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Shiena Nishizawa - FUBUKI

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Knotts
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Topic Starter
Knotts
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, February 19, 2015 at 5:31:07 PM

Artist: Shiena Nishizawa
Title: FUBUKI
Source: Fleet Girls Collection KanColle Animation Sequence
Tags: ending TV Size kantai karia 艦隊これくしょん 艦これ
BPM: 180
Filesize: 16919kb
Play Time: 01:26
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.56 stars, 110 notes)
  2. Hard (3.28 stars, 265 notes)
  3. Insane (4.8 stars, 380 notes)
  4. Karia's Insane (4.55 stars, 337 notes)
  5. Normal (2.11 stars, 142 notes)
Download: Shiena Nishizawa - FUBUKI
Download: Shiena Nishizawa - FUBUKI (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#2

DL link if you need it: http://bloodcat.com/osu/s/263033

Difficulties:

Insane by me
Karia's Insane by Karia
Hard by me
Normal by me
Easy by me

NEW bg, mp3, and hitsounds - 2/19/15. Redownload if you need to!

Thanks for modding!
No Dap
-Yuzuriha-inori-
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Last edited by Knotts , edited 57 times in total.
Ujimatsu Chiya
2,480 posts
Joined December 2013
Ujimatsu Chiya
omg great song, can I Join Extra? ~ㅅ~
Knotts
712 posts
Joined May 2013
Topic Starter
Knotts

eINess wrote:

omg great song, can I Join Extra? ~ㅅ~
I don't think I'm going to have an extra this set actually. Sorry
Ujimatsu Chiya
2,480 posts
Joined December 2013
Ujimatsu Chiya
oh.. ok :3

GL~
DeletedUser_3044645
DeletedUser_3044645
[General]
unrankably badly drawn boobs lol
SPOILER
[Easy]
  1. AR4 OD4 HP4 you're kidding me right????????????????
  2. 00:25:140 (3,4,1) - what is this NC?
  3. 00:29:140 - clap
  4. 01:01:473 - bass
  5. 01:22:140 (3,4) - perfect symmetry would look nicer
[Normal]
  1. HP OD too high for high bpm normal
  2. 00:29:140 - clap
  3. 00:10:140 (1) - don't really think this NC is needed
  4. 01:01:473 (4) - bass
  5. 01:08:473 (2) - this is 1/3 so just use a circle unless you wanna have complex rhythm change
    this diff needs to have more 1/2 for better spread with hard diff
[Hard]
  1. 00:04:140 (2) - do you want this HP bar touch
  2. 00:06:140 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - these are all 1/3
  3. 00:11:556 (1,1) - not gonna happen in hard diff
  4. 00:29:140 (2) - clap
  5. 00:55:973 (3) - needs to be stacked on 00:55:806 (2) - for intuitive play
  6. 01:04:473 (4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - these are 1/3 also
  7. 01:15:140 (3) - players will click earlier than it is. make 01:14:473 (2) - reverse?
  8. 01:16:473 (1) - really unnecessary NC here. 01:16:140 (1,1) - these two beats are in 1 group
  9. 01:17:806 (1) - same as above
  10. 01:17:973 (2) - you can start NC here, this is where the vocal starts and would make more sense since this has nothing to do with 01:17:806 (1) -
  11. 01:20:473 (4,1) - why do you not have doubled spacing here?
  12. 01:01:473 - bass
[Insane]
  1. please use 1/3 when it's 1/3 otherwise it's unrankable
  2. 00:29:140 - clap
  3. 01:01:473 - bass
  4. 01:25:140 (3,4,5,6,7) - manual stack for more safe movement? something like this
    SPOILER

those 1/4s on 1/3 must be fixed. they are unrnakable
Knotts
712 posts
Joined May 2013
Topic Starter
Knotts

No Dap wrote:

[General]
unrankably badly drawn boobs lol
SPOILER
[Easy]
  1. AR4 OD4 HP4 you're kidding me right???????????????? o
  2. 00:25:140 (3,4,1) - what is this NC?
  3. 00:29:140 - clap
  4. 01:01:473 - bass
  5. 01:22:140 (3,4) - perfect symmetry would look nicer
[Normal]
  1. HP OD too high for high bpm normal
  2. 00:29:140 - clap
  3. 00:10:140 (1) - don't really think this NC is needed
  4. 01:01:473 (4) - bass
  5. 01:08:473 (2) - this is 1/3 so just use a circle unless you wanna have complex rhythm change
    this diff needs to have more 1/2 for better spread with hard diff i'll add some more later, too lazy rn
[Hard]
  1. 00:04:140 (2) - do you want this HP bar touch it doesn't touch
  2. 00:06:140 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - these are all 1/3
  3. 00:11:556 (1,1) - not gonna happen in hard diff
  4. 00:29:140 (2) - clap
  5. 00:55:973 (3) - needs to be stacked on 00:55:806 (2) - for intuitive play
  6. 01:04:473 (4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - these are 1/3 also would people let me keep this if i told them it was to play it simplified?
  7. 01:15:140 (3) - players will click earlier than it is. make 01:14:473 (2) - reverse?
  8. 01:16:473 (1) - really unnecessary NC here. 01:16:140 (1,1) - these two beats are in 1 group
  9. 01:17:806 (1) - same as above
  10. 01:17:973 (2) - you can start NC here, this is where the vocal starts and would make more sense since this has nothing to do with 01:17:806 (1) -
  11. 01:20:473 (4,1) - why do you not have doubled spacing here? I only double space where normal spacing would look ugly and here looks fine to me
  12. 01:01:473 - bass
[Insane]
  1. please use 1/3 when it's 1/3 otherwise it's unrankable
  2. 00:29:140 - clap
  3. 01:01:473 - bass
  4. 01:25:140 (3,4,5,6,7) - manual stack for more safe movement? something like this last stream feels fine to play to me
    SPOILER

those 1/4s on 1/3 must be fixed. they are unrnakable
Fixed whatever I didn't comment on. Thanks no daperino
-Yuzuriha
574 posts
Joined March 2012
-Yuzuriha
General

audio lead in is 1500 or 2000 plz



Insane

00:10:472 (3,4) - It is near DS . hard to see

00:12:806 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5) - volume is down req ~

00:20:473 (4) - chenge note req

01:02:973 (4,5) - i don like this type :<
try!
http://gyazo.com/66682ed590165da6f795cdf6028734ae

01:08:473 (6) - chenge Form req
http://gyazo.com/ce6527ba3d5bcc7a0a48cc66fb8733f8

01:16:140 (1) - remove NC ?
01:17:473 (1) - ^


Hard

00:17:390 (3) - remove note
00:21:390 (3) - ^
00:50:056 (4) - ^


Normal

good diff

fine ~ :)


Easy

good diff

fine~

--------------------------------------------------------

good luck ~ :)
Knotts
712 posts
Joined May 2013
Topic Starter
Knotts

-Yuzuriha-inori- wrote:

General

audio lead in is 1500 or 2000 plz 1500 felt too long so I used 1000 instead



Insane

00:10:472 (3,4) - It is near DS . hard to see

00:12:806 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5) - volume is down req ~

00:20:473 (4) - chenge note req why?

01:02:973 (4,5) - i don like this type :< I like how it is now :(
try!
http://gyazo.com/66682ed590165da6f795cdf6028734ae

01:08:473 (6) - chenge Form req I want to keep how everything is straight there
http://gyazo.com/ce6527ba3d5bcc7a0a48cc66fb8733f8

01:16:140 (1) - remove NC ?
01:17:473 (1) - ^ this one is for SV change


Hard

00:17:390 (3) - remove note
00:21:390 (3) - ^
00:50:056 (4) - ^

I hear triplets for all three of these though

Normal

good diff

fine ~ :)


Easy

good diff

fine~

--------------------------------------------------------

good luck ~ :)
Thanks for the mod!
No comment = fixed
Gaia
2,808 posts
Joined May 2013
Gaia
[easy]
00:22:140 (3) - make a diamond hereeee

[normal]
00:07:473 (3) - blanket is off also dont overlap the ends
01:08:473 (2) - dont u like stacks? http://puu.sh/eImuX/40568d22e7.jpg
01:21:473 (2) - ^ http://puu.sh/eImCF/781608aeae.jpg

No Dap wrote:

this diff needs to have more 1/2 for better spread with hard diff
^ evident in the beginning where you have 2/1 sliders and 2/1 breaks, but in the hard you're mapping every single possible thing there is <:

[hard]
00:06:140 (1,2,3,4) - random pause in the middle
00:20:723 - circle here for the trumpet
00:23:473 (1,2,3,4,1) - holy crap ur 1/4 spacing = = this is a hard.. (00:24:806 (1) - i dont understand why this is the only one overlapping too, like the one after doesnt overlap o3o)
00:44:806 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^
01:04:806 (1) - these are 1/3's o3o
01:07:473 (1) - but you use 1/3 for this one? you gotta be consistent like cmon
01:16:473 (1) - 01:17:806 (1) - probably dont need these NCs

[karia]
00:22:806 (3) - you can try this, to keep ur spacing consistent http://puu.sh/eInX3/07553f0821.jpg
00:48:640 (3,1) - 00:49:973 (3,1) - try not to stack these?
00:54:806 (5,6) - move these out? its a bit close to the previous stack
01:24:973 (3,4) - omg
lolia
1,356 posts
Joined May 2012
lolia

Gaia wrote:

[karia]
00:22:806 (3) - you can try this, to keep ur spacing consistent http://puu.sh/eInX3/07553f0821.jpg Hmm,,I like current pattern and I don't care about the 1/4 distance in this part xP
00:48:640 (3,1) - 00:49:973 (3,1) - try not to stack these? The 1st one is 1/8 slider, so I don't want that unstack in Insane diff. And the 2nd one is..changed the rhythm to 1/4!
00:54:806 (5,6) - move these out? its a bit close to the previous stack sure
01:24:973 (3,4) - omg no problem here hehe
Thanks for modding!

