1. Artist: Ishida Yoko feat. Shirobako Seiyuu, and title should be COLORFUL BOX https://musicencode.com/album-ishida-yo ... etter.html
   
   [Easy]
   
   1. 00:05:556 (3) - NC here, there's a finish here, so an NC will be better
   2. 00:07:047 (3) - ^, and also, I suggest that you do a blanket with (4)
   3. 00:11:333 (3) - Blanket with (2), it will make a better flow https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2788418
   4. 00:12:823 (1) ^ with (4)
   5. 00:14:314 (3) - ^ with (2)
   6. 00:15:618 (5) - Move it up a little bit since its touching (1)'s head
   7. 00:23:444 (2) - I dont see the point of adding a finish her, I suggest you replace it with a whistle
   8. 00:24:935 (3) - ^
   9. 00:26:239 (4) - NC ?
   10. 00:33:879 (4) - The NC should start here, since you added the finish here
   11. Needs some more improvements, especially the sliders at the end x.x
   [Normal]
   
   1. 00:01:084 (2) - NC here since you added a finish
   2. 00:02:575 (4) - ^
   3. 00:04:066 (6) - ^ and remove the NC at (1)
   4. 00:05:556 (3) - NC here, same as first reason
   5. 00:07:047 (5) - ^
   6. 00:07:792 (7) - ^
   7. 00:09:842 (1) - Improve blanket with 00:09:283 (9)
   8. 00:11:892 (5,6) - Improve blanket
   9. 00:31:643 (2,3) - ^
   10. There're some NC problem like I pointed out in Easy, you should add NC in beats like in: 00:18:972 (5)
   [Hard]
   
   1. At the first beginning add the NC's that I pointed out in Normal at the beginning
   2. 00:11:892 (2) - Move it to x:320 y:120 its really confusing to add it inside the slider slide
   3. 00:32:575 (4,5) - What with the drum whistle? I dont think they fit in this part IMO
   4. 00:39:842 (3) - I suggest you remove that clap which is at the end of the slider and add a whistle, I dont think the clap fits
   5. 00:41:333 (3) - ^
   6. 00:45:805 (3) - ^
   7. 00:47:295 (3) - ^
   8. I suggest you use the hitsound I suggested for Easy and Normal
   [Insane]
   
   1. Same thing I first said in the beginning in hard

Lapis Aoki wrote:

M4M from your queue
[General]

1. Artist: Ishida Yoko feat. Shirobako Seiyuu, and title should be COLORFUL BOX https://musicencode.com/album-ishida-yo ... etter.html
   
   [Easy]
   
   1. 00:05:556 (3) - NC here, there's a finish here, so an NC will be better
   2. 00:07:047 (3) - ^, and also, I suggest that you do a blanket with (4)
   3. 00:11:333 (3) - Blanket with (2), it will make a better flow https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2788418
   4. 00:12:823 (1) ^ with (4)
   5. 00:14:314 (3) - ^ with (2)
   6. 00:15:618 (5) - Move it up a little bit since its touching (1)'s head
   7. 00:23:444 (2) - I dont see the point of adding a finish her, I suggest you replace it with a whistle
   8. 00:24:935 (3) - ^
   9. 00:26:239 (4) - NC ?
   10. 00:33:879 (4) - The NC should start here, since you added the finish here
   11. Needs some more improvements, especially the sliders at the end x.x
   All fixed
   [Normal]
   
   1. 00:01:084 (2) - NC here since you added a finish
   2. 00:02:575 (4) - ^
   3. 00:04:066 (6) - ^ and remove the NC at (1)
   4. 00:05:556 (3) - NC here, same as first reason
   5. 00:07:047 (5) - ^
   6. 00:07:792 (7) - ^
   7. 00:09:842 (1) - Improve blanket with 00:09:283 (9)
   8. 00:11:892 (5,6) - Improve blanket
   9. 00:31:643 (2,3) - ^
   10. There're some NC problem like I pointed out in Easy, you should add NC in beats like in: 00:18:972 (5)
   All fixed
   [Hard]
   
   1. At the first beginning add the NC's that I pointed out in Normal at the beginning
   2. 00:11:892 (2) - Move it to x:320 y:120 its really confusing to add it inside the slider slide
   3. 00:32:575 (4,5) - What with the drum whistle? I dont think they fit in this part IMO
   4. 00:39:842 (3) - I suggest you remove that clap which is at the end of the slider and add a whistle, I dont think the clap fits
   5. 00:41:333 (3) - ^
   6. 00:45:805 (3) - ^
   7. 00:47:295 (3) - ^
   8. I suggest you use the hitsound I suggested for Easy and Normal
   All fixed
   [Insane]
   
   1. Same thing I first said in the beginning in hard

gl ~

Thanks for your modding especially NC Suggestions

FlobuFlobs wrote:

Sup

[Easy]

• 
  [Rhythm]

1. -
   
   [Gameplay]
2. -
   
   Meh xD

[Normal]

• 
  [Rhythm]

1. 00:26:798 - you dont really need an object on this quiet vocal has been removed
   
   [Gameplay]
2. 01:02:761 (4) - Almost overlapping with hp bar, Try to avoid that

[Hard]

• 
  [Rhythm]

1. -
   
   [Gameplay]
2. 00:11:892 (2) - Its barrely readable also you should avoid such overlaps in Hard difficulties
3. 00:01:084 (2) - Very close to HP bar, it doesnt overlap but still close
4. Blanket
   
   1. 00:18:972 (6) -
   2. 00:45:805 (3) -
   3. 00:49:531 (9) -
   4. 00:54:749 (1) -
   5. 00:56:239 (1) -
   6. 01:04:252 (3) -
   7. 01:12:637 (8) -
   8. 01:14:687 (4) - All fixed
5. NC's
   
   1. 00:36:861 (1) -
   2. 00:48:041 (4) -
   3. 01:05:929 (7) -
   4. 01:15:618 (6) -All fixed

[Insane]

• 
  [Rhythm]

1. 00:26:239 (3,4,5) - You should try to make the loud Finish sounds clickable, like this ur right
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:10:401 (2,3) - You should replace them with Circles, these are Strong loud vocals and you are following vocals ( I think you also did circles before)Sorry,I stick to my opnion
   
   [Gameplay]
3. Blankets
   
   1. 00:27:916 (1) -
   2. 00:28:662 (3) -
   3. 00:30:712 (9) -
4. 00:33:879 (6) - How about Spacing it a bit to emphasize the loud finish?Sorry,I stick to my opnion
5. 00:45:059 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - If you are already using such a jump pattern, why not like this? Good Idea
   
   SPOILER

   
   1. 00:46:550 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
6. 00:52:513 (1) - You should atleast add one NC here and how about rotating or a bit more spacing instead of directly overlapping Brilliant!That's awesome!I rotate 45。looks cool!
7. 00:55:494 (3) - ctrl+g for consistency with 00:55:867 (4,5) - sorry,If i do that the flow between 3,4 will be weird ,4 is the downbeat needs more fluent flow
8. NC's
   
   1. 00:56:239 (1) - ^
   2. 00:59:221 (5) - ^
   3. 01:08:165 (1) - ^
   4. 01:11:146 (1) - ^
   5. 01:16:736 (4) - ^
   6. 01:21:581 (5) - ^All fixed

That cut in the end is soooo ugly qqq ？

i think you can see, iam not that good at lower difficulties lol
However,Your Modding ability on insane is awesome!!!!Love it!Thank you very much

