thought it was full ver.

[Vhy's Rain]
The DS is nearly all the same throughout this diff, I mean, the patterns are similar and you don't emphasize the song's strong parts and slow parts. Most jumps are placed due to the Clap hitsound, but they look all the same.

To be specific:
00:08:807 - 00:24:640 : Though the instruments are the same as the kiai part, this part is at the begining of the song and it's weaker than the kiai part. Condiser cut down the DS a bit and reduce some jumps here. they're already. the general spacing here is lower than the kiai if you compare them more

00:24:807 - 00:55:807 : Some jumps are unnecessary here. e.g.: 00:27:807 (4,5) - This jump doesn't fit the song and ruins the flow. couldn't disagree more. changed most of them

00:13:307 (2,3,4) - Not looking so good, try this pattern, it still keep the jump and the flow will be better. changed on my own
SPOILER
00:18:307 (6,7) - This jump feels really bad here, as it's in the weak part of the song. its not even a jump. they're fine as it is.
00:39:807 (5) - NC no need to add here. i keep the constant each 4/1 for NC stuff
00:36:807 (1) - Move a bit left to make the jump more clear (x = 24) keeping the current position. rotating the slider at 00:36:307 (5) instead
01:27:807 (5) - This slider should be convert into 4 circles here w you may be right. but it will ruin the flow if it 4 circles since i want a circular flow with the head and tail in the same position


Anyway, it's a good map owo~ But I think it can be better! The song is really nice for a ctb diff :P
Good luck on ranking lol

Xinely wrote:

from m4m




  • Rain
  1. 00:10:307 (6) - if you follow drum so you can add whistle S:C30 here but if you want to hitsound violin you can swap the hitsound 00:10:140 (5,6) -
  2. 00:09:307 - personally i feel sometimes i cant hear the whistle hitsound here, how about increase to 80%? mmmh nope. i can hear it clearly
  3. 00:12:140 - 00:12:307 - swap the whistle please, the violin sounds at whitetick honestly my whistle pattern... mmmh well semua hitsound sih, kecuali finish ofc, i make them all constant throughout the song. which means they're not depend on the song but the stanza. i hope you understand. this apply to other hitsound mod that im not reply x.x
  4. 00:13:807 (3) - 2 grid right to make the spacing 00:13:307 (2,3,4) - more consistent? did fix myself, and ofc make their spacing the same
  5. 00:18:807 (1) - i feel the flow is too plain if use straight slider only, how about move tail to x:72 and 00:19:307 (2) - x:192? sedemikian rupa
  6. 00:18:307 (6,7) - same as 00:10:307 (6,7) -
  7. 00:22:140 - 00:22:307 - swap the whistle, it fits better on whitetick because the drum music
  8. 00:23:473 (5,6) - swap the whistle, better to emphasize the first of the snare sound here because it sounds earlier than (6)
  9. 00:23:973 (8,9,10,11,12) - somehow i feel i have to press my dash (terus) for catch them, well actually i prefer to move them all 2 or 3 grid left, they feel better and easier to catch imo yep. dstu point nya. justru full dash lebih gampang dibaca soal nya itu pattern dari ujung kiri ke kanan trus balik + Hyper.
  10. 00:27:807 (4,5) - somehow feel a little bit plain with straight slider here, give a little bit movement? http://puu.sh/gugIJ.jpg (4) ke kiri (5) ke kanan
  11. 00:31:807 (4,5) - same as above http://puu.sh/gugQK.jpg (4) ke kanan (5) ke kiri :p
  12. 00:36:807 (1) - forgot whistle?
  13. 00:38:307 (5) - imo the HDash doesnt fit here because the vocal is soft and the music is relax, better remove HDash or at least make the HDash easier here ok
  14. 00:39:307 (4) - i guess you forgot add whistle here? just like 00:37:807 (4) - ada kok itu :3
  15. 00:40:807 (1) - im sure you forgot finish to emphasize the cymbal here ew
  16. 00:47:807 (3) - it's weird to see this slider has straight flow whenever previous sliders are really horizontal (have much movement), i'd say move this tail to x:112 k
  17. 00:51:807 (4) - somehow i feel the movement a little bit weird to this slider, well i prefer move the tail to x:128 but that's just my taste fixed this and make it more kawaii
  18. 00:52:307 - it has clearly drum music so better whistle S:C30 here, empty qq agreed this one
  19. 01:00:807 (1) - x:312 to make HDash on this head k Hyper added
  20. 01:02:807 (1) - make HDash on this head so it caught better to emphasize stanza, move 01:02:307 (7) - 's tail x:136 makes better flow either k
  21. 01:11:806 (5) - 2 times testplay and 2 times i missed on this part lol, according that maybe you can make the spacing a little bit smaller ew.. itu ada Hyper lho. kecilin spacing tar jadi timed jump x.x
  22. 01:24:307 (6,7,1) - the flow works not really well here imo because the straight slider, i'd say move the tail x:152 to make it better k
  23. 01:28:640 - kiai starts on 01:28:807 - instead, on 640 it doesnt have any music so looking it starts on that time is weird imo orz oh, itu kiai time ak copas dari diff sebelah orz

