Yellow Zebra - Hana no iro wa ~Flowering Light~ · forum

DeFiLeR

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DeFiLeR 2010-04-02T15:53:23+00:00

つstar

Frill

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Frill 2010-04-02T16:22:12+00:00

thx ^^

TTTTTTTTTTTT

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TTTTTTTTTTTT 2010-04-03T03:08:56+00:00

Normal
00:29:825(5) - add a finish hitsound and ruduce volume
01:39:555(x) - add a note?
02:26:041(5) - move one gird down
02:46:582(4) - move one gird down
03:33:609(2) - move one gird left

Insane
01:57:122(1) - make symmetry

star~

Frill

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Frill 2010-04-03T04:37:08+00:00

Thanks H-boy.

fixed.

01:39:555(x) - Note was added.

DJPop

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DJPop 2010-04-03T16:46:37+00:00

Place timing section before the note.

~Normal~
01:01:176 (1,2,3) - move up 1 grid (Lv3)
01:14:420 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - move down 1 grid (Lv3) ?
02:16:852 (4,5,6,7) - move left 1 grid (Lv3)
02:44:960 (1,2,3) - move up 1 grid (Lv3)
02:51:447 (3,4,5) - move down 1 grid (Lv3)

~Insane~
00:34:149 (2,3) - wrong spacing
00:38:474 (3) - move right 1 grid (Lv3)
00:41:717 (1) - make it aligned with 2-3 ?
00:52:257 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - move left 1 grid (Lv3)
01:58:203 (2) - unrankable, it's completely hidden
02:44:960 (1) - move up 1 grid (Lv3)
03:02:798 (3,4,5) - ^
03:03:879 (6) - move up 2 grids (Lv3
03:10:906 (1) - move up & right 1 grid (Lv3)
03:11:176 (2,3) - move right 1 grid (Lv3)
03:22:528 (3,4,5) - wrong spacings
03:29:555 (5,6) - move up 1 grid (Lv3)

+Star

Derekku

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Derekku 2010-04-04T04:05:19+00:00

[General]
*Offset: 9,274 seems to be better. *Was only getting 1/2ms off after testing Insane twice)

[Normal]
Beautiful~

[Insane]
01:57:112 (1,2) - I like it, but it's unrankable (2 is practically invisible).
03:20:636 - Did you place a second kiai fountain here on purpose or did you just forget to keep kiai on the previous inherited section? Either way, make both difficulties consistent with kiai.

Fix those few things and I'll pubble this.

Derekku

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Derekku 2010-04-04T05:37:40+00:00

I love it <3

Pubbled!

Frill

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Frill 2010-04-04T05:45:23+00:00

all fixed.

thanks DJPop and Drekku Chan.

pubble~

Thanks!

Last edited by Frill 2010-04-04T06:57:36+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Aenna

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Aenna 2010-04-04T06:29:50+00:00

フォルダの中の.osbは不要です
消してフルでアップしなおしてください
Tagsに"Yellow Zebra"を追加してください

[Insane]
東方系の難易度名はLunaticが多いようです
Frillさんの自由ですがLunaticの方がしっくりくるかもしれません

00:26:571 (1) - 音量を変える際にtiming lineとサークルは被せちゃだめです timing lineを1つ手前の青や赤などに置いてください
01:07:922 (2) - 上と同じ内容です
01:09:814 (1) - このtiming lineは不要です消してください
01:11:814 (4) - Remove note?
01:11:976 (6) - New combo
01:12:246 (1) - Remove new combo
02:05:219 (4) - (00:26:571)と同じです
02:07:111 (3) - 上と同じ内容です
02:11:436 (6) - 上と同じで、ここにnew combo?
02:18:192 (4) - 上と同じです
02:19:003 (1) - 上と同じです
02:22:111 (6) - Remove note??
02:27:652 (x) - ここにサークルを追加 Soft finishがいいかも??(多分)
02:48:192 (6) - (00:26:571)と同じです
02:49:274 (1) - 上と同じです
02:53:598 (1) - 上と同じです
02:56:841 (1,3,1) - 上と同じです
03:10:084 (4) - 上と同じです
03:14:138 (3) - 上と同じです
03:15:490 (2) - 上と同じです
03:15:625 (3) - Remove note??
03:19:544 (1) - ここみたいに、kiaiを入れたいけど音量が変わるから手前に...って時は

こんな風に手前に音量のための線、サークル上にkiaiのための線、と入れればokです
03:19:814 (2) - (00:26:571)と同じです
03:20:084 (3) - ここのhit soundがスライダーの中間にしか入っていませんが故意的でしょうか？
もし始点か終点に入れてたと思った！などでしたら修正してください
03:28:192 (1) - (00:26:571)と同じですなぜkiaiが終わってるのでしょうか??

03:35:490 (1) - (00:26:571)と同じです
03:37:246 (2,2) - 上と同じです

[Normal]
HP Drain 1up?