SPOILER
osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: Shiena Nishizawa-Fubuki.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 58723
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 54140,58473
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 3.399999

[Metadata]
Title:Fubuki
TitleUnicode:吹雪
Artist:Nishizawa Shiena
ArtistUnicode:西沢幸奏
Creator:Knotts
Version:Karia's Insane
Source:艦隊これくしょん -艦これ-
Tags:ending TV Size kancolle kantai collection
BeatmapID:604817
BeatmapSetID:263033

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.76
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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Video,0,"FubuHQ.flv"
0,0,"bg.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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216,160,26806,1,2,0:1:0:0:
40,180,26973,1,2,0:1:0:0:
100,20,27140,1,8,0:0:0:0:
260,88,27306,2,0,L|264:48,2,35.2,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
260,88,27806,6,0,L|344:80,1,70.4,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,160,28140,2,0,L|216:152,1,70.4,2|2,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
348,64,28473,2,0,L|264:72,1,70.4,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,164,28806,6,0,L|424:24,1,140.8,2|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,23,29306,1,0,0:0:0:0:
512,124,29473,1,2,0:1:0:0:
512,124,29640,1,2,0:1:0:0:
332,156,29806,1,8,0:0:0:0:
452,256,29973,1,0,0:0:0:0:
452,256,30056,1,0,0:0:0:0:
452,256,30140,6,0,P|376:252|292:252,1,140.8,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,316,30640,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,204,30806,2,0,L|164:284,1,70.4,2|2,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
232,328,31140,1,8,0:0:0:0:
76,368,31306,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,368,31390,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,368,31473,6,0,L|68:288,1,70.4,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,112,31806,1,8,0:0:0:0:
44,200,31973,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,216,32140,1,2,0:1:0:0:
240,216,32306,1,2,0:1:0:0:
212,48,32473,2,0,B|196:112|196:112|220:160,1,105.6,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,136,32806,6,0,P|160:112|108:156,1,140.8,2|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,232,33306,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,244,33473,2,0,P|208:244|172:248,1,70.4,2|2,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
96,260,33806,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,256,33973,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,256,34056,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,256,34140,6,0,P|343:253|416:248,1,140.8,2|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
492,220,34640,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,148,34806,2,0,L|340:220,2,70.4,2|2|8,0:1|0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,64,35306,1,0,0:0:0:0:
444,64,35390,1,0,0:0:0:0:
444,64,35473,5,6,0:0:0:0:
444,64,35806,2,0,P|388:64|336:60,1,105.6,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,48,36140,2,0,P|276:50|236:56,1,70.4,2|2,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
96,100,36473,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,64,36640,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,56,36806,6,0,P|140:100|172:152,1,105.6,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,152,37140,1,8,0:0:0:0:
68,176,37306,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,224,37473,1,2,0:1:0:0:
176,316,37640,1,2,0:1:0:0:
144,80,37806,2,0,P|208:44|272:80,1,140.8,8|2,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
264,69,38473,6,0,L|192:64,1,70.4,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,124,38806,2,0,L|406:128,1,70.4,2|2,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
176,156,39140,2,0,L|246:160,1,70.4,8|0,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
16,188,39473,6,0,B|120:196|120:196|76:212,1,140.8,2|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,84,39973,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,124,40140,2,0,L|148:136,1,70.4,2|2,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
288,44,40473,1,8,0:0:0:0:
344,220,40640,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,220,40723,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,220,40806,6,0,P|344:144|352:76,1,140.8,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,148,41306,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,228,41473,2,0,L|336:236,1,70.4,2|2,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
444,172,41806,1,8,0:0:0:0:
412,332,41973,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,332,42056,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,332,42140,6,0,L|496:324,1,70.4,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,384,42473,2,0,L|309:299,1,70.4,8|0,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
292,116,42806,1,2,0:1:0:0:
416,196,42973,1,2,0:1:0:0:
208,232,43140,2,0,P|152:232|96:224,1,105.6,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,216,43473,6,0,P|119:211|160:204,1,70.4,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,124,43806,1,8,0:0:0:0:
220,72,43973,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,72,44140,2,0,P|181:63|141:53,1,70.4,2|2,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
292,8,44473,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,184,44640,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,184,44723,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,184,44806,6,0,P|372:176|444:176,1,105.6,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,180,45140,1,8,0:0:0:0:
500,304,45306,1,0,0:0:0:0:
500,304,45390,1,0,0:0:0:0:
500,304,45473,1,8,0:0:0:0:
428,260,45640,1,4,0:3:0:0:
360,308,45806,1,2,0:1:0:0:
333,304,45889,1,0,0:0:0:0:
307,304,45972,1,2,0:1:0:0:
281,305,46056,1,0,0:0:0:0:
255,310,46140,6,0,P|168:312|84:296,1,158.399995166016,6|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,192,46806,2,0,P|20:112|92:96,1,158.399995166016,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,156,47473,6,0,L|172:252,2,79.1999975830079,2|2|2,0:1|0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
263,88,48140,2,0,P|316:94|369:96,1,105.599996777344,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,80,48640,2,0,L|464:76,3,13.199999597168,2|0|2|0,3:0|3:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
480,80,48806,6,0,B|468:120|468:120|512:176|480:248,1,158.399995166016,6|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,248,49473,2,0,P|322:194|336:136,1,105.599996777344,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,48,49973,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,48,50056,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,48,50140,6,0,P|328:48|264:56,1,105.599996777344,2|2,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,160,50806,1,2,0:0:0:0:
100,160,50973,1,2,0:1:0:0:
100,160,51140,2,0,P|160:160|216:152,1,99.0000037765504,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,136,51473,6,0,P|208:200|248:264,1,176,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,224,51973,2,0,L|364:128,1,88,0|2,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
304,296,52306,1,2,0:1:0:0:
476,252,52473,2,0,L|484:164,1,88,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,84,52723,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,84,52806,6,0,P|392:92|356:92,1,88,6|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,72,53140,2,0,P|230:88|262:103,1,88,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,272,53473,2,0,L|320:172,1,88,2|2,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
148,196,53806,2,0,L|156:296,1,88,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,336,54140,5,2,0:1:0:0:
248,336,54306,1,2,0:1:0:0:
72,316,54473,1,2,0:1:0:0:
72,316,54639,1,2,0:1:0:0:
228,244,54806,1,2,0:1:0:0:
228,244,54973,1,2,0:1:0:0:
100,112,55140,1,2,0:1:0:0:
100,112,55307,1,2,0:1:0:0:
16,244,55473,5,4,0:0:0:0:
204,168,55640,1,2,0:1:0:0:
116,84,55806,1,2,0:1:0:0:
328,144,55973,1,2,0:1:0:0:
188,196,56140,5,2,0:1:0:0:
232,36,56306,1,2,0:1:0:0:
424,160,56473,1,2,0:1:0:0:
424,160,56640,1,2,0:1:0:0:
316,120,56806,5,4,0:0:0:0:
392,24,56973,1,2,0:1:0:0:
432,248,57140,1,2,0:1:0:0:
448,128,57306,1,2,0:1:0:0:
224,208,57473,5,2,0:1:0:0:
320,252,57640,1,2,0:1:0:0:
112,280,57806,1,2,0:1:0:0:
112,280,57973,1,2,0:1:0:0:
216,76,58140,5,2,1:0:0:0:
248,312,58306,1,2,1:0:0:0:
44,176,58473,1,2,1:0:0:0:
44,176,58806,6,0,P|124:160|100:240,1,184.799994360352
56,288,59473,6,0,P|120:272|232:288,1,176,6|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,352,59973,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,184,60140,2,0,L|288:192,1,88,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,100,60473,1,8,0:0:0:0:
380,272,60640,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,152,60806,6,0,P|144:160|128:248,1,176,2|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,312,61306,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,312,61473,2,0,L|308:128,1,176,2|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,64,61973,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,64,62056,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,64,62140,6,0,P|208:64|252:60,1,88,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,36,62473,1,8,0:0:0:0:
376,148,62640,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,12,62806,2,0,P|456:104|464:200,1,176,2|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
492,280,63306,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,216,63473,6,0,P|348:156|452:200,1,176,2|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
484,308,63973,1,0,0:0:0:0:
484,308,64056,1,0,0:0:0:0:
484,308,64140,2,0,L|392:316,1,88,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,308,64473,2,0,L|356:300,1,117.333333333333,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,244,64806,6,0,P|113:303|108:368,1,117.333333333333,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,200,65140,1,8,0:0:0:0:
56,160,65251,2,0,L|124:164,1,58.6666666666667
296,168,65473,1,2,0:1:0:0:
312,216,65584,2,0,L|188:212,1,117.333333333333,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,176,65918,2,0,L|396:240,1,58.6666666666667
312,92,66140,6,0,L|432:96,1,117.333333333333,6|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
429,95,66473,1,8,0:0:0:0:
220,132,66695,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,132,66806,1,2,0:1:0:0:
284,20,67029,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,20,67140,1,8,0:0:0:0:
100,96,67362,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,72,67473,6,0,L|60:12,1,58.6666666666667,6|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,144,67695,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,188,67806,2,0,L|88:184,1,117.333333333333,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,236,68140,1,2,0:1:0:0:
296,280,68362,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,300,68473,1,8,0:0:0:0:
476,240,68695,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,232,68806,6,0,L|280:224,1,117.333333333333,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,168,69140,2,0,L|236:156,1,117.333333333333,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,92,69473,2,0,L|380:148,3,44,8|8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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368,248,70140,6,0,P|356:164|368:68,1,176,6|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,96,70640,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,180,70806,2,0,P|268:172|224:156,1,88,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,272,71140,2,0,P|335:293|289:301,1,88,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,248,71473,6,0,P|196:264|184:360,1,176,2|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,344,71973,2,0,L|44:252,1,88,0|2,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
88,84,72306,1,0,0:0:0:0:
16,172,72473,2,0,L|112:164,1,88,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,124,72723,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,124,72806,6,0,L|268:132,1,88,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,216,73140,1,8,0:0:0:0:
292,48,73306,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,224,73473,2,0,B|395:171|395:171|381:104|381:104|384:47,1,176,2|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
500,160,73973,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,260,74140,6,0,P|408:252|504:272,2,176,2|8|2,0:1|0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
208,308,74973,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,176,75140,2,0,L|128:272,1,88,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,124,75473,5,8,0:0:0:0:
72,88,75584,2,0,L|132:92,1,58.6666666666667,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,128,75806,2,0,L|340:120,2,58.6666666666667,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,244,76140,6,0,P|296:260|352:252,1,93.8666666666667,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,268,76473,6,0,P|261:247|333:257,1,146.666666666667,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,320,76806,5,8,0:0:0:0:
468,296,76918,2,0,L|472:232,1,58.6666666666667,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,96,77140,2,0,L|504:32,2,58.6666666666667,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,172,77473,6,0,P|364:176|316:156,1,93.8666666666667,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,151,77806,6,0,L|318:157,1,146.666666666667,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,108,78140,6,0,L|252:104,1,117.333333333333,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,248,78473,2,0,P|164:248|108:232,1,117.333333333333,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,164,78806,1,2,0:1:0:0:
252,236,79029,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,156,79140,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,288,79362,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,208,79473,6,0,P|427:261|435:329,1,117.333333333333,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
504,136,79806,2,0,L|400:124,1,88,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,112,80140,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,111,80223,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,110,80306,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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273,106,80473,1,8,0:0:0:0:
289,103,80556,1,8,0:0:0:0:
305,99,80639,1,8,0:0:0:0:
321,95,80723,1,8,0:0:0:0:
337,90,80806,6,0,P|304:88|312:200,1,176,6|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,216,81306,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,292,81473,2,0,L|332:300,1,88,2|2,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
160,244,81806,2,0,L|156:356,1,88,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,172,82140,6,0,L|204:168,1,176,6|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,212,82640,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,112,82806,2,0,L|372:208,2,88,2|2|8,0:1|0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,44,83306,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,44,83390,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,44,83473,6,0,L|336:36,3,44,4|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,116,83806,2,0,L|252:124,3,44,0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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148,252,84806,5,0,0:0:0:0:
148,252,84890,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,252,84973,2,0,L|144:312,1,44
280,240,85140,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,240,85223,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,240,85306,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,240,85390,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,240,85473,2,0,L|284:296,3,44,0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,136,85806,2,0,L|208:192,3,44,0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,108,86140,5,2,0:0:0:0:
Sylphi
osu! Alumni
3,307 posts
Joined February 2012
Sylphi
[General]
  1. normal-hitwhistle is a bit loud in your difficulty.
[Easy]
  1. 00:08:806 (3,4) - this rhythm is a bit weird. I think it would be better changing to this.
  2. 00:06:140 (3,1) - Toggle new combo for consistency.
  3. 00:08:806 (3) - New combo for consistency.
  4. 00:10:806 (1) - Remove new combo for consistency.
  5. 00:16:806 - I think it fits more music to start new combo cycle.
  6. 00:19:140 - It sounds empty. How about add circle?
[Normal]
  1. 00:18:140 (3) - Add normal whistle on repeat arrow.
  2. 00:56:473 (3) - I think here is better clap than normal whistle.
  3. 01:08:473 (2) - I guess you forgot to add clap.
  4. 00:40:806 - Why new combo cycle is changed on this part?
[Hard]
  1. 00:02:140 (1) - I think it would be better flow to apply reverse section.
  2. 00:13:140 (2,3) - It isn't a issue. but how about reduce distance between these by a little?
  3. 01:07:807 (2) - End to 01:08:029. It is 1 / 3 rhythm.
  4. 01:24:473 (4,1) - Same as 00:13:140.
[Karia's Insane]
  1. 00:39:140 (3) - How about apply reverse section?
[Insane]
  1. 01:04:806 (1) - End to 01:05:029. It is 1 / 3 rhythm.
lolia
1,356 posts
Joined May 2012
lolia

