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lily white - Binetsu kara Mystery

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ZZHBOY
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年2月17日 at 2:20:59

Artist: lily white
Title: Binetsu kara Mystery
Source: Love Live! School idol project
Tags: 園田海未 sonoda umi 三森すずこ mimori suzuko 星空凛 hoshizora rin 飯田里穂 iida riho 東條希 toujou nozomi 楠田亜衣奈 kusuda aina u's μ's ラブライブ！ [CSGA]Ar3sgice
BPM: 172
Filesize: 6868kb
Play Time: 03:14
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.61 stars, 223 notes)
  2. Hard (3.36 stars, 530 notes)
  3. Mystery (4.6 stars, 668 notes)
  4. Normal (2.18 stars, 347 notes)
Download: lily white - Binetsu kara Mystery
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Narcissu
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Joined August 2012
Narcissu
tickrate 用1 ，至少低難度必須用1

兩個低難度的hp降到od以下

最高難度AR9 ，OD 7~8

hard 難度AR 7~8 ，OD6…… 你按難度排序看看附近的AR吧 …… 而且全程ds 對長圖來說是很無聊的，更何況你几乎沒有設置休息，從頭到尾波瀾不驚跟石頭一樣……我建議你找個gd

4/4 的曲目應該用四色

[insane]

00:20:618 - 00:21:316 - 這些位置也可以用上normal-hitnormal ，反正你kiai加音量了

[ Setsuna ]
422 posts
Joined October 2013
[ Setsuna ]
Maybe fix "lily white" to "Lily White"?
ZZHBOY
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Topic Starter
ZZHBOY

[ Setsuna ] wrote:

Maybe fix "lily white" to "Lily White"?
maybe lily white is write due to the words on the bg x.x
EncoreW
833 posts
Joined June 2013
EncoreW
[Mystery]


BPM172 AR8 OD6 4.09的难度搭配起来似乎不是太好。。是我的话我直接就AR9 OD7了

00:08:758 (3) - ctrl+G？

00:43:990 (3) - NC？顺便00:43:293 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - 这三组用1.0 1.5 2.0的DS不是挺好的

00:57:421 (3) - 看上去似乎可以再弯一点，弧度再大一点

01:47:479 (2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - wocao原来是这样摆的

02:35:967 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这两组直接拉过去有点太没诚意。。转点角度变个DS都不错




其他难度看不出啥东西
EncoreW
833 posts
Joined June 2013
EncoreW
你个aji种种花为什么还不把倒计时去掉
AIR
1,577 posts
Joined November 2012
AIR
[Easy]
  1. 01:18:874 (3) - clap
  2. 02:21:316 (9) - 02:26:200 (17) - NC
[Normal]
  1. 00:07:014 - 咋不拆
  2. 00:31:084 (6,7) - 这个在跟啥
  3. 02:53:409 - 漏了？
[Hard]
  1. 00:12:770 (2,3) - 调次序
  2. 00:43:118 - 圈
  3. 00:47:130 (5,6) - 合一个条吧
  4. 03:03:874 (8) - NC
    1/4都跑后两个kiai了，跟歌词跟鼓点的有点乱
[Mystery]
  1. 00:17:130 (1) - 上扬好些
  2. 00:17:828 (1,2) - 距离远了点，2和3拉开比较顺手
  3. 没了
好听，东舰L！
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
4,298 posts
Joined July 2011
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
mystery
00:53:235 (3,4) - 这两个我觉得应该换一下 先半拍滑条 再接note
01:21:490 (1,2,3) - 这个3不要放滑条, 单点然后把01:21:838 - 空出来挺好的
02:15:386 (3,4,5) - 这里可以这样嘛 34叠一起 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2724917
02:33:525 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - 那样跳不合理啊 放回旋跳多好 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2724925

hard
00:12:770 (2,3) - 放长滑条吧
03:03:874 (8) - newcombo掉了
03:13:467 (1) - ctrl+g啊

normal
01:10:153 (4) - 这个往下一点比较好 不然看起来好像和后面挺近一样
02:10:851 (4) - blanket

easy
02:17:828 (5) - newcombo这后面一串都掉了

反正这个有lrc 要不要我做个歌词 效果大概像这样 https://osu.ppy.sh/s/279051
ZZHBOY
1,649 posts
Joined April 2012
Topic Starter
ZZHBOY

