Shiena Nishizawa - FUBUKI · forum

Knotts

Joined May 2013

Topic Starter

Knotts 2015-01-16T02:54:50+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, February 19, 2015 at 5:31:07 PM

Artist: Shiena Nishizawa
Title: FUBUKI
Source: Fleet Girls Collection KanColle Animation Sequence
Tags: ending TV Size kantai karia 艦隊これくしょん艦これ
BPM: 180
Filesize: 16919kb
Play Time: 01:26
Difficulties Available:

Easy (1.56 stars, 110 notes)
Hard (3.28 stars, 265 notes)
Insane (4.8 stars, 380 notes)
Karia's Insane (4.55 stars, 337 notes)
Normal (2.11 stars, 142 notes)

Download: Shiena Nishizawa - FUBUKI
Download: Shiena Nishizawa - FUBUKI (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#2

DL link if you need it: http://bloodcat.com/osu/s/263033

Difficulties:

Insane by me

Karia's Insane by Karia

Hard by me

Normal by me

Easy by me

NEW bg, mp3, and hitsounds - 2/19/15. Redownload if you need to!

Thanks for modding!

No Dap
-Yuzuriha-inori-
Gaia
Underflow
kamikin
koreapenguin
Firewest
Kibbleru
CakiP
Faded
handsome
appleeaterx
Joey
Asuna
Momochikun
Naitoshi
Garven

Last edited by Knotts 2017-03-14T07:05:38+00:00, edited 57 times in total.

Ujimatsu Chiya

2,480 posts

Joined December 2013

Ujimatsu Chiya 2015-01-17T07:07:38+00:00

omg great song, can I Join Extra? ~ㅅ~

Knotts

712 posts

Joined May 2013

Topic Starter

Knotts 2015-01-17T08:54:07+00:00

eINess wrote:
omg great song, can I Join Extra? ~ㅅ~

I don't think I'm going to have an extra this set actually. Sorry

Ujimatsu Chiya

2,480 posts

Joined December 2013

Ujimatsu Chiya 2015-01-17T11:37:45+00:00

oh.. ok :3

GL~

Ozato Fumika

Beatmap Nominator

3,379 posts

Joined July 2013

Ozato Fumika 2015-01-18T05:05:52+00:00

[General]

unrankably badly drawn boobs lol

SPOILER

[Easy]

AR4 OD4 HP4 you're kidding me right????????????????
00:25:140 (3,4,1) - what is this NC?
00:29:140 - clap
01:01:473 - bass
01:22:140 (3,4) - perfect symmetry would look nicer

[Normal]

HP OD too high for high bpm normal
00:29:140 - clap
00:10:140 (1) - don't really think this NC is needed
01:01:473 (4) - bass
01:08:473 (2) - this is 1/3 so just use a circle unless you wanna have complex rhythm change
this diff needs to have more 1/2 for better spread with hard diff

[Hard]

00:04:140 (2) - do you want this HP bar touch
00:06:140 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - these are all 1/3
00:11:556 (1,1) - not gonna happen in hard diff
00:29:140 (2) - clap
00:55:973 (3) - needs to be stacked on 00:55:806 (2) - for intuitive play
01:04:473 (4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - these are 1/3 also
01:15:140 (3) - players will click earlier than it is. make 01:14:473 (2) - reverse?
01:16:473 (1) - really unnecessary NC here. 01:16:140 (1,1) - these two beats are in 1 group
01:17:806 (1) - same as above
01:17:973 (2) - you can start NC here, this is where the vocal starts and would make more sense since this has nothing to do with 01:17:806 (1) -
01:20:473 (4,1) - why do you not have doubled spacing here?
01:01:473 - bass

[Insane]

please use 1/3 when it's 1/3 otherwise it's unrankable
00:29:140 - clap
01:01:473 - bass
01:25:140 (3,4,5,6,7) - manual stack for more safe movement? something like this
SPOILER

those 1/4s on 1/3 must be fixed. they are unrnakable

Knotts

712 posts

Joined May 2013

Topic Starter

Knotts 2015-01-18T09:49:29+00:00

No Dap wrote:
[General]
unrankably badly drawn boobs lol
SPOILER
[Easy]
AR4 OD4 HP4 you're kidding me right???????????????? o
00:25:140 (3,4,1) - what is this NC?
00:29:140 - clap
01:01:473 - bass
01:22:140 (3,4) - perfect symmetry would look nicer
[Normal]
HP OD too high for high bpm normal
00:29:140 - clap
00:10:140 (1) - don't really think this NC is needed
01:01:473 (4) - bass
01:08:473 (2) - this is 1/3 so just use a circle unless you wanna have complex rhythm change
this diff needs to have more 1/2 for better spread with hard diff i'll add some more later, too lazy rn
[Hard]
00:04:140 (2) - do you want this HP bar touch it doesn't touch
00:06:140 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - these are all 1/3
00:11:556 (1,1) - not gonna happen in hard diff
00:29:140 (2) - clap
00:55:973 (3) - needs to be stacked on 00:55:806 (2) - for intuitive play
01:04:473 (4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - these are 1/3 also would people let me keep this if i told them it was to play it simplified?
01:15:140 (3) - players will click earlier than it is. make 01:14:473 (2) - reverse?
01:16:473 (1) - really unnecessary NC here. 01:16:140 (1,1) - these two beats are in 1 group
01:17:806 (1) - same as above
01:17:973 (2) - you can start NC here, this is where the vocal starts and would make more sense since this has nothing to do with 01:17:806 (1) -
01:20:473 (4,1) - why do you not have doubled spacing here? I only double space where normal spacing would look ugly and here looks fine to me
01:01:473 - bass
[Insane]
please use 1/3 when it's 1/3 otherwise it's unrankable
00:29:140 - clap
01:01:473 - bass
01:25:140 (3,4,5,6,7) - manual stack for more safe movement? something like this last stream feels fine to play to me
SPOILER

those 1/4s on 1/3 must be fixed. they are unrnakable

Fixed whatever I didn't comment on. Thanks no daperino

-Yuzuriha

574 posts

Joined March 2012

-Yuzuriha 2015-01-18T10:16:00+00:00

General

audio lead in is 1500 or 2000 plz

Insane

00:10:472 (3,4) - It is near DS . hard to see

00:12:806 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5) - volume is down req ~

00:20:473 (4) - chenge note req

01:02:973 (4,5) - i don like this type :<
try!
http://gyazo.com/66682ed590165da6f795cdf6028734ae

01:08:473 (6) - chenge Form req
http://gyazo.com/ce6527ba3d5bcc7a0a48cc66fb8733f8

01:16:140 (1) - remove NC ?
01:17:473 (1) - ^

Hard

00:17:390 (3) - remove note
00:21:390 (3) - ^
00:50:056 (4) - ^

Normal

good diff

fine ~

Easy

good diff

fine~

--------------------------------------------------------

good luck ~

Knotts

712 posts

Joined May 2013

Topic Starter

Knotts 2015-01-18T17:47:16+00:00

-Yuzuriha-inori- wrote:
General

audio lead in is 1500 or 2000 plz 1500 felt too long so I used 1000 instead

Insane

00:10:472 (3,4) - It is near DS . hard to see

00:12:806 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5) - volume is down req ~

00:20:473 (4) - chenge note req why?