1. 图本身不难，BPM也不至于太高，因此AR可以考虑减个0.3
2. 00:08:351 (1,2,3,4,5) - 为了稍微加强3、4间的人声，弱化4、5间人声鼓点转换的突兀感，因此建议在这里放弃等距，这样试试：http://puu.sh/g1LGr/faeb4566fe.jpg
3. 00:11:333 (1,2,3) - 虽然这里的确没有音，但1、2、3摆成规则等距的话可能会被误读，建议把2往1靠近些
4. 00:17:295 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 2、4试试Ctrl+G并向右弯曲，然后1、3、6向左弯曲？
5. 00:19:531 (1,2,3,4) - 虽然这里是要弱一些但是试试这样http://puu.sh/g1N4b/b8ad7fbea6.jpg可能会有感觉一些？
6. 00:20:649 (2) - Ctrl+G试试？另外如果是要和 （00:18:786 (5) ）做blanket的话稍微包拼好一点
7. 00:21:767 (5,1) - 和前面（00:18:786 (5,6) ）保持一致的节奏比较舒服吧。另外5可以试试Ctrl+G。
8. 00:27:357 (1,2,3,1) - 包好一点，http://puu.sh/g1NE0/804e835807.jpg。
9. 00:30:339 (4) - 滑条换成两个单点和后面滑条5的头组一个正三角型试试，但不要太跳
10. 00:30:339 (4,5) - 包好一点
11. 00:30:712 (5,6) - 滑条中间的音忽略掉了，怪可惜的，和前面（00:18:786 (5,6) ）保持一致的节奏吧。
12. 00:33:879 (6) - 可以试试把5包起来的感觉：http://puu.sh/g1NUA/66d4a4a639.jpg
13. 00:38:165 (5) - 试试把4从左到右包起来
14. 00:39:842 (3,1) - 这两个之间的距离远一些比较好
15. 00:42:078 (1,2,3,4) - 随着音调升高试试改成规则的形状或/并逐渐扩大间距？仅供参考：http://puu.sh/g1Ocn/291a2b558f.jpg
16. 00:42:823 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这一组是加强打击感的不错的时机（啥），试试参考这样：http://puu.sh/g1ONT/9bef8ea491.jpg，1、2、3是相对着的三个滑条，4、5、6、7组成X字跳，（7叠在2的滑条头上）
17. 00:55:121 - 这条绿线似乎没有改变任何设置，建议删去
18. 00:55:494 (3,2) - 2要把3的滑条头包起来的话稍微调好一下
19. 00:57:730 - 这条绿线似乎没有改变任何设置，建议删去
20. 00:57:357 (4) - 滑条换成两个单点和后面滑条5的头组一个正三角型试试，但不要太跳
21. 00:59:221 (1,2,3) - 试试这个：http://puu.sh/g1Pfn/b99b3a8ae7.jpg
22. 01:01:457 (2) - 换一个形状吧，这个不太好打也不太好看
23. 01:06:115 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 只跟鼓点的话，建议从弯曲的移动连打换成相对着的直的连打，或者两个原地三连吧，只是建议。
24. 01:15:991 (2) - 这里的滑条尾有个应该强调的音，建议滑条换 成两单点
25. 01:21:395 (4,2) - 叠好些
26. 01:22:420 - 唔...这里有个音。可以放三连，有建议见下一条↓
27. 01:22:140 (2,3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/g1PNo/a3a4da1fc8.jpg这样感觉滑条5的头能够强调一下，三连只是提供了一些紧迫感（啥），也可以换成单点
28. 01:26:053 (1,2) - 唔...包起来？

1. 00:01:084 (1,3) - 叠好，可以通过滑条1 ctrl+G然后比较1、3坐标来检查是否叠好
2. 00:09:283 (2) - 前后都是跟人声，这里跟鼓点有点让人措手不及
3. 00:09:283 (2,1) - 对于Hard来说或许有点难读，试试：http://puu.sh/g1QPn/337eb5eea8.jpg
4. 00:11:892 (2,2) - 考虑叠一起？
5. 00:16:736 (3,1) - 理顺一下？http://puu.sh/g1QX4/a8af15f831.jpg
6. 00:18:041 (3) - 尾巴没跟后面两叠好
7. 00:21:395 (6) - 跟3、4比间距变大了一些，似乎没有特别的原因的话和3、4一样，5、6距离一致吧
8. 00:42:823 (5,6) - 稍微调整一下尾巴，安在一起
9. 00:45:432 (2,3) - 看slider circle可以检查到，blanket包好些http://puu.sh/g1Rae/8afe7f104f.jpg
10. 00:49:531 (2) - 也是人声换跟鼓点问题，易误读，建议间距（稍微）拉大些
11. 00:57:357 (4,5) - 包好
12. 01:00:712 (5,1) - 稍微叠好
13. 01:04:997 (5) - ctrl+G或许会顺手些
14. 01:08:165 (4,5) - 稍微没叠好
15. 01:12:451 (7,8) - 包好
16. 01:14:500 (3,4) - 包好
17. 01:15:618 (1,2,3,4) - 稍微分开一些，这个blanket挺难处理，不过处理好了也挺美观的
18. 01:24:562 (4,5,6) - 考虑blanket？http://puu.sh/g1RCT/d116904331.jpg（啊呀我也没包好，该抽
    这个Hard挺好玩的XDD

1. 00:02:575 (1) - 考虑远远地把前面的单点2或者后面的滑条2包起来以美观些
2. 00:05:184 (3,1) - 包好
3. 00:09:283 (3) - 从跟人声换成跟鼓点问题，有点怪怪的，建议把3拉到前面的红线上
4. 00:11:892 (5,1) - 离远一些或者包起来
5. 00:29:221 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - 建议间距统一（前面1x后面1.3x
6. 00:48:041 (1,2) - 太弯以至于不大好看了
7. 00:54:749 (1,1,2) - 考虑blanket
8. 01:17:854 (1,2,3,4,5) - 对于Normal有点难，而且似乎没有特别的原因这里需要跳唔...

1. 00:14:314 (3) - 考虑包起前面的单点2 或后面的滑条1
2. 00:45:059 (4,1) - 考虑blanket
3. 01:03:693 (1) - 试着考虑换个滑条形状，不过在slider kick转弯的手感挺不错，
4. 01:10:215 (2) - 滑条头从这里（01:10:401）开始吧
5. 01:11:146 - 绿线100%音量或许太刺耳了？
6. 01:13:382 (2) - 呃...换个形状吧
7. 01:23:258 (5) - 考虑换成这里（01:23:444）结束的滑条加一个单点（01:23:817）
8. 01:27:544 (1) - 转盘这里（01:27:357）开始

jonawaga wrote:

Hi ZJ! M4M on your queue.
I'll put the NC suggestion in a separate part because I don't want to make it confusing.

Easy

AR~3 ok
00:05:184 (2,1) - stacking is hard for easy players. They're not used to it yet. I won't point out every stack though.
00:07:047 (3,1,1) - rotate this a bit to avoid overlapping with (1) fixed
00:10:774 (2,3) - this is bad polarity. To fix it, try to make a rhythm like this. This will require reworking the section a bit.
00:10:774 (2,3) - This probably won't be the same if you took my last suggestion, but if you do place notes like this then try to blanket them. It will make your map look cleaner. ok,I will try to blanket it cuz aimod always warn me of the distance problem.
00:17:482 (2,3) - It looks unclean to have slider directly next to each other, try to fix this.fixed
00:29:407 (3,4,5) - These all point directly up/down and left/right which is kinda like the old mapping style. You could fix this by pointing the slider other ways, or curving some of them. Try something like this.Good Idea!
00:32:389 (3) - If you did ^^^ that, then also make this curved.fixed
00:34:625 (2,3,4,5) - Try something like this and this for flow.Thanks!the former looks good!
01:10:215 (2) - This looks uneven, try snapping it to a lower ds like this. (This doesn't take long at all.)sorry,I can't understand why the slider ends on the 1/4(blue)line that's weird.Also,if I do that aimod will warn me of the distance problems
01:15:618 (3) - sooooo many reverses. The easy player may not expect this.

