1. Fuuko's Pray (2.36 stars, 156 notes)
2. Ignacio's Lesson (4.95 stars, 403 notes)
3. Lissette's Insane (4.99 stars, 602 notes)
4. Lordfoster's Hard (4.28 stars, 251 notes)
5. Normal (3.45 stars, 195 notes)

orioncomet wrote:

Romaji:
00:26:657 - donna yume nara oikakeruno?
00:32:550 - tsubuyaku mitai ni iu
00:42:327 - hashitte iku
01:03:889 - watashi wo kiri saite...
01:29:603 - inori ga todoku made...
02:23:175 - ashita wo kiri saite...
02:31:478 - kake nukeru hayasa made...
02:40:318 - kioku no kanata de...
02:48:889 - negai wo kanae teru?

OwO

Lissette wrote:

aquí esta, disculpa la tardanza u.u
cámbiale el combo color, que tiene el default >.<

espero te guste, fue difícil hacerlo insane, porque la canción es muy suave >.<

Gens wrote:

Maybe horizontally flip the comboburst? His face isn't facing the right way D= D= D=
Also, the difficulty spread is a bit harsh... I don't know what you could do about it though (the most obvious answer that comes to mind is: Make a Hard).

In Normal: 01:45:851 - Aren't you supposed to change to soft here? haha sry, rdy

Everything else is fine; this is the best skin you've done so far, Astom (at least in my opinion)

lordfoster wrote:

Aqui teni mi nivel
es sagrado wn
me parti en dos asiendolo
en dos wnnn xd
ya chao
gracias por dejarme aser un nivel :3

Beuchi-chan wrote:

~Lissette's Insane~
00:59:365 (7) - New Combo? ok
01:35:803 (2) - Reverse the slider? It's a bit unexpected like that, imo. esto no lo entendi @.@ ya tiene un reverse, o te refieres a que lo quite?

wmfchris wrote:

[Insane]
0:13:817 (3) up 3 grid to make a parallelogram? >.<
1:16:244 (3) right+up 1 grid? >.<
2:08:089 (6) spacing, left 1 grid Fixed

Beuchi-chan wrote:

- Add lordfoster, Ignacio and Lissette to Tags.

Gens wrote:

Beuchi-chan wrote:

- Add lordfoster, Ignacio and Lissette to Tags.

wtf I forgot this

orioncomet wrote:

[Fuuko's Pray]
01:41:430 - add break time or I will bite you

[Normal]
01:03:920 (1,2,3,4,5) - plz no jump on Normal TT_____TT T_T ok
01:21:067 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ ^
01:29:641 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ ^
01:51:879 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - a bit hard to read for me (I mean for me in a Normal diff) *-* no :3
02:01:658 (1,2) - look like a bit hard for a Normal, change them to silder, maybe? rdy
02:08:491 (1,2,3,4) - no jump on Normal plz rdy
02:23:227 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ ^
02:31:532 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ ^
02:40:374 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ ^

[Ignacio's Lesson]
02:56:450 (1) - at last spinner add sound finish better imo, or low volume a bit or use sound soft

[Lissette's Insane]
- I like hitsound on this diff.

Sakura301 wrote:

Aha! HunterXHunter cool
And no i mod in english, i like modding in english, i like speaking in english, i like english it's a nice language =P
Pero igual me gusta el español
Red = Major issue, you should fix this
Purple = Issue, It's better if you fix this, and can sometimes pass if justified
Blue = Minor issue, you can ignore if you dont want to change
Green = Feedback / Comments
Black = Suggestion
[General]
Use the same kiai times (and maybe even breaks?) through all your difficulties no lol

[Fuuko's Wish]
00:58:293 (1) - Awkward spinner o.o
01:34:999 (1,2,3) - Make it centered
02:17:600 (1) - Awkward spinner o.o
02:54:306 (1,2,3) - Make it centered

[Normal]
Fine

[Lordfoster's Hard]
Fine

[Ignacio's Lesson]
Fine

Sorry for taking forever orz

1. Please use same preview time on all difficulties, now [Fuuko's Pray] and [Normal] is 60273 while other 3 diff. is 60303

1. 01:41:162 (x) - No break here?
2. 02:02:864 (3) - Add finish
3. 02:52:163 (x) - Silence? I feel raise sound a bit would better

1. 01:54:558 - 02:02:864 - Use soft hitsound better during these times IMO

1. 01:17:852 (1) - Use finish sound instead of whistle
2. 01:26:426 (1) - ^
3. 02:02:864 (2) - Add finish
4. 02:28:585 (1) - Use finish sound instead of whistle
5. 02:37:159 (1) - ^
6. 02:45:733 (1) - Add finish
7. 02:57:120 (x) - Spinner starts here better IMO

1. 00:40:074 (2) - Remove sigle clap? sounds a bit werid
2. 00:51:059 (8) - ^
3. 01:06:599 (4) - ^
   During chorus, I think you should use more normal clap or whistle to fit music drum sound, or each long time a clap really sounds bad
4. 01:09:278 (1) - Add finish
5. 01:17:852 (5) - ^
6. 01:40:358 (S) - Oh, no. Silence or lower hitsound please
7. 01:45:717 (T) - Put this timing section before note since there is sound change
8. 02:02:864 (8) - Add finish
9. 02:09:562 (7) - Remove clap maybe
10. 02:25:906 (4) - Clap...as previous...emm
11. 02:28:585 (2) - Add finish
12. 02:37:159 (3) - ^
13. 02:45:733 (7) - ^

1. 01:00:705 (1) - Add finish
2. 02:32:336 (5) - Add clap

Breeze wrote:

[General]

1. Please use same preview time on all difficulties, now [Fuuko's Pray] and [Normal] is 60273 while other 3 diff. is 60303 rdy

