LKs wrote:

aha~
good job xbubu!
star
(moded in-game)

haruhiteamsos wrote:

印度歌美~

1. osb文件没有用,删掉再full submit
2. 光有hitcircle不行,还要加个hitcircleoverlay进去
3. Tag : India
4. 感觉countdown不适合这map,去不去掉就随你了

1. 01:53:772 (T), 01:55:462 (T) - 这两个有音量变化的还是放前面1/4拍比较好

Breeze wrote:

haruhiteamsos wrote:

印度歌美~

太美了

只有红色部分是我觉得你应该改的,其他都只是建议

[General]

1. osb文件没有用,删掉再full submit
2. 光有hitcircle不行,还要加个hitcircleoverlay进去
3. Tag : India
4. 感觉countdown不适合这map,去不去掉就随你了

[Normal]

1. 01:53:772 (T), 01:55:462 (T) - 这两个有音量变化的还是放前面1/4拍比较好

整个map很棒,我找不出错,唯一一点就是nornal难了点
如果不做个再简单点的恐怕不好rank
其他都很棒 : D

jamesleao wrote:

阿霞，挤个奶

我看了一下，bpm有点误差，到了后半段会不同步，最好测多几次bpm

orioncomet wrote:

[General]
- Offset (I don't sure =3=) First +2ms and 2nd 93510
- Delete " - " from Source?
- TAG: Indian [not India, India is the country >_<]

[Easy]

SPOILER

00:37:504 (1) - try sound finish at last silder ~ ?
01:06:236 (1) - ^
01:26:518 (1) - ^
02:05:391 (1) - ^

[Normal]

SPOILER

00:30:321 (2) - try sound finish at last silder ~ ?
00:37:715 (1) - try sound finish
01:06:448 (2) - ^
01:26:729 (1) - ^
02:05:603 (1) - ^

[Insane]

SPOILER

00:37:716 - Start kiai time here like other diff ~ ? and try sound finish
01:06:448 - ^ and try sound finish at last silder
01:26:729 - ^ and try sound finish
01:30:744 (6) - remove clap?
01:31:167 (9) - ^
01:32:434 (6) - ^
01:32:857 (9) - ^
02:05:603 - ^

abalee wrote:

IMO no breaktime is hurt my hand.

Starrr ~ ☆

tsukamaete wrote:

...


想说点什么 算了

orioncomet wrote:

NO KD on this post

I just want to tell you that you forgot to add TAG: Indian

Leorda wrote:

NI HAO!!

[Easy]
00:18:281 (1,1,1) - No new combo
00:25:886 (1,1,1,1) - ^
00:37:928 (1) - ^
00:39:619 (1) - ^
00:41:309 (1) - ^
00:42:999 (1) - ^
00:45:323 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - ^
01:06:661 (1) - ^
01:08:351 (1) - ^
01:10:041 (1) - ^
01:11:731 (1) - ^
01:26:943 (1) - ^
01:28:633 (1) - ^
01:32:013 (1) - ^
01:34:355 (1,1,1) - ^
01:37:735 (1,1,1) - ^
02:05:833 (1) - ^
02:07:524 (1) - ^
02:09:214 (1) - ^
02:10:904 (1) - ^

[Normal]
00:39:196 (x) - Add note?
00:40:886 (x) - ^
00:42:576 (x) - ^
01:07:928 (x) - ^
01:09:619 (x) - ^
01:11:309 (x) - ^
01:28:210 (x) - ^
01:29:900 (x) - ^
01:31:590 (x) - ^

[Insane]
00:22:717 (1,2,3,4) - Make a diamond pattern?
00:29:478 (1,2,3,4) - ^

Good song
STAR

Lizbeth wrote:

Insane
00:19:548 (5) - this is wrong spaced, is to far from 4
01:35:411 (8) - is to close to 5
01:38:791 (8) - to close to 7, check the space between 01:37:946 (4,5), it should be like this cuz are in the same combo
01:47:876 (3) - compared to the rest of the map, this is to close to prev
01:52:946 (2) - same
01:54:636 (2) - ^
the same goes to all the 1/2 beats that you place the circle like thsi one: 01:55:481 (1,2)
Remember that space must be proportional with time line.
or you could add new combo at:
01:56:538 (6)
01:58:228 (6)
01:59:918 (6)
02:01:608 (6) -
notice that 01:55:481 (1,2,3,4,5) and 01:56:538 (6,7,8) have different space between so the best thing is to place it in different combos

H-boy's hard
resnap all notes please

Normal
ok, but no jumps on normal diff please
examples (there are more, check with AI Mod: shift+Ctrl+A
00:39:407 (5)
00:41:309 (1)

Easy
You have a lot problems with distance here
This could be useful for you

• • Sometimes spacing is partially wrong. Keep "Distance Snap" active and recheck it.

