Beuchi-chan wrote:

~Lissette's Insane~
00:59:365 (7) - New Combo? ok
01:35:803 (2) - Reverse the slider? It's a bit unexpected like that, imo. esto no lo entendi @.@ ya tiene un reverse, o te refieres a que lo quite?

wmfchris wrote:

[Insane]
0:13:817 (3) up 3 grid to make a parallelogram? >.<
1:16:244 (3) right+up 1 grid? >.<
2:08:089 (6) spacing, left 1 grid Fixed

Beuchi-chan wrote:

- Add lordfoster, Ignacio and Lissette to Tags.

Gens wrote:

Beuchi-chan wrote:

- Add lordfoster, Ignacio and Lissette to Tags.

wtf I forgot this

orioncomet wrote:

[Fuuko's Pray]
01:41:430 - add break time or I will bite you

[Normal]
01:03:920 (1,2,3,4,5) - plz no jump on Normal TT_____TT T_T ok
01:21:067 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ ^
01:29:641 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ ^
01:51:879 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - a bit hard to read for me (I mean for me in a Normal diff) *-* no :3
02:01:658 (1,2) - look like a bit hard for a Normal, change them to silder, maybe? rdy
02:08:491 (1,2,3,4) - no jump on Normal plz rdy
02:23:227 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ ^
02:31:532 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ ^
02:40:374 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ ^

[Ignacio's Lesson]
02:56:450 (1) - at last spinner add sound finish better imo, or low volume a bit or use sound soft

[Lissette's Insane]
- I like hitsound on this diff.

Sakura301 wrote:

Aha! HunterXHunter cool
And no i mod in english, i like modding in english, i like speaking in english, i like english it's a nice language =P
Pero igual me gusta el español
Red = Major issue, you should fix this
Purple = Issue, It's better if you fix this, and can sometimes pass if justified
Blue = Minor issue, you can ignore if you dont want to change
Green = Feedback / Comments
Black = Suggestion
[General]
Use the same kiai times (and maybe even breaks?) through all your difficulties no lol

[Fuuko's Wish]
00:58:293 (1) - Awkward spinner o.o
01:34:999 (1,2,3) - Make it centered
02:17:600 (1) - Awkward spinner o.o
02:54:306 (1,2,3) - Make it centered

[Normal]
Fine

[Lordfoster's Hard]
Fine

[Ignacio's Lesson]
Fine

Sorry for taking forever orz

1. Please use same preview time on all difficulties, now [Fuuko's Pray] and [Normal] is 60273 while other 3 diff. is 60303

1. 01:41:162 (x) - No break here?
2. 02:02:864 (3) - Add finish
3. 02:52:163 (x) - Silence? I feel raise sound a bit would better

1. 01:54:558 - 02:02:864 - Use soft hitsound better during these times IMO

1. 01:17:852 (1) - Use finish sound instead of whistle
2. 01:26:426 (1) - ^
3. 02:02:864 (2) - Add finish
4. 02:28:585 (1) - Use finish sound instead of whistle
5. 02:37:159 (1) - ^
6. 02:45:733 (1) - Add finish
7. 02:57:120 (x) - Spinner starts here better IMO

1. 00:40:074 (2) - Remove sigle clap? sounds a bit werid
2. 00:51:059 (8) - ^
3. 01:06:599 (4) - ^
   During chorus, I think you should use more normal clap or whistle to fit music drum sound, or each long time a clap really sounds bad
4. 01:09:278 (1) - Add finish
5. 01:17:852 (5) - ^
6. 01:40:358 (S) - Oh, no. Silence or lower hitsound please
7. 01:45:717 (T) - Put this timing section before note since there is sound change
8. 02:02:864 (8) - Add finish
9. 02:09:562 (7) - Remove clap maybe
10. 02:25:906 (4) - Clap...as previous...emm
11. 02:28:585 (2) - Add finish
12. 02:37:159 (3) - ^
13. 02:45:733 (7) - ^

1. 01:00:705 (1) - Add finish
2. 02:32:336 (5) - Add clap

Breeze wrote:

[General]

1. Please use same preview time on all difficulties, now [Fuuko's Pray] and [Normal] is 60273 while other 3 diff. is 60303 rdy

[Fuuko's Pray]

1. 01:41:162 (x) - No break here?
2. 02:02:864 (3) - Add finish
3. 02:52:163 (x) - Silence? I feel raise sound a bit would better

[Normal]

1. 01:54:558 - 02:02:864 - Use soft hitsound better during these times IMO rdy

[Lordfoster's Hard]