Easy NC's

These are just suggestions! You don't have to do all of them. 00:05:556 (3) - NC
00:06:302 (2) - no NC
00:07:047 (4) - NC
00:07:792 (5) - no NC
00:08:538 (3) - no NC
00:18:972 (1) - NC
00:20:463 (2) - no NC
00:30:898 (5) - NC
00:31:643 (1) - no NC
00:36:861 (5) - NC
00:45:059 (4) - NC
00:45:805 (2) - no NC
All Fixed except the last two suggestions.

Normal

00:05:184 (3,1) - blanket fixed
00:07:047 (1,2,3) - Making (1) and (3) identical would probably make this look cleaner, and it's the same thing for other parts like 00:12:264 (6,1) - these two.ok, i move a little but still want them overlap a little because the rhythm is consistent.
I'm not going to list all of them though.
00:08:538 (4,5,6) - I don't really get this rhythm, try this or this.
00:15:246 (6) - I think this should have only one repeat.fixed
00:54:749 (2,1) - blanket fixed
01:10:401 (2) - I think this looks better straight.fixed
01:15:246 (5) - ^^^fixed
01:19:718 (3,4) - I like slider like this to be the same, but when you put (3) over (4) (like this, but look closely) you can tell that they aren't.Sorry don't want to change this

Normal NC's

00:01:084 (2) - no NC
00:07:792 (3) - no NC
00:26:985 (1) - no NC
00:33:693 (5) - NC
00:34:438 (3) - no NC
00:54:749 (2) - no NC
Most of them are amended
I'll stop suggesting NC's now because the other diffs are just the same as normal.

Hard

00:06:302 (3,1) - blanket?sorry,it will ruin the structure of the following pattern
00:15:059 (3) - move the reverse to prevent overlap with (1) fixed
00:18:041 (3,4) - I don't think the stack is correct, try snapping (4) on it's end by reversing it, then bringing it back. Same thing with (6).Right,but it's really hard to adjust I ctrl+g many times to snap it but there 's always a bit overlapped,I'm almost crazy!
00:26:239 (1,2,3) - Try to spread this out a tiny bit more, about as far apart as 00:36:861 (1,2,3,4) - these. It confused me at first.Maybe,but i stick to my own
00:45:432 (2,3) - blanket, if you do then also try to blanket 00:46:923 (2,3) - this
01:24:562 (4,5,6) - ^^^Sorry,I don't want to blanket all the time

Insane

00:27:544 (3,1) - blanket Most modder suggest i blanket here,fixed
01:06:115 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - this could be confusing because you usually spread out the slower notes and stack the faster ones.ur right.Many people don't like here including me.I change it into 3 stacks in two sets(3*2)
01:22:140 (2) - stack fixed

I suggest a lot for easy/normal, but I think that hard/insane are really good.
Good Luck!

Sauziteoi wrote:

[General]
没有大问题

[Insane]
看到我在mod的时候你也在edit了所以如果指代内容有所出入请勿见怪 没关系

1. 图本身不难，BPM也不至于太高，因此AR可以考虑减个0.3 说的很对，别人也建议我这图确实可以不用这么高的ar，我试试看8.5吧
2. 00:08:351 (1,2,3,4,5) - 为了稍微加强3、4间的人声，弱化4、5间人声鼓点转换的突兀感，因此建议在这里放弃等距，这样试试：http://puu.sh/g1LGr/faeb4566fe.jpg 你说的很有道理，我之前打到这里的时候也有点不爽，说不上来是什么感觉但是感觉可以更好，你做到了！
3. 00:11:333 (1,2,3) - 虽然这里的确没有音，但1、2、3摆成规则等距的话可能会被误读，建议把2往1靠近些 很有道理！
4. 00:17:295 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 2、4试试Ctrl+G并向右弯曲，然后1、3、6向左弯曲？请问是这个意思吗
   SPOILER

   
   之前有一个modder这么建议我做，他只建议单个滑条ctrl+g而且没说弯曲，只是这样的话我觉得还是我原来的那种更有韵律感，其实我很讨厌整首歌都是椭圆flow，没有意思，但是你的意思如果是24同时选中ctrl+g的话我觉得还是很好的，不仅24换了头尾还换了位置，使得这个椭圆flow有着一种细微的变化，然后一下子加距离反向flow到滑条5，弯曲的建议我接受。我个人认为结合这里的意境选择这种上下上下（交叉）
   SPOILER

   
   更好。
5. 00:19:531 (1,2,3,4) - 虽然这里是要弱一些但是试试这样http://puu.sh/g1N4b/b8ad7fbea6.jpg可能会有感觉一些？别人也说原地四连很无聊。本来我想说这里音调一样所以没打算改，但是确实也不好。你的改法也不突兀，我可以接受但是如果这样的话，到下一个滑条的距离会变大，所以我做了如下一系列调整
   1、2、把之前的滑条换头尾。3、再采取上面所说的第一张图的改法，我觉得超赞！感谢！
6. 00:20:649 (2) - Ctrl+G试试？另外如果是要和 （00:18:786 (5) ）做blanket的话稍微包拼好一点 虽然我不讨厌椭圆flow，但是由于上面一步已经采取了这种方法，我想这里保持一致也许更好。[b]后面那个不是很明白[/b]
7. 00:21:767 (5,1) - 和前面（00:18:786 (5,6) ）保持一致的节奏比较舒服吧。另外5可以试试Ctrl+G。你耳朵真尖，这个错误差点被我忽视了，ctrl+g感觉更顺了
8. 00:27:357 (1,2,3,1) - 包好一点，http://puu.sh/g1NE0/804e835807.jpg。包好了
9. 00:30:339 (4) - 滑条换成两个单点和后面滑条5的头组一个正三角型试试，但不要太跳 又是一个极好的建议，我会试试看的
10. 00:30:339 (4,5) - 包好一点 好的
11. 00:30:712 (5,6) - 滑条中间的音忽略掉了，怪可惜的，和前面（00:18:786 (5,6) ）保持一致的节奏吧。又是一个极好的建议，我会试试看的
12. 00:33:879 (6) - 可以试试把5包起来的感觉：http://puu.sh/g1NUA/66d4a4a639.jpg 不错，我太死板了，只注意了图形对称
13. 00:38:165 (5) - 试试把4从左到右包起来 这个我觉得可以和右边的四连击一起改，可以考虑
14. 00:39:842 (3,1) - 这两个之间的距离远一些比较好 对称太无脑了，不过你说的没错，我在调整一下对称让两者距离变大
15. 00:42:078 (1,2,3,4) - 随着音调升高试试改成规则的形状或/并逐渐扩大间距？仅供参考：http://puu.sh/g1Ocn/291a2b558f.jpg 看上去不错我会试试的。
16. 00:42:823 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这一组是加强打击感的不错的时机（啥），试试参考这样：http://puu.sh/g1ONT/9bef8ea491.jpg，1、2、3是相对着的三个滑条，4、5、6、7组成X字跳，（7叠在2的滑条头上）看上去很高端的样子我会试试的。
17. 00:55:121 - 这条绿线似乎没有改变任何设置，建议删去 好的
18. 00:55:494 (3,2) - 2要把3的滑条头包起来的话稍微调好一下
19. 00:57:730 - 这条绿线似乎没有改变任何设置，建议删去 好的
20. 00:57:357 (4) - 滑条换成两个单点和后面滑条5的头组一个正三角型试试，但不要太跳 和之前的差不多咯，不过我会选一个地方改的，都这样就没意思了
21. 00:59:221 (1,2,3) - 试试这个：http://puu.sh/g1Pfn/b99b3a8ae7.jpg 可以考虑
22. 01:01:457 (2) - 换一个形状吧，这个不太好打也不太好看 确实可以更漂亮
23. 01:06:115 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 只跟鼓点的话，建议从弯曲的移动连打换成相对着的直的连打，或者两个原地三连吧，只是建议。怎么说你呢……真的是超级棒，之前我也觉得这里别扭，问了群里的人，人家说原地三连好，于是我现在已经改成了原地三连，但没有更新，让我再叫你一声大神！！！ 于是就被你发现了这个问题
24. 01:15:991 (2) - 这里的滑条尾有个应该强调的音，建议滑条换 成两单点 这里可能我不会改，看情况吧
25. 01:21:395 (4,2) - 叠好些 好吧
26. 01:22:420 - 唔...这里有个音。可以放三连，有建议见下一条↓
27. 01:22:140 (2,3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/g1PNo/a3a4da1fc8.jpg这样感觉滑条5的头能够强调一下，三连只是提供了一些紧迫感（啥），也可以换成单点 我会考虑的
28. 01:26:053 (1,2) - 唔...包起来？好的