Underflow wrote:

[Karia's Insane]
  1. 00:39:140 (3) - How about apply reverse section? 그것도 괜찮긴 한데 여기는 찍을때부터 (2,3,1)을 세트로 찍으려고 했던부분이라 이건 이대로 두고싶다는 마음이 앞서네요,,
Thanks for modding!
hehe
1,971 posts
Joined November 2012
hehe
just dropping by



kamikin_old
286 posts
Joined June 2014
kamikin_old
Hi hi! From my queue!

Easy
00:02:140 (2) - I dont think this fits with 1 very well, maybe make 1 like 2?
00:08:806 (3,4) - The different lengths make the pattern look strange
Maybe something like this? (to try and make flow better as well)

00:25:140 (3) - Why put this at a different angle?
00:27:473 (3,4) - These could blanket each other well
00:32:140 (2) - Make this curved as well to keep it consistent with 1
00:34:473 (2) - Blanket? I think it make the flow better and looks better (2 is given purpouse in the pattern)

00:36:806 (1) - You should curve this to keep it consistent with 2
00:42:140 (1) - Either curve this or make 2 the same for consistency
00:48:806 (2) - The red point make this slider awkward aesthetically, probably just make this a normal blanket
00:56:806 (1) - This slider shape looks off
01:00:806 (3,4) - Double blanket
01:03:473 (3) - Straighten this imo
01:06:473 (2) - Blanket?
01:07:473 (1) - This should be obviously not a blanket
01:08:806 (3,4) - Double blanket
01:10:140 (1) - maybe blanket 2?
01:12:806 (1) - This slider shape is awkward, straighten or curve?
01:15:473 (1) - When this happens make the slider obviously a blanket or obviously not, this is halfway
01:18:140 (1) - Curve the first part before the red point?

Normal
00:16:806 (1) - Why red point?
00:17:473 (2) - Make this blanket 3 or the long short pattern looks off
00:28:806 (1,2) - Short long pattern again
00:38:806 (2,3) - Curved for consistency
00:46:140 (3) - Blanket 2
00:51:473 (3) - Use this to blanket 1
00:56:140 (2,3,4) - Keep these as a normal triangle

01:02:640 (2) - Move this up
01:02:806 (3) - Curve
01:06:140 (3) - Take off the repeat and use a copied version of 01:04:806 (1) -
01:15:473 (1) - Make this peel off 4

01:18:140 (1) - use a version of 01:16:806 (8) - for consistency

Hard
00:00:807 (1) - Blanket?
00:02:806 (2) - Curve
00:04:806 (1) - Make this parallel to 00:03:473 (1) - For a better looking pattern
00:08:473 (4) - Unstack, if anything should be stacked it should be 2 + 3
00:09:473 (3) - Curve?
00:12:806 (1,2,3,4) - Quieten these a bit
00:14:806 (3,4) - Why not (it looks better)

00:16:140 (3) - Straighten for consistency with 4 and 1
00:21:973 (5,1) - Awkward flow imo
00:23:806 (2,3,4) - The blue ticks sound strange
00:25:140 (2,4) - Short long
00:26:806 (4) - Curve
00:32:140 (4,5) - Imo, this looks neater

00:39:140 (4,1) - Short long
00:44:806 (1) - Strange slider shape, maybe use 00:45:140 (2) -
00:52:806 (1) - Straighten
00:55:473 (1) - Clap as well at the beginning
00:57:806 (4) - Curve
01:08:140 (3) - Weird slider shape for the music
01:08:806 (1) - Blanket
01:11:473 (1) - On this second 'ku' you sound map it the same as 01:10:140 (1) -

Couldn't play any of the higher diffs, I hope I was useful! :)
Knotts
712 posts
Joined May 2013
Topic Starter
Knotts
Gaia

Gaia wrote:

[easy]
00:22:140 (3) - make a diamond hereeee

[normal]
00:07:473 (3) - blanket is off also dont overlap the ends
01:08:473 (2) - dont u like stacks? http://puu.sh/eImuX/40568d22e7.jpg
01:21:473 (2) - ^ http://puu.sh/eImCF/781608aeae.jpg

No Dap wrote:

this diff needs to have more 1/2 for better spread with hard diff
^ evident in the beginning where you have 2/1 sliders and 2/1 breaks, but in the hard you're mapping every single possible thing there is <:

[hard]
00:06:140 (1,2,3,4) - random pause in the middle
00:20:723 - circle here for the trumpet
00:23:473 (1,2,3,4,1) - holy crap ur 1/4 spacing = = this is a hard.. (00:24:806 (1) - i dont understand why this is the only one overlapping too, like the one after doesnt overlap o3o)
00:44:806 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^
01:04:806 (1) - these are 1/3's o3o
01:07:473 (1) - but you use 1/3 for this one? you gotta be consistent like cmon
01:16:473 (1) - 01:17:806 (1) - probably dont need these NCs
Fixed everything

Underflow

Underflow wrote:

[General]
  1. normal-hitwhistle is a bit loud in your difficulty. might change it to soft-hitwhistle later
[Easy]
  1. 00:08:806 (3,4) - this rhythm is a bit weird. I think it would be better changing to this. cool
  2. 00:06:140 (3,1) - Toggle new combo for consistency. fixed
  3. 00:08:806 (3) - New combo for consistency. ^
  4. 00:10:806 (1) - Remove new combo for consistency. ^
  5. 00:16:806 - I think it fits more music to start new combo cycle. idk, you told me to fix the other NCs for consistency but then you tell me to break it for this
  6. 00:19:140 - It sounds empty. How about add circle?
[Normal]
  1. 00:18:140 (3) - Add normal whistle on repeat arrow. I dont think it'd fit
  2. 00:56:473 (3) - I think here is better clap than normal whistle. fixed
  3. 01:08:473 (2) - I guess you forgot to add clap. oops
  4. 00:40:806 - Why new combo cycle is changed on this part? I think i fixed all of the inconsistencies
[Hard]
  1. 00:02:140 (1) - I think it would be better flow to apply reverse section. I think it flows alright already
  2. 00:13:140 (2,3) - It isn't a issue. but how about reduce distance between these by a little? ok
  3. 01:07:807 (2) - End to 01:08:029. It is 1 / 3 rhythm. fixed
  4. 01:24:473 (4,1) - Same as 00:13:140. ^
[Insane]
  1. 01:04:806 (1) - End to 01:05:029. It is 1 / 3 rhythm. fixed

kamikin

kamikin wrote:

Hi hi! From my queue!

Easy
00:02:140 (2) - I dont think this fits with 1 very well, maybe make 1 like 2? looks fine to me
00:08:806 (3,4) - The different lengths make the pattern look strange fixed in previous mod
Maybe something like this? (to try and make flow better as well)

00:25:140 (3) - Why put this at a different angle? sometimes i don't like being parallel
00:27:473 (3,4) - These could blanket each other well i like it the way it is
00:32:140 (2) - Make this curved as well to keep it consistent with 1 i don't think that's necessary here
00:34:473 (2) - Blanket? I think it make the flow better and looks better (2 is given purpouse in the pattern) not a fan of that tbh

00:36:806 (1) - You should curve this to keep it consistent with 2 ehh, why not. i'll change this one
00:42:140 (1) - Either curve this or make 2 the same for consistency no need
00:48:806 (2) - The red point make this slider awkward aesthetically, probably just make this a normal blanket fine to me
00:56:806 (1) - This slider shape looks off ^
01:00:806 (3,4) - Double blanket not sure what your blanket idea looks like but this already looks fine to me
01:03:473 (3) - Straighten this imo flow from (2) would be a little awkward then
01:06:473 (2) - Blanket? I don't think it'd look good
01:07:473 (1) - This should be obviously not a blanket fixed (unless you were thinking of something else)
01:08:806 (3,4) - Double blanket I'd rather keep them looking how they already are
01:10:140 (1) - maybe blanket 2? Would kinda be awkward flow and i'd have to move a lot of stuff around.
01:12:806 (1) - This slider shape is awkward, straighten or curve? i dont see the awkwardness
01:15:473 (1) - When this happens make the slider obviously a blanket or obviously not, this is halfway well it goes around it so i'd consider it a blanket
01:18:140 (1) - Curve the first part before the red point? sure

Normal
00:16:806 (1) - Why red point? i like to spice things up sometimes, heh.
00:17:473 (2) - Make this blanket 3 or the long short pattern looks off looks fine to me
00:28:806 (1,2) - Short long pattern again ^
00:38:806 (2,3) - Curved for consistency doesn't really affect the flow since you pretty much play (2) as a curved slider
00:46:140 (3) - Blanket 2 you seem to really like blankets. I only use them sparingly
00:51:473 (3) - Use this to blanket 1^
00:56:140 (2,3,4) - Keep these as a normal triangle sure

01:02:640 (2) - Move this up fine how it is
01:02:806 (3) - Curve ^
01:06:140 (3) - Take off the repeat and use a copied version of 01:04:806 (1) - I think the repeat lets me follow the vocals a little better here
01:15:473 (1) - Make this peel off 4 That'd make it kinda hard to keep (2) is DS space without creating awkward flow or going off screen