01:02:973 (4,5) - i don like this type :< I like how it is now
try!
http://gyazo.com/66682ed590165da6f795cdf6028734ae

01:08:473 (6) - chenge Form req I want to keep how everything is straight there
http://gyazo.com/ce6527ba3d5bcc7a0a48cc66fb8733f8

01:16:140 (1) - remove NC ?
01:17:473 (1) - ^ this one is for SV change

Hard

00:17:390 (3) - remove note
00:21:390 (3) - ^
00:50:056 (4) - ^

I hear triplets for all three of these though

Normal

good diff

fine ~

Easy

good diff

fine~

--------------------------------------------------------

good luck ~

Thanks for the mod!
No comment = fixed

Gaia

2,808 posts

Joined May 2013

Gaia 2015-01-19T02:19:22+00:00

[easy]
00:22:140 (3) - make a diamond hereeee

[normal]
00:07:473 (3) - blanket is off also dont overlap the ends
01:08:473 (2) - dont u like stacks? http://puu.sh/eImuX/40568d22e7.jpg
01:21:473 (2) - ^ http://puu.sh/eImCF/781608aeae.jpg

No Dap wrote:
this diff needs to have more 1/2 for better spread with hard diff

^ evident in the beginning where you have 2/1 sliders and 2/1 breaks, but in the hard you're mapping every single possible thing there is <:

[hard]
00:06:140 (1,2,3,4) - random pause in the middle
00:20:723 - circle here for the trumpet
00:23:473 (1,2,3,4,1) - holy crap ur 1/4 spacing = = this is a hard.. (00:24:806 (1) - i dont understand why this is the only one overlapping too, like the one after doesnt overlap o3o)
00:44:806 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^
01:04:806 (1) - these are 1/3's o3o
01:07:473 (1) - but you use 1/3 for this one? you gotta be consistent like cmon
01:16:473 (1) - 01:17:806 (1) - probably dont need these NCs

[karia]
00:22:806 (3) - you can try this, to keep ur spacing consistent http://puu.sh/eInX3/07553f0821.jpg
00:48:640 (3,1) - 00:49:973 (3,1) - try not to stack these?
00:54:806 (5,6) - move these out? its a bit close to the previous stack
01:24:973 (3,4) - omg

lolia

1,356 posts

Joined May 2012

lolia 2015-01-19T03:40:47+00:00

Gaia wrote:
[karia]
00:22:806 (3) - you can try this, to keep ur spacing consistent http://puu.sh/eInX3/07553f0821.jpg Hmm,,I like current pattern and I don't care about the 1/4 distance in this part xP
00:48:640 (3,1) - 00:49:973 (3,1) - try not to stack these? The 1st one is 1/8 slider, so I don't want that unstack in Insane diff. And the 2nd one is..changed the rhythm to 1/4!
00:54:806 (5,6) - move these out? its a bit close to the previous stack sure
01:24:973 (3,4) - omg no problem here hehe

Thanks for modding!

SPOILER

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: Shiena Nishizawa-Fubuki.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 58723
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 54140,58473
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 3.399999

[Metadata]
Title:Fubuki
TitleUnicode:吹雪
Artist:Nishizawa Shiena
ArtistUnicode:西沢幸奏
Creator:Knotts
Version:Karia's Insane
Source:艦隊これくしょん -艦これ-
Tags:ending TV Size kancolle kantai collection
BeatmapID:604817
BeatmapSetID:263033

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.76
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,0,"FubuHQ.flv"
0,0,"bg.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Sylphi

osu! Alumni

3,301 posts

Joined February 2012

Sylphi 2015-01-19T11:57:38+00:00

[General]

normal-hitwhistle is a bit loud in your difficulty.

[Easy]

00:08:806 (3,4) - this rhythm is a bit weird. I think it would be better changing to this.
00:06:140 (3,1) - Toggle new combo for consistency.
00:08:806 (3) - New combo for consistency.
00:10:806 (1) - Remove new combo for consistency.
00:16:806 - I think it fits more music to start new combo cycle.
00:19:140 - It sounds empty. How about add circle?

[Normal]

00:18:140 (3) - Add normal whistle on repeat arrow.
00:56:473 (3) - I think here is better clap than normal whistle.
01:08:473 (2) - I guess you forgot to add clap.
00:40:806 - Why new combo cycle is changed on this part?

[Hard]

00:02:140 (1) - I think it would be better flow to apply reverse section.
00:13:140 (2,3) - It isn't a issue. but how about reduce distance between these by a little?
01:07:807 (2) - End to 01:08:029. It is 1 / 3 rhythm.
01:24:473 (4,1) - Same as 00:13:140.

[Karia's Insane]

00:39:140 (3) - How about apply reverse section?

[Insane]

01:04:806 (1) - End to 01:05:029. It is 1 / 3 rhythm.

lolia

1,356 posts

Joined May 2012

lolia 2015-01-19T13:11:23+00:00

Underflow wrote:
[Karia's Insane]
00:39:140 (3) - How about apply reverse section? 그것도 괜찮긴 한데 여기는 찍을때부터 (2,3,1)을 세트로 찍으려고 했던부분이라 이건 이대로 두고싶다는 마음이 앞서네요,,

Thanks for modding!

hehe

1,961 posts

Joined November 2012

hehe 2015-01-19T13:47:36+00:00

just dropping by

kamikin_old

286 posts

Joined June 2014

kamikin_old 2015-01-19T17:04:12+00:00

Hi hi! From my queue!