good luck o/
thankies <3

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guineaQ
1,588 posts
Joined December 2013
guineaQ

Maeglwn wrote:


hi

[General]
  1. turn off widescreen support in all diffs that have it on, there's no storyboard for it to matter (at least from what I can see)
  2. 01:28:640 - I really don't think this kiai is necessary. especially since it's the last note of the song, you really don't need a kiai for it. :P imo you should remove it

[Advanced]
  1. 00:11:640 (3) - YO YO YO HOLD UP WHAT THE HELL IS THIS NONONONONONONO make ds the same, this is WAY too hard for an advanced or a normal or whatever the hell this is
  2. 00:15:640 (3) - and here
  3. 00:25:807 (3) - and here
  4. 00:29:307 (2,3) - annnnd here
  5. 01:00:307 (4) - and here
  6. 01:04:306 (4) - and here
  7. 01:11:307 (2,1) - and here, this one is a little bit less serious, but this still is bad enough
  8. the main reason why I'm pointing this out is that even though it's an advanced, an advanced is still basically considered a "beginner-ish" diff and needs to follow the rules of DS to the point no matter what. everything that has super insane jumps from like.. 1.3 to 2 DS is too much for an advanced, even too much for a hard sometimes. you NEED to change these, I just got done having to change .1 ratios off of an advanced map so I could get it qualified, these are definitely not rankable, I'm sorry :P I really like how they look, but its not rankable as an advanced difficulty.

    there really isn't much else wrong with the diff aside from that, so just fix those :P idk if you noticed but Normal has more hitobjects than Advanced LMAO, so I'll need to completely redo this anyways. I was trying to fill the difficulty gap between OLD normal and current hard, now I can use higher note density without having to use jumps to create artificial difficulty with new normal :>

think I'm gonna stop there, the normal and the easy look pretty good, so you'll be okay

gl
Moo-Chan
412 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
Moo-Chan
maeg

Maeglwn wrote:


hi hi

[General]
  1. turn off widescreen support in all diffs that have it on, there's no storyboard for it to matter (at least from what I can see) ok
  2. 01:28:640 - I really don't think this kiai is necessary. especially since it's the last note of the song, you really don't need a kiai for it. :P imo you should remove it nein

[Insane]
  1. 00:10:807 (1,2) - blanket pls ok
  2. 00:16:307 (6,7) - ctrl g for awesome flow ok
  3. 00:27:807 (5) - hitburst touches the hp bar, unrankable, pull it down a bit :P it actually doesnt hit the hp bar ! lookie https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2893655
  4. 00:35:307 (2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/gATXB/a0ed59cb44.jpg try that instead, much better flow its hard to see whats going on there, so ill move it a bit? idk, if you really need me to change this pm me ig
  5. 00:41:473 (2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/gAU14/b715c5fae6.jpg try this too :P fixed
  6. 00:42:807 (1,2,3) - the little ds increases out of nowhere are killing me :P try and maintain a DS that flows well with the map, every little DS increase kills the flow changed it i guess idk
  7. 00:47:473 (2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/gAUeV/40c5ee4d5b.jpg spacing fix ok
  8. 00:50:807 (1,2,3) - again here :P like it's not quite a jump but it's just.. bleh, icky. moved the two a bit
  9. 00:53:807 (1,2,1) - :P :D
  10. 00:55:307 (1,1) - try and blanket these if possible i wasnt intending to blanket these
  11. 01:01:307 (2,3,4) - try to make a triangle here instead, would really help the structure and would look pretty and stuff attempted to
  12. 01:13:807 (3,4,5) - ds stuff but why
  13. 01:17:307 (2,3,4) - try something like this instead: http://puu.sh/gAUzI/26b4a33f7b.jpg did something like it i guess
  14. 01:27:307 (2,3,4) - man I complain a lot lol

    PLEASE CHECK YOUR DSESESERASDSE wot
thanks maeg bby
pishifat
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pishifat
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