01:18:140 (1) - use a version of 01:16:806 (8) - for consistency there's really no need for consistency on that

Hard
00:00:807 (1) - Blanket? not a fan of that type of blanketing
00:02:806 (2) - Curve no need, plays fine
00:04:806 (1) - Make this parallel to 00:03:473 (1) - For a better looking pattern sure
00:08:473 (4) - Unstack, if anything should be stacked it should be 2 + 3 not sure of the reasoning
00:09:473 (3) - Curve? Don't like it curved
00:12:806 (1,2,3,4) - Quieten these a bit sounds fine to me
00:14:806 (3,4) - Why not (it looks better) spacing's too crazy for me

00:16:140 (3) - Straighten for consistency with 4 and 1 Looks/plays fine to me
00:21:973 (5,1) - Awkward flow imo not seeing it
00:23:806 (2,3,4) - The blue ticks sound strange seems like it fits to me
00:25:140 (2,4) - Short long nothing wrong with this
00:26:806 (4) - Curve ^
00:32:140 (4,5) - Imo, this looks neater too much stacking, hard to read

00:39:140 (4,1) - Short long no need to change
00:44:806 (1) - Strange slider shape, maybe use 00:45:140 (2) - doesn't look good like that. sometimes variety is a good thing
00:52:806 (1) - Straighten no need
00:55:473 (1) - Clap as well at the beginning i dont hear one
00:57:806 (4) - Curve no need
01:08:140 (3) - Weird slider shape for the music its fine
01:08:806 (1) - Blanket remapped from previous mod so it already blankets something
01:11:473 (1) - On this second 'ku' you sound map it the same as 01:10:140 (1) - there's really no reason to change this

Couldn't play any of the higher diffs, I hope I was useful! :) no problem!

Thanks for the mod guys. Sorry if my responses seemed a little half-ass, lots to apply.
koreapenguin
1,747 posts
Joined March 2012
koreapenguin
Let's Mod this map \o/



General
  1. disabled in Karia's Insane diff

Easy
  1. you must fix this http://puu.sh/eLCDV/3c706d1f26.png about vol
  2. 00:15:473 - 00:56:723 - i guess this newcombo pattern isn't 8 bar. newcombo seem early 4 bar, compare Easy diff with Normal diff. ex) http://puu.sh/eLCf3/a2b57224ad.jpg

    nothing to say

Normal
  1. you must fix this http://puu.sh/eLCDV/3c706d1f26.png about vol
  2. 00:46:140 (1,2) - isn't big problem just there are feel so empty ya ears bored imo, so how about add whistle in slider ends?
  3. same as intro part, it's up to you

Hard
  1. same here you should fix this http://puu.sh/eLFaL/3b8ed6bebb.png
  2. 00:04:806 (1) - i think so slider end is should be 00:05:473 - here also weird imo, exactly vocal until here 00:05:390 - and think some echo then http://puu.sh/eLDJn/127cf074a1.jpg it would be batter.
  3. 01:24:473 (4,1) - don't look at only your veiw, this part might be confuse. think 01:22:806 (3,4) - 1/2 gap and 01:24:473 (4,1) - 1/4 gap here almost same also you added newcombo they will think 01:24:473 (4,1) - 1/2 gap here imo. or ask it for more opinions

    nothing to say too much

카리아의 미친
  1. 하... 매핑굇 ㅡㅡ 제가 저번에 카리아님 맵 모딩할때도 언랭요소몇개좀 만들어두어달라고 말씀드렸던적이있었던거같은데.

Insane
  1. just check this http://puu.sh/eLHe5/777a119e13.png
  2. nothing to say
Knotts
712 posts
Joined May 2013
Topic Starter
Knotts

koreapenguin wrote:

Let's Mod this map \o/



General
  1. disabled in Karia's Insane diff fixed

Easy
  1. you must fix this http://puu.sh/eLCDV/3c706d1f26.png about vol fixed
  2. 00:15:473 - 00:56:723 - i guess this newcombo pattern isn't 8 bar. newcombo seem early 4 bar, compare Easy diff with Normal diff. ex) http://puu.sh/eLCf3/a2b57224ad.jpg I'm not sure what this means. Can you tell karia and then he can tell me

    nothing to say

Normal
  1. you must fix this http://puu.sh/eLCDV/3c706d1f26.png about vol fixed
  2. 00:46:140 (1,2) - isn't big problem just there are feel so empty ya ears bored imo, so how about add whistle in slider ends? ok
  3. same as intro part, it's up to you

Hard
  1. same here you should fix this http://puu.sh/eLFaL/3b8ed6bebb.png fixed
  2. 00:04:806 (1) - i think so slider end is should be 00:05:473 - here also weird imo, exactly vocal until here 00:05:390 - and think some echo then ok
  3. 01:24:473 (4,1) - don't look at only your veiw, this part might be confuse. think 01:22:806 (3,4) - 1/2 gap and 01:24:473 (4,1) - 1/4 gap here almost same also you added newcombo they will think 01:24:473 (4,1) - 1/2 gap here imo. or ask it for more opinions moved a little closer

    nothing to say too much

Insane
  1. just check this http://puu.sh/eLHe5/777a119e13.png fixed
  2. nothing to say
Thanks for the mod and star! :)
Trynna
714 posts
Joined May 2013
Trynna
love this music, lol


[Normal]

00:11:473 (1) - remove slider and add spinner

[Hard]

00:06:584 (2) - remove circle
00:06:473 - add a little spin with a back arrow
00:07:140 - add circle
00:07:973 (2) - change it to 1/3 and put in 00:08:029 (2) -
00:08:695 - add circle (1/3)
00:10:140 (1,2,3,4) - change sliders to 1/3 and use one backarrow
01:06:723 (3) - unnecessary circle
01:15:473 (1,2) - change to 1/3 and use one back arrow
01:16:695 - add circle (1/3)
01:16:806 (1,2) - change to 1/3 and use one back arrow

[Karia's Insane]

00:11:473 (1) - remove circle and add spinner

[Insane]

00:01:306 - add a circle here maybe
idk

good luck
Knotts
712 posts
Joined May 2013
Topic Starter
Knotts

Firewest wrote:

love this music, lol


[Normal]

00:11:473 (1) - remove slider and add spinner There wouldn't be enough recover time unfortunately. Had to remove the spinner

[Hard]

00:06:584 (2) - remove circle Used to follow the vocal
00:06:473 - add a little spin with a back arrow Circle makes it easier and follows the vocals in a simple fashion
00:07:140 - add circle I don't really want an object there because that'd be a little too much for a hard, plus i skipped it 00:09:806
00:07:973 (2) - change it to 1/3 and put in 00:08:029 (2) - done
00:08:695 - add circle (1/3) I want to limit the amount of 1/3s I have in the hard and i dont think its too necessary to have a note for that vocal
00:10:140 (1,2,3,4) - change sliders to 1/3 and use one backarrow ^
01:06:723 (3) - unnecessary circle it's used to somewhat follow the vocal
01:15:473 (1,2) - change to 1/3 and use one back arrow not really necessary
01:16:695 - add circle (1/3) ^
01:16:806 (1,2) - change to 1/3 and use one back arrow ^



[Insane]

00:01:306 - add a circle here maybe doesn't seem necessary to me
idk

good luck
Thanks for the mod! (someone help me with the whistles in the beginning, I have no idea what I'm doing :x)
nika mika
397 posts
Joined January 2014
nika mika
Hi~from my queue.
[Insane]
01:06:806 (4) – start at here01:06:723 -
Some suggestions on rhythm:
00:00:140 -00:00:640 –00:08:723 -00:58:056 -01:14:056 -add
00:01:640 -00:01:806 -00:05:640 -00:58:306 -00:52:723 -00:58:640 -00:58:723 -01:01:306 -01:07:306 -01:07:390 –delete
I personally think you are overusing triples, so delete some if you do think so.
[Hard]
00:06:140 (1,2,3,4,5) –fill those 1/3s
00:13:473 (3) – this distance is too far for hard
01:24:806 (1) -^
00:58:640 (4,5) –delete
01:16:390 - 01:17:723 -10% volume here
[Normal]
00:11:473 –I suggest a spinner instead of a slider here
00:12:806 –If you take the suggestion above add some notes here
01:04:806 (1) - 01:07:473 (1) - make a reverse slider like 01:06:140 (3) –
[Easy]
No big problems. Nice mapped.
lolia
1,356 posts
Joined May 2012
lolia

koreapenguin wrote:

Karia's Trash
  1. 하... 매핑굇 ㅡㅡ 제가 저번에 카리아님 맵 모딩할때도 언랭요소몇개좀 만들어두어달라고 말씀드렸던적이있었던거같은데. 헐, 하나 있었죠. 1/6 슬라 :D

Firewest wrote:

[Karia's Insane]
00:11:473 (1) - remove circle and add spinner Here is bit weird timing to me, so I don't want to it @3@
Thanks for moddings!!
Knotts
712 posts
Joined May 2013
Topic Starter
Knotts

nikachyan wrote:

Hi~from my queue.
[Insane]
01:06:806 (4) – start at here01:06:723 - not really trying to map the vocals there
Some suggestions on rhythm:
00:00:140 -00:00:640 –00:08:723 -00:58:056 -01:14:056 -add the notes in the beginning are before the offset. The other's don't really require anything on them
00:01:640 -00:01:806 -00:05:640 -00:58:306 -00:52:723 -00:58:640 -00:58:723 -01:01:306 -01:07:306 -01:07:390 –delete don't see any point
I personally think you are overusing triples, so delete some if you do think so.
[Hard]
00:06:140 (1,2,3,4,5) –fill those 1/3s can't find a way to without making it ridiculous for a hard
00:13:473 (3) – this distance is too far for hard not really, looks pretty close to me
01:24:806 (1) -^ ^
00:58:640 (4,5) –delete no need
01:16:390 - 01:17:723 -10% volume here i can't hear them at the volume it's at now so no need
[Normal]
00:11:473 –I suggest a spinner instead of a slider here not enough recovery time
00:12:806 –If you take the suggestion above add some notes here
01:04:806 (1) - 01:07:473 (1) - make a reverse slider like 01:06:140 (3) – don't want to overuse that
[Easy]
No big problems. Nice mapped.
Thanks for the mod
Kibbleru
osu! Alumni
5,846 posts
Joined August 2013
Kibbleru
hi m4m