Easy

00:02:140 (2) - I dont think this fits with 1 very well, maybe make 1 like 2?
00:08:806 (3,4) - The different lengths make the pattern look strange
Maybe something like this? (to try and make flow better as well)

00:25:140 (3) - Why put this at a different angle?
00:27:473 (3,4) - These could blanket each other well
00:32:140 (2) - Make this curved as well to keep it consistent with 1
00:34:473 (2) - Blanket? I think it make the flow better and looks better (2 is given purpouse in the pattern)

00:36:806 (1) - You should curve this to keep it consistent with 2
00:42:140 (1) - Either curve this or make 2 the same for consistency
00:48:806 (2) - The red point make this slider awkward aesthetically, probably just make this a normal blanket
00:56:806 (1) - This slider shape looks off
01:00:806 (3,4) - Double blanket
01:03:473 (3) - Straighten this imo
01:06:473 (2) - Blanket?
01:07:473 (1) - This should be obviously not a blanket
01:08:806 (3,4) - Double blanket
01:10:140 (1) - maybe blanket 2?
01:12:806 (1) - This slider shape is awkward, straighten or curve?
01:15:473 (1) - When this happens make the slider obviously a blanket or obviously not, this is halfway
01:18:140 (1) - Curve the first part before the red point?

Normal

00:16:806 (1) - Why red point?
00:17:473 (2) - Make this blanket 3 or the long short pattern looks off
00:28:806 (1,2) - Short long pattern again
00:38:806 (2,3) - Curved for consistency
00:46:140 (3) - Blanket 2
00:51:473 (3) - Use this to blanket 1
00:56:140 (2,3,4) - Keep these as a normal triangle

01:02:640 (2) - Move this up
01:02:806 (3) - Curve
01:06:140 (3) - Take off the repeat and use a copied version of 01:04:806 (1) -
01:15:473 (1) - Make this peel off 4

01:18:140 (1) - use a version of 01:16:806 (8) - for consistency

Hard

00:00:807 (1) - Blanket?
00:02:806 (2) - Curve
00:04:806 (1) - Make this parallel to 00:03:473 (1) - For a better looking pattern
00:08:473 (4) - Unstack, if anything should be stacked it should be 2 + 3
00:09:473 (3) - Curve?
00:12:806 (1,2,3,4) - Quieten these a bit
00:14:806 (3,4) - Why not (it looks better)

00:16:140 (3) - Straighten for consistency with 4 and 1
00:21:973 (5,1) - Awkward flow imo
00:23:806 (2,3,4) - The blue ticks sound strange
00:25:140 (2,4) - Short long
00:26:806 (4) - Curve
00:32:140 (4,5) - Imo, this looks neater

00:39:140 (4,1) - Short long
00:44:806 (1) - Strange slider shape, maybe use 00:45:140 (2) -
00:52:806 (1) - Straighten
00:55:473 (1) - Clap as well at the beginning
00:57:806 (4) - Curve
01:08:140 (3) - Weird slider shape for the music
01:08:806 (1) - Blanket
01:11:473 (1) - On this second 'ku' you sound map it the same as 01:10:140 (1) -

Couldn't play any of the higher diffs, I hope I was useful!

Knotts

712 posts

Joined May 2013

Topic Starter

Knotts 2015-01-19T22:30:59+00:00

Gaia

Gaia wrote:
[easy]
00:22:140 (3) - make a diamond hereeee

[normal]
00:07:473 (3) - blanket is off also dont overlap the ends
01:08:473 (2) - dont u like stacks? http://puu.sh/eImuX/40568d22e7.jpg
01:21:473 (2) - ^ http://puu.sh/eImCF/781608aeae.jpg

No Dap wrote:
this diff needs to have more 1/2 for better spread with hard diff
^ evident in the beginning where you have 2/1 sliders and 2/1 breaks, but in the hard you're mapping every single possible thing there is <:

[hard]
00:06:140 (1,2,3,4) - random pause in the middle
00:20:723 - circle here for the trumpet
00:23:473 (1,2,3,4,1) - holy crap ur 1/4 spacing = = this is a hard.. (00:24:806 (1) - i dont understand why this is the only one overlapping too, like the one after doesnt overlap o3o)
00:44:806 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^
01:04:806 (1) - these are 1/3's o3o
01:07:473 (1) - but you use 1/3 for this one? you gotta be consistent like cmon
01:16:473 (1) - 01:17:806 (1) - probably dont need these NCs

Fixed everything

Underflow

Underflow wrote:
[General]
normal-hitwhistle is a bit loud in your difficulty. might change it to soft-hitwhistle later
[Easy]
00:08:806 (3,4) - this rhythm is a bit weird. I think it would be better changing to this. cool
00:06:140 (3,1) - Toggle new combo for consistency. fixed
00:08:806 (3) - New combo for consistency. ^
00:10:806 (1) - Remove new combo for consistency. ^
00:16:806 - I think it fits more music to start new combo cycle. idk, you told me to fix the other NCs for consistency but then you tell me to break it for this
00:19:140 - It sounds empty. How about add circle?
[Normal]
00:18:140 (3) - Add normal whistle on repeat arrow. I dont think it'd fit
00:56:473 (3) - I think here is better clap than normal whistle. fixed
01:08:473 (2) - I guess you forgot to add clap. oops
00:40:806 - Why new combo cycle is changed on this part? I think i fixed all of the inconsistencies
[Hard]
00:02:140 (1) - I think it would be better flow to apply reverse section. I think it flows alright already
00:13:140 (2,3) - It isn't a issue. but how about reduce distance between these by a little? ok
01:07:807 (2) - End to 01:08:029. It is 1 / 3 rhythm. fixed
01:24:473 (4,1) - Same as 00:13:140. ^
[Insane]
01:04:806 (1) - End to 01:05:029. It is 1 / 3 rhythm. fixed

kamikin

kamikin wrote:
Hi hi! From my queue!

Easy
00:02:140 (2) - I dont think this fits with 1 very well, maybe make 1 like 2? looks fine to me
00:08:806 (3,4) - The different lengths make the pattern look strange fixed in previous mod
Maybe something like this? (to try and make flow better as well)

00:25:140 (3) - Why put this at a different angle? sometimes i don't like being parallel
00:27:473 (3,4) - These could blanket each other well i like it the way it is
00:32:140 (2) - Make this curved as well to keep it consistent with 1 i don't think that's necessary here
00:34:473 (2) - Blanket? I think it make the flow better and looks better (2 is given purpouse in the pattern) not a fan of that tbh