• • 01:05:605 (x) - Add a circle
  • 01:06:027 (x) - ^
  • 02:04:777 (x) - ^
  • 02:05:200 (x) - ^

• • There are a lot of strange sliders (like 00:51:238 (1), 00:54:619 (1) or 00:57:154 (1)) Are they necessary? I hope not D: I suggest you to make something different

xxheroxx wrote:

[General]

• • Sometimes spacing is partially wrong. Keep "Distance Snap" active and recheck it.

[Easy]

• • 01:05:605 (x) - Add a circle
  • 01:06:027 (x) - ^
  • 02:04:777 (x) - ^
  • 02:05:200 (x) - ^

[Normal]

• • There are a lot of strange sliders (like 00:51:238 (1), 00:54:619 (1) or 00:57:154 (1)) Are they necessary? I hope not D: I suggest you to make something different

kino77 wrote:

Hi~
好神奇的图也~貌似第一次见到印度歌~

[Normal]
01:06:661 (1) - 1,2,3这么放的话,4,5的间距会不对也...New combo 或者改间距吧~
01:08:351 (1) - ^
01:10:041 (1) - ^
01:26:520 - Add note?
01:26:943 (1) - 从这里起间距有些轻微的不统一
01:28:421 (5) - 建议不要重合5和下个1
02:02:876 (2) - Spacing?
02:05:622 (1) - 为什么在这里缩小间距呢?

[Hard]
01:26:520 (1) - Start here 01:26:731,and add note 01:26:520?

其他没有问题了~
星星~

xBubu wrote:

all fixed!
感謝kino哥指導

kino77 wrote:

xBubu wrote:

all fixed!
感謝kino哥指導

我...我...我...是女生诶...

kino77 wrote:

xBubu wrote:

all fixed!
感謝kino哥指導

我...我...我...是女生诶...

Shulin wrote:

General:

-- Delete "The Best Of Daler Mehndi The King Of Bhangra" from source and put it in tags.
-- BPM 141.95 (delete the other timing sections) - as always though get a second opinion ^_^
-- Delete .osb and full submit.

Easy:

-- +2 OD, +2 HP drain. It's impossible to fail right now.

00:52:928 (1) - Confusing overlap for easy, end return is too hard to see.
01:06:027 (2,1) - Spacing. No jumps on Easy please.
01:30:323 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:41:960 (1) - ^
01:42:805 (1) - ^

Also I'm not so sure about the x0.5 and x1 sections in an Easy, it might confuse some.

H-boy's Hard:

01:28:421 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:29:900 (2) - New combo.
01:30:112 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:31:590 (2) - New combo.
01:31:802 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:11:538 -- This extra non inherited timing section is not needed (especially since it's the end of the map).

Normal:

00:37:717 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:40:481 (1) - Respace this without x0.5
01:42:805 (6) - Move this so it's at the end of the slider? Overlap looks bad imo.
02:04:777 (6) - End this return early (Remove two returns) and add a beat at 02:05:411?

Insane:

01:51:256 (1,1,2) - Slow down to speed up is confusing, imo make the slider velocity the same for this part.
02:03:932 (1) - Weird x2 section here.
02:04:777 (3,4) - ^
02:05:200 (4,5) - Spacing.
02:05:833 (5) - New combo.
02:05:833 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Too clustered, the kiai makes it hard to see the notes.
02:05:833 to 02:11:643 -- the spacing is all too close here, respace imo.
02:07:524 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Cluster.
02:09:214 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - ^

The spacing changes quite rapidly on this difficulty and that's because you use x0.5, x1 and x2.0 frequently making the spacing erratic. Please go through and recheck your spacing particularly for this difficulty.

The maps were pretty good overall, I love the hitcircle and the song and video made me lol.
~ Star.

pieguy1372 wrote:

Easy:

-The spacing and slider velocity seem a bit high for an Easy. Perhaps you could decrease them a bit?

00:51:250 (1,1) - Remove some of those whistles
01:39:436 (4) - Move left one level 3 grid square
01:41:972 (2) - Too close to (1)
01:42:818 (1) - Too close to (2)
01:58:034 (1,1,1,1) - These would probably look nicer if you made them symmetrical (by turning of grid snap and adjusting the slider points).

Normal:

-This has a higher star difficulty rating than H-boy's Hard. Try fixing it by either decreasing the overall difficulty or drain rate in this difficulty or increasing the drain rate in H-boy's Hard.

01:38:168 (4) - Align with (3)

H-boy's Hard: No problems

Insane:

-I would recommend replacing the 2x sliders with something else. They don't seem to fit with the song or the rest of the beatmap.