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

反正这个有lrc 要不要我做个歌词 效果大概像这样 https://osu.ppy.sh/s/279051
这个可以有.-.
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
4,298 posts
Joined July 2011
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1bnewaZH 密码rbca
Konge
238 posts
Joined November 2012
Konge
水摸
[Genaral]
HardAR OD再高点,OD太低DT了也没pp
Easy Normal OD HP-1
Count down关了吧
[Mystery]
00:13:467 (1) - 丑
00:17:130 (1) - 我觉得改成一个Note比较好
00:28:467 - 跟人声比较好吧,加Note,空着打着很奇怪
00:30:211 (4,1) - 稍微近一点
00:34:397 (3) - 间距弄一下
00:34:921 (2,1) - 有点远
01:47:479 (2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - 不好看也不好打,还是随机跳吧
02:19:223 (1,2) - 为啥不弄个对称
02:34:397 (7,1) - 这俩再拉开一点
02:34:921 - 这里加一个低速折返如何
02:51:839 - 漏一个音怪怪的
02:58:293 (1,2,3,4) - 这块比较高昂，跳大一些？
03:01:432 (2) - Blanket
03:02:828 (6,7) - ^
03:12:246 (1,2,3,4) - 不好看
[Hard]
00:49:223 (2) - 第一pc按快半拍,感觉不妥
01:58:990 (4,5,6) - Hard放这种梗好吗
02:40:851 (4,5,6) - ^
没啥说的,挺好
EN不会摸
美丽;_;
EDIT:求mu;_;
Sakaue Nachi
558 posts
Joined September 2012
Sakaue Nachi
02:33:525 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - 这里来个大回环的梗怎样，突然想到的233，感觉可以还原一下 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2725323
ZZHBOY
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ZZHBOY
sn

Sakaue Nachi wrote:

02:33:525 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - 这里来个大回环的梗怎样，突然想到的233，感觉可以还原一下https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2725323

看最下面的图
air

AIR wrote:

[Easy]
  1. 01:18:874 (3) - clap
  2. 02:21:316 (9) - 02:26:200 (17) - NC
[Normal]
  1. 00:07:014 - 咋不拆懒
  2. 00:31:084 (6,7) - 这个在跟啥
  3. 02:53:409 - 漏了？
[Hard]
  1. 00:12:770 (2,3) - 调次序
  2. 00:43:118 - 圈
  3. 00:47:130 (5,6) - 合一个条吧不拉
  4. 03:03:874 (8) - NC
    1/4都跑后两个kiai了，跟歌词跟鼓点的有点乱
[Mystery]
  1. 00:17:130 (1) - 上扬好些
  2. 00:17:828 (1,2) - 距离远了点，2和3拉开比较顺手
  3. 没了
好听，东舰L！
ar3

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

mystery
00:53:235 (3,4) - 这两个我觉得应该换一下 先半拍滑条 再接note好
01:21:490 (1,2,3) - 这个3不要放滑条, 单点然后把01:21:838 - 空出来挺好的
02:15:386 (3,4,5) - 这里可以这样嘛 34叠一起 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2724917
02:33:525 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - 那样跳不合理啊 放回旋跳多好 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2724925

hard
00:12:770 (2,3) - 放长滑条吧不拉
03:03:874 (8) - newcombo掉了
03:13:467 (1) - ctrl+g啊

normal
01:10:153 (4) - 这个往下一点比较好 不然看起来好像和后面挺近一样
02:10:851 (4) - blanket

easy
02:17:828 (5) - newcombo这后面一串都掉了

反正这个有lrc 要不要我做个歌词 效果大概像这样 https://osu.ppy.sh/s/279051
tm1209

tm1209 wrote:

[Mystery]


BPM172 AR8 OD6 4.09的难度搭配起来似乎不是太好。。是我的话我直接就AR9 OD7了

00:08:758 (3) - ctrl+G？bule...

00:43:990 (3) - NC？顺便00:43:293 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - 这三组用1.0 1.5 2.0的DS不是挺好的去掉了这里的几个nc..

00:57:421 (3) - 看上去似乎可以再弯一点，弧度再大一点不妥

01:47:479 (2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - wocao原来是这样摆的

02:35:967 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这两组直接拉过去有点太没诚意。。转点角度变个DS都不错...




其他难度看不出啥东西
23kong

23konG wrote:

水摸
[Genaral]
HardAR OD再高点,OD太低DT了也没pp触手
Easy Normal OD HP-1先不动了,,,,
Count down关了吧好
[Mystery]
00:13:467 (1) - 丑跟音乐啊
00:17:130 (1) - 我觉得改成一个Note比较好不好..
00:28:467 - 跟人声比较好吧,加Note,空着打着很奇怪不想跟vocal...
00:30:211 (4,1) - 稍微近一点间距这里我自己打都ok 后面也是
00:34:397 (3) - 间距弄一下
00:34:921 (2,1) - 有点远
01:47:479 (2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - 不好看也不好打,还是随机跳吧
02:19:223 (1,2) - 为啥不弄个对称这样好打啊
02:34:397 (7,1) - 这俩再拉开一点
02:34:921 - 这里加一个低速折返如何想空着..
02:51:839 - 漏一个音怪怪的没把
02:58:293 (1,2,3,4) - 这块比较高昂，跳大一些？改排列了
03:01:432 (2) - Blanket
03:02:828 (6,7) - ^
03:12:246 (1,2,3,4) - 不好看好打嘛
[Hard]
00:49:223 (2) - 第一pc按快半拍,感觉不妥
01:58:990 (4,5,6) - Hard放这种梗好吗
02:40:851 (4,5,6) - ^
没啥说的,挺好
EN不会摸
美丽;_;
EDIT:求mu;_;

no reply = fixed
aju
Karen
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Karen
占位poi
Flower
1,723 posts
Joined August 2011
Flower
Did a brief irc mod