00:36:806 (1) - You should curve this to keep it consistent with 2 ehh, why not. i'll change this one
00:42:140 (1) - Either curve this or make 2 the same for consistency no need
00:48:806 (2) - The red point make this slider awkward aesthetically, probably just make this a normal blanket fine to me
00:56:806 (1) - This slider shape looks off ^
01:00:806 (3,4) - Double blanket not sure what your blanket idea looks like but this already looks fine to me
01:03:473 (3) - Straighten this imo flow from (2) would be a little awkward then
01:06:473 (2) - Blanket? I don't think it'd look good
01:07:473 (1) - This should be obviously not a blanket fixed (unless you were thinking of something else)
01:08:806 (3,4) - Double blanket I'd rather keep them looking how they already are
01:10:140 (1) - maybe blanket 2? Would kinda be awkward flow and i'd have to move a lot of stuff around.
01:12:806 (1) - This slider shape is awkward, straighten or curve? i dont see the awkwardness
01:15:473 (1) - When this happens make the slider obviously a blanket or obviously not, this is halfway well it goes around it so i'd consider it a blanket
01:18:140 (1) - Curve the first part before the red point? sure

Normal
00:16:806 (1) - Why red point? i like to spice things up sometimes, heh.
00:17:473 (2) - Make this blanket 3 or the long short pattern looks off looks fine to me
00:28:806 (1,2) - Short long pattern again ^
00:38:806 (2,3) - Curved for consistency doesn't really affect the flow since you pretty much play (2) as a curved slider
00:46:140 (3) - Blanket 2 you seem to really like blankets. I only use them sparingly
00:51:473 (3) - Use this to blanket 1^
00:56:140 (2,3,4) - Keep these as a normal triangle sure

01:02:640 (2) - Move this up fine how it is
01:02:806 (3) - Curve ^
01:06:140 (3) - Take off the repeat and use a copied version of 01:04:806 (1) - I think the repeat lets me follow the vocals a little better here
01:15:473 (1) - Make this peel off 4 That'd make it kinda hard to keep (2) is DS space without creating awkward flow or going off screen

01:18:140 (1) - use a version of 01:16:806 (8) - for consistency there's really no need for consistency on that

Hard
00:00:807 (1) - Blanket? not a fan of that type of blanketing
00:02:806 (2) - Curve no need, plays fine
00:04:806 (1) - Make this parallel to 00:03:473 (1) - For a better looking pattern sure
00:08:473 (4) - Unstack, if anything should be stacked it should be 2 + 3 not sure of the reasoning
00:09:473 (3) - Curve? Don't like it curved
00:12:806 (1,2,3,4) - Quieten these a bit sounds fine to me
00:14:806 (3,4) - Why not (it looks better) spacing's too crazy for me

00:16:140 (3) - Straighten for consistency with 4 and 1 Looks/plays fine to me
00:21:973 (5,1) - Awkward flow imo not seeing it
00:23:806 (2,3,4) - The blue ticks sound strange seems like it fits to me
00:25:140 (2,4) - Short long nothing wrong with this
00:26:806 (4) - Curve ^
00:32:140 (4,5) - Imo, this looks neater too much stacking, hard to read

00:39:140 (4,1) - Short long no need to change
00:44:806 (1) - Strange slider shape, maybe use 00:45:140 (2) - doesn't look good like that. sometimes variety is a good thing
00:52:806 (1) - Straighten no need
00:55:473 (1) - Clap as well at the beginning i dont hear one
00:57:806 (4) - Curve no need
01:08:140 (3) - Weird slider shape for the music its fine
01:08:806 (1) - Blanket remapped from previous mod so it already blankets something
01:11:473 (1) - On this second 'ku' you sound map it the same as 01:10:140 (1) - there's really no reason to change this

Couldn't play any of the higher diffs, I hope I was useful! no problem!

Thanks for the mod guys. Sorry if my responses seemed a little half-ass, lots to apply.

koreapenguin

1,747 posts

Joined March 2012

koreapenguin 2015-01-20T05:40:28+00:00

Let's Mod this map \o/

General

disabled in Karia's Insane diff

Easy

you must fix this http://puu.sh/eLCDV/3c706d1f26.png about vol
00:15:473 - 00:56:723 - i guess this newcombo pattern isn't 8 bar. newcombo seem early 4 bar, compare Easy diff with Normal diff. ex) http://puu.sh/eLCf3/a2b57224ad.jpg

nothing to say

Normal

you must fix this http://puu.sh/eLCDV/3c706d1f26.png about vol
00:46:140 (1,2) - isn't big problem just there are feel so empty ya ears bored imo, so how about add whistle in slider ends?
same as intro part, it's up to you

Hard

same here you should fix this http://puu.sh/eLFaL/3b8ed6bebb.png
00:04:806 (1) - i think so slider end is should be 00:05:473 - here also weird imo, exactly vocal until here 00:05:390 - and think some echo then http://puu.sh/eLDJn/127cf074a1.jpg it would be batter.
01:24:473 (4,1) - don't look at only your veiw, this part might be confuse. think 01:22:806 (3,4) - 1/2 gap and 01:24:473 (4,1) - 1/4 gap here almost same also you added newcombo they will think 01:24:473 (4,1) - 1/2 gap here imo. or ask it for more opinions

nothing to say too much

카리아의 미친

하... 매핑굇 ㅡㅡ 제가 저번에 카리아님 맵 모딩할때도 언랭요소몇개좀 만들어두어달라고 말씀드렸던적이있었던거같은데.

Insane

just check this http://puu.sh/eLHe5/777a119e13.png
nothing to say

Knotts

712 posts

Joined May 2013

Topic Starter

Knotts 2015-01-20T06:04:18+00:00

koreapenguin wrote:
Let's Mod this map \o/

General
disabled in Karia's Insane diff fixed

Easy
you must fix this http://puu.sh/eLCDV/3c706d1f26.png about vol fixed
00:15:473 - 00:56:723 - i guess this newcombo pattern isn't 8 bar. newcombo seem early 4 bar, compare Easy diff with Normal diff. ex) http://puu.sh/eLCf3/a2b57224ad.jpg I'm not sure what this means. Can you tell karia and then he can tell me

nothing to say

Normal
you must fix this http://puu.sh/eLCDV/3c706d1f26.png about vol fixed
00:46:140 (1,2) - isn't big problem just there are feel so empty ya ears bored imo, so how about add whistle in slider ends? ok
same as intro part, it's up to you

Hard
same here you should fix this http://puu.sh/eLFaL/3b8ed6bebb.png fixed
00:04:806 (1) - i think so slider end is should be 00:05:473 - here also weird imo, exactly vocal until here 00:05:390 - and think some echo then ok
01:24:473 (4,1) - don't look at only your veiw, this part might be confuse. think 01:22:806 (3,4) - 1/2 gap and 01:24:473 (4,1) - 1/4 gap here almost same also you added newcombo they will think 01:24:473 (4,1) - 1/2 gap here imo. or ask it for more opinions moved a little closer

nothing to say too much

Insane
just check this http://puu.sh/eLHe5/777a119e13.png fixed
nothing to say

Thanks for the mod and star!