不得不说你的insane mod 能力已经吊破天际了，基本没有一句废话也没有一个无用改法，虽然有那么点想颠覆我整张图的意思，不过并不是乱改，都是对我的图有很大帮助的建议。看得我都已经感动的落泪了，从来没有收到过像你这么好的一份insane mod了。也许需要改的地方太多，我可能只是口头回复表示接受你的建议（橙色字表示可能会改，怕回复你晚了所以暂时还没改，绿色字表示已经改了或者一定会改，看到后面要改那么多我吓尿了），但可能为了整体性最终选择放弃你的某些建议，因为经过一番大改之后就有点不是自己的风格了，不过我会好好参考你的建议并结合自己理解重新修改一番的。之前我总觉得这张图缺少了些什么，但是不知道究竟是什么，现在我得到答案了，谢谢你！

[Hard]

1. 00:01:084 (1,3) - 叠好，可以通过滑条1 ctrl+G然后比较1、3坐标来检查是否叠好 懂你意思，但是总感觉有一点不能完全重叠，好奇怪啊
2. 00:09:283 (2) - 前后都是跟人声，这里跟鼓点有点让人措手不及 有音效引导我觉得问题不大
3. 00:09:283 (2,1) - 对于Hard来说或许有点难读，试试：http://puu.sh/g1QPn/337eb5eea8.jpg 超赞
4. 00:11:892 (2,2) - 考虑叠一起？好的，我顺便用滑条包了一下
5. 00:16:736 (3,1) - 理顺一下？http://puu.sh/g1QX4/a8af15f831.jpg Nice！
6. 00:18:041 (3) - 尾巴没跟后面两叠好 这个真的超级难弄，我ctrl+g无数次了因为那中心点不在4的倍数所以每次都差一点，前面那位也建议我改，好吧看样子不对齐真对不住大家了 已经改好了。:D
7. 00:21:395 (6) - 跟3、4比间距变大了一些，似乎没有特别的原因的话和3、4一样，5、6距离一致吧 34 56都是1.1-1.2啊，45可能大一点没办法是为了梗原来是图形间距啊，好吧
8. 00:42:823 (5,6) - 稍微调整一下尾巴，安在一起 搞定
9. 00:45:432 (2,3) - 看slider circle可以检查到，blanket包好些http://puu.sh/g1Rae/8afe7f104f.jpg 超赞又学到一招！
10. 00:49:531 (2) - 也是人声换跟鼓点问题，易误读，建议间距（稍微）拉大些 你说的没错但是我用两个滑条来过渡应该不会有太大的问题，我会听你的意见稍微拉远一点
11. 00:57:357 (4,5) - 包好 用你教的方法真是太实用了
12. 01:00:712 (5,1) - 稍微叠好
13. 01:04:997 (5) - ctrl+G或许会顺手些 不错，不过还需要相应调整下个note
14. 01:08:165 (4,5) - 稍微没叠好
15. 01:12:451 (7,8) - 包好
16. 01:14:500 (3,4) - 包好 全部搞定
17. 01:15:618 (1,2,3,4) - 稍微分开一些，这个blanket挺难处理，不过处理好了也挺美观的 选了blanket，智商不够用真难包
18. 01:24:562 (4,5,6) - 考虑blanket？http://puu.sh/g1RCT/d116904331.jpg（啊呀我也没包好，该抽 让我叫你声师傅吧！我以前真的不会blanket直到你教会了我这个方法，实在是太吊了！
    这个Hard挺好玩的XDD 谢谢

Hard帮了我不少非常感谢！

[Normal]

1. 00:02:575 (1) - 考虑远远地把前面的单点2或者后面的滑条2包起来以美观些 嗯包了
2. 00:05:184 (3,1) - 包好 之前修复了
3. 00:09:283 (3) - 从跟人声换成跟鼓点问题，有点怪怪的，建议把3拉到前面的红线上 感觉我的也没有错，因为后面两个重叠提醒了接下来的节奏
4. 00:11:892 (5,1) - 离远一些或者包起来 竟然可以包？又被ds坑了
5. 00:29:221 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - 建议间距统一（前面1x后面1.3x 间距这方面我不大懂，可不可以理解成12345x1.0 123x1.3虽然不知道你的意图但是感觉很厉害的样子，试着改成你说的那样了
6. 00:48:041 (1,2) - 太弯以至于不大好看了 稍微改平一点是这个意思吗？不过我觉得问题不大，比平的好看
7. 00:54:749 (1,1,2) - 考虑blanket 之前修复了
8. 01:17:854 (1,2,3,4,5) - 对于Normal有点难，而且似乎没有特别的原因这里需要跳唔...是这样的，我做了easy难度，如果只有normal的话我会考虑去掉这种组合，而且整体难度才2星出头我觉得很合适，需要一点挑战性，并且没有一直在跳，就这一个地方，后面换成滑条了。

[Easy]

1. 00:14:314 (3) - 考虑包起前面的单点2 或后面的滑条1 有点难办aimod会提示距离问题
2. 00:45:059 (4,1) - 考虑blanket 没有这个打算
3. 01:03:693 (1) - 试着考虑换个滑条形状，不过在slider kick转弯的手感挺不错，暂时没想到好的形状，如果有请告诉我
4. 01:10:215 (2) - 滑条头从这里（01:10:401）开始吧 嗯说得对
5. 01:11:146 - 绿线100%音量或许太刺耳了？想强调钢琴的key，不觉得刺耳因为是whistle不是finish
6. 01:13:382 (2) - 呃...换个形状吧 同第三条
7. 01:23:258 (5) - 考虑换成这里（01:23:444）结束的滑条加一个单点（01:23:817）没必要，会破坏前面的连贯性
8. 01:27:544 (1) - 转盘这里（01:27:357）开始懂你的意思，但是前面modder说要保持所有难度转盘时间的一致性，所以迫不得已只能这样

加油！

Adol Christin wrote:

No kudosu
这效率太可怕了，吓的不轻。。。。由于我的那个modding queue，很多都是m4m，现在暂时关了最近就没啥mod了。觉得别人也很难找出问题了，反倒是通过不停的mod和被摸，自己也加深了对作了图的理解，逐渐能发现这张图的问题并改善
有件事要解决下：在各个难度打开song setup，在Design一栏，关掉Widescreen Support和Letterbox During Break。好像后者关不掉，不知道为什么
前者只有在有storyboard的时候才要勾上，后者的话，没有休息时间哪来letterbox是吧。
以上，祝你好运