SPOILER
2015-02-12 19:27 Flower: 等下
2015-02-12 19:27 ZZHBOY: hao
2015-02-12 19:30 Flower: insane
2015-02-12 19:30 Flower: 00:39:456 (1,2,3) - nromal sample?
2015-02-12 19:31 ZZHBOY: 好
2015-02-12 19:31 Flower: 01:21:490 (1,2) - ^
2015-02-12 19:31 ZZHBOY: 好
2015-02-12 19:35 Flower: 01:43:642 (3,4,5) - 01:43:642 (3,4,5) - 02:00:560 - 02:00:647 - 02:19:921 (3,4) - 这几个，总之斟酌一下吧，不一定都接受
2015-02-12 19:36 Flower: 02:25:502 (5,6) - 加drum finish？我瞎猜的
2015-02-12 19:36 ZZHBOY: 我带二鸡挺像子啊
2015-02-12 19:36 ZZHBOY: 带耳机听下*&
2015-02-12 19:36 Flower: 。
2015-02-12 19:37 Flower: 我推下e4
2015-02-12 19:37 ZZHBOY: 好 都加了 不然三连都打空气了
2015-02-12 19:38 Flower: 01:48:525 (5) - 我建议放远点，或者和前面三个组成正方形，有点感觉
2015-02-12 19:39 ZZHBOY: 有道理
2015-02-12 19:39 ZZHBOY: 搞镇方向了
2015-02-12 19:39 ZZHBOY: 正方形
2015-02-12 19:41 Flower: hard
2015-02-12 19:41 ZZHBOY: en
2015-02-12 19:42 Flower: 01:48:525 (5) - clap
2015-02-12 19:42 ZZHBOY: 好
2015-02-12 19:43 ZZHBOY: 好像insane也要加我把加上了
2015-02-12 19:43 Flower: 部队，我搞错了好像
2015-02-12 19:43 Flower: 不是这个
2015-02-12 19:43 Flower: 00:13:293 (3) -
2015-02-12 19:43 Flower: 这个
2015-02-12 19:44 ZZHBOY: ...
2015-02-12 19:44 Flower: 怎么你hard音量这么小
2015-02-12 19:44 ZZHBOY: 好像是
2015-02-12 19:44 Flower: 增大吧
2015-02-12 19:45 ZZHBOY: 嗯
2015-02-12 19:45 ZZHBOY: 我把其他的音量都和I弄一样好了
2015-02-12 19:45 Flower: 好
2015-02-12 19:49 Flower: cao 舰娘上不去了
2015-02-12 19:49 ZZHBOY: gau v[ma
2015-02-12 19:49 ZZHBOY: vpn
2015-02-12 19:49 Flower: 。
2015-02-12 19:49 ZZHBOY: 哦不对你本来就
2015-02-12 19:49 Flower: sapiens
2015-02-12 19:49 Flower: 等下我挂个vpn
2015-02-12 19:52 Flower: normal没啥问题
2015-02-12 19:52 ZZHBOY: hao
2015-02-12 19:55 Flower: 没了，好了叫我
2015-02-12 19:55 ZZHBOY: 好 我传下 穿好和你熟
2015-02-12 19:55 ZZHBOY: o
2015-02-12 19:55 ZZHBOY: 说
2015-02-12 19:56 ZZHBOY: 你更新下看看
2015-02-12 19:56 Flower: dengxia 我跟粉心说两句
2015-02-12 19:57 ZZHBOY: 好
2015-02-12 19:57 ZZHBOY: 话说你看看01:49:223 - 这里的clap是否应该加我不太确定
2015-02-12 20:03 Flower: 我觉得不加就可以把
2015-02-12 20:03 ZZHBOY: 唔
2015-02-12 20:03 ZZHBOY: 那我去掉再传下
2015-02-12 20:04 Flower: 好

Find a couple of mods and call me back. Good luck!
GGFFQQ55
121 posts
Joined March 2013
GGFFQQ55
来摸啦

Mystery

  1. letter box during breaks 可以关掉吧？
  2. 有些跳的间距不太统一。。。
  3. 00:18:351 (2,3,4,5) - 这里空拍有点坑，顺便前后间距可以统一一下
  4. 00:19:921 (3,4,5) - 这里间距完全可以统一的吧
  5. 00:26:897 (3,4,5,6,1) - 这里跳的太乱了，稍微整理一下比较好
  6. 00:40:153 (1,2,3) - 摆个正三角形不好么。。。
  7. 01:08:060 (1,2,3) - 摆成等腰三角形比较好看吧
剩下不多书了，都是差不多的问题感觉