Trynna

714 posts

Joined May 2013

Trynna 2015-01-20T06:42:35+00:00

love this music, lol

[Normal]

00:11:473 (1) - remove slider and add spinner

[Hard]

00:06:584 (2) - remove circle
00:06:473 - add a little spin with a back arrow
00:07:140 - add circle
00:07:973 (2) - change it to 1/3 and put in 00:08:029 (2) -
00:08:695 - add circle (1/3)
00:10:140 (1,2,3,4) - change sliders to 1/3 and use one backarrow
01:06:723 (3) - unnecessary circle
01:15:473 (1,2) - change to 1/3 and use one back arrow
01:16:695 - add circle (1/3)
01:16:806 (1,2) - change to 1/3 and use one back arrow

[Karia's Insane]

00:11:473 (1) - remove circle and add spinner

[Insane]

00:01:306 - add a circle here maybe
idk

good luck

Knotts

712 posts

Joined May 2013

Topic Starter

Knotts 2015-01-20T07:39:53+00:00

Firewest wrote:
love this music, lol

[Normal]

00:11:473 (1) - remove slider and add spinner There wouldn't be enough recover time unfortunately. Had to remove the spinner

[Hard]

00:06:584 (2) - remove circle Used to follow the vocal
00:06:473 - add a little spin with a back arrow Circle makes it easier and follows the vocals in a simple fashion
00:07:140 - add circle I don't really want an object there because that'd be a little too much for a hard, plus i skipped it 00:09:806
00:07:973 (2) - change it to 1/3 and put in 00:08:029 (2) - done
00:08:695 - add circle (1/3) I want to limit the amount of 1/3s I have in the hard and i dont think its too necessary to have a note for that vocal
00:10:140 (1,2,3,4) - change sliders to 1/3 and use one backarrow ^
01:06:723 (3) - unnecessary circle it's used to somewhat follow the vocal
01:15:473 (1,2) - change to 1/3 and use one back arrow not really necessary
01:16:695 - add circle (1/3) ^
01:16:806 (1,2) - change to 1/3 and use one back arrow ^

[Insane]

00:01:306 - add a circle here maybe doesn't seem necessary to me
idk

good luck

Thanks for the mod! (someone help me with the whistles in the beginning, I have no idea what I'm doing

)

nika mika

397 posts

Joined January 2014

nika mika 2015-01-20T08:53:14+00:00

Hi~from my queue.
[Insane]
01:06:806 (4) – start at here01:06:723 -
Some suggestions on rhythm:
00:00:140 -00:00:640 –00:08:723 -00:58:056 -01:14:056 -add
00:01:640 -00:01:806 -00:05:640 -00:58:306 -00:52:723 -00:58:640 -00:58:723 -01:01:306 -01:07:306 -01:07:390 –delete
I personally think you are overusing triples, so delete some if you do think so.
[Hard]
00:06:140 (1,2,3,4,5) –fill those 1/3s
00:13:473 (3) – this distance is too far for hard
01:24:806 (1) -^
00:58:640 (4,5) –delete
01:16:390 - 01:17:723 -10% volume here
[Normal]
00:11:473 –I suggest a spinner instead of a slider here
00:12:806 –If you take the suggestion above add some notes here
01:04:806 (1) - 01:07:473 (1) - make a reverse slider like 01:06:140 (3) –
[Easy]
No big problems. Nice mapped.

lolia

1,356 posts

Joined May 2012

lolia 2015-01-20T10:17:53+00:00

koreapenguin wrote:
Karia's Trash
하... 매핑굇 ㅡㅡ 제가 저번에 카리아님 맵 모딩할때도 언랭요소몇개좀 만들어두어달라고 말씀드렸던적이있었던거같은데. 헐, 하나 있었죠. 1/6 슬라

Firewest wrote:
[Karia's Insane]
00:11:473 (1) - remove circle and add spinner Here is bit weird timing to me, so I don't want to it @3@

Thanks for moddings!!

Knotts

712 posts

Joined May 2013

Topic Starter

Knotts 2015-01-20T15:10:42+00:00

nikachyan wrote:
Hi~from my queue.
[Insane]
01:06:806 (4) – start at here01:06:723 - not really trying to map the vocals there
Some suggestions on rhythm:
00:00:140 -00:00:640 –00:08:723 -00:58:056 -01:14:056 -add the notes in the beginning are before the offset. The other's don't really require anything on them
00:01:640 -00:01:806 -00:05:640 -00:58:306 -00:52:723 -00:58:640 -00:58:723 -01:01:306 -01:07:306 -01:07:390 –delete don't see any point
I personally think you are overusing triples, so delete some if you do think so.
[Hard]
00:06:140 (1,2,3,4,5) –fill those 1/3s can't find a way to without making it ridiculous for a hard
00:13:473 (3) – this distance is too far for hard not really, looks pretty close to me
01:24:806 (1) -^ ^
00:58:640 (4,5) –delete no need
01:16:390 - 01:17:723 -10% volume here i can't hear them at the volume it's at now so no need
[Normal]
00:11:473 –I suggest a spinner instead of a slider here not enough recovery time
00:12:806 –If you take the suggestion above add some notes here
01:04:806 (1) - 01:07:473 (1) - make a reverse slider like 01:06:140 (3) – don't want to overuse that
[Easy]
No big problems. Nice mapped.

Thanks for the mod

Kibbleru

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5,844 posts

Joined August 2013

Kibbleru 2015-01-20T22:19:21+00:00

hi m4m

general

get a better mp3 wtf (tbh it could be louder, its still far from being clipped yet) or maybe the mp3 quality is okay but needs to be a bit louder.
get someone to check timing (ticclick maybe) the offset sounds slightly early but maybe its just me
holy shit ur hitsounds are clipped af

insanerino

01:15:140 (7) - nc? sv change
00:08:029 - this vocal suppose to be on 1/3 i think
01:17:806 (1) - ^
01:18:473 (2) - ^
01:18:806 (4) - ^
man fk it look at karia's diff for reference.
01:19:362 (6) - im not too sure if this is suppose to be 1/2 or 1/3 judging by the general "feeling" it should be 1/3 i think but idk
00:24:390 - clap sounds a bit loud here.. you can try using drum sample hitnormal :3 imo it works nice for the quiet streams
00:45:390 - ^
00:49:973 - i guess you can add a triplet here, optional
01:00:306 (3) - jump doesn't really fit :X i don't hear anything here so just make the spacing smaller imo
01:04:806 (1) - slider end should also be on 1/3
01:16:473 (1) - ^
00:08:695 - there are vocals on 1/3 but i guess its also correct if you say you follow the drums i recommend you use 1/3 for this entire section though 00:07:806 (2,3,4,5) - like karia did

