OnosakiHito wrote:

Hm, one last thing in Muzukashii:
00:19:013 -
00:21:354 -
00:25:745 -

I think it wasn't a good idea from me to suggest having breaks here, what do you think TK...?
The parts are too much connected together, so having such breaks doesn't feel so good as I thought before.
This time I give it a go without many breaks. Just think about it the next time.

sheela901 wrote:

[Easy]
00:25:159 (1) - Maybe move the red little square to x:316 y:248 so it could be align to the head of 00:23:403 (3) ? Fixed
00:39:208 (3) - Maybe add a finish at the tail? Fixed
01:00:867 (3) - Add a new combo?
01:07:891 (4) - ^ Think about NC suggestion. pass

[Normal]
00:28:379 (2) - It kind of touch the bar. i move little down it!
00:33:940 (6) - At the tail, add a finish? Fixed!
01:04:818 (2) - I think it's better to move it to 01:04:964 .no,pass
01:19:598 (1) - Move the red little square to x:272 y:132. Fixed!

[Insane]
00:37:306 (1) - Move the little red square to x:200 y:180.Fixed!

[Hard]
01:16:232 (1,2) - Try Ctrl+G for a flow. no, already did in first mapping.

Good Luck!

wcx19911123 wrote:

no kd

[Easy]
01:03:208 - finish

[Normal]
01:05:549 - finish
01:21:940 - 01:27:940 - I hope you can use the same hitsounds as Easy diff in this part, Easy diff sounds better to me

[Hard]
00:06:135 - clap
01:21:940 - 01:27:940 - same as Normal here, Insane diff

nice slidertick using, but lack of an overall sense of hitsounds between different difficulties
jsut call me back then

Rakuen wrote:

grats!

I love this song, hope it's ranked faster

hope my recent mods weren't too bad (you didn't mention what's modded ;w;)

>.o)b

1. 01:21:940 - End kiai here for the standard diffs? Makes more sense to me, as well as being consistent with the taiko diffs.

1. 00:01:159 (1) - Try Ctrl+g on this. Flows better towards (2), and the jump isn't so big (the music isn't that intense here, and it's the very first 2 notes of the song). Will also be a bit more consistent with the spacing between 00:02:037 (3,4)
2. 00:05:549 (1) - Clap for consistence with 00:54:867 (1) - .
3. 00:35:110 (1,2) - Not too fond of the extended slider here. I don't think it really fits tbh, and the spacing makes it hard to read as well. If you look at 00:16:379 (1,2,3,4,5) - , it's the same rhythm, but you don't have any extended sliders, so there's no reason to have it here either. A rhythm like http://puu.sh/4Niaa.jpg works better imo.
4. 00:45:647 (1) - Same as above. Consider shortening this by 1/4 so it ends at 00:45:793 -
5. 00:53:988 (2,3,4) - I'd prefer finishes on (2,3) and start of (4) as well, but eh, maybe you'll find it spammy. Feel free to leave as is.
6. 00:56:184 (1) - Add finish here. Consistent with 01:05:549 (5) - .

1. 00:10:964 (2) - Blanket end of (1)? Makes the pattern look a bit neater.
2. 00:17:988 - Are these normal-sliderslide sounds intentional? If not, you might want to rename a soft-sliderslide to normal-sliderslide2 to avoid that sliding.
3. 00:25:159 (1,2,3) - Try ordering it like this: http://puu.sh/4NitZ.jpg so you don't get that anti-jump. It's the only one in the whole map, so it's kind of out of place imo.
4. 00:48:574 (2) - Finish on end, consistent with Insane.
5. 00:53:842 (1,2) - If you follow the suggestion in Insane, add finishes here as well.
6. 00:56:769 (1) - Why the NC? The symmetrical pattern looks much neater when they're all in one combo, so remove it.
7. 01:14:623 (3) - The repeaters before are fairly cool, but this one doesn't play that good. The music is mostly having a held note here, and not a triple. Imo, adding a note at 01:14:623 - , and leaving 01:14:769 - empty sounds and plays better.

1. 00:11:403 (2) - Off-screen slider: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1031405
2. 00:49:159 (2) - Finish. Same reason as Hard.
3. 00:55:013 (1) - Add whistles if you followed that from Hard/Insane.
4. 00:55:013 (1) - Remove Whistle from end, and add a clap instead. I'd remove the whistle from the start as well, and only keep the whistlebody.
5. 00:56:184 (1) - Finish on head.
6. 00:58:525 (1) - Remove NC from this. I don't see a reason for it to be there
7. 01:17:257 (1) - MIssed whistle on head.

