1. Cloud's Normal (2.25 stars, 200 notes)
2. Easy (1.82 stars, 138 notes)
3. Hard (3.51 stars, 282 notes)
4. Insane (4.63 stars, 336 notes)
5. Skystar's Extra (5.44 stars, 402 notes)

Shad0w1and wrote:

:/ maybe i should take first floor when I came
[Hard]
00:06:791 (5) - delete no change for now, but if i need to make spread adjustments i will apply some of these. for now let me make normal first.
00:17:737 (3,4,1) - change to reversed slider?
00:17:250 (1) -
00:19:358 (4) - ?

-in general i think the first 30 sec is too hard,might consider change some 1/2 slider to 1/1 slider, like

00:24:385 (4) -

[Insane]
01:01:034 (4) - put a little bit low might looks better, maybe y-220? fix all
01:02:169 (3) - since its easier to follow a slider-note jump, instead closer to 01:01:845 (2) - , you should go like this:

SPOILER

01:14:169 (6,1) - this does not flow well, maybe you want change a direction or something

[Extra]
Orz Skystar

Tenseki wrote:

Hi! From PM Reqeust

Red - You Must Fix it
Green - You Shoud Fix it
Blue - Just suggestion

[General]
Fine


[Hard]
00:18:710 (2) - stack on 00:18:385 (1) i like the manual stack
00:38:656 (4,5,1,2) - i think these distance are so long, plz consider about it k nerf a bit
00:52:926 (3) - move down the slider tail point nah doesn't look good to me

Like this

[Insane]
00:01:521 (2) - stack on 00:01:683 (1) 's head i want emphasis on 1
00:27:304 (5) - change to one circle and add 1/4 slider on 00:27:548 doesn't fit well imo

E.g

00:32:494 (4,1) - ctrl + g , moving is more better to play ok
And move 00:33:304 (2) - to x513 y250

Like this

And you should move 00:33:629 (3,4,5) too

E.g

00:55:845 (4) - this distance is so long i think. ctrl+g plz its fine
00:59:737 (4) - For movements plz ctrl + g nice
01:24:223 (2,3,4) - Blanket on next slider? nah

Good Song and mapset
Good Luck for rank!

monstrata wrote:

Returning m4m~ damn i'm late ;___; good luck~ I can already see myself spamming the Insane and Extra trying to land those jumps xD

[Insane]

00:19:034 (3,4) - Check blanket? Also how about Ctrl+G on 3, and shorten it to 1/2? I find the jump fits better from 3 to 4 than from 2 to 3. k
00:35:250 (3) - Ctrl+G please ;___; this is like this so people can tell that this is a 1/2 gap and not 1/4
00:43:845 (3) - How about shortening this to a 3/4 slider as well and adding a circle at 00:44:169 - ? A jump would fit well from 00:43:845 (3,1) . But right now because its a slider end, the jump isn't as noticeable. interesting but i think ill keep mine for now
00:48:710 - Better to start the triplets here, and remove 00:48:953 (2) - . and 00:49:034 - .make this a 5 stack? tbh im not really sure how to do this part, but i think the way i have it is nicer playability wise
01:14:818 (2) - Ctrl+G? Or rotate it a bit so it flows a bit better coming out of 01:14:331 (1) - ? this is fine imo, plays somewhat like a circle hold
01:25:034 (2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - damn nice. I only wish 01:25:683 (3,4) - wasn't stacked. There is a lot of motion involved with these jumps, why have a stack here D: ok

[Hard]

00:07:358 (2,3) - Ehh. I don't know if breaking flow works here... And the angle is really sharp too. its for the drums, i didnt want to use 1/2 circles so i just used flowbreak sliders
01:07:034 (2,3) - I don't think you should stack here, because just before this pattern, you have 01:06:142 (2,3,4,1) - which are snapped to 1/4's. Because this pattern comes immediately after those 1/4 stacks players might accidentally click 2 too early. i think its fine but if anyone else mentions this i will fix
01:26:331 (2,3) - Could reduce the spacing between these two sliders slightly imo. nah these are just slider jumps, easy to land