hi karia

use od7 imo since this is the easier insane
00:07:695 (2) - kinda overmaped but i guess it plays cool o_O
00:39:140 (3,1) - blah nazi space this out abit, they almost touch and look a bit meh
00:47:723 - sorry what? i don't hear anything here..
00:48:640 (3) - maybe remove 1 repeat, makes it nicer to play considering (i think) this should be the easier insane
01:24:806 (1,2,3) - this is somewhat bad structure. with here you established the fact that you will be using triplet stacks however here 01:25:140 (4,5,6,7,8) - you switched and stacked 5 notes at once, i don't really hear that much of a difference music wise so i'm not sure why you did that.
01:19:362 (6) - im not too sure if this is suppose to be 1/2 or 1/3 judging by the general "feeling" it should be 1/3 i think but idk
00:24:473 (2) - might as well nc this?
00:44:806 - why not do something similar to 00:23:473 - ? your choice though
01:09:473 - maybe u can end kiai here instead since this is the start of the lead-in
tbh i would prefer if this got nerfed even more cuz it'll fit the spread better particularly i would nerf some of these 1/4 jumps like 00:14:640 (2,3) - 00:15:306 (5,1) - 00:17:306 (2,3) - and some of your 1/3 stuff lol. things like this 00:07:695 (2,3,4,5) - are really hard to play.

hard

00:06:140 (1,2,3,4,5) - i see that you're trying to simplify, but wtf is this rhythm, you missed all the strong white ticks,
00:09:140 (2,3) - same as insane, this part should be 1/3
00:23:473 (1,2,3,4) - woah k nerf this a bit :X
00:44:806 (1,2,3,4) - ^ just make 00:44:806 (1,3) - 1/2 sliders cuz they have drum beats on the red ticks
00:22:806 (4,5) - u know parts like these you can just have a jump so they don't retardedly overlap lol :X unless this was on purpose
00:43:306 (6,7,1) - when you have a triplet at the end of a jump, it becomes retardedly hard to hit. i wouldn't do this lol
00:19:306 (5,6,1) - ^
01:05:140 (2,3) - okay stacking this just gets worse lol
01:04:473 (4) - fk you probably have a bunch of sliders that should end on 1/3 again. just check insane pls.
01:25:806 (4,1) - ehh don't do this lol. this gets somewhat confusing
01:24:473 (4,1) - ^
01:16:140 (1,2) -
01:17:473 (1,2) -
yeh every single one lol. the map is hard enough with your overlaps

normal

yeah ar 5... balances spread more and fits better
00:42:140 (4) - this note is too hidden, hard to catch
01:21:306 (2) - i don't see much of a reason for this note to be here
01:18:640 (2) - lol this should be 1/3 just remove it.
01:18:806 (3) - ^similar, make this 1/1

easy

00:26:140 (1,4) - lol is this overlap intentional
damn this is a nice diff o/

call me back when u get these fixed.

nvm this is only 5 days old. wait a bit pls lol

lolia

1,356 posts

Joined May 2012

lolia 2015-01-21T01:30:07+00:00

Kibbleru wrote:
hi karia hello //
use od7 imo since this is the easier insane sure
00:07:695 (2) - kinda overmaped but i guess it plays cool o_O xD
00:39:140 (3,1) - blah nazi space this out abit, they almost touch and look a bit meh fixed
00:47:723 - sorry what? i don't hear anything here.. Right ww, fixed
00:48:640 (3) - maybe remove 1 repeat, makes it nicer to play considering (i think) this should be the easier insane Hmm,, ok
01:24:806 (1,2,3) - this is somewhat bad structure. with here you established the fact that you will be using triplet stacks however here 01:25:140 (4,5,6,7,8) - you switched and stacked 5 notes at once, i don't really hear that much of a difference music wise so i'm not sure why you did that. fixed to same rhythm!
01:19:362 (6) - im not too sure if this is suppose to be 1/2 or 1/3 judging by the general "feeling" it should be 1/3 i think but idk Maybe should be 1/2 from 01:19:306 - here. fixed
00:24:473 (2) - might as well nc this? This is a just circle, so I want to keep it xP
00:44:806 - why not do something similar to 00:23:473 - ? your choice though The music is more silent than there, so that SV change can't big effect imo x)
01:09:473 - maybe u can end kiai here instead since this is the start of the lead-in fixed
tbh i would prefer if this got nerfed even more cuz it'll fit the spread better particularly i would nerf some of these 1/4 jumps like 00:14:640 (2,3) - 00:15:306 (5,1) - 00:17:306 (2,3) - and some of your 1/3 stuff lol. things like this 00:07:695 (2,3,4,5) - are really hard to play. fixed several 1/4 rhythms, but 1/3 is not so hard imo QnQ

thanks for modding!

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Knotts

712 posts

Joined May 2013

Topic Starter

Knotts 2015-01-21T04:06:46+00:00

Kibbleru wrote:
hi m4m i don't remember when we made this agreement, but whatever lmao

general
get a better mp3 wtf (tbh it could be louder, its still far from being clipped yet) or maybe the mp3 quality is okay but needs to be a bit louder. i'll get working on these things tomorrow or something
get someone to check timing (ticclick maybe) the offset sounds slightly early but maybe its just me
holy shit ur hitsounds are clipped af
insanerino
01:15:140 (7) - nc? sv change Do these NC apply when everything before it were circles? Not sure if this is really necessary
00:08:029 - this vocal suppose to be on 1/3 i think ...fk
01:17:806 (1) - ^ ^
01:18:473 (2) - ^ ^
01:18:806 (4) - ^ ^
man fk it look at karia's diff for reference.
01:19:362 (6) - im not too sure if this is suppose to be 1/2 or 1/3 judging by the general "feeling" it should be 1/3 i think but idk sounds like 1/2 to me here
00:24:390 - clap sounds a bit loud here.. you can try using drum sample hitnormal :3 imo it works nice for the quiet streams k
00:45:390 - ^ ^
00:49:973 - i guess you can add a triplet here, optional added
01:00:306 (3) - jump doesn't really fit :X i don't hear anything here so just make the spacing smaller imo
01:04:806 (1) - slider end should also be on 1/3 k
01:16:473 (1) - ^ ^
00:08:695 - there are vocals on 1/3 but i guess its also correct if you say you follow the drums i recommend you use 1/3 for this entire section though 00:07:806 (2,3,4,5) - like karia did
done