1. The backgrounds need to be resized to 1366x768 or 1024x768, also it would probably be better to have all backgrounds the same resolution just for consistency
2. Romanised artist should be Yoko Ishida instead https://www.google.com/search?q=ishida+yuoko&rlz=1C1EODB_enUS572US572&oq=ishida+yuoko&aqs=chrome.0.69i59j0l5.1312j0j7&sourceid=chrome&es_sm=122&ie=UTF-8
3. Needs combo colours, also for each difficulty since they all have different bg's
4. 00:15:991 - Could have another timing point here, also decrease volume here to 60%~ hitsounds are a bit loud

• 
  I recommend avoiding any stacking at all on easy difficulties, it's pretty confusing for new players

1. 00:07:047 (4,5) - The double blanket here is just a tiny bit off, might need to lighten the curve a bit to fix it
2. 00:09:842 (1) - Missing finish on head?
3. 00:11:333 (3) - ^
4. 00:12:823 (1) - ^
5. 00:14:314 (3) - ^
6. 00:39:842 (2) - ^
7. 00:41:333 (4) - ^
   Ok this difficulty is missing a lot of finishes compared to the other difficulties

1. 00:02:202 (2,1) - Blanket needs to be fixed
2. 00:05:556 (1) - This could be a bit further from 00:05:184 (3) so the approach circle from 00:05:184 (3) blankets better
3. 01:12:637 (6) - Add a finish on the tail
4. 01:13:941 (2) - Add a finish on the head
5. 01:14:687 (4) - ^
6. 01:15:618 (1) - ^
7. 01:27:357 (5) - ^

1. 00:08:351 (4) - This ends on a strong drum note downbeat, try to modify the rhythm so it's clickable
2. 00:39:842 (3) - Missing a finish on head, you had these finishes in the normal difficulty owo
3. 00:41:333 (3) - ^
4. 00:42:823 (5) - ^
5. 00:45:805 (3) - ^
6. 00:47:295 (3) - ^
7. 01:13:941 (2) - ^
8. 01:14:687 (4) - ^
9. 01:15:618 (1) - ^
10. 01:27:171 (5) - Try to make the tail of this clickable and add a finish to it, it feels awkward ending with a slider going into a spinner

sukiNathan wrote:

hiya you requested m4m from my queue, here it is

[General]

1. The backgrounds need to be resized to 1366x768 or 1024x768, also it would probably be better to have all backgrounds the same resolution just for consistency OK
2. Romanised artist should be Yoko Ishida instead https://www.google.com/search?q=ishida+yuoko&rlz=1C1EODB_enUS572US572&oq=ishida+yuoko&aqs=chrome.0.69i59j0l5.1312j0j7&sourceid=chrome&es_sm=122&ie=UTF-8 I don't think so,other mappers who did this song is as same as mine,that‘s Ishida Youko
3. Needs combo colours, also for each difficulty since they all have different bg's OK
4. 00:15:991 - Could have another timing point here, also decrease volume here to 60%~ hitsounds are a bit loudMaybe, but I'm not going to do this.
   

[Easy]

• 
  I recommend avoiding any stacking at all on easy difficulties, it's pretty confusing for new players

1. 00:07:047 (4,5) - The double blanket here is just a tiny bit off, might need to lighten the curve a bit to fix it
2. 00:09:842 (1) - Missing finish on head?
3. 00:11:333 (3) - ^
4. 00:12:823 (1) - ^
5. 00:14:314 (3) - ^
6. 00:39:842 (2) - ^
7. 00:41:333 (4) - ^
   Ok this difficulty is missing a lot of finishes compared to the other difficulties

all fixed
[Normal]

1. 00:02:202 (2,1) - Blanket needs to be fixed
2. 00:05:556 (1) - This could be a bit further from 00:05:184 (3) so the approach circle from 00:05:184 (3) blankets better
3. 01:12:637 (6) - Add a finish on the tail
4. 01:13:941 (2) - Add a finish on the head
5. 01:14:687 (4) - ^
6. 01:15:618 (1) - ^
7. 01:27:357 (5) - ^

fixed most of them

[Hard]

1. 00:08:351 (4) - This ends on a strong drum note downbeat, try to modify the rhythm so it's clickable.Maybe ur right,give me your modification or I don't think mine has some problem.
2. 00:39:842 (3) - Missing a finish on head, you had these finishes in the normal difficulty owo I don't think so.cuz notes in hard are more than ez/nm that means the rhythm are different.
3. 00:41:333 (3) - ^
4. 00:42:823 (5) - ^
5. 00:45:805 (3) - ^
6. 00:47:295 (3) - ^
7. 01:13:941 (2) - ^
8. 01:14:687 (4) - ^
9. 01:15:618 (1) - ^
10. 01:27:171 (5) - Try to make the tail of this clickable and add a finish to it, it feels awkward ending with a slider going into a spinner.I don't think so,give me your modification or I don't think mine has some problem.

sorry I can't accept all of the suggestions on hard
All in all you're really missing a lot of finishes in certain difficulties, it's very inconsistent ;w;
I didn't quite point out all of them, so my recommendation is to follow the patterns of normal since it's the most complete in regards to hitsounds
Also you might find this hitsound copier of use in the future

Good luck with your map~So how about the flow and spacing,did you be aware of that?If there's no big problem on my flow and spacing,plz let me know.Honestly speaking,I don't like to be modded on only NC,Blanket and sound effect and I usually mod others map in flow and spacing,sometimes even give him my modification adding a picture to help understanding my meaning. I think it's the flow and spacing that decide a map is ranked or not so I really want everyone mod my map like this.
Anyway,thanks for your mod!
I'll be waiting for my mod >w<okay,but I may not help you out at all indeed

blueloniess wrote:

我来摸图啦~~~

insane

我之前写了好多好多....结果刚刚准备发布的时候....发现地图居然可以更新....当时我就蛋疼了,果然更新完之后我之前发现的问题几乎一个都没了.....
00:12:823 (1,3) - 这两个对称一下会更好吧 好主意，改好了
00:56:239 (1,2,3,4) - 这几个做成一朵花一样的不更美观么 试试看吧，因为距离要控制好，有点难度
00:18:041 (3,4) - 两个的间距弄远一点...不是很明白，如果拉得比12远会破坏整体性，暂时不打算改

hard

00:20:277 (3,4,5,6) - 个人感觉这里首尾相连比较好...是不是3456互相首尾相连？感觉不错哎Good！
00:49:531 (2) - 我怎么觉得这里用不到clap啊...抱歉为了过渡vocal用了clap，如果不能说出理由的话恕我拒绝

normal

00:00:525 (1,1) - blanket
00:06:674 (2,3,4,5) - 做2组blanket吧 个人不怎么喜欢blanket :(
01:23:444 (6,1) - 是不是有点太远了?1.04真心不远……

End

感觉这图改了很多的...\以前忘记看了.....
不过好像也没有什么问题了吧(基本上) 希望如此吧，看BN怎么看了
那么,祝早日被rank!谢谢XD

1. 128kpbs的mp3是不行的，有人因为用128被dq，一般用192
2. 关掉letterbox
3. TAG加上opening，然后关于这个metadata建议再找人查一下，以官方为准，并不是随便加上TV Size就可以

Kagamine Ren wrote:

[General]

1. 128kpbs的mp3是不行的，有人因为用128被dq，一般用192
2. 关掉letterbox
3. TAG加上opening，然后关于这个metadata建议再找人查一下，以官方为准，并不是随便加上TV Size就可以

[Easy]