[Easy]

00:48:710 (1) - 1/2 repeat as well? doesnt fit imo

1. Tags conflict on Cloud's diff : http://puu.sh/g12MG/a3dbe03430.jpg
2. Here is a better quality of your background : http://puu.sh/g13qT/b6f5d50d10.jpg (1088x768)
3. Here is a resized with the better quality of your background : http://puu.sh/g13Qm/7d9e0326bd.jpg (1024x768) (YEE she have to lost a part of her shoes to have the perfect size)

1. 00:06:872 (1) - missing finish ?
2. 00:08:331 (3) - Maybe just me, but I think a clap instead of drum sampleset is better.
3. 00:19:845 - missing finish
4. 00:21:142 (3) - This slider is following the vocal, but a lil later, on simular part of the music : 00:23:737 (3,4) - it's on the melody. I'd suggest to change the 2nd pattern, since you also did the same thing on the vocal here : 00:31:521 (4) - .
5. 00:43:845 (3) - I think a strong note like this one shouldn't be passive as slider end, but clicked.
6. 01:03:953 (1,2,3,4,5) - On this pattern, the vocal is the slowlest part on the kiai (vocal note every 2/1) ; but you have to clic every 1/1, which make this part harder than the other which are faster.

1. 00:19:845 (1) - missing finish
2. 00:21:629 (2,3) - Just me, but I don't like this kind of slider D:
3. I highly suggest to use constant stack on Normal diff. I mean, if you use 1/1 stack, then every stack will be 1/1, or if you use 1/2 stack, use only 1/2. Inconsistant stack might confuse player for a normal diff.
   - 1/2 stack : 00:08:494 (2,3) - 00:59:575 (3,4) - 01:10:277 (4,1) - 01:22:602 (2,3) - 01:23:737 (2,3) - 01:24:385 (4,1) -
   - 1/1 stack : 00:36:061 (2,1) - 00:39:791 (2,3) - 01:04:440 (2,3) - 01:12:710 (3,1) - 01:14:008 (3,1) -
   
4. 00:34:440 (2) - Maybe it's just me, but I think if you change this slider to a single circle, it will be better, because the 2 next sliders : 00:34:765 (3,4) - will be more emphasized.
5. 00:50:331 (1,1) - I didn't mention this one earlier because this one is special. Also, I don't recommend to stack a slider on a slider end on normal diff. Even if it's fit very well. Also, You should move this one more to the center : 00:50:331 (1) - . Because it's after a spinner.
6. 00:50:980 (1) - CLOUDSPLASH NO HENTAI, WHAT DID YOU TRIED TO DO WITH THIS SLIDER https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2790155
7. 01:25:034 - Don't you find this timeline a way too hard for normal ?

1. 00:06:872 (1) - missing finish ?
2. 00:23:899 (2,3) - I can't see any reason to use irregular spacing >_>
3. 00:57:142 (4) - Touching score :/ http://puu.sh/g15qf/b62c47fb8f.jpg

1. 00:06:872 - missing finish ?
2. 01:21:791 (7,8,1) - I find it really strange slow down to clic 8, and then accelerate to clic 1 on the same curve. http://puu.sh/g16hF/32e931ff4c.jpg

1. 00:06:872 (1) - Missing finish ?
2. 00:13:034 (1,2) - I know it's intentional for copy/paste, but I think this one should be clicked 00:13:358 - instead of here : 00:13:196 - . Also, add whistle here 00:13:358 - for the piano.
3. 00:15:142 (2) - This normal whistle is really loud, I highly suggest to use 40% volume hit sound for this single note.
4. 00:23:737 - 00:30:223 - For this part, why don't you use soft whistle instead of normal whistle ? I think it's really ruin the music >_<
5. Listened many time, 25%, 50%, and etc, the piano start here : 00:48:710 - and not here 00:48:385 - . So it should be the same for the stream.
6. 00:45:467 (2) - b...baka Yuko, ECCHI ! https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2790609
7. 00:49:520 (3) - Use normal or drum as sampleset ?
   