hard
00:06:140 (1,2,3,4,5) - i see that you're trying to simplify, but wtf is this rhythm, you missed all the strong white ticks, fixed
00:09:140 (2,3) - same as insane, this part should be 1/3 ^
00:23:473 (1,2,3,4) - woah k nerf this a bit :X 1/2's it is
00:44:806 (1,2,3,4) - ^ just make 00:44:806 (1,3) - 1/2 sliders cuz they have drum beats on the red ticks ^
00:22:806 (4,5) - u know parts like these you can just have a jump so they don't retardedly overlap lol :X unless this was on purpose it was on purpose (kinda copied Karia's style on the hard he made for me a while back lol
00:43:306 (6,7,1) - when you have a triplet at the end of a jump, it becomes retardedly hard to hit. i wouldn't do this lol doesn't feel that hard to hit
00:19:306 (5,6,1) - ^ ^
01:05:140 (2,3) - okay stacking this just gets worse lol
01:04:473 (4) - fk you probably have a bunch of sliders that should end on 1/3 again. just check insane pls. i think i got most of them
01:25:806 (4,1) - ehh don't do this lol. this gets somewhat confusing k
01:24:473 (4,1) - ^ k
01:16:140 (1,2) - k
01:17:473 (1,2) - k
yeh every single one lol. the map is hard enough with your overlaps k
normal
yeah ar 5... balances spread more and fits better i'll take your word since i know nothing about spread
00:42:140 (4) - this note is too hidden, hard to catch fixed
01:21:306 (2) - i don't see much of a reason for this note to be here removed
01:18:640 (2) - lol this should be 1/3 just remove it. k
01:18:806 (3) - ^similar, make this 1/1 k
easy
00:26:140 (1,4) - lol is this overlap intentional fixed
damn this is a nice diff o/
call me back when u get these fixed.

nvm this is only 5 days old. wait a bit pls lol

RIP, never mapping 1/3 again. Thanks for the mod.

CakiP

384 posts

Joined February 2012

CakiP 2015-01-21T05:12:42+00:00

hi there.

[Easy]
00:08:806 (1) - add hitsounds. maybe clap or normal whistle?
00:09:473 (2) - ^
00:15:140 - add note?
00:17:806 (4) - not good flow...

just imo

fine

[Normal]
00:19:973 (2,3) - change to slider?
00:25:806 (3,4) - try this.

img

00:36:473 (3,4) - ^
00:54:640 (2,3) - just imo, i don't like this. please change to slider

00:55:973 (6,7) - ^

[Hard]
00:08:640 - add note? I heard sound here.
00:12:806 (1,2,3,4) - Please turn down the volume. a little

nice diff. i like this

[Insane]
00:09:306 (3,4) - It's difficult to read. i think.

01:16:390 (1) - stack 01:16:140 (7) - I like this pattern

DD

sorry for skip gd. my suck mod

good luck!

Knotts

712 posts

Joined May 2013

Topic Starter

Knotts 2015-01-21T15:08:52+00:00

CakiP wrote:
hi there.

[Easy]
00:08:806 (1) - add hitsounds. maybe clap or normal whistle? i have soft whistle on it already
00:09:473 (2) - ^ I think clap or normal whistle would be too loud so i put soft whistle instead
00:15:140 - add note? not enough recovery time after spinner
00:17:806 (4) - not good flow... just imo plays fine to me

fine

[Normal]
00:19:973 (2,3) - change to slider? i think circles emphasize this music more
00:25:806 (3,4) - try this. pretty much plays the same but my way looks better to me
img
00:36:473 (3,4) - ^ ^
00:54:640 (2,3) - just imo, i don't like this. please change to slider it emphasizes the music more plus it helps the spread a bit more than having a slider ;x
00:55:973 (6,7) - ^ ^

[Hard]
00:08:640 - add note? I heard sound here. I don't really hear anything worth mapping here and I'm trying to keep this part as simple as possible because of all the 1/3s
00:12:806 (1,2,3,4) - Please turn down the volume. a little it'll probably be fine once i get a new mp3

nice diff. i like this thanks!

[Insane]
00:09:306 (3,4) - It's difficult to read. i think. looks fine to me
01:16:390 (1) - stack 01:16:140 (7) - might be a little too hard to tell that there's 1/2 spacing between them when they're stacked I like this pattern DD thanks!

sorry for skip gd. my suck mod

good luck!

Thanks for the mod and star!

Phos-

773 posts

Joined December 2012

Phos- 2015-01-21T19:55:54+00:00

Hi, from the Faded Modding Queue~

[General]

Looks good~

[Easy]

00:27:140 (2,3,4) - You should improve this triangle, looks somewhat untidy atm. You can easily do this by nudging (3) to the left, and then readjust the other notes to fix spacing.
00:37:473 (2,3) - I think this pattern would flow a lot better if you were to move (3) to x:248 y:320, this way the cursor from (2) will already be on its way to the start of (3), and won't have to change direction to hit the next note. Don't forget to move the notes afterwards to prevent spacing errors.

[Normal]

01:01:473 (4,1) - This blanket isn't done very well, making the pattern seem untidy. You should fix it, even if a blanket wasn't your intent it will still look nicer.
01:02:806 (3,4,5) - You should improve this triangle pattern. If you were to make this a nice equilateral triangle, then the pattern will look cleaner imo.
01:11:473 (4) - Add a soft finish at the start of this slider. In this part of the song, you seem to be having a soft finish on every other downbeat, so excluding the finish here will make it inconsistent, causing it to sound odd and out of place.

[Hard]

00:32:140 (4,5) - You've probably done this overlap (and similar ones) intentionally, but tbh I'm not really a fan of it, looks untidy imo.
01:21:806 (4) - The drum finish you've placed at the end of this slider feels out of place, this is the only time you've used this in the music, so it feels weird to hear it for the first time towards the end of the song. Either add more in earlier places or replace this with another hitsound.
01:23:473 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - The random hitsounds you've placed in this slider stream (starts of 01:24:140 (3,4) - for example) don't really sound nice because there isn't a significant enough change in the music to justify them, so they sound weird and out of place. I suggest removing them and keeping the stream's hitsounds consistent.

[Karia's Insane]

00:37:806 (6,1) - I don't really like how a massive portion of (1) is hidden beneath (6), it doesn't look that great and players will likely have trouble reading this. I would change things a bit so a smaller portion of the slider is covered.
01:17:473 (1,1) - The two sliderends aren't properly stacked. Although this is really minor, it's still noticeable because auto stacking doesn't occur with overlaps like these, so it's important that they are precise, otherwise the map will seem untidy.

[Insane]

01:21:806 (5) - Like in your hard diff, this drum finish feels out of place, so consider removing it or adding more.

Nice mapset ^^ There's really not much to point out.