general
  1. get a better mp3 wtf (tbh it could be louder, its still far from being clipped yet) or maybe the mp3 quality is okay but needs to be a bit louder.
  2. get someone to check timing (ticclick maybe) the offset sounds slightly early but maybe its just me
    holy shit ur hitsounds are clipped af
insanerino
  1. 01:15:140 (7) - nc? sv change :o
  2. 00:08:029 - this vocal suppose to be on 1/3 i think
    01:17:806 (1) - ^
    01:18:473 (2) - ^
    01:18:806 (4) - ^
    man fk it look at karia's diff for reference.
  3. 01:19:362 (6) - im not too sure if this is suppose to be 1/2 or 1/3 judging by the general "feeling" it should be 1/3 i think but idk
  4. 00:24:390 - clap sounds a bit loud here.. you can try using drum sample hitnormal :3 imo it works nice for the quiet streams
    00:45:390 - ^
  5. 00:49:973 - i guess you can add a triplet here, optional
  6. 01:00:306 (3) - jump doesn't really fit :X i don't hear anything here so just make the spacing smaller imo
  7. 01:04:806 (1) - slider end should also be on 1/3
    01:16:473 (1) - ^
  8. 00:08:695 - there are vocals on 1/3 but i guess its also correct if you say you follow the drums i recommend you use 1/3 for this entire section though 00:07:806 (2,3,4,5) - like karia did
hi karia
  1. use od7 imo since this is the easier insane
  2. 00:07:695 (2) - kinda overmaped but i guess it plays cool o_O
  3. 00:39:140 (3,1) - blah nazi space this out abit, they almost touch and look a bit meh
  4. 00:47:723 - sorry what? i don't hear anything here..
  5. 00:48:640 (3) - maybe remove 1 repeat, makes it nicer to play considering (i think) this should be the easier insane
  6. 01:24:806 (1,2,3) - this is somewhat bad structure. with here you established the fact that you will be using triplet stacks however here 01:25:140 (4,5,6,7,8) - you switched and stacked 5 notes at once, i don't really hear that much of a difference music wise so i'm not sure why you did that.
  7. 01:19:362 (6) - im not too sure if this is suppose to be 1/2 or 1/3 judging by the general "feeling" it should be 1/3 i think but idk
  8. 00:24:473 (2) - might as well nc this?
  9. 00:44:806 - why not do something similar to 00:23:473 - ? your choice though
  10. 01:09:473 - maybe u can end kiai here instead since this is the start of the lead-in
    tbh i would prefer if this got nerfed even more cuz it'll fit the spread better particularly i would nerf some of these 1/4 jumps like 00:14:640 (2,3) - 00:15:306 (5,1) - 00:17:306 (2,3) - and some of your 1/3 stuff lol. things like this 00:07:695 (2,3,4,5) - are really hard to play.
hard
  1. 00:06:140 (1,2,3,4,5) - i see that you're trying to simplify, but wtf is this rhythm, you missed all the strong white ticks,
  2. 00:09:140 (2,3) - same as insane, this part should be 1/3
  3. 00:23:473 (1,2,3,4) - woah k nerf this a bit :X
    00:44:806 (1,2,3,4) - ^ just make 00:44:806 (1,3) - 1/2 sliders cuz they have drum beats on the red ticks
  4. 00:22:806 (4,5) - u know parts like these you can just have a jump so they don't retardedly overlap lol :X unless this was on purpose
  5. 00:43:306 (6,7,1) - when you have a triplet at the end of a jump, it becomes retardedly hard to hit. i wouldn't do this lol
    00:19:306 (5,6,1) - ^
  6. 01:05:140 (2,3) - okay stacking this just gets worse lol
  7. 01:04:473 (4) - fk you probably have a bunch of sliders that should end on 1/3 again. just check insane pls.
  8. 01:25:806 (4,1) - ehh don't do this lol. this gets somewhat confusing
    01:24:473 (4,1) - ^
    01:16:140 (1,2) -
    01:17:473 (1,2) -
    yeh every single one lol. the map is hard enough with your overlaps
normal
  1. yeah ar 5... balances spread more and fits better
  2. 00:42:140 (4) - this note is too hidden, hard to catch
  3. 01:21:306 (2) - i don't see much of a reason for this note to be here
  4. 01:18:640 (2) - lol this should be 1/3 just remove it.
    01:18:806 (3) - ^similar, make this 1/1
easy
  1. 00:26:140 (1,4) - lol is this overlap intentional
    damn this is a nice diff o/
call me back when u get these fixed.

nvm this is only 5 days old. wait a bit pls lol
lolia
1,356 posts
Joined May 2012
lolia

Kibbleru wrote:

hi karia hello //
  1. use od7 imo since this is the easier insane sure
  2. 00:07:695 (2) - kinda overmaped but i guess it plays cool o_O xD
  3. 00:39:140 (3,1) - blah nazi space this out abit, they almost touch and look a bit meh fixed
  4. 00:47:723 - sorry what? i don't hear anything here.. Right ww, fixed
  5. 00:48:640 (3) - maybe remove 1 repeat, makes it nicer to play considering (i think) this should be the easier insane Hmm,, ok
  6. 01:24:806 (1,2,3) - this is somewhat bad structure. with here you established the fact that you will be using triplet stacks however here 01:25:140 (4,5,6,7,8) - you switched and stacked 5 notes at once, i don't really hear that much of a difference music wise so i'm not sure why you did that. fixed to same rhythm!
  7. 01:19:362 (6) - im not too sure if this is suppose to be 1/2 or 1/3 judging by the general "feeling" it should be 1/3 i think but idk Maybe should be 1/2 from 01:19:306 - here. fixed
  8. 00:24:473 (2) - might as well nc this? This is a just circle, so I want to keep it xP
  9. 00:44:806 - why not do something similar to 00:23:473 - ? your choice though The music is more silent than there, so that SV change can't big effect imo x)
  10. 01:09:473 - maybe u can end kiai here instead since this is the start of the lead-in fixed
    tbh i would prefer if this got nerfed even more cuz it'll fit the spread better particularly i would nerf some of these 1/4 jumps like 00:14:640 (2,3) - 00:15:306 (5,1) - 00:17:306 (2,3) - and some of your 1/3 stuff lol. things like this 00:07:695 (2,3,4,5) - are really hard to play. fixed several 1/4 rhythms, but 1/3 is not so hard imo QnQ
thanks for modding!

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Knotts
712 posts
Joined May 2013
Topic Starter
Knotts

Kibbleru wrote:

hi m4m i don't remember when we made this agreement, but whatever lmao

general
  1. get a better mp3 wtf (tbh it could be louder, its still far from being clipped yet) or maybe the mp3 quality is okay but needs to be a bit louder. i'll get working on these things tomorrow or something
  2. get someone to check timing (ticclick maybe) the offset sounds slightly early but maybe its just me
    holy shit ur hitsounds are clipped af
insanerino
  1. 01:15:140 (7) - nc? sv change :o Do these NC apply when everything before it were circles? Not sure if this is really necessary
  2. 00:08:029 - this vocal suppose to be on 1/3 i think ...fk
    01:17:806 (1) - ^ ^
    01:18:473 (2) - ^ ^
    01:18:806 (4) - ^ ^
    man fk it look at karia's diff for reference.
  3. 01:19:362 (6) - im not too sure if this is suppose to be 1/2 or 1/3 judging by the general "feeling" it should be 1/3 i think but idk sounds like 1/2 to me here
  4. 00:24:390 - clap sounds a bit loud here.. you can try using drum sample hitnormal :3 imo it works nice for the quiet streams k
    00:45:390 - ^ ^
  5. 00:49:973 - i guess you can add a triplet here, optional added
  6. 01:00:306 (3) - jump doesn't really fit :X i don't hear anything here so just make the spacing smaller imo
  7. 01:04:806 (1) - slider end should also be on 1/3 k
    01:16:473 (1) - ^ ^
  8. 00:08:695 - there are vocals on 1/3 but i guess its also correct if you say you follow the drums i recommend you use 1/3 for this entire section though 00:07:806 (2,3,4,5) - like karia did
done

hard
  1. 00:06:140 (1,2,3,4,5) - i see that you're trying to simplify, but wtf is this rhythm, you missed all the strong white ticks, fixed
  2. 00:09:140 (2,3) - same as insane, this part should be 1/3 ^
  3. 00:23:473 (1,2,3,4) - woah k nerf this a bit :X 1/2's it is
    00:44:806 (1,2,3,4) - ^ just make 00:44:806 (1,3) - 1/2 sliders cuz they have drum beats on the red ticks ^
  4. 00:22:806 (4,5) - u know parts like these you can just have a jump so they don't retardedly overlap lol :X unless this was on purpose it was on purpose (kinda copied Karia's style on the hard he made for me a while back lol
  5. 00:43:306 (6,7,1) - when you have a triplet at the end of a jump, it becomes retardedly hard to hit. i wouldn't do this lol doesn't feel that hard to hit
    00:19:306 (5,6,1) - ^ ^
  6. 01:05:140 (2,3) - okay stacking this just gets worse lol
  7. 01:04:473 (4) - fk you probably have a bunch of sliders that should end on 1/3 again. just check insane pls. i think i got most of them
  8. 01:25:806 (4,1) - ehh don't do this lol. this gets somewhat confusing k
    01:24:473 (4,1) - ^ k
    01:16:140 (1,2) - k
    01:17:473 (1,2) - k
    yeh every single one lol. the map is hard enough with your overlaps k
normal
  1. yeah ar 5... balances spread more and fits better i'll take your word since i know nothing about spread
  2. 00:42:140 (4) - this note is too hidden, hard to catch fixed
  3. 01:21:306 (2) - i don't see much of a reason for this note to be here removed
  4. 01:18:640 (2) - lol this should be 1/3 just remove it. k
    01:18:806 (3) - ^similar, make this 1/1 k
easy
  1. 00:26:140 (1,4) - lol is this overlap intentional fixed
    damn this is a nice diff o/
call me back when u get these fixed.

nvm this is only 5 days old. wait a bit pls lol
RIP, never mapping 1/3 again. Thanks for the mod.
CakiP
384 posts
Joined February 2012
CakiP
hi there.

[Easy]
00:08:806 (1) - add hitsounds. maybe clap or normal whistle?
00:09:473 (2) - ^
00:15:140 - add note?
00:17:806 (4) - not good flow... :o just imo

fine :D


[Normal]
00:19:973 (2,3) - change to slider?
00:25:806 (3,4) - try this.
img
00:36:473 (3,4) - ^
00:54:640 (2,3) - just imo, i don't like this. please change to slider :?
00:55:973 (6,7) - ^


[Hard]
00:08:640 - add note? I heard sound here.
00:12:806 (1,2,3,4) - Please turn down the volume. a little

nice diff. i like this :)


[Insane]
00:09:306 (3,4) - It's difficult to read. i think. :o
01:16:390 (1) - stack 01:16:140 (7) - I like this pattern :DDD


sorry for skip gd. my suck mod :(


good luck!
Knotts
712 posts
Joined May 2013
Topic Starter
Knotts

CakiP wrote:

hi there.