こちらも言いたいことはInsaneとほぼ同じです
音量を変える時はサークルとかぶさらないように修正してください
01:13:868 (8) - Remove note??
01:14:138 (x) - Add note??
01:40:184 (1) - スライダーの終点が1 grid 上にいってます 1 grid 下では？
02:47:652 (5) - New combo
03:28192 (1) - Insaneといいたい事は同じです

所々ずれてるっぽいスライダーはgrid snapをoffにして配置したのかな

いい譜面だと思います
頑張ってください～☆

Frill

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Frill 2010-04-04T07:19:14+00:00

thx Cyborg

fixed.

grid snapは外した覚えないです。
ただのミスです。sorry

Nakagawa-Kanon

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Nakagawa-Kanon 2010-04-04T14:42:58+00:00

offset:9,285

[Normal]
01:56:841 (1) - spacing check plz
01:39:544 (6) - △

[Lunatic]
01:44:690 (3) - 1 grid down
02:25:771 (3) -

Frill

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Frill 2010-04-04T14:54:43+00:00

thx. dksslqj

fixed.

xierbaliti

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xierbaliti 2010-04-05T07:40:26+00:00

-General-
I saw many random hitsounds in this map,and there're no claps in clap place.Yes,soft-clap did't fit this song.But you can use a custom clap.

-Normal-
Seems good

-Lunatic-
00:17:933 (1) - add finish？
01:01:841~01:17:933 (9) - Volume 65%~75% this part?
02:26:041 (5) - 1 grid up

*star*

Frill

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Frill 2010-04-05T10:20:54+00:00

Thanks xierbaliti

fixed.

Frill

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Frill 2010-04-05T10:22:48+00:00

Title name Change

NEW
Sai Hua is ~Flowering Light~

REDOWNLOAD PLZ

Shulin

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Shulin 2010-04-05T22:15:14+00:00

General:

-- Are you sure the title is correct? "Hana no iro ha" seems more correct.
-- Offset 9275 worked much better for me.
-- Move to "Pending Beatmaps" (seems complete to me, unless you are mapping another difficulty?)
-- Add "ZUN" to tags.

Normal:

Good.

Lunatic:

01:40:761 (3) - Move forward to the red tick? (Shorten the slider if you do this)
02:56:302 (3,4,5) - I think this one is better as a regular stack.
03:00:491 (3) - Move forward to the white tick? (Shorten slider if you do this)

Only suggestions. Nice map.
~ Star

Derekku

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Derekku 2010-04-06T00:41:16+00:00

Popping this for now until the name is ascertained and it's back in Pending. o-o;;

Gimmie a call on irc or PM me for repubble.

Frill

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Frill 2010-04-06T08:09:22+00:00

sorry

all fixed :

and

Title Name Change

REDOWNLOAD PLZ XD

Shulin

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Shulin 2010-04-06T09:03:36+00:00

You forgot to move it back to pending beatmaps

(No kudos for this lol)

Frill

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Frill 2010-04-06T17:07:30+00:00

sorry XD

fixed

Thanks!

Derekku

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Derekku 2010-04-06T22:49:46+00:00

Repubbled, I suppose. :S

Frill

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Frill 2010-04-06T22:55:49+00:00

sorry XD

thanks

Cyril Scarlet

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Cyril Scarlet 2010-04-10T14:36:45+00:00

Cyborg wrote:
SPOILER
フォルダの中の.osbは不要です
消してフルでアップしなおしてください
Tagsに"Yellow Zebra"を追加してください

[Insane]
東方系の難易度名はLunaticが多いようです
Frillさんの自由ですがLunaticの方がしっくりくるかもしれません

00:26:571 (1) - 音量を変える際にtiming lineとサークルは被せちゃだめです timing lineを1つ手前の青や赤などに置いてください
01:07:922 (2) - 上と同じ内容です
01:09:814 (1) - このtiming lineは不要です消してください
01:11:814 (4) - Remove note?
01:11:976 (6) - New combo
01:12:246 (1) - Remove new combo
02:05:219 (4) - (00:26:571)と同じです
02:07:111 (3) - 上と同じ内容です
02:11:436 (6) - 上と同じで、ここにnew combo?
02:18:192 (4) - 上と同じです
02:19:003 (1) - 上と同じです
02:22:111 (6) - Remove note??
02:27:652 (x) - ここにサークルを追加 Soft finishがいいかも??(多分)
02:48:192 (6) - (00:26:571)と同じです
02:49:274 (1) - 上と同じです
02:53:598 (1) - 上と同じです
02:56:841 (1,3,1) - 上と同じです
03:10:084 (4) - 上と同じです
03:14:138 (3) - 上と同じです
03:15:490 (2) - 上と同じです
03:15:625 (3) - Remove note??
03:19:544 (1) - ここみたいに、kiaiを入れたいけど音量が変わるから手前に...って時は

こんな風に手前に音量のための線、サークル上にkiaiのための線、と入れればokです
03:19:814 (2) - (00:26:571)と同じです
03:20:084 (3) - ここのhit soundがスライダーの中間にしか入っていませんが故意的でしょうか？
もし始点か終点に入れてたと思った！などでしたら修正してください
03:28:192 (1) - (00:26:571)と同じですなぜkiaiが終わってるのでしょうか??
03:35:490 (1) - (00:26:571)と同じです
03:37:246 (2,2) - 上と同じです

[Normal]
HP Drain 1up?

こちらも言いたいことはInsaneとほぼ同じです
音量を変える時はサークルとかぶさらないように修正してください
01:13:868 (8) - Remove note??
01:14:138 (x) - Add note??
01:40:184 (1) - スライダーの終点が1 grid 上にいってます 1 grid 下では？
02:47:652 (5) - New combo
03:28192 (1) - Insaneといいたい事は同じです

所々ずれてるっぽいスライダーはgrid snapをoffにして配置したのかな

いい譜面だと思います
頑張ってください～☆

藤宮さんばっか聞いてたから　これがぜぶらって気づかなかったｗ

Frill

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Frill 2010-04-10T17:22:12+00:00

うっちーさんと藤宮さんは
違うサークルで歌いに行ったりしてる時ありますからね

WyndII

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WyndII 2010-04-11T07:06:45+00:00

Konnichiwa Frill!

Hana no iro ha ~Flowering Light~

[General]
This song is catchy XD

[Lunatic]
Like AIMod said, no problems were found in this map! XD

[Normal]
Same. XD

<3
Good luck~

Frill

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Frill 2010-04-11T09:23:04+00:00

Konnichiwa

Thx~

Lizbeth

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Lizbeth 2010-04-25T18:44:21+00:00

sorry for the delay >///<

White combo color is kinda hard to see imo

Lunatic
01:14:680 - this timing section inst doing anything, am i wrong? delete it if s not affecting the map
remember to place inherited timing section with volume change before the notes, never on top.
pretty nice diff =) but you could add a few more jumps to it, to make it more dynamic.

Normal
all good =)

Star + kudos star cuz the map doesn't have to much errors =)

Frill

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Frill 2010-04-26T10:16:41+00:00

thanks mod~

Lizbeth wrote:
White combo color is kinda hard to see imo

oh sry

new combo color Yellow
Is this safe?

fixed~

Lybydose

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Lybydose 2010-04-26T10:21:25+00:00

Artist should be Yellow Zebra. Touhou ESCALATION is the name of the album, not the artist.

Frill

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Frill 2010-04-26T10:45:00+00:00

fixed.

Frill

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Frill 2010-04-26T10:48:12+00:00

Artist Name chaned

redownload plz

thepianist

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thepianist 2010-05-01T03:04:24+00:00

Random mod hehe. Feel free to ignore any of my suggestions.

[Overall]
Remove TOUHOU ESCALATION and change to just touhou. Move the "Escalation" into tags.
Combo colors can be darker. With kiai they're a bit blinding. D:

[Normal]
00:09:274 (1) - Add a whistle in the start?
00:11:977 (4) - No whistle?
00:13:599 (1) - Finish?
00:14:680 (3,4) - Whistle?
...
00:33:058 (3,4) - Whistle?
00:35:220 (1) - Finish?
...Iono I think in some parts the first, third, and fourth white ticks having a whistle would be nice. Or a bit of consistency at least.
00:58:193 (1) - ^
01:10:896 (2) - Whistle? Or remove whistle on 01:06:572 (2)? Since its also on 01:15:761 (3)...
Et cetera in similar sections
02:56:842 (5,6,7,8) - Perhaps move it so it looks nicer than just a stack?
03:31:437 (7,8,9,10) - ^

[Lunatic]
00:24:410 (1) - Finish?
00:58:193 (1) - ^ (As with most spinners)
01:57:112 (1) - Perhaps move the center anchor point so it is a bit more symmetrical

Great map! ^^ *star

Frill

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Frill 2010-05-01T12:29:46+00:00

thanks mod.

fixed

but

thepianist wrote:
02:56:842 (5,6,7,8) - Perhaps move it so it looks nicer than just a stack?
03:31:437 (7,8,9,10) - ^

The action that I took has decreased the number of stack.

you think this?

Thanks~

thepianist

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thepianist 2010-05-01T21:56:29+00:00

Frill wrote:
thanks mod.

fixed

but
thepianist wrote:
02:56:842 (5,6,7,8) - Perhaps move it so it looks nicer than just a stack?
03:31:437 (7,8,9,10) - ^
The action that I took has decreased the number of stack.

you think this?

Thanks~

The way you have it now is fine, but if you like the original rhythm, I was thinking something similar to

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