Kagamine Ren wrote:

[General]

1. 你写了SB by ar3 就把ar3放进TAG好

[Easy]

1. 00:09:107 - 加个note，为了clap.-.前面那一个clap好孤单easy嘛节奏尽量弄空了点
2. 00:14:688 - ^
3. 03:03:525 - ^
4. 03:09:107 - ^
5. 01:08:235 - 这么长应该break的吧vocal这里还有呢 没break了
6. 02:12:421 - ^
7. 02:58:467 - ^

[Normal]

1. 01:26:200 (4,1) - 不要碰到吧嘛...
2. 01:33:176 (1,5) - ^
3. 02:03:874 (1,5) - ^

[Hard]

1. 01:27:072 (7) - 这个为何不clap，前面一样的地方clap的有道理 加了

[Mystery]

1. 02:25:677 (6) - 放在239,62左右好看，02:25:851 (7) - ctrl+G，然后02:26:200 (1) - 对应移个位置，比如
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2. 01:48:526 (5) - 这往左一点，跟左边两个overlap程度一样吧
3. 02:28:118 (4,1) - stack (凑好 有道理

混kd

JJburstOwO wrote:

[Mystery]
00:56:723 - 空着不爽
02:00:909 - ^
01:40:502 (2) - Ctrl+G 因为你上一组也是反过来的
02:12:421 (2) - 跳小了点，叠在后边的5上面不错
02:33:525 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - 上面AR3说的那样跳
03:02:304 (5) - Ctrl+G

[Hard]
可以用AR8
02:45:211 - 空着不爽..
02:46:956 - ^

让我偷偷懒，就这样吧_(:з」∠)_

Regraz wrote:

As requested.
-【General】-
我总觉得这个曲子和其他ll曲子曲风有很大不同，诡异风格。
摸了一半突然更新，提了
-【Easy】-
Why use tick rate 2?
00:32:828 (3,4,1) - 正三角一下？http://puu.sh/fQP9r/61dcf3e520.jpg
00:58:293 (2,3,4) - 也3/2吧
后面的大致和这个都差不多

-【Normal】-
00:06:665 (1,2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/fQPOT/da74d6f375.jpg
00:42:770 (1) - 转盘尾巴加个音效这里
01:06:665 (4,5) - blanket
02:10:851 (4,5) - ^
02:35:967 (1,1) - 叠好

-【Hard】-
00:25:502 (8) - 折返加Clap
00:49:049 挺违和的 加一个note吧
00:55:502 (5,6) - 1/1滑条。没vocal放两个note有点多余，一个滑条带过多好。
01:00:386 (4,5,6) - 建议用和 00:59:688 (1,2,3) - 一样的节奏。 vocal的分布相似。
01:01:084 (6,7) - 1/1滑条
01:01:956 这个音还是不要漏比较好
01:14:688 加一个note带Clap
01:47:304 加一个note？不然01:46:956 (1,2) - 之间隔了一排半，怪怪的。
01:49:223 (5) - 怎么从这里开始开始放三连了？
01:55:415 (10) - 这个感觉三连加的有点勉强
02:20:618 (1,2,3) - 听音应该是12变成滑条，3变成两个单点吧。。。
02:41:374 加一个note
02:44:339 (1,2,3) - 跟vocal感觉好一些
02:50:444 加一个note

-【Mystery】-
00:19:223 (1) - 有点出界，还是别冒险比较好
01:10:851 (1,2) - 布兰凯特
01:44:339 (1,2,3) - antijump或者三角？
02:00:909 加一个note？
02:37:363 (1,2,3,4) - 旋转百分之八度顺逆皆可
03:02:828 (6,7) - blanket

每水一次摸我的良心就受到了一次谴责，哭哭

No Dap wrote:

sorry for late, but here I am :3
[General]

1. 02:36:490 - this would be a better place to end your kiai imo. since this is where the sound actually ends
   02:37:886 - same as above

[Mystery]

1. 00:17:130 (1) - consider 5% volume on the tail. it's too loud
2. 00:18:874 (4,5,1) - I think something like this would flow better with the circular flow you have nextchanged here in my way
   
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3. 00:42:072 (4) - combo difference 01:46:258 (1) -
4. 03:13:118 (5) - adding NC here would create a better effect imo

[Hard]

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  Tari wrote:

  Could you increase the drain and OD on Hard to 6?

1. consider HP5 since your combos are really really long.decreased to 5.5
2. 00:44:339 - I would add a circle here instead of slider reverse. would work better with the cymbal crash. same goes to 01:48:525 -
3. 00:45:037 (6) - funny how you have this here and not in insanewant to mostly follow drum sound in Insane diff .-.
4. 00:49:049 - leaving here empty while the vocal and guitar is still on-going really makes things awkward to play. please add a note
5. 01:47:304 - add a circle here. it's not intuitive to play and also inconsistent with 00:43:118 (2) -
6. 02:24:804 (1) - this isn't a very fitting sound for a spinner. also having this 02:26:200 (1) - at the top makes things hard.
   either map the spinner, or move the next circles more closer to the center.
7. 02:41:374 - you should really map this vocalempty to stress the start of the kiai part
8. 03:11:549 (7,8,9,10) - this is really awkward to play because you ignored this 03:11:636 - and had a triple. I recommend thisfine...
   
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[Normal]

1. 00:51:316 (1,2) - this would work better with the guitar and vocal imo. also lets you map the clapnope...i just want to follow vocal here.-.
   
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2. 01:55:502 (1,2) - same here. well you copy pasted^

[Easy]

1. 00:12:770 -
   01:16:956 - why would you not map this "hey" it's really heavy3/2 gap will be hard for new players imo

I think that's about it.

since Tari modded it, I guess ask him for recheck.

good luck~