Hard

  1. 感觉hard还是偏难了点，spread稍有点问题
  2. 00:09:979 (2,3,4) - Hard的话间距还是统一比较好
  3. 01:20:444 (4,5) - 前面都没有stack。。。这里突然stack还是有点奇怪
  4. 01:49:746 (6,7,1) - 这里以及后面的三连可以酌情删掉一些，毕竟在此之前都完全没有三连
Normal

  1. 01:03:525 (3,4) - blanket?
  2. 02:02:479 (4,1) - 这里的flow有点不好，试试把4左右翻一下方向
  3. 02:08:060 (4) - blanket？
大概这样，good luck
G S X
88 posts
Joined August 2012
G S X
irc
2015-02-12 17:32 judgment light: irc mod如何
2015-02-12 17:32 judgment light: 实在凑数无能。。
2015-02-12 17:33 ZZHBOY: 这个不错
2015-02-12 17:33 judgment light: 00:12:246 (1,3) -
2015-02-12 17:33 judgment light: 00:15:037 (1,2) -
2015-02-12 17:33 judgment light: 这些滑条头试试加点音效？
2015-02-12 17:33 judgment light: 比如哨声
2015-02-12 17:34 ZZHBOY: 00:12:246 - 加finish了
2015-02-12 17:34 ZZHBOY: 其他没加不然听着乱,..
2015-02-12 17:34 ZZHBOY: 我顺便把其他diff这里也加了
2015-02-12 17:35 judgment light: 00:19:746 (2,3,4) - 这三个打的时候被坑..感觉间距不太合适 要么就空拍 要么就间距弄好点
2015-02-12 17:35 judgment light: 现在这样也不算特别美观
2015-02-12 17:35 judgment light: 嗯
2015-02-12 17:35 ZZHBOY: 这里故意的...
2015-02-12 17:36 judgment light: 反正我打起来觉得不太好
2015-02-12 17:36 judgment light: 这图怎么打起来这么飞球风
2015-02-12 17:36 ZZHBOY: 我考...
2015-02-12 17:37 judgment light: 还真没什么好挑的啊这种跳图..
2015-02-12 17:38 ZZHBOY: 对,,,
2015-02-12 17:38 judgment light: 01:16:432 (1) -
2015-02-12 17:39 judgment light: 这个滑条头也加个finish吧
2015-02-12 17:39 judgment light: 01:18:177 (2) -
2015-02-12 17:39 judgment light: 漏了clap
2015-02-12 17:39 ZZHBOY: 好
2015-02-12 17:40 judgment light: 01:18:525 (3) - 这个也漏了
2015-02-12 17:40 judgment light: 大概也只能挑这类错误了..
2015-02-12 17:42 judgment light: 01:58:990 (3,4,5) - 00:54:979 (5,6,7) - 诸如这类
2015-02-12 17:42 judgment light: 试一下用normal音
2015-02-12 17:43 ZZHBOY: 好
2015-02-12 17:43 ZZHBOY: 加了
2015-02-12 17:44 judgment light: 02:41:113 (2,3) - 还有前面的滑条尾巴也换normal音？
2015-02-12 17:45 ZZHBOY: 唔 这个还是先不加 不然打着奇怪...
2015-02-12 17:45 ZZHBOY: 明明没按的地方有个强音效
2015-02-12 17:45 ZZHBOY: 你掉线惹
2015-02-12 17:45 judgment light: 输入法离奇卡死。。
2015-02-12 17:46 judgment light: 我再看看还有没有别的遗漏之类的
2015-02-12 17:46 ZZHBOY: 好
2015-02-12 17:47 judgment light: 02:45:037 (4) - 你看看加一个finish效果如何
2015-02-12 17:47 ZZHBOY: 加了
2015-02-12 17:47 judgment light: 02:54:804 (4) - 这里为什么突然换成了normal..
2015-02-12 17:48 judgment light: 感觉这个可以去掉
2015-02-12 17:49 ZZHBOY: 因为最后一段了嘛音效弄激情一些=.=
2015-02-12 17:49 ZZHBOY: 我也是瞎加的orz
2015-02-12 17:49 judgment light: 03:00:037 (2) - 那就这个头和尾都加个finish
2015-02-12 17:49 judgment light: 感觉效果不错
2015-02-12 17:49 judgment light: orz感觉那个normal可以去掉
2015-02-12 17:50 ZZHBOY: 有道理
2015-02-12 17:50 ZZHBOY: normal先放哪吧我把finish加了
2015-02-12 17:50 judgment light: 嗯
2015-02-12 17:50 judgment light: 03:06:665 (1) - 还有这个finish..
2015-02-12 17:51 judgment light: 然后没惹orz
2015-02-12 17:52 ZZHBOY: 好
ZZHBOY
1,649 posts
Joined April 2012
Topic Starter
ZZHBOY

judgment light wrote:

irc
2015-02-12 17:32 judgment light: irc mod如何
2015-02-12 17:32 judgment light: 实在凑数无能。。
2015-02-12 17:33 ZZHBOY: 这个不错
2015-02-12 17:33 judgment light: 00:12:246 (1,3) -
2015-02-12 17:33 judgment light: 00:15:037 (1,2) -
2015-02-12 17:33 judgment light: 这些滑条头试试加点音效？
2015-02-12 17:33 judgment light: 比如哨声
2015-02-12 17:34 ZZHBOY: 00:12:246 - 加finish了
2015-02-12 17:34 ZZHBOY: 其他没加不然听着乱,..
2015-02-12 17:34 ZZHBOY: 我顺便把其他diff这里也加了
2015-02-12 17:35 judgment light: 00:19:746 (2,3,4) - 这三个打的时候被坑..感觉间距不太合适 要么就空拍 要么就间距弄好点
2015-02-12 17:35 judgment light: 现在这样也不算特别美观
2015-02-12 17:35 judgment light: 嗯
2015-02-12 17:35 ZZHBOY: 这里故意的...
2015-02-12 17:36 judgment light: 反正我打起来觉得不太好
2015-02-12 17:36 judgment light: 这图怎么打起来这么飞球风
2015-02-12 17:36 ZZHBOY: 我考...
2015-02-12 17:37 judgment light: 还真没什么好挑的啊这种跳图..
2015-02-12 17:38 ZZHBOY: 对,,,
2015-02-12 17:38 judgment light: 01:16:432 (1) -
2015-02-12 17:39 judgment light: 这个滑条头也加个finish吧
2015-02-12 17:39 judgment light: 01:18:177 (2) -
2015-02-12 17:39 judgment light: 漏了clap
2015-02-12 17:39 ZZHBOY: 好
2015-02-12 17:40 judgment light: 01:18:525 (3) - 这个也漏了
2015-02-12 17:40 judgment light: 大概也只能挑这类错误了..
2015-02-12 17:42 judgment light: 01:58:990 (3,4,5) - 00:54:979 (5,6,7) - 诸如这类
2015-02-12 17:42 judgment light: 试一下用normal音
2015-02-12 17:43 ZZHBOY: 好
2015-02-12 17:43 ZZHBOY: 加了
2015-02-12 17:44 judgment light: 02:41:113 (2,3) - 还有前面的滑条尾巴也换normal音？
2015-02-12 17:45 ZZHBOY: 唔 这个还是先不加 不然打着奇怪...
2015-02-12 17:45 ZZHBOY: 明明没按的地方有个强音效
2015-02-12 17:45 ZZHBOY: 你掉线惹
2015-02-12 17:45 judgment light: 输入法离奇卡死。。
2015-02-12 17:46 judgment light: 我再看看还有没有别的遗漏之类的
2015-02-12 17:46 ZZHBOY: 好
2015-02-12 17:47 judgment light: 02:45:037 (4) - 你看看加一个finish效果如何
2015-02-12 17:47 ZZHBOY: 加了
2015-02-12 17:47 judgment light: 02:54:804 (4) - 这里为什么突然换成了normal..
2015-02-12 17:48 judgment light: 感觉这个可以去掉
2015-02-12 17:49 ZZHBOY: 因为最后一段了嘛音效弄激情一些=.=
2015-02-12 17:49 ZZHBOY: 我也是瞎加的orz
2015-02-12 17:49 judgment light: 03:00:037 (2) - 那就这个头和尾都加个finish
2015-02-12 17:49 judgment light: 感觉效果不错
2015-02-12 17:49 judgment light: orz感觉那个normal可以去掉
2015-02-12 17:50 ZZHBOY: 有道理
2015-02-12 17:50 ZZHBOY: normal先放哪吧我把finish加了
2015-02-12 17:50 judgment light: 嗯
2015-02-12 17:50 judgment light: 03:06:665 (1) - 还有这个finish..
2015-02-12 17:51 judgment light: 然后没惹orz
2015-02-12 17:52 ZZHBOY: 好

GGFFQQ55

GGFFQQ55 wrote:

来摸啦

Mystery

  1. letter box during breaks 可以关掉吧？不太清楚 我去问问
  2. 有些跳的间距不太统一。。。
  3. 00:18:351 (2,3,4,5) - 这里空拍有点坑，顺便前后间距可以统一一下
  4. 00:19:921 (3,4,5) - 这里间距完全可以统一的吧insane弄有趣一点嘛
  5. 00:26:897 (3,4,5,6,1) - 这里跳的太乱了，稍微整理一下比较好
  6. 00:40:153 (1,2,3) - 摆个正三角形不好么。。。
  7. 01:08:060 (1,2,3) - 摆成等腰三角形比较好看吧
剩下不多书了，都是差不多的问题感觉

Hard

  1. 感觉hard还是偏难了点，spread稍有点问题
  2. 00:09:979 (2,3,4) - Hard的话间距还是统一比较好有道理 改了
  3. 01:20:444 (4,5) - 前面都没有stack。。。这里突然stack还是有点奇怪移开了
  4. 01:49:746 (6,7,1) - 这里以及后面的三连可以酌情删掉一些，毕竟在此之前都完全没有三连
Normal

