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Fycho

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Fycho 2015-01-23T17:51:09+00:00

We did a irc mod, fixed a bunch of hitsounds in all diffs and gave some rhythm/pattern suggestions on wkyik/hard/normal. Added audio lead-in and added romanised source to tags, everything is fine for me.

IRC LOG:

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(*･ω･)杏璃 23:51:39 
tags加英文名
烤肉 23:52:06 
这是英文名？
烤肉 23:52:39 
koi suru kanojo no bukiyou na butai
烤肉 23:52:43 
是这个吧 
 (*･ω･)杏璃 23:52:48 
恩
 (*･ω･)杏璃 23:52:50 
这个也行
 (*･ω･)杏璃 23:53:13 
koi suru kanojo no bukiyou na butai

加这个
烤肉 23:54:46 
好
 (*･ω･)杏璃 23:57:46 
insane

 (*･ω･)杏璃 23:58:05 
重叠的timing线。
烤肉 23:58:08 
嗯
 (*･ω･)杏璃 23:59:18 
所有diff加个1500的audio leadin
	2015-01-24	
 (*･ω･)杏璃 0:00:20 
easy的widescreen去掉
烤肉 0:00:41 
好
 (*･ω･)杏璃 0:03:48 
还是insane
 (*･ω･)杏璃 0:04:02 
01:13:235 (1) - 头上clap
烤肉 0:04:31 
嗯
 (*･ω･)杏璃 0:04:58 
01:27:332 (4) - whistle？
烤肉 0:05:46 
好
 (*･ω･)杏璃 0:06:52 
我是建议你把insane换个custom diff name
 (*･ω･)杏璃 0:06:55 
来表示下最高难度
烤肉 0:07:04 
我没好名字啊
 (*･ω･)杏璃 0:07:10 
你的insane和另外两个insane难度差的比较大啊
 (*･ω･)杏璃 0:07:26 
下面是moecho的
烤肉 0:07:30 
我想个
烤肉 0:09:11 
改成deadline好了
烤肉 0:09:14 
截稿日
 (*･ω･)杏璃 0:09:52 
moecho的
烤肉 0:10:06 
。
烤肉 0:10:15 
也要改？
 (*･ω･)杏璃 0:10:16 
00:00:584 - 音量到20%
烤肉 0:10:24 
o 
 (*･ω･)杏璃 0:10:25 
都是小问题 你可以改的
烤肉 0:11:06 
好了
(*･ω･)杏璃 0:11:44 
00:12:873 (2) - 我建议向上一点 放到 404,20那
 (*･ω･)杏璃 0:12:05 
不然跟00:13:777 (1,2) - 一看像1/4的间隔
 (*･ω･)杏璃 0:12:51 
00:35:644 (1) - finish
 (*･ω･)杏璃 0:13:42 
00:52:993 (1) - 头上finish
烤肉 0:14:18 
好
 (*･ω･)杏璃 0:14:28 
00:57:331 (1) - clap
 (*･ω･)杏璃 0:14:36 
00:57:692 (3,4,5,6) - 这些最好都上clap或者什么
 (*･ω･)杏璃 0:14:44 
音效上太空白了
 (*･ω･)杏璃 0:15:49 
00:35:554 - 5%的音量改成20%，5%是unrankable的
00:38:445 - 
00:47:120 - 
00:58:460 - 等等
 (*･ω･)杏璃 0:16:44 
00:58:777 - 01:21:909 -这一段的音量改成60%，kiai用40%太轻了
烤肉 0:18:05 
好
 (*･ω･)杏璃 0:18:29 
 01:39:801 (3) - 补加一个clap在上面
 (*･ω･)杏璃 0:18:53 
01:27:692 - 01:33:475 这一段也是60%
 (*･ω･)杏璃 0:19:30 
下面是wkyik
 (*･ω･)杏璃 0:20:15 
00:02:210 (1) - 头上whistle
00:05:102 (1) - ^
00:07:993 (1) - ^
烤肉 0:21:04 
好
 (*･ω･)杏璃 0:21:35 
00:11:608 (5,6,7) - 我建议给这几个降低音量
 (*･ω･)杏璃 0:21:43 
到40%试试
烤肉 0:23:00 
差不多
 (*･ω･)杏璃 0:23:03 
00:29:499 (5) - finish并降低音量？
 (*･ω･)杏璃 0:23:42 
什么差不多
烤肉 0:23:57 
40
烤肉 0:24:03 
上面那个
烤肉 0:24:41 
这边感觉加不加都可以
 (*･ω･)杏璃 0:24:47 
恩
 (*･ω･)杏璃 0:25:28 
01:21:548 (4) - 尾巴finish？
 (*･ω･)杏璃 0:26:24 
01:22:451 (2,3,1) - 这边节奏好怪
烤肉 0:27:24 
