As requested.
[General]
[General]
- I've checked with AiMod and it seems you have A LOT of objects unsnapped o_o Maybe just for some ms, but it needs to be fixed.
- 03:50:415 - What do you think about add preview point here? Actually vocal starts a bit early.
- 00:13:138 (1) - You might did this for the jump but looks a bit weird and makes flow a bit broken if you ask me. Adding Ctrl+G would make a different stack here 00:14:921 (1) - which looks better for me.
- 00:22:049 (2) - Ctrl+G for a better flow and improved jump?
- 00:32:148 (1) - Adding Ctrl+J here would make all this section better especially because it would follow better this 00:33:336 (1) - if you do this fix spacing if it's needed.
- 00:33:336 (1,2,3) - The stack here 00:34:227 (2,3) - is fine but this unstack 00:33:336 (1,2) - could be a bit confusing, I suggest to add more spacing here.
Note: you have many stuff like this, so I suppose you won't change anything, but at least have a look. - 01:38:683 (1,2,3,4,5) - You could make a jump pattern with this, shouldn't be a problem since the bpm is slow, it would make the map a bit more interesting :3
- 02:31:554 (5) - Ctrl+G? Looks better for me.
- 02:44:029 (1) - You've been adding NC when there's a SV change, so here should be another one as well.
- 02:48:188 (2) - I'd prefer to stack it with 02:48:485 (3) - because actually is like a bit annoying and broken the flow, anyways the current stack is not well done (y:27 => y:25) so if you aren't going to do my suggestion then just fix the stack.
- 03:24:128 (1) - After SV change, you've been adding another NC to avoid confusion -maybe-. For consistency I'd add it here as well.
- 03:56:504 (4) - NC due SV change.
- 03:58:880 (5) - Intentional unstack?
- 04:03:633 (3) - I'm not sure about this but I'd say this rhythm fits better: http://puu.sh/fkgQl/e40434b209.jpg
- 04:18:484 (4,5,1) - Though bpm is slow this can be a bit confusing due the rhythms and patterns you used in general, make the spacing consistent please.
- 04:22:643 (3,1) - Try something different, this overlap looks a bit untidy imo.
- 04:23:831 (1,2,3,4,5) - You could make a jump pattern here as well.
- 04:32:148 (1) - Unnecessary NC.
- 04:57:989 (1) - I'd make of this another slider which should finishes at 04:58:880 - the spinner doesn't fit here.