[Fuuko's Pray]

1. 01:41:162 (x) - No break here?
2. 02:02:864 (3) - Add finish
3. 02:52:163 (x) - Silence? I feel raise sound a bit would better

[Normal]

1. 01:54:558 - 02:02:864 - Use soft hitsound better during these times IMO rdy

[Lordfoster's Hard]

1. 01:17:852 (1) - Use finish sound instead of whistle
2. 01:26:426 (1) - ^
3. 02:02:864 (2) - Add finish
4. 02:28:585 (1) - Use finish sound instead of whistle
5. 02:37:159 (1) - ^
6. 02:45:733 (1) - Add finish
7. 02:57:120 (x) - Spinner starts here better IMO

[Ignacio's Lesson]

1. 00:40:074 (2) - Remove sigle clap? sounds a bit werid
2. 00:51:059 (8) - ^
3. 01:06:599 (4) - ^
   During chorus, I think you should use more normal clap or whistle to fit music drum sound, or each long time a clap really sounds bad
4. 01:09:278 (1) - Add finish
5. 01:17:852 (5) - ^
6. 01:40:358 (S) - Oh, no. Silence or lower hitsound please
7. 01:45:717 (T) - Put this timing section before note since there is sound change
8. 02:02:864 (8) - Add finish
9. 02:09:562 (7) - Remove clap maybe
10. 02:25:906 (4) - Clap...as previous...emm
11. 02:28:585 (2) - Add finish
12. 02:37:159 (3) - ^
13. 02:45:733 (7) - ^

[Lissette's Insane]

1. 01:00:705 (1) - Add finish
2. 02:32:336 (5) - Add clap

nice map
star

Breeze wrote:

[Lissette's Insane]

1. 01:00:705 (1) - Add finish
2. 02:32:336 (5) - Add clap

• • 01:42:000 (x) - Add a break

• • 02:57:522 (1) - End this spinner here 02:59:397 (red tick)

Vikon wrote:

As astom has helped me to fix my map, therefore I am here to suggest sth I have found~
But, I can't find much as it is already nice, just give some hitsound suggestions in Hard and Insane~

[Fuuko's Pray]

02:35:819 (4) spacing

[Normal]
01:54:022 (9) fix spacing? mm no :>
02:56:857 (1) nice X ! thx ^^

[Loadfoster's Hard]
nice hitsound~!
00:26:276 (1,2) would you like to decrease the volume? it's a little bit shock while listening to a soft part and you hear a sudden clap.
00:30:964 (1,2) ^
00:35:251 (1,2) ^
01:45:717 (1) ^
01:50:271 (1) ^
02:02:864 (2) better with a finish!
02:05:008 (2,2) change whistle to finish?
02:07:955 (3) finish on the end of slider?

[Ignacio's Lesson]
seems the hitsound is quite lonely...
00:49:452 (2) add a finish on the end of slider? (the finish at 00:48:916 (1) is too lonely)
00:51:327 (1) add clap on the start and the end of slider (lonely (8) at 00:51:059)
00:57:221 (1) finish!
00:57:757 (1) finish!
if you like this style, also add finish on the following notes :
00:58:293 (1) the start and the end
00:59:365 (3) ^
00:59:767 (4) and 01:00:035 (6) start,2 backs and the end
-----------------------------------------------------------------
01:06:867 (4) add clap on the end (lonely clap on the start)
01:08:475 (1,1) add clap on the spinner and the next note(the start only) ?
if you add clap on 01:08:475(1,1), also add clap on 01:17:045 (1,2) , 01:25:622 (1,1) to match with the pattern (did I miss 1 part of the pattern?)
01:40:358 (1) silence the spinner?
02:09:562 (8) add clap on the start and end and also on 02:10:634 (1,2,3) (lonely clap on 02:09:562 (7) )...
02:15:457 (3) add finish on the start of slider? also on 02:17:064 (2,3,4) ?
02:19:744 (1) finish
02:59:397 (1) slience the spinner?

[Lissette's Insane]
nice style of hitsound!!! I love them!
00:37:127 to 00:40:878 the whistle style disappear?
02:59:397 (1) slience the spinner?s


After listening to this song over an hour with 5 nice difficulties, I start to love this song ~ lol
Get my star~

NatsumeRin wrote:

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[Fuuko's Pray]
the custom clap is a bit loud for me... but fine.
slider tick rate:2, and in some parts you can use slidertick to make sounds.
02:28:585 (2) - 2 grid up+ 1 grid right, may be better
02:56:718 (1) - what's the green lines for? rdy

[Normal]
there's some parts use 0.5x, but i don't think it fits. :P
02:01:658 (1,2) - spacing? rdy
02:28:451 - kiai at this timing section. it shouldn't break. rdy
02:45:599 - ^ rdy

[Lordforster's Hard]
i hate normal-whistle, especially a non-stop (o o x o) beats (o=normal, x=normal-whistle), try to change them?
the map itself is fine.

[Ignacio's Lesson]
i think this diff needs more hitsounds.
01:00:035 (6) - try to start using normal hitsounds from this slider?
01:49:468 (6) - nazi. 1 grid left. rdy

[Lissette's Insane]
nothing found, i love this diff.

Vikon wrote:

[Fuuko's Pray]

02:35:819 (4) spacing Fixed, thanks. :3

NatsumeRin wrote:

[Fuuko's Pray]
the custom clap is a bit loud for me... but fine. Oh, it sounds okay for me.
slider tick rate:2, and in some parts you can use slidertick to make sounds.I dislike having sliderticks. :<
02:28:585 (2) - 2 grid up+ 1 grid right, may be betterDone.
02:56:718 (1) - what's the green lines for? They were starting kiai again. ;_; Let me re-do.

Thanks for modding~