1. 00:01:159 (1,2) - Ehh, this is harder than the beginning of Normal. It's also the only 1/2 slider in his diff, and is harder than necessary I think. Consider replacing this with a slider ending at 00:02:184 -, or go for a similar rhythm to 00:01:159 (1,2) - in Normal.
2. 00:31:598 (3) - Usually not a good idea to have 2 repeats on a short slider like this in an Easy, as it's hard to read and anticipate for a newbie. What about a rhythm like http://puu.sh/4Njdg.jpg ? Or you can think of something yourself of course.
3. 00:55:013 (1) - Add a clap on end.
4. 00:56:184 (1) - Same as 00:31:598 (3). Making a long slider like you did at 01:05:549 (1) - works well imo.
5. 01:17:257 (3) - Missing whistle on head.
6. Tbh, I feel like some parts of this s harder than Normal rhtyhm-wise. 3/2 rhythm such as 00:35:110 (1,2) - can really trip of beginners. Especially when there's irregular spacing as well, like at 00:58:964 (3) - (this even tripped me off a bit). So yeah, I'd suggest trying to make the Easy a bit easier, because curently, I'd say it's a tad too hard compared to how Normal plays in comparison. Star rating on Easy is 3.24 anyway, so it's already at the limit.

CXu wrote:

Yo.

[General]

1. 01:21:940 - End kiai here for the standard diffs? Makes more sense to me, as well as being consistent with the taiko diffs.

[Insane]

1. 00:01:159 (1) - Try Ctrl+g on this. Flows better towards (2), and the jump isn't so big (the music isn't that intense here, and it's the very first 2 notes of the song). Will also be a bit more consistent with the spacing between 00:02:037 (3,4)
2. 00:05:549 (1) - Clap for consistence with 00:54:867 (1) - .
3. 00:35:110 (1,2) - Not too fond of the extended slider here. I don't think it really fits tbh, and the spacing makes it hard to read as well. If you look at 00:16:379 (1,2,3,4,5) - , it's the same rhythm, but you don't have any extended sliders, so there's no reason to have it here either. A rhythm like http://puu.sh/4Niaa.jpg works better imo.
4. 00:45:647 (1) - Same as above. Consider shortening this by 1/4 so it ends at 00:45:793 -
5. 00:53:988 (2,3,4) - I'd prefer finishes on (2,3) and start of (4) as well, but eh, maybe you'll find it spammy. Feel free to leave as is. Adding Finish on (2),(3) accepted! and i'd prefer add finish on end of (4)!
6. 00:56:184 (1) - Add finish here. Consistent with 01:05:549 (5) - .

[Hard]

1. 00:10:964 (2) - Blanket end of (1)? Makes the pattern look a bit neater.
2. 00:17:988 - Are these normal-sliderslide sounds intentional? If not, you might want to rename a soft-sliderslide to normal-sliderslide2 to avoid that sliding.
3. 00:25:159 (1,2,3) - Try ordering it like this: http://puu.sh/4NitZ.jpg so you don't get that anti-jump. It's the only one in the whole map, so it's kind of out of place imo.
4. 00:48:574 (2) - Finish on end, consistent with Insane.
5. 00:53:842 (1,2) - If you follow the suggestion in Insane, add finishes here as well.
6. 00:56:769 (1) - Why the NC? The symmetrical pattern looks much neater when they're all in one combo, so remove it.
7. 01:14:623 (3) - The repeaters before are fairly cool, but this one doesn't play that good. The music is mostly having a held note here, and not a triple. Imo, adding a note at 01:14:623 - , and leaving 01:14:769 - empty sounds and plays better.

[Normal]

1. 00:11:403 (2) - Off-screen slider: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1031405
2. 00:49:159 (2) - Finish. Same reason as Hard.
3. 00:55:013 (1) - Add whistles if you followed that from Hard/Insane.
4. 00:55:013 (1) - Remove Whistle from end, and add a clap instead. I'd remove the whistle from the start as well, and only keep the whistlebody.
5. 00:56:184 (1) - Finish on head.
6. 00:58:525 (1) - Remove NC from this. I don't see a reason for it to be there
7. 01:17:257 (1) - MIssed whistle on head.