打起来好像没什么
 (*･ω･)杏璃 0:27:27 
恩，我觉得应该把01:23:355 (1) - 去掉，换成一个circle在01:23:536 - 
 (*･ω･)杏璃 0:27:40 
01:23:355 - 这个大白线不该放东西
 (*･ω･)杏璃 0:28:06 
01:27:331 (3) - 下去点到116,263等间距？
烤肉 0:30:00 
好
烤肉 0:30:19 
前面那个就不改circle了
 (*･ω･)杏璃 0:30:58 
moecho的 HP改成7，这样三个insane HP 6~7~8层次分明
OD正好是7~7.5~8不用改
烤肉 0:31:14 
好
烤肉 0:31:30 
汗
烤肉 0:31:34 
他怎么用的8
 (*･ω･)杏璃 0:33:50 
mtb的
 (*･ω･)杏璃 0:33:55 
hard
 (*･ω･)杏璃 0:34:09 
00:11:789 (1) - 头上normal sampleset+soft additional
 (*･ω･)杏璃 0:34:25 
他这个应该是漏的，00:11:789 (1,2) - 这两应该一样
 (*･ω･)杏璃 0:34:49 
00:11:789 (1) - 尾巴上再加一个clap跟bass鼓
烤肉 0:35:22 
好
 (*･ω･)杏璃 0:35:40 
00:26:969 (1) - 头上漏clap
 (*･ω･)杏璃 0:35:54 
00:29:861 (1) - ^
烤肉 0:36:46 
好
 (*･ω･)杏璃 0:37:34 
汗。00:46:849 (3,1) - 这在hard减速段间距也太大了。。
 (*･ω･)杏璃 0:38:05 
00:47:210 (1) - 放到146,271
 (*･ω･)杏璃 0:38:45 
00:50:102 (1) - 头clap？
烤肉 0:39:05 
好
 (*･ω･)杏璃 0:39:15 
00:53:716 (3) - finish去掉，吵不合曲，
 (*･ω･)杏璃 0:39:40 
00:52:993 (1) - 降点音量，finish好吵
烤肉 0:39:42 
嗯
 (*･ω･)杏璃 0:39:48 
或者弄成soft additional
 (*･ω･)杏璃 0:40:30 
01:04:921 (2) - 漏normal sampleset
 (*･ω･)杏璃 0:41:23 
01:05:463 (4) - 漏clap
 (*･ω･)杏璃 0:41:37 
尾巴漏clap
 (*･ω･)杏璃 0:41:41 
这些都是跟着bass的
烤肉 0:41:51 
嗯
 (*･ω･)杏璃 0:42:27 
01:11:608 (1,2) - 这节奏怎么还串轨 一个人声一个鼓点
 (*･ω･)杏璃 0:43:17 
目测他想跟人声，那么就01:12:150 - 这里circle，01:12:331 - 这里1/1滑条
 (*･ω･)杏璃 0:43:34 
01:13:234 (1) - 头clap
 (*･ω･)杏璃 0:44:45 
01:21:186 (3) - 头上和箭头上clap
 (*･ω･)杏璃 0:44:51 
01:21:909 (1) - clap
 (*･ω･)杏璃 0:45:23 
01:33:475 (1) - 漏clap，参考他最开始的00:00:945 (1) - 
 (*･ω･)杏璃 0:47:48 
01:40:433 (1) - 转盘clap，01:43:957 (1) - clap，两个同时降低一些音量到45%或者50%
烤肉 0:48:42 
好
 (*･ω･)杏璃 0:49:20 
改完说下，下面是normal
烤肉 0:49:28 
改好了
 (*･ω･)杏璃 0:49:39 
00:00:584 (1,1) - 一上来就强迫症。。
 (*･ω･)杏璃 0:49:47 
把第一个00:00:584 (1) - 放到78，83
烤肉 0:50:17 
嗯
 (*･ω･)杏璃 0:50:22 
00:10:704 (1) - 去掉NC，突然无意义的NCspam了
烤肉 0:50:26 
新人，图不太好看
 (*･ω･)杏璃 0:50:55 
00:11:789 (1,2) - 这两应该是normal sampleset，不是clap
烤肉 0:51:14 
好
 (*･ω･)杏璃 0:51:15 
这clap乱加啊。。应该在尾巴上
 (*･ω･)杏璃 0:51:56 
00:16:126 (2,3) - 这两音效怎么断了。。soft的clap
 (*･ω･)杏璃 0:52:12 
说错soft的whistle
烤肉 0:52:13 
我看看
 (*･ω･)杏璃 0:52:33 
00:16:849 (4) - 尾巴上不该clap啊 这种的位置都不对 你全改下
烤肉 0:52:42 
K
 (*･ω･)杏璃 0:53:37 
00:34:198 (3) - 首尾clap
 (*･ω･)杏璃 0:54:13 
00:35:644 (1,2) - normal的这种stack。。。
 (*･ω･)杏璃 0:54:21 
00:38:536 (1,2) - 
 (*･ω･)杏璃 0:54:27 
这种stack在normal被dq过
烤肉 0:54:55 
我去
烤肉 0:54:58 
不会吧
 (*･ω･)杏璃 0:55:08 
00:44:319 (1) - 我建议改成
 (*･ω･)杏璃 0:55:12 
好看点
 (*･ω･)杏璃 0:55:30 
那几个不要stack，放远了
 (*･ω･)杏璃 0:56:24 
01:24:439 (5) - 尾巴clap