[Easy]
00:08:806 (1) - add hitsounds. maybe clap or normal whistle? i have soft whistle on it already
00:09:473 (2) - ^ I think clap or normal whistle would be too loud so i put soft whistle instead
00:15:140 - add note? not enough recovery time after spinner
00:17:806 (4) - not good flow... :o just imo plays fine to me

fine :D


[Normal]
00:19:973 (2,3) - change to slider? i think circles emphasize this music more
00:25:806 (3,4) - try this. pretty much plays the same but my way looks better to me
img
00:36:473 (3,4) - ^ ^
00:54:640 (2,3) - just imo, i don't like this. please change to slider :? it emphasizes the music more plus it helps the spread a bit more than having a slider ;x
00:55:973 (6,7) - ^ ^


[Hard]
00:08:640 - add note? I heard sound here. I don't really hear anything worth mapping here and I'm trying to keep this part as simple as possible because of all the 1/3s
00:12:806 (1,2,3,4) - Please turn down the volume. a little it'll probably be fine once i get a new mp3

nice diff. i like this :) thanks!


[Insane]
00:09:306 (3,4) - It's difficult to read. i think. :o looks fine to me
01:16:390 (1) - stack 01:16:140 (7) - might be a little too hard to tell that there's 1/2 spacing between them when they're stacked I like this pattern :DDD thanks!


sorry for skip gd. my suck mod :(


good luck!
Thanks for the mod and star!
Phos-
773 posts
Joined December 2012
Phos-
Hi, from the Faded Modding Queue~

[General]
  1. Looks good~
[Easy]
  1. 00:27:140 (2,3,4) - You should improve this triangle, looks somewhat untidy atm. You can easily do this by nudging (3) to the left, and then readjust the other notes to fix spacing.
  2. 00:37:473 (2,3) - I think this pattern would flow a lot better if you were to move (3) to x:248 y:320, this way the cursor from (2) will already be on its way to the start of (3), and won't have to change direction to hit the next note. Don't forget to move the notes afterwards to prevent spacing errors.
[Normal]
  1. 01:01:473 (4,1) - This blanket isn't done very well, making the pattern seem untidy. You should fix it, even if a blanket wasn't your intent it will still look nicer.
  2. 01:02:806 (3,4,5) - You should improve this triangle pattern. If you were to make this a nice equilateral triangle, then the pattern will look cleaner imo.
  3. 01:11:473 (4) - Add a soft finish at the start of this slider. In this part of the song, you seem to be having a soft finish on every other downbeat, so excluding the finish here will make it inconsistent, causing it to sound odd and out of place.
[Hard]
  1. 00:32:140 (4,5) - You've probably done this overlap (and similar ones) intentionally, but tbh I'm not really a fan of it, looks untidy imo.
  2. 01:21:806 (4) - The drum finish you've placed at the end of this slider feels out of place, this is the only time you've used this in the music, so it feels weird to hear it for the first time towards the end of the song. Either add more in earlier places or replace this with another hitsound.
  3. 01:23:473 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - The random hitsounds you've placed in this slider stream (starts of 01:24:140 (3,4) - for example) don't really sound nice because there isn't a significant enough change in the music to justify them, so they sound weird and out of place. I suggest removing them and keeping the stream's hitsounds consistent.
[Karia's Insane]
  1. 00:37:806 (6,1) - I don't really like how a massive portion of (1) is hidden beneath (6), it doesn't look that great and players will likely have trouble reading this. I would change things a bit so a smaller portion of the slider is covered.
  2. 01:17:473 (1,1) - The two sliderends aren't properly stacked. Although this is really minor, it's still noticeable because auto stacking doesn't occur with overlaps like these, so it's important that they are precise, otherwise the map will seem untidy.
[Insane]
  1. 01:21:806 (5) - Like in your hard diff, this drum finish feels out of place, so consider removing it or adding more.
Nice mapset ^^ There's really not much to point out.

I shot a star, good luck!
Kibbleru
osu! Alumni
5,846 posts
Joined August 2013
Kibbleru
k ill be expecting mah mod soon :D/....https://osu.ppy.sh/s/262343
Knotts
712 posts
Joined May 2013
Topic Starter
Knotts

[ Faded ] wrote:

Hi, from the Faded Modding Queue~

[General]
  1. Looks good~
[Easy]
  1. 00:27:140 (2,3,4) - You should improve this triangle, looks somewhat untidy atm. You can easily do this by nudging (3) to the left, and then readjust the other notes to fix spacing. wasn't really going for a triangle thing
  2. 00:37:473 (2,3) - I think this pattern would flow a lot better if you were to move (3) to x:248 y:320, this way the cursor from (2) will already be on its way to the start of (3), and won't have to change direction to hit the next note. Don't forget to move the notes afterwards to prevent spacing errors. i think you gave me the wrong coordinates or something
[Normal]
  1. 01:01:473 (4,1) - This blanket isn't done very well, making the pattern seem untidy. You should fix it, even if a blanket wasn't your intent it will still look nicer. adjusted
  2. 01:02:806 (3,4,5) - You should improve this triangle pattern. If you were to make this a nice equilateral triangle, then the pattern will look cleaner imo. don't really pay attention to these things in lower difficulties but why not
  3. 01:11:473 (4) - Add a soft finish at the start of this slider. In this part of the song, you seem to be having a soft finish on every other downbeat, so excluding the finish here will make it inconsistent, causing it to sound odd and out of place. don't have one in the other difficulties (neither does Karia) so I'd rather not.
[Hard]
  1. 00:32:140 (4,5) - You've probably done this overlap (and similar ones) intentionally, but tbh I'm not really a fan of it, looks untidy imo. i like it :3
  2. 01:21:806 (4) - The drum finish you've placed at the end of this slider feels out of place, this is the only time you've used this in the music, so it feels weird to hear it for the first time towards the end of the song. Either add more in earlier places or replace this with another hitsound. i guess ill switch to whistle
  3. 01:23:473 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - The random hitsounds you've placed in this slider stream (starts of 01:24:140 (3,4) - for example) don't really sound nice because there isn't a significant enough change in the music to justify them, so they sound weird and out of place. I suggest removing them and keeping the stream's hitsounds consistent. true
[Insane]
  1. 01:21:806 (5) - Like in your hard diff, this drum finish feels out of place, so consider removing it or adding more. k
Nice mapset ^^ There's really not much to point out.

I shot a star, good luck!
Thanks for the mod and star!

Kibbleru wrote:

k ill be expecting mah mod soon :D/....https://osu.ppy.sh/s/262343
Lmao alright, i'll get to it by the end of this weekend b/c finals
lolia
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Joined May 2012
lolia

[ Faded ] wrote:

[Karia's Insane]
  1. 00:37:806 (6,1) - I don't really like how a massive portion of (1) is hidden beneath (6), it doesn't look that great and players will likely have trouble reading this. I would change things a bit so a smaller portion of the slider is covered. I don't dislike this overlap and reading also no problem imo @3@
  2. 01:17:473 (1,1) - The two sliderends aren't properly stacked. Although this is really minor, it's still noticeable because auto stacking doesn't occur with overlaps like these, so it's important that they are precise, otherwise the map will seem untidy. fixed
Thanks for modding!

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lolia
1,356 posts
Joined May 2012
lolia
Fixed the hitsounds!

SPOILER
osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: Shiena Nishizawa-Fubuki.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 58670
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 54140,58473
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 5.599997

[Metadata]
Title:FUBUKI
TitleUnicode:吹雪
Artist:Nishizawa Shiena
ArtistUnicode:西沢幸奏
Creator:Knotts
Version:Karia's Insane
Source:艦隊これくしょん -艦これ-
Tags:ending TV Size kancolle kantai collection karia
BeatmapID:604817
BeatmapSetID:263033

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Phos-
773 posts
Joined December 2012
Phos-

Knotts wrote:

  1. 00:37:473 (2,3) - I think this pattern would flow a lot better if you were to move (3) to x:248 y:320, this way the cursor from (2) will already be on its way to the start of (3), and won't have to change direction to hit the next note. Don't forget to move the notes afterwards to prevent spacing errors. i think you gave me the wrong coordinates or something
oops lol, I meant to highlight 00:37:420 (4,1) - instead, and move (1) to coordinates x:428 y:320
Sorry about that >.>
hehe
1,971 posts
Joined November 2012
hehe
hi nots

l-lewd.. i did not come for lolis

also, p/3744771

Insane

  1. 00:09:170 (3) - is dis fakking snapped to 1/12
  2. 00:24:253 - as an avid enthusiast of streams, there is a lack of stream here.
  3. 00:58:420 (3) - shifting this to somewhere 200,45 is better imo, super antijump to stream is just awkward.
  4. 01:24:087 (9) - NC plox
  5. 01:25:420 (7) - this too

Hard

  1. nothing major but doesn't it irk you that 1/2 sliderheads and ends touch? dat SV is slow so slow
  2. 00:02:087 (1) - distinctly remember this being ctrl+g's before. okay but just to be sure make sure the sliderends stack. that pattern is way better.
  3. 00:11:420 (1) - move this a little to the left so it fits with that staggered stream thing you like to do
  4. 00:56:420 (5,1) - make this look better its like a half-overlap half-blanket
  5. 01:00:587 (4,1) - imo, stack isn't really needed here. use DS instead.
  6. 01:05:420 (3,4) - same thing here
  7. 01:08:753 (1) - not your best slidershape :p

Normal

  1. just a caution, you're probably gonna need to have a little bit more 1/2 rhythms in here to make the spread a little more smooth from normal to hard.
  2. 00:42:753 - have a clicky here, rather than a reverse. muh vocals
  3. 01:01:420 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - strongly feel that its fine to have a rhythm like this. it might be repetitive but it captures the repetitive nature of the vocals :phttp://i.imgur.com/npYztAo.png
  4. 01:04:753 (1) - maybe have the bend on the tick lol, well actually you're probably gonna make this long slider harder anyway :v

Easy

  1. 00:08:753 (1,2) - ctrl+g in rhythm, more suitable to the vocals, imo
  2. 00:11:420 (1) - end spinner here 00:12:753 - and start the rhythm here 00:14:087 - . a little awkward now
  3. 00:54:087 (1,2) - ahhh awkawrd rhythm, here something simple n good: http://i.imgur.com/3OxW7QL.png

mapset is on point, good luck.
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Mint
1,611 posts
Joined February 2013
Mint
Hello Knotts! forum pm

:idea: General


* Timing felt a little off for me, and I personally got 738. You should check with more people though, my timing skills aren't that good - and this song sounds a bit tricky anyway ._.

Hitsounds


* Your diffs only.
* 00:01:587 - (Insane) I don't really get why you added a whistle here on the red tick. To me if kinda feels spammed, because directly after that (4)'s head has one. There's no real sound in the song itself where it could go with, and you didn't put it at 00:04:087 (3) - 's end for example. I'd remove the whistle, and add it on the slider head instead.
* 00:02:087 (1) - Optional, but add a whistle for the piano?
* 00:04:420 (4) - Add whistle, same sound as 00:01:753 (3) - ?
* 00:14:087 (1) - Dunno why you have an extra clap here. There's no extra sound other than the cymbal that jumps out to me here. To me, this sound is similar to 00:59:420 (1) -
* 00:17:337 (4) - Add a clap here on the blue tick. Same sound as 00:18:670 (5) -
* 00:21:253 - Remove the clap here? There's nothing in the song itself, just like 00:18:587 (4) -
* 00:47:420 (1) - Sounds so empty here, add whistle or clap ;w;?
* 00:52:753 (1) - Hmm.. I hear a cymbal here, add finish?
* 00:58:587 (1) - I'd add a clap here. There's no sound or anything in the song, I must admit that, but you put a green line here with 20%, making this note more qujiet than the others. Not adding a clap makes this note almost silent.
* 01:04:420 (6) - Sounds more like a cymbal to me >_>

Easy


* 00:24:420 (4) - Optional, but I'd split this slider into two circles so the finish is clickable.