1. 00:05:556 (1) - Easy里不能放这种完全的遮挡，对新手很不友好
2. 00:32:389 (4) - 低难度不能放超过一次的折返
3. 01:10:028 (1,2) - 低难度不要放过于扭曲的滑条，对新手不友好
   ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
   以上都是举例，图中类似这样的东西当然也是要改
4. 新人mapper做低难度时强烈建议全程DS，你这图有很多地方不按DS摆，不是说这样不可以，但是非常非常的不建议这样，希望你根据上面那些必须改的东西再做一定修改

[Normal]

1. Normal中可以适当放遮挡，然后其他的比如折返滑条不能超过一次的规定和Easy差不多，当然也是建议全程DS，你这个图好像全程都没用DS.-.只是比Easy节奏要更丰富一些，参考Easy里我给出的建议再修改
2. 我觉得SV有点高

[Hard]

1. 00:25:494 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 这东西实在有点坑，前面是原地1/2单点，后面突然又不是了，然后也是类似于原地，这种比较激烈的地方并不适合antijump
2. 00:37:979 (4,5) - 这两个听起来显然是连在一起的，把4放在5上面吧
3. 00:42:078 (1,2,3,4) - 这东西打起来感觉很不舒服的
4. 00:48:041 (1,2,3,4) - 这个就比上面那个好一点
5. 00:49:345 - 这个音不建议漏掉

[Insane]

1. 00:06:302 (2,3) - 这个原地不好，建议分开
2. 01:23:910 - 这个地方没音，虽然overmap也是可以的但是01:24:003 - 这里开始有段很特殊的音，很适合放短折返啊，即http://puu.sh/g9abB/effc39bcfb.jpg
3. 这个图间距是个大问题，感觉没有控制好，比如00:08:910 (3,4,5) - 为什么这三个间距是不一样的，像这种不是跳的过渡用的物件，建议确定一个固定的DS来摆，比如1.2，1.0等等，这样显得图不乱。然后是关于重音，比如00:11:333 (1) - 明显是一个比较重的音，这种地方一般都是跟前面明显拉大间距来表现这个音，而00:10:774 (4,5,6,1) - 却是一样的间距。该大跳的时候就大胆一点，比如00:51:767 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 太小气了。最后一个问题，01:00:712 (6,1) - 这两个之间空了一拍，但是间距反而比01:00:525 (5,6) - 这个还要小，显然是不合理的，注意时间和空间的间距的平衡.
4. 当然上面也都是例子，整个图这样的问题还有不少。还需要适当的remap，建议找一些有经验的mapper/modder来看图，这样才能进步很快。

没了，gl

Pururut wrote:

新年好,刚回到家,这么晚才来不好意思. :L 没关系的，能帮我看图我已经很感激了！ 新年好！

[General]
Easy和Normal保持DS不要变,我个人觉得大于0.03都不行.我下次一定注意，本来还以为aimod没有提示距离问题就可以了呢
nc好像有点问题...不是辅助读图就一节节的NC,建议长白NC 好的

[Easy]
00:09:842 (1,2,3) - 上面提到的
00:12:823 (1,2,3) - ^ 剩下的自己检查吧 全部修复了
00:32:389 (4) - 这种多次折返对新手很不友好,后面貌似还有蛮多.嗯，不知ranking规则就滥用了，已全部修复类似滑条
01:15:059 (1,2) - 不太友好 试试删掉1 然后把2和后面的滑条头重叠 然后保持ds. 嗯，我自行更改了节奏，现在不会这么仓促了
01:13:382 (2) - 不好看 换成只折一次了，应该好一点了
01:21:581 (3) - ^ fixed
01:26:053 (2) - nc fixed
我个人觉得Easy 全程1/1就行了,easy normal不要出现1/2和1/1堆叠切换
就是01:15:059 (1,2) - 和 01:17:854 (1,2) - 这种，新人会很难受的 :3 好的下次一定注意，我又忽视了这些细节

[Hard]
00:17:295 (1,3,6) - 并没有叠好 没看懂……
00:21:767 (7,8) - 避免这种overlap不好看 真仔细！已修复
00:25:494 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 略难打 考虑前面4个note改成两个滑条 好主意，已改
00:33:879 (8) - nc
00:34:438 (1) - remove nc 修复
00:48:786 (1,2) - 怪异的clap 很多人也这么说，那只能换回鼓了
00:37:979 (4,5) - 走远了 好吧都这么说，只能改了
00:59:034 (3,1) - 不要变距 嗯，调整了
01:02:016 (2) - 并没包好
01:04:997 (5) - ^ 已修复

[Insane]
个人感觉你摆的比较随意,没有整体感,还有就是有的地方你想摆好，但是没摆好..最明显的就是00:45:059 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 是的，想了这个梗但打起来并不顺，我自己再好好想想吧
我个人觉得insane非跳的单点部分的间距变化不要突然变换,比如 01:22:513 (3,4,5) - 01:09:283 (4,5,6) -
有的地方跳的很莫名比如00:23:072 (4,1) - 这里vocal比较轻就不推荐放跳,但是00:20:090 (4,1) - 这里放跳就没问题.好的我会注意的
00:04:811 (1,2) - 两个长一样比较好.fixed
00:29:221 (1,2,3) - 向右下靠一点,让00:28:662 (3,1) - blanket,好主意哎，我怎么就没想到呢……还能减少间距
00:31:457 (1,2,3,4) - 不建议这样，可以考虑放跳 有点难办啊，周围都被包住了，再让我想想
00:39:842 (3,1) - 不用挨这么近 由于无脑对称，就靠这么近了，这里我会改的
00:42:451 (3,4,1) - flow并不好. 试着把4往左边一点应该会好吧
00:48:041 (1,2,3,4) - 间距太大了,建议1.6-1.7 确实，跳太远了
00:55:494 (3,1) - 避免这样的overlap
01:09:656 (6,2) - ^又碰到了那么一点，我真是
00:57:730 (5) - 并不好看,flow没问题，但是建议圆弧大点 嗯，试着改了，至少好看一点了
01:00:712 (6) - 272,260 我的失误

美丽,比我第一张图好多了 加油:3谢谢！

多谢前辈的摸图，我又学到了不少。非常感谢你的star，虽然我的图并不好，但我会努力完善它的！

Shad0w1and wrote:

看到这张质量不错的图，难以置信是第一次做图，占位送摸 谢谢XD

General:
删掉目录下所有.osb文件，你不需要。应该是你添加背景不小心弄出来的文件，结果是造成黑边 好的，之前还出现了玩到一半黑屏的情况
我摸图一般顺带送视频，这个拿去用，质量和体积都好不少。http://puu.sh/gbn37/403c4a2384.flvvideo offset -207ms
非常感谢啊！简直业界良心！
Insane:
节奏没大问题，排列挺乱，图没有整体性。先给个帮你改了前12秒的给你做个参考如何达成图的整体性，直接丢到文件夹里看。http://puu.sh/gbmz9/50202730e9.osu
00:11:333 (1,2,3) - 视觉上反人类，注意Insane的图美观靠的是物件之间的距离而不是ds。你想要达成难度的话，考虑23重合，1,2DS提升到2.0左右
00:12:823 (1,2,3) - ^
00:16:923 (4,5,1) - 视觉反人类，拉成正三角形排列
00:19:531 (1,2,3,4) - 保证两个正三角形：