 (*･ω･)杏璃 0:56:43 
01:27:692 (1) - finish
 (*･ω･)杏璃 0:57:38 
01:30:222 (5) - 建议换成soft的。。
01:29:861 (4) - 这一个降到55
 (*･ω･)杏璃 0:57:58 
 01:30:403 (1) - clap
烤肉 0:58:35 
好
 (*･ω･)杏璃 0:59:05 
  01:44:861 (1) - 加finish，并且soft additions
 (*･ω･)杏璃 0:59:25 
01:40:343 (1) - 转盘clap并降音量
 (*･ω･)杏璃 1:00:51 
01:39:801 (2) - 这个折返上音很弱啊（去音效），而且加速的莫名其妙
 (*･ω･)杏璃 1:01:27 
头上01:39:801 (2) - 军鼓音效
 (*･ω･)杏璃 1:01:40 
尾巴上clap
烤肉 1:02:51 
好
 (*･ω･)杏璃 1:03:34 
Easy：00:28:054 (2,3) - 平行
00:44:319 (1) - 转盘加点什么音效？
00:52:993 (1) - normalsample
 (*･ω･)杏璃 1:03:44 
00:55:885 (1) - i啊转盘音效
烤肉 1:04:37 
没药平行啊
烤肉 1:04:45 
我把另一个也弄歪好了
 (*･ω･)杏璃 1:04:52 
恩
 (*･ω･)杏璃 1:05:01 
01:07:451 (1) - 尾巴clap
 (*･ω･)杏璃 1:05:12 
01:13:234 (1) - 头上clap？
 (*･ω･)杏璃 1:05:36 
01:19:018 (1) - 转盘音效
烤肉 1:05:43 
好
 (*･ω･)杏璃 1:05:48 
01:21:909 (1) - 头clap
 (*･ω･)杏璃 1:06:36 
01:32:391 (2) - 头上去finish
 (*･ω･)杏璃 1:06:53 
01:34:740 (2) - 尾巴漏normal sampleset
 (*･ω･)杏璃 1:07:15 
01:39:259 (1,2) - 音量略低
 (*･ω･)杏璃 1:07:24 
别的没了
烤肉 1:07:28 
好
 (*･ω･)杏璃 1:07:29 
改完上传 传完告诉我
烤肉 1:07:36 
嗯
烤肉 1:11:36 
好了 (*･ω･)杏璃 1:18:19 
moecho，00:47:120 - 5%->20%
烤肉 1:18:39 
OSU突然炸了
烤肉 1:19:27 
哦
烤肉 1:19:33 
这个灰色的滑条
烤肉 1:19:39 
我看成转盘了
烤肉 1:19:41 
没改
 (*･ω･)杏璃 1:21:17 
柚子01:34:740 (1) - whistle
 (*･ω･)杏璃 1:21:51 
01:44:138 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 最后我觉得吵了 60%吧
烤肉 1:22:19 
好
 (*･ω･)杏璃 1:24:07 
hard，01:06:728 (3) - 尾巴clap
 (*･ω･)杏璃 1:24:46 
01:12:331 (3) - 尾巴clap
 (*･ω･)杏璃 1:25:27 
01:40:433 (1) - 转盘上的clap美丽
烤肉 1:26:17 
好
 (*･ω･)杏璃 1:26:32 
Normal00:38:536 (1,2) - 这个stack不改一下？
烤肉 1:26:33 
日
烤肉 1:26:38 
泡面没水了
 (*･ω･)杏璃 1:26:50 
00:43:234 (4) - 尾巴顺便加个clap
 (*･ω･)杏璃 1:27:11 
00:52:993 (1) - 头上finish
 (*･ω･)杏璃 1:27:49 
00:55:885 (1) - finish？
 (*･ω･)杏璃 1:28:43 
哎我还是不对新人吹毛求疵了
烤肉 1:29:54 
好了
 (*･ω･)杏璃 1:30:51 
Easy，我是说01:39:259 (1,2) - 这几个音量略微低了点
 (*･ω･)杏璃 1:30:55 
让增大来着..
 (*･ω･)杏璃 1:31:29 
没了
烤肉 1:33:26 
好了
烤肉 1:33:37 
我传一下
烤肉 1:33:45 
那in那边也要调大一点
 (*･ω･)杏璃 1:39:11 
normal
 (*･ω･)杏璃 1:39:16 
00:44:319 (1,2) - 间距问题
 (*･ω･)杏璃 1:39:39 
目测是前面那个滑条拉错了
 (*･ω･)杏璃 1:39:52 
00:44:319 (1) - 2/1折返啊
烤肉 1:40:10 
嗯
 (*･ω･)杏璃 1:40:15 
00:48:475 (3,4) - 这里也是间距问题，突然1.56了
 (*･ω･)杏璃 1:40:57 
01:09:259 (4,5) - 间距从1.3改成1.2
烤肉 1:41:44 
还有吗
 (*･ω･)杏璃 1:41:54 
没了
烤肉 1:45:13 
失败了
烤肉 1:45:17 
在传
烤肉 1:46:18 
好了
 (*･ω･)杏璃 1:47:21 
00:44:319 (1) - 折返上忘音效了...
 (*･ω･)杏璃 1:47:22 
normal
 (*･ω･)杏璃 1:47:58 
我以为你改的时候会注意到..
烤肉 1:47:59 
【那个啃西瓜的表情】（<—手动加斜眼
烤肉 1:48:15 
没注意
 (*･ω･)杏璃 1:48:22 
normal sampleset