8. Also, there's something which I find inconsistent, it's this part 00:40:602 - 00:48:385 - which is a way harder than the kiai time, and also the map.

Kin wrote:

[General]

1. Tags conflict on Cloud's diff : http://puu.sh/g12MG/a3dbe03430.jpg k
2. Here is a better quality of your background : http://puu.sh/g13qT/b6f5d50d10.jpg (1088x768) aha thanks, but i had intended to find a new background later on.
3. Here is a resized with the better quality of your background : http://puu.sh/g13Qm/7d9e0326bd.jpg (1024x768) (YEE she have to lost a part of her shoes to have the perfect size)

[Easy]

1. 00:06:872 (1) - missing finish ? fix for all diff
2. 00:08:331 (3) - Maybe just me, but I think a clap instead of drum sampleset is better. nah
3. 00:19:845 - missing finish fix all diff
4. 00:21:142 (3) - This slider is following the vocal, but a lil later, on simular part of the music : 00:23:737 (3,4) - it's on the melody. I'd suggest to change the 2nd pattern, since you also did the same thing on the vocal here : 00:31:521 (4) - . i just kinda did this randomly since i wanted rhythm to be more fun
5. 00:43:845 (3) - I think a strong note like this one shouldn't be passive as slider end, but clicked. this is circle
6. 01:03:953 (1,2,3,4,5) - On this pattern, the vocal is the slowlest part on the kiai (vocal note every 2/1) ; but you have to clic every 1/1, which make this part harder than the other which are faster. following drum track

[Hard]

1. 00:06:872 (1) - missing finish ?
2. 00:23:899 (2,3) - I can't see any reason to use irregular spacing >_>
3. 00:57:142 (4) - Touching score :/ http://puu.sh/g15qf/b62c47fb8f.jpg k

[Insane]

1. 00:06:872 - missing finish ?
2. 01:21:791 (7,8,1) - I find it really strange slow down to clic 8, and then accelerate to clic 1 on the same curve. http://puu.sh/g16hF/32e931ff4c.jpg emphasis on the downbeat

[/list]

well, that's all from me,
good luck !

Kibbleru wrote:

Kin wrote:

[Easy]

1. 00:43:845 (3) - I think a strong note like this one shouldn't be passive as slider end, but clicked. this is circle

yugijedi wrote:

Heyho, trying M4M,

Easy

why not replace 00:41:737 (2) - by a 1 time repeating slider starts at 00:41:575 and ends at 00:42:223 with one bezierpoint in the middle? to notice the start of your slider may be hard for an easy player.. yeh ik but this way just feels so much better to me @_@
00:44:331 (4,5) - exactly the same here.. (I know you have to change some things because of beat distance but you can make it in a smart way and I do not mean you have to place a repeating slider but the bezierpoint has to be there for me..) ^
00:50:331 move the previewpoint here? i want it a bit before to catch the full vocal
01:14:331 (1) - make this slider end at 01:15:467 because of the very distinc voice. don't care about 1/2 problems because you should also change 01:15:629 (2) - 's length so, that it starts at 01:15:953 and ends at 00:16:602 .. hope u understand what I mean, the voice is much stronger here. i can see what you mean. but they both sound strong to me so i just went with the one that was on beat cuz that'd be easier to play


Hard

00:13:358 (1) - replace by a repeating slider because of the melody i think its fine to simplify some notes down o-o
00:14:007 (3) - maybe split into a circle and a slider.. hope u understand it, to map with the melody is extremly important here because you are mapping with the melody in nearly the whole song ^
00:16:602 (4) - this is just a example!! no change here! you see it the melody goes like this, a 1/1 slider fits.
00:55:196 (2) - replace this slider by two circles which are like 00:55:521 (3,4) - (copy them and drag to the right so that they have the same angle to the axis like 00:55:521 (3,4) - but then i wouldn't be able to get the blue tick drum