SPOILER

后面基本上都有视觉DS不整齐的特征，请全部修正，保证同屏画面上note视觉距离不超过2种，超越两种时请以大正三角架构构图。
“注意Insane的图美观靠的是物件之间的距离而不是ds”这句话我会铭记于心的！第一次做insane全程开ds，人家说不行。看别人insane好像都不锁ds，尝试不锁距离。以为是为了flow而随便摆的。再仔细看了一遍别人的图，发现物件间距真的是差不多的，这就是为什么我的图打起来没有整体性很松散，一下子茅塞顿开了！正三角形法我也会记住的！感谢！
00:34:438 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 此pattern用在这个节奏不合适 好不容易想出个梗，感觉确实不怎么合适，哎
00:48:786 (1,2,3,4) - 个人建议如今的风格，摆这种已经不再流行，当然你看着办。后面的一样 这个我坚持自己的想法，作图要有主见，偶尔搞个对称也没啥我觉得

Hard:
还是视觉DS的问题，物件距离变化太多
00:48:786 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1) - 突然变得太简单了，这是Hard建议应该难一点 个人觉得没有问题，如果要改会影响其他note的排布，抱歉
节奏除了这个都很好，多remap几次，把pattern修好看点质量是不错的

Normal:
个人感觉不出什么大问题，不过有些可以包好点，像00:45:059 (1,2) - 00:48:786 (3,4,5) -fixed
00:16:736 (2) - 的flow应该这样摆

SPOILER

赞
00:26:985 (2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - 转圈转的太多了，一般是大半圈就换方向，最多一圈左右 好吧试试换个方向

Easy:
不想看。

ohad1881 wrote:

HI
m4m reverse here!
easy-
00:12:823-remove NC
00:30:898-remove NC
00:31:643-NC here
01:03:693-this is just ugly change it
01:13:010-remove NC
normal-
00:07:792-remove NC
00:08:538-NC here
00:25:494-try this
01:10:401-^^
hard-
00:04:066-remove NC
00:35:929-dont flow well with the others try roundy slider
01:01:271-put a circle here for blanket
01:08:724-put a circle here and stack it with the end of 4
insane-
00:04:066-REMOVE NC
00:23:631 2-ctrl g
00:24:376 4-ctrl g
GL!

我给的mod基本就是给另外一种风格的梗啊啥的，并不是说你原本的就不好了。。除非我特别说出来。。不用太在意。。

Insane

1. 00:01:830 (2) - 移到224,156附近貌似手感更好
2. 00:03:693 (3) - 然后可以用这个跟上面的做个blanket
3. 00:04:811 (2,3) - 总是一种方向跟弧度的滑条略显单调，试试这样，顺便把后面的滑条也改一下。
   
4. 00:17:295 (1,2,3,4) - 建议其中一对改成直的或者折线，增加点变化。
5. 00:18:786 (5) - 摆在顺着前一个滑条flow的地方比较好，顺便就做了一个小跳，现在这样感觉怪怪的
6. 00:19:531 (1,2,3,4) - 做个形状比较好吧，随便乱摆了一个 =w=
7. 00:21:022 (3,4) - 这两个考虑改成直的然后让尾巴跟之前两个弯的blanket起来？
8. 00:28:662 (3) - 减小点弧度
9. 00:38:165 (5) - 逼死强迫症系列，建议blanket？
10. 00:45:059 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 这种跳总是让我想起2012或者竹取。。总之是很老套的梗。。 相比之下后面的00:48:041
    
    (1,2,3,4) 就更加现代化，建议换梗。。【其实不换也不是什么大问题
11. 00:50:277 (1,2,3,4) - 考虑下做成两两平行但是不在一条直线上？然后也不要总是摆成直角啥的。。
12. 00:51:767 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 两组的大小变一下然后加个旋转？
13. 01:02:016 (3,4,5) - 这个梗改成这样试试？
14. 01:17:854 (1,2,3,4) - 2 改到120，88，4改到392，88，之前的形状感觉挺乱的。。
15. 01:19:159 (1,2,3,4,5) - 改成这种顺序不知道你喜不喜欢

Hard

1. 00:20:277 (3,4,5,6) - 同样把一对改成直的或者折线的增加点花样
2. 00:50:090 (1) - 建议跟之前这个00:48:413 (3)的blanket保持一致
3. 01:02:016 (2) - 01:03:693 (2) - 01:04:997 (5) - 01:13:103 (9) - 01:14:687 (4) - 跟要blanket的物件拉远一点
4. 01:16:177 (2) - 前半段的弧线建议拉好一点，然后中间用个红点，比如这样
   
5. 01:16:923 (4) - 同上，我拉了一个这样的
   
6. 01:27:171 (5) - 448，132

Normal+
EASY

这俩难度做的不错

Good luck XD

qxqd_1993 wrote:

楼主好_(:з」∠)_收到你的request就乖乖趴过来了……
←一看就是一个比楼主经验还不足的新人
嘛……尽可能地一起加油一起进步吧~共勉XD

EASY：
00:44:314(1) 你确定要在这个EASY里用这个反跳么，我觉得DS1.0挺好的…… 1.0偏远了……
01:01:457(1,2) 节奏好像真的不怎么对诶……因为中间故意留的空拍的原因么？
也许真的应该换成Circle和Slider的组合。你的主意挺好的，已修复

NORMAL：
00:14:221(4,5)左边移动一点么？到(416,216)位置上？嗯看上去更美观了

HARD：
00:26:239 好顶赞的反跳！这……是合适还是不合适呢？
01:06:302 可以被摆放到一个更好的位置，遮罩或者不要。如果为了美观拉开距离，会有点远的还是算了

Insane
鉴于各位大神做出了卓有成效的mod，以我现在的水平实在没有什么比较中肯的建议了

最后，抱歉新手能做到的事情真的太少了……
谢谢楼主带来了不错的HARD和INSANE……
希望我们下次还有机会一起合作哦~

Remilia_CO wrote:

我给的mod基本就是给另外一种风格的梗啊啥的，并不是说你原本的就不好了。。除非我特别说出来。。不用太在意。。好的XD

Insane

1. 00:01:830 (2) - 移到224,156附近貌似手感更好 good
2. 00:03:693 (3) - 然后可以用这个跟上面的做个blanket 不错哎
3. 00:04:811 (2,3) - 总是一种方向跟弧度的滑条略显单调，试试这样，顺便把后面的滑条也改一下。
   可能单调了点但是我更喜欢美观些
4. 00:17:295 (1,2,3,4) - 建议其中一对改成直的或者折线，增加点变化。理由同上，这个梗选一组变成直线滑条就不好看了
5. 00:18:786 (5) - 摆在顺着前一个滑条flow的地方比较好，顺便就做了一个小跳，现在这样感觉怪怪的 确实有点怪，把他移到上面去感觉好点了
6. 00:19:531 (1,2,3,4) - 做个形状比较好吧，随便乱摆了一个 =w= good
7. 00:21:022 (3,4) - 这两个考虑改成直的然后让尾巴跟之前两个弯的blanket起来？赞！
8. 00:28:662 (3) - 减小点弧度 感觉好点了
9. 00:38:165 (5) - 逼死强迫症系列，建议blanket？好吧，试着包的远了点
10. 00:45:059 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 这种跳总是让我想起2012或者竹取。。总之是很老套的梗。。 相比之下后面的00:48:041
    
    (1,2,3,4) 就更加现代化，建议换梗。。【其实不换也不是什么大问题 我想给人一种从老梗过渡到新梗的感觉（被打死）
11. 00:50:277 (1,2,3,4) - 考虑下做成两两平行但是不在一条直线上？然后也不要总是摆成直角啥的。这里整体性比较强，不大好改。况且虽然是老梗，却是我这张图想到的第一个梗，很舍不得改这里
12. 00:51:767 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 两组的大小变一下然后加个旋转？之前有人提醒过旋转，但这部分remap之后我没有保留，果然还是转下比较好
13. 01:02:016 (3,4,5) - 这个梗改成这样试试？不错哎
14. 01:17:854 (1,2,3,4) - 2 改到120，88，4改到392，88，之前的形状感觉挺乱的。。好的修复了
15. 01:19:159 (1,2,3,4,5) - 改成这种顺序不知道你喜不喜欢 一般般感觉没有太大提升