1. 01:17:852 (1) - Use finish sound instead of whistle
2. 01:26:426 (1) - ^
3. 02:02:864 (2) - Add finish
4. 02:28:585 (1) - Use finish sound instead of whistle
5. 02:37:159 (1) - ^
6. 02:45:733 (1) - Add finish
7. 02:57:120 (x) - Spinner starts here better IMO

[Ignacio's Lesson]

1. 00:40:074 (2) - Remove sigle clap? sounds a bit werid
2. 00:51:059 (8) - ^
3. 01:06:599 (4) - ^
   During chorus, I think you should use more normal clap or whistle to fit music drum sound, or each long time a clap really sounds bad
4. 01:09:278 (1) - Add finish
5. 01:17:852 (5) - ^
6. 01:40:358 (S) - Oh, no. Silence or lower hitsound please
7. 01:45:717 (T) - Put this timing section before note since there is sound change
8. 02:02:864 (8) - Add finish
9. 02:09:562 (7) - Remove clap maybe
10. 02:25:906 (4) - Clap...as previous...emm
11. 02:28:585 (2) - Add finish
12. 02:37:159 (3) - ^
13. 02:45:733 (7) - ^

[Lissette's Insane]

1. 01:00:705 (1) - Add finish
2. 02:32:336 (5) - Add clap

nice map
star

Breeze wrote:

[Lissette's Insane]

1. 01:00:705 (1) - Add finish
2. 02:32:336 (5) - Add clap

• • 01:42:000 (x) - Add a break

• • 02:57:522 (1) - End this spinner here 02:59:397 (red tick)

Vikon wrote:

As astom has helped me to fix my map, therefore I am here to suggest sth I have found~
But, I can't find much as it is already nice, just give some hitsound suggestions in Hard and Insane~

[Fuuko's Pray]

02:35:819 (4) spacing

[Normal]
01:54:022 (9) fix spacing? mm no :>
02:56:857 (1) nice X ! thx ^^

[Loadfoster's Hard]
nice hitsound~!
00:26:276 (1,2) would you like to decrease the volume? it's a little bit shock while listening to a soft part and you hear a sudden clap.
00:30:964 (1,2) ^
00:35:251 (1,2) ^
01:45:717 (1) ^
01:50:271 (1) ^
02:02:864 (2) better with a finish!
02:05:008 (2,2) change whistle to finish?
02:07:955 (3) finish on the end of slider?

[Ignacio's Lesson]
seems the hitsound is quite lonely...
00:49:452 (2) add a finish on the end of slider? (the finish at 00:48:916 (1) is too lonely)
00:51:327 (1) add clap on the start and the end of slider (lonely (8) at 00:51:059)
00:57:221 (1) finish!
00:57:757 (1) finish!
if you like this style, also add finish on the following notes :
00:58:293 (1) the start and the end
00:59:365 (3) ^
00:59:767 (4) and 01:00:035 (6) start,2 backs and the end
-----------------------------------------------------------------
01:06:867 (4) add clap on the end (lonely clap on the start)
01:08:475 (1,1) add clap on the spinner and the next note(the start only) ?
if you add clap on 01:08:475(1,1), also add clap on 01:17:045 (1,2) , 01:25:622 (1,1) to match with the pattern (did I miss 1 part of the pattern?)
01:40:358 (1) silence the spinner?
02:09:562 (8) add clap on the start and end and also on 02:10:634 (1,2,3) (lonely clap on 02:09:562 (7) )...
02:15:457 (3) add finish on the start of slider? also on 02:17:064 (2,3,4) ?
02:19:744 (1) finish
02:59:397 (1) slience the spinner?

[Lissette's Insane]
nice style of hitsound!!! I love them!
00:37:127 to 00:40:878 the whistle style disappear?
02:59:397 (1) slience the spinner?s


After listening to this song over an hour with 5 nice difficulties, I start to love this song ~ lol
Get my star~

NatsumeRin wrote:

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[Fuuko's Pray]
the custom clap is a bit loud for me... but fine.
slider tick rate:2, and in some parts you can use slidertick to make sounds.
02:28:585 (2) - 2 grid up+ 1 grid right, may be better
02:56:718 (1) - what's the green lines for? rdy

[Normal]
there's some parts use 0.5x, but i don't think it fits. :P
02:01:658 (1,2) - spacing? rdy
02:28:451 - kiai at this timing section. it shouldn't break. rdy
02:45:599 - ^ rdy

[Lordforster's Hard]
i hate normal-whistle, especially a non-stop (o o x o) beats (o=normal, x=normal-whistle), try to change them?
the map itself is fine.