Insane

I love this map! BUT:

00:01:521 (2) - delete it. At the calmy beginning of a map it's unnecessary to place a circle here. Why not leave it blank here? thats the beginning and there is no voice (00:00:710 (1) - goes with voice) ill consider this one, but idk about omitting the piano :X
00:02:169 (2,3) - delete them. place a slider from 00:02:169 to 00:02:494 would cause much more playing energy!! than this weird blank at 00:02:494 i think the antijump feels nice here
00:04:764 (2,3) - same. a slider would fit perfect with your voice mapping at the begiining of the song, you don't map with the drums. ^

Sorry I tried to make a full mod. Thanks, hope I could help!

Breezy wrote:

Hey, here's my M4M for this map!
This is my map if you don't already know: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/208506
Mod an amount of difficulties that is fair to you according to the drain time.

Easy

SPOILER

00:00:710 (1) - Curve this so that it flows into the next note? they don't necessarily need to do that so no changes for these;

00:06:223 (4) - I would rotate this a bit so that it it ends facing the next note, would be more comfortable for a beginner.

00:12:710 (2) - Curve this? If you curve it, it could match up with 00:14:007 (5)

00:14:656 (1) If you curve this, you could create some sort of mirror effect like you have at 00:10:764 (4,5)

00:17:250 (1) - I would rotate this as well, so that it faces the next note.

00:18:710 (3) CTRL + < (2 times) I think this would look nicer, because it flows into the next note. If you do this, adjust the slider before this so that it forms a sort of blanket with this reverse slider.

00:24:385 (4) - Rotate to have it face the next note more?

00:26:331 (2) - Imo, I think it would look better if you stacked this on the head of (4), would provide better flow imo. If you do this, adjust the next note according to the DS.

00:29:250 (3) - I'll stop mentioning these, but I would rotate these reverse sliders more so that it ends facing the next note instead of to the side, these sliders are fast for a beginner, so it would be much more comfortable for them.

00:42:548 (3) - Curve this? It would then flow into the next set of notes and you could make a mirror effect with the preceding slider.

00:45:791 (1) - CTRL + H (same coordinates) flows better to me imo. k done this one cuz it looks pretty good

00:50:980 (1) - You could try and make this curve more noticeable if you want. no need

00:52:926 (5) - ^

01:00:061 (2) - Curve this slightly more? ^

01:03:304 (3,5) - Stack these? These appear to be overlapping each other too much. nah they aren't when you actually play the map.

01:13:683 (5) - CTRL + H this? (same coordinates) You could then form a blanket with the next note doing so.

Hard

SPOILER

00:01:521 (2) - Have this note in between the 2 sliders? want jump

00:07:683 (3) - I think CTRL + G on this slider would play better, but it's fine either way. for emphasis

00:10:602 (5) - Use DS here? It looks awkward not having this in between the 2 notes, unless you do this intentionally right before a NC. intentional

00:15:953 (1) - Curve this? It would create a mirror effect with the slider right before this. no need

00:16:277 (2,3) - Not sure why the spacing on this is different. k fix

00:25:521 (3) - Maybe make this slider longer to emphasize the guitar in the music here? dont want to skip drum

00:32:007 (2) - Curve to form a blanket? not intended

00:44:331 (1) - ^

00:51:953 (5) - Curve this more to match up with the preceding slider? no

01:23:737 (3) - DS here looks irregular, not sure if you're intending these. k

Insane

SPOILER

00:07:845 (5) - Have this note more in between the (2) and (4)? It would look neater to me. not the pattern i was going for

00:36:385 (1) - I think some slider art with this would look nice, it just looks really bland atm. k

00:47:736 (1) - Have this slider match up with the curve in this stream? k

01:03:953 (1) - Distance on this is too far in my opinion, it is unexpected especially since you need to be fast with this. nerf a bit

01:06:142 (2,3) - Have these curve identically? nah

Hopefully this mod helps! Good luck getting this ranked!