Bubbled.

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2015-01-27T05:08:17+00:00

Check as requested

General

unsnapped preview time, should be snapped in 00:57:963 -
could you give metadata source for this map? hard to find orz

Easy

00:03:114 (3) - add whistle for consistency with 00:06:006 (3) - ?
00:18:295 (1) - actually you still can improve the blanket here
00:26:246 (4) - 344,320 to fix blanket for next slider, would be nice for this slider will blanket nicely for both and previous :p
00:36:909 (3) - blanket please :'3 http://puu.sh/f59Ff.jpg
00:32:753 (1) - just my taste that i prefer ctrl+G this slider for the flow
00:47:933 - the music is kinda strong so i 75% suggest to map this time actually, when see your current design, i hope you still can consider it :p
00:52:271 (3) - ctrl+G for more natural flow please
00:58:777 - normal finish feels not really fit imo and i prefer use soft finish instead since this song is quite calm
01:04:560 (1) - use soft clap only for head please, the music is calm, finish doesnt really fit here
01:10:343 - same as 00:58:777 -
01:32:030 - normal finish doesnt really fit here, use soft whistle only would be fine i guess

Normal

i dont get why 2nd kiai start in 01:29:138 - , i prefer 01:27:692 - coz the music is back to epic if you ask me
00:00:945 (1) - 68,204 for better blanket
00:01:668 (2) - inconsistency spacing 1,28x
00:05:102 (3) - 1,15x and 1,25x spacing for this slider is quite far. try give more consistent please example move to 340,96 for 1,20x and 1,22x
00:25:885 (4) - usually i dont like long 1/2 gaps like 00:24:078 (1,2,3,4,5) - so i prefer remove (4) and add circle 00:26:066 - in here which stacked with (5)
00:27:692 (2) - inconsistency spacing 1,28x here
00:28:777 (4) - same as previous, i dont like long 1/2 gaps so remove this slider and replace with circle at 00:28:777 - only
00:48:475 (3) - yep, if possible try avoid use minimum normal spacing (i mean 1,15x) here, try use more consistent spacing with 1,20x instead
00:51:367 (3) - ^
01:01:668 (1) - ^
01:09:259 (4) - same as 00:28:777 (4) -
01:23:174 (3) - inconsistency spacing 1,29x here
01:34:740 (3) - inconsistency spacing 1,28x orz
01:44:499 - you can add 1/2 slider to follow the trumpet here, since Easy same as current your rhythm, imo it would be nicer if you make a little bit harder (what i suggest to add 1/2 slider here)

Hard

00:06:548 (5) - i think it would be nicer if you remove this circle to give 1/1 gap blank like 00:02:753 (2,3) -
00:58:777 (1) - i dont hear any sound in blue tick so i prefer to make 1/2 slider instead
00:59:680 (4) - i know the jump is for piano but i think it played not really well here, hmm i just prefer use normal spacing like move to 256,104. just my two cents though
01:04:379 (4) - the music is pretty weak here so try remove and give 1/1 blank? it would be nicer imo since your kiai hasnt 1/1 gap blank
01:04:560 (1) - i can hear a weak drum in 01:04:740 - but i cant hear in 01:04:831 - so better to make 1/2 imo
if you agree with 01:04:379 (4) - , you can replace slider in 01:15:765 (3) - with a circle in whitetick for consistency
01:43:957 (1) - since guitars are strong in this part i strongly to follow guitar only and remove this circle for it

kowaiiwkyik

00:12:512 - add whistle for the piano, so empty here
00:13:777 (3,1,2) - i think the rhythm still can improved here when you're ignoring strong piano in 00:14:138 - , i guess it would feel better when change them become http://puu.sh/f5gxx.jpg
00:12:512 - until 00:57:150 - are you sure just use normal sampleset in 4th whitetick? imo you can add some whistles for this part example 1st 3rd whiteticks or just 1st whiteticks. they feel quite empty when piano didnt hitsound with whistle
00:38:355 (5) - since the music is still calm and this music is weak, i prefer to remove it to give some 1/1 gap blank, just my taste though
00:43:596 (3) - i know the melody but imo it isnt worth to get jump imo, just ctrl+g 00:43:596 (3,4) - or remove (4) to give 1/1 blank gap, music still calm after all
00:49:560 (3) - literally just same as 00:38:355 (5) -
00:57:873 - since the music is so weak, almost cant hear it i strongly suggest to not map this time, you can replace 00:57:692 (3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/f5hWN.jpg
01:27:331 (3) - since you stacked these circles 01:26:969 (1,2) - you've to stack (3) with (4) as well coz they have same music patterns here, current feels uncomfortable for me
01:28:054 (2) - literally i cant hear any sound in blue tick so better to make 1/2 imo
01:29:680 (2) - hmm imo if you remove this circle and stack (3) to (1)'s tail, it will give more natural rhythm and played better as well

MoeCho

try AR 8,7 to give spread with Deadline's diff (so Insane have AR 8 - 8,7 - 9)
00:12:512 - until 00:35:644 - same as kawaiiwkyik's diff
00:13:234 (3) - i prefer to ctrl+G to reduce the jump, music is calm after all
00:13:777 (1) - i cant hear any sound in blue tick, 1/2 slider pls
00:18:204 (6) - overmap as well
00:21:096 (6) - 00:28:325 (6) - 00:36:277 (3) - 00:36:909 (5) -'s tail, 00:39:168 (3) -, 00:42:060 (3) - ^
00:26:969 (1) - clap on head coz the strong piano
00:39:259 (4) - slider's tail should use clap imo when you hitsounded loud pianos with clap here
00:42:873 (2) - idk why if i remove this circle, i feel better to play rather than mapped this time with circle, just my two cents though
00:57:512 (2) - try remove this circle, not really fits well to map here, especially after those jumps
01:16:126 (1) - can hear any sound in blue tick, 1/2 please
01:17:572 (1) - ^
01:36:367 (1) - add finish on head please, the guitar is strong and feels empty with whistle only here
those overmapped i mentioned are the heavy overmapped and should be fixed (there are some still but i still can tolerant since not really heavy overmap)

