Hello let's start without doing much of an introduction.
Nice song. It's relaxing.
Challenging
Relaxing
Calm
sorry for my bad english and I hope this helped. ~
Nice song. It's relaxing.
Challenging
- I like the small circlesize
- 00:02:050 (6,7) - I think you should make a slider out of 6. There's the pronounced tune at that point and the note later at 7, on the white tick seems more like a ghost note. I think it'd be more comfortable to play this one out, instead of the white tick later.
- 00:04:346 (11,1) - ^same as above
- 00:05:208 (2) - there's definitely 2 sounds I hear, so maybe use them
- 00:06:930 (6,7,8) - I don't understand that jump. There's neither an emphasize on that sound nor anything that would suggest something more dramatic. This part could be called overmapped, but I don't know if people are still allowed to use this term.
- 00:08:940 (11,1) - i see that you map it like this the whole time. But the main sound is on 11 not on 1 and you should try to change this for the whole map. It will feel much more comfortable when applied
- 00:09:227 (1,2) - change those sliders into circles because of noise
- 00:10:375 (3) - maybe add a little jump here? The music gets louder and is a bit higher pitched so a jump would be nice at this point.
- 00:11:523 (5) - this sliderend shouldn't be a sliderend. There's a little rhythm change and it feels like it's going back, so you should map this in your song. 00:11:810 - there should be a circle and a change of direction.
- 00:18:413 (1) - make that jump a bit smaller, it feels awkward because you just used all the motion-energy from before and now it's somehow strange.
- 00:20:423 (6,7) - again like before
- 00:23:581 (3) - maybe rotate this one a bit. (90°) This way you get better flow and it won't feel as strange as now.
- 00:24:155 (4) - this looks a bit strange and plays a bit strange, too. I would suggest you blanket 00:23:294 (2) - with this slider. You'd get a nice circular flow from the previous one and it'd feel a lot better than before. You'd also have to strg+g this one, though. If you apply my suggestion from before it will look like this:
- 00:26:164 (9,10,1) - make the end of 9, 10 and the start of 1 a straight line. it looks like this atm: but if you apply my suggestion it'll look more like this: , i know that's a bit of nitpicking, but I think this could improve the quality and it'll look much neater.
- 00:31:619 (10,11,1) - maybe make that jump curvy, so you can get the energy from the pattern before into motion. atm it plays like this: , but if you make a curve (and also use the same space between the circles) it looks like this and plays like this:
- 00:34:490 (6) - just because of looks, you should ctrl + j and ctrl + h 00:33:916 (5) - for this one. It'll be cooler
- 00:43:963 (4,5,6) - as suggested before, I think something curvy would fit better at this point. Because of flow and reasons.
- 00:44:825 (7) - This slider feels off. It touches 00:44:538 (6) - but it's also a reverse sound at this point. I suggest you end this slider at 00:45:111 - and start a new one at 00:45:398 which ends at 00:45:685 - then. Like this:
- 00:48:270 (7) - strg + g this one for flow. It's like this atm: but it'll play better if you change it and make it like this: before you change your pace 3 times now it's only 2 times and much smoother.
- 00:49:418 (9,10) - make this a straight line with the slider.
- 00:52:863 (7) - rotate this one a bit, so it won't touch 00:51:715 (3) -
- 00:54:873 (10,1) - make a slider out of those two notes. there's a relatively loud note here and you should show that with a slider.
- 00:57:456 (7,8,9) - I don't understand that sudden jump
- 01:05:494 - that loud sound should be played and not be ghosted by a sliderend. change that slider a bit so you can play thise note out.
- 01:08:365 (9) - to stack properly, you need to change to x: 172 y:286
- the rest is okay.
Relaxing
- 00:18:126 (4,1) - I doubt an antijump fits here. It becomes really fast before and now there's that sudden antijump and it feels weird. Use normale space here, please.
- 00:33:916 (4,5) - i think you should make a slider out of these two because it fits with the music. maybe make it look like this: this way it'll look neat and also you get the feeling of start for the next slider.
- 00:42:528 (2) - make that slider perfectly mirrored, please else it looks sloppy.
- 00:54:873 (5,1) - you should change them into a slider, because you used a slider for the same sound at 00:54:011 (3) - and I think it would fit if it feels the same while playing, too.
- nice diff else
Calm
- 00:45:973 (1) - i think that slider should have that wiggly-woggly-whatever thing at the note at 00:46:547 - too. Because that's where the sound is and it'll feel like playing the sound for newbies
- this is fine otherwise.
sorry for my bad english and I hope this helped. ~