01:33:730 (2,3,4) - Move right one level 3 grid square
01:37:111 (2,3,4) - Move left one level 3 grid square
01:44:297 (4,5) - Move down one level 3 grid square
01:45:565 (1,2,3,4) - Inconsistent spacing
01:47:045 (1) - Too close to (4)
01:49:581 (4) - Move right one level 3 grid square
01:52:962 (2) - Too close to (1)
01:54:653 (2) - Too close to (1)
02:04:586 (2) - Too close to (1)

Nice work. *star*

Chacha17 wrote:

General

Add H-Boy to the tags since he made a difficulty for you :3
Daler Mehndi - Ho Jayegi Balle Balle (xBubu).osb - kill that and fully submit this map
Damn I love the skin, song, map, video and BG <3

Easy
Slider's are too fast here but it would be a pain in the ass to re-snap all those sliders.
Woah. nothing i can nazi or point out.

Normal
00:17:858 (2) - move one grid right
00:18:281 (3) - ^
00:18:281 (3) - ^
00:19:126 (5) - move one grid up
00:26:312 (5) - ^
00:54:632 (3) - add another repeat and add finish to the slider's end point
01:39:014 (6) - move one grid left and down
01:39:436 (7) - horizontally align this to 01:38:591 (5)
01:54:653 (2,1) - don't overlap these two beats

H-boy's Hard
02:11:493 (4) - this beat is not snapped properly on the timeline. Snap it and fix the spacing.

Insane
00:46:178 (1) - horizontally align this beat to 00:45:755 (8)
00:57:590 (5) - this slider is not perfectly placed beneath the previous slider's end point. Turn off grid snap and set distance snap multiplier to 0.0x and resnap that one
01:00:972 (5) - ^
01:02:663 (3) - ^
01:06:044 (3) - ^
01:08:158 (2) - remove whistle and replace with finish
01:09:848 (2) - ^
01:11:539 (2) - ^
The same for the other patterns like this.
01:41:127 (2) - this slider is not perfectly placed beneath the previous slider's end point. Turn off grid snap and set distance snap multiplier to 0.0x and resnap that one

Here you go :3

1. BPM: 141.92 (yours feels a little early)
2. For the tags, I think you will only need "H-Boy Indian Bhangra" in there. I don't think that "The Best Of" or "The King Of" is needed.

Kurai_ wrote:

Hi~

[easy]
Nothing

[Normal]
01:55:498 (1) - too far to the end of 01:54:653 (2) Fixed

[H-boy's Hard]
Nothing

[Insane]
02:04:586 (2) - Bad spacing I don't think so... sorry
02:04:797 (3) - ^

Fun and good map, star ~

Doomsday93 wrote:

Hey

Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to.
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these.
Red = major issues. you need to change these.

1. BPM: 141.92 (yours feels a little early)
2. For the tags, I think you will only need "H-Boy Indian Bhangra" in there. I don't think that "The Best Of" or "The King Of" is needed.

[EASY]

The layout can be a bit boring at times, but it seems fine (Finally, someone else made an easy that really is an easy )

[NORMAL]

01:54:653 (2) - Remove one of the repeats on this slider? (If you do this, I would put a beat on the start of this slider, at 01:55:287)

[H-BOY'S HARD]

Good good

[INSANE]

01:50:320 (x) - This speedup her caught me by surprise, since the song doesn't speed up or anything here. I think the speedup would fit better at 01:55:393 personally.

Not too bad. the layout of the maps can be boring at times, but its functional, and Insane was pretty fun at times actually

Starred

YGOkid8 wrote:

General:
- Delete the extra space between "Indian" and "Bhangra" in the Tags.

Easy:

Combo Mod~
00:47:876 (5) - New Combo

Normal:
- With the low OD, the "chorus" is pretty hard to read.
- Some parts are Normal, some parts are too hard for a Normal... I dunno about this diff...

H-boy's hard:
- Capitalize "H" in "hard"
- For me, this diff. was strangely easier than Normal. Probably because it was easier to read, and wasn't so crowded

Insane:
Fine.

ignorethis wrote:

<Easy>

02:10:530 (1) - Overlapped

Others seems fine. Star'd

xipan wrote:

不知不觉 波波已经那么厉害了
大致看了一遍 做得不错

不过这歌我打不了几次
怎么说呢 整首歌起伏不是很大 太平

恶搞程度的话 喜感不够

Starrodkirby86 wrote:

This is an interesting map. XD I love the Daler Mehndi skin.

My biggest concern is how...there's some parts of the map that's notably hard than the rest.

In [Easy], it's 01:06:056 (2) - . That's not really bad; I guess it makes good practice for learning how to do repeat sliders. It might be confusing, though.

In [Normal], it's around the same area...01:06:478 (2) - . Over here though...It's much harder than it should be. ;S Let's compare that with an easy part like...01:33:537 (1) - . It really makes for something odd. O.o

It almost feels like [Normal] is as hard or even harder than H-Boy's...

Perhaps we should talk about what we can do about this.

Other than that, the rest of the difficulties are good, and I really like the Storyboard.