Normal


* 00:19:920 (2,3) - Change this to a slider, like 00:14:587 (2) - ? Would make the rhythm more consistent.
* 00:27:753 (2) - I'd curve it the other way for a smoother flow.
* 00:29:420 (4,5,1,2,3) - This seems to be quite a lot of 1/2 tapping compared to the rest of your diffs. Especially after a short repeat slider at (4) this might confuse some players. Consider removing (5) so this pattern is a bit more simple.
* 00:54:587 (2,3) - I recommend turning these into sliders as well. This rhythm is repeated twice and might be a bit hard for normal players to play this without a small break in between. You don't even have these kind of things in the KIAI time, so I don't recommend doing it in a calmer part like now.
* 00:55:920 (6,7) - If you do the suggestion above, you should apply it here as well.
* 01:10:087 (1,2,3,4) - Consider some tweaking here so it's visually more appealing.

Hard


* 00:09:920 (4) - There should really be something here imo. The vocal note here is much stronger than 00:09:420 (3) - imo. Try something like this?
* 00:31:587 (2) - Remove this note? A gap here fits quite nice imo, and you didn't map 00:38:253 - either.
* 00:40:753 (1,2,3,4,5) - This rhythm isn't really following the vocals, but it's not following the instruments either... Consider using this rhythm? Would make it a bit simlar to 00:31:420 (4,5) - and it gives more emphasis to both the vocals and the instruments.

Karia's Insane


* 00:03:420 (1) - Since you don't really have a lot of hitsounds in the beginning, I highly suggest to at least put something here. This feels really empty here, while this is quite a strong beat. A whistle or clap would fit perfectly fine here.
* 00:09:309 (4) - Sounds like an overmap to me (plays fine though)
* 00:26:087 (1,2,3) - I'd make (2,3)'s spacing larger than (1,2), because of the whistle at (3).

Insane


* 00:08:420 (4,5,6,1) - I recommend stacking these. The rhythm usage here is already complicated, and you did stack at 00:05:920 (1,2) -
* 00:10:420 (3,4) - The distance here plays a bit awkward after the jumps at (1,2). Consider increasing the spacing here, making (3) a 1/2 slider, or adding another circle at 00:10:587 -? You didn't have any gap in the Hard diff though...
* 00:20:753 (1) - Consider adding a small curve to this slider? Would flow better and especially with a 3/4 slider + note it's smoother to play.

Looks good overall, rhythm and placement looks fine to me!

Good luck :3
Knotts
712 posts
Joined May 2013
Topic Starter
Knotts

appleeaterx wrote:

Hello Knotts! forum pm

:idea: General


* Timing felt a little off for me, and I personally got 738. You should check with more people though, my timing skills aren't that good - and this song sounds a bit tricky anyway ._. I'll get some people to check it out

Hitsounds


* Your diffs only.
* 00:01:587 - (Insane) I don't really get why you added a whistle here on the red tick. To me if kinda feels spammed, because directly after that (4)'s head has one. There's no real sound in the song itself where it could go with, and you didn't put it at 00:04:087 (3) - 's end for example. I'd remove the whistle, and add it on the slider head instead. woops
* 00:02:087 (1) - Optional, but add a whistle for the piano? sure
* 00:04:420 (4) - Add whistle, same sound as 00:01:753 (3) - ? done
* 00:14:087 (1) - Dunno why you have an extra clap here. There's no extra sound other than the cymbal that jumps out to me here. To me, this sound is similar to 00:59:420 (1) - k
* 00:17:337 (4) - Add a clap here on the blue tick. Same sound as 00:18:670 (5) - k
* 00:21:253 - Remove the clap here? There's nothing in the song itself, just like 00:18:587 (4) - k
* 00:47:420 (1) - Sounds so empty here, add whistle or clap ;w;? done
* 00:52:753 (1) - Hmm.. I hear a cymbal here, add finish? added
* 00:58:587 (1) - I'd add a clap here. There's no sound or anything in the song, I must admit that, but you put a green line here with 20%, making this note more qujiet than the others. Not adding a clap makes this note almost silent. alright
* 01:04:420 (6) - Sounds more like a cymbal to me >_> sounds like both clap and finish fits here

Easy


* 00:24:420 (4) - Optional, but I'd split this slider into two circles so the finish is clickable. not really a fan of two circles in a row in an easy. Mostly appearance wise

Normal


* 00:19:920 (2,3) - Change this to a slider, like 00:14:587 (2) - ? Would make the rhythm more consistent. i think this one has more emphasis on it so i used circles instead
* 00:27:753 (2) - I'd curve it the other way for a smoother flow. oh cool. hopefully it doesn't destroy the flow from (1) though
* 00:29:420 (4,5,1,2,3) - This seems to be quite a lot of 1/2 tapping compared to the rest of your diffs. Especially after a short repeat slider at (4) this might confuse some players. Consider removing (5) so this pattern is a bit more simple. done
* 00:54:587 (2,3) - I recommend turning these into sliders as well. This rhythm is repeated twice and might be a bit hard for normal players to play this without a small break in between. You don't even have these kind of things in the KIAI time, so I don't recommend doing it in a calmer part like now. ehh, im gonna keep this one. it helps the spread between the normal and hard
* 00:55:920 (6,7) - If you do the suggestion above, you should apply it here as well. ^
* 01:10:087 (1,2,3,4) - Consider some tweaking here so it's visually more appealing. k

Hard


* 00:09:920 (4) - There should really be something here imo. The vocal note here is much stronger than 00:09:420 (3) - imo. Try something like this?
* 00:31:587 (2) - Remove this note? A gap here fits quite nice imo, and you didn't map 00:38:253 - either. it sounds so naked to me yet the one where i did put a gap sounds natural... :3 idk
* 00:40:753 (1,2,3,4,5) - This rhythm isn't really following the vocals, but it's not following the instruments either... Consider using this rhythm? Would make it a bit simlar to 00:31:420 (4,5) - and it gives more emphasis to both the vocals and the instruments. ehh this already sounds fine to me

Insane


* 00:08:420 (4,5,6,1) - I recommend stacking these. The rhythm usage here is already complicated, and you did stack at 00:05:920 (1,2) - i stacked those because they are 1/2. I don't really like the way 4 objects stacked on 1/3 look together, plus i've played it multiple times and it doesn't really feel weird at all to play
* 00:10:420 (3,4) - The distance here plays a bit awkward after the jumps at (1,2). Consider increasing the spacing here, making (3) a 1/2 slider, or adding another circle at 00:10:587 -? You didn't have any gap in the Hard diff though... added a circle
* 00:20:753 (1) - Consider adding a small curve to this slider? Would flow better and especially with a 3/4 slider + note it's smoother to play. k

Looks good overall, rhythm and placement looks fine to me!

Good luck :3
Thanks for the mod! :D
[ Joey ]
390 posts
Joined May 2013
[ Joey ]
Hey Knotts! Here's my m4m :D

General
Your offset is pretty off. Offset 811 sounds a lot better to me.

Insane
00:02:144 (1) - Should put a whistle here. It's hard for me to hear any hitsound on this note, especially if you don't have a whistle on it, so you might want to consider increasing the volume on this as well.
00:10:644 (4) - I would prefer if this hitcircle was place somewhere around x:406 y:44. The flow feels a lot better that way.
00:13:477 - It would be cool if you increased the spacing of the stream here to match the music: http://puu.sh/eTkyD/319ac90721.jpg
00:15:394 - Should make a triple right here to match the trumpet sounding thing, much like what you did here 00:17:310 (3,4,5) -
00:18:060 - ^
00:31:394 - Maybe add a triple here too, for the same reason
00:34:060 - ^
00:34:977 (5,6) - I feel this jump should be larger to emphasize the stronger part of the song that start right afterwards.
00:51:144 (4,5) - Should add drum claps on these notes
01:25:144 (3,4,5,6,7) - I'd rather not have a closing stream stacked like this. It feels a little anti-climatic. Thats just my personal opinion though.
Really fun diff :)

Hard
00:09:473 (3) - I don't agree with this slider on 1/3. It doesn't really go with anything in my opinion. And it misses that noice right here 00:09:806 -
00:14:806 (3,4) - Are these suposed to be stacked?
00:45:473 (3) - It would sound better if a cymbal finish was on this slider head
01:25:473 (3,4) - Replacing these last two reverse sliders with hitcircles will give this difficulty a nice finish. It will also make your diff a little harder, which is a good thing because I think the gap in between this diff and the GD Insane is a little big.

Normal
00:11:473 (1) - Add whistle on slider head
00:12:806 - I recommend reducing the volume of this slider tail to about 40%. Right now it sounds a little loud.
00:32:140 (6) - I would prefer if this slider was pointing towards the next slider to improve flow, like this: http://puu.sh/eToYX/844ec0aa60.jpg
01:12:140 (5,6,1) - This combo looks pretty messy to me. Maybe make it more symmetrical

That's all I see!
Good luck!
Knotts
712 posts
Joined May 2013
Topic Starter
Knotts

[ Joey ] wrote:

Hey Knotts! Here's my m4m :D

General
Your offset is pretty off. Offset 811 sounds a lot better to me. yeah, but the offsets closer to 700, not 800. ill be getting it checked later

Insane
00:02:144 (1) - Should put a whistle here. It's hard for me to hear any hitsound on this note, especially if you don't have a whistle on it, so you might want to consider increasing the volume on this as well. there's already a whistle here
00:10:644 (4) - I would prefer if this hitcircle was place somewhere around x:406 y:44. The flow feels a lot better that way. not seeing the flow increase
00:13:477 - It would be cool if you increased the spacing of the stream here to match the music: http://puu.sh/eTkyD/319ac90721.jpg i'd rather not do something like that in my insane. it's an easyish insane
00:15:394 - Should make a triple right here to match the trumpet sounding thing, much like what you did here 00:17:310 (3,4,5) - i wasnt really mapping the trumpet here, i was mapping the clap
00:18:060 - ^ since i wasnt mapping the trumpet last time
00:31:394 - Maybe add a triple here too, for the same reason ^
00:34:060 - ^ ^
00:34:977 (5,6) - I feel this jump should be larger to emphasize the stronger part of the song that start right afterwards.
00:51:144 (4,5) - Should add drum claps on these notes i'd rather just keep whistles
01:25:144 (3,4,5,6,7) - I'd rather not have a closing stream stacked like this. It feels a little anti-climatic. Thats just my personal opinion though. just keeping it easy cause i hate playing streams
Really fun diff :)