1. 00:01:683 (1,2) - Try to avoid this 3/2 gap, since it's easy. A 3/2 slider with repeat would work like this, or a 2/1 slider like this.
2. 00:04:277 (1,2) - ^
3. 01:03:953 (1,2,3,4) - This is too hard for an easy imo.
4. 01:16:926 (1) - Extend this here 01:16:926 (1) - to avoid 3/2 gap. It keeps it sounding good since the instrument "stops" where the slider ends.
5. 01:19:521 (1) - ^
   Isn't this a little too hard for an easy? Well, the map is good :p

1. 00:17:250 (1) - Add a repeat to map the beat found here 00:17:575 - and avoid 3/2 gap
2. 01:12:710 (3,1) - Most of your stacks are 1/2 away on the timeline in this section, unstack these to avoid consusion since this is still a low diff map.
3. 01:14:008 (3,1) - ^
   
   Nice

1. 00:07:358 (2) - Try ctrl+g, would make a nice fun flow :p
2. 00:21:629 (2,3,4) - I think the circle should go first, it would make the louder sounds found here 00:21:791 - and here 00:22:115 - clickable.
3. 00:28:440 (3,4) - Invert the order to make the same piano notes the ones that are at the beginning of all the sliders here 00:27:629 (1,2,3,4,1,2) -
4. 00:36:061 (3) - Try to make the finish clickable plz
5. 00:47:521 (1,2,3) - A bit complicated for hard. Remove 2 and add a repeat to 1 to make it more simple, the blank space that it leaves doesn't matter, it still sounds good and gives more emphazis to the finish found on 3.
6. 01:09:791 (3) - Flow feels forced on this slider, try copying and pasting slider 4 here, rotate it 45° and position it like this to make a smoother flow.

1. 00:11:413 (3,4,5) - I think that the spacing should be a bit larger, idk know why it just feels better to me when playing. Something like this http://puu.sh/g8q7G/a5112f1d77.jpg
2. 00:29:088 (2) - ctrl+g would make a smoother transition from 1 to 2 imo.
   
   Fun diff!

1. 00:34:764 (1) - Move this a bit lower to make the previous slider lead better to this one.
2. 00:41:737 (2,1,2,1,2,1) - What's happening here? lol
   
   The second half of the map (when the kiai starts) is way easier than the first half. But apart from that the map is well made.

Atsuro wrote:

Hey,
From forum PM request

Just some suggestions:

[Easy]

1. 00:01:683 (1,2) - Try to avoid this 3/2 gap, since it's easy. A 3/2 slider with repeat would work like this, or a 2/1 slider like this. sorry no changes to this diff, the 3/2 is fine because the music clearly suggests it, also normal is really hard to i made this harder to compliment that.
2. 00:04:277 (1,2) - ^
3. 01:03:953 (1,2,3,4) - This is too hard for an easy imo. not really.
4. 01:16:926 (1) - Extend this here 01:16:926 (1) - to avoid 3/2 gap. It keeps it sounding good since the instrument "stops" where the slider ends.
5. 01:19:521 (1) - ^
   Isn't this a little too hard for an easy? Well, the map is good :p

[Hard]