Deadline

00:00:855 (1) - if you just map with 1 circle, it seems weird even not overmap, why not like MoeCho did with start slider from 00:00:584 - until 00:00:855 -
00:22:091 (5) - i really prefer to ctrl+G, many jumps feel not really comfortable here
00:45:314 (4,6,8) - heavy overmapped since no musics, remove please
00:52:543 (4) - heavy overmap too
01:04:560 - i still cry with this normal finish as i told in Easy before
01:32:391 (2,3,4) - yep cry again with normal finish, if you want to emphasize vocals, just use soft finish (even it feels a little bit loud for me) but still acceptable rather than normal finish
01:33:476 (1,2) - 3/4 sliders are totally weird here, i'd say to make 1/2 sliders instead
The last one, your diff has both streams and jumps here with cruel AR 9 and OD 8 HP 8, i'd say to reduce the CS at least use 4,2 here

overmaps, hitsounds (normal finishes), and inconsistency spacings are the most reasons i popped the bubble whenever others are highly suggested, whenever you fix those overmaps, hitsounds, and inconsistency spacings, feel free to poke me back

Kinomi

1,223 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

Kinomi 2015-01-27T06:00:42+00:00

Xinely wrote:
Check as requested

General
unsnapped preview time, should be snapped in 00:57:963 - done
could you give metadata source for this map? hard to find orz

Easy
00:03:114 (3) - add whistle for consistency with 00:06:006 (3) - ? add finish here
00:18:295 (1) - actually you still can improve the blanket here fix
00:26:246 (4) - 344,320 to fix blanket for next slider, would be nice for this slider will blanket nicely for both and previous :p
fix
00:36:909 (3) - blanket please :'3 http://puu.sh/f59Ff.jpg fix
00:32:753 (1) - just my taste that i prefer ctrl+G this slider for the flow fine
00:47:933 - the music is kinda strong so i 75% suggest to map this time actually, when see your current design, i hope you still can consider it :p
i think it is fine now..volume is enough high
00:52:271 (3) - ctrl+G for more natural flow please ok
00:58:777 - normal finish feels not really fit imo and i prefer use soft finish instead since this song is quite calm
same as insane
01:04:560 (1) - use soft clap only for head please, the music is calm, finish doesnt really fit here
01:10:343 - same as 00:58:777 -
01:32:030 - normal finish doesnt really fit here, use soft whistle only would be fine i guess there's actually fninsh , and i think normal finish is more suitable here, same as insane

Deadline
00:00:855 (1) - if you just map with 1 circle, it seems weird even not overmap, why not like MoeCho did with start slider from 00:00:584 - until 00:00:855 - fine,changed
00:22:091 (5) - i really prefer to ctrl+G, many jumps feel not really comfortable here nope, i prefer this flow
00:45:314 (4,6,8) - heavy overmapped since no musics, remove please though i think there is bell stream, well i use 25% and find the bell can't be heard... changed
00:52:543 (4) - heavy overmap too i put double triptles to decorate rhythm here
01:04:560 - i still cry with this normal finish as i told in Easy before explain to you in qq
01:32:391 (2,3,4) - yep cry again with normal finish, if you want to emphasize vocals, just use soft finish (even it feels a little bit loud for me) but still acceptable rather than normal finish remove finishes on 3 and 4
01:33:476 (1,2) - 3/4 sliders are totally weird here, i'd say to make 1/2 sliders instead i use this rhythm because of the rhythm at the beginning.
and 3/4 here is easier to keep the spacing you can see 01:33:386 (5) - have show the 1/4 spacing before
The last one, your diff has both streams and jumps here with cruel AR 9 and OD 8 HP 8, i'd say to reduce the CS at least use 4,2 here
my diff is made for cs 4.5, if i change the cs some spacing will be ugly.
~~and this map is very easy compared to my other maps~~

overmaps, hitsounds (normal finishes), and inconsistency spacings are the most reasons i popped the bubble whenever others are highly suggested, whenever you fix those overmaps, hitsounds, and inconsistency spacings, feel free to poke me back

Oyatsu

1,909 posts

Joined December 2012

Oyatsu 2015-01-27T06:56:12+00:00

Osu! needs more Duca. Go~ Go~

Koiyuki

2,531 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2015-01-27T10:27:11+00:00

Xinely wrote:

Hard
00:06:548 (5) - i think it would be nicer if you remove this circle to give 1/1 gap blank like 00:02:753 (2,3) - i prefer to keep it
00:58:777 (1) - i dont hear any sound in blue tick so i prefer to make 1/2 slider instead follows vocal here, also 3/4 sliders can give a strong impression of kiai time
00:59:680 (4) - i know the jump is for piano but i think it played not really well here, hmm i just prefer use normal spacing like move to 256,104. just my two cents though k
01:04:379 (4) - the music is pretty weak here so try remove and give 1/1 blank? it would be nicer imo since your kiai hasnt 1/1 gap blank hears weird to me if leave a blank, because it's kiai time so no blank is better for me.
01:04:560 (1) - i can hear a weak drum in 01:04:740 - but i cant hear in 01:04:831 - so better to make 1/2 imo same reason as 00:58:777 (1) -
if you agree with 01:04:379 (4) - , you can replace slider in 01:15:765 (3) - with a circle in whitetick for consistency that wont be problem
01:43:957 (1) - since guitars are strong in this part i strongly to follow guitar only and remove this circle for it k

thanks for modding~

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Rizia

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Joined January 2012

Rizia 2015-01-27T12:02:44+00:00

Xinely wrote:

kowaiiwkyik
00:12:512 - add whistle for the piano, so empty here
00:13:777 (3,1,2) - i think the rhythm still can improved here when you're ignoring strong piano in 00:14:138 - , i guess it would feel better when change them become http://puu.sh/f5gxx.jpg
00:12:512 - until 00:57:150 - are you sure just use normal sampleset in 4th whitetick? imo you can add some whistles for this part example 1st 3rd whiteticks or just 1st whiteticks. they feel quite empty when piano didnt hitsound with whistle i don't like place whistle here orz
00:38:355 (5) - since the music is still calm and this music is weak, i prefer to remove it to give some 1/1 gap blank, just my taste though
00:43:596 (3) - i know the melody but imo it isnt worth to get jump imo, just ctrl+g 00:43:596 (3,4) - or remove (4) to give 1/1 blank gap, music still calm after all
00:49:560 (3) - literally just same as 00:38:355 (5) - keep
00:57:873 - since the music is so weak, almost cant hear it i strongly suggest to not map this time, you can replace 00:57:692 (3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/f5hWN.jpg
01:27:331 (3) - since you stacked these circles 01:26:969 (1,2) - you've to stack (3) with (4) as well coz they have same music patterns here, current feels uncomfortable for me i think didn't stack is better
01:28:054 (2) - literally i cant hear any sound in blue tick so better to make 1/2 imo
01:29:680 (2) - hmm imo if you remove this circle and stack (3) to (1)'s tail, it will give more natural rhythm and played better as well

thanks for mod

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MoeCho
try AR 8,7 to give spread with Deadline's diff (so Insane have AR 8 - 8,7 - 9) Changed AR to 8.8 because it felt better to play than 8.7
00:12:512 - until 00:35:644 - same as kawaiiwkyik's diff I'm not sure what you really mean because there are a lot of whistles there which are at the beat of the bass sound in the background... And I don't prefer to follow piano since I can't really hear any piano
00:13:234 (3) - i prefer to ctrl+G to reduce the jump, music is calm after all Won't feel that good when playing but ok..
00:13:777 (1) - i cant hear any sound in blue tick, 1/2 slider pls Ok
00:18:204 (6) - overmap as well What? It fits the music, just because it doesn't have a ultra clear sound beat right there should not mean so called "overmap"... Why overuse this word
00:21:096 (6) ^- 00:28:325 (6) OK - 00:36:277 (3) OK - 00:36:909 (5) -'s tail OK, 00:39:168 (3) - OK, 00:42:060 (3) OK- ^
00:26:969 (1) - clap on head coz the strong piano I don't hear piano here, and it does not fit in my opinion.
00:39:259 (4) - slider's tail should use clap imo when you hitsounded loud pianos with clap here I don't hear piano, and it sounds wierd
00:42:873 (2) - idk why if i remove this circle, i feel better to play rather than mapped this time with circle, just my two cents though For me it felt wierd as hell when played without there, since the bass sound is so strong there, stronger than any instrument at that time
00:57:512 (2) - try remove this circle, not really fits well to map here, especially after those jumps I can try, but there is a sound there, so idk if that's fine to just skip it
01:16:126 (1) - can hear any sound in blue tick, 1/2 please k
01:17:572 (1) - ^ k
01:36:367 (1) - add finish on head please, the guitar is strong and feels empty with whistle only here tbh it just sounds wierd here but ok
those overmapped i mentioned are the heavy overmapped and should be fixed (there are some still but i still can tolerant since not really heavy overmap)most of the "heavy overmapped" parts are only overmap if you listen to the song with 50% or 25% speed... In 100% it's fully predictable and fits with music inside the mind.

I can't hear ANY piano sound in the song, I don't understand what you are talking about.

Thanks for check.

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Title:Dreamer Short ver.
TitleUnicode:Dreamer ショート ver.
Artist:Duca
ArtistUnicode:Duca
Creator:Tsukuyomi
Version:Moecho's Insane
Source:恋する彼女の不器用な舞台
Tags:koi suru kanojo no bukiyou na butai baldrace cube kantoku Moecho Kawaiwkyik [Teichan] opening galgame eroge
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Little

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Joined November 2012

Little 2015-01-28T04:31:32+00:00

I will check after it's rebubbled...

Lavender

886 posts

Joined January 2014

Lavender 2015-01-28T05:48:07+00:00

Sorry, Yomi. I can't be online these days, feel free to change anything in my diff.

Kinomi

1,223 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

Kinomi 2015-01-28T06:01:31+00:00

Xinely wrote:

Normal
i dont get why 2nd kiai start in 01:29:138 - , i prefer 01:27:692 - coz the music is back to epic if you ask me
00:00:945 (1) - 68,204 for better blanket
00:01:668 (2) - inconsistency spacing 1,28x
00:05:102 (3) - 1,15x and 1,25x spacing for this slider is quite far. try give more consistent please example move to 340,96 for 1,20x and 1,22x
00:25:885 (4) - usually i dont like long 1/2 gaps like 00:24:078 (1,2,3,4,5) - so i prefer remove (4) and add circle 00:26:066 - in here which stacked with (5)
00:27:692 (2) - inconsistency spacing 1,28x here
00:28:777 (4) - same as previous, i dont like long 1/2 gaps so remove this slider and replace with circle at 00:28:777 - only
00:48:475 (3) - yep, if possible try avoid use minimum normal spacing (i mean 1,15x) here, try use more consistent spacing with 1,20x instead
00:51:367 (3) - ^
01:01:668 (1) - ^
01:09:259 (4) - same as 00:28:777 (4) -
01:23:174 (3) - inconsistency spacing 1,29x here
01:34:740 (3) - inconsistency spacing 1,28x orz
01:44:499 - you can add 1/2 slider to follow the trumpet here, since Easy same as current your rhythm, imo it would be nicer if you make a little bit harder (what i suggest to add 1/2 slider here)

all fix except 2 1/2 rhythm change, i think it's better to keep them to get a well spread.