I shot a star, good luck!

Kibbleru

osu! Alumni

5,844 posts

Joined August 2013

Kibbleru 2015-01-21T21:48:55+00:00

k ill be expecting mah mod soon

/....https://osu.ppy.sh/s/262343

Knotts

712 posts

Joined May 2013

Topic Starter

Knotts 2015-01-22T00:53:03+00:00

[ Faded ] wrote:
Hi, from the Faded Modding Queue~

[General]
Looks good~
[Easy]
00:27:140 (2,3,4) - You should improve this triangle, looks somewhat untidy atm. You can easily do this by nudging (3) to the left, and then readjust the other notes to fix spacing. wasn't really going for a triangle thing
00:37:473 (2,3) - I think this pattern would flow a lot better if you were to move (3) to x:248 y:320, this way the cursor from (2) will already be on its way to the start of (3), and won't have to change direction to hit the next note. Don't forget to move the notes afterwards to prevent spacing errors. i think you gave me the wrong coordinates or something

[Normal]
01:01:473 (4,1) - This blanket isn't done very well, making the pattern seem untidy. You should fix it, even if a blanket wasn't your intent it will still look nicer. adjusted
01:02:806 (3,4,5) - You should improve this triangle pattern. If you were to make this a nice equilateral triangle, then the pattern will look cleaner imo. don't really pay attention to these things in lower difficulties but why not
01:11:473 (4) - Add a soft finish at the start of this slider. In this part of the song, you seem to be having a soft finish on every other downbeat, so excluding the finish here will make it inconsistent, causing it to sound odd and out of place. don't have one in the other difficulties (neither does Karia) so I'd rather not.
[Hard]
00:32:140 (4,5) - You've probably done this overlap (and similar ones) intentionally, but tbh I'm not really a fan of it, looks untidy imo. i like it :3
01:21:806 (4) - The drum finish you've placed at the end of this slider feels out of place, this is the only time you've used this in the music, so it feels weird to hear it for the first time towards the end of the song. Either add more in earlier places or replace this with another hitsound. i guess ill switch to whistle
01:23:473 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - The random hitsounds you've placed in this slider stream (starts of 01:24:140 (3,4) - for example) don't really sound nice because there isn't a significant enough change in the music to justify them, so they sound weird and out of place. I suggest removing them and keeping the stream's hitsounds consistent. true
[Insane]
01:21:806 (5) - Like in your hard diff, this drum finish feels out of place, so consider removing it or adding more. k
Nice mapset ^^ There's really not much to point out.

I shot a star, good luck!

Thanks for the mod and star!

Kibbleru wrote:
k ill be expecting mah mod soon /....https://osu.ppy.sh/s/262343

Lmao alright, i'll get to it by the end of this weekend b/c finals

lolia

1,356 posts

Joined May 2012

lolia 2015-01-22T02:28:30+00:00

[ Faded ] wrote:
[Karia's Insane]
00:37:806 (6,1) - I don't really like how a massive portion of (1) is hidden beneath (6), it doesn't look that great and players will likely have trouble reading this. I would change things a bit so a smaller portion of the slider is covered. I don't dislike this overlap and reading also no problem imo @3@
01:17:473 (1,1) - The two sliderends aren't properly stacked. Although this is really minor, it's still noticeable because auto stacking doesn't occur with overlaps like these, so it's important that they are precise, otherwise the map will seem untidy. fixed

Thanks for modding!

SPOILER

osu file format v13

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Source:艦隊これくしょん -艦これ-
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lolia

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Joined May 2012

lolia 2015-01-22T10:22:01+00:00

Fixed the hitsounds!

SPOILER

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: Shiena Nishizawa-Fubuki.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 58670
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 54140,58473
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 5.599997

[Metadata]
Title:FUBUKI
TitleUnicode:吹雪
Artist:Nishizawa Shiena
ArtistUnicode:西沢幸奏
Creator:Knotts
Version:Karia's Insane
Source:艦隊これくしょん -艦これ-
Tags:ending TV Size kancolle kantai collection karia
BeatmapID:604817
BeatmapSetID:263033

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.76
SliderTickRate:1

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Video,0,"FubuHQ.flv"
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Phos-

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Phos- 2015-01-22T16:32:46+00:00

Knotts wrote:
00:37:473 (2,3) - I think this pattern would flow a lot better if you were to move (3) to x:248 y:320, this way the cursor from (2) will already be on its way to the start of (3), and won't have to change direction to hit the next note. Don't forget to move the notes afterwards to prevent spacing errors. i think you gave me the wrong coordinates or something

oops lol, I meant to highlight 00:37:420 (4,1) - instead, and move (1) to coordinates x:428 y:320
Sorry about that >.>

hehe

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hehe 2015-01-22T18:01:06+00:00

hi nots

l-lewd.. i did not come for lolis

also, p/3744771

Insane

00:09:170 (3) - is dis fakking snapped to 1/12
00:24:253 - as an avid enthusiast of streams, there is a lack of stream here.
00:58:420 (3) - shifting this to somewhere 200,45 is better imo, super antijump to stream is just awkward.
01:24:087 (9) - NC plox
01:25:420 (7) - this too

Hard

nothing major but doesn't it irk you that 1/2 sliderheads and ends touch? dat SV is slow so slow
00:02:087 (1) - distinctly remember this being ctrl+g's before. okay but just to be sure make sure the sliderends stack. that pattern is way better.
00:11:420 (1) - move this a little to the left so it fits with that staggered stream thing you like to do
00:56:420 (5,1) - make this look better its like a half-overlap half-blanket
01:00:587 (4,1) - imo, stack isn't really needed here. use DS instead.
01:05:420 (3,4) - same thing here
01:08:753 (1) - not your best slidershape :p

Normal

just a caution, you're probably gonna need to have a little bit more 1/2 rhythms in here to make the spread a little more smooth from normal to hard.
00:42:753 - have a clicky here, rather than a reverse. muh vocals
01:01:420 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - strongly feel that its fine to have a rhythm like this. it might be repetitive but it captures the repetitive nature of the vocals :phttp://i.imgur.com/npYztAo.png
01:04:753 (1) - maybe have the bend on the tick lol, well actually you're probably gonna make this long slider harder anyway :v

Easy

00:08:753 (1,2) - ctrl+g in rhythm, more suitable to the vocals, imo
00:11:420 (1) - end spinner here 00:12:753 - and start the rhythm here 00:14:087 - . a little awkward now
00:54:087 (1,2) - ahhh awkawrd rhythm, here something simple n good: http://i.imgur.com/3OxW7QL.png

mapset is on point, good luck.

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