  1. 01:03:525 (3,4) - blanket?
  2. 02:02:479 (4,1) - 这里的flow有点不好，试试把4左右翻一下方向好
  3. 02:08:060 (4) - blanket？
大概这样，good luck

thx for mod .-.
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Karen
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Karen
[General]
  1. 你写了SB by ar3 就把ar3放进TAG

[Easy]
  1. 00:09:107 - 加个note，为了clap.-.前面那一个clap好孤单
  2. 00:14:688 - ^
  3. 03:03:525 - ^
  4. 03:09:107 - ^
  5. 01:08:235 - 这么长应该break的吧
  6. 02:12:421 - ^
  7. 02:58:467 - ^

[Normal]
  1. 01:26:200 (4,1) - 不要碰到吧
  2. 01:33:176 (1,5) - ^
  3. 02:03:874 (1,5) - ^

[Hard]
  1. 01:27:072 (7) - 这个为何不clap，前面一样的地方clap的

[Mystery]
  1. 02:25:677 (6) - 放在239,62左右好看，02:25:851 (7) - ctrl+G，然后02:26:200 (1) - 对应移个位置，比如
    SPOILER
  2. 01:48:526 (5) - 这往左一点，跟左边两个overlap程度一样吧
  3. 02:28:118 (4,1) - stack (凑
混kd
ZZHBOY
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Topic Starter
ZZHBOY
Kagamine Ren

Kagamine Ren wrote:

[General]
  1. 你写了SB by ar3 就把ar3放进TAG好

[Easy]
  1. 00:09:107 - 加个note，为了clap.-.前面那一个clap好孤单easy嘛节奏尽量弄空了点
  2. 00:14:688 - ^
  3. 03:03:525 - ^
  4. 03:09:107 - ^
  5. 01:08:235 - 这么长应该break的吧vocal这里还有呢 没break了
  6. 02:12:421 - ^
  7. 02:58:467 - ^

[Normal]
  1. 01:26:200 (4,1) - 不要碰到吧嘛...
  2. 01:33:176 (1,5) - ^
  3. 02:03:874 (1,5) - ^

[Hard]
  1. 01:27:072 (7) - 这个为何不clap，前面一样的地方clap的有道理 加了

[Mystery]
  1. 02:25:677 (6) - 放在239,62左右好看，02:25:851 (7) - ctrl+G，然后02:26:200 (1) - 对应移个位置，比如
    SPOILER
  2. 01:48:526 (5) - 这往左一点，跟左边两个overlap程度一样吧
  3. 02:28:118 (4,1) - stack (凑好 有道理
混kd

thx for mod :3
JJburstOwO
183 posts
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JJburstOwO
[Mystery]
00:56:723 - 空着不爽
02:00:909 - ^
01:40:502 (2) - Ctrl+G 因为你上一组也是反过来的
02:12:421 (2) - 跳小了点，叠在后边的5上面不错
02:33:525 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - 上面AR3说的那样跳
03:02:304 (5) - Ctrl+G

[Hard]
可以用AR8
02:45:211 - 空着不爽..
02:46:956 - ^

让我偷偷懒，就这样吧_(:з」∠)_
ZZHBOY
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ZZHBOY
JJburstOwO

JJburstOwO wrote:

[Mystery]
00:56:723 - 空着不爽
02:00:909 - ^
01:40:502 (2) - Ctrl+G 因为你上一组也是反过来的
02:12:421 (2) - 跳小了点，叠在后边的5上面不错
02:33:525 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - 上面AR3说的那样跳
03:02:304 (5) - Ctrl+G

[Hard]
可以用AR8
02:45:211 - 空着不爽..
02:46:956 - ^

让我偷偷懒，就这样吧_(:з」∠)_

fixed some, thx for mod :3
Karen
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Karen
wocao发错地方了，吗的
Mafumafu
Beatmap Nominator
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Mafumafu
As requested.
-【General】-
我总觉得这个曲子和其他ll曲子曲风有很大不同，诡异风格。
摸了一半突然更新，提了
-【Easy】-
Why use tick rate 2?
00:32:828 (3,4,1) - 正三角一下？http://puu.sh/fQP9r/61dcf3e520.jpg
00:58:293 (2,3,4) - 也3/2吧
后面的大致和这个都差不多

-【Normal】-
00:06:665 (1,2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/fQPOT/da74d6f375.jpg
00:42:770 (1) - 转盘尾巴加个音效这里
01:06:665 (4,5) - blanket
02:10:851 (4,5) - ^
02:35:967 (1,1) - 叠好

-【Hard】-
00:25:502 (8) - 折返加Clap
00:49:049 挺违和的 加一个note吧
00:55:502 (5,6) - 1/1滑条。没vocal放两个note有点多余，一个滑条带过多好。
01:00:386 (4,5,6) - 建议用和 00:59:688 (1,2,3) - 一样的节奏。 vocal的分布相似。
01:01:084 (6,7) - 1/1滑条
01:01:956 这个音还是不要漏比较好
01:14:688 加一个note带Clap
01:47:304 加一个note？不然01:46:956 (1,2) - 之间隔了一排半，怪怪的。
01:49:223 (5) - 怎么从这里开始开始放三连了？
01:55:415 (10) - 这个感觉三连加的有点勉强
02:20:618 (1,2,3) - 听音应该是12变成滑条，3变成两个单点吧。。。
02:41:374 加一个note
02:44:339 (1,2,3) - 跟vocal感觉好一些
02:50:444 加一个note