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2015-01-28T06:26:56+00:00

Have it back~

Little

2,509 posts

Joined November 2012

Little 2015-01-29T08:14:22+00:00

[Easy]

00:00:945 (1) - I think SC:1 hit-finish is better here.
00:07:090 (2) - Minor detail, I think the curved part will look better if you make its shape more even: http://puu.sh/fdLjh/22f64e1150.jpg
00:12:512 (1) - Move the 3rd node to get a smoother curve in the middle part: http://puu.sh/fdLsL/74c9f0939f.jpg
00:52:993 (1) - I think this spinner doesn't fit that well, especially since two are used consecutively. Try replacing the first spinner with some long sliders or something else for this part. I think it will match the song better.
01:19:018 (1) - I think it will be better to map this part with circles/sliders and avoid using so many spinners in the diff.

[Normal]

00:30:584 (2) - Move it to fix the spacing.
00:39:440 (2) - Add whistle?
01:08:355 (2) - Move it to fix the spacing.
01:40:343 (1) - Better to end this spinner at 01:43:596 to match the drum sound on that beat.
01:44:499 (1) - I suggest to extend it like this, because it fits the song, and makes the rhythm more predictable: http://puu.sh/fdOCd/b4009802df.jpg

[Yuki's Hard]

00:12:512 (1,2) - Since the distance here is half of the previous jump, I think the player may confuse this for 1/2 beat spacing. Consider increasing the distance for that reason.
00:44:319 (1) - Add clap?
00:45:222 (4) - Add clap on head and/or end?
00:46:307 (2) - It would be nice to have a hitsound on the head. drum-hitnormal, i guess.
00:51:367 (3) - Maybe clap on head.
01:12:331 (3) - Move this to fix the stack.

[wkyik's Insane]

01:01:307 (4) - I think it flows smoother to reverse the direction: http://puu.sh/fdS7H/d6674afb7f.jpg

[Moecho's Insane]

There are some SV changes that are really unexpected and difficult to read. For example, 01:27:692 (1) and 01:30:222 (1). I recommend using tick rate 2, as it will help the player to read slider velocity changes, and also matches the song better.
00:05:102 (1) - I think reverse direction is better here, so you have direction change on (1) to emphasize the syncopated beat: http://puu.sh/fbeFX/6b15c5414d.jpg
01:40:343 (6) - It's nicer to have round flow in this pattern imo, so I suggest moving it down like this: http://puu.sh/fbfif/0008195a71.jpg
01:44:680 (5,6) - Are you sure you don't want a larger jump to emphasize this strong ending note? I think it will be better: http://puu.sh/fbfn5/49bcf4e6e0.jpg

[Deadline]

00:11:247 (6,7) - Flow across here feels a bit awkward. Maybe move (7) somewhere further out like: http://puu.sh/fbemf/10261812ed.jpg
01:33:476 (1,2) - Be careful about these textbooks hitsounds... Their rhythms don't seem to fit the song.

Moecho

267 posts

Joined October 2014

Moecho 2015-01-30T23:14:22+00:00

CloudSplash16 wrote:
[Moecho's Insane]
There are some SV changes that are really unexpected and difficult to read. For example, 01:27:692 (1) and 01:30:222 (1). I recommend using tick rate 2, as it will help the player to read slider velocity changes, and also matches the song better. Changed tick rate to 2.
00:05:102 (1) - I think reverse direction is better here, so you have direction change on (1) to emphasize the syncopated beat: http://puu.sh/fbeFX/6b15c5414d.jpg Nice
01:40:343 (6) - It's nicer to have round flow in this pattern imo, so I suggest moving it down like this: http://puu.sh/fbfif/0008195a71.jpg Ok
01:44:680 (5,6) - Are you sure you don't want a larger jump to emphasize this strong ending note? I think it will be better: http://puu.sh/fbfn5/49bcf4e6e0.jpg Ok

Update

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TitleUnicode:Dreamer ショート ver.
Artist:Duca
ArtistUnicode:Duca
Creator:Tsukuyomi
Version:Moecho's Insane
Source:恋する彼女の不器用な舞台
Tags:koi suru kanojo no bukiyou na butai baldrace cube kantoku Moecho Kawaiwkyik [Teichan] opening galgame eroge
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Rizia

3,114 posts

Joined January 2012

Rizia 2015-01-31T11:01:16+00:00

CloudSplash16 wrote:
[wkyik's Insane]
01:01:307 (4) - I think it flows smoother to reverse the direction: http://puu.sh/fdS7H/d6674afb7f.jpg i want keep this style, so no fix~

thanks for mod~

Kinomi

1,223 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

Kinomi 2015-01-31T11:34:21+00:00

CloudSplash16 wrote:
[Easy]
00:00:945 (1) - I think SC:1 hit-finish is better here. both of them are fine i think
00:07:090 (2) - Minor detail, I think the curved part will look better if you make its shape more even: k
00:12:512 (1) - Move the 3rd node to get a smoother curve in the middle part: http://puu.sh/fdLsL/74c9f0939f.jpg
k
00:52:993 (1) - I think this spinner doesn't fit that well, especially since two are used consecutively. Try replacing the first spinner with some long sliders or something else for this part. I think it will match the song better. k
01:19:018 (1) - I think it will be better to map this part with circles/sliders and avoid using so many spinners in the diff.
i find i must use a stange rhythm here so i deleted all i mapped and add a spinner lol
[Normal]
00:30:584 (2) - Move it to fix the spacing.
00:39:440 (2) - Add whistle?
01:08:355 (2) - Move it to fix the spacing.
01:40:343 (1) - Better to end this spinner at 01:43:596 to match the drum sound on that beat.
all fix
01:44:499 (1) - I suggest to extend it like this, because it fits the song, and makes the rhythm more predictable i think even 1/2 repeat is a bit hard here.