[Ignacio's Lesson]
i think this diff needs more hitsounds.
01:00:035 (6) - try to start using normal hitsounds from this slider?
01:49:468 (6) - nazi. 1 grid left. rdy

[Lissette's Insane]
nothing found, i love this diff.

Vikon wrote:

[Fuuko's Pray]

02:35:819 (4) spacing Fixed, thanks. :3

NatsumeRin wrote:

[Fuuko's Pray]
the custom clap is a bit loud for me... but fine. Oh, it sounds okay for me.
slider tick rate:2, and in some parts you can use slidertick to make sounds.I dislike having sliderticks. :<
02:28:585 (2) - 2 grid up+ 1 grid right, may be betterDone.
02:56:718 (1) - what's the green lines for? They were starting kiai again. ;_; Let me re-do.

Thanks for modding~

• Please add a Fade Out at the end of the mp3, it ends in a bad way.
  There's no BG in Lisette's map.

• .Opinions:
  Slidertick 1 or 2. At least 1 please, it feels so empty at 0.5 D:

• .Opinions:
  Please, don't use a whistle every 1/1 for so much time, it becomes boring and annoying D:

• .Suggestions:
  01:37:143 (1) - extend to 01:41:430
  02:24:030 (1) - removing new combo here will add followpoints. I think they might be useful for a jump like that.
  02:55:110 (2,1) - swap New combo?

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

- General:

• Please add a Fade Out at the end of the mp3, it ends in a bad way.
  There's no BG in Lisette's map. oh.. sry for that my fault xD

- Fuuko's Pray:

• .Opinions:
  Slidertick 1 or 2. At least 1 please, it feels so empty at 0.5 D:

- Lordfoster's Hard:

• .Opinions:
  Please, don't use a whistle every 1/1 for so much time, it becomes boring and annoying D:

- Ignacio's Lesson:

• .Suggestions:
  01:37:143 (1) - extend to 01:41:430
  02:24:030 (1) - removing new combo here will add followpoints. I think they might be useful for a jump like that.
  02:55:110 (2,1) - swap New combo?

:X

Lizbeth wrote:

Fuuko's Pray
I find it a lil hard for the easiest diff.
I suggest to put circle size bigger. I see your point...but my intention was to map a normal. Like Astom asked "Under 3 stars." ;_; If this becomes an issue to any BAT, I'll just make it an easy.
00:29:491 (5) - notes on blue ticks like this are hard to read for beginners. Like I said, it's a normal diff.

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

- Fuuko's Pray:

• .Opinions:
  Slidertick 1 or 2. At least 1 please, it feels so empty at 0.5 D: Since it's the second person to complain... ;w; Changed to 1.

Leorda wrote:

[Fuuko's Pray]
00:29:893 (6) - I think there some unused point in this slider, remove the white point under the red point by right-click 1 - Is it really relevant, anyways? lol 2 - No, it should be just like that.
00:44:897 (4) - New combo? Fixed in another way.
01:17:852 (1) - Make it like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8351 Done.
02:30:460 (5) - I think there some unused point in this slider, remove the white point under the red point by right-click Same thing as the other one.

Leorda wrote:

Bivuendo~

[Skin]
Just suggestion, can you remove the green and pink dot in hitcircleoverlay? It's looks nice if remove it :p

[Fuuko's Pray]
00:29:893 (6) - I think there some unused point in this slider, remove the white point under the red point by right-click
00:44:897 (4) - New combo?
01:17:852 (1) - Make it like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8351
02:30:460 (5) - I think there some unused point in this slider, remove the white point under the red point by right-click

[Normal]
Fine~

[Lordfoster's Hard]
Fine~

[Ignacio's Lesson] fixed
00:30:964 (4) - New combo
00:32:036 (1) - Remove New combo
00:33:108 (1) - Move the new combo to 00:32:572 (3)?
00:36:055 (1) - Move the new combo to 00:35:251 (7)?
00:37:931 (1) - Move the new combo to 00:36:859 (5)?
01:37:143 (1) - Silence this spinner?

[Lissette's Insane]
Fine~

Not bad
STAR

Lissette wrote:

fixed last spinner (quiero que termine ahi ^^)

Mafiamaster wrote:

[Fuuko]
01:33:405 (4) - Delete the red anchor point just to be on the safe side.

SPOILER

osuplayer111 wrote:

I'm not going to pop this because all looks good, but I think spacing on Lissette's and Ignacio's difficulty is really too excessive.

Can you reduce all the jumps? They looks too much huge, really.