-【Mystery】-
00:19:223 (1) - 有点出界，还是别冒险比较好
01:10:851 (1,2) - 布兰凯特
01:44:339 (1,2,3) - antijump或者三角？
02:00:909 加一个note？
02:37:363 (1,2,3,4) - 旋转百分之八度顺逆皆可
03:02:828 (6,7) - blanket

每水一次摸我的良心就受到了一次谴责，哭哭
ZZHBOY
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Topic Starter
ZZHBOY
regraz

Regraz wrote:

As requested.
-【General】-
我总觉得这个曲子和其他ll曲子曲风有很大不同，诡异风格。
摸了一半突然更新，提了
-【Easy】-
Why use tick rate 2?
00:32:828 (3,4,1) - 正三角一下？http://puu.sh/fQP9r/61dcf3e520.jpg
00:58:293 (2,3,4) - 也3/2吧
后面的大致和这个都差不多

-【Normal】-
00:06:665 (1,2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/fQPOT/da74d6f375.jpg
00:42:770 (1) - 转盘尾巴加个音效这里
01:06:665 (4,5) - blanket
02:10:851 (4,5) - ^
02:35:967 (1,1) - 叠好

-【Hard】-
00:25:502 (8) - 折返加Clap
00:49:049 挺违和的 加一个note吧
00:55:502 (5,6) - 1/1滑条。没vocal放两个note有点多余，一个滑条带过多好。
01:00:386 (4,5,6) - 建议用和 00:59:688 (1,2,3) - 一样的节奏。 vocal的分布相似。
01:01:084 (6,7) - 1/1滑条
01:01:956 这个音还是不要漏比较好
01:14:688 加一个note带Clap
01:47:304 加一个note？不然01:46:956 (1,2) - 之间隔了一排半，怪怪的。
01:49:223 (5) - 怎么从这里开始开始放三连了？
01:55:415 (10) - 这个感觉三连加的有点勉强
02:20:618 (1,2,3) - 听音应该是12变成滑条，3变成两个单点吧。。。
02:41:374 加一个note
02:44:339 (1,2,3) - 跟vocal感觉好一些
02:50:444 加一个note

-【Mystery】-
00:19:223 (1) - 有点出界，还是别冒险比较好
01:10:851 (1,2) - 布兰凯特
01:44:339 (1,2,3) - antijump或者三角？
02:00:909 加一个note？
02:37:363 (1,2,3,4) - 旋转百分之八度顺逆皆可
03:02:828 (6,7) - blanket

每水一次摸我的良心就受到了一次谴责，哭哭
Fixed some thx for mod
Flower
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Flower
Looks good. Nominated.
ZZHBOY
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ZZHBOY

Flower wrote:

Looks good. Nominated.
升花
TtmnZk
Elite Mapper
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TtmnZk
泡了就不摸啦 XD
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
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[CSGA]Ar3sgice
两天没打回来看看就泡了, 这么快
Tari
osu! Alumni
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Joined July 2012
Tari
[General]

  1. Change source to Love Live! School idol project, currently the I and P in the title need to be lowercase. Official site has it like that. http://www.lovelive-anime.jp/
  2. You must add ラブライブ！ to the tags, as it is the Japanese name of the anime.
  3. All volume lines need to have 30%+ volume, they're too quiet right now. do same volumes as hard and insane, they fit more orz.

Slowly editing.... zzzZzz


Could you increase the drain and OD on Hard to 6?

Otherwise, maps are awesome. Good job man.
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ZZHBOY
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Topic Starter
ZZHBOY

Tari wrote:

[General]

  1. Change source to Love Live! School idol project, currently the I and P in the title need to be lowercase. Official site has it like that. http://www.lovelive-anime.jp/
  2. You must add ラブライブ！ to the tags, as it is the Japanese name of the anime.
  3. All volume lines need to have 30%+ volume, they're too quiet right now. do same volumes as hard and insane, they fit more orz.

Slowly editing.... zzzZzz


Could you increase the drain and OD on Hard to 6?