[Deadline]
00:11:247 (6,7) - Flow across here feels a bit awkward. Maybe move (7) somewhere further out like: http://puu.sh/fbemf/10261812ed.jpg
fine for me
01:33:476 (1,2) - Be careful about these textbooks hitsounds... Their rhythms don't seem to fit the song.
01:34:108 there is a bass here, to fit this rhythm i use another one at 01:33:746

Koiyuki

2,531 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2015-01-31T11:48:56+00:00

all fixed

SPOILER

osu file format v13

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Title:Dreamer Short ver.
TitleUnicode:Dreamer ショート ver.
Artist:Duca
ArtistUnicode:Duca
Creator:Tsukuyomi
Version:Yuki's Hard
Source:恋する彼女の不器用な舞台
Tags:koi suru kanojo no bukiyou na butai baldrace cube kantoku Moecho Kawaiwkyik [Teichan] opening galgame eroge
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Little

2,509 posts

Joined November 2012

Little 2015-02-01T00:38:12+00:00

IRC recheck with the mapper.

Log

2015-01-31 12:48 CloudSplash16: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/557788 Duca - Dreamer Short ver. [Yuki's Hard]]
2015-01-31 12:48 Tsukuyomi: ok
2015-01-31 12:48 CloudSplash16: 00:46:307 (2) - I asked Yuki to add drum sampleset on head, but I think he mistakenly put it on slider body instead
2015-01-31 12:49 Tsukuyomi: fix
2015-01-31 12:55 CloudSplash16: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/551950 Duca - Dreamer Short ver. [Deadline]]
2015-01-31 12:55 Tsukuyomi: ok
2015-01-31 12:55 CloudSplash16: I still don't understand about those 1/4 hitsounds
2015-01-31 12:56 CloudSplash16: that is; 01:33:476 (1,2) - 
2015-01-31 12:56 CloudSplash16: It sounds very strange to me..
2015-01-31 12:57 Tsukuyomi: 01:34:108 here is actually a bass :p
2015-01-31 12:58 CloudSplash16: Then about on (1)?
2015-01-31 12:59 Tsukuyomi: it's a whole pattern so i use same hitsound
2015-01-31 12:59 CloudSplash16: ok :|
2015-01-31 12:59 CloudSplash16: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/552345 Duca - Dreamer Short ver. [Teichan's Normal]]
2015-01-31 12:59 Tsukuyomi: well remove them is also fine i think
2015-01-31 13:00 CloudSplash16: up to you.
2015-01-31 13:00 Tsukuyomi: k
2015-01-31 13:00 CloudSplash16: For the end,
2015-01-31 13:01 CloudSplash16: http://puu.sh/fhL3v/791b1b77a7.jpg
2015-01-31 13:01 CloudSplash16: or maybe
2015-01-31 13:02 CloudSplash16: http://puu.sh/fhL6p/d2b633b930.jpg
2015-01-31 13:02 CloudSplash16: I just think starting on red tick there might be confusing
2015-01-31 13:02 CloudSplash16: but just suggestion.
2015-01-31 13:02 Tsukuyomi: i think the second one is better
2015-01-31 13:03 Tsukuyomi: then the gap after spinner is enough?
2015-01-31 13:03 CloudSplash16: hmm.. let me check.
2015-01-31 13:03 CloudSplash16: last i remember, it was 2/1 for Normal
2015-01-31 13:05 CloudSplash16: It is not actually a rule
2015-01-31 13:05 CloudSplash16: it's a guideline
2015-01-31 13:06 CloudSplash16: so as long as there is a reasonable amount of time, it should be ok
2015-01-31 13:07 CloudSplash16: I think 2/1 gap is enough at this bpm.
2015-01-31 13:07 Tsukuyomi: :/ you know, some QAT will dq it because of this reamson
2015-01-31 13:07 CloudSplash16: http://puu.sh/fhLTL/1d9a72293d.png
2015-01-31 13:07 CloudSplash16: this is current point of their discussion
2015-01-31 13:09 Tsukuyomi: ok
2015-01-31 13:11 CloudSplash16: Add Minakami Yuki to tags
2015-01-31 13:12 Tsukuyomi: wut
2015-01-31 13:12 Tsukuyomi: lol
2015-01-31 13:12 CloudSplash16: lol i missed it first time
2015-01-31 13:13 CloudSplash16: Also, Yuki's different combo color is intentional?
2015-01-31 13:14 Tsukuyomi: idk
2015-01-31 13:14 CloudSplash16: it's ok
2015-01-31 13:14 Tsukuyomi: i asked him before
2015-01-31 13:14 Tsukuyomi: than he forgot to answer
2015-01-31 13:15 CloudSplash16: ok, it doesn't matter
2015-01-31 13:15 Tsukuyomi: ok
2015-01-31 13:15 CloudSplash16: I didn't find anything else.
2015-01-31 13:16 Tsukuyomi: ok

Qualified!