monizotic wrote:

Hi pc and ljqandylee Sorry for really late , I'm really really busy .. oh its OK its not too late yet >.0
okay , come for modding , it's just my suggestion
if it's useless , you can ignore that
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[richardfeder part]01:02:108 - add 5 , i hear something thereyes sure but add at 6
01:02:186 (62186|3) - if u add 5 at 01:02:108 , move this to 3 ? for pattern
01:14:999 (74999|2) - move to 4 ?x all bass are at 3
01:18:593 (78593|0) - move to 2 ?x intended
04:15:074 (255074|5) - move to 5 ?oh sure
04:44:137 (284137|2) - move to 2 ?x
04:45:074 (285074|4) - move to 6 ? and then 04:45:231 (285231|5,285231|5) - move it to 4 .. it's look pretty for patternI rearranged here a little bit but I dont want so many spaces
05:13:512 ~ 05:14:293 - try this ? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2500877oh nice XD

okkk sorry if my mod is useless .. i only focus on pattern cuz i'm noob about hitsound hahaoh its quite useful thank you very much!
btw .. sorry for late again , so here my it's my star
PS. good luck XD

monizotic wrote:

[ljqandylee part]01:41:405 (101405|2) - move to 1 ? it's intended
01:45:624 (105624|0) - move to 2 ? also intended
01:47:499 (107499|5) - move to 2 ? ^
02:23:593 (143593|3) - move to 3 ? improper to put the same as next measure
02:23:749 - add 4 sound is too quiet and it's unlike 02:24:374 bcz the latter one contains LN's end
02:49:139 - add 7 ? for drum abandoned the drum sound bcz it'll break the pattern ;w;
03:25:936 (205936|2) - move to 2 ? ok
03:10:624 (190624|0) - delete this .. i don't hear any drum here yeah, deleted

[ S a k u r a ] wrote:

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01:02:811 - remove a note x 这个chord一直都是triple
01:06:561 - remove 2 notesx ^
01:06:874 (66874|5,66952|1,67030|5) - 是鼓對吧?yes
01:11:718 - remove a note^
01:12:343 - remove a note?^
01:12:968 (72968|6) - remove?同样的 有crash的都是triple
01:13:436 - 和 01:13:749 - 是一樣的吧 移除一個是一样的 只不过01:13:436 (73436|4) - 这个贝斯没用长条写 用的是点
01:19:218 - add a note on 2OK

04:02:476 (242476|1) - different pitch from 04:02:081 (242081|1) - OK
04:17:418 - remove a note...maybe...orz
04:19:918 - ^
04:23:356 - remove a note跟前面都是一样的
04:24:762 - same as 04:24:449 - ? 還是說是vocal确实是我漏写了一个
04:32:731 - 加個音吧
04:36:793 - ^
04:37:887 - 加第2?
04:43:199 - 加?^不行加了要爆炸T.T
04:43:043 - 改LN 到 04:43:199 - ?OK这里重排了
04:47:106 - 這裡是不是應該把 04:46:949 (286949|6) - 分成兩個啊? 因為有換音 E到F# 大概 還是故意漏的主要是100%听不出来 而且如果分开写的话空间不够了
05:06:949 - ^^
05:03:043 - add a note同样的位置一直都是单note哦

[HS]
03:39:991 - ~ 04:06:127 - 有點大聲 調到 15% 不知道可不可以OK
00:35:780 (35780|1) - clap
00:36:405 (36405|4) -
00:37:030 (37030|4) -
00:37:655 (37655|6) -
00:40:780 (40780|5) -
00:41:405 (41405|2) -
00:42:030 (42030|2) - 以上都没有加 因为全都是bass并没有写鼓点所以没有加的理由
00:42:655 (42655|1) - OK
01:07:186 (67186|6,67264|4) -
02:12:968 (132968|4,133124|4,133593|0,133749|0) - clap
02:14:218 (134218|4,134374|5) - 以上都OK

good luck.
我不好別打我;w;

[ S a k u r a ] wrote:

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01:44:686 - remove a note fixed
02:31:093 - add a note on 1 added
02:41:014 - add a note 没听出有音……
02:54:218 (174218|6) - different from 02:54:530 (174530|6) - so move to 6? moved
03:22:499 - add a note added

Simple_Star wrote:

Hi there
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00:40:572 (40572|6) - 我感觉啊 既然你这里选择了这个音 00:40:702 - 那么这个也是必不可少的
反复测试感觉这里很奇怪我想了一下决定00:40:624 (40624|6) - 一根条子 不知道行不行因为我觉得 00:40:702 - 好像听不到东西

00:44:452 - 我感觉1/4音的话 这里就开始有了yes

00:44:725 - 其实这里是有个1/8的 看你的调整 不加的话 也没有多大的问题这个加了要死人

00:46:874 (46874|5) - 建议移到5轨 这边跟了长音之外和人声吧 这里的人声我感觉和 00:45:936 (45936|5) - 的并不相同OK！

01:07:343 (67343|3) - 我其实不太明白这个音的意思 能解释一下吗这是小提琴哦 其实看做人声也可以但是那样的话轨道要挪开

01:11:405 - 我认为这边的长条无论是Vocal还是小提琴都应该切开变成2根 如果是吉他的话当我没说啦我写的时候一定是醉了 OK

01:12:968 (72968|4) - 这根条子有点诡异 如果抓的是和01:13:749 (73749|4) - 同样的话

01:16:952 (76952|3,76952|5,77030|2,77030|0) - 感觉这里做成连点更有感觉干要死人了啦

05:16:402 (316402|4) - 我觉得还是回到白线比较好 这个感觉有点坑我改的更坑了点

Simple_Star wrote:

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01:49:999 (109999|4,110155|6,110311|4) - 感觉卡手 建议对调 对调更卡，01:50:311 (110311|4) 这个note在5号位比在7号位还是要好打一点的

02:46:952 (166952|2,167030|0) - 我的观点的话 连点更有些感觉 连点略阴，我在第四列加了个note

03:04:843 (184843|0) - 变成长条 在03:05:155 - 结束 这边也是吉他音吧 这个note是鼓点啊，吉他音的LN一直在呢，我把03:03:436 (183436|4)延长了下应该没问题了

03:10:311 (190311|5) - 干脆这个也移到7怎么样 不美观(pia

richardfeder wrote:

@lee 03:25:936 (205936|6,206405|4,206874|6) - 小星觉得这可能在1/3上 附近的也需要看看的样子 她书的对，但这里用1/3线切换LN的话，首先和鼓点的1/4错开很难看，其次打的时候也很别扭，我个人感觉没太大必要