Hard
00:09:473 (3) - I don't agree with this slider on 1/3. It doesn't really go with anything in my opinion. And it misses that noice right here 00:09:806 - ive been told it was 1/3
00:14:806 (3,4) - Are these suposed to be stacked? your timing and what not is all f'ed up so i dont know what you're talking about but it probably was supposed to be stacked
00:45:473 (3) - It would sound better if a cymbal finish was on this slider head disagree, doesn't sound like a finish to me
01:25:473 (3,4) - Replacing these last two reverse sliders with hitcircles will give this difficulty a nice finish. It will also make your diff a little harder, which is a good thing because I think the gap in between this diff and the GD Insane is a little big. stream of 6 seems a little crazy for a hard, plus the gap between the hard and karia's insane isn't large at all

Normal
00:11:473 (1) - Add whistle on slider head not a fan of how that sounds
00:12:806 - I recommend reducing the volume of this slider tail to about 40%. Right now it sounds a little loud. i can hardly hear it over the stream
00:32:140 (6) - I would prefer if this slider was pointing towards the next slider to improve flow, like this: http://puu.sh/eToYX/844ec0aa60.jpg flow from the circle then becomes awkward. the flow from the two sliders don't play too differently from what you have
01:12:140 (5,6,1) - This combo looks pretty messy to me. Maybe make it more symmetrical done


That's all I see!
Good luck!
Thanks for the mod, I'll get to your map over the weekend
lolia
1,356 posts
Joined May 2012
lolia

handsome wrote:

no love for karia cuz map is already solid Give me a love ww

appleeaterx wrote:

Karia's Insane


* 00:03:420 (1) - Since you don't really have a lot of hitsounds in the beginning, I highly suggest to at least put something here. This feels really empty here, while this is quite a strong beat. A whistle or clap would fit perfectly fine here. Hmm,,already I applied the drum-sampleset on here, but..Ok, added the whistle!
* 00:09:309 (4) - Sounds like an overmap to me (plays fine though) Actually there's no beat here, but this is natural to play and will be not unrankable imo.. I want to keep current rhythm ;w;
* 00:26:087 (1,2,3) - I'd make (2,3)'s spacing larger than (1,2), because of the whistle at (3). Usually I don't mind about DS when I using the jumps. I mapping that just for my personal aesthetic things, and current placement is better to me orz
Thanks for modding!
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Arlecchino
1,240 posts
Joined October 2013
Arlecchino
Hi there :3
from my hueue~

Easy

  1. 01:07:473 (1) - just normal slider curve for better blanket
  2. 00:48:806 (2) - improve blanket

    rest is fine for me~

Normal

  1. 00:08:753 (1) - blanketing to other side for better flow, just ctrl+j and repair the blanket like this
  2. 00:46:087 (1) - Improve the blanket maybe like this ?
  3. 01:15:087 (5) - stack properly ?

Hard

  1. 00:02:087 (1) - i want ctrl+g this cuz it would be more fun
  2. 00:07:976 (2) - snap to blue line, im not sure this is 1/6, wait after i test with 50% playback rate, this is the truth
  3. 00:09:420 (3) - im pretty sure this is 4/6 slider started in 2/6 *pict
  4. 00:16:003 - add note ?
  5. 01:12:253 (4) - this is follow what? just remove and stacking (5) with (3)

am i get old mp3 ? i feels the offset is too fast 1/6ms i guess, im download 21 jan (when you change new mp3 & hitsound)
mine the offset is still 754 :l
just finish this here, due i need take a rest for a while
shoots moons for awesome song and map :3
Kibbleru
osu! Alumni
5,846 posts
Joined August 2013
Kibbleru
insane
01:18:087 (1,2,3) - i think for this part it's better to keep the 1/3 up, just use two 2/3 sliders.

nice background by the way

hard
00:09:420 (3) - just do this
SPOILER
Knotts
712 posts
Joined May 2013
Topic Starter
Knotts

-[ Asuna ]- wrote:

Hi there :3
from my hueue~

Easy

  1. 01:07:473 (1) - just normal slider curve for better blanket i prefer what i already have :3
  2. 00:48:806 (2) - improve blanket adjusted

    rest is fine for me~

Normal

  1. 00:08:753 (1) - blanketing to other side for better flow, just ctrl+j and repair the blanket like this such a big gap between the objects so i don't think this really matters for the flow
  2. 00:46:087 (1) - Improve the blanket maybe like this ? adjusted
  3. 01:15:087 (5) - stack properly ? oops, idk how that happened

Hard

  1. 00:02:087 (1) - i want ctrl+g this cuz it would be more fun slow part of the song so i dont really want any big spacings here
  2. 00:07:976 (2) - snap to blue line, im not sure this is 1/6, wait after i test with 50% playback rate, this is the it's 1/3truth
  3. 00:09:420 (3) - im pretty sure this is 4/6 slider started in 2/6 its fine*pict
  4. 00:16:003 - add note ? not too necessary
  5. 01:12:253 (4) - this is follow what? just remove and stacking (5) with (3) follows the music

am i get old mp3 ? i feels the offset is too fast 1/6ms i guess, im download 21 jan (when you change new mp3 & hitsound)
mine the offset is still 754 :l yeah i'll try to get someone to check the timing
just finish this here, due i need take a rest for a while
shoots moons for awesome song and map :3

handsome wrote:

hi nots

l-lewd.. i did not come for lolis

also, p/3744771 fixed

Insane

  1. 00:09:170 (3) - is dis fakking snapped to 1/12 idk how that happened lol
  2. 00:24:253 - as an avid enthusiast of streams, there is a lack of stream here. streams = 666
  3. 00:58:420 (3) - shifting this to somewhere 200,45 is better imo, super antijump to stream is just awkward. moved it a little further away than how it already was
  4. 01:24:087 (9) - NC plox dont see a reason why
  5. 01:25:420 (7) - this too ^

Hard

  1. nothing major but doesn't it irk you that 1/2 sliderheads and ends touch? dat SV is slow so slow nah i feel good
  2. 00:02:087 (1) - distinctly remember this being ctrl+g's before. okay but just to be sure make sure the sliderends stack. that pattern is way better. its always been like this
  3. 00:11:420 (1) - move this a little to the left so it fits with that staggered stream thing you like to do done
  4. 00:56:420 (5,1) - make this look better its like a half-overlap half-blanket looks fine to me
  5. 01:00:587 (4,1) - imo, stack isn't really needed here. use DS instead. i'd rather keep it to keep my hard not too difficult
  6. 01:05:420 (3,4) - same thing here ^
  7. 01:08:753 (1) - not your best slidershape :p i use this slider all the time

Normal

  1. just a caution, you're probably gonna need to have a little bit more 1/2 rhythms in here to make the spread a little more smooth from normal to hard.
  2. 00:42:753 - have a clicky here, rather than a reverse. muh vocals it's just one long scream, idk what you want me to map
  3. 01:01:420 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - strongly feel that its fine to have a rhythm like this. it might be repetitive but it captures the repetitive nature of the vocals :phttp://i.imgur.com/npYztAo.png too many 1/2s in a row to me
  4. 01:04:753 (1) - maybe have the bend on the tick lol, well actually you're probably gonna make this long slider harder anyway :v tis fineee

Easy

  1. 00:08:753 (1,2) - ctrl+g in rhythm, more suitable to the vocals, imo done
  2. 00:11:420 (1) - end spinner here 00:12:753 - and start the rhythm here 00:14:087 - . a little awkward now done
  3. 00:54:087 (1,2) - ahhh awkawrd rhythm, here something simple n good: http://i.imgur.com/3OxW7QL.png
i think its fine how it is

mapset is on point, good luck.

Kibbleru wrote:

insane
01:18:087 (1,2,3) - i think for this part it's better to keep the 1/3 up, just use two 2/3 sliders. if you say so

nice background by the way heh, got it from Unsfamiliar

hard
00:09:420 (3) - just do this oh true
SPOILER
Thanks for the mods
Voxnola
729 posts
Joined May 2013
Voxnola
Can't wait for my American Express kds
lolia
1,356 posts
Joined May 2012
lolia
Self Modding
osu file format v13

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Momochikun
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Momochikun
[Insane]
00:07:404 (1) - Could finish on 1/3 snap imo (00:07:626 - ), since that's more fit with current pattern
http://puu.sh/eZutT/ad353823eb.jpg
I'm a bit unsure about 00:10:737 - but surely this part 00:10:071 - is 1/3 snap
01:11:904 (4) - This plays better if stacked with (2) imo
01:13:404 (3) - Finish for consistency ?
01:15:404 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This should be 1/3 snap too, i'm worried that following the drum which unclear 1/4 or 1/3 could cause an issue. Since the vocal is clearly 1/3
01:16:737 (1,2) - ^
01:17:404 (1) - End this at 01:17:626 - to fit 01:17:737 (1) -
01:19:404 (1,2) - also should be end at 1/3 snap, that could make more sense with the vocal
Knotts
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Topic Starter
Knotts

Momochikun wrote:

[Insane]
00:07:404 (1) - Could finish on 1/3 snap imo (00:07:626 - ), since that's more fit with current pattern alright
http://puu.sh/eZutT/ad353823eb.jpg
I'm a bit unsure about 00:10:737 - but surely this part 00:10:071 - is 1/3 snap ok
01:11:904 (4) - This plays better if stacked with (2) imo nice
01:13:404 (3) - Finish for consistency ? i dont hear a finish here :3
01:15:404 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This should be 1/3 snap too, i'm worried that following the drum which unclear 1/4 or 1/3 could cause an issue. Since the vocal is clearly 1/3 the drums sound like clear 1/4s to me
01:16:737 (1,2) - ^ I like mapping the drums here tho
01:17:404 (1) - End this at 01:17:626 - to fit 01:17:737 (1) - done
01:19:404 (1,2) - also should be end at 1/3 snap, that could make more sense with the vocal sounds like the drum ends on 1/4 though
Thanks for the mod
Kibbleru
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Kibbleru
i forgot, did i give you the mp3 yet?

http://puu.sh/f0ZE1/44be4aaf6c.mp3
Voxnola
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Voxnola
American Express kds pls





I helped with offset
Kibbleru
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Kibbleru
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00:09:000 (4,5,6) - it might be better to just make this a 2/3 slider, cuz i think the drums are on 1/4 but vocals are 1/3
00:59:667 - i swear to fking god there's drums on 1/3 here wtf
01:05:167 (7) - 1/3
01:07:250 (3) - ^

fuck every stream in this song. 01:10:000 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - this one is cool tho

okay so the only ones we gotta check are
00:10:889 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) -
00:59:167 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) -

also heres a new mp3 http://puu.sh/f7vP1/68830c62bb.mp3
Kibbleru
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Kibbleru
did u upload the new mp3? doesn't seem like u did :X
http://puu.sh/fdad3/d3e71c5154.mp3

also wtf is this
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