1. 00:07:358 (2) - Try ctrl+g, would make a nice fun flow :p intended
2. 00:21:629 (2,3,4) - I think the circle should go first, it would make the louder sounds found here 00:21:791 - and here 00:22:115 - clickable. these are fine imo
3. 00:28:440 (3,4) - Invert the order to make the same piano notes the ones that are at the beginning of all the sliders here 00:27:629 (1,2,3,4,1,2) -
4. 00:36:061 (3) - Try to make the finish clickable plz finish is emphasized by antijump so i think its enough
5. 00:47:521 (1,2,3) - A bit complicated for hard. Remove 2 and add a repeat to 1 to make it more simple, the blank space that it leaves doesn't matter, it still sounds good and gives more emphazis to the finish found on 3. k
6. 01:09:791 (3) - Flow feels forced on this slider, try copying and pasting slider 4 here, rotate it 45° and position it like this to make a smoother flow. nah

[Insane]

1. 00:11:413 (3,4,5) - I think that the spacing should be a bit larger, idk know why it just feels better to me when playing. Something like this http://puu.sh/g8q7G/a5112f1d77.jpg k
2. 00:29:088 (2) - ctrl+g would make a smoother transition from 1 to 2 imo. did something else but fix
   
   Fun diff!

That's all, short mod...
GL!

1. I think you should make the same kiai thingy as CloudSplash16 did on Normal, or remove it there. I think there is no need for inconsistency, especially when that effect on normal fits well.
2. I recommend to add 園田智也 (Sonoda Tomoya) to tags as he did most job on this song like a composer and lyricist. He definitely shouldn't be just kicked off from this song.
3. Add two timing points (red, obviously), one on 00:36:385, second on 00:39:304 to fix downbeat issue in this part, as from what I hear, there is same sound on 00:36:385 as 00:35:413 and it is formed really similar, thus both seem like a downbeat. Then also 00:37:682 sound more like a downbeat than 00:38:006, definitely.
4. Disable the countdown, it sounds terrible when the map is starting along with song anyway.

1. 00:19:358 (4) - This makes quite bad rhythm when slider ends on downbeat on such a weird place. I recommend making the downbeat tappable here, it will be easier to play for newbies and to be honest, completely new part starts here so it shouldn't be connected to previous part this way, but anyway it's not that huge issue.
2. 00:29:899 (1) - Just same as above if you agreed with my theory.

1. 00:20:331 (2) - This slider seems to be quite insensible. It is starting on voice, same as previous slider, but actually the following voice is on 00:20:818, where you placed a circle, while this slider ends on 00:20:656, where you can barely hear a sound, there actually is some kind of very quiet hit-hat cymbal, which is definitely a mistake to map, especially on normal diff, and moreover when there are more intelligent things to follow. Circle on 00:20:818 (3) should definitely be removed and the slider extended to 00:20:818. Actually it's just the worst think that can appear on low diffs if we talk about rhythm - mappping non-emphasized notes in song, thus resulting in confusion due to denying player play the main song instruments, so he cannot hold the rhythm properly as he's forced to play something what is almost not audiable.
2. 00:22:926 (2) - Same as above
3. 00:30:710 (2) - Same as above
4. 00:33:304 (2) - Same as above

1. 00:47:304 (4) - Remove this note as it seems you followed and even hitsounded drums in this part, but there actually isn't a sound on this one, the drums start on 00:47:413. I know there is a ring sound or something, but I think it was inappropriate to mix it like this, and especially putting here a hitsound of drum, which really isn't there. If you definitely want to keep it, though I think it is not much better to play something what isn't here, at least remove that clap hitsound and replace it with whistle to make this follow the ring sound I talked about, so there isn't a drum hitsound on empty place.
2. 00:08:494 (2) - You should remake this to a circle, because there is no sound on 00:08:575, thus mapping it doesn't make it more fun or creative. I find it more fun if there is actually a jump like this or something similar.
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:48:872 (1,2,3) - There is actually problem which is not very nice to see, not like it is your mistake, but like it is not very friendly thing to mappers. Rhythm variety. When you listen to the song, you think it is regular 1/4 triplet. But you can notice there is a gap between 00:48:872 (1,2) - and 00:49:034 (3) - that means there is inconsistent gap, you can pretty clearly hear it on 25% speed. The notes are really placed with 1/6 on 00:48:818 - 00:48:872 - 00:49:034. If you try it you will agree this rhythm fits exactly into it after slowing the song down. This needs to be consulted before the map is qualified, chaning 1/6 for 1/4 is an issue.

