[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,128,64
Combo2 : 128,255,0
Combo3 : 154,235,252
Combo4 : 218,65,65
Combo5 : 255,236,0
Combo6 : 255,128,192
Combo7 : 255,255,255
Combo8 : 80,0,128
SliderBorder : 255,255,255

Nichiyouki wrote:

Red = You must fix
Blue = You should consider
Black = My suggestion

Naryuga's Normal

1. 00:00:845 (1) - Add whistle here to avoid quiet sound. - nope, I feel it a bit too noizy
2. 00:01:614 (3) - Sound on this slider isn't problem for me, but if you consider hitsound after 00:04:691 until 00:10:076, I think you should add whistle on slider begin instead of whistle on slider end. - let's see. I put the Normal hitsound where I hear the bass drum sound. Putting whistle ring on the head like a tambourin doesn't sound that good to me... and the whistle on the tail really fits the background-sound. so no change here
3. 00:03:153 (5) - This, too. Add whistle on slider begin instead of whistle on slider end. - same as the above.
4. 00:07:768 (1) - I feel normal-finish hitsound is too loud for here. So I suggest that change sampleset to auto or soft to change hitsound to soft-finish. - but the symbal sound is very deep so I think a soft-finish sound is not appropriate since it's soft and light. lowered the volume though
5. 00:37:000 (4,5,6) - It isn't beautiful and hard to play. So please fix it to natural flow than this. - maybe it's bug! lol fixed
6. 00:43:731 (6,7) - I want to make these notes are suitable more than this by may make by move slider at 00:43:731, and move circle at 00:44:308 by this picture. - nope. the drum sound on 00:43:923 - is stronger than 00:44:115 - , so I made the rhythm like the current pattern
   
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7. 00:44:692 (1) - Add finish on slider begin will be better? - better, imo
8. 00:58:154 (3) - Add clap here will be suitable for the rhythm more imo. - on 00:57:577 (2) - 's end instead
9. 01:23:924 (5,6) - I think that change these notes into a slider on here until 01:24:309, and a circle on 01:24:501 will be better. - done

Sonnyc wrote:

Naryuga's Normal:

-- Circle Size 3 please. Circle size 4 for 3 diffs in a mapset doesn't feel nice. - I worried if the placement look ugly but it's no problem. changed CS.

00:37:961 (5,6) - Uhh,,,,, this doesn't look nice. Consider a pattern like this : 00:31:807 (6,7) - changed a bit but not like the straight,,,
00:57:577 (2) - Clap at the end to follow the music. - nice.

1. 1500 for Audio Lead-in is enough I think, 2000 would let the players wait for a long time before playing.
2. Remove Sliderborder from every diff, it's needless.

1. 00:04:691 (4) - Add a new combo here? Look at your patterns before, your nc rule is like one nc per downbeat. So if you want to follow it, add a new combo here may works.
2. 00:06:230 (8) - Also for this ^
3. 00:12:384 (4,1) - Just suggestion: Add a jump between them? Since the music here is near the urgent part, we should add something to make the players feel "nervous". Place a jump here is a good way to solve that.
4. 00:37:577 (1) - I'm tooo nazi. One gird up to this for making the same spacing between 00:37:192 (6,7) - and 00:37:577 (1,2) - (both 1.02x I mean)
5. 00:46:808 (4,5) - I don't get why the rhythm here is 1/2, not 1/1 as the other same patterns. Makes me feel really weird and unfit, also it's inconsistent with your other parts, consider to do them in a way.
6. 01:02:385 (1) - The piano sound in the music isn't for clap, it should be for whistle :V! Whistle fits with the piano completely imo.
   Awesome <3

1. 00:31:807 (4,5,6,7,1) - 反正要接近vocal段就做個跳 (x:260, y:184)
   
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2. 00:41:423 (4) - 怎麼不等距 而且還是前面寬厚面窄orz x:196, y:324

1. 00:18:922 (4) - I don't hear any thing at 00:18:922 (4) - actually, why you still add things there? Consider to remove the reserve from this slider, and then move it 1/2 later.
2. 00:37:000 (4,5,6) - Creepy placement :S Also not sure if the beginners can read this completely while gameplaying. At least like this!
   
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   216,120,37000,2,0,P|260:168|275:207,2,108
   176,84,37961,1,0,2:0:0:0:
   228,64,38154,2,0,P|284:68|340:44,1,108,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

3. 00:54:693 - Soft sampleset sounds really weird, also it's inconsistent with other same parts. Try to use Normal sampleset instead soft.

1. AR-1 feels better for easys.
2. 00:06:614 (3,1) - Why you inconsistent spacing x_x
3. 00:13:153 - Why you add a finish here? Sounds really horrible and annoyed. Leave a blank there instead a finish may sounds better.
4. 00:18:153 (2,3) - A strong sound appears at 00:18:345 -, so follow it perhaps?
   
5. 01:21:617 (1,2,1) - This blanket is better =A=
   
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   488,124,81617,6,0,P|468:204|424:228,2,135,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
   408,144,83155,2,0,P|352:184|463:301,1,270,0|8,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
   428,227,84694,6,0,L|291:270,2,135

Flask wrote:

[Naryuga's Normal]

1. 00:18:922 (4) - I don't hear any thing at 00:18:922 (4) - actually, why you still add things there? Consider to remove the reserve from this slider, and then move it 1/2 later. - nope, there you can hear a strong beat with bassdrum :U
2. 00:37:000 (4,5,6) - Creepy placement :S Also not sure if the beginners can read this completely while gameplaying. At least like this! - fixed with your code and fixed spacing a bit
   
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   216,120,37000,2,0,P|260:168|275:207,2,108
   176,84,37961,1,0,2:0:0:0:
   228,64,38154,2,0,P|284:68|340:44,1,108,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

3. 00:54:693 - Soft sampleset sounds really weird, also it's inconsistent with other same parts. Try to use Normal sampleset instead soft. - I use Normal sampleset where the drum is heard. At 00:54:693 - you can hear only soft drum sound, and a note at 00:54:693 - also let me follow the vocal better. So here should be with soft-hitsound imo

Good luck Fubaka owo!

Leorda wrote:

Hello there

[General]
* Don't use white combo color, because it will too flashy during kiai time Yup


[Insane]
01:02:770 (1) - Move to X: 108 and Y:264 to make spacing inside of streams looks equal? Nope, I want to make a spacing between slider and stream to make player see a note more clearly.

Good luck

SekcAli wrote:

I downloaded it and tried all difficulties and it's honestly better than many other ranked beatmaps I have. Is there some specific reason why this isn't ranked? Is there some kind of criteria that it failed to meet?

I'm still new to the game, especially to the concept of beatmap creation and how they're ranked/rated, so I apologize for my lack of knowledge in advance.

Fumika wrote:

Sorry, I'm taking this so long. Really apreciate your comment, well I resurrect this for now and will make this map get rank!