Hard

1. 00:20:277 (3,4,5,6) - 同样把一对改成直的或者折线的增加点花样 怎么说，有点难办，这样图就不整齐了，泡泡告诉我要尽量保持一组滑条弧度的统一性。这里改直折线的有点违和
2. 00:50:090 (1) - 建议跟之前这个00:48:413 (3)的blanket保持一致 好的
3. 01:02:016 (2) - 01:03:693 (2) - 01:04:997 (5) - 01:13:103 (9) - 01:14:687 (4) - 跟要blanket的物件拉远一点 blanket间距不一对吧，试着改一波吧
4. 01:16:177 (2) - 前半段的弧线建议拉好一点，然后中间用个红点，比如这样
   
5. 01:16:923 (4) - 同上，我拉了一个这样的 拉的比我好XD
   
6. 01:27:171 (5) - 448，132做了类似拉间距的调整

Normal+
EASY

这俩难度做的不错谢谢XD

Good luck XD

Remilia_CO wrote:

一些额外建议Insane的

00:30:339 (4,5,6) - 包好

fixed

00:43:941 (4,5,6,7) - 做个形状出来，比如467构成一个30-60-90的直角三角形，然后6到4，5的距离一样，5到6，7的距离一样，看图
fixed


00:45:059 (1,2,3,4,5) - 想到一个梗，不知道你喜不喜欢，右边直接翻转过去就行
我调整了下原来的，移动方向和你这个一样


00:10:774 (4) - 往上放到高过前一个滑条顶端的位置fixed

ByBy_ChAn wrote:

Hey just check :3

The metadata should be Ishida Youko - COLORFUL BOX(TV Size)Ok,I'll fix it later.

And I have a suggestion for hard diff : 00:06:302(3)- Snap from 1/4 to 1/2 I mean to remove the repeat and add a note after the slider but place the note on 407|273 for a jump cuz a diff without jumps and stream ( some stream =/ ) is not an hard diff and to follow the vocal and instruments much better Nice idea !but the distance maybe confusing so I decide to add a circle and stack on the next slider that's good

Good Luck ~

[ Zzz ] wrote:

Hi~ zj0924 ( My modding queue t/142356/start=150 )

Easy

1. 00:39:097 (1,2) - Swap NC
2. 00:42:078 (1,2) - Same
3. 00:49:904 - Add Circle 00:49:904 - Same
4. 01:00:712 (4,1) - Swap NC
5. 01:02:389 (4) - Add Whistle 01:03:320 - Add Clap
6. 01:04:625 (2) - Add Whistle 01:06:302 (4) - Change Whistle > Clap :3
7. 01:11:146 (3) - 01:15:618 (2) - Remove the green line
8. 01:11:519 (3,5) - Whistle Change Clap
9. 01:13:010 (1) - Finish Change Clap
10. 01:13:941 (3) - Add Whistle
11. 01:15:246 - Add Clap
12. 01:15:618 (2,3) - Correct
13. 01:21:954 - Add Clap

Normal

1. 00:19:531 (2) - Delete Circle
2. 00:20:836 - Add Circle , Clap
3. 00:23:817 - Same
4. 00:24:749 (6) - 00:24:562 - Here , Add Clap
5. 00:32:016 - Add Clap
6. 00:42:451 (2) - Add Whistle
7. 01:02:761 - Add Finish
8. 01:03:320 (5) - Finish Change Clap :3
9. 01:20:463 - Add Clap
10. 01:24:562 (3,5) - Add Clap ( End )

great mod all fixed.Thanks For Your Mod

Shad0w1and wrote:

对了这玩意咱有做，还有一个月发合集
白箱1080P

Remilia_CO wrote:

01:05:556 (8) - 保持跟之前那个滑条blanket的距离相同吧

Nerova Riuz GX wrote:

Hi, From my Queue
白箱www
雖然還沒追到進度但是我喜歡

General

要不要把Preview設在線上? 00:54:749 - 或是 00:55:028 - (如果你非常要求要從人聲開始)
這個音樂檔的結尾好像稍稍奇怪了點啊......貌似是被切掉了......要不要考慮換一個? 暂时不打算换，绿线都要调整了

Insane

可以多利用整個Grid的四個角落。
Hitsound貌似有點亂?

00:00:525 (1) - 或許換成兩個HC? 打起來感覺不一樣。感觉滑条没问题啊，sorry
00:21:767 (5) - 三連打?
00:33:693 (5) - ^ 大众向图，不打算加难度
00:40:960 (2) - 試著移動讓整個物件都在Grid裡面。
00:51:767 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 這整串的跳好像不是那麼必要? 如果因為某些原因一定要這樣子放的話，一次就夠了，第二次換別的樣式吧。这里整体性比较强，有点不好改
00:54:003 (2,3) - 考慮看看把這兩個換成一個滑條? 如果不要的話，也請把這兩個點的距離再拉大點。试着拉远了点，滑条不是很合适
01:23:817 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 試試看，把2和6去掉，變成一個HC和兩個三連，可能會好點(?) overmap，和前面一样会有点单调，我试着把排列和flow在调整下

00:09:656 (1) - 可以考慮下一個再NC
01:04:997 (7) - NC
01:05:929 (1) - continue combo NC全修复

Hard

00:00:525 (1) - 同Insane，考慮下換成兩個HC
00:09:842 (1) - 滑條開頭再往下一點點?
00:56:798 (2) - 往左邊一點點。推薦x=252 y=60 空间问题全部修复
這張圖的Hitsound配置不錯，可以讓Insane對照Hard下去重配

整個圖組的排列方面已經可以說是完整了，但是Hitsound還有NewCombo可以再修正
是張很不錯的圖~w谢谢xD
加油! 我很期待!

gorgonzoler wrote:

前排占位。这里只是说明一下我没忘记给你M4M。忙着升学考试所以可能会晚点摸Orz

• 
  00:02:575 (1) - no NC
  00:07:047 (1,1) - ^
  00:25:494 (2) - Try use this?
  
  img

  
  00:42:078 (1) - ^
  01:14:500 (3) - (4)Stack
  
  img

  
  01:24:376 (2) - Remove

• 
  00:15:991 (1) - Finish
  00:18:972 (6) - ^
  00:21:767 (7,8) - Try use this? (8) add Finish
  
  img

  
  00:24:935 (8) - Finish
  00:27:916 (1) - ^
  00:33:879 (1) - ^
  00:39:097 (1) - vol 75%
  00:39:842 (3) - Finish
  00:45:805 (3) - ^
  00:47:295 (3) - ^
  00:57:730 (5) - ^
  01:00:712 (5) - ^
  01:06:674 (3) - ^
  01:09:656 (7) - ^
  01:11:146 (5) -

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  00:11:053 (5) - add Circle
  00:15:991 (1) - Finish
  00:18:972 (6) - ^
  00:21:954 (6) - ^
  00:24:935 (6) - ^
  00:30:898 (6) - ^
  00:38:165 (5) - ^
  00:44:500 (7) - 1/2 Slider
  00:55:121 (2) - Ctrl G
  00:56:612 (2) - ^
  00:57:730 (5) - Finish
  01:00:712 (6) - Finish
  01:01:457 (2) - Try use this?
  
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  01:13:382 (1) - 1/2 Slider
  01:16:364 (3) - Ctrl J →Ctrl H →Ctrl G →move x352 y56
  
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  01:27:544 (1) - End at 01:28:662