1. 01:12:387 (3) - The slider is unsnapped, it is on 01:12:387 (3) - while it should be on 01:12:385.

Wafu wrote:

From modding queue

Red - Unrankable
Blue - Highly recommended
Black - Suggestion

General

1. I think you should make the same kiai thingy as CloudSplash16 did on Normal, or remove it there. I think there is no need for inconsistency, especially when that effect on normal fits well.
2. I recommend to add 園田智也 (Sonoda Tomoya) to tags as he did most job on this song like a composer and lyricist. He definitely shouldn't be just kicked off from this song. ye
3. Add two timing points (red, obviously), one on 00:36:385, second on 00:39:304 to fix downbeat issue in this part, as from what I hear, there is same sound on 00:36:385 as 00:35:413 and it is formed really similar, thus both seem like a downbeat. Then also 00:37:682 sound more like a downbeat than 00:38:006, definitely. the first 2 im not quite sure about but the others are not necessary. finish != downbeat. and usually downbeats have the kick sound on them.
4. Disable the countdown, it sounds terrible when the map is starting along with song anyway. oop ^^'

Easy

1. 00:19:358 (4) - This makes quite bad rhythm when slider ends on downbeat on such a weird place. I recommend making the downbeat tappable here, it will be easier to play for newbies and to be honest, completely new part starts here so it shouldn't be connected to previous part this way, but anyway it's not that huge issue. lol i just like doing these sometimes for some variety, i think its fine because it makes the rhythm simpler.
2. 00:29:899 (1) - Just same as above if you agreed with my theory.

Not really much to say, just a peaceful easy as it should be.


Insane

1. 00:47:304 (4) - Remove this note as it seems you followed and even hitsounded drums in this part, but there actually isn't a sound on this one, the drums start on 00:47:413. I know there is a ring sound or something, but I think it was inappropriate to mix it like this, and especially putting here a hitsound of drum, which really isn't there. If you definitely want to keep it, though I think it is not much better to play something what isn't here, at least remove that clap hitsound and replace it with whistle to make this follow the ring sound I talked about, so there isn't a drum hitsound on empty place. are u sure? i certainly hear a drum.
2. 00:08:494 (2) - You should remake this to a circle, because there is no sound on 00:08:575, thus mapping it doesn't make it more fun or creative. I find it more fun if there is actually a jump like this or something similar.
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   i could but i think 1/4 slider gives more emphasis on the following slider. just a little overmap.
3. 00:48:872 (1,2,3) - There is actually problem which is not very nice to see, not like it is your mistake, but like it is not very friendly thing to mappers. Rhythm variety. When you listen to the song, you think it is regular 1/4 triplet. But you can notice there is a gap between 00:48:872 (1,2) - and 00:49:034 (3) - that means there is inconsistent gap, you can pretty clearly hear it on 25% speed. The notes are really placed with 1/6 on 00:48:818 - 00:48:872 - 00:49:034. If you try it you will agree this rhythm fits exactly into it after slowing the song down. This needs to be consulted before the map is qualified, chaning 1/6 for 1/4 is an issue. ill discuss this a bit more. but i 1/4 does seem to be fine playability wise and also it fits with the drums. worst case ill just omit this part :X

Fine diff, not much to say apart from some rhythm stuff which could be improved.

Conclusion: Rankable

I guess I do not have to comment a lot. The map was fine, spread was a little out because of Normal diff, but if some things I mentioned are changed, I think it should fit a bit more. Mostly there were just random mistakes or just inaccurate rhythms, where some things which were not in song were still mapped and so on. But after all, I think the map was not very messed up and it is probably ready. I'll give a star when I'm able to. Good luck.

Kibbleru wrote:

are u sure? i certainly hear a drum.