[Easy]

1. 00:01:159 (1,2) - Ehh, this is harder than the beginning of Normal. It's also the only 1/2 slider in his diff, and is harder than necessary I think. Consider replacing this with a slider ending at 00:02:184 -, or go for a similar rhythm to 00:01:159 (1,2) - in Normal.
2. 00:31:598 (3) - Usually not a good idea to have 2 repeats on a short slider like this in an Easy, as it's hard to read and anticipate for a newbie. What about a rhythm like http://puu.sh/4Njdg.jpg ? Or you can think of something yourself of course.
3. 00:55:013 (1) - Add a clap on end.
4. 00:56:184 (1) - Same as 00:31:598 (3). Making a long slider like you did at 01:05:549 (1) - works well imo.
5. 01:17:257 (3) - Missing whistle on head.
6. Tbh, I feel like some parts of this s harder than Normal rhtyhm-wise. 3/2 rhythm such as 00:35:110 (1,2) - can really trip of beginners. Especially when there's irregular spacing as well, like at 00:58:964 (3) - (this even tripped me off a bit). So yeah, I'd suggest trying to make the Easy a bit easier, because curently, I'd say it's a tad too hard compared to how Normal plays in comparison. Star rating on Easy is 3.24 anyway, so it's already at the limit.
   first of all, i try to low Star rating. but i think that easy do not have problem for playing.

Otherwise, the map is pretty nice. Call me back!

CXu wrote:

Rechecking then. No kds.

[Easy]
00:56:184 (1) - No hitsound? oh fixed!
00:58:964 (4) - I think you should fix the spacing for this one atleast. It's pretty confusing. stacked on 01:00:867 (3).
01:24:281 (1) - Missing hitsounds as well. fixed!

[Normal]
00:55:013 (1) - Clap on end? fixed!
01:02:623 (2) - Missed clap on start fixed!

[Hard]
01:26:037 (9) - Should be finish on head here. fixed!

Also sure you don't want to add a normal-sliderslide.wav like this? I think the change between soft->normal sliding sound sounds a bit weird in Hard. i added .wav you said. but i don't know what is difference! so, i decided to add normal-sliderslide2.wav.

Anyhow, that's it. Hopefully xD Poke me when you're done \o

1. Disable the Widescreen Support on all of the difficulties since you're not really using a SB in this map.

1. 00:53:842 (3,1) - This overlap here is really ugly and might be confusing for beginners, try to avoid it if possible.
2. 00:59:988 (2,3) - Spacing is wrong here, make sure to fix it properly with distance snap enabled.
3. 01:04:379 (1) - I'm not sure if this kind of slider is okay for an Easy difficulty.
4. 01:24:281 (1) - I don't think it's a good idea to use so many slider repeats, it might be confusing to read for beginners.

1. 01:07:891 (1) - This single combo here doesn't feel necessary, I'd remove it.

1. 00:05:110 (4,1) - This pattern feels a bit too tricky for a Hard difficulty to me, I'd just remove the circle and add another slider repeat instead.
2. 01:10:086 (1) - This single combo here doesn't feel necessary, I'd remove it.

1. 00:22:232 (1) - This slider could be made much better than right now, also it's not symmetric, not sure if you wanted that.

Andrea wrote:

~General~

1. Disable the Widescreen Support on all of the difficulties since you're not really using a SB in this map.

~Easy~

1. 00:53:842 (3,1) - This overlap here is really ugly and might be confusing for beginners, try to avoid it if possible.
   so, i tried like this!
2. 00:59:988 (2,3) - Spacing is wrong here, make sure to fix it properly with distance snap enabled.
   yes i knew. so already fixed that. like this
3. 01:04:379 (1) - I'm not sure if this kind of slider is okay for an Easy difficulty.
   i'm made like downing punch in video! hmm..i think that it is ok.
4. 01:24:281 (1) - I don't think it's a good idea to use so many slider repeats, it might be confusing to read for beginners.

yes i knew that too. so fixed it
~Normal~

1. 01:07:891 (1) - This single combo here doesn't feel necessary, I'd remove it. oh! i see! fixed!

~Hard~

1. 00:05:110 (4,1) - This pattern feels a bit too tricky for a Hard difficulty to me, I'd just remove the circle and add another slider repeat instead.fixed!
2. 01:10:086 (1) - This single combo here doesn't feel necessary, I'd remove it. fixed!

~Insane~

1. 00:22:232 (1) - This slider could be made much better than right now, also it's not symmetric, not sure if you wanted that.fixed!

Really cool map and song.

koreapenguin wrote:

첫랭 축하드려요 <3