Otherwise, maps are awesome. Good job man.
all fixed and uploeaded .-.
Ozato Fumika
Beatmap Nominator
3,379 posts
Joined July 2013
Ozato Fumika
sorry for late, but here I am :3
[General]
  1. 02:36:490 - this would be a better place to end your kiai imo. since this is where the sound actually ends
    02:37:886 - same as above
[Mystery]
  1. 00:17:130 (1) - consider 5% volume on the tail. it's too loud
  2. 00:18:874 (4,5,1) - I think something like this would flow better with the circular flow you have next
    SPOILER
  3. 00:42:072 (4) - combo difference 01:46:258 (1) -
  4. 03:13:118 (5) - adding NC here would create a better effect imo
[Hard]

  • Tari wrote:

    Could you increase the drain and OD on Hard to 6?
  1. consider HP5 since your combos are really really long.
  2. 00:44:339 - I would add a circle here instead of slider reverse. would work better with the cymbal crash. same goes to 01:48:525 -
  3. 00:45:037 (6) - funny how you have this here and not in insane
  4. 00:49:049 - leaving here empty while the vocal and guitar is still on-going really makes things awkward to play. please add a note
  5. 01:47:304 - add a circle here. it's not intuitive to play and also inconsistent with 00:43:118 (2) -
  6. 02:24:804 (1) - this isn't a very fitting sound for a spinner. also having this 02:26:200 (1) - at the top makes things hard.
    either map the spinner, or move the next circles more closer to the center.
  7. 02:41:374 - you should really map this vocal
  8. 03:11:549 (7,8,9,10) - this is really awkward to play because you ignored this 03:11:636 - and had a triple. I recommend this
    SPOILER
[Normal]
  1. 00:51:316 (1,2) - this would work better with the guitar and vocal imo. also lets you map the clap
    SPOILER
  2. 01:55:502 (1,2) - same here. well you copy pasted
[Easy]
  1. 00:12:770 -
    01:16:956 - why would you not map this "hey" it's really heavy
I think that's about it.

since Tari modded it, I guess ask him for recheck.

good luck~
ZZHBOY
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ZZHBOY
No Dap

No Dap wrote:

sorry for late, but here I am :3
[General]
  1. 02:36:490 - this would be a better place to end your kiai imo. since this is where the sound actually ends
    02:37:886 - same as above
[Mystery]
  1. 00:17:130 (1) - consider 5% volume on the tail. it's too loud
  2. 00:18:874 (4,5,1) - I think something like this would flow better with the circular flow you have nextchanged here in my way
    SPOILER
  3. 00:42:072 (4) - combo difference 01:46:258 (1) -
  4. 03:13:118 (5) - adding NC here would create a better effect imo
[Hard]

  • Tari wrote:

    Could you increase the drain and OD on Hard to 6?
  1. consider HP5 since your combos are really really long.decreased to 5.5
  2. 00:44:339 - I would add a circle here instead of slider reverse. would work better with the cymbal crash. same goes to 01:48:525 -
  3. 00:45:037 (6) - funny how you have this here and not in insanewant to mostly follow drum sound in Insane diff .-.
  4. 00:49:049 - leaving here empty while the vocal and guitar is still on-going really makes things awkward to play. please add a note
  5. 01:47:304 - add a circle here. it's not intuitive to play and also inconsistent with 00:43:118 (2) -
  6. 02:24:804 (1) - this isn't a very fitting sound for a spinner. also having this 02:26:200 (1) - at the top makes things hard.
    either map the spinner, or move the next circles more closer to the center.
  7. 02:41:374 - you should really map this vocalempty to stress the start of the kiai part
  8. 03:11:549 (7,8,9,10) - this is really awkward to play because you ignored this 03:11:636 - and had a triple. I recommend thisfine...
    SPOILER
[Normal]
  1. 00:51:316 (1,2) - this would work better with the guitar and vocal imo. also lets you map the clapnope...i just want to follow vocal here.-.
    SPOILER
  2. 01:55:502 (1,2) - same here. well you copy pasted^
[Easy]
  1. 00:12:770 -
    01:16:956 - why would you not map this "hey" it's really heavy3/2 gap will be hard for new players imo
I think that's about it.

since Tari modded it, I guess ask him for recheck.

good luck~

no reply = fixed
thx for mod :3
Tari
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Tari
One last thing on Easy : 02:35:967 (1,1,1) - Stack them all together or turn them into sliders, spacing at 02:37:363 (1,1) - is really confusing, almost looks like you space them out like these rhythms 02:26:200 (1,2) -

Please change that :3
Eni
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Eni
This reminds me of this map https://osu.ppy.sh/s/112211 :D

hi tari
Ozato Fumika
Beatmap Nominator
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Ozato Fumika

ZZHBOY wrote:

[Easy]
  1. 00:12:770 -
    01:16:956 - why would you not map this "hey" it's really heavy3/2 gap will be hard for new players imo
that's what 3/2 sliders are for.


Tari
osu! Alumni
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Tari
Alright, Here you go.
ZZHBOY
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ZZHBOY

No Dap wrote:

ZZHBOY wrote:

[Easy]
  1. 00:12:770 -
    01:16:956 - why would you not map this "hey" it's really heavy3/2 gap will be hard for new players imo
that's what 3/2 sliders are for.


you are right but i want to make Easy diff be enough easy =.=
also i'm lazy x.x sorry here

Tari wrote:

Alright, Here you go.
thank you~~
Ozato Fumika
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Ozato Fumika
gratz lol

also late replay @tari // no I don't think he